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%%* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: And a lot of it, at that.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Oh, yes. Almost every ''WesternAnimation/KimPossible'' character appears, as well as several original ones to round out the Go City police force, the town, and the various families. You get to know most of them quite well.
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%%* BadDreams: Sasha, after she kills a man. Leads to [[DrowningMySorrows drowning her sorrows]].
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* VillainDecay: Thoroughly averted. While a lot of fanfiction tends to have Drakken as a rather [[HarmlessVillain harmless villain]], this story has him very much in his first season, pre-decay mold. Before the start of the story, he [[KillItWithFire hits Ron with a flamethrower]].
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* AlternateUniverse: With an AlternateHistory to match.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Some of the doubles of villains from the show are positively nice people in this universe.
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* BadassGrandpa: Several, some shown explicitly and others implied. Some are [[RetiredBadass retired]], others not so much.
* BadDreams: Sasha, after she kills a man. Leads to [[DrowningMySorrows drowning her sorrows]].
* CavalryBetrayal: Sasha, the Gurkhas are not here to help you....
* BadDreams: Sasha, after she kills a man. Leads to [[DrowningMySorrows drowning her sorrows]].
* CavalryBetrayal: Sasha, the Gurkhas are not here to help you....
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* DeadpanSnarker: The ''narration,'' as befits a story told by any incarnation of Shego.
* DidYouJustHaveSex: Both Sasha and Reneca pick up each other's "happy walk".
* DomesticAbuse: Bobby Johnson, boyfriend of the alternative universe Kim.
* TheEmpire: A few, including UsefulNotes/TheBritishEmpire and many other European great powers.
* DidYouJustHaveSex: Both Sasha and Reneca pick up each other's "happy walk".
* DomesticAbuse: Bobby Johnson, boyfriend of the alternative universe Kim.
* TheEmpire: A few, including UsefulNotes/TheBritishEmpire and many other European great powers.
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* GreyAndGrayMorality: In the tradition of noir fiction. Even Kim and Ron end up sort of [[ALighterShadeOfGray off-white]].
* HairTriggerTemper: While she's got a better handle on it than Shego, Sasha still has her moments.
* HairTriggerTemper: While she's got a better handle on it than Shego, Sasha still has her moments.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Pretty much every ''WesternAnimation/KimPossible'' character has a double, though their lives (and world history) are often radically different.
* IntimatePsychotherapy: [[IncrediblyLamePun coupled]] with GladToBeAliveSex, in an unusually well-done way.
* JacobMarleyWarning: Sasha is called in on a child-neglect case: the mother died and the father [[DespairEventHorizon fell completely to pieces]] and started [[DrowningMySorrows drinking heavily]]. Afterwards, she becomes more cautious in her investigation and makes Steve promise to hold himself together if anything does happen to her.
* KnowledgeBroker: Sasha's brother Mike (alt-Mego) has a finger is every pie and knows the dirt on everyone in Go City.
* LawOfInverseFertility: Sasha and Steve, in the {{backstory}}.
* LighterAndSofter: Not [[DarkerAndEdgier the story]], but some of the doubles of villains from the show are positively nice people in this universe.
* IntimatePsychotherapy: [[IncrediblyLamePun coupled]] with GladToBeAliveSex, in an unusually well-done way.
* JacobMarleyWarning: Sasha is called in on a child-neglect case: the mother died and the father [[DespairEventHorizon fell completely to pieces]] and started [[DrowningMySorrows drinking heavily]]. Afterwards, she becomes more cautious in her investigation and makes Steve promise to hold himself together if anything does happen to her.
* KnowledgeBroker: Sasha's brother Mike (alt-Mego) has a finger is every pie and knows the dirt on everyone in Go City.
* LawOfInverseFertility: Sasha and Steve, in the {{backstory}}.
* LighterAndSofter: Not [[DarkerAndEdgier the story]], but some of the doubles of villains from the show are positively nice people in this universe.
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* JacobMarleyWarning: Sasha is called in on a child-neglect
* KnowledgeBroker: Sasha's brother Mike (alt-Mego) has a finger
* LighterAndSofter: Not [[DarkerAndEdgier the story]], but some of the doubles of villains from the show are positively nice people in this universe.
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* TheMafiya: A more rounded portrayal than usual.
* MamaBear: Sasha to her four year old daughter, Marsha.
* NarniaTime: Kim and Ron spend months in the AlternateUniverse, and return home to find that only a few hours have passed.
* ObstructiveBureaucrat: Alt-Sensei, expecting the UsefulNotes/{{Imperial Japan}}ese government to order Kim and Ron eliminated once the reports make their way to the top of the bureaucracy, uses every [[PolitenessJudo protocol maneuver]] he can (such as channeling communications through people hostile to the Yamanouchi school and thus inclined to sit on his reports as long as possible) to delay matters while warning them to make their escape ASAP.
* OfficerAndAGentleman: Montgomery Fiske, Fourth Lord of Niagara. [[spoiler: It doesn't stop him from being rather AffablyEvil, though.]]
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* MamaBear: Sasha to her four year old daughter, Marsha.
* NarniaTime: Kim and Ron spend months in the AlternateUniverse, and return home to find that only a few hours have passed.
* ObstructiveBureaucrat: Alt-Sensei, expecting the UsefulNotes/{{Imperial Japan}}ese government to order Kim and Ron eliminated once the reports make their way to the top of the bureaucracy, uses every [[PolitenessJudo protocol maneuver]] he can (such as channeling communications through people hostile to the Yamanouchi school and thus inclined to sit on his reports as long as possible) to delay matters while warning them to make their escape ASAP.
* OfficerAndAGentleman: Montgomery Fiske, Fourth Lord of Niagara. [[spoiler: It doesn't stop him from being rather AffablyEvil, though.]]
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* ObstructiveBureaucrat: Alt-Sensei, expecting the UsefulNotes/{{Imperial Japan}}ese government to order Kim and Ron eliminated once the reports make their way to the top of the bureaucracy, uses every [[PolitenessJudo protocol maneuver]] he
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* TheyWouldCutYouUp: The head of the OSS (alt-Nana), warns Kim and Ron that factions in the US government are proposing extreme measures to extract the secrets of interdimensional travel, and that she'll only be able to block them for so long....
* TitledAfterTheSong: several of the chapter titles.
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* TheyWouldCutYouUp: The head of the OSS (alt-Nana), warns Kim and Ron that factions in the US government are proposing extreme measures to extract the secrets of interdimensional travel, and that she'll only be able to block them for so long....
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter Thirty-two, when the bad guys [[spoiler: come after Sasha's daughter.]]
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%%* WickedCultured: [[spoiler: Lord [[spoiler:Lord Montgomery Fiske.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3560875/1/Nights_in_the_Big_City Nights In The in the Big City]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/KimPossible'' fan fiction written by Mr. Wizard.
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* ActionGirl: faithful to the source material, you get a whole cast of 'em.
* AlternateUniverse: with an AlternateHistory to match.
* BadassFamily: You get to [[WhamEpisode Chapter Thirty-two]] and... yeah.
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* FairCop: Sasha and her partner, Reneca Cramer.
* GoodBadGirl: Sasha is a reformed example.
* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: and a lot of it, at that.
* GreyAndGrayMorality: in the tradition of noir fiction. Even Kim and Ron end up sort of [[ALighterShadeOfGray off-white]].
* GoodBadGirl: Sasha is a reformed example.
* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: and a lot of it, at that.
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* PapaWolf: Steve Barkin gets his moments, too. So do a few others.
* ARealManIsAKiller: Played with.
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