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** When asking Moka about vampires, Kirito asks [[Literature/{{Twilight}} if they sparkle,]] Moka replies no and remarks to feel [[TakeThat oddly insulted by it.]]
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** When asking Moka about vampires, Kirito asks [[Literature/{{Twilight}} [[Literature/TheTwilightSaga if they sparkle,]] Moka replies no and remarks to feel [[TakeThat oddly insulted by it.]]
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* SenpaiKohai: Argo takes Kirito (who is a complete newbie to [=MMORPGs=] in this story) under her wing during the SAO Beta. [[FalseFriend She initially only does it to exploit his naivety and potential for her own benefit,]] but [[BecomingTheMask she eventually comes to genuinely care about him.]]
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* SenpaiKouhai: Argo takes Kirito (who is a complete newbie to [=MMORPGs=] in this story) under her wing during the SAO Beta. [[FalseFriend She initially only does it to exploit his naivety and potential for her own benefit,]] but [[BecomingTheMask she eventually comes to genuinely care about him.]]
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* SenpaiKouhai: SenpaiKohai: Argo takes Kirito (who is a complete newbie to [=MMORPGs=] in this story) under her wing during the SAO Beta. [[FalseFriend She initially only does it to exploit his naivety and potential for her own benefit,]] but [[BecomingTheMask she eventually comes to genuinely care about him.]]
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''[[GratuitousLatin Lusus Naturae]]'', [[UsefulNotes/LatinLanguage Latin]] for 'Freak of Nature', is a ''Literature/SwordArtOnline'' Fanfic by Creator/{{SaintInfernalNeos}}.
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''[[GratuitousLatin Lusus Naturae]]'', [[UsefulNotes/LatinLanguage Latin]] for 'Freak "Freak of Nature', Nature", is a ''Literature/SwordArtOnline'' Fanfic by Creator/{{SaintInfernalNeos}}.
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* SenpaiKouhai: Argo takes Kirito (who is a complete newbie to [=MMORPGs=] in this story) under her wing during the SAO Beta. [[PoisonousFriend She initially only does it to exploit his naivety and potential for her own benefit,]] but [[BecomingTheMask she eventually comes to genuinely care about him.]]
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* SenpaiKouhai: Argo takes Kirito (who is a complete newbie to [=MMORPGs=] in this story) under her wing during the SAO Beta. [[PoisonousFriend [[FalseFriend She initially only does it to exploit his naivety and potential for her own benefit,]] but [[BecomingTheMask she eventually comes to genuinely care about him.]]
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* BecomingTheMask: Argo only approached Kirito in the SAO Beta because she realized how much potential the hopelessly naive newbie had that [[PoisonousFriend anyone pretending to be his friend could easily exploit--so she did.]] By the time the beta was closing down, sympathy, genuine affection and [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone a healthy dose of guilt]] led Argo to truly become his friend and fall in love with him.
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* BecomingTheMask: Argo only approached Kirito in the SAO Beta because she realized how much potential the hopelessly naive newbie had that [[PoisonousFriend [[FalseFriend anyone pretending to be his friend could easily exploit--so she did.]] By the time the beta was closing down, sympathy, genuine affection and [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone a healthy dose of guilt]] led Argo to truly become his friend and fall in love with him.
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''[[GratuitousLatin Lusus Naturae]]'', [[UsefulNotes/LatinLanguage Latin]] for 'Freak of Nature', is a ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' Fanfic by Creator/{{SaintInfernalNeos}}.
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''[[GratuitousLatin Lusus Naturae]]'', [[UsefulNotes/LatinLanguage Latin]] for 'Freak of Nature', is a ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' ''Literature/SwordArtOnline'' Fanfic by Creator/{{SaintInfernalNeos}}.
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Kazuto also runs into many of our heroines IRL before ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' even launches, which has varying effects on each of them.
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Kazuto also runs into many of our heroines IRL before ''LightNovel/SwordArtOnline'' ''Literature/SwordArtOnline'' even launches, which has varying effects on each of them.
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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* BigDamnHeroes: Subverted. Suguha and Kage's attempt to save [[spoiler: Kirito from Wayrum's capture]] fails, as stated in SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Subverted. Suguha and Kage's attempt to save [[spoiler: Kirito from Wayrum's capture]] fails, as stated in SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome.fails.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: In Chapter 4 [[note]]Chapter 4: What makes you Human?'[[/note]], [[spoiler: Suguha rode Kage the Crow through the air to mount a rescue of a captive Kirito...and failed since, a) Suguha was weak and off-balance as a result of being exposed to the cold temperatures and strong winds for the first time, b) Kage was still a bird not that bright so ended up speeding straight into a cramped location, and c) Waryum was still armed and had his weapon primed. The result: Waryum shoots down Kage (his weapon was SetToStun) and Suguha while barely getting hurt himself.]] [[Creator/SaintInfernalNeos SIN]] even refers to it as an example of this trope in the Author's Notes.
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** In the epilogue, [[spoiler:'''''[[UpToEleven the entire human race.]]''''']]
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** In the epilogue, [[spoiler:'''''[[UpToEleven the [[spoiler:'''''the entire human race.]]''''']]''''']]
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* BigDamnHeroes: Subverted. Suguha and Kage's attempt to save [[spoiler: Kirito from Wayrum's capture]] fails, as stated in RealityEnsues.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Subverted. Suguha and Kage's attempt to save [[spoiler: Kirito from Wayrum's capture]] fails, as stated in RealityEnsues.SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome.
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* RealityEnsues: In Chapter 4 [[note]]Chapter 4: What makes you Human?'[[/note]], [[spoiler: Suguha rode Kage the Crow through the air to mount a rescue of a captive Kirito...and failed since, a) Suguha was weak and off-balance as a result of being exposed to the cold temperatures and strong winds for the first time, b) Kage was still a bird not that bright so ended up speeding straight into a cramped location, and c) Waryum was still armed and had his weapon primed. The result: Waryum shoots down Kage (his weapon was SetToStun) and Suguha while barely getting hurt himself.]] [[Creator/SaintInfernalNeos SIN]] even refers to it as an example of this trope in the Author's Notes.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: In Chapter 4 [[note]]Chapter 4: What makes you Human?'[[/note]], [[spoiler: Suguha rode Kage the Crow through the air to mount a rescue of a captive Kirito...and failed since, a) Suguha was weak and off-balance as a result of being exposed to the cold temperatures and strong winds for the first time, b) Kage was still a bird not that bright so ended up speeding straight into a cramped location, and c) Waryum was still armed and had his weapon primed. The result: Waryum shoots down Kage (his weapon was SetToStun) and Suguha while barely getting hurt himself.]] [[Creator/SaintInfernalNeos SIN]] even refers to it as an example of this trope in the Author's Notes.
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* FriendlyEnemy: Due to [=SAO=] not being a death game in this story, Laughing Coffin is just a normal bunch of player-killers instead of actual murderers like in canon. Consequently, they give even less of a hoot about the consequences of player-killing and [=PoH=] himself takes to the field. Consequently, [[DefeatMeansFriendship he regularly has scraps with Kirito and sort-of befriended him after being bested multiple times,]] respecting his prowess and believing that the two are NotSoDifferent. By the end of the story, [[spoiler:he and his guild are seemingly at worst TokenEvilTeammates, if not true comrades of the protagonists.]]
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* FriendlyEnemy: Due to [=SAO=] not being a death game in this story, Laughing Coffin is just a normal bunch of player-killers instead of actual murderers like in canon. Consequently, they give even less of a hoot about the consequences of player-killing and [=PoH=] himself takes to the field. Consequently, [[DefeatMeansFriendship he regularly has scraps with Kirito and sort-of befriended him after being bested multiple times,]] respecting his prowess and believing that the two are NotSoDifferent.aren't so different. By the end of the story, [[spoiler:he and his guild are seemingly at worst TokenEvilTeammates, if not true comrades of the protagonists.]]
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* NotSoDifferent: [=PoH=] invokes this on Kirito, calling both of them monsters who hide behind smiling masks. Although it doesn't do much in the long run, it ''does'' bother Kirito considerably.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: [=PoH=] invokes does this on to Kirito, calling both of them monsters who hide behind smiling masks. Although it doesn't do much in the long run, it ''does'' bother Kirito considerably.
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* {{Omake}}: Starting with Chapter 5 [[note]]Chapter 5: Hidden Nature[[/note]], each chapter is followed by a series of omakes titled 'Lusus + Vampire' which is a {{Crossover}} with ''Manga/RosarioToVampire''
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* {{Omake}}: Starting with Chapter 5 [[note]]Chapter 5: Hidden Nature[[/note]], each chapter is followed by a series of omakes titled 'Lusus + Vampire' which is a {{Crossover}} with ''Manga/RosarioToVampire''''Manga/RosarioPlusVampire''
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* MemoryGambit: [[spoiler:Turns out living for centuries being experimented on and tortured isn't good for anyone's mental stability, even a nigh invulnerable alien. When he escaped from the Tryum facility, he decided to voluntarily forget the majority of his memories and live as a (mostly) normal human in a desperate attempt to see if he could have a life worth living.]] It worked.
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* NightmareFetishist: As it turns out, ''Yuuki'' has [[NaughtyTentacles a fascination with tentacles.]] Kirito [[EldritchAbomination can manifest countless tentacles.]] She doesn't even bother hiding how much she enjoys being manhandled by them whenever circumstances make it happen, to her beleaguered older sister's chagrin. [[spoiler:A NoodleIncident discussed in the epilogue eventually reveals Yuuki got to live her fantasies the one time Kirito got drunk off his ass.
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* NightmareFetishist: As it turns out, ''Yuuki'' has [[NaughtyTentacles a fascination with tentacles.]] Kirito [[EldritchAbomination can manifest countless tentacles.]] She doesn't even bother hiding how much she enjoys being manhandled by them whenever circumstances make it happen, to her beleaguered older sister's chagrin. [[spoiler:A A NoodleIncident discussed in the epilogue eventually reveals Yuuki got to live her fantasies the one time Kirito got drunk off his ass.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: Essentially how Waryum ended up on Earth as discussed in NoodleIncident
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