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** Erik, following a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown from a pissed-off Wendy, meets his demise to her Dragon Slayer Secret Art: Shattering Light: Sky Drill, fatally wounding him to destroy his Dragon Lacrima.
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* BerserkButton: To Dragon Slayers, the Dragon Soul Ritual is something sacred. As such, when Natsu and Gajeel see Laxus using a dragon lacrima to make himself an artificial Dragon Slayer, they utterly flip out at this perversion of their ritual, fully unleashing their Dragon Slayer Magic against him.
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** To Dragon Slayers, the Dragon Soul Ritual is something sacred. As such, when Natsu and Gajeel see Laxus using a dragon lacrima to make himself an artificial Dragon Slayer, they utterly flip out at this perversion of their ritual, fully unleashing their Dragon Slayer Magic againsthim.him.
** Wendy has the exact same reaction when she sees Cobra and his Poison Lacrima. The normaly shy and gentle girl [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness goes on the offensive and fights to kill.]]
** To Dragon Slayers, the Dragon Soul Ritual is something sacred. As such, when Natsu and Gajeel see Laxus using a dragon lacrima to make himself an artificial Dragon Slayer, they utterly flip out at this perversion of their ritual, fully unleashing their Dragon Slayer Magic against
** Wendy has the exact same reaction when she sees Cobra and his Poison Lacrima. The normaly shy and gentle girl [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness goes on the offensive and fights to kill.]]
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* LogicalWeakness: Like all runners, Racer needs traction to run as fast as he can. Grey and Lyon quicky nullify his extreame speed by freezing the battlefield making Racer a sitting duck.
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* AdaptationalContextChange: In canon, Natsu went to Hargeon because he heard a Fire Mage was there and thought it was his father Igneel. Here, it's because he heard a Salamander was there. This results in Bora being defeated quickly and unceremoniously.
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** In canon, Natsu went to Hargeon because he heard a Fire Mage was there and thought it was his father Igneel. Here, it's because he heard a Salamander was there. This results in Bora being defeated quickly and unceremoniously.
** Canonically, Ultear joined Grimoire Heart to unseal Zeref. [[spoiler:Here, she's TheMole, having joined with the goal of killing Hades.]]
** In canon, Natsu went to Hargeon because he heard a Fire Mage was there and thought it was his father Igneel. Here, it's because he heard a Salamander was there. This results in Bora being defeated quickly and unceremoniously.
** Canonically, Ultear joined Grimoire Heart to unseal Zeref. [[spoiler:Here, she's TheMole, having joined with the goal of killing Hades.]]
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* BashBrothers: Natsu and Gajeel really have trouble getting along, but when Laxus royally pissed them off (see Berserk Button above), the duo quickly proved that they make a surprisingly effective team.
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* BashBrothers: Natsu and Gajeel really have trouble getting along, but when Laxus royally pissed them off (see Berserk Button above), below), the duo quickly proved that they make a surprisingly effective team.
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This dispute was taken to Ask The Tropers, and the previous write-up was decided on after debating it there.
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** Canonically, while Jellal was initially believed to have been faking his behavior when Erza knew him, it was revealed later that Jellal was BrainwashedAndCrazy by Ultear for the better part of a decade, changing from a heroic and kind person to a ruthless and twisted monster until he was freed. Here, the BrainwashedAndCrazy part is removed entirely, meaning [[AdaptationalVillainy he really was a ruthless monster]] with the former personality being a front he put on then later discarded once he had control over the Tower of Heaven himself.
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** Canonically, while Jellal was initially believed to have been faking his behavior when Erza knew him, [[{{Retcon}} it was revealed later later]] that Jellal was BrainwashedAndCrazy by Ultear for the better part of a decade, changing from a heroic and kind person to a ruthless and twisted monster until he was freed. Here, the BrainwashedAndCrazy part {{retcon}} is removed entirely, meaning [[AdaptationalVillainy he really was a ruthless monster]] with ignored, making the latter his ''natural'' personality, the former personality being a front he put on then later discarded once he had control over the Tower of Heaven himself.
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This isn't a retcon at all in the original story, it was a plain reveal. Plus, the original "story" that Jellal himself believed happened was that he met Zeref's spirit and was possessed.
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** Canonically, while Jellal was initially believed to have been faking his behavior when Erza knew him, [[{{Retcon}} it was revealed later]] that Jellal was BrainwashedAndCrazy by Ultear for the better part of a decade, changing from a heroic and kind person to a ruthless and twisted monster until he was freed. Here, the {{retcon}} is ignored, making the latter his ''natural'' personality, the former personality being a front he put on then later discarded once he had control over the Tower of Heaven himself.
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** Canonically, while Jellal was initially believed to have been faking his behavior when Erza knew him, [[{{Retcon}} it was revealed later]] later that Jellal was BrainwashedAndCrazy by Ultear for the better part of a decade, changing from a heroic and kind person to a ruthless and twisted monster until he was freed. Here, the {{retcon}} BrainwashedAndCrazy part is ignored, making the latter his ''natural'' personality, removed entirely, meaning [[AdaptationalVillainy he really was a ruthless monster]] with the former personality being a front he put on then later discarded once he had control over the Tower of Heaven himself.
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** Ur, full stop. When told by her daughter that she wasn't going to Galuna's village naked, she waved her off saying the blanket is enough. [[EveryoneHasStandards Granted, even]] ''[[EveryoneHasStandards she's]]'' [[EveryoneHasStandards confused by Gray's unconscious stripping habit.]]
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** Ur, full stop. When told by her daughter that she wasn't going to Galuna's village naked, she waved her off saying the blanket is enough. [[EveryoneHasStandards Granted, even]] ''[[EveryoneHasStandards she's]]'' [[EveryoneHasStandards even she's confused by Gray's unconscious stripping habit.]]
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* BashBrothers: Natsu and Gajeel really have trouble getting along, but when Laxus royally pissed them off (see Berserk Button above), the duo quickly proved that they make a surprisingly effective team.
