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** Demetri loves Allirea. However, Allirea is a half-vampire. Because she's not a full vampire, she's not subject to the vampire mate bond (and therefore doesn't ''automatically'' love him back), and she's not human, so he can't turn her into a full vampire (which would make her love him). And Allirea '''hates''' Demetri.
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: This is Allirea's power.
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-->'''Addy:''' [[spoiler:''Until and unless you actually try to leave, I'm not going to interfere. I'm a student of witchcraft. If you can learn to [[{{FightingFromTheInside}} [[FightingFromTheInside beat]] [[{{MoreThanMindControl}} [[MoreThanMindControl Chelsea,]] well, wouldn't that be interesting?'']]
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*StalkerWithACrush: Chelsea was a particularly monstrous one in the past. [[spoiler:Obsessed with one particular boy, she severed his ties with his family with her power, ate the entire family and bound him to her before turning him.]]
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* NoYay: What the author said to the perceived Addy/Elspeth LesYay.
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* AscendedExtra: Many characters, including Gianna, Rachel, and Santiago.
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* NoteToSelf: One of the defining traits of this version of Bella is that she records, organizes and analyzes her own thoughts. [[spoiler: After she becomes a vampire and has extreme difficulty remembering her mortal life, these records are very helpful in allowing her to recover much of it.]]
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* ForScience: Addy claims to be motivated by this, but she's equally likely to be a HiddenAgendaVillain.
-->'''Addy:''' [[spoiler:''Until and unless you actually try to leave, I'm not going to interfere. I'm a student of witchcraft. If you can learn to [[{{FightingFromTheInside}} beat]] [[{{MoreThanMindControl}} Chelsea,]] well, wouldn't that be interesting?'']]
-->'''Addy:''' [[spoiler:''Until and unless you actually try to leave, I'm not going to interfere. I'm a student of witchcraft. If you can learn to [[{{FightingFromTheInside}} beat]] [[{{MoreThanMindControl}} Chelsea,]] well, wouldn't that be interesting?'']]
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* LesYay: The reader base read into this so much between (old vampire) Addy and (five-year-old) Elspeth that she edited the end of chapter 14 to avoid ending on a certain line.
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It\'s not nice to Squick the author.
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-->''I'm very curious about what just happened, Elspeth; why don't we go settle somewhere comfortable, in your room, and try again?''
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-->''I'm very curious about what just happened, Elspeth; why don't we go settle somewhere comfortable, in your room, and try again?''
-->''I'm very curious about what just happened, Elspeth; why don't we go settle somewhere comfortable, in your room, and try again?''
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: All the chapters in book two are words for a person (Liar, Runner, etc.).
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: All the chapters in book two are words for a person person, ending in an "er" sound. (Liar, Runner, etc.).).
* ImmortalLifeIsCheap: In Radiance, [[spoiler: the Voluri]] keep several vampires disassembled for easy storage. [[spoiler: Including Edward and Alice.]]
* ImmortalityHurts: see above.
* ImmortalLifeIsCheap: In Radiance, [[spoiler: the Voluri]] keep several vampires disassembled for easy storage. [[spoiler: Including Edward and Alice.]]
* ImmortalityHurts: see above.
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* SoYouWantToLiveForever: Bella. [[spoiler: Her ultimate goal is this for ''everyone''.]]
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* AffablyEvil: Most of the Volturi's lower-ranking members, but most notably Addy.
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* [[spoiler:NiceJobBreakingItHero: Most of the decisions Bella and Elspeth make have directly contributed to the continued worsening of the situation.]]
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* ParanoiaFuel: Chelsea. You ''[[MindRape don't notice]]''.
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* StarterVillain: James and Victoria. [[spoiler: They both wind up dying fairly unceremoniously.]]
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* BerserkButton: You really shouldn't interrupt Bella when she's speaking.
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* CessationOfExistence: What Edward believes will happen to all vampires if they are killed in contrast to humans, who get an afterlife. Bella, on the other hand, thinks that no afterlife exists, even for humans.
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* TheGenericGuy: David, the poor bastard. [[spoiler:Later averted slightly in ''Radiance'' when he comes off more as a NiceGuy with OnlySaneMan tendencies.]]
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* BadLiar: Elspeth, sort of. She's so good at telling the truth, due to her power, that people notice when she stops.
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* NeverFoundTheBody
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* BlatantLies: These become a plot point in ''Radiance'', [[http://luminous.elcenia.com/radiance/ch8.shtml chapter 8]].
