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* GoingNative: Kili has no choice but to adapt Orc customs, leading to some intense CultureShock.
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* GoingNative: Kili has no choice but to adapt Orc customs, leading to some intense CultureShock.CultureClash.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Just like in canon, Fili is extremely protective of Kili.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to copious amounts of character development, Kili transforms from a physically and emotionally immature child to a battle-hardened field commander. Understandably, he also TookALevelInCynicism while still retaining his ideals.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to copious amounts of character development, Kili transforms from a physically and emotionally immature child to a battle-hardened field commander. Understandably, he also TookALevelInCynicism while still retaining his ideals.ideals.
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As the Thorin and the company prepare to enter the forests of Mirkwood, Kili is captured by goblins while hunting alone. After the Company leaves him for dead, Kili is faced with a terrible choice: be executed by Azog and his band of brutish orc soldiers, or become one of them.
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As the Thorin and the company prepare to enter the forests of Mirkwood, Kili is captured by goblins while hunting alone. After the Company leaves him for dead, Kili is faced with a terrible choice: be executed by Azog and his band of brutish orc soldiers, or become one of them.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to copious amounts of character development, Kili transforms from physically and emotionally immature child to a battle-hardened field commander. Understandably, he also TookALevelInCynicism while still retaining his ideals.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to copious amounts of character development, Kili transforms from a physically and emotionally immature child to a battle-hardened field commander. Understandably, he also TookALevelInCynicism while still retaining his ideals.
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* SpoiledSweet: Kili is this in a sense. He's genuinely caring and good-natured, but years of being sheltered by his entire family has left him with no ability to deal with situations on his own. This doesn't last long.
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* TooDumbToLive: Kili's horrendous BreakTheCutie arc was all started by his deciding to sneak outside Beorn's home in the middle of the night to hunt rabbits. He still didn't deserve what gappened to him, though.
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* TooDumbToLive: Kili's horrendous BreakTheCutie arc was all started by his deciding to sneak outside Beorn's home in the middle of the night to hunt rabbits. He still didn't deserve what gappened happened to him, though.
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* GoingNative: Kili has no choice but to adapt Orc customs, leading to some intense CultureShock.
* SpoiledSweet: Kili is this in a sense. He's genuinely caring and good-natured, but years of being sheltered by his entire family has left him with no ability to deal with situations on his own.
* TooDumbToLive: Kili's horrendous BreakTheCutie arc was all started by his deciding to sneak outside Beorn's home in the middle of the night to hunt rabbits. He still didn't deserve what gappened to him, though.
* TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to copious amounts of character development, Kili transforms from physically and emotionally immature child to a battle-hardened field commander. Understandably, he also TookALevelInCynicism while still retaining his ideals.
* SpoiledSweet: Kili is this in a sense. He's genuinely caring and good-natured, but years of being sheltered by his entire family has left him with no ability to deal with situations on his own.
* TooDumbToLive: Kili's horrendous BreakTheCutie arc was all started by his deciding to sneak outside Beorn's home in the middle of the night to hunt rabbits. He still didn't deserve what gappened to him, though.
* TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to copious amounts of character development, Kili transforms from physically and emotionally immature child to a battle-hardened field commander. Understandably, he also TookALevelInCynicism while still retaining his ideals.
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* SpoiledSweet: Kili is this in a sense. He's genuinely caring and good-natured, but years of being sheltered by his entire family has left him with no ability to deal with situations on his
* TooDumbToLive:
*TooDumbToLive: Kili's horrendous BreakTheCutie arc was all started by his deciding to sneak outside Beorn's home in the middle of the night to hunt rabbits. He still didn't deserve what gappened to him, though.
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* GoingNative: Kili has no choice but to adapt Orc customs, leading to some intense CultureShock.
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* ToDumbToLive: Kili's horrendous BreakTheCutie arc was all started by his deciding to sneak outside Beorn's home in the middle of the night to hunt rabbits. He still didn't deserve what gappened to him, though.
* TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to copious amounts of character development, Kili transforms from physically and emotionally immature child to a battle-hardened field commander. Understandably, he also TookALevelInCynicism while still retaining his ideals.
* TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to copious amounts of character development, Kili transforms from physically and emotionally immature child to a battle-hardened field commander. Understandably, he also TookALevelInCynicism while still retaining his ideals.
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* CultureShock: Kili understandably has a great deal of difficulty adapting to Orc culture.
* SpoiledSweet: Kili is this in a sense. He's genuinely caring and good-natured, but years of being sheltered by his entire family has left him with no ability to deal with situations on his own.
* SpoiledSweet: Kili is this in a sense. He's genuinely caring and good-natured, but years of being sheltered by his entire family has left him with no ability to deal with situations on his own.
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* SpoiledSweet: Kili is this in a sense. He's genuinely caring and good-natured, but years of being sheltered by his entire family has left him with no ability to deal with situations on his
*ToDumbToLive: Kili's horrendous BreakTheCutie arc was all started by his deciding to sneak outside Beorn's home in the middle of the night to hunt rabbits. He still didn't deserve what gappened to him, though.
*TookALevelInBadass: Thanks to copious amounts of character development, Kili transforms from physically and emotionally immature child to a battle-hardened field commander. Understandably, he also TookALevelInCynicism while still retaining his ideals.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Just like in canon, Fili is extremely protective of Kili.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Azog's chief method of interrogation. Kili still bears the scars from his first session.
* FishOutOfWater: Kili understandably has a great deal of difficulty adapting to Orc culture.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Azog's chief method of interrogation. Kili still bears the scars from his first session.
* FishOutOfWater: Kili understandably has a great deal of difficulty adapting to Orc culture.
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*SpoiledSweet: Kili is this in a sense. He's genuinely caring and good-natured, but years of being sheltered by his entire family has left him with no ability to deal with situations on his own.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Just like in canon, Fili is extremely protective of Kili.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Azog's chief method of interrogation. Kili still bears the scars from his first session.
FishOutOfWater: Kili understandably has a great deal of difficulty adapting to Orc culture.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Azog's chief method of interrogation. Kili still bears the scars from his first session.
FishOutOfWater: Kili understandably has a great deal of difficulty adapting to Orc culture.
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As the Thorin and the company prepare to enter the forests of Mirkwood, Kíli is captured by goblins while hunting alone. After the Company leaves him for dead, Kíli is faced with a terrible choice: be executed by Azog and his band of brutish orc soldiers, or become one of them. ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/651331 Frailty]]'' is part of a series called Tracing Lines by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Drenagon/pseuds/Flollius Flollius.]]
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As the Thorin and the company prepare to enter the forests of Mirkwood, Kíli Kili is captured by goblins while hunting alone. After the Company leaves him for dead, Kíli Kili is faced with a terrible choice: be executed by Azog and his band of brutish orc soldiers, or become one of them. them.
''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/651331 Frailty]]'' is part of a series called Tracing Lines by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Drenagon/pseuds/Flollius Flollius.]]
''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/651331 Frailty]]'' is part of a series called Tracing Lines by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Drenagon/pseuds/Flollius Flollius.]]
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*BigBrotherInstinct: Just like in canon, Fili is extremely protective of Kili.
*ColdBloodedTorture: Azog's chief method of interrogation. Kili still bears the scars from his first session.
FishOutOfWater: Kili understandably has a great deal of difficulty adapting to Orc culture.
*BigBrotherInstinct: Just like in canon, Fili is extremely protective of Kili.
*ColdBloodedTorture: Azog's chief method of interrogation. Kili still bears the scars from his first session.
FishOutOfWater: Kili understandably has a great deal of difficulty adapting to Orc culture.
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As the Thorin and the company prepare to enter the forests of Mirkwood, Kíli is captured by goblins while hunting alone. After the Company leaves him for dead, Kíli is faced with a terrible choice: be executed by Azog and his band of brutish orc soldiers, or become one of them. ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/651331 Frailty]]'' is part of a series called Tracing Lines based by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Drenagon/pseuds/Flollius Flollius.]]
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As the Thorin and the company prepare to enter the forests of Mirkwood, Kíli is captured by goblins while hunting alone. After the Company leaves him for dead, Kíli is faced with a terrible choice: be executed by Azog and his band of brutish orc soldiers, or become one of them. ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/651331 Frailty]]'' is part of a series called Tracing Lines based by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Drenagon/pseuds/Flollius Flollius.]]
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/651331 Frailty]]'' is a ''Film/TheHobbit Hobbit'' fanfiction by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Drenagon/pseuds/Flollius Flollius.]] As the Thorin and the company prepare to enter the forests of Mirkwood, Kíli is captured by goblins while hunting alone. After the Company leaves him for dead, Kíli is faced with a terrible choice: be executed by Azog and his band of brutish orc soldiers, or become one of them.
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As the Thorin and the company prepare to enter the forests of Mirkwood, Kíli is captured by goblins while hunting alone. After the Company leaves him for dead, Kíli is faced with a terrible choice: be executed by Azog and his band of brutish orc soldiers, or become one of them. ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/651331 Frailty]]'' is part of a ''Film/TheHobbit Hobbit'' fanfiction series called Tracing Lines based by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Drenagon/pseuds/Flollius Flollius.]] As the Thorin and the company prepare to enter the forests of Mirkwood, Kíli is captured by goblins while hunting alone. After the Company leaves him for dead, Kíli is faced with a terrible choice: be executed by Azog and his band of brutish orc soldiers, or become one of them.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/651331 Frailty]]'' is a ''Film/TheHobbit'' fanfiction by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Drenagon/pseuds/Flollius Flollius.]] As the Thorin and the company prepare to enter the forests of Mirkwood, Kíli is captured by goblins while hunting alone. After the Company leaves him for dead, Kíli is faced with a terrible choice: be executed by Azog and his band of brutish orc soldiers, or become one of them.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/651331 Frailty]]'' is a ''Film/TheHobbit'' ''Film/TheHobbit Hobbit'' fanfiction by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Drenagon/pseuds/Flollius Flollius.]] As the Thorin and the company prepare to enter the forests of Mirkwood, Kíli is captured by goblins while hunting alone. After the Company leaves him for dead, Kíli is faced with a terrible choice: be executed by Azog and his band of brutish orc soldiers, or become one of them.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/651331 Frailty]]'' is a ''Film/TheHobbit'' fanfiction by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Drenagon/pseuds/Flollius Flollius.]] As the Thorin and the company prepare to enter the forests of Mirkwood, Kíli is captured by goblins while hunting alone. After the Company leaves him for dead, Kíli is faced with a terrible choice: be executed by Azog and his band of brutish orc soldiers, or become one of them.
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