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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Due to the terrible living conditions, hundreds of thousands of changelings are fleeing their native homeland in search of better lives, emigrating to Equestria, the Fillypines, the Griffin Empire and even the Diamond Dog Republic.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Due to the terrible living conditions, conditions in their homeland, hundreds of thousands of changelings are fleeing their native homeland the kingdom in search of better lives, emigrating to Equestria, the Fillypines, the Griffin Empire and even the Diamond Dog Republic.
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* DeathOfAChild:
** A report by Chrysalis' ministers regarding the state of the Changeling Kingdom mentions a worrying increase in hatchling mortality rates.
** Almost all of Chrysalis' hatchlings died as children due to genetic defects and/or weakened immune systems caused by RoyalInbreeding, with Pupa being her last living child.
** A report by Chrysalis' ministers regarding the state of the Changeling Kingdom mentions a worrying increase in hatchling mortality rates.
** Almost all of Chrysalis' hatchlings died as children due to genetic defects and/or weakened immune systems caused by RoyalInbreeding, with Pupa being her last living child.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Due to the terrible living conditions, tens hundreds of thousands of changelings are fleeing their native homeland in search of a better life, lives, emigrating to Equestria, the Fillypines, the Griffin Empire and even the Diamond Dog Republic.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Due to the terrible living conditions, tens of thousands of changelings are fleeing their native homeland in search of a better life, emigrating to Equestria, the Fillypines, Griffin Empire and even the Diamond Dog Republic.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Due to the terrible living conditions, tens of thousands of changelings are fleeing their native homeland in search of a better life, emigrating to Equestria, the Fillypines, the Griffin Empire and even the Diamond Dog Republic.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Due to the terrible living conditions, tens of thousands of changelings are fleeing their native homeland in search of a better life, emigrating to Equestria, the Fillypines, Griffin Empire and even the Diamond Dog Republic.
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** The Griffon Empire is apparently Germany, going by their language and love of ZombieApocalypse movies. Their leader's title is "Kaiser", and in Chapter 3, Chrysalis shows her generals a newspaper from the griffon lands that has the headline "Changeling Desertion Auf Rekordhoch" (which translates to "Changeling desertion at record high").
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** The Griffon Empire is apparently Germany, going by their language and love of ZombieApocalypse movies. Their leader's title is "Kaiser", and in Chapter 3, Chrysalis shows her generals a newspaper from the griffon lands that has the headline "Changeling Desertion Auf Rekordhoch" (which translates to "Changeling desertion at record high"). The griffon midwife who attended Pupa's birth also speaks with a German FunetikAksent.
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Not to be confused with the popular ''WesternAnimation/KimPossible'' [[Fanfic/MaternalInstinct fanfic of the same name]].
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* IllGirl: Due to being born from a long line of royal changelings that practiced RoyalInbreeding, Pupa has a long list of health problems that includes scoliosis, low white blood cell count, malformed limbs, underdeveloped wings, mental retardation, and possible mental illness due to hearing voices in her head. Many other members of the royal family have deformities or disabilities for the same reasons, though none as severe as Pupa's.
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* ExplosiveBreeder: As part of their insect-like natures, changelings produce large broods. One of Chrysalis' servants has ''eighteen'' children. Unusually, Chrysalis herself has only one living child because her others died of illness.
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* ExplosiveBreeder: As part of their insect-like natures, changelings produce large broods. One of Chrysalis' servants has ''eighteen'' children. Unusually, Chrysalis herself has only one living child because her others other ones died of illness.
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** The author seems to like this trope. While in Castle Discord, Celestia accidentally comes across a very fat unicorn and a very skinny pegasus who are making out and wearing striped socks.
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** The author seems to like this trope. While in Castle Discord, Celestia accidentally comes across a pair of teenage mares, one a very fat unicorn and the other a very skinny pegasus pegasus, who are making out and wearing striped socks.
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** There's a scene where Chrysalis [[YouHaveFailedMe tortures a changeling general for failure]] and finishes with the line, [[Film/TheEmpireStrikesBack "Apology accepted, General Antenaka."]]
* SliceOfLife: The first five chapters show what changelings get up to when not invading other countries, comitting such nefarious deeds as... taking walks in the garden and playing croquet.
* SliceOfLife: The first five chapters show what changelings get up to when not invading other countries, comitting such nefarious deeds as... taking walks in the garden and playing croquet.
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** There's a scene where Chrysalis [[YouHaveFailedMe tortures a changeling general for failure]] and finishes with the line, [[Film/TheEmpireStrikesBack "Apology accepted, General Antenaka."]]
** [[WesternAnimation/ToyStory1 "No, Celestia. For the first time in my life, I am thinking clearly."]]
* SliceOfLife: The first five chapters show what changelings get up to when not invading other countries,comitting committing such nefarious deeds as... taking walks in the garden and playing croquet.
** [[WesternAnimation/ToyStory1 "No, Celestia. For the first time in my life, I am thinking clearly."]]
* SliceOfLife: The first five chapters show what changelings get up to when not invading other countries,
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* RealityEnsues: Members of the changeling royal family are expected to hold military positions, even if they have no actual military experience. Chrysalis recounts when her father made her a Major General during a war at the age of eighteen, and because she had no experience, she lost her first battle so badly that most of her army was wiped out.
