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* {{Continuation}}: One of the reasons Revel Montaro started writing the story was that they were disappointed that unlike the main show ''Equestria Girls'' had no real finale and left several plot threads and holes unresolved.

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* {{Continuation}}: One of the reasons Revel Montaro started writing the story was that they were disappointed that unlike the main show ''Equestria Girls'' had no real finale and left leaving several plot threads and holes unresolved.
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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/541886/incarnate-conversations Incarnate: Conversations]], A series of short stories that expands upon the story of Incarnate and its sequels.

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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/541886/incarnate-conversations Incarnate: Conversations]], A series of short stories that expands upon the story of Incarnate and its sequels.



* FantasyCounterpartAppliance: We see Sunset and Princess Twilight developing one to phones and radios in the form of "SunLight Crystals" during the formers first stay in Equestria. Their first successful test run shows them working as far away as Cloudsdale and by the time Sunset relocates to Equestria permanently they're in widespread use.

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* FantasyCounterpartAppliance: We see Sunset and Princess Twilight developing one to phones and radios in the form of "SunLight "[=SunLight=] Crystals" during the formers former's first stay in Equestria. Their first successful test run shows them working as far away as Cloudsdale and by the time Sunset relocates to Equestria permanently they're in widespread use.



* IKnowYourInThereSomewhereFight: [[spoiler:Celestia tries this when a Scylla possessed Flurry comes after her but the Athanatoi is too strong for the young princess.]]

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* IKnowYourInThereSomewhereFight: IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: [[spoiler:Celestia tries this when a Scylla possessed Flurry comes after her but the Athanatoi is too strong for the young princess.]]



* RapidAging: Happens to human Twilight in chapter 3 while Sunset's in Equestria, by the time their reunited Sci-Twi is confided to hospital bed and dies shortly after the portal closes.[[spoiler:Chapter 21 reveals that this is thanks to Aine destroying Midnight Sparkle who was stealing small amounts of Sunset's magic, with out her evil alter ego Twilight's immortality was gone.]]

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* RapidAging: Happens to human Twilight in chapter 3 while Sunset's in Equestria, by the time their they are reunited Sci-Twi is confided to a hospital bed and dies shortly after the portal closes.[[spoiler:Chapter 21 reveals that this is thanks to Aine destroying Midnight Sparkle who was stealing small amounts of Sunset's magic, with out without her evil alter ego Twilight's immortality was gone.]]



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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone:[[spoiler: Twilight when Red Clover releashes her hold on her so she can see Sunset die from injuries she inflicted on her.]

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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone:[[spoiler: Twilight when Red Clover releashes releases her hold on her so she can see Sunset die from injuries she inflicted on her.]]]



* {{Yandare}}:[[spoiler: Twilight under Red Clover control.]]

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* {{Yandare}}:[[spoiler: {{Yandere}}:[[spoiler: Twilight under Red Clover control.]]
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Between Sunset and Human Twilight. [[TheyDo At first.]]

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* %%* UnresolvedSexualTension: Between Sunset and Human Twilight. [[TheyDo At first.]]Twilight.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: [[spoiler:Twilight receives one from Fluttershy when her worry for Sunset almost causes her to relapse into Midnight Sparkle.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Ignis Ferrum Incarnate. Image courtesy of [[https://www.deviantart.com/masterdarhil/art/Warrior-Shimmer-841318308 MasterDahril]] and used with permission]]

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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/502424/discord-day Discord Day!]]

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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/502424/discord-day Discord Day!]]Day!]] An interquel between Gods and Monsters and Alpha and Omega, focusing on the first titular "Discord Day" in over a century, where the Lord of Chaos is allowed to run whiled and everypony takes the day off.



* ButtMonkey: Sunset spends most of the day as the but of Discord's jokes.

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* ButtMonkey: Sunset spends most of the day as the but butt of Discord's jokes.



* MindRape:

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* MindRape:MindRape: Red Clover's favoured methods, even referring to it by name, [[spoiler:she does to Twilight and Isa both describing how violated they feel.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone:[[spoiler: Twilight when Red Clover releashes her hold on her so she can see Sunset die from injuries she inflicted on her.]



* {{Yandare}}:
* YourSoulIsMine

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{{Yandare}}:[[spoiler: Twilight under Red Clover control.]]
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* CallBack: Oh is there ever. The story has no shortage of callbacks from across [=FiM=] Equestria Girls and even the IDW Comics.

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* CallBack: Oh is there ever. The story has no shortage of callbacks from across [=FiM=] [=FiM=], Equestria Girls and even the IDW Comics.
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The Rainbooms have graduated and preparing for the next chapters in their lives. Except for Sunset Shimmer, who's... unique status proves to be an obstacle and with very limited options she's considering going back to Equestria.

Those aren't their only problems however as the rogue magic from the portal is still causing trouble. Deciding to consult the expert, Sunset and Princess Twilight go to Star Swirl The Bearded. What she learns is a greater danger the portal could cause and revelations about her own past that will lead her to question everything she knows about her life and herself.

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The Rainbooms have graduated and preparing for the next chapters in their lives. Except for Sunset Shimmer, who's... unique whose... ''unique'' status proves to be an obstacle and with very limited options options, she's considering going back to Equestria.

Those aren't their only problems however problems, however, as the rogue magic from the portal is still causing trouble. Deciding to consult the expert, Sunset and Princess Twilight go to Star Swirl The Bearded. What she learns is a greater danger the portal could cause and revelations about her own past that will lead her to question everything she knows about her life and herself.
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** [[spoiler:Luna says they tried this with Sunset before she was born, thankfully the spells Celestia and Mirror Sombra had cast on her protected her.]]

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** [[spoiler:Luna says they tried this with Sunset before she was born, thankfully the spells Celestia and Mirror Sombra spells her parents had cast on her protected her.]]
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* {{Continuation}}: One of the reasons Revel Montaro started writing the story was that they were disappointed that unlike the main show "Equestria Girls" had no real finale and left several plot threads and holes unresolved.

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* {{Continuation}}: One of the reasons Revel Montaro started writing the story was that they were disappointed that unlike the main show "Equestria Girls" ''Equestria Girls'' had no real finale and left several plot threads and holes unresolved.

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* Foreshadowing: Twilight calls to check on Sunset when she didn't do her stream. Foreshadowing half the plot of Incarnate.

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* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: Twilight calls to check on Sunset when she didn't do her stream. Foreshadowing half the plot of Incarnate.



* Foreshadowing:[[spoiler: The end reveals that Cadance and Shining Armor had a second child.]]

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* Foreshadowing:[[spoiler: {{Foreshadowing}}:[[spoiler: The end reveals that Cadance and Shining Armor had a second child.]]]]
* {{Polyamory}}: Shiny Armor and Cadance are swingers.



* ButtMonkey: Sunset spends most of the day as the but of Discord's jokes.
* ForcedTransformation: Downplayed. Discord transforms Raven into a flesh and blood pony but she rather enjoys the experience.
* [[spoiler:ForcefulKiss]]:[[spoiler:Discord plants one on Twilight and she's non too happy about it.]]




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* Foreshadowing: [[spoiler:Aine mentions the Golden City, the Equestrian afterlife which becomes a major plot point for the sequel.]]

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* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler:Aine mentions the Golden City, the Equestrian afterlife which becomes a major plot point for the sequel.]]



* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: [[spoiler:While they're hell bent on destroying the world, The Athanatoi do care about each other, seeing his siblings loose their identities is what motivates Balius to break his bonds nd try to escape.]]

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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: [[spoiler:While they're hell bent on destroying the world, The Athanatoi do care about each other, seeing his siblings loose their identities is what motivates Balius to break his bonds nd and try to escape.]]



* Sunset also develops an equivalent to computer monitors to play the video games she has stores on Raven.

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* Sunset also develops an equivalent to computer monitors to play the video games she has stores stored on Raven.



** [[spoiler: Raven plays the main theme of WesternAnimation/TransformersTheMovie as part of the trap for the Anthantoi. She switched it from Sunset's first choice, Welcome To The Jungle]]

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** [[spoiler: Raven plays the main theme of WesternAnimation/TransformersTheMovie as part of the trap for the Anthantoi. She switched it from Sunset's first choice, [[Music/GunsNRoses Welcome To The Jungle]]Jungle]]]]



* SingleTargetSexuality: Celestia has apparently had no romantic partners in over a century and a half since the death of Mirror Sombra. Luna states she offered her the "services" of her guard, but she refused.




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* InterspeciesRomance: Celestia reveals there was a time when she and Mirror Sombra broke up and she was in a romantic relationship with a dragon.
** Not romantic but Sunset spends most of the story flirting with a zebra.
* {{Polyamory}}: Sunset is willing to flirt and even be intimate with others, but only with her wife's permission.
** Three of the stallions at the hotel are in a relationship.



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The author has confirmed their working on a third story.

Before completing Gods and Monsters, Revel Montaro announced they were going post short stories set before, between and after the main two:

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The author has confirmed their working on a third story.

story in the series, Alpha and Omega, can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/514487/alpha-and-omega Here]].

Before completing Gods and Monsters, Revel Montaro announced they were going post short stories set before, between and after the main two:



* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/491070/we-want-to-help We Want To Help]], a NSFW two parter set between Incarnate and Gods and Monsters.

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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/491070/we-want-to-help We Want To Help]], a NSFW two parter two-parter set between Incarnate and Gods and Monsters.




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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/502424/discord-day Discord Day!]]
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/505744/anything-but-time Anything, But Time]] set during the first half of Gods and Monsters and follows Sunset and Celestia spending quality time together on a mysterious island.
* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/510529/i-raven I, Raven]] set between Gods And Monsters and Alpha And Omega, follows Sunset, Twilight and guard captains Tempest Fury and Fog Gauge taking a vaction in the human world. NSFW scenes.


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* [[spoiler:ArmorClosetGay:]][[spoiler:In chapter 6, Sci-Twi confesses that she's began falling for Sunset since Friendship Games, however, social pressure, namely from a great aunt, led her to dating Timber Spruce as he's the first boy who showed an interest in her and she thought it would "sort out these odd feelings". However, after they had sex, she couldn't deny how she feels and talked to him about it and later confesses to Sunset she's in love with her. Later, in "We Want To Help" she admits men do nothing for her and she had a crush on Cadance.]]

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* [[spoiler:ArmorClosetGay:]][[spoiler:In [[spoiler:ArmouredClosetGay:]][[spoiler:In chapter 6, Sci-Twi confesses that she's began falling for Sunset since Friendship Games, however, social pressure, namely from a great aunt, led her to dating Timber Spruce as he's the first boy who showed an interest in her and she thought it would "sort out these odd feelings". However, after they had sex, she couldn't deny how she feels and talked to him about it and later confesses to Sunset she's in love with her. Later, in "We Want To Help" she admits men do nothing for her and she had a crush on Cadance.]]
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* NotSoDifferent: Sunset sees a lot of her younger self in Flurry.
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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:Aetheon's attack on the Crystal Empire, killing dozens of guards and taking on three princesses.]]

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* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:Aetheon's attack on the Crystal Empire, killing dozens of guards and taking on three princesses.princesses, showing just how powerful and dangerous one of the quartet is.]]



* DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest: Acknowledged. [[spoiler:Years after Sci-Twi's death, Sunset starts developing an attraction to Princess Twilight, who had started pining for Sunset years beforehand. However, Sunset is worried that she only likes the princess because she's her wife's counterpart and the princess is worried she's taking advantage of that fact. The two agree to take it slow until they're sure, in later chapters they're doing well and the doppelganger thing isn't even brought up.]]

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* DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest: Acknowledged. [[spoiler:Years after Sci-Twi's death, Sunset starts developing an attraction to Princess Twilight, who had started pining for Sunset years beforehand. However, Sunset is worried that she only likes the princess because she's her wife's counterpart and the princess is worried she's unintentionally taking advantage of that fact. The two agree to take it slow until they're sure, in later chapters they're doing well and the doppelganger thing isn't even brought up.]]



* EvenEvilCanBeLoved: [[spoiler:Inspite of all they've done, including killing Celestia, Aine still cares for the Athanatoi and objects to any plan to kill them, compromising to have their memories erased.]]

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* EvenEvilCanBeLoved: [[spoiler:Inspite of all they've done, including killing Celestia, Aine still cares for the Athanatoi and objects to any plan to kill them, compromising to have their memories erased.erased and her taking them far away from the world.]]



* FantasyCounterpartAppliance: We see Sunset and Princess Twilight developing one to phones and radios in the form of "SunLight Crystals" during the formers first stay in Equestria. Their first successful test run shows them workings as far away as Cloudsdale and by the time Sunset relocates to Equestria permanently they're in widespread use.

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* FantasyCounterpartAppliance: We see Sunset and Princess Twilight developing one to phones and radios in the form of "SunLight Crystals" during the formers first stay in Equestria. Their first successful test run shows them workings working as far away as Cloudsdale and by the time Sunset relocates to Equestria permanently they're in widespread use.



* {{Necromancer}}: Flurry Heart and her friends apparently dealt with one off screen at some point. [[spoiler:The Athanatoi see a few imprisoned in Tartarus.]]

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* {{Necromancer}}: Flurry Heart and her friends apparently dealt with one off screen at some point. [[spoiler:The Athanatoi see a few imprisoned in Tartarus.Tartarus, before they blow it up.]]



* PosthumousCharacter:All non immortal characters from canon have passed on by the time of the story.[[spoiler:However, The rest of the Mane Six and Starlight appear in the underworld waving at Twilight from across the river, Celestia and Good King Sombra also appear and Sunset gets the chance to talk to them.]]

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* PosthumousCharacter:All non immortal characters from canon who were not immortal or of a long lived race have passed on by the time of the story.[[spoiler:However, The rest of the Mane Six and Starlight appear in the underworld waving at Twilight from across the river, Celestia and Good King Sombra also appear and Sunset gets the chance to talk to them.]]



* PsychoPrototype: [[spoiler:Athanatoi means "The First Children", their Aine's children.]]
* RapidAging: Happens to human Twilight in chapter 3 while Sunset's in Equestria, by the time their reunited Sci-Twi is confided to hospital bed and dies shortly after the portal closes.[[spoiler:Chapter 21 reveals that this is thanks to Aine destroying Midnight Sparkle.]]

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* PsychoPrototype: [[spoiler:Athanatoi means "The First Children", their Aine's children.children, helped her shaped create the world and are Celestia and Luna's older siblings..]]
* RapidAging: Happens to human Twilight in chapter 3 while Sunset's in Equestria, by the time their reunited Sci-Twi is confided to hospital bed and dies shortly after the portal closes.[[spoiler:Chapter 21 reveals that this is thanks to Aine destroying Midnight Sparkle.Sparkle who was stealing small amounts of Sunset's magic, with out her evil alter ego Twilight's immortality was gone.]]



* RoyalBrat: Flurry Heart has grown up to be this apparently because she feels she's due more like a princess, though it seems there might be something more going on. [[spoiler:Though, having several eldritch monsters in her head might be a factor.]]

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* RoyalBrat: Flurry Heart has grown up to be this apparently because she feels she's due more like a princess, though it seems there might be something more going on. [[spoiler:Though, having several eldritch monsters four rogue gods in her head might be a factor.]]



** [[spoiler:Princess Cadance is a fine example. One minute she's reconnecting with her long lost cousin and teases her about her relationship with Princess Twilight, then said Princess calls and warns her about a threat ending for her kingdom and she orders her guard to prepare for battle and personally powers and maintains the city's defensive barrier.]]

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** [[spoiler:Princess Cadance is a fine example. One minute she's reconnecting with her long lost cousin and teases her about her relationship with Princess Twilight, then said Princess calls and warns her about a threat ending heading for her kingdom and she orders her guard to prepare for battle and battle, personally powers and maintains the city's defensive barrier.barrier and actively takes part in the main battle.]]



** Cadance cornering Tempest Fury for details on her relationship with Fog Gauge.

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** Cadance cornering Tempest Fury for details on her developing relationship with Fog Gauge.



** In chapter fifteen, Sunset uses the [[ComicBook/IronMan Iron Man Armor]], to fight off villains in the dream world.

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** In chapter fifteen, Sunset uses the [[ComicBook/IronMan Iron Man Armor]], to fight off the villains in the dream world.



* StrongFamilyResemblance: Twilight tells Sunset about Celestia almost transforming into Daybreaker in the previous story, informing her about how much she resemble Sunset's demon form.

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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Twilight tells Sunset about Celestia almost transforming into Daybreaker in the previous story, informing her about how much she resemble resembled Sunset's demon form.



* TragicKeepsake: [[spoiler:Sunset keeps hers and Twilight's wedding rings on a necklace, she rubs them whenever she misses her, feels tempted for sex, or feeling nervous.]][[spoiler:She later gives these to Princess Twilight for safe keeping.]][[spoiler:This is becomes a big plot point in the last few chapters, Sunset copied her memories and stored them in the rings this plus her empathy ability, restores her mind at the cost of the rings turning to dust..]]

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* TragicKeepsake: [[spoiler:Sunset keeps hers and Twilight's wedding rings on a necklace, she rubs them whenever she misses her, feels tempted for sex, or feeling nervous.]][[spoiler:She later gives these to Princess Twilight for safe keeping.]][[spoiler:This is becomes a big plot point in the last few chapters, Sunset copied her memories and stored them in the rings this plus her empathy ability, restores her mind at the cost of the rings turning to dust..dust.]]
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* LovableSexManiac: Luna, see CasualKink above.
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* RoyallyScrewedUp: [[spoiler:Prehaps unsurprisingly it turns Sunset, Celestia and Luna come from one of these.]]
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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/493274/got-your-six Got Your Six]], an interquel between Incarnate and Gods and Monsters about how Midnight Tempest and Flash Sentry became a couple.



* [[spoiler:ArmorClosetGay:]][[spoiler:In chapter 6, Sci-Twi confesses that she's began falling for Sunset since Friendship Games, however, social pressure, namely from a great aunt, led her to dating Timber Spruce as he's the first boy who showed an interest in her and she thought it would "sort out these odd feelings". However, after they had sex, she couldn't deny how she feels and talked to him about it and later confesses to Sunset she's in love with her.]]
* ArmoredClosetGay:[[spoiler:Human Twilight. All her life she never felt any attraction to boys, a Great Aunt repeatedly telling her "to give it time". She admits she expected to eventually settle down with a guy and start a family. Until she met Sunset and later admits to occasionally fantasying about her. She admits she only started going out with Timber Spruce was because he was the first guy to show any interest in her and hoped to "sort out these strange feelings." However, after their first time together and her clear disgust she can't deny how she feels any more. Later, in "We Want To Help" she admits men do nothing for her and she had a crush on Cadance.]]

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* [[spoiler:ArmorClosetGay:]][[spoiler:In chapter 6, Sci-Twi confesses that she's began falling for Sunset since Friendship Games, however, social pressure, namely from a great aunt, led her to dating Timber Spruce as he's the first boy who showed an interest in her and she thought it would "sort out these odd feelings". However, after they had sex, she couldn't deny how she feels and talked to him about it and later confesses to Sunset she's in love with her.]]
* ArmoredClosetGay:[[spoiler:Human Twilight. All her life she never felt any attraction to boys, a Great Aunt repeatedly telling her "to give it time". She admits she expected to eventually settle down with a guy and start a family. Until she met Sunset and later admits to occasionally fantasying about her. She admits she only started going out with Timber Spruce was because he was the first guy to show any interest in her and hoped to "sort out these strange feelings." However, after their first time together and her clear disgust she can't deny how she feels any more.
Later, in "We Want To Help" she admits men do nothing for her and she had a crush on Cadance.]]



* StrongFamilyResemblance: Twilight tells Sunset about Celestia almost transforming into Daybreaker in the previous story, informing her about how much she resemble Sunset's demon form.





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