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Having read the story, I believe that Carci falls under the umbrella of Affably Evil, in that her politeness is sincere, though her intentions are still evil.
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* AffablyEvil: Carci is laid-back, relaxed and polite to the Fun Gang when she first meets them, and is perfectly willing to let them do their things and hold conversations with each other while she's doing stuff on her phone, [[spoiler:and even scolds them for keeping Rudy in the dark about the fact that he is inside his own body]]. She is still an AnthropomorphicPersonification of Rudy's cancer that's slowly killing him, fully onboard with "Doc"'s plans to "free themselves from Rudy's body", even if it means his death.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Though Carci is a representation of Rudy's cancer that slowly kills him, she is still apalled by the fact that [[spoiler:the Fun Gang kept Rudy himself in the dark about the fact that he's inside his own body.]]
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* AffablyEvil: Carci flip-flops between being this and being FauxAffablyEvil. She looks like she couldn't care less about destroying Rudy when she is initially encountered along with Leuka. However, once Leuka is defeated, she quickly takes up the responsibility of stopping the heroes from escaping and banishes them ([[spoiler:along with Rudy on accident]]) to the ass. However, when she finds out that [[spoiler:the heroes never told Rudy that they're all inside of his body, including Rudy himself somehow, she allows them to explain themselves to Rudy without interrupting them]].
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Carci flip-flops between this and being AffablyEvil. See AffablyEvil above.
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Flip-flops between this and being AffablyEvil. See AffablyEvil above.
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* AffablyEvil: Carci flip-flops between being this and being FauxAffablyEvil. She looks like she couldn't care less about destroying Rudy when she is initially encountered along with Leuka. However, once Leuka is defeated, she quickly takes up the responsibility of stopping the heroes from escaping and banishes them ([[spoiler:along with Rudy on accident]]) to the ass. However, when she finds out that [[spoiler:the heroes never told Rudy that they're all inside of his body, including Rudy himself somehow, she allows them to explain themselves to Rudy without interrupting them]].
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Flip-flops between this and being AffablyEvil. See AffablyEvil above.
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* HowIsThatEvenPossible: After being banished into his own ass, Rudy questions how that's even possible.
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* HowIsThatEvenPossible: After being banished into his [[spoiler:his own ass, Rudy Rudy]] questions how that's even possible.
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* InternalReveal: [[spoiler:Rudy discovers that he's somehow inside of his own body when Carci reveals that she sent them to [[ItMakesSenseInContext his ass]], something the heroes deliberately kept themselves from telling him. Carci calls out the heroes from keeping him in the dark and even leaves them alone so that they could explain to Rudy what's going on]].
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* AccidentiallyAccurate: "THAT'S A BIGASS HOLE!" Susie, you have no idea how accurate you were when you said that...
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* AccidentiallyAccurate: "THAT'S A BIGASS HOLE!" Susie, you have no idea how accurate you were when you said that...
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* NotSoAboveItAll: Carci seems to be the more serious of the pair, having a creepy looking move that banishes the heroes ([[spoiler:and Rudy]]) to Rudy's... [[spoiler:ass? She later follows them in there and takes a nap while the heroes come clean to Rudy that they're inside his body]].
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* SuddenlySpeaking: Kris, unlike in the game, gets lines of dialogue in this series, with their own textbox portraits too. They still mostly remain silent, though.
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* SuddenlySpeaking: Kris, unlike in the game, gets lines of dialogue in this series, with their own textbox portraits too. They still mostly remain silent, though.{{Inverted}} later on as of Episode 4, where Kris goes back to being a HeroicMime.
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* AssShove: Carci [[spoiler:banishes the heroes there, along with Rudy on accident]].
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* AssShove: Carci [[spoiler:banishes the heroes there, into Rudy's ass, along with Rudy on himself by accident]].
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''Kris Performs Surgery'' is a fanmade ''Deltarune'' story by {{Website/Reddit}} user Petah-Petah, posted to the site's ''Deltarune'' subreddit starting in December 2021.
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''Kris Performs Surgery'' is a fanmade ''Deltarune'' story by {{Website/Reddit}} user Petah-Petah, [=PetahPetah=], which began being posted to the site's ''Deltarune'' subreddit [[{{Website/Reddit}} subreddit]] starting in December 2021.
2021 before later receiving an ''Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn'' page.
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The series is posted "episode"-by-"episode" onto r/Deltarune by Petah-Petah, whose profile can be found [[https://www.reddit.com/user/Petah-Petah/submitted/ here]].
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The series is posted "episode"-by-"episode" onto r/Deltarune by Petah-Petah, whose profile can be found available on both [[https://www.reddit.com/user/Petah-Petah/submitted/ here]].
PetahPetah's Reddit account]] and on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37347130/chapters/93191089 Archive of Our Own]].
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* AssShove: Carci [[spoiler:banishes the heroes there, along with Rudy on accident]].
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* LargeHam: Leuka speaks in ''very'' [[NoIndoorVoice loud]] and dramatic over-the-top manner.
* RedOniBlueOni: Leuka is very [[LargeHam hammy]], boisterous and HotBlooded Red Oni, while Carci is quiet and relaxed Blue Oni.
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* KillerBearHug: [[spoiler:This is how the party defeats Leuka. The excessive hugging resulted in him losing all of the blood he took in]].
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* WhamShot: The shot revealing that [[spoiler:Rudy is somehow inside of his own body after it was turned into a Dark World. How this is possible isn't elaborated on, nor does the party question about it]].
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* SuddenlySpeaking: Kris, unlike in the game, gets lines of dialogue in this series with their own text box portraits too. Though, they They still mostly remain silent for the majority of the time.silent, though.
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* ShoutOut: [[spoiler:Rudy's Dark World outfit]] is based directly on [[Franchise/StreetFighter Ryu]], complete with Hadouken!
** Later on, the Fun Gang also beats up a car, complete with high score, just like ''Street Fighter''.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** [[spoiler:Rudy's Dark World outfit]] is based directly on [[Franchise/StreetFighter Ryu]], complete with Hadouken!
**Later on, the The Fun Gang also beats up a car, complete with high score, just like ''Street Fighter''.
** [[spoiler:Rudy's Dark World outfit]] is based directly on [[Franchise/StreetFighter Ryu]], complete with Hadouken!
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* MeaningfulName: Leuka and Carci get their names from ''Leukemia''[[labelnote:*]]A cancer of blood-forming tissues.[[/labelnote]] and ''Carcinoma''[[labelnote:*]]A type of cancer that starts in cells.[[/labelnote]].
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* MeaningfulName: Leuka and Carci get their names from ''Leukemia''[[labelnote:*]]A ''Leukemia''[[note]]A cancer of blood-forming tissues.[[/labelnote]] [[/note]] and ''Carcinoma''[[labelnote:*]]A ''Carcinoma''[[note]]A type of cancer that starts in cells.[[/labelnote]].[[/note]].
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''Kris Performs Surgery'' is a fanmade ''Deltarune'' story by {{Website/Reddit}} user Petah-Petah, posted to the site's ''Deltarune'' subreddit started in December 2021.
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Sometime after the events of Chapter 2, Rudy Holiday is diagnosed with a tumor. Late in the night, Kris and Susie sneak into his room as he sleeps, where Kris pulls out their soul and stabs him in the chest, creating a Dark World in his body to find and eliminate the tumor. With Ralsei joining the party soon after they arrive, the Fun Gang traverses the monster's body on their quest to save their friend's dad.
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Sometime after the events of Chapter 2, Rudy Holiday is diagnosed with a brain tumor. Late in the night, Kris and Susie sneak into his room as he sleeps, where Kris pulls out their soul and stabs him in the chest, creating a Dark World in his body to find and eliminate the tumor. With Ralsei joining the party soon after they arrive, the Fun Gang traverses the monster's body on their quest to save their friend's dad.
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* BigBad: "Doc", the brain tumor that Leuka and Carci work under.
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* BloodIsTheNewBlack: After falling off the raft and into the blood river, all of the Fun Gang are covered head-to-toe in the stuff without much comment on it, due to the fact they can't exactly do much about it at the moment. After [[spoiler:meeting up with Rudy]], they're able to clean it off, much to Ralsei's relief.
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* BloodIsTheNewBlack: After falling off the raft and into the blood river, all of the Fun Gang are covered head-to-toe in the stuff without much comment on it, comment, due to the fact they can't exactly do much about it at the moment. After [[spoiler:meeting up with Rudy]], Rudy and finding the car wash]], they're able to clean it off, much to Ralsei's relief.
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* WardrobeMalfunction: While Kris and Susie are fighting the Cellachimorphas for the first time, Ralsei approaches from behind to greet them, but is unnoticed as Susie flings her fishing rod back, causing the hook to get stuck in Ralsei's clothing then flinging it away, ripping his clothes off. It's only after the battle that they notice him, albeit naked and covering himself up with his hat. He gets his clothes back in the next episode.
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* MeaningfulName: Leuka and Carci get their names from ''Leukemia''[[labelnote:*]]A cancer of blood-forming tissues.[[/labelnote]] and ''Carcinoma''[[labelnote:*]]A type of cancer that starts in cells.[[/labelnote]].
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* RuderAndCruder: Not too much compared to the actual ''Deltarune'', but Susie's not hesitant to drop a few F-Bombs in this series.
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* RuderAndCruder: Not too much compared to the actual ''Deltarune'', but Susie's not hesitant to say "Bitch" or drop a few F-Bombs in this series.series.
-->'''Susie:''' Me and my big fucking mouth.
-->'''Susie:''' Me and my big fucking mouth.
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!!All spoilers for ''{{VideoGame/Deltarune}}'' will be unmarked, but spoilers pertaining to this story will be marked.
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''Kris Performs Surgery'' is a fanmade''{{VideoGame/Deltarune}}'' ''Deltarune'' story by {{Website/Reddit}} user Petah-Petah, posted to the site's ''Deltarune'' subreddit started in December 2021.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Those guys look like they knew.]]
''Kris Performs Surgery'' is a fanmade
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* ConvenientEscapeBoat: Early on, the Gang's path gets cut off by the blood river, with Susie suggesting that they swim through the blood instead (with a rather enthusiastic look on her face)... until Ralsei points out there's an "instant reindeer raft" next to the path, allowing them to progress without having to swim.
* InevitableWaterfall: While riding the raft, the gang ends up going down a waterfall (or in this case, a bloodfall) and being sent off their raft as they fall.
* RuderAndCruder: Not too much compared to the actual ''Deltarune'', but Susie's not hesitant to drop a few F-Bombs in this series.
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The series is posted "episode"-by-"episode" onto r/Deltarune by Petah-Petah, whose profile can be found [[https://www.reddit.com/user/Petah-Petah/submitted/ here]].
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* RuderAndCruder: Not too much compared to the actual ''Deltarune'', but Susie's not hesitant to drop a few F-Bombs in this series.series.
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* BigDamnHeroes: At one point, the gang finds themselves surrounded and outnumbered by Cellachimorphas, who ready an undodgeable attack.... [[spoiler:until one of them is hit with a "Ha-Doe-ken" by Rudy, causing the rest to flee.]]
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''Kris Performs Surgery'' is a fanmade ''{{VideoGame/Deltarune}}'' story by {{Website/Reddit}} user Petah-Petah, posted to the site's ''Deltarune'' subreddit started in December 2021.
Sometime after the events of Chapter 2, Rudy Holiday is diagnosed with a tumor. Late in the night, Kris and Susie sneak into his room as he sleeps, where Kris pulls out their soul and stabs him in the chest, creating a Dark World in his body to find and eliminate the tumor. With Ralsei joining the party soon after they arrive, the Fun Gang traverses the monster's body on their quest to save their friend's dad.
!!''Kris Performs Surgery'' contains examples of:
* FantasticVoyagePlot: The entire premise revolves around the Fun Gang entering Rudy's body to defeat a tumor growing in him. However, unlike most examples, this does not involve any shrinking down or ships to swim through their body, as Kris simply opens up a Dark World in his chest.
* RiversOfBlood: Literally. Rudy's bloodstream takes the form of an entire river system in the Dark World, which the gang must ride a boat on to progress.
* SeekerWhiteBloodCells: The first enemies Kris and Susie encounter are these, in the form of fish-based Darkners. They're spared by reeling them in with a fishing rod.
* ShoutOut: [[spoiler:Rudy's Dark World outfit]] is based directly on [[Franchise/StreetFighter Ryu]], complete with Hadouken!
** Later on, the Fun Gang also beats up a car, complete with high score, just like ''Street Fighter''.
* RuderAndCruder: Not too much compared to the actual ''Deltarune'', but Susie's not hesitant to drop a few F-Bombs in this series.
Sometime after the events of Chapter 2, Rudy Holiday is diagnosed with a tumor. Late in the night, Kris and Susie sneak into his room as he sleeps, where Kris pulls out their soul and stabs him in the chest, creating a Dark World in his body to find and eliminate the tumor. With Ralsei joining the party soon after they arrive, the Fun Gang traverses the monster's body on their quest to save their friend's dad.
!!''Kris Performs Surgery'' contains examples of:
* FantasticVoyagePlot: The entire premise revolves around the Fun Gang entering Rudy's body to defeat a tumor growing in him. However, unlike most examples, this does not involve any shrinking down or ships to swim through their body, as Kris simply opens up a Dark World in his chest.
* RiversOfBlood: Literally. Rudy's bloodstream takes the form of an entire river system in the Dark World, which the gang must ride a boat on to progress.
* SeekerWhiteBloodCells: The first enemies Kris and Susie encounter are these, in the form of fish-based Darkners. They're spared by reeling them in with a fishing rod.
* ShoutOut: [[spoiler:Rudy's Dark World outfit]] is based directly on [[Franchise/StreetFighter Ryu]], complete with Hadouken!
** Later on, the Fun Gang also beats up a car, complete with high score, just like ''Street Fighter''.
* RuderAndCruder: Not too much compared to the actual ''Deltarune'', but Susie's not hesitant to drop a few F-Bombs in this series.
