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* KillEmAll: Of the 25 competitors at the start of the fic, only [[spoiler:five]] eventually make it out alive. And then there's the fact that [[spoiler: three of the victims of the killer aren't even competitors]]!
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%% * GreenLanternRing: The killer's magic is this for the victims.
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%% * InfantImmortality: Averted, and subverted very often. [[spoiler:Especially when Bowser attempted to stop the order with a draw.]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3244051/1/La_Belle La Belle]] is a ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros'' murder mystery. It was a collaboration written by Tropers/HerrWozzeck, Tropers/RoyalFanatic, BabyGurl278, and KILL THE EMPIRE. It is currently completed, although the collaboration element was ditched after a very long stretch of time due to the myriad scheduling conflicts that eventually arose.
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Marth and Isolde; the two get rather comfortable around each other, to the point where it seems they fall in love. Neither one really acts on their feelings. [[spoiler:It doesn't help that Isolde eventually becomes a victim herself.]]
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Marth and Isolde; the two get rather comfortable around each other, to the point where it seems they fall in love. Neither one really acts on their feelings. [[spoiler:It doesn't help that Isolde eventually becomes a victim herself.]]]]
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* FreudianExcuse: [[spoiler:Subverted. Sergio was a victim of his village, who did nothing good to him. The survivors don't buy it.]]
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* FreudianExcuse: [[spoiler:Subverted. FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: [[spoiler: Sergio was a victim of his village, who did nothing good to him. The survivors don't buy it.]]
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* {{Brainwashed}}: [[spoiler: Roy.]]
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%% * {{Brainwashed}}: [[spoiler: Roy.]]
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* DevelopmentHell: The fact that it was a collaboration led to this; BabyGurl278 and RoyalFanatic both ran into major scheduling conflicts, and then KILL THE EMPIRE didn't update his chapters after a while. It would have become a DeadFic if not for the fact that Tropers/HerrWozzeck finally took matters into his own hands and finished it.
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* ThrowItIn: Jigglypuff was forgotten when the brackets for who would be killed off were first written. This gets a HandWave in the fic with the instance of GutFeeling above as the story had already been started by the time someone pointed it out.
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* AcquittedTooLate: [[spoiler:Ganondorf.]]
* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler:Including Bowser.]]
* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: All of the victims when the murderer finally gets his due.
* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Master Hand.]] That's what he gets for locking up people without even giving them a trial.
* BreakThemByTalking: Bowser gets ''two'' of these speeches. [[spoiler:The second one comes right before he dies.]]
* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler:Including Bowser.]]
* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: All of the victims when the murderer finally gets his due.
* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Master Hand.]] That's what he gets for locking up people without even giving them a trial.
* BreakThemByTalking: Bowser gets ''two'' of these speeches. [[spoiler:The second one comes right before he dies.]]
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%% * AcquittedTooLate: [[spoiler:Ganondorf.]]
%% * AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler:Including Bowser.]]
%% * AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: All of the victims when the murderer finally gets his due.
%% * AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Master Hand.]] That's what he gets for locking up people without even giving them a trial.
%% * BreakThemByTalking: Bowser gets ''two'' of these speeches. [[spoiler:The second one comes right before he dies.]]
%% * AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler:Including Bowser.]]
%% * AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: All of the victims when the murderer finally gets his due.
%% * AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Master Hand.]] That's what he gets for locking up people without even giving them a trial.
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* [[spoiler:DeadPersonImpersonation: Sergio is living both as himself and as Albrecht.]]
* [[spoiler:DeathIsDramatic: Bowser. Oh dear Lord, Bowser.]]
* [[spoiler:DeathIsDramatic: Bowser. Oh dear Lord, Bowser.]]
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* [[spoiler:DeadPersonImpersonation: DeadPersonImpersonation: [[spoiler: Sergio is living both as himself and as Albrecht.]]
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* [[spoiler:DrivenToSuicide: Roy, upon finding out that he was an unwilling pawn in someone else's murder scheme.]]
* EvilPlan and GambitRoulette: [[spoiler: The murderer killed the head of the tournament so he could supervise all of the murders. He then cast a ton of magic to live his double life, hide bombs, open gateways to alternate dimensions, and make sure the Smashers couldn't escape. And on top of that, he hypnotized Roy into doing his bidding.]] He even finds ways around the characters' various attempts to break the order. [[spoiler:The only reason he's stopped is because other characters come onto the scene, which did not go according to plan. The fact that Fox, Isolde, and Peach manage to come up with a way to OutGambit him helps, too.]]
* EvilPlan and GambitRoulette: [[spoiler: The murderer killed the head of the tournament so he could supervise all of the murders. He then cast a ton of magic to live his double life, hide bombs, open gateways to alternate dimensions, and make sure the Smashers couldn't escape. And on top of that, he hypnotized Roy into doing his bidding.]] He even finds ways around the characters' various attempts to break the order. [[spoiler:The only reason he's stopped is because other characters come onto the scene, which did not go according to plan. The fact that Fox, Isolde, and Peach manage to come up with a way to OutGambit him helps, too.]]
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* [[spoiler:DrivenToSuicide: Roy, DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Roy, upon finding out that he was an unwilling pawn in someone else's murder scheme.]]
*EvilPlan and GambitRoulette: EvilPlan: [[spoiler: The murderer killed the head of the tournament so he could supervise all of the murders. He then cast a ton of magic to live his double life, hide bombs, open gateways to alternate dimensions, and make sure the Smashers couldn't escape. And on top of that, he hypnotized Roy into doing his bidding.]] He even finds ways around the characters' various attempts to break the order. [[spoiler:The only reason he's stopped is because other characters come onto the scene, which did not go according to plan. The fact that Fox, Isolde, and Peach manage to come up with a way to OutGambit him helps, too.]]
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*** On a side note, WordOfGod has stated that Royal Fanatic almost put too much foreshadowing in that scene. [[spoiler:There was a line that Albrecht said that Herr Wozzeck asked her to remove due to it making it far too obvious at that point in the fiction.]]
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* [[spoiler:FreudianExcuse: Sergio was a victim of his village, who did nothing good to him. The survivors don't buy it.]]
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* GasChamber: Luigi's death.
* GreenLanternRing: The killer's magic is this for the victims.
* GutFeeling: This is used to explain why Jigglypuff doesn't take part in the tournament.
* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice: Isolde, as part of a plan from Fox to save whatever smashers are left.]]
* GreenLanternRing: The killer's magic is this for the victims.
* GutFeeling: This is used to explain why Jigglypuff doesn't take part in the tournament.
* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice: Isolde, as part of a plan from Fox to save whatever smashers are left.]]
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%% * GutFeeling: This is used to explain why Jigglypuff doesn't take part in the tournament.
*[[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice: Isolde, HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Isolde, as part of a plan from Fox to save whatever smashers are left.]]
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* InfantImmortality: Averted, and subverted very often. [[spoiler:Especially when Bowser attempted to stop the order with a draw.]]
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* ItsPersonal: It gets ''very'' personal by the time the fic reaches its final chapter.
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%% * ItsPersonal: It gets ''very'' personal by the time the fic reaches its final chapter.
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* [[spoiler:TheKillerBecomesTheKilled: Sergio's ultimate fate.]]
* LetMeAtHim: Happens pretty often. A given when the murderer loves toying with them.
* LudicrousGibs: [[spoiler:Samus']] death.
* LetMeAtHim: Happens pretty often. A given when the murderer loves toying with them.
* LudicrousGibs: [[spoiler:Samus']] death.
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%% * LetMeAtHim: Happens pretty often. A given when the murderer loves toying with them.
%% * LudicrousGibs: [[spoiler:Samus']] death.
%% * LetMeAtHim: Happens pretty often. A given when the murderer loves toying with them.
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* MeaningfulName: WordOfGod has stated that the title of the fic refers to the match point of a fencing match.
* [[spoiler:TheMeddlingKidsAreUseless: The impromptu investigation that Bowser puts together starts off solid enough, but it crumbles under the combined weight of stress, the lack of any real evidence that can convict people after Ganondorf's death, finger-pointing, and Bowser being paralyzed by Roy. However, Soren and some of the Brawl newcomers come to the mansion and eventually help Fox with new insights into the murderer's magic.]]
* [[spoiler:TheMeddlingKidsAreUseless: The impromptu investigation that Bowser puts together starts off solid enough, but it crumbles under the combined weight of stress, the lack of any real evidence that can convict people after Ganondorf's death, finger-pointing, and Bowser being paralyzed by Roy. However, Soren and some of the Brawl newcomers come to the mansion and eventually help Fox with new insights into the murderer's magic.]]
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%% * MeaningfulName: WordOfGod has stated that the title of the fic refers to the match point of a fencing match.
*[[spoiler:TheMeddlingKidsAreUseless: The TheMeddlingKidsAreUseless: [[spoiler:The impromptu investigation that Bowser puts together starts off solid enough, but it crumbles under the combined weight of stress, the lack of any real evidence that can convict people after Ganondorf's death, finger-pointing, and Bowser being paralyzed by Roy. However, Soren and some of the Brawl newcomers come to the mansion and eventually help Fox with new insights into the murderer's magic.]]
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* MurderByCremation: [[spoiler:Donkey Kong.]]
* NeverOneMurder: It takes the Smashers a few murders to realize they're getting killed off systematically.
* NeverOneMurder: It takes the Smashers a few murders to realize they're getting killed off systematically.
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%% * MurderByCremation: [[spoiler:Donkey Kong.]]
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* RedHerring: A few are played to get [[spoiler:Ganondorf]] killed. For a murder mystery, however, these are surprisingly few and far between.
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* SerialKiller: The murderer kills the next person who loses the match.
* TheSummation: How the murderer was able to kill everyone.
* [[spoiler:SummoningRitual: The murders were made for a ritual that would help Sergio get revenge on the world.]]
* SuspectExistenceFailure: Happens to [[spoiler:Master Hand]] and then very briefly to [[spoiler:Isolde]].
* TheSummation: How the murderer was able to kill everyone.
* [[spoiler:SummoningRitual: The murders were made for a ritual that would help Sergio get revenge on the world.]]
* SuspectExistenceFailure: Happens to [[spoiler:Master Hand]] and then very briefly to [[spoiler:Isolde]].
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%% * TheSummation: How the murderer was able to kill everyone.
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%% * SuspectExistenceFailure: Happens to [[spoiler:Master Hand]] and then very briefly to [[spoiler:Isolde]].
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%% * SuspectExistenceFailure: Happens to [[spoiler:Master Hand]] and then very briefly to [[spoiler:Isolde]].
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* TenLittleMurderVictims: Obviously.
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: [[spoiler:The murderer himself.]]
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Marth and Isolde; the two get rather comfortable around each other, to the point where it seems they fall in love. Neither one really acts on their feelings. [[spoiler:It doesn't help that Isolde eventually becomes a victim herself.]]
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Marth and Isolde; the two get rather comfortable around each other, to the point where it seems they fall in love. Neither one really acts on their feelings. [[spoiler:It doesn't help that Isolde eventually becomes a victim herself.]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3244051/1/La_Belle La Belle]] is a SuperSmashBrothers murder mystery. It was a collaboration written by Tropers/HerrWozzeck, Tropers/RoyalFanatic, BabyGurl278, and KILL THE EMPIRE. It is currently completed, although the collaboration element was ditched after a very long stretch of time due to the myriad scheduling conflicts that eventually arose.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3244051/1/La_Belle La Belle]] is a SuperSmashBrothers ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBros'' murder mystery. It was a collaboration written by Tropers/HerrWozzeck, Tropers/RoyalFanatic, BabyGurl278, and KILL THE EMPIRE. It is currently completed, although the collaboration element was ditched after a very long stretch of time due to the myriad scheduling conflicts that eventually arose.
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* BreakingSpeech: Bowser gets ''two''. [[spoiler:The second one comes right before he dies.]]
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* BreakingSpeech: BreakThemByTalking: Bowser gets ''two''.''two'' of these speeches. [[spoiler:The second one comes right before he dies.]]
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* ChivalrousPervert: Falco hits on Isolde pretty frequently [[spoiler:before he's killed off.]]
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* ChivalrousPervert: Falco hits on Isolde pretty frequently [[spoiler:before he's killed off.]]off]].
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** [[spoiler:Roy goes into a lot of pain when he first meets Sergio, then feels easy enough.]] Is it any wonder, then, that [[spoiler:he winds up being a tool for the murderer to kill people?]]
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** [[spoiler:Roy goes into a lot of pain when he first meets Sergio, then feels easy enough.]] Is it any wonder, then, that [[spoiler:he winds up being a tool for the murderer to kill people?]]people]]?
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** Albrecht states that [[spoiler:Sergio knows dark magic and is studying what is keeping the smashers inside. Of course, we all know how [[DeadPersonImpersonation that]] came to be after TheSummation...]]
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** Albrecht states that [[spoiler:Sergio knows dark magic and is studying what is keeping the smashers inside. Of course, we all know how [[DeadPersonImpersonation that]] came to be after TheSummation...]]TheSummation..]].
* FromBadToWorse: Basically every event leading up to [[spoiler:Bowser's]] death. The murders begin getting broadcasted outside of the mansion, the black magic at work is revealed, [[spoiler:Roy paralyzes Bowser when he tries to kill Sergio, the investigation falls apart, and what makes it all worse is that by the time Samus dies the only characters left are those that have been developed through the entire fic.]]
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* FromBadToWorse: Basically every event leading up to [[spoiler:Bowser's]] death. The murders begin getting broadcasted outside of the mansion, the black magic at work is revealed, [[spoiler:Roy paralyzes Bowser when he tries to kill Sergio, the investigation falls apart, and what makes it all worse is that by the time Samus dies the only characters left are those that have been developed through the entire fic.]]
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* NoKillLikeOverkill: [[spoiler:The murderer himself.]]
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: [[spoiler:The murderer himself.]]
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* FiveManBand: With the investigation:
** TheHero: Bowser
** TheLancer: Fox, Popo
** TheBigGuy: Mario
** TheSmartGuy: Zelda, Marth
** TheChick: Isolde
** TheSixthRanger: LOTS of characters, including ''everybody'' in the mansion after a certain point.
** TheHero: Bowser
** TheLancer: Fox, Popo
** TheBigGuy: Mario
** TheSmartGuy: Zelda, Marth
** TheChick: Isolde
** TheSixthRanger: LOTS of characters, including ''everybody'' in the mansion after a certain point.
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The smashers are invited to a tournament; however, before long people begn turning up dead all around the smashers. And it's left to the smashers to figure out what is going on before everybody winds up dead. Do they succeed? Only time tells.
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The smashers are invited to a tournament; however, before long people begn begin turning up dead all around the smashers. And smashers, and it's left to the smashers to figure out what is going on before everybody winds up dead. Do they succeed? Only time tells.
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* InfantImmortality: ''Heavily'' averted, and subverted very often. [[spoiler:Especially when Bowser attempted to stop the order with a draw.]]
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* InfantImmortality: ''Heavily'' averted, Averted, and subverted very often. [[spoiler:Especially when Bowser attempted to stop the order with a draw.]]
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* ItGotWorse: Basically every event leading up to [[spoiler:Bowser's]] death. The murders begin getting broadcasted outside of the mansion, the black magic at work is revealed, [[spoiler:Roy paralyzes Bowser when he tries to kill Sergio, the investigation falls apart, and what makes it all worse is that by the time Samus dies the only characters left are those that have been developed through the entire fic.]]
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* ItGotWorse: FromBadToWorse: Basically every event leading up to [[spoiler:Bowser's]] death. The murders begin getting broadcasted outside of the mansion, the black magic at work is revealed, [[spoiler:Roy paralyzes Bowser when he tries to kill Sergio, the investigation falls apart, and what makes it all worse is that by the time Samus dies the only characters left are those that have been developed through the entire fic.]]
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* DevelopmentHell: The fact that it was a collaboration led to this; BabyGurl278 and RoyalFanatic both ran into major scheduling conflicts, and then KILL THE EMPIRE didn't update his chapters after a while. It would have become a DeadFic if not for the fact that HerrWozzeck finally took matters into his own hands and finished it.
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* DevelopmentHell: The fact that it was a collaboration led to this; BabyGurl278 and RoyalFanatic both ran into major scheduling conflicts, and then KILL THE EMPIRE didn't update his chapters after a while. It would have become a DeadFic if not for the fact that HerrWozzeck Tropers/HerrWozzeck finally took matters into his own hands and finished it.
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plot spanning villain plan that lacks morton\'s fork.
* BreakingSpeech: Bowser gets ''two''. [[spoiler:The second one comes right before he dies.]]
* EvilPlan and GambitRoulette: [[spoiler: The murderer killed the head of the tournament so he could supervise all of the murders. He then cast a ton of magic to live his double life, hide bombs, open gateways to alternate dimensions, and make sure the Smashers couldn't escape. And on top of that, he hypnotized Roy into doing his bidding.]] He even finds ways around the characters' various attempts to break the order. [[spoiler:The only reason he's stopped is because other characters come onto the scene, which did not go according to plan. The fact that Fox, Isolde, and Peach manage to come up with a way to OutGambit him helps, too.]]
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** [[spoiler:The XanatosGambit has hints all before Fox and Peach reappear. "Peach" is oddly quiet just before her match, she doesn't seem to know her own moveset, Fox tells Marth he believes his claim that Isolde isn't the murderer, he goes missing right after his match, and the static seems to come in conveniently in the middle of that match.]]
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** [[spoiler:The XanatosGambit EvilPlan has hints all before Fox and Peach reappear. "Peach" is oddly quiet just before her match, she doesn't seem to know her own moveset, Fox tells Marth he believes his claim that Isolde isn't the murderer, he goes missing right after his match, and the static seems to come in conveniently in the middle of that match.]]
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* HannibalLecture: Bowser gets ''two''. [[spoiler:The second one comes right before he dies.]]
* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice: Isolde, as part of a Xanatos Gambit from Fox to save whatever smashers are left.]]
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* XanatosGambit: [[spoiler: The murderer killed the head of the tournament so he could supervise all of the murders. He then cast a ton of magic to live his double life, hide bombs, open gateways to alternate dimensions, and make sure the Smashers couldn't escape. And on top of that, he hypnotized Roy into doing his bidding.]] He even finds ways around the characters' various attempts to break the order. [[spoiler:The only reason he's stopped is because other characters come onto the scene, which did not go according to plan. The fact that Fox, Isolde, and Peach manage to come up with a way to make him OutGambitted helps, too.]]
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Played to the extreme with Bowser; not only does he ''[[DracoInLeatherPants not]]'' show most of his villainous tendencies when the murders begin to become apparent, but he also ends up being the character who does the most to try to stop the murderer, even if he doesn't always succeed. [[spoiler:His death is also treated more like a tear-jerker than any other death in the fic.]]
** Also done for Dr. Mario and Young Link, as both are treated as separate characters in-fic.
** Also done for Dr. Mario and Young Link, as both are treated as separate characters in-fic.
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* CompleteMonster: The murderer. [[spoiler:He kills a child when Bowser attempts to save both himself and Young Link with a draw, kills a journalist who had nothing to do with events, taunts Bowser before finally killing him, and frames someone else. It's no wonder that the survivors don't buy into his FreudianExcuse.]]
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: The crucified corpses of all the victims up to the point when Roy is trying to save [[spoiler:Samus]].
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* MagnificentBastard: The murderer. He's directly involved in every murder he commits. He's also present at the scene of the crime during ''''every single one'''' of the murders (even the ones where he doesn't have to be in attendance for the method to work). He also successfully doctors all of the surveillance footage as needed to cover his identity. [[spoiler:And to misdirect people's suspicions t one point.]] He also has the black magic in effect throughout the entire mansion to send people to their deaths [[spoiler:while also using it to live a double life and to hypnotise Roy into doing his bidding. He's even responsible for the success of the KangarooCourt example above.]]
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*[[spoiler:HardyBoysInvestigation: The impromptu investigation that Bowser puts together starts off solid enough, but it crumbles under the combined weight of stress, the lack of any real evidence that can convict people after Ganondorf's death, finger-pointing, and Bowser being paralyzed by Roy. However, Soren and some of the Brawl newcomers come to the mansion and eventually help Fox with new insights into the murderer's magic.]]
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