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* KickTheSonOfABitch: [[spoiler:Danny and Trish eviscerate most of the Dragonslayers when they try to kill Taylor by destroying the Exile portal.]]
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** Another issue that occasionally trips Tony's memories is that some of the chemicals he is used to working with do not exist in Earth Bet. Particularly, Taylor is interested inrecreating True Adamantium, or as close as she can manage, but gets stuck reworking some of the original resins needed to produce the metal.
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** Another issue that occasionally trips Tony's memories is that some of the chemicals he is used to working with do not exist in Earth Bet. Particularly, Taylor is interested inrecreating in recreating True Adamantium, or as close as she can manage, but gets stuck reworking some of the original resins needed to produce the metal.metal and produces several less perfect alloys along the way.
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** Another issue that occasionally trips Tony's memories is that some of the chemicals he is used to working with do not exist in Earth Bet. Particularly, Taylor is interested inrecreating True Adamantium, or as close as she can manage, but gets stuck reworking some of the original resins needed to produce the metal.
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* GenderVocabularySlip: One Japanese worker laudes Taylor's efforts to speak him in his native language, but still points it's obvious she's new to this -- okay, her syntax and accent are perfect, but her speech patterns are ''masculine''. Of course, he has no way to know she's actually borrowing Tony's skills.
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* GenderVocabularySlip: One Japanese worker laudes lauds Taylor's efforts to speak him in his native language, but still points it's obvious she's new to this -- okay, this--okay, her syntax and accent are perfect, but her speech patterns are ''masculine''. Of course, he has no way to know she's actually borrowing Tony's skills.
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This fanfic is now a dead fic because [[AuthorExistenceFailure the author is]] [[https://www.reddit.com/r/WormFanfic/comments/53ddhz/ no longer with us]].
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This fanfic is now a dead fic because [[AuthorExistenceFailure [[DiedDuringProduction the author is]] [[https://www.reddit.com/r/WormFanfic/comments/53ddhz/ no longer with us]].
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%% AuthorExistenceFailure is a Trivia trope and is in the trivia tab above.
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* GenderVocabularySlip: One Japanese worker laudes Taylor's efforts to speak him in his native language, but still points it's obvious she's new to this -- okay, her syntax and accent are perfect, but her speech patterns are ''masculine''. Of course, he has no way to know she's actually borrowing Tony's skills.
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** When New Wave joins the Human Defense Initiative, they rebrand themselves as Next Wave.
* CassandraTruth: Of all the Protectorate, Assault is the only one who is absolutely convinced that Iron Man was the one to unleash the nanotech plague on the city. He openly calls out everyone else for not thinking about it, despite it being within Iron Man's capabilities to do so.
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* GeekyTurnOn: Kid Win starts to nurse a crush on Taylor after she shows interest in his Tinkering and gives him tips for upgrades.
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* GeekyTurnOn: Kid Win starts to nurse a crush on Taylor after she shows interest in his Tinkering and gives him tips for upgrades. Even without that, though, he thought she was cool before, since she stood up to Sophia and her bullies when he couldn't.
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* MugglePower: Definitly has a theme of this, as Taylor isn't really a metahuman in this version, and focuses heavily on improving the ability of baseline humans to stand against Parahumans without getting slaughtered. She actively resists attempts by the PRT and Protectorate to strong-arm her company into giving them exclusive rights to their technology.
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* MugglePower: Definitly has a theme of this, as Taylor isn't really a metahuman parahuman in this version, and focuses heavily on improving the ability of baseline humans to stand against Parahumans without getting slaughtered. She actively resists attempts by the PRT and Protectorate to strong-arm her company into giving them exclusive rights to their technology.
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** Quite a bit of the fic is dedicated to discussing the need for Taylor to gather resources and develop appropriate tools and subsystems in order to recreate the technology Tony had.
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** Quite a bit of the fic is dedicated to discussing the need for Taylor to gather resources and develop appropriate tools and subsystems in order to recreate the technology Tony had. Sarah Pelham even lampshades this to Taylor that scrounging through junkyards is one of the first things that newly triggered Tinkers do, which Taylor commiserates on.
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* BoxingLessonsForSuperman: Somewhat. Chris[=/=]Kid Win is shown to improve greatly once he stops relying completely on his power-granted understanding of technology and starts doing his own research into scientific concepts. While he does use the powers to help construct the new technology he designs with it, both he and his powers are shown to have improved measurably.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Dragon, initially, thinks that JARVIS and Iron Man are the same person- that JARVIS was remote-controlling the suit to fight the Simurgh, but bailed on that suit when it self-destructed. It's understandable, given that she does basically the same thing with her suits. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, the Dragonslayers latch on to this theory, which causes problems down the road.]]
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* EngineeredPublicConfession: Taylor does two at once when the Trio confront her after trying to stick her in the locker. She intended to do the first, which was her recording Emma monologuing about how great Emma is and how much Emma hates the teachers for being gullible stooges who didn't even notice that the Trio were sabotaging Taylor. Unfortunately, there's a second confession that Taylor didn't intend to catch- the camera footage clearly shows that Sophia is Shadow Stalker.
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* HiddenVillain: Though readers familiar with Worm know from metaknowledge the identity of the enemy Taylor was given Tony's abilities to fight, his identity has not yet been revealed in this story, leaving Taylor and co. groping in the dark.
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* HiddenVillain: Though readers familiar with Worm know from metaknowledge the identity of the enemy Taylor was given Tony's abilities to fight, his identity has not yet been revealed in this story, remained a mystery, leaving Taylor and co. groping in the dark. When Scion shows up, Taylor realizes that it is the hidden villain.
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* MugglePower: Definitly has a theme of this, as Taylor isn't really a metahuman in this version, and focuses heavily on improving the ability of baseline humans to stand against Parahumans without getting slaughtered.
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* MugglePower: Definitly has a theme of this, as Taylor isn't really a metahuman in this version, and focuses heavily on improving the ability of baseline humans to stand against Parahumans without getting slaughtered. She actively resists attempts by the PRT and Protectorate to strong-arm her company into giving them exclusive rights to their technology.
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* EurekaMoment: Taylor realizes who is the real BiggerBad that she has been seeking [[spoiler:when Scion "accidentally" strikes her during the battle against Leviathan.]]
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* EurekaMoment: Taylor realizes who is the real BiggerBad villain that she has been seeking [[spoiler:when Scion "accidentally" strikes her during the battle against Leviathan.]]
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* ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated: Iron Man appears to have died fighting the Simurgh,
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* ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated: Iron Man appears to have died fighting the Simurgh, but she has actually survived and sends a message back as soon as she can. [[spoiler:She does the same some time after the fight with Leviathan ends up with her in orbit near Pluto.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:When the Slaughterhouse 9 decide to go after Iron Man, they don't last more than a few seconds, with the majority of the members getting vaporized in seconds, including Jack, Shatterbird and Mannequin. Siberian and Crawler lasts long enough to try and go on the offense, before Taylor kills Siberians controller. Crawler lasts the longest and could have caused actual damage if he wasn't so slow, and ends up getting chopped to pieces and burned away down to his atoms.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:When the Slaughterhouse 9 decide to go after Iron Man, they don't last more than a few seconds, with the majority of the members getting vaporized in seconds, including Jack, Shatterbird and Mannequin. Siberian and Crawler lasts long enough to try and go on the offense, before Taylor kills Siberians Siberian's controller. Crawler lasts the longest and could have caused actual damage if he wasn't so slow, and ends up getting chopped to pieces and burned away down to his atoms.]]
* EurekaMoment: Taylor realizes who is the real BiggerBad that she has been seeking [[spoiler:when Scion "accidentally" strikes her during the battle against Leviathan.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: The Australian rogue Billabong dies from the stress caused by him holding back Leviathan's waves from striking Brockton Bay.
* KickTheSonOfABitch: [[spoiler:Danny and Trish eviscerate most of the Dragonslayers when they try to kill Taylor by destroying the Exile portal.]]
* ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated: Iron Man appears to have died fighting the Simurgh,
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* SomebodyElsesProblem: Discussed and defied in chapter three, where Taylor resolves that she has no excuse for not helping another person out given how she's been on the receiving end of this so often.
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* SomebodyElsesProblem: Discussed and defied in chapter three, where Taylor resolves that she has no excuse for not helping another person out given how she's been on the receiving end of this so often.often.
* StartMyOwn: Taylor decides to start her own cape organization, in parallel with the Protectorate, to get ready to fight the end of the world.
* StartMyOwn: Taylor decides to start her own cape organization, in parallel with the Protectorate, to get ready to fight the end of the world.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Squealer from the Merchants is captured by Taylor's drones during the attack on HTech and healed of her addiction. She decides to join Taylor's efforts to save the would.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Squealer from the Merchants is captured by Taylor's drones during the attack on HTech [=HTech=] and healed of her addiction. She decides to join Taylor's efforts to save the would.world.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Squealer from the Merchants is captured by Taylor's drones during the attack on HTech and healed of her addiction. She decides to join Taylor's efforts to save the would.
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* BlessedWithSuck: [[spoiler:Tattletale's second trigger lets her gather information far faster than before, but is likely to get her killed from MySkullRunnethOver if not managed right.]]
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* BlessedWithSuck: BlessedWithSuck:
** [[spoiler:Tattletale's second trigger lets her gather information far faster than before, but is likely to get her killed from MySkullRunnethOver if not managed right.]]
** [[spoiler:Tattletale's second trigger lets her gather information far faster than before, but is likely to get her killed from MySkullRunnethOver if not managed right.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:When the Slaughterhouse 9 decide to go after Iron Man, they dont last more than a few seconds, with the majority of the members getting vaporized in seconds, including Jack, Shatterbird and Mannequin. Siberian and Crawler lasts long enough to try and go on the offense, before Taylor kills Siberians controller. Crawler lasts the longest and could have caused actual damage if he wasn't so slow, and ends up getting chopped to pieces and burned away down to his atoms.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:When the Slaughterhouse 9 decide to go after Iron Man, they dont don't last more than a few seconds, with the majority of the members getting vaporized in seconds, including Jack, Shatterbird and Mannequin. Siberian and Crawler lasts long enough to try and go on the offense, before Taylor kills Siberians controller. Crawler lasts the longest and could have caused actual damage if he wasn't so slow, and ends up getting chopped to pieces and burned away down to his atoms.]]
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* AdaptationNameChange: [[spoiler:Not-yet-Lisa takes up the name Trish instead.]]
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* AdaptationNameChange: [[spoiler:Not-yet-Lisa takes up the name Trish instead.instead, as that's what Taylor called her when she saved her from Coil's men.]]
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** Taylor getting Tony Stark's memories and intellect has enormous advantages, but it also means she has to deal with the memories and personality of a middle-aged playboy with PTSD and father issues overlapping with her own mind.
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** Taylor getting Tony Stark's memories and intellect has enormous advantages, but it also means she has to deal with the memories and personality of a middle-aged playboy with PTSD and father issues overlapping with her own mind.mind, struggling daily with trying to keep both separate.
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: When the Slaughterhouse 9 decide to go after Iron Man, they dont last more than a few seconds, with the majority of the members getting vaporized in seconds, including Jack, Shatterbird and Mannequin. Siberian and Crawler lasts long enough to try and go on the offense, before Taylor kills Siberians controller. Crawler lasts the longest and could have caused actual damage if he wasnt so slow, and ends up getting chopped to pieces and burned away down to his atoms]]
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: When [[spoiler:When the Slaughterhouse 9 decide to go after Iron Man, they dont last more than a few seconds, with the majority of the members getting vaporized in seconds, including Jack, Shatterbird and Mannequin. Siberian and Crawler lasts long enough to try and go on the offense, before Taylor kills Siberians controller. Crawler lasts the longest and could have caused actual damage if he wasnt wasn't so slow, and ends up getting chopped to pieces and burned away down to his atoms]]atoms.]]
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* GeekyTurnOn: Kid Win starts to nurse a crush on Taylor after she showed interest in his Tinkering and gave him tips for upgrades.
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* GeekyTurnOn: Kid Win starts to nurse a crush on Taylor after she showed shows interest in his Tinkering and gave gives him tips for upgrades.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Sophia ends up falling into the locker trap she had prepared for Taylor.
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* MugglePower: Definitly has a theme of this, as Taylor isnt really a metahuman in this version, and focuses heavily on improving the ability of baseline humans to stand against Parahumans without getting slaughtered.
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* ShowyInvincibleHero: Taylor slowly moves in this direction as she recreates more of Tony's tech. Justified as Marvel-616's power level is higher than Worm's and the CosmicEntity granted her Tony's knowledge not to play with normal parahumans but rather to destroy the Endbringers and [[spoiler:Scion]].
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* ShowyInvincibleHero: Taylor slowly moves in this direction as she recreates more of Tony's tech. Justified as Marvel-616's power level is higher than Worm's and the CosmicEntity granted her Tony's knowledge not to play with normal parahumans but rather to destroy the Endbringers and [[spoiler:Scion]].[[spoiler:and Scion]].
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* ActuallyIAmHim: At New Wave's reception, Danny is greeted as Iron Man instead of his daughter - since Taylor deliberately leads people to believe her cape persona is male.
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* GeekyTurnOn: Kid Win starts to nurse a crush on Taylor after she showed interest in his Tinkering and gave him tips for upgrades.