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* AllInTheManual: Bedlamsbard's tumblr is full of writing updates/snippets, worldbuilding for Ryloth and Twi'lek culture, commentary, and meta.
* AnArmAndALeg: Both of [[spoiler: the Pau'un Inquisitor's]] hands are cut off by Ahsoka in their brief duel.

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* AllInTheManual: Bedlamsbard's tumblr [[bedlamsbard.tumblr.com Tumblr]] is full of writing updates/snippets, worldbuilding for Ryloth and Twi'lek culture, commentary, and meta.
* AnArmAndALeg: Both of [[spoiler: the Pau'un Pau'an Inquisitor's]] hands are cut off by Ahsoka in their brief duel.



* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: The Pau'un Inquisitor]] was no match for Ahsoka Tano.
* CyanidePill: [[spoiler: The Pau'un Inquisitor takes one of these to prevent Ahsoka from extracting information out of him after she defeats him.]]

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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: The Pau'un Pau'an Inquisitor]] was no match for Ahsoka Tano.
* CyanidePill: [[spoiler: The Pau'un Pau'an Inquisitor takes one of these to prevent Ahsoka from extracting information out of him after she defeats him.]]



** "Still looking for Jedi, Togruta?" – [[spoiler: the Pau'un Inquisitor]]

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** "Still looking for Jedi, Togruta?" – [[spoiler: the Pau'un Pau'an Inquisitor]]



* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Members of the Inquisition give up their names and are officially only known as the Inquisitor. This being rather confusing when there's more than one around, they have a variety of nicknames. The Pau'un Inquisitor is "the Hunter", the Seventh Sister is "Patience", Kanan is "the Jedi" or "the Stray", while Barriss is simply "the Inquisitor" because she was the first one.

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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Members of the Inquisition give up their names and are officially only known as the Inquisitor. This being rather confusing when there's more than one around, they have a variety of nicknames. The Pau'un Due to being written prior to the reveal of the number motif within the show, the Pau'an Inquisitor is "the Hunter", the Seventh Sister is "Patience", Kanan is "the Jedi" or "the Stray", while Barriss is simply "the Inquisitor" because she was the first one.one.


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** From what is implied so far, seems that Beneke will be this to Kallus when the latter debuts.
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* KissingCousins: [[spoiler: Xiaan and Doriah Syndulla.]]

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* KissingCousins: [[spoiler: Xiaan and Doriah Syndulla.]]]] To be fair, they're so distantly related (fifth cousins) that it doesn't really count.



* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Members of the Inquisition give up their names and are officially only known as the Inquisitor. This being rather confusing when there's more than one around, they have a variety of nicknames. The Pau'un Inquisitor is "the Hunter", Kanan is "the Jedi" or "the Stray", while Barriss is simply "the Inquisitor" because she was the first one.

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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Members of the Inquisition give up their names and are officially only known as the Inquisitor. This being rather confusing when there's more than one around, they have a variety of nicknames. The Pau'un Inquisitor is "the Hunter", the Seventh Sister is "Patience", Kanan is "the Jedi" or "the Stray", while Barriss is simply "the Inquisitor" because she was the first one.
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* KissingCousins: [[spoiler: Xiaan and Doriah Syndulla.]]
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* VillainousCrush: Barriss is implied to have some form of this on Ahsoka, ironically, due to Ahsoka being the only living emotional connection she has left anymore. It's the reason she keeps coming to her secret meetings with Ahsoka despite Ahsoka not giving her information in exchange, although it doesn't stop Barriss from verbally abusing her or occasionally attempting to murder her.

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* VillainousCrush: Barriss is implied to have some form of this on Ahsoka, ironically, due to Ahsoka being the only living emotional connection she has left anymore. It's the reason she keeps coming to her secret meetings with Ahsoka despite Ahsoka not giving her information in exchange, although it doesn't stop Barriss from verbally abusing her or occasionally attempting to murder her. One of her greatest fears is Ahsoka coming to simply not care about her, and she finds that the easiest way to prevent that is to make Ahsoka hate her.
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* AffablyEvil: Barriss is actually rather polite, most of the time.

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* AffablyEvil: Barriss is actually rather polite, most of the time.polite when she isn't actively trying to get on Ahsoka's nerves.
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* INeedAFreakingDrink: Ahsoka prefers to have her meetings with Barriss in various bars. Barriss has that effect on her.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Ryloth is one to Ancient Rome.
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* GoodOldFisticuffs: Ahsoka and [[spoiler:Kanan]] disarm each other early in their fight, so they spend most of it trying to gain the advantage in hand-to-hand.


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* MySkullRunnethOver: Ezra accidentally senses ''every living being'' on Lothal at one point. It's completely overwhelming, and it's only thanks to his street instincts [[spoiler:that he escapes Kanan moments later]].
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* BlueBlood: The Syndullas are an old family from Ryloth's patrician caste, and so is Secchun Fenn. Alecto and Doriah are an exception, as they're distant enough cousins that they don't count.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Secchun Fenn tries to arrange one between Xiaan Syndulla and her son. It doesn't go over well.


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* TheRival: Secchun Fenn is this to Cham Syndulla.
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* NotMeThisTime: Ahsoka believes that [[spoiler: the exploding kyber shipment]] was a trap by Barriss, and for once Barriss is actually completely innocent.
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* TroubledAbuser: Barriss constantly tries to get under Ahsoka's skin during their meetings because, it's the only form of emotional stimulation she understands anymore after fifteen years of being abused by the Empire.

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* TroubledAbuser: Barriss constantly tries to get under Ahsoka's skin during their meetings because, despite part of her recognizing that Ahsoka is the only thing she has left anymore, it's the only form of emotional stimulation she understands anymore after fifteen years of being abused by the Empire.
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* LuredIntoATrap: Just like in canon, the Empire lures a former Padawan by using the actually-dead Luminara Unduli as bait. Unfortunately for the Pau'un Inquisitor, Ahsoka Tano was much more than he could deal with.

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* LuredIntoATrap: Just like in canon, the Empire lures a former Padawan by using the actually-dead Luminara Unduli as bait. [[spoiler: Unfortunately for the Pau'un Inquisitor, Ahsoka Tano was much more than he could deal with.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: The Pau'un Inquisitor was no match for Ahsoka Tano.

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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: The Pau'un Inquisitor Inquisitor]] was no match for Ahsoka Tano.
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* SecretKeeper: Cham Syndulla is the only member of the Free Ryloth fleet who knows that Fulcrum is Ahsoka Tano.

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* SecretKeeper: Cham Syndulla is the only member of the Free Ryloth fleet who knows that Fulcrum is Ahsoka Tano. Later expanded to include Alecto.



* TroubledAbuser: Barriss constantly tries to get under Ahsoka's skin during their meetings because it's the only form of emotional stimulation she understands anymore after fifteen years of being abused by the Empire.

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* TroubledAbuser: Barriss constantly tries to get under Ahsoka's skin during their meetings because because, it's the only form of emotional stimulation she understands anymore after fifteen years of being abused by the Empire.



* YouWouldntShootMe: Cham to Hera. He was wrong.

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* YouWouldntShootMe: Cham to Hera. [[spoiler: He was wrong.]]

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* PassiveAggressiveKombat: Ahsoka and Barriss' meetings are made of this, and it gets pretty ugly.



* SnarkToSnarkCombat: Ahsoka and Barriss' meetings are made of this, and it can get pretty ugly.
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* WantMyMommy: The Blue Opal of Pantora is introduced crying for her mother, [[spoiler: Riyo Chuchi.]]

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* WantMyMommy: IWantMyMommy: The Blue Opal of Pantora is introduced crying for her mother, [[spoiler: Riyo Chuchi.]]

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** Ironically given her extreme distrust of 'Fulcrum,' if she had ''listened'' to Ahsoka's advice not to do anything about Hera until they had more information she would have known more about the manipulation Hera had been subjected to, and probably been much less likely to say the exact things that would inadvertently confirm to Hera that her parents really were the enemy now. At the very least, she would have known from Barriss that Hera and Kanan were together for several years ''before'' he became an Inquisitor, which might have led to a plan that didn't involve shooting the love of Hera's life right in front of her.

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** Ironically given her extreme distrust of 'Fulcrum,' if she had ''listened'' to Ahsoka's advice not to do anything about Hera until they had more information she would have known more about the manipulation Hera had been subjected to, and probably been much less likely to say the exact things that would inadvertently confirm to Hera that her parents really were the enemy now. At now.
** The Syndullas' intervention (hurried on
the very least, she logic that Hera might disappear again and they would have lost their chance to "rescue" her) was also the reason Hera disappeared from the only location they'd ever known from Barriss that Hera for a fact they could find her; she had intended to stay much longer to oversee wrapping the operation up, and Kanan were together for several years ''before'' he became an Inquisitor, which might have led to left in a plan that hurry because she didn't involve shooting the love want to risk Alecto taking another potshot at her partner. Waiting a few days for more information would have actually increased their chances of Hera's life right in front of her.keeping an eye on Hera.
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** Ironically given her extreme distrust of 'Fulcrum,' if she had ''listened'' to Ahsoka's advice not to do anything about Hera until they had more information she would have known more about the manipulation Hera had been subjected to, and probably been much less likely to say the exact things that would inadvertently confirm to Hera that her parents really were the enemy now. At the very least, she would have known from Barriss that Hera and Kanan were together for several years ''before'' he became an Inquisitor, which might have led to a plan that didn't involve shooting the love of Hera's life right in front of her.

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** Barriss and Agent Beneke are mutually disgusted by each other.



* NiceToTheWaiter: Ironically, Barriss. Even her FaceHeelTurn and the Crucible can't break those habits out of her, it seems.

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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Alecto ruined any chance of Hera coming with them by insisting on repeatedly trying to kill Kanan.
* NiceToTheWaiter: Ironically, Barriss. Even her FaceHeelTurn and the Crucible can't break those habits out of her, it seems.seems
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** Ahsoka thinks that Barriss' request for her to [[spoiler destroy the kyber crystal shipment]] was an attempt to kill her and the Free Ryloth fleet after it explodes. [[spoiler: In reality, the crystal was sabotaged by Kanan.]]

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** Ahsoka thinks that Barriss' request for her to [[spoiler [[spoiler: destroy the kyber crystal shipment]] was an attempt to kill her and the Free Ryloth fleet after it explodes. [[spoiler: In reality, the crystal was sabotaged by Kanan.]]
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* CyanidePill: The Pau'un Inquisitor takes one of these to prevent Ahsoka from extracting information out of him after she defeats him.

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* CyanidePill: [[spoiler: The Pau'un Inquisitor takes one of these to prevent Ahsoka from extracting information out of him after she defeats him.]]
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* WantMyMommy: The Blue Opal of Pantora is introduced crying for her mother, [[spoiler: Riyo Chuchi.]]

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* AnArmAndALeg: Both of the Pau'un Inquisitor's hands are cut off by Ahsoka in their brief duel.

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* AnArmAndALeg: Both of [[spoiler: the Pau'un Inquisitor's Inquisitor's]] hands are cut off by Ahsoka in their brief duel.


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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Alecto calls Cham out for trusting Ahsoka without question and apparently caring more about fighting the Empire than rescuing their daughter.
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* PromotedToParent: Doriah Syndulla protected his younger cousin Xiaan when they were enslaved together, and even after their escape remains her primary caregiver.

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: The Lake House on Naboo, which is a [[SexSlave sexual slavery]] operation, considers the fifteen-year old Blue Opal of Pantora to be too young to do anything but serve drinks yet.



* LuredIntoATrap: Just like in canon, the Empire lures a former Padawan by using the actually-dead Luminara Unduli as bait. Unfortunately for the Pau'un Inquisitor, Ahsoka Tano was much more than he could chew.

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* LuredIntoATrap: Just like in canon, the Empire lures a former Padawan by using the actually-dead Luminara Unduli as bait. Unfortunately for the Pau'un Inquisitor, Ahsoka Tano was much more than he could chew.deal with.
** Ahsoka thinks that Barriss' request for her to [[spoiler destroy the kyber crystal shipment]] was an attempt to kill her and the Free Ryloth fleet after it explodes. [[spoiler: In reality, the crystal was sabotaged by Kanan.]]



** The slaves at the Lake House on Naboo, most prominently the Flower of Ryloth, the Red Star of Zeltros, and the Blue Opal of Pantora. [[spoiler: AKA Ojeda Syndulla, Zaidi Farseer, and Khiry Chuchi]]



* SexSlave: [[AvertedTrope Averted]] for Hera. While Cham and Alecto initially assume that her relationship with Kanan is this, it is actually completely consensual. [[WordOfGod Her cousins Ojeda and Doriah weren't so lucky.]]
** In the Lake House club on Naboo, we have Ojeda Syndulla, Zaidi Farseer, and Khiry Chuchi.

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* SexSlave: [[AvertedTrope Averted]] for Hera. While Cham and Alecto initially assume that her relationship with Kanan is this, it is actually completely consensual. [[WordOfGod Her cousins Ojeda and Doriah weren't so lucky.]]
consensual.
** In The slaves at the Lake House club on Naboo, we have Ojeda Syndulla, Zaidi Farseer, and a brothel frequented by officers from the nearby regional ISB Headquarters. [[spoiler: Khiry Chuchi.Chuchi]] is an exception only because she's not old enough yet.


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* SickAndWrong: Kanan's reaction to [[spoiler: the giant kyber crystal.]]


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** Alecto does not trust Ahsoka, especially after [[spoiler: she accidentally leads them into what appears to be a trap.]]


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* WhatYouAreInTheDark: Unknown to anyone, Kanan [[spoiler: sabotages the Empire's giant kyber crystal]], hinting that some of his identity as a Jedi has survived.
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** In the Lake House club on Naboo, we have Ojeda Syndulla, Zaidi Farseer, and Khiry Chuchi.
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* NiceToTheWaiter: Barriss, during her first meeting with Ahsoka. Even her FaceHeelTurn and the Crucible can't break those habits out of her, it seems.

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* NiceToTheWaiter: Barriss, during her first meeting with Ahsoka.Ironically, Barriss. Even her FaceHeelTurn and the Crucible can't break those habits out of her, it seems.
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* NiceToTheWaiter: Barriss, during her first meeting with Ahsoka. Even her FaceHeelTurn and the Crucible can't break those habits out of her, it seems.
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* CoolStarship: The ''Forlorn Hope'', Separatist frigate turned flagship of the Free Ryloth fleet. As well as Ahsoka Tano's personal starship, the ''Aegis''.

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* CoolStarship: The ''Forlorn Hope'', Separatist frigate turned flagship of the Free Ryloth fleet. As well as Ahsoka Tano's personal starship, the ''Aegis''.''Aegis''. And of course, the ''Ghost''.

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