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** Locker [[spoiler:burns all the possessions he can't take with him into hiding, so that they can't be used to scry for him. His past experience as a Ministry Obliviator has resulted in him knowing quite a bit about the capabilities and limitations of magical forensics.]]
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** Locker Lockhart [[spoiler:burns all the possessions he can't take with him into hiding, so that they can't be used to scry for him. His past experience as a Ministry Obliviator has resulted in him knowing quite a bit about the capabilities and limitations of magical forensics.]]
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* BestServedCold: It takes ''years'' before [[spoiler:Hermione finally returns home and is snatched by the Malfoys' hired goons, and before it happens, Dumbledore has delivered a stern warning to Lucius against threatening any more students, in the aftermath of the Diary. Nonetheless, Narcissa is determined that their family ''will'' be avenged for Draco's [[GroinAttack male injury]].]]
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* {{Revenge}}: Severus Snape gains a rather nasty and twisted smile when [[spoiler:his participation in the horcrux interrogation ritual, made visual by his subconscious, takes the form of pulling a capstan to hold Riddle's tremendous form immobile while Dumbledore lays into Riddle with an equally gigantic sledgehammer.]]
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* {{Revenge}}: Severus Snape gains a rather nasty and twisted smile when [[spoiler:his participation in the horcrux interrogation ritual, made visual by his subconscious, takes the form of pulling a capstan to hold Riddle's tremendous form immobile while Dumbledore lays into Riddle with an equally gigantic sledgehammer. While Snape would have enjoyed personally wielding the hammer, he's nonetheless quite pleased with his role.]]
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* InvoluntaryShapeshifting: The Weasley twins prank on Platform 9¾ converted virtually all of the students and hundreds of adults into either Fred or George via a contagion polyjuice potion with a lunar trigger. Snape tells them that had they made the potion more potent or even were a bit wealthier, they would've had a whole school full of Were-Weasleys.
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* InvoluntaryShapeshifting: The Weasley twins twins' prank on Platform 9¾ converted [[spoiler:converted virtually all of the students and hundreds of adults into either Fred or George via a contagion polyjuice potion with a lunar trigger. Snape tells them that had they made the potion more potent or even were a bit wealthier, wealthier (thus using higher quality ingredients), then the magic would have lingered enough to be reinforced by the next full moon, and they would've had a whole school full of Were-Weasleys.]]
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* InvoluntaryShapeshifting: The Weasley twins prank on Platform 9¾ converted virtually all of the students and hundreds of adults into either Fred or George via a contagion polyjuice potion with a lunar trigger. Snape tells them that had they made the potion more potent or even were a bit wealthier, they would've had a whole school full of Were-Weasleys.
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* DeadlyGas: A mis-brewed metal cleaning potion can be caustic enough to eat its way through the desk and the legs of the student responsible, but its more insidious danger is the noxious fumes it would produce. [[spoiler:When Quirrell deliberately uses such a brew as a weapon, there's a snippet from the victims' point of view as they're burned and blinded and finally expire.]]
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* SteppingOutForAQuickCupOfCoffee: Amelia Bones literally announces that she's getting a coffee, then proceeds to explain what's in the evidence folder currently on the desk, and that she can't legally share it, but that it's just a temporary copy and doesn't seem worth taking to the incinerator on the other side of the building, so she's inclined to leave it there while she takes probably no less than seven minutes to brew a pot.
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* SteppingOutForAQuickCupOfCoffee: Amelia Bones literally announces that she's getting a coffee, then proceeds to explain what's in the evidence folder currently on the desk, and that she can't legally share it, but that it's just a temporary copy and doesn't seem worth taking to the incinerator on the other side of the building, so she's inclined to leave it there while she takes probably no less than seven minutes to brew a pot. [[spoiler:Harry still has to find a way to obtain it without the hidden observers being forced to notice, so he covers it with his jacket, supposedly to avoid temptation, then makes a copy (still underneath the jacket) transfigured into a duplicate of his Gringotts draft book, which he claims must have fallen out of a pocket, and so it's handed over to him.]]
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* SteppingOutForAQuickCupOfCoffee: Amelia Bones literally announces that she's getting a coffee, then proceeds to explain what's in the evidence folder currently on the desk, and that she can't legally share it, but that it's just a temporary copy and doesn't seem worth taking to the incinerator on the other side of the building, so she's inclined to leave it there while she takes probably no less than seven minutes to brew a pot.
--> '''Amelia:''' But I would be obliged to investigate should I encounter any reason to suspect you had read or copied that information. Can I trust that I will not find any?
--> '''Amelia:''' But I would be obliged to investigate should I encounter any reason to suspect you had read or copied that information. Can I trust that I will not find any?
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* PercussiveTherapy: Harry's first experience with venting really ''substantial'' amounts of anger concludes with him biting and clawing and flaming his way through a substantial fraction of a mountain, until he is finally calm enough to plot serious, effective, constructive revenge.
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--> '''Harry:''' It was your first time; you did really well by just not freezing. No one's going to fault you for only winging the second one. I'm sure you'll get better!
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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: Kingsley Shacklebolt promises that although it's normal to feel terrible about your first kill, it was entirely justified in this case. Harry, on the other hand, is congratulatory, and doesn't even understand why someone would feel bad about killing someone who thoroughly deserved it.
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* ImmoralJournalist: Rita Skeeter [[spoiler:uses her beetle form to sneak into the DMLE and learn about the top secret raids on the Syndicate, then publishes the scoop on the front page of the Daily Prophet. The fact that the Syndicate is now warned and will cover its tracks, dooming hundreds or perhaps thousands of slaves who might have been saved, doesn't trouble her a bit.]]
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* TranquilFury: Upon learning that [[spoiler:Hermione has been kidnapped]], Harry discovers that he's capable of putting anger on hold to become icily calm, a predator watching and waiting for the precisely correct moment to pounce, his gaze cold and hard enough that even Professor Snape is uneasy. In that state he can be patient for days. However, he only gets one chance at cracking the seal, at which point he goes from tranquil to UnstoppableRage.
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* DestroyTheEvidence: [[spoiler:Lockhart burns all the possessions he can't take with him into hiding, so that they can't be used to scry for him. His past experience as a Ministry Obliviator has resulted in him knowing quite a bit about the capabilities and limitations of magical forensics.]]
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** Locker [[spoiler:burns all the possessions he can't take with him into hiding, so that they can't be used to scry for him. His past experience as a Ministry Obliviator has resulted in him knowing quite a bit about the capabilities and limitations of magical forensics.]]]]
** When there's no time to properly cover things up before nonmagical investigators arrive, [[spoiler:Dumbledore triggers a landslide to obliterate the site of the recently drained nexus]].
** Locker [[spoiler:burns all the possessions he can't take with him into hiding, so that they can't be used to scry for him. His past experience as a Ministry Obliviator has resulted in him knowing quite a bit about the capabilities and limitations of magical forensics.
** When there's no time to properly cover things up before nonmagical investigators arrive, [[spoiler:Dumbledore triggers a landslide to obliterate the site of the recently drained nexus]].
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* PhlebotinumOverload: The Hogwarts staff place sensors all over Harry's body before he drains the Stonehenge nexus, in an attempt to better understand the process. However, most of them -- especially the ones closest to the point of contact -- are instantly vaporized when the discharge occurs, while the few survivors are heavily damaged.
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* ExplosiveOverclocking: Harry actually has very good control of his magic, relative to how much of it there is. But there is just ''so much'' that he greatly struggles to use it. His levitation charms break the sound barrier, his transfigured needles look more like construction equipment, and his broomstick shoots off and buries itself into a grassy knoll before bursting into flames.
--> It quickly became apparent that Harry was suffering control problems to a degree that Septima Vector declared to be 'epic'.
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* PhlebotinumOverload: Harry actually has very good control of his magic, relative to how much of it there is. But there is just ''so much'' that he greatly struggles to use it. His levitation charms break the sound barrier, his transfigured needles look more like construction equipment, and his broomstick shoots off and buries itself into a grassy knoll before bursting into flames.
--> It quickly became apparent that Harry was suffering control problems to a degree that Septima Vector declared to be 'epic'.
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* StealingFromTheTill: ''Technically'' the contractor who builds the access to the Seven Sisters nexus could be said to be regularly embezzling funds from the jobs he does, since he over-reports his costs and pockets the difference. However, the reason he does it is because his low costs are a result of subtly applied magic, which of course he can't accurately report to non-magical employers. If he were to bid for work based on his actual overheads, he would either be laughed at, or investigated with suspicion (which would not be good for secrecy).
--> No, he'd had no choice but to reluctantly pocket the excess from those fat, juicy public works contracts, for Confederate security; it was his patriotic duty! And if fulfilling his solemn duty to his tribe and nation just happened to make both him and his men quite rich in the process... well that was a hardship he would just have to endure.
--> No, he'd had no choice but to reluctantly pocket the excess from those fat, juicy public works contracts, for Confederate security; it was his patriotic duty! And if fulfilling his solemn duty to his tribe and nation just happened to make both him and his men quite rich in the process... well that was a hardship he would just have to endure.
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* SuperScream: Harry can growl loudly enough to knock squirrels out of trees -- which would be funny, apart from when Suze was caught in it and burst her eardrums.
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* UriahGambit: [[spoiler:When launching the auction raid, Amelia Bones privately instructs Kingsley Shacklebolt that "Good Housekeeping" -- a top secret operation to remove double agents -- is in effect. Despite the Aurors' excellent enchanted armour, the raid takes a casualty...]]
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* UriahGambit: [[spoiler:When launching the auction raid, Amelia Bones privately instructs Kingsley Shacklebolt that "Good Housekeeping" -- a top secret operation to remove double agents -- is in effect. Despite Amelia Bones later reflects that she lost two good officers on that raid, although the Aurors' excellent enchanted armour, the raid takes a casualty...]]official record says sixteen; "Only two of those were ''good'' officers."]]
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* RevengeByProxy: After Ron intervenes in a conflict between Hermione and Draco, [[spoiler:the Malfoys mistakenly get it into their heads that Hermione is Ron's girlfriend, and since attacking the Burrow directly is difficult, while attacking a non-magical home is easy, they decide that the start of their revenge for the [[GroinAttack injury to Draco's manhood]] will be to kidnap Hermione and auction her off to the black markets.]]
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* UriahGambit: [[spoiler:When launching the auction raid, Amelia Bones privately instructs Kingsley Shacklebolt that "Good Housekeeping" -- a top secret operation to remove double agents -- is in effect. Despite the Aurors' excellent enchanted armour, the raid takes a casualty...]]
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* FalseFriend: Su Li [[spoiler:is a somewhat mixed case. She is absolutely out to use and manipulate whoever she needs to in order to complete her mission, and the reason she befriends Hermione is simply because Hermione is important to Harry. However, she doesn't have any specific antipathy toward Hermione, either, and actually respects her intelligence and friendliness, while having no fear that Hermione will threaten her designs on Harry, so she considers it no hardship to reach out and be genuinely helpful.]]
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** Harry watches Jurassic Park, and the sight of the T-Rex makes him drool. He's left wondering whether it's actually possible to respect dinosaurs from amber, because they look mouthwatering.
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* ObstructiveBureaucrat: Vice-Chairman Slackhammer uses bureaucratic delay for a good cause. [[spoiler:He intentionally sends Harry notice of Hermione's kidnapping and rescue in a way that guarantees it won't be delivered promptly, marking it urgent but having it placed on the desk of someone not immediately in the office. That way, Harry won't cut his vital mission short to rush back, but he also won't be furious about being kept in the dark.]]
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* HeadDesk: Professor Snape realizes that he could have [[spoiler:enlisted Harry to crush the steel they're carrying so it would require less expanded space]], and promptly starts banging his head on the steering wheel -- resulting in a series of honks that [[NarrativeProfanityFilter obscure the expletives in his tirade]].
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* BattleCouple: Among goblins, a bar fight at each other's side is a very romantic date.
--> '''Snickersnack:''' Back to back against the whole place. We beat everyone there.
--> '''Snickersnack:''' Back to back against the whole place. We beat everyone there.
