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* BlackmailIsSuchAnUglyWord: Vlad doesn't like the use of the word "slave" to describe what he's doing to Katie. He prefers "to call it an unpaid internship and gaining a long term errand girl".
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* DumbJock: Dash as usual.
* DoggedNiceGirl: If you ignore her monster side, Katie has problems controlling her hormones and temper as she can be pretty aggressive but she genuinely is a friendly girl even when Danny doesn't reciprocate her interest in him anymore.
* DoggedNiceGirl: If you ignore her monster side, Katie has problems controlling her hormones and temper as she can be pretty aggressive but she genuinely is a friendly girl even when Danny doesn't reciprocate her interest in him anymore.
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* DumbJock: Dash as usual.
DistinctionWithoutADifference: Vlad doesn't like the use of the word "slave" to describe what he's doing to Katie. He prefers "to call it an unpaid internship and gaining a long term errand girl".
* DoggedNiceGirl: If you ignore her monster side, Katie has problems controlling her hormones and temper as she can be prettyaggressive aggressive, but she genuinely is a friendly girl even when Danny doesn't reciprocate her interest in him anymore.
* DoggedNiceGirl: If you ignore her monster side, Katie has problems controlling her hormones and temper as she can be pretty
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* DumbJock: Dash as usual.
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* ItMustBeMine: He's only had eyes for Maddie ever since college 20 years ago.
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* ItMustBeMine: He's Vlad has only had eyes for Maddie ever since college 20 years ago.
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* ItMustBeMine: He's only had eyes for Maddie ever since college 20 years ago.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Dash can get away with his bullying at school because of favoritism but it isn't possible in public places.
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* AllWomenAreLustful: Katie falls really hard for Danny and it doesn't take long for her to smother him in hugs and kisses. She seems to get worse the longer they are together.
** Tiffany isn't much better in this department, given her own behavior around her husband
** Tiffany isn't much better in this department, given her own behavior around her husband
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* AllWomenAreLustful: AllWomenAreLustful:
** Katie falls really hard for Danny and it doesn't take long for her to smother him in hugs and kisses. She seems to get worse the longer they are together.
** Tiffany isn't much better in this department, given her own clingy behavior around her husband
** Katie falls really hard for Danny and it doesn't take long for her to smother him in hugs and kisses. She seems to get worse the longer they are together.
** Tiffany isn't much better in this department, given her own clingy behavior around her husband
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* HenpeckedHusband: Tiffany's husband Mitch. Though Mitch admits he loved her once, even proposing after just two weeks, he lost a lot of those feelings by the time of their wedding because of Tiffany's increasingly crazy attitude and her powers. He spends the entire time at the family dinner catering to her whims to keep her happy and the only reason they are still married is because Mitch is too scared of her transformations to reject her. He even personally warns Danny to get away from Kaboom family if he values his life. Mitch admits to Danny he still loves Tiffany a bit but can’t see himself being with her and loving her like he used to as long as she turns into a monster. He is still shown to care for her, relieved that she was knocked out rather than injured despite Tiffany having transformed earlier.
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* HenpeckedHusband: Tiffany's husband Mitch. Though Mitch admits he loved her once, even proposing after just two weeks, he lost a lot of those feelings by the time of their wedding because of Tiffany's increasingly crazy attitude and her powers. He spends the entire time at the family dinner catering to her whims to keep her happy and the only reason they are still married is because Mitch is too scared of her transformations to reject her. He even personally warns Danny to get away from the Kaboom family if he values his life. Mitch admits to Danny he still loves Tiffany a bit but can’t see himself being with her and loving her like he used to as long as she turns into a monster. He is still shown to care for her, relieved that she was knocked out rather than injured despite Tiffany having transformed earlier.
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* MoodSwinger: Katie can act normally one minute then go back to being super clingy the next, and that's not putting her temper and powers into consideration. Danny admits that he likes her when she's in her "normal" mode, but he's scared of her destructive monster form and when she's not that, she can still be uncomfortably clingy and obsessed with him, which is a turn off.
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* MoodSwinger: Katie can act normally one minute then go back to being super clingy the next, and that's not putting her temper and powers into consideration. Danny admits that he likes her when she's in her "normal" mode, but he's scared of her destructive monster form and when she's not that, she can still be uncomfortably clingy and obsessed with him, which is a turn off.turn-off.
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* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: Subverted, as Katie would pick Nice Guy Danny Fenton over Je-rk Jock Dash Baxter any day of the week.
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* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: Subverted, as Subverted. Katie would pick Nice Guy NiceGuy Danny Fenton over Je-rk Jock JerkJock Dash Baxter any day of the week.week regardless of how attractive Dash is.
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* BadLiar: Dash tries to lie his way out of trouble for bothering Danny and Katie at the bowling alley, by telling the security guard he was saving Katie from the "loser" Danny but the guard doesn't believe him for a second since he saw Dash push Danny down just now and Katie already complained to the guard that Dash is a creep who was threatening her date Danny.
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* BadLiar: Dash tries to lie his way out of trouble for bothering Danny and Katie at the bowling alley, alley by telling the security guard claiming he was saving Katie from the "loser" Danny but Danny. Naturally, the security guard doesn't believe him for a second since he just saw Dash push Danny down just now and Katie already complained to the guard that Dash is a creep who was threatening her date date, Danny.
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** Katie gets mad over any trivial issue and to her credit, her encounter with Dash shows that she ''DOES'' try to mind her temper when she's out in town... but she nearly loses it after Dash pesters her and Danny.
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** Katie gets mad over any trivial issue and issues, though to her credit, her encounter with Dash shows that she ''DOES'' ''does'' try to mind her temper when she's out in town... but she nearly loses it after Dash he pesters her and Danny.
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* BrutalHonesty: [[spoiler:When Danny finally admits he doesn't like Katie anymore, it's pretty scathing. He also admits to her he hates the nickname she gave him, "Pookie Bear". He calls it stupid and embarrassing.]]
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* BrutalHonesty: [[spoiler:When Danny finally admits he doesn't like Katie anymore, it's pretty scathing. He also admits to her he hates the nickname she gave him, "Pookie Bear". He calls Bear", calling it stupid and embarrassing.]]
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* DumbBlonde: Dash has blonde hair and is a DumbJock.
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* DumbBlonde: DumbJock: Dash has blonde hair and is a DumbJock.as usual.
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* DudeMagnet: Katie is considered to be a very cute and beautiful girl that Danny, Tucker and even Dash find attractive.
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* DudeMagnet: Katie is considered to be a very cute and beautiful girl that who Danny, Tucker and even Dash find attractive.
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** When Danny decides to break up with Katie to protect her from his enemies, Sam cautions him not to "be like one of those creeps who runs away when it happens or break up with a girl on a text message or phone call". Sam doesn't like Katie but deemed those kinds of break-ups "too impersonal".
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** When Danny decides to break up with Katie [[ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies to protect her from his enemies, enemies]], Sam cautions him not to "be like one of those creeps who runs away when it happens or break up with a girl on a text message or phone call". Sam doesn't like Katie but deemed those kinds of break-ups "too impersonal".
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* FreudianExcuse: Its hinted that despite her good looks, Katie wasn't very popular at her old school due to her condition.
* FutureLoser: Danny tells Katie that Dash bullies others because he knows he'll be this after high school so he's enjoying his glory days while they last and Katie just finds it pathetic that the Je-rk Jock isn't even trying to make something of his life.
* FutureLoser: Danny tells Katie that Dash bullies others because he knows he'll be this after high school so he's enjoying his glory days while they last and Katie just finds it pathetic that the Je-rk Jock isn't even trying to make something of his life.
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* FreudianExcuse: Its It's hinted that despite her good looks, Katie wasn't very popular at her old school due to her condition.
* FutureLoser: Danny tells Katie that Dash bullies others because he knows he'll be this after high school so he's enjoying hisglory days GloryDays while they last and last. Katie just finds it pathetic that the Je-rk Jock JerkJock isn't even trying to make something of his life.
* FutureLoser: Danny tells Katie that Dash bullies others because he knows he'll be this after high school so he's enjoying his
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* GreenEyedMonster: Even at the end when everyone else now understands Katie's situation and at least sympathises with her, Sam still hates her and expects nothing but the worst from her, even accusing Katie of trying to manipulate Danny into being with her when she arrives at his house to patch things up. However, this is really due to Sam's jealousy of Katie and Danny's connection, which Katie calls her out on.
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* GreenEyedMonster: Even at the end when everyone else now understands Katie's situation and at least sympathises with her, Sam still hates her and expects nothing but the worst from her, even going as far as accusing Katie of trying to manipulate Danny into being with her when she arrives at his house to patch things up. However, this is really due to Sam's jealousy of Katie and Danny's connection, which Katie calls her out on.
** Dash gets thrown out of the bowling alley by security for harassing Danny and Katie.
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** Dash gets thrown out of the bowling alley by security for harassing Danny and Katie.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Dash can get away with his bullying at school cause of favoritism but it isn't possible in public places.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Dash can get away with his bullying at school cause because of favoritism but it isn't possible in public places.
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* BringMyBrownPants: Dash pees himself out of fear when monster Katie attacks him.
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* BringMyBrownPants: Dash pees wets himself out of fear when monster Katie attacks him.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Sam's jealousy of Katie and refusal to address her feelings for Danny cause her to be this.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Sam's jealousy of Katie and refusal to address her feelings for Danny and jealousy of Katie cause her to be this.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Katie's parents call Tiffany out on her unhelpful treatment of Katie, after the latter returns home from school and confesses to morphing and almost attacking Dash.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Katie's parents call Tiffany out on her unhelpful treatment of Katie, Katie after the latter returns home from school and confesses to morphing and almost attacking Dash.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: At first, Danny is flattered and very accepting of Katie being interested in him. As time went on, her interest in him becomes more clingy and smothering, making him slowly stop being flattered and wanting to get as far away from her as possible.
** Katie gets her own in the form of Dash Baxter as she's repulsed not just by his bullying but how rude, dumb, and obnoxious he is.
** Katie gets her own in the form of Dash Baxter as she's repulsed not just by his bullying but how rude, dumb, and obnoxious he is.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: AbhorrentAdmirer:
** At first, Danny is flattered and very accepting of Katie being interested in him. As time went on, her interest in him becomes more clingy and smothering, making him slowly stop being flattered and wanting to get as far away from her as possible.
** Katie gets her own in the form of Dash Baxter as she's repulsed not just by hisbullying bullying, but how rude, dumb, and obnoxious he is.
** At first, Danny is flattered and very accepting of Katie being interested in him. As time went on, her interest in him becomes more clingy and smothering, making him slowly stop being flattered and wanting to get as far away from her as possible.
** Katie gets her own in the form of Dash Baxter as she's repulsed not just by his
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* AssholeVictim: Just like in the previous story, Katie transforms and goes after Dash for bullying Danny. Danny once again has trouble coming up with anything positive to say about Dash.
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* AssholeVictim: Just like in the previous story, Katie transforms and goes after Dash for bullying Danny. Danny once again has trouble coming up with anything positive to say about Dash. In fact, they are more upset about Katie transforming than about her attacking Dash.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Danny calls out Sam's refusal to even be nice to Katie when Sam's usually insistent on him helping people and doing the right thing with his powers. He also points out that Sam doesn't hate him despite knowing about Danny's potential to become Dark Danny, a monster even worse than Katie, but continues to vilify Katie based on her past actions even though she is genuinely trying to better herself. Sam only stubbornly says that [[DoubleStandard Katie's situation is different]].
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Sam's jealousy of Katie and refusal to address her feelings for Danny cause her to be this.
** Danny calls out Sam's refusal to even be nice to Katie when Sam's usually insistent on him helping people and doing the right thing with his powers. He also points out that Sam doesn't hate him despite knowing about Danny's potential to become Dark Danny, a monster even worse than Katie, but continues to vilify Katie based on her past actions even though she is genuinely trying to better herself. Sam only stubbornly says that [[DoubleStandard Katie's situation is different]].
** Danny calls out Sam's refusal to even be nice to Katie when Sam's usually insistent on him helping people and doing the right thing with his powers. He also points out that Sam doesn't hate him despite knowing about Danny's potential to become Dark Danny, a monster even worse than Katie, but continues to vilify Katie based on her past actions even though she is genuinely trying to better herself. Sam only stubbornly says that [[DoubleStandard Katie's situation is different]].
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** When Sam accuses Danny of only helping Katie for her good looks he reminds Sam that she hasn't showed the best judgment when it comes to dating either given how easily she fell for Gregor.
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** When Sam accuses Danny of only helping Katie for her good looks looks, he reminds Sam that she hasn't showed the best judgment when it comes to dating either either, given how easily she fell for Gregor.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Katie and Danny are more upset about the former transforming than about her attacking Dash.
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* PunnyName: Katie meets a therapist named Eri T. Shen (irritation). Katie thinks the name must be a joke.
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* PunnyName: Katie meets a therapist named Eri T. Shen (irritation). Katie She thinks the name must be a joke.
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* BadLiar: Dash tries to lie his way out of trouble for bothering Danny and Katie at the bowling alley, by telling the security guard he was saving Katie from the "loser" Danny but the guard doesn't believe him for a second since he saw Dash push Danny down just now and Katie already complained to the guard that Dash is a creep who was threatening her date Danny.
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* BrutalHonesty: Katie's very open about her hatred of Dash as she only considers him a waste of space.
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* BlatantLies: When Dash gets in trouble for harassing Danny and Katie at the bowling alley, he lies to the security guard by claiming he was saving Katie from the "loser" Danny but the guard doesn't believe him at all since he saw Dash push Danny down just now and Katie already told the guard that Dash is a creep who was threatening her date Danny.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Dash can get away with his bullying at school cause of favoritism but it isn't possible in public places.
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* BringMyBrownPants: Dash pees himself out of fear when monster Katie attacks him.
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** Danny also calls Sam out on getting mad at Katie for attacking Dash by reminding her that she's felt like attacking the bully in the past.
** When Sam accuses Danny of only helping Katie for her good looks he reminds Sam that she hasn't showed the best judgment when it comes to dating either given how easily she fell for Gregor.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Danny doesn't really have a rebuttal when Katie calls Dash a complete waste of space.
* KickTheSonOfABitch: Katie and Danny are more upset about the former transforming than about her attacking Dash.
** When Sam accuses Danny of only helping Katie for her good looks he reminds Sam that she hasn't showed the best judgment when it comes to dating either given how easily she fell for Gregor.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Danny doesn't really have a rebuttal when Katie calls Dash a complete waste of space.
* KickTheSonOfABitch: Katie and Danny are more upset about the former transforming than about her attacking Dash.
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* NiceGuy: Unlike Sam, Tucker is at least willing to give Katie a chance.
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* ReformedButRejected: Katie does make a sincere attempt to control her curse but Sam still refuses to have anything to do with her.
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** Katie gets her own in the form of Dash Baxter as she's repulsed not just by his bullying but how rude, dumb, and obnoxious he is.
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* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: Subverted, as Katie would pick Nice Guy Danny Fenton over Je-rk Jock Dash Baxter any day of the week.
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* DumbBlonde: Dash has blonde hair and is a DumbJock.
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* FutureLoser: Danny tells Katie that Dash bullies others because he knows he'll be this after high school so he's enjoying his glory days while they last and Katie just finds it pathetic that the Je-rk Jock isn't even trying to make something of his life.
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* HateAtFirstSight: Katie quickly grows to despise Dash during their first meeting after seeing how much of a jerk he is to Danny.
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** Dash gets thrown out of the bowling alley by security for harassing Danny and Katie.
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* AssholeVictim:Just like in the sequel, Katie transforms and goes after Dash for bullying Danny. Danny once again has trouble coming up with anything positive to say about Dash.
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* AssholeVictim:Just AssholeVictim: Just like in the sequel, previous story, Katie transforms and goes after Dash for bullying Danny. Danny once again has trouble coming up with anything positive to say about Dash.
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* NoSympathy: Sam couldn't care less about Katie's struggles with her powers and social life, even telling Danny they have no obligation to help her.
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* NoSympathy: NoSympathy:
** Sam couldn't care less about Katie's struggles with her powers and social life, even telling Danny they have no obligation to help her.
** Sam couldn't care less about Katie's struggles with her powers and social life, even telling Danny they have no obligation to help her.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Katie's parents call Tiffany out of her unhelpful treatment of Katie, after she returns home from school and confesses to morphing and almost attacking Dash.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Katie's parents call Tiffany out of on her unhelpful treatment of Katie, after she the latter returns home from school and confesses to morphing and almost attacking Dash.
