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Overprotective Dad has been disambiguated
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* BaitAndSwitch: Before we meet Fluttershy's parents, Silver Lining is built up as the adoring father Fluttershy fondly remembers, while Posey is TheDreaded. Then when we actually get to meet them, it turns out that Posey is a distant but still loving ReasonableAuthorityFigure, the counterpoint to Silver Lining's intensely OverprotectiveDad.
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* BaitAndSwitch: Before we meet Fluttershy's parents, Silver Lining is built up as the adoring father Fluttershy fondly remembers, while Posey is TheDreaded. Then when we actually get to meet them, it turns out that Posey is a distant but still loving ReasonableAuthorityFigure, the counterpoint to Silver Lining's intensely OverprotectiveDad.overprotective father.
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* OverprotectiveDad: Silver Lining, full stop.
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Talking To Yourself is dewicked
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* SpitTake: Celestia manages to inflict this on ''herself'' via TalkingToYourself while drinking coffee.
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* SpitTake: Celestia manages to inflict this on ''herself'' via TalkingToYourself talking to herself while drinking coffee.
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* TalkingToYourself: Celestia finds herself doing it, but as she points out to herself, she doesn't have many options for ponies to talk to.
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* RedBaron: Posey is referred to in reverent whispers as [[AwesomeMcCoolname Wildflower]].
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* RedBaron: Posey is referred to in reverent whispers as [[AwesomeMcCoolname Wildflower]].Wildflower.
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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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* NoIndoorVoice: Princess Luna is still trying to break the habit of continuous use of the Royal Canterlot Voice. And if she's to be believed, before Luna's exile, Celestia's Royal Canterlot Voice was even ''[[UpToEleven louder.]]''
** And keep in mind, NoIndoorVoice is Luna's ''default''. When she intentionally ''[[UpToEleven yells]]''...
** And keep in mind, NoIndoorVoice is Luna's ''default''. When she intentionally ''[[UpToEleven yells]]''...
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* NoIndoorVoice: Princess Luna is still trying to break the habit of continuous use of the Royal Canterlot Voice. And if she's to be believed, before Luna's exile, Celestia's Royal Canterlot Voice was even ''[[UpToEleven louder.]]''
''louder.''
** And keep in mind, NoIndoorVoice is Luna's ''default''. When she intentionally''[[UpToEleven yells]]''...''yells''...
** And keep in mind, NoIndoorVoice is Luna's ''default''. When she intentionally
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Romantic Two Girl Friendship has been renamed to Pseudo Romantic Friendship. All misuse and ZC Es will be deleted and all other examples will be changed to the correct trope.
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* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: Rarity and Fluttershy had hints of this dynamic as fillies. [[spoiler:The Crusaders are currently in a Romantic ''Three''-Girl Friendship.]]
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* CannotDream: Princess Celestia. When Celestia banished Luna to the moon all those centuries ago, the [[DreamWorld Dreamscape]] didn't take kindly to the imprisonment of its mistress and lashed out at her. Celestia has now slept with powerful psychic blocks to protect herself for centuries. [[spoiler:Which is why Luna freaks out when she steps into Celestia's dream the day that Twilight returns to Ponyville, because she shouldn't even be having one.]]
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* CannotDream: Princess Celestia. When Celestia banished Luna to the moon all those centuries ago, the [[DreamWorld [[DreamLand Dreamscape]] didn't take kindly to the imprisonment of its mistress and lashed out at her. Celestia has now slept with powerful psychic blocks to protect herself for centuries. [[spoiler:Which is why Luna freaks out when she steps into Celestia's dream the day that Twilight returns to Ponyville, because she shouldn't even be having one.]]
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-->'''Twilight Sparkle:''' “If we’re going to do it, we’re going to [[ByTheBook do it right]]! Now get me that wrench, please.”
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-->'''Twilight Sparkle:''' “If we’re going to do it, we’re going to [[ByTheBook [[DoWrongRight do it right]]! Now get me that wrench, please.”
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* FreudianExcuse: Luna believes that the underlying reason for Twilight's relationship issues can be traced to [[spoiler:her longstanding [[AllLoveIsUnrequited unrequited]] [[MentorShip crush]] on Princess Celestia.]]
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* FreudianExcuse: Luna believes that the underlying reason for Twilight's relationship issues can be traced to [[spoiler:her longstanding [[AllLoveIsUnrequited unrequited]] [[MentorShip unrequited crush]] on Princess Celestia.]]
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Wedding Day is no longer a trope per TRS
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* WeddingDay: [[spoiler:Fluttershy and Rarity]] get theirs in the final chapter.
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* WeddingDay: WeddingFinale: [[spoiler:Fluttershy and Rarity]] get theirs their wedding in the final chapter.
