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** Chapter 6 begins with a description of Hayate making breakfast for her knights, in which HilarityEnsues when she "punishes" Vita. It ends with [[spoiler: Hayate being {{Mind Rape}}d into thinking her knights are dead and the city is destroyed. Also contains a ShoutOut to WesternAnimation/TheLionKing1994.]]
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** Chapter 6 begins with a description of Hayate making breakfast for her knights, in which HilarityEnsues results in hilarity when she "punishes" Vita. It ends with [[spoiler: Hayate being {{Mind Rape}}d into thinking her knights are dead and the city is destroyed. Also contains a ShoutOut to WesternAnimation/TheLionKing1994.''WesternAnimation/TheLionKing1994''.]]
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: [[MamaBear Arika's]] punishment of Kurt Godel for attempting to harm Negi. Stripped of all his personal power and demoted to being Arika's secretary his office and personal quarters are relocated to next door to Arika's personal quarters. His paperwork is charmed so it can only be read at night and the wall between Kurt and Arika's rooms is deliberatly thin so he can hear everything that goes on at night. And to top it off, if he attempts to [[ADateWithRosiePalms relieve himself]]...
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: [[MamaBear Arika's]] punishment of Kurt Godel for attempting to harm Negi. Stripped of all his personal power and demoted to being Arika's secretary his office and personal quarters are relocated to next door to Arika's personal quarters. His paperwork is charmed so it can only be read at night and the wall between Kurt and Arika's rooms is deliberatly thin so he can hear everything that goes on at night. And to top it off, if he attempts to [[ADateWithRosiePalms relieve himself]]...himself...
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* FiveManBand: The girls who go to Uminari to help Negi:
** TheHero: Asuna,
** TheLancer: Ayaka
** TheSmartGuy: Nodoka, relatively speaking
** TheBigGuy: Setsuna
** TheChick: Konoka
** TheHero: Asuna,
** TheLancer: Ayaka
** TheSmartGuy: Nodoka, relatively speaking
** TheBigGuy: Setsuna
** TheChick: Konoka
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* AndNowForSomethingCompletelyDifferent: In a meta example, someone else ghostwrites Chapter 13 as a part of the All Purpose Negima Fanfiction Thread's shenanigans.
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Sometime after the confrontation with Cosmo Entelecheia and successfully locating his parents, [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Negi Springfield]] decides that he needs some time away from Mahora to properly plan his life out, freed as he is from the need to worry about the fates of his family and students. Thus, he leaves in the middle of the night, accompanied only by Chamo, for a new school in an entirely different part of Japan. Here, he hopes to settle down for a ''normal'' year of teaching to think things through.
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Sometime after the confrontation with Cosmo Entelecheia and successfully locating his parents, [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima [[Manga/NegimaMagisterNegiMagi Negi Springfield]] decides that he needs some time away from Mahora to properly plan his life out, freed as he is from the need to worry about the fates of his family and students. Thus, he leaves in the middle of the night, accompanied only by Chamo, for a new school in an entirely different part of Japan. Here, he hopes to settle down for a ''normal'' year of teaching to think things through.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: An In-universe example: Chamo's original plan for revealing Earth magic to the TSAB involved bringing everyone to Mahorafest. Any fan of Manga/MahouSenseiNegima knows that would have been a recipe for disaster.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: An In-universe example: Chamo's original plan for revealing Earth magic to the TSAB involved bringing everyone to Mahorafest. Any fan of Manga/MahouSenseiNegima ''Manga/NegimaMagisterNegiMagi'' knows that would have been a recipe for disaster.
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Unfortunately, the story seems to be a DeadFic.
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Unfortunately, the story seems to be a DeadFic.
DeadFic as the last update was May 22, 2014.
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DeadFic.
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Unfortunately, the story seems to be a DeadFic; ''none'' of the author's works have been updated since early-mid 2014, and any attempts to contact the author are met with utter silence.
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Unfortunately, the story seems to be a DeadFic; ''none'' of the author's works have been updated since early-mid 2014, and any attempts to contact the author are met with utter DeadFic.silence.
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* MegaCrossover: Originally just between Nanoha and Negima. Now includes WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures, [[Franchise/ShinMegamiTenseiPersona Persona]], Franchise/StarTrek, Anime/TenchiMuyo, Manga/TokyoMewMew and most likely more to come.
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* MegaCrossover: Originally just between Nanoha and Negima. Now includes WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures, [[Franchise/ShinMegamiTenseiPersona Persona]], Franchise/{{Persona}}, Franchise/StarTrek, Anime/TenchiMuyo, Manga/TokyoMewMew and most likely more to come.
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** Chapter 6 begins with a description of Hayate making breakfast for her knights, in which HilarityEnsues when she "punishes" Vita. It ends with [[spoiler: Hayate being {{Mind Rape}}d into thinking her knights are dead and the city is destroyed. Also contains a ShoutOut to Disney/TheLionKing.]]
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** Chapter 6 begins with a description of Hayate making breakfast for her knights, in which HilarityEnsues when she "punishes" Vita. It ends with [[spoiler: Hayate being {{Mind Rape}}d into thinking her knights are dead and the city is destroyed. Also contains a ShoutOut to Disney/TheLionKing.WesternAnimation/TheLionKing1994.]]
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** Chapter 6, [[spoiler:Hayate has just been mind raped into seeing everything she loves die. Her cries for help are the same ones Simba from Disney/TheLionKing shout, word-for-word, after Mufasa dies.]]
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** Chapter 6, [[spoiler:Hayate has just been mind raped into seeing everything she loves die. Her cries for help are the same ones Simba from Disney/TheLionKing WesternAnimation/TheLionKing1994 shout, word-for-word, after Mufasa dies.]]
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* BadassBoast: Negi, during his [[spoiler:rescue of Hayate.]]
-->'''Negi''': I am Negi Springfield, offspring of the Thousand Master and the Princess of Ostia. I have been trained by the greatest masters of combat and magic, and have never failed to impress them. I have faced demons, madmen, cyborgs, and gods themselves, all for the sake of others. I have traveled the world in search of one man thought dead. ''And I found him.'' You think the darkness scares me? You think I am just some child? You think I would back away from anyone who would ''hurt my students?'' '''''JUST WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK I AM?'''''
-->'''Negi''': I am Negi Springfield, offspring of the Thousand Master and the Princess of Ostia. I have been trained by the greatest masters of combat and magic, and have never failed to impress them. I have faced demons, madmen, cyborgs, and gods themselves, all for the sake of others. I have traveled the world in search of one man thought dead. ''And I found him.'' You think the darkness scares me? You think I am just some child? You think I would back away from anyone who would ''hurt my students?'' '''''JUST WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK I AM?'''''
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* BadassBoast: BadassBoast:
** Negi, during his [[spoiler:rescue of Hayate.]]
-->'''Negi''': --->'''Negi''': I am Negi Springfield, offspring of the Thousand Master and the Princess of Ostia. I have been trained by the greatest masters of combat and magic, and have never failed to impress them. I have faced demons, madmen, cyborgs, and gods themselves, all for the sake of others. I have traveled the world in search of one man thought dead. ''And I found him.'' You think the darkness scares me? You think I am just some child? You think I would back away from anyone who would ''hurt my students?'' '''''JUST WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK I AM?'''''
** Negi, during his [[spoiler:rescue of Hayate.]]
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-->"I have fought demons, monsters, robots, and summons, I have faced down the darkest depths and rescued my precious ones from its grasp. There is no obstacle I cannot surpass, no foe I that can outrun my shot. I am Takamachi Nanoha, [[spoiler:[[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial AND I AM NOT]] [[NoseBleed A PERVERT!]]]]"
*** Damn you, puberty!
*** Damn you, puberty!
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*** Damn you, puberty!
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-->'''Nanoha''': "Hang on, Negi-sensei. You won't be alone anymore. Divine Bus-"
-->'''Amy''': "Nanoha-chan, what do you think you're doing?"
-->'''Amy''': "Nanoha-chan, what do you think you're doing?"
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-->'''Nanoha''': "Hang on, Negi-sensei. You won't be alone anymore. Divine Bus-"
-->'''Amy''':Bus-"\\
'''Amy''': "Nanoha-chan, what do you think you're doing?"
-->'''Amy''':
'''Amy''': "Nanoha-chan, what do you think you're doing?"
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--->'''Yuuno''': "Well, as it turns out, the guard appointed to us thought that [[OlderThanTheyLook Chrono]] was... cute."
--->'''Chrono''': "Stupid bitch tried to [[MarshmallowHell smother me]]!"
--->'''Chrono''': "Stupid bitch tried to [[MarshmallowHell smother me]]!"
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'''Chrono''': "Stupid bitch tried to [[MarshmallowHell smother me]]!"
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-->'''Alyssa''': Oh no you don't.
-->'''Nanoha''': I don't what?
-->'''Alyssa''': You are ''not'' blowing him up just to make friends with him.
-->'''Nanoha''': I, I don't do that!
-->'''Nanoha''': I don't what?
-->'''Alyssa''': You are ''not'' blowing him up just to make friends with him.
-->'''Nanoha''': I, I don't do that!
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-->'''Alyssa''': Oh no you don't.
-->'''Nanoha''':don't.\\
'''Nanoha''': I don'twhat?
-->'''Alyssa''':what?\\
'''Alyssa''': You are ''not'' blowing him up just to make friends withhim.
-->'''Nanoha''':him.\\
'''Nanoha''': I, I don't do that!
-->'''Nanoha''':
'''Nanoha''': I don't
-->'''Alyssa''':
'''Alyssa''': You are ''not'' blowing him up just to make friends with
-->'''Nanoha''':
'''Nanoha''': I, I don't do that!
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* CrossoverShip: [[spoiler:Nanoha seems to be slowly [[HotForTeacher falling for Negi]].]][[invoked]]
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* CrossoverShip: CrossoverCouple: [[spoiler:Nanoha seems to be slowly [[HotForTeacher falling for Negi]].]][[invoked]]
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** In the Nanoha As Manga, it's mentioned that Nanoha and Fate are complete garbage at language class, thus resulting in Negi having to tutor them.
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* CrossOver: With MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha, naturally.
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* CrossOver: With MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha, ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'', naturally.
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* GenreSavvy: {{Lampshaded}}. Chamo is fully aware that trouble will follow Negi wherever he goes. He also knows that at the first sign of trouble, Negi will wear himself to the bone with extra training.
** Nagi is aware that Jack Rakan will be far more effective than the group of palace guards Arika wanted to send for Negi's protection.
** Nagi is aware that Jack Rakan will be far more effective than the group of palace guards Arika wanted to send for Negi's protection.
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** One breaks the fourth wall when Alyssa {{Lampshades}} the absurdity of having a ten-year-old boy teaching school. This results in KenAkamatsu having to stall the next release of the manga.
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** One breaks the fourth wall when Alyssa {{Lampshades}} the absurdity of having a ten-year-old boy teaching school. This results in KenAkamatsu Creator/KenAkamatsu having to stall the next release of the manga.
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** Alyssa and Suzuka mention a garden party crashed by the TokyoMewMew.
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** Alyssa and Suzuka mention a garden party crashed by the TokyoMewMew.Manga/TokyoMewMew.
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** Chao and Hakase are implied to have helped [[TokyoMewMew Ryou Shirogane]] with the Mew Project.
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** Chao and Hakase are implied to have helped [[TokyoMewMew [[Manga/TokyoMewMew Ryou Shirogane]] with the Mew Project.
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** In Chapter 26, [[TokyoMewMew Zakuro Fujiwara]] is shown singing on a talkshow with [[VideoGame/{{Persona4}} Rise Kujikawa]]
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** In Chapter 26, [[TokyoMewMew [[Manga/TokyoMewMew Zakuro Fujiwara]] is shown singing on a talkshow with [[VideoGame/{{Persona4}} Rise Kujikawa]]
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* MegaCrossover: Originally just between Nanoha and Negima. Now includes WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures, [[Franchise/ShinMegamiTenseiPersona Persona]], Franchise/StarTrek, Anime/TenchiMuyo, TokyoMewMew and most likely more to come.
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* MegaCrossover: Originally just between Nanoha and Negima. Now includes WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures, [[Franchise/ShinMegamiTenseiPersona Persona]], Franchise/StarTrek, Anime/TenchiMuyo, TokyoMewMew Manga/TokyoMewMew and most likely more to come.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: An In-universe example: Chamo's original plan for revealing Earth magic to the TSAB involved bringing everyone to Mahorafest. Any fan of MahouSenseiNegima knows that would have been a recipe for disaster.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: An In-universe example: Chamo's original plan for revealing Earth magic to the TSAB involved bringing everyone to Mahorafest. Any fan of MahouSenseiNegima Manga/MahouSenseiNegima knows that would have been a recipe for disaster.
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* TheCameo: The girls of TenchiMuyo all work as maids in Alyssa's employ.
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* TheCameo: The girls of TenchiMuyo Anime/TenchiMuyo all work as maids in Alyssa's employ.
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* MegaCrossover: Originally just between Nanoha and Negima. Now includes JackieChanAdventures, [[Franchise/ShinMegamiTenseiPersona Persona]], Franchise/StarTrek, Anime/TenchiMuyo, TokyoMewMew and most likely more to come.
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* MegaCrossover: Originally just between Nanoha and Negima. Now includes JackieChanAdventures, WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures, [[Franchise/ShinMegamiTenseiPersona Persona]], Franchise/StarTrek, Anime/TenchiMuyo, TokyoMewMew and most likely more to come.
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** The side story ''Parallel Invesigations'' they are expected to be main characters along with the [[Series/{{NCIS}} Gibbs's Team]], [[JackieChanAdventures Section 13]], and several OCs.
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** The side story ''Parallel Invesigations'' they are expected to be main characters along with the [[Series/{{NCIS}} Gibbs's Team]], [[JackieChanAdventures [[WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures Section 13]], and several OCs.
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** [[spoiler: The side story has [[Series/{{NCIS}} Team Gibbs]], [[JackieChanAdventures Section 13, along with Uncle and Tohru]] among others investigating the cause and perpetrators.]]
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** [[spoiler: The side story has [[Series/{{NCIS}} Team Gibbs]], [[JackieChanAdventures [[WesternAnimation/JackieChanAdventures Section 13, along with Uncle and Tohru]] among others investigating the cause and perpetrators.]]
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* HandGagging: Nodoka uses this to stop Konoka from explaining about Pactios.
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* PuttingAHandOverHisMouth: Nodoka uses this to stop Konoka from explaining about Pactios.
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** A far less depressing one happens in the next chapter when Negi [[spoiler: channels his inner [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina]] during the aforementioned BigDamnHeroes moment]]
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** A far less depressing one happens in the next chapter when Negi [[spoiler: channels his inner [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina]] during the aforementioned BigDamnHeroes moment]]
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** A side story adds the [[Series/NCIS Gibbs's team]] to the mix.
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* FollowTheLeader: Zephyr-Fiction, the author, freely admits that this story is based off of ShadowCrystalMage's similar fic ''Overlords and Overkill''. However, this is PlayedWith because he and Zephyr not only have routine correspondence about their stories, but Mage has also freely accepted the fact that he inspired Zephyr in the first place.
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* FollowTheLeader: Zephyr-Fiction, the author, freely admits that this story is based off of ShadowCrystalMage's Creator/ShadowCrystalMage's similar fic ''Overlords and Overkill''. However, this is PlayedWith because he and Zephyr not only have routine correspondence about their stories, but Mage has also freely accepted the fact that he inspired Zephyr in the first place.
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Sometime after the confrontation with Cosmo Entelecheia and successfully locating his parents, [[{{Negima}} Negi Springfield]] decides that he needs some time away from Mahora to properly plan his life out, freed as he is from the need to worry about the fates of his family and students. Thus, he leaves in the middle of the night, accompanied only by Chamo, for a new school in an entirely different part of Japan. Here, he hopes to settle down for a ''normal'' year of teaching to think things through.
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Sometime after the confrontation with Cosmo Entelecheia and successfully locating his parents, [[{{Negima}} [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima Negi Springfield]] decides that he needs some time away from Mahora to properly plan his life out, freed as he is from the need to worry about the fates of his family and students. Thus, he leaves in the middle of the night, accompanied only by Chamo, for a new school in an entirely different part of Japan. Here, he hopes to settle down for a ''normal'' year of teaching to think things through.
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He's gone to [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Uminari City]], three very powerful mages are part of his new class, and the TSAB is finally figuring out that maybe Nanoha and Hayate ''aren't'' the only mages of note on the planet.
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He's gone to [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha [[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Uminari City]], three very powerful mages are part of his new class, and the TSAB is finally figuring out that maybe Nanoha and Hayate ''aren't'' the only mages of note on the planet.
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* MegaCrossover: Originally just between Nanoha and Negima. Now includes JackieChanAdventures, {{Persona}}, StarTrek, TenhiMuyo, TokyoMewMew and most likely more to come.
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* MegaCrossover: Originally just between Nanoha and Negima. Now includes JackieChanAdventures, {{Persona}}, StarTrek, TenhiMuyo, [[Franchise/ShinMegamiTenseiPersona Persona]], Franchise/StarTrek, Anime/TenchiMuyo, TokyoMewMew and most likely more to come.