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** Zeruel. [[XJustX Just Zeruel.]] It's just the way he's presented in the story; ''everyone'' reacts with terror at his mere presence. The other Angels are ''frightened'' of him. If it came down to it, Zeruel said that he would face the berserk and enraged '''''ADAM'''''.

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** Zeruel. [[XJustX Just Zeruel.]] Zeruel. It's just the way he's presented in the story; ''everyone'' reacts with terror at his mere presence. The other Angels are ''frightened'' of him. If it came down to it, Zeruel said that he would face the berserk and enraged '''''ADAM'''''.
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** Zeruel. [[XJustX Just Zeruel.]] It's just the way he's presented in the story; ''everyone'' reacts with terror at his mere presence. The other Angels are ''frightened'' of him. If it came down to it, Zeruel said that he would face the berserk and enraged '''''ADAM'''''.
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** And in the season finale, Chapter 65, [[spoiler:Zeruel is coming. And Junior says he's coming ''early!'' Not to mention something seems to have happened to Shinji after Unit-01 went Berserker, and we don't know what it is yet.]]
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As of August 11th, 2010, the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579457/1/NGE_Nobody_Dies series]] has hit sixty-five chapters, and is [[WordOfGod [[strike:nearing]] ''at'' the end of its third season]]. Sections of each chapter are posted in [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=159237 the Spacebattles.com forum thread about the fic]] before the entire chapter is posted to fanfiction.net, if you want teasers.

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As of August 11th, 2010, the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579457/1/NGE_Nobody_Dies series]] has hit sixty-five chapters, and is [[strike:[[WordOfGod nearing]]]] ''[[WordOfGod at]]'' [[WordOfGod [[strike:nearing]] ''at'' the end of its third season]]. Sections of each chapter are posted in [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=159237 the Spacebattles.com forum thread about the fic]] before the entire chapter is posted to fanfiction.net, if you want teasers.
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As of August 8th, 2010, the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579457/1/NGE_Nobody_Dies series]] has hit sixty-four chapters, and is [[WordOfGod nearing the end of its third season]]. Sections of each chapter are posted in [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=159237 the Spacebattles.com forum thread about the fic]] before the entire chapter is posted to fanfiction.net, if you want teasers.

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As of August 8th, 11th, 2010, the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579457/1/NGE_Nobody_Dies series]] has hit sixty-four sixty-five chapters, and is [[WordOfGod nearing [[strike:nearing]] ''at'' the end of its third season]]. Sections of each chapter are posted in [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=159237 the Spacebattles.com forum thread about the fic]] before the entire chapter is posted to fanfiction.net, if you want teasers.
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* NotSoHarmless: So far, the [[OmnicidalManiac Cherubim]] haven't been much of a threat - they're basically Angels, but not as smart, and generally without as much in the way of truly dangerous abilities other than 'make really big target of yourself'. [[spoiler:[[HeroKiller Raziel]] changed all that.]]

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* NotSoHarmless: So far, the [[OmnicidalManiac Cherubim]] haven't been much of a threat - -- they're basically Angels, but not as smart, and generally without as much in the way of truly dangerous abilities other than 'make really big target of yourself'. [[spoiler:[[HeroKiller Raziel]] changed all that.]]



*** Mari/Wuffles - ("Muffles")
*** Mana/Wuffles - ("Muffler")

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*** Mari/Wuffles - ("Muffles")
*** Mana/Wuffles - ("Muffler")
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* NotSoHarmless: So far, the [[OmnicidalManiac Cherubim]] haven't been much of a threat - they're basically Angels, but not as smart, and generally without as much in the way of truly dangerous abilities other than 'make really big target of yourself'. [[spoiler:[[HeroKiller Raziel]] changed all that.]]
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As of August 2nd, 2010, the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579457/1/NGE_Nobody_Dies series]] has hit sixty-three chapters, and is [[WordOfGod nearing the end of its third season]]. Sections of each chapter are posted in [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=159237 the Spacebattles.com forum thread about the fic]] before the entire chapter is posted to fanfiction.net, if you want teasers.

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As of August 2nd, 8th, 2010, the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579457/1/NGE_Nobody_Dies series]] has hit sixty-three sixty-four chapters, and is [[WordOfGod nearing the end of its third season]]. Sections of each chapter are posted in [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=159237 the Spacebattles.com forum thread about the fic]] before the entire chapter is posted to fanfiction.net, if you want teasers.
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** [[spoiler: Chapter 64: Shinji just went berserker.]]

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** [[spoiler: Chapter 64: Shinji just [[RedEyesTakeWarning went berserker.berserker]].]]
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** [[spoiler: Chapter 64: Shinji just went berserker.]]
---> [[spoiler: '''''Give. Them. Back.''''']]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Administered by [[spoiler:Raziel]] to Units 01 and 02. [[OhCrap In their fully-upgraded forms, no less]].
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*** Not so, as she apparently thinks that Mari is dead and that Ramiel is inhabiting her corpse. [[SarcasmMode Thank you, Lorenz Kihl.]]
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* CrazyAwesome: Rei practically ''rewrote the book'' on this trope.

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* CrazyAwesome: Rei practically ''rewrote the book'' on this trope. According to the author, "Rei isn't just a nephilem, she's of a batch of Nephilem created for the purpose of killing. Basically, she's a Nephilem super-soldier that Naoko made to murder two people and a lot of collateral. What Yui and Gendo have done is taken what's basically homicidal mania and focused it into being crazy awesome."
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* TakeThat: The "Convention Time" chapter is one long series of attacks against the parts of EVA fandom Gregg has issues with, including [[MisaimedFandom obesessive Rei fans]], [[EverybodyHasLotsOfSex oversexed]] and [[NaughtyTentacles disturbing]] [[FanFiction fanfiction]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Shinji/Rei shippers.]]

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* TakeThat: The "Convention Time" chapter is one long series of attacks against the parts of EVA fandom Gregg has issues with, including [[MisaimedFandom obesessive obsessive Rei fans]], [[EverybodyHasLotsOfSex oversexed]] and [[NaughtyTentacles disturbing]] [[FanFiction fanfiction]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Shinji/Rei shippers.]]
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* NeverTrustATitle: Somebody dies. Worse yet, somebody ''sympathetic'' dies.
** As of Chapter 32, [[spoiler:Mari's not dead.]] Sort of.
*** As of Chapter 48, [[spoiler: She's back in her body.]]

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* NeverTrustATitle: Somebody dies. Worse yet, somebody ''sympathetic'' dies.
** As
dies. [[spoiler:She's eventually resurrected.]] Later on, [[spoiler:Kei kills a rogue Section 2 agent who was in the process of Chapter 32, [[spoiler:Mari's not dead.]] Sort of.
*** As of Chapter 48, [[spoiler: She's back in her body.
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* {{Shipping}}: [[spoiler:The Ree]] are trying to hook up Ritsuko and Maya, with the typical level of Terrifying!Rei subtlety.
** And Rei herself is trying to do the same with [[spoiler:Go-kun and Jet Alone]].
** As of Chapter 62, Rei has recruited [[spoiler:Hikari]] to assist in a plan to hook up [[spoiler:Kaworu and Kei]].

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* {{Shipping}}: [[spoiler:The In universe, [[spoiler:the Ree]] are trying to hook up Ritsuko and Maya, with the typical level of Terrifying!Rei subtlety.
** And
subtlety. Rei herself is trying to do the same with [[spoiler:Go-kun and Jet Alone]].
** As
Alone]]. And as of Chapter 62, Rei has recruited [[spoiler:Hikari]] [[spoiler:Hikari and SEELE 06 (aka "her grandfather")]] to assist in a plan to hook up [[spoiler:Kaworu and Kei]].Kei]].
** Out of universe, the Kei/Kaworu pairing (which would be called [[IdiosyncraticShipNaming Keiworu]], had that term not been taken for something else) is the most prominent [[spoiler: and is canon, thanks to Chapter 63]], but there are also other ones:
*** Mari/Wuffles - ("Muffles")
*** Mana/Wuffles - ("Muffler")
*** Kensuke/ various members of the Ree
*** Kensuke/Turnip (canon)
*** [[{{Squick}} Turnip/Everyone]]



* SoProudOfYou: [[spoiler:Kyoko says this to the canon Asuka without realizing that ND!Asuka is in earshot. Subverted when we see things from Kyoko's perspective, where she reveals that A) she said it because what ''else'' do you say to someone who devoted their life to making their dead mama proud, and B) ''she has a massive breakdown at Unit 02, cursing out her AU self'' and sobbing that, even in another universe, she's "still a shitty mother"]].

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* SoProudOfYou: [[spoiler:Kyoko says this to the canon Asuka without realizing that ND!Asuka is in earshot. Subverted when we see things from Kyoko's perspective, where she reveals that A) she said it because what ''else'' do you say to someone who devoted their life to making their dead mama proud, and B) ''she has a massive breakdown at Unit 02, cursing out her AU self'' and sobbing that, even in another universe, she's "still a shitty mother"]]. Yui does the same with [[spoiler: Kei, trying not to make the same mistakes as Kyoko did.]]



* TheUnreveal: The real truth of [[spoiler:Naoko Akagi's death]]. [[spoiler:Balthazar!Naoko]] was in the process of explaining things to Shinji when [[spoiler:"she" was "killed" by Iruel]]. Teasers for ch. 58 have convoluted this even further. Tied into this is [[spoiler:the origins of Rei and the Ree, and their original purpose]].

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* TheUnreveal: The real truth of [[spoiler:Naoko Akagi's death]]. [[spoiler:Balthazar!Naoko]] was in the process of explaining things to Shinji when [[spoiler:"she" was "killed" by Iruel]]. Teasers for ch. Chapter 58 have has convoluted this even further. Tied into this is [[spoiler:the origins of Rei and the Ree, and their original purpose]].
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* DidIJustSayThatOutLoud: Shinji has a real problem with this.
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* DidIJustSayThatOutLoud: Shinji has a real problem with this.
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** Which makes sense, comsidering [[HornyDevil who's]] in the basement.

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** Which makes sense, comsidering considering [[HornyDevil who's]] in the basement.



** Chapter 63. [[spoiler:Bardiel is NOT in Unit-03 like in Canon...but Raziel, the Fourth [[OmnicidalManiac Cherubim]], IS.]]

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** Chapter 63. [[spoiler:Bardiel is NOT ''not'' in Unit-03 like in Canon...but Raziel, the Fourth [[OmnicidalManiac Cherubim]], IS.''is''.]]
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** Chapter 63. [[spoiler:Bardiel is NOT in Unit-03 like in Canon...but Raziel, the Fourth Cherubim, IS.]]

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** Chapter 63. [[spoiler:Bardiel is NOT in Unit-03 like in Canon...but Raziel, the Fourth Cherubim, [[OmnicidalManiac Cherubim]], IS.]]
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: Though the quality-control is overall decent by fanfic standards, the constant to/too confusion can get somewhat... grating at times.

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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: Though the quality-control quality control is overall decent pretty good by fanfic standards, the it does suffer from this at times, constant to/too confusion can get somewhat... grating at times.and the occasional misused homonym being the most prolific mistakes.
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* TakeThat: The "Convention Time" chapter is one long series of attacks against the parts of EVA fandom Gregg has issues with, including [[MisaimedFandom obesessive Rei fans]], [[EverybodyHasLotsOfSex oversexed]] and [[NaughtyTentacles disturbing]] [[FanFiction fanfiction]], and [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Shinji/Rei shippers.]]
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** Chapter 68. [[spoiler:Bardiel is NOT in Unit-03 like in Canon...but Raziel, the Fourth Cherubim, IS.]]

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** Chapter 68.63. [[spoiler:Bardiel is NOT in Unit-03 like in Canon...but Raziel, the Fourth Cherubim, IS.]]
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As of August 1st, 2010, the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579457/1/NGE_Nobody_Dies series]] has hit sixty-two chapters, and is [[WordOfGod nearing the end of its third season]]. Sections of each chapter are posted in [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=159237 the Spacebattles.com forum thread about the fic]] before the entire chapter is posted to fanfiction.net, if you want teasers.

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As of August 1st, 2nd, 2010, the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579457/1/NGE_Nobody_Dies series]] has hit sixty-two sixty-three chapters, and is [[WordOfGod nearing the end of its third season]]. Sections of each chapter are posted in [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=159237 the Spacebattles.com forum thread about the fic]] before the entire chapter is posted to fanfiction.net, if you want teasers.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming:
** Pretty much any major Shinji / Asuka scene.
*** In particular, Chapter 21. The chapter itself is nothing but ItGotWorse for Asuka. Then the ending rolls by, and as the author put it (After [[EarthScorpion someone]] described an alternate, intensely depressing way to end the chapter):
---> This is certainly now a nightmare scenario for everyone involved. And it would have happened and would have been the way the chapter concluded- if Shinji didn't go into her room at the end of the chapter and settle things with her. The problem is, Asuka has three pillars her life is built around, and Kyoko managed to kick out two of them in just two minutes. And now Shinji's built one of those pillars so high she can see her apartment from the top of it.
*** "I can fix this."
** In her own strange way, [[spoiler:Kiko, one of the Ree,]] gets one in chapter 28, [[spoiler:when she hacks the MAGI, breaks out of NERV, and steals a plugsuit just so she could spend time with her brother.]]
** Ch. 36. Misato and Asuka. Kaji and Shinji. 'Nuff said.
** In Chapter 38, [[spoiler:Asuka's multiple personalities come to her rescue against Iruel's attempted MindRape, with Dollie giving a very heartwarming speech to Asuka herself.]]
** Chapter 40. ND!Gendo is struggling with the idea that [[spoiler:Yui might be dead]] and is contemplating suicide, but tells himself that everybody else is counting on him, and if [[spoiler:Yui really is lost beyond recovery, then Canon!Shinji, who has been transported to the ND!Universe, will need a father.]]
** Ch. 41, when [[spoiler:Mana and canon!Shinji have a bonding/therapy moment that ends with them kissing.]]
*** Later on, [[spoiler:while talking with canon!Yui through a spare Ichi avatar, Gendo threatens her with keeping canon!Shinji in the ND! universe when canon!Unit 01 gets sent back through the Dirac sea]]. This doubles as a CMoA for [[spoiler:Gendo]].
** Ch. 44, when [[spoiler:canon!Shinji convinces ND!Gendo to let him go back to his universe.]]
** Chapter 45, in particular [[spoiler:Yui's day with Ichi.]]
** Believe it or not, [[spoiler:Kyoko finally breaks down and takes a huge step toward reconciliation with Asuka]].
** Crossed with a [[CrowningMoment/NobodyDies Crowning Moment of Awesome]], the end of Chapter 46 is one [[spoiler:for canon!Gendo. "God damn you," Gendo Ikari roars, "''get away from my son!''"]]
*** Also a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Gregg Landsman himself, as [[spoiler:the changes to the Eva canon from ND are what cause his other FanFic, ''FanFic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'']].
** Chapter 48 has [[spoiler:Kei's reunion with Little Mommy. Happily, it didn't Go As Planned.]]
** Ch. 54. [[spoiler:Yui's talk with Kei after the disastrous evening.]]
** In Chapter 55, [[spoiler:Kei bonding with her sisters.]] Over [[TastesLikeDiabetes Angel slaying]], of course.
*** Also from Chapter 55, this scene:
-->"Yeah," Shinji says, "I could see this being Hatchi's idea, but Nana would put together the weapons. But Kei really thought out the design. Normally, the girls wreck Kei's stuff, but they really did miss her."\\
"How d-do you know all this?" Asuka asks.\\
He shrugs.\\
"I'm trying to be a better brother."
** Ch. 61 has [[spoiler:Shinji and Asuka finally consummating their relationship, in no small part due to Lilith's Anti-AT Field]]. It was '''LONG''' overdue.
** @/EarthScorpion's side story [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5969134/1/NGE_bNobody_b_bDies_b_Ichis_Birthday_Party Ichi's Birthday Party]], ''especially'' its last chapter or two.

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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming:
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CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Pretty much any major Shinji / Asuka scene.
*** In particular, Chapter 21. The chapter itself is nothing but ItGotWorse for Asuka. Then the ending rolls by, and as the author put it (After [[EarthScorpion someone]] described an alternate, intensely depressing way to end the chapter):
---> This is certainly now a nightmare scenario for everyone involved. And it would have happened and would have been the way the chapter concluded- if Shinji didn't go into her room at the end of the chapter and settle things with her. The problem is, Asuka has three pillars her life is built around, and Kyoko managed to kick out two of them in just two minutes. And now Shinji's built one of those pillars so high she can
** For additional/more specific moments, [[Heartwarming/NobodyDies see her apartment from the top of it.
*** "I can fix this."
** In her own strange way, [[spoiler:Kiko, one of the Ree,]] gets one in chapter 28, [[spoiler:when she hacks the MAGI, breaks out of NERV, and steals a plugsuit just so she could spend time with her brother.]]
** Ch. 36. Misato and Asuka. Kaji and Shinji. 'Nuff said.
** In Chapter 38, [[spoiler:Asuka's multiple personalities come to her rescue against Iruel's attempted MindRape, with Dollie giving a very heartwarming speech to Asuka herself.]]
** Chapter 40. ND!Gendo is struggling with the idea that [[spoiler:Yui might be dead]] and is contemplating suicide, but tells himself that everybody else is counting on him, and if [[spoiler:Yui really is lost beyond recovery, then Canon!Shinji, who has been transported to the ND!Universe, will need a father.]]
** Ch. 41, when [[spoiler:Mana and canon!Shinji have a bonding/therapy moment that ends with them kissing.]]
*** Later on, [[spoiler:while talking with canon!Yui through a spare Ichi avatar, Gendo threatens her with keeping canon!Shinji in the ND! universe when canon!Unit 01 gets sent back through the Dirac sea]]. This doubles as a CMoA for [[spoiler:Gendo]].
** Ch. 44, when [[spoiler:canon!Shinji convinces ND!Gendo to let him go back to his universe.]]
** Chapter 45, in particular [[spoiler:Yui's day with Ichi.]]
** Believe it or not, [[spoiler:Kyoko finally breaks down and takes a huge step toward reconciliation with Asuka]].
** Crossed with a [[CrowningMoment/NobodyDies Crowning Moment of Awesome]], the end of Chapter 46 is one [[spoiler:for canon!Gendo. "God damn you," Gendo Ikari roars, "''get away from my son!''"]]
*** Also a CrowningMomentOfAwesome for Gregg Landsman himself, as [[spoiler:the changes to the Eva canon from ND are what cause his other FanFic, ''FanFic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'']].
** Chapter 48 has [[spoiler:Kei's reunion with Little Mommy. Happily, it didn't Go As Planned.]]
** Ch. 54. [[spoiler:Yui's talk with Kei after the disastrous evening.]]
** In Chapter 55, [[spoiler:Kei bonding with her sisters.]] Over [[TastesLikeDiabetes Angel slaying]], of course.
*** Also from Chapter 55, this scene:
-->"Yeah," Shinji says, "I could see this being Hatchi's idea, but Nana would put together the weapons. But Kei really thought out the design. Normally, the girls wreck Kei's stuff, but they really did miss her."\\
"How d-do you know all this?" Asuka asks.\\
He shrugs.\\
"I'm trying to be a better brother."
** Ch. 61 has [[spoiler:Shinji and Asuka finally consummating their relationship, in no small part due to Lilith's Anti-AT Field]]. It was '''LONG''' overdue.
** @/EarthScorpion's side story [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5969134/1/NGE_bNobody_b_bDies_b_Ichis_Birthday_Party Ichi's Birthday Party]], ''especially'' its last chapter or two.
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As of July 29th, 2010, the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579457/1/NGE_Nobody_Dies series]] has hit sixty-one chapters, and is [[WordOfGod nearing the end of its third season]]. Sections of each chapter are posted in [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=159237 the Spacebattles.com forum thread about the fic]] before the entire chapter is posted to fanfiction.net, if you want teasers.

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As of July 29th, August 1st, 2010, the [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5579457/1/NGE_Nobody_Dies series]] has hit sixty-one sixty-two chapters, and is [[WordOfGod nearing the end of its third season]]. Sections of each chapter are posted in [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=159237 the Spacebattles.com forum thread about the fic]] before the entire chapter is posted to fanfiction.net, if you want teasers.


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** As of Chapter 62, Rei has recruited [[spoiler:Hikari]] to assist in a plan to hook up [[spoiler:Kaworu and Kei]].
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** And Rei herself is trying to do the same with [[spoiler:Go-kun and Jet Alone]].

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