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* NotSoDifferent: During Thane's recruitment mission, Jacob claims the Drell's no different than Cerberus at its worst: a criminal assassin murdering just to broker advantages for his employers.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: During Thane's recruitment mission, Jacob claims the Drell's no different than Cerberus at its worst: a criminal assassin murdering just to broker advantages for his employers.
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* KnightTemplar: Miranda as part of the Cerberus PowerTrio.
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* KnightTemplar: Miranda as part of the Cerberus PowerTrio.Trio.
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* PowerTrio: The Butcher, Jacob and Miranda.
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* BadassNormal: Unlike Jacob and Miranda, The Butcher is not a biotic. He's a shotgun inflitrator specialist.
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* BadassNormal: Unlike Jacob and Miranda, The Butcher is not a biotic. He's a shotgun inflitrator infiltrator specialist.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: As commited as he is to results at any cost, the Butcher was horrified by what he discovered at [[spoiler:the Tetlin facility]].
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: As commited committed as he is to results at any cost, the Butcher was horrified by what he discovered at [[spoiler:the Tetlin facility]].
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** The Butcher is effectively Cerberus!Shepard. During Mordin's Loyalty Mission, he also serves as a foil to Mordin by providing another perpective and challenging his views and justifications.
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** The Butcher is effectively Cerberus!Shepard. During Mordin's Loyalty Mission, he also serves as a foil to Mordin by providing another perpective perspective and challenging his views and justifications.
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** Jacob's staunch decision to own his sins constrasts sharply with Thane's philosophical methods of absolving himself of the deeds he commits as an assassin. In Thane's Loyalty Mission, he also becomes one for [[spoiler:Kolyat, showing what he could become if he continues down the path he's starting on]].
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** Jacob's staunch decision to own his sins constrasts contrasts sharply with Thane's philosophical methods of absolving himself of the deeds he commits as an assassin. In Thane's Loyalty Mission, he also becomes one for [[spoiler:Kolyat, showing what he could become if he continues down the path he's starting on]].
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* HopelessBossFight: In the first boss battle with The Butcher, Miranda and Jacob on Horizon, those three are unkillable courtesy of their powerful barriers. Instead, the player has to focus on taking out Harbringer.
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* HopelessBossFight: In the first boss battle with The Butcher, Miranda and Jacob on Horizon, those three are unkillable courtesy of their powerful barriers. Instead, the player has to focus on taking out Harbringer.Harbinger.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7665424/1/Mass-Effect-2-AU-Lanius Mass Effect 2: Lanius]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect'' AlternateUniverseFic by College Fool, written more as a pseudohistorical document than a traditional narrative.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7665424/1/Mass-Effect-2-AU-Lanius Mass Effect 2: Lanius]]'' is a now-complete ''Franchise/MassEffect'' AlternateUniverseFic by College Fool, written more as a pseudohistorical document than a traditional narrative.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7665424/1/Mass-Effect-2-AU-Lanius Mass Effect 2: Lanius]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect'' AlternateUniverseFic by College Fool. Take note: It's written more as a pseudohistorical document than a traditional narrative.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7665424/1/Mass-Effect-2-AU-Lanius Mass Effect 2: Lanius]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect'' AlternateUniverseFic by College Fool. Take note: It's Fool, written more as a pseudohistorical document than a traditional narrative.
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* EvilCounterpart: The Butcher to Shepard. The author tries to emphasise how he's not just a {{badass}} but also a beloved leader.
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* EvilCounterpart: The Butcher to Shepard. The author tries to emphasise how he's not just a {{badass}} badass but also a beloved leader.
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* ControllableHelplessness: [[spoiler: By the time ''VideoGame/MassEffect3'' rolls around, Shepard is indoctrinated, and is working to to help the Reapers, while Cerberus is trying to stop them.]]
* DemotedToExtra: The Suicide Mission is barely mentioned at all, with [[spoiler: one set on Omega]] as a thematic replacement.
* DemotedToExtra: The Suicide Mission is barely mentioned at all, with [[spoiler: one set on Omega]] as a thematic replacement.
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* ControllableHelplessness: [[spoiler: By [[spoiler:By the time ''VideoGame/MassEffect3'' rolls around, Shepard is indoctrinated, and is working to to help the Reapers, while Cerberus is trying to stop them.]]
* DemotedToExtra: The Suicide Mission is barely mentioned at all, with[[spoiler: one [[spoiler:one set on Omega]] as a thematic replacement.
* DemotedToExtra: The Suicide Mission is barely mentioned at all, with
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* [[spoiler: GovernmentConspiracy: Unlike in canon, here the rogue cell at Teltin was discovered by the Alliance, which led to them taking Cerberus in hand. ''Shadow Broker'' is now about Cerberus purging the relevant evidence so they can regain independence.]]
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* [[spoiler: GovernmentConspiracy: Unlike in canon, here the [[spoiler:the rogue cell at Teltin was discovered by the Alliance, which led to them taking Cerberus in hand. hand]]. ''Shadow Broker'' is now about Cerberus [[spoiler:Cerberus purging the relevant evidence so they can regain independence.]]
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** [[spoiler:At Omega, you have to choose the order in which you stop the anti-alien plague, the human-abducting Collectors or Cerberus's smash-and-grab on alien property. There's no way to go after all simultaneously; you can only choose which of the three types of damage to prioritise and minimise.]]
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** [[spoiler:At At Omega, you have to choose the order in which you stop tackle three goals: [[spoiler:stopping the anti-alien plague, the human-abducting Collectors or Cerberus's smash-and-grab on alien property.property]]. There's no way to go after all simultaneously; you can only choose which of the three types of damage to prioritise and minimise.]]
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: As revealed in a loyalty mission, [[spoiler:Miranda was Subject One at the Teltin facility, and bonded over their shared horrific experiences. However, Jack was the stronger biotic, and when she escaped, Miranda wasn't able to follow. Each thought the other betrayed them, to escape alone or join Cerberus.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: The Cerberus Trio will keep chewing Shepard and co. out for [[RevengeBeforeReason going after Cerberus forces first]] during [[spoiler: the attack on Omega.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: The Cerberus Trio will keep chewing Shepard and co. out for [[RevengeBeforeReason going after Cerberus forces first]] during [[spoiler: the attack on Omega.]]
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: As revealed in a loyalty mission, [[spoiler:Miranda was Subject One at the Teltin facility, and bonded over their shared horrific experiences. However, Jack was the stronger biotic, and when she escaped, Miranda wasn't able to follow. Each thought the other betrayed them, to escape alone or join Cerberus.]]
Cerberus]].
* WhatTheHellHero: The Cerberus Trio will keep chewing Shepard and co. out for [[RevengeBeforeReason going after Cerberus forces first]] during[[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the attack on Omega.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: The Cerberus Trio will keep chewing Shepard and co. out for [[RevengeBeforeReason going after Cerberus forces first]] during
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* ExpectingSomeoneTaller: The first time he sees Shepard, the Butcher comments on how he was expecting someone more "...impressive. Not someone who looks more at home hiding behind a computer."
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* ExpectingSomeoneTaller: The first time he sees Shepard, the Butcher comments on how he was expecting someone more "...impressive. [[ThisLoserIsYou Not someone who looks more at home hiding behind a computer."]]"
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* TheBadGuyWins: No matter what happens, a bad guy will win. [[spoiler:If the Butcher is killed, it is suggested that the indoctrinated Shepard will eventually restart the Cycle (Control) or that the new synthetics will eventually fall in line with the Reapers (Synthesis). If the Butcher is allowed to live, however, while the Reapers are stopped, he becomes a KarmaHoudini, never getting punished for his deeds.]]
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* SadisticChoice: [[spoiler:At Omega, you have to choose the order in which you stop the anti-alien plague, the human-abducting Collectors or Cerberus's smash-and-grab on alien property. There's no way to go after all simultaneously; you can only choose which of the three types of damage to prioritise and minimise.]]
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* SadisticChoice: SadisticChoice:
** [[spoiler:At Omega, you have to choose the order in which you stop the anti-alien plague, the human-abducting Collectors or Cerberus's smash-and-grab on alien property. There's no way to go after all simultaneously; you can only choose which of the three types of damage to prioritise and minimise.]]
** [[spoiler:At Omega, you have to choose the order in which you stop the anti-alien plague, the human-abducting Collectors or Cerberus's smash-and-grab on alien property. There's no way to go after all simultaneously; you can only choose which of the three types of damage to prioritise and minimise.]]
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* AnArmAndALeg: During the Shadow Broker DLC, [[spoiler:the Butcher takes off one of Liara's hands in order to use it to access the Broker's base]].
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* AnArmAndALeg: During the Shadow Broker DLC, [[spoiler:the Butcher takes off one of Liara's hands [[BorrowedBiometricBypass in order to use it to access the Broker's base]].base]]]].
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* SadisticChoice: [[spoiler: t Omega, you have to choose the order in which you stop the anti-alien plague, the human-abducting Collectors or Cerberus's smash-and-grab on alien property. There's no way to go after all simultaneously; you can only choose which of the three types of damage to prioritise and minimise.]]
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* SadisticChoice: [[spoiler: t [[spoiler:At Omega, you have to choose the order in which you stop the anti-alien plague, the human-abducting Collectors or Cerberus's smash-and-grab on alien property. There's no way to go after all simultaneously; you can only choose which of the three types of damage to prioritise and minimise.]]
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* PragmaticVillainy: Jacob Zaeed Taylor. Unlike The Butcher, who will achieve his goals at all costs, or the fanatically loyal Miranda, Jacob prefers to avoid unnecessary bloodshed, cruelty, or even violence if possible. He also KnowsWhenToFoldEm and has no problems with escaping to fight another day.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Jacob Zaeed Taylor. Unlike The Butcher, who will achieve his goals at all costs, or the fanatically loyal Miranda, Jacob prefers to avoid unnecessary bloodshed, cruelty, or even violence if possible. He also KnowsWhenToFoldEm [[KnowWhenToFoldEm Knows When To Fold Em]] and has no problems with escaping to fight another day.
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* SadisticChoice: [[spoiler: At t Omega, you have to choose the order in which you stop the anti-alien plague, the human-abducting Collectors or Cerberus's smash-and-grab on alien property. There's no way to go after all simultaneously; you can only choose which of the three types of damage to prioritise and minimise.]]
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* PragmaticVillainy: Jacob Zaeed Taylor. Unlike The Butcher, who will achieve his goals at all costs, or the fanatically loyal Miranda, Jacob prefers to avoid unnecessary bloodshed, cruelty, or even violence if possible.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Jacob Zaeed Taylor. Unlike The Butcher, who will achieve his goals at all costs, or the fanatically loyal Miranda, Jacob prefers to avoid unnecessary bloodshed, cruelty, or even violence if possible. He also KnowsWhenToFoldEm and has no problems with escaping to fight another day.
* RunningGag: Every encounter with Jacob ends with him jumping out a window and using his biotics as a parachute to float down safely.
* RunningGag: Every encounter with Jacob ends with him jumping out a window and using his biotics as a parachute to float down safely.
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* AnArmAndALeg: During the Shadow Broker DLC, [[spoiler:the Butcher takes off one of Liara's hands in order to use it to access the Broker's base]].
* AscendedExtra: As in ''Fanfic/RenegadeReinterpretations'', Kasumi is promoted to one of Shepard's starting companions, with Mordin now serving as the other one.
* BadassNormal: Unlike Jacob and Miranda, The Butcher is not a biotic. He's a shotgun inflitrator specialist.
* BlackmailIsSuchAnUglyWord: After the [[spoiler:Omega Plague]], when Shepard learns how Udina secured the full cooperation of [[spoiler:Aria]]:
-->'''Shepard:''' You blackmailed her?\\
'''Udina:''' [[SmugSmiler (smirks)]]\\
[[spoiler:'''Aria]]:''' We bargained.
* AscendedExtra: As in ''Fanfic/RenegadeReinterpretations'', Kasumi is promoted to one of Shepard's starting companions, with Mordin now serving as the other one.
* BadassNormal: Unlike Jacob and Miranda, The Butcher is not a biotic. He's a shotgun inflitrator specialist.
* BlackmailIsSuchAnUglyWord: After the [[spoiler:Omega Plague]], when Shepard learns how Udina secured the full cooperation of [[spoiler:Aria]]:
-->'''Shepard:''' You blackmailed her?\\
'''Udina:''' [[SmugSmiler (smirks)]]\\
[[spoiler:'''Aria]]:''' We bargained.
* CassandraTruth: On the final notes at the end concerning Lanius 3, Cerberus winds up as TheCassandra concerning [[spoiler:Shepard's indoctrination]].
* TheChainsOfCommanding: Before the mission concerning [[spoiler:the Omega Plague]], Shepard can ask their crew for opinions. Several express relief that they don't have to be the one deciding [[spoiler:what order to tackle their three main goals in]].
* TheChainsOfCommanding: Before the mission concerning [[spoiler:the Omega Plague]], Shepard can ask their crew for opinions. Several express relief that they don't have to be the one deciding [[spoiler:what order to tackle their three main goals in]].
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* ControllableHelplessness: [[spoiler: By the time MassEffect3 rolls around, Shepard is indoctrinated, and is working to to help the Reapers, while Cerberus is trying to stop them.]]
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* ControllableHelplessness: [[spoiler: By the time MassEffect3 ''VideoGame/MassEffect3'' rolls around, Shepard is indoctrinated, and is working to to help the Reapers, while Cerberus is trying to stop them.]]
* DoWithHimAsYouWill: The Butcher offered the victims of [[spoiler:the Tetlin facility's experiments]] the chance to decide what would be done to their tormentors. [[spoiler:When Subject One said they should be spared, as they must have had good reasons for all they'd done, he recognizes her StockholmSyndrome and gently corrects her before executing them all himself.]]
* DwindlingParty: Archangel's recruitment mission starts with only three other members other than himself still alive. By the time Shepard's team reaches them, [[spoiler:Garrus is the SoleSurvivor and nearly gets himself killed in a reckless rage]].
* DwindlingParty: Archangel's recruitment mission starts with only three other members other than himself still alive. By the time Shepard's team reaches them, [[spoiler:Garrus is the SoleSurvivor and nearly gets himself killed in a reckless rage]].
* EvenEvilHasStandards: As commited as he is to results at any cost, the Butcher was horrified by what he discovered at [[spoiler:the Tetlin facility]].
* ExpectingSomeoneTaller: The first time he sees Shepard, the Butcher comments on how he was expecting someone more "...impressive. Not someone who looks more at home hiding behind a computer."
* {{Foil}}:
** The Butcher is effectively Cerberus!Shepard. During Mordin's Loyalty Mission, he also serves as a foil to Mordin by providing another perpective and challenging his views and justifications.
** Miranda is a mirror to Jack: both are powerful biotics, clashing due to their vastly different opinions of Cerberus. In Jack's Loyalty Mission, it's revealed [[spoiler:she's what Jack might have become if she hadn't managed to escape]].
** Jacob's staunch decision to own his sins constrasts sharply with Thane's philosophical methods of absolving himself of the deeds he commits as an assassin. In Thane's Loyalty Mission, he also becomes one for [[spoiler:Kolyat, showing what he could become if he continues down the path he's starting on]].
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** The Butcher is effectively Cerberus!Shepard. During Mordin's Loyalty Mission, he also serves as a foil to Mordin by providing another perpective and challenging his views and justifications.
** Miranda is a mirror to Jack: both are powerful biotics, clashing due to their vastly different opinions of Cerberus. In Jack's Loyalty Mission, it's revealed [[spoiler:she's what Jack might have become if she hadn't managed to escape]].
** Jacob's staunch decision to own his sins constrasts sharply with Thane's philosophical methods of absolving himself of the deeds he commits as an assassin. In Thane's Loyalty Mission, he also becomes one for [[spoiler:Kolyat, showing what he could become if he continues down the path he's starting on]].
* HopelessBossFight: In the first boss battle with The Butcher, Miranda and Jacob on Horizon, those three are unkillable courtesy of their powerful barriers. Instead, the player has to focus on taking out Harbringer.
* IShallTauntYou: The Butcher can taunt Shepard and his companions on Horizon. If Shepard's affected, the screen goes red unless the player's looking at him; if a companion is affected, they may switch targets to focus on the Butcher.
* KnightInSourArmor: Jacob is far from an idealist, but refuses to let go of a few crucial beliefs.
* KnightTemplar: Miranda as part of the Cerberus PowerTrio.
* MyGreatestFailure: Anderson is haunted by how [[spoiler:he allowed one of his former pupils to be lynched in a political KangarooCourt]].
* IShallTauntYou: The Butcher can taunt Shepard and his companions on Horizon. If Shepard's affected, the screen goes red unless the player's looking at him; if a companion is affected, they may switch targets to focus on the Butcher.
* KnightInSourArmor: Jacob is far from an idealist, but refuses to let go of a few crucial beliefs.
* KnightTemplar: Miranda as part of the Cerberus PowerTrio.
* MyGreatestFailure: Anderson is haunted by how [[spoiler:he allowed one of his former pupils to be lynched in a political KangarooCourt]].
* NonStandardGameOver: The Butcher causes several of these; for instance, confronting him directly during [[spoiler:the game of chicken on the Derelict Reaper]] leads to him instantly killing Shepard, and choosing [[spoiler:not to trade him back to Cerberus in accordance with their plans]] results in him cracking a CyanidePill.
* NotSoDifferent: During Thane's recruitment mission, Jacob claims the Drell's no different than Cerberus at its worst: a criminal assassin murdering just to broker advantages for his employers.
* NotSoDifferent: During Thane's recruitment mission, Jacob claims the Drell's no different than Cerberus at its worst: a criminal assassin murdering just to broker advantages for his employers.
* PoorCommunicationKills: Legion's True Geth (which consist of about 45% of all Geth here) are childlike and don't understand why outsiders don't grasp their desire (and concept) of Peace. In large part because the militant isolationists simply aren't ''communicating'' this clearly, unfairly putting the burden of compromise and communication on the Quarians.
* PragmaticVillainy: Jacob Zaeed Taylor. Unlike The Butcher, who will achieve his goals at all costs, or the fanatically loyal Miranda, Jacob prefers to avoid unnecessary bloodshed, cruelty, or even violence if possible.
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** Samara's Loyalty Mission also boils down to deciding whether Morinth [[spoiler:falls into the hands of [=ExoGeni=] or the Butcher and Cerberus]]. Again, there are no third options.
** During the Overlord DLC mission, Shepard
* SchrodingersPlayerCharacter: {{Averted}}. [[spoiler:The Butcher is either The Butcher of Torfan or, if Shepard has the Ruthless Background, is the Hero of Elysium]].
* ShootTheHostage: Shepard can choose to do this on Illium when [[spoiler:the Butcher tries taking Nasana hostage in order to escape]].
* SurvivorGuilt: Garrus suffers this, amplified due to how [[spoiler:the last of his team dies while you're desperately trying to reach them]] and the actions of The Butcher.
* TakingTheBullet: During the Shadow Broker DLC mission, [[spoiler:Jacob and Miranda are scripted to step in and take blows to protect the Butcher]].
* TimeSkip: The DLC missions would be framed as Shepard reflecting back upon them, and would be set in appropriate parts of the overall timeline. Playing a mission 'out of order' would simply mean certain spoilery plot points would not be mentioned.
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* VillainHasAPoint: Discussed in the Analysis Notes for Thane's recruitment. While Jacob points out that the Drell are effectively the Hanar's own personal cabal of assassins, his protests are tainted by how hypocritical it seems for him to protest this given his involvement with Cerberus.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: As revealed in a loyalty mission, [[spoiler:Miranda was Subject One at the Teltin facility, and bonded over their shared horrific experiences. However, Jack was the stronger biotic, and when she escaped, Miranda wasn't able to follow. Each thought the other betrayed them, to escape alone or join Cerberus.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: The Cerberus Trio will keep chewing Shepard and co. out for [[RevengeBeforeReason going after Cerberus forces first]] during [[spoiler: the attack on Omega.]]
* TheWorfEffect: In order to prove the Butcher is a formidable opponent, he's involved in the slaughter of [[spoiler:Garrus's team]], pushing their leader to the brink of the DespairEventHorizon.
* WeUsedToBeFriends: As revealed in a loyalty mission, [[spoiler:Miranda was Subject One at the Teltin facility, and bonded over their shared horrific experiences. However, Jack was the stronger biotic, and when she escaped, Miranda wasn't able to follow. Each thought the other betrayed them, to escape alone or join Cerberus.]]
* WhatTheHellHero: The Cerberus Trio will keep chewing Shepard and co. out for [[RevengeBeforeReason going after Cerberus forces first]] during [[spoiler: the attack on Omega.]]
* TheWorfEffect: In order to prove the Butcher is a formidable opponent, he's involved in the slaughter of [[spoiler:Garrus's team]], pushing their leader to the brink of the DespairEventHorizon.
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* WhatTheHellHero: The Cerberus Trio will keep chewing Shepard and co. out for [[RevengeBeforeReason going after Cerberus forces first first]] during [[spoiler: the attack on Omega.]]
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* ControlledHelplessness: [[spoiler: By the time MassEffect3 rolls around, Shepard is indoctrinated, and is working to to help the Reapers, while Cerberus is trying to stop them.]]
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* ControlledHelplessness: ControllableHelplessness: [[spoiler: By the time MassEffect3 rolls around, Shepard is indoctrinated, and is working to to help the Reapers, while Cerberus is trying to stop them.]]
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* UnwittingPawn: Shepard. No matter how much information the Player finds out about the true nature of Cerberus, Shepard doesn't find out.
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In this universe, Shepard was resurrected not by Cerberus, but by the Shadow Broker. It seems that Cerberus is working with the Collectors, but why and to what end? Shepard will find his abilities tested by their finest, including an enigmatic FallenHero known only as the Butcher.
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In this universe, Shepard was resurrected not by Cerberus, but by the Shadow Broker. It seems that Cerberus is working with the Collectors, but why and to what end? Why would the extremist human supremacist group help their own be abducted? Shepard will find his abilities tested by their finest, including an enigmatic FallenHero known only as the Butcher.
Butcher who is uncomfortably similar to himself.
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* TheButcher: You don't say?!In fact, "Lanius" is Latin for "Butcher".
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In this universe, Shepard was resurrected not by Cerberus, but by the Shadow Broker. It seems that Cerberus is working with the Collectors, but why and to what end? Shepard will find his abilities tested by their finest, including an enigmatic fallen hero FallenHero known only as the Butcher.
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* OnceMoreWithClarity: The purpose of the "new content" in NewGamePlus.
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* DemotedToExtra: The Suicide Mission is barely mentioned at all, with [[spoiler: one set on Omega]] as a thematic replacement.
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* SadisticChoice: [[spoiler: At Omega, you have to choose the order in which you stop the anti-alien plague, the human-abducting Collectors or Cerberus's smash-and-grab on alien property. There's no way to go after all simultaneously; you can only choose which of the three types of damage to prioritise and minimise.]]
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* EnemyMine: Several times with Cerberus.
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* [[spoiler: GovernmentConspiracy: Unlike in canon, here the rogue cell at Teltin was discovered by the Alliance, which led to them taking Cerberus in hand. ''Shadow Broker'' is now about Cerberus purging the relevant evidence so they can regain independence.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7665424/1/Mass-Effect-2-AU-Lanius Mass Effect 2: Lanius]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect'' AlternateUniverseFic by College Fool. Take note: It's written more as a pseudohistorical document than a traditional narrative.
In this universe, Shepard was resurrected not by Cerberus, but by the Shadow Broker. It seems that Cerberus is working with the Collectors, but why and to what end? Shepard will find his abilities tested by their finest, including an enigmatic fallen hero known only as the Butcher.
Now complete.
Compare and contrast ''Fanfic/RenegadeReinterpretations'', another ''Franchise/MassEffect'' AlternateUniverseFic by the same author.
!This fanfic contains examples of:
* TheButcher: You don't say?!
* CompositeCharacter: Jacob draws some elements from Zaeed, who doesn't exist here.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Jacob is introduced [[spoiler: having killed Okeer with a knife]], while the Butcher's is in [[spoiler: {{Curb Stomp| Battle}}ing Garrus's team, then mocking Garrus's attempt to stop him.]]
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: We never learn the Butcher's real name.
* EvilCounterpart: The Butcher to Shepard.
* NewGamePlus: After "completing" one run, new content is "unlocked". The author advises that the previous chapters be reread in light of what has been revealed.
* PowerTrio: The Butcher, Jacob and Miranda.
* WhatTheHellHero: The Cerberus Trio will keep chewing Shepard and co. out for going after Cerberus forces first during [[spoiler: the attack on Omega.]]
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In this universe, Shepard was resurrected not by Cerberus, but by the Shadow Broker. It seems that Cerberus is working with the Collectors, but why and to what end? Shepard will find his abilities tested by their finest, including an enigmatic fallen hero known only as the Butcher.
Now complete.
Compare and contrast ''Fanfic/RenegadeReinterpretations'', another ''Franchise/MassEffect'' AlternateUniverseFic by the same author.
!This fanfic contains examples of:
* TheButcher: You don't say?!
* CompositeCharacter: Jacob draws some elements from Zaeed, who doesn't exist here.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Jacob is introduced [[spoiler: having killed Okeer with a knife]], while the Butcher's is in [[spoiler: {{Curb Stomp| Battle}}ing Garrus's team, then mocking Garrus's attempt to stop him.]]
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: We never learn the Butcher's real name.
* EvilCounterpart: The Butcher to Shepard.
* NewGamePlus: After "completing" one run, new content is "unlocked". The author advises that the previous chapters be reread in light of what has been revealed.
* PowerTrio: The Butcher, Jacob and Miranda.
* WhatTheHellHero: The Cerberus Trio will keep chewing Shepard and co. out for going after Cerberus forces first during [[spoiler: the attack on Omega.]]
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