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* AdaptationalAlternateEnding: [[spoiler: Instead of leaving the planet and going back to a trillion dollars of debt, Varien decides to stay with his friends and send of the rocket to the Mongolians so that they would protect the planet from [[MegaCorp Alterra]].]]
* AdaptationalBadass: Ampeels. [[spoiler: An ampeel would not be able to kill a reaper leviathan in the base game, even at the cost of nearly dying themselves.]]
* AdaptationalBadass: Ampeels. [[spoiler: An ampeel would not be able to kill a reaper leviathan in the base game, even at the cost of nearly dying themselves.]]
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* AdaptationalAlternateEnding: [[spoiler: Instead of leaving the planet and going back to a trillion dollars of debt, Varien decides to stay with his friends and send of the rocket to the Mongolians so that they would protect the planet from [[MegaCorp Alterra]].]]
* AdaptationalBadass: Ampeels. [[spoiler: Anampeel Ampeel would not be able to kill a reaper leviathan Reaper Leviathan in the base game, even at the cost of nearly dying themselves.]]
* AdaptationalBadass: Ampeels. [[spoiler: An
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Crabsquids don't like the prospect of getting zapped by the ampeels.
* HumansThroughAlienEyes: We often switch to the point of view of Volara the ampeel. Notably, she at first has trouble understanding that humans are not the vehicles they drive, since she at first believes Varian is his seamoth.
* MercyKill: Near the start of the book when [[spoiler: Volara kills a drowning survivor to end their suffering.]] [[spoiler: Ultimately PlayedForDrama when Varien learns it was his fiancée.]]
* StarfishLanguage: The electrical arcs seen in the game around ampeel prongs are more than just a means of defense in this fic, they're how they talk to each other. One of the ampeels, having a broken prong, is rendered as having a lisp.
* WoundThatWillNotHeal: [[spoiler: When Ohmaron attacks Varien, the electrical charge at the end makes him unable to move his hand. He has use of it still, but it locks up from time to time. It is left ambiguous if it will ever heal or not.]]
* HumansThroughAlienEyes: We often switch to the point of view of Volara the ampeel. Notably, she at first has trouble understanding that humans are not the vehicles they drive, since she at first believes Varian is his seamoth.
* MercyKill: Near the start of the book when [[spoiler: Volara kills a drowning survivor to end their suffering.]] [[spoiler: Ultimately PlayedForDrama when Varien learns it was his fiancée.]]
* StarfishLanguage: The electrical arcs seen in the game around ampeel prongs are more than just a means of defense in this fic, they're how they talk to each other. One of the ampeels, having a broken prong, is rendered as having a lisp.
* WoundThatWillNotHeal: [[spoiler: When Ohmaron attacks Varien, the electrical charge at the end makes him unable to move his hand. He has use of it still, but it locks up from time to time. It is left ambiguous if it will ever heal or not.]]
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Crabsquids don't like the prospect of getting zapped by the ampeels.
Ampeels.
* HumansThroughAlienEyes: We often switch to the point of view of Volara theampeel. Ampeel. Notably, she at first has trouble understanding that humans are not the vehicles they drive, since she at first believes Varian Varien is his seamoth.
Seamoth.
* MercyKill: Near the start of thebook when fanfic, [[spoiler: Volara kills a drowning survivor to end their suffering.]] [[spoiler: Ultimately PlayedForDrama when Varien learns it was his fiancée.]]
* StarfishLanguage: The electrical arcs seen in the game aroundampeel Ampeel prongs are more than just a means of defense in this fic, they're how they talk to each other. One of the ampeels, Ampeels, having a broken prong, is rendered as having a lisp.
lisp, replacing all her S's with L's.
* WoundThatWillNotHeal: [[spoiler: When Ohmaron attacks Varien, the electrical chargeat the end makes him unable to move his hand. He has use of it still, but it locks up from time to time. It is left ambiguous if it will ever heal or not.]]
* HumansThroughAlienEyes: We often switch to the point of view of Volara the
* MercyKill: Near the start of the
* StarfishLanguage: The electrical arcs seen in the game around
* WoundThatWillNotHeal: [[spoiler: When Ohmaron attacks Varien, the electrical charge
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* AdaptationalBadass: Ampeels. [[spoiler: An ampeel would not be able to kill a reaper leviathan in the base game.game, even at the cost of nearly dying themselves.]]
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* AdaptationalBadass: Ampeels. [[spoiler: A ampeel would not be able to kill a reaper leviathan in the base game.]]
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* AdaptationalBadass: Ampeels. [[spoiler: A An ampeel would not be able to kill a reaper leviathan in the base game.]]
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* AGodIAmNot: After seeing all what Varien can do with technology, Volara asks him if he's a god. He hastily replies that no, he isn't, he just has SufficientlyAdvancedTechnology.
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* AGodIAmNot: After seeing all what that Varien can do with technology, Volara asks him if he's a god. He hastily replies that no, he isn't, he just has SufficientlyAdvancedTechnology.
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* HumansThroughAlienEyes: We often switch to the point of view of Volara the ampeel. Notably, she at first has troubles understanding that humans are not the vehicles they drive, since she at first believes Varian is his seamoth.
* MercyKill: Near the start of the book when [[spoiler: Volera kills a drowning survivor to end their suffering.]] [[spoiler: Ultimately PlayedForDrama when Varien learns it was his fiance.]]
* MercyKill: Near the start of the book when [[spoiler: Volera kills a drowning survivor to end their suffering.]] [[spoiler: Ultimately PlayedForDrama when Varien learns it was his fiance.]]
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* HumansThroughAlienEyes: We often switch to the point of view of Volara the ampeel. Notably, she at first has troubles trouble understanding that humans are not the vehicles they drive, since she at first believes Varian is his seamoth.
* MercyKill: Near the start of the book when [[spoiler:Volera Volara kills a drowning survivor to end their suffering.]] [[spoiler: Ultimately PlayedForDrama when Varien learns it was his fiance.fiancée.]]
* MercyKill: Near the start of the book when [[spoiler:
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* StarfishLanguage: The electrical arcs seen in the game around ampeel prongs are more than just a mean of defense in this fic, they're how they talk to each others. One of the ampeels, having a broken prong, is rendered as having a lisp.
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* StarfishLanguage: The electrical arcs seen in the game around ampeel prongs are more than just a mean means of defense in this fic, they're how they talk to each others.other. One of the ampeels, having a broken prong, is rendered as having a lisp.
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* WoundThatWillNotHeal: [[spoiler: When Ohmaron attacks Varien, The electrical charge at the end makes him unable to move his hand. He has use of it still, but it locks up from time to time. It is left ambiguous if it will ever heal or not.]]
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* WoundThatWillNotHeal: [[spoiler: When Ohmaron attacks Varien, The the electrical charge at the end makes him unable to move his hand. He has use of it still, but it locks up from time to time. It is left ambiguous if it will ever heal or not.]]
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''In Charge'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12549253/In-Charge/ (available here)]] is a FanFic about ''{{Videogame/Subnautica}}'' by FanFic creator "coincidencless". It follows the same basic story as the game but adds in many new things and characters.
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''In Charge'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12549253/In-Charge/ (available here)]] is a FanFic {{Fanfic}} about ''{{Videogame/Subnautica}}'' ''{{VideoGame/Subnautica}}'' by FanFic Fanfic creator "coincidencless". It follows the same basic story as the game but adds in many new things and characters.
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* [[AdaptationalBadass Adaptational Awesomeness]]: Ampeels. [[spoiler: A ampeel would not be able to kill a reaper leviathan in the base game.]]
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Ampeels fit this. And this becomes integral to the plot.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Ampeels fit this. And this becomes integral to the plot.
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* [[AdaptationalBadass Adaptational Awesomeness]]: AdaptationalBadass: Ampeels. [[spoiler: A ampeel would not be able to kill a reaper leviathan in the base game.]]
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Ampeels fitthis. this, going from merely being implied to be more intelligent than other sea creatures to outright sapient. And this becomes integral to the plot.plot.
* AGodIAmNot: After seeing all what Varien can do with technology, Volara asks him if he's a god. He hastily replies that no, he isn't, he just has SufficientlyAdvancedTechnology.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Ampeels fit
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* HumansThroughAlienEyes: Happens alot in interactions.
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* StarfishLanguage: The electrical arcs seen in the game around ampeel prongs are more than just a mean of defense in this fic, they're how they talk to each others. One of the ampeels, having a broken prong, is rendered as having a lisp.
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* AdaptationalAlternateEnding: [[spoiler: Instead of leaving the planet and going back to a trillion dollars of debt, Varien decides to stay with his friends and send of the rocket to the Mongolians so that they would protect the planet from [[MegaCorp Alterra]].]]
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* HumansThroughAlienEyes: Happens alot in interactions.
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* MercyKill: Near the start of the book when [[spoiler: Volera kills a drowning survivor to end their suffering.]] [[spoiler: Ultimately PlayedForDrama when Varien learns it was his fiance.]]
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Crabsquids don't like the prospect of getting zapped by the ampeels.
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: Crabsquids don't like the prospect of getting zapped by the ampeels.ampeels.
* WoundThatWillNotHeal: [[spoiler: When Ohmaron attacks Varien, The electrical charge at the end makes him unable to move his hand. He has use of it still, but it locks up from time to time. It is left ambiguous if it will ever heal or not.]]
* WoundThatWillNotHeal: [[spoiler: When Ohmaron attacks Varien, The electrical charge at the end makes him unable to move his hand. He has use of it still, but it locks up from time to time. It is left ambiguous if it will ever heal or not.]]
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Ampeels fit this. And this becomes integral to the plot.
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!!In Charge contains examples of the following tropes:tropes:
* [[AdaptationalBadass Adaptational Awesomeness]]: Ampeels. [[spoiler: A ampeel would not be able to kill a reaper leviathan in the base game.]]
* HorrifyingTheHorror: Crabsquids don't like the prospect of getting zapped by the ampeels.
* [[AdaptationalBadass Adaptational Awesomeness]]: Ampeels. [[spoiler: A ampeel would not be able to kill a reaper leviathan in the base game.]]
* HorrifyingTheHorror: Crabsquids don't like the prospect of getting zapped by the ampeels.
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''In Charge'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12549253/In-Charge/ (available here)]] is a FanFic about ''{{Videogame/Subnautica}}''
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''In Charge'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12549253/In-Charge/ (available here)]] is a FanFic about ''{{Videogame/Subnautica}}''''{{Videogame/Subnautica}}'' by FanFic creator "coincidencless". It follows the same basic story as the game but adds in many new things and characters.
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''In Charge'' [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12549253/In-Charge/ (available here)]] is a FanFic about ''{{Videogame/Subnautica}}''