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* TooDumbToLive: Everyone trying to pull off a [[spoiler:Gyle Groster]] Plot, which consist in stealing King's Landing and it's surrounding lands from the King while somehow believing that you'll be allow to remain a bannerman without consequence. [[spoiler: Surprisingly, more this had been attempted on multiple occasions.]]
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* TooDumbToLive: Everyone trying to pull off a [[spoiler:Gyle Groster]] Plot, which consist in Plot by stealing King's Landing and it's its surrounding lands from the King while somehow believing that you'll be allow to remain a bannerman without consequence. consequences. [[spoiler: Surprisingly, more this multiple such attempts had been attempted on multiple occasions.made.]]
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Instead of dying in 133AC from the Winter Fever, [[spoiler:Queen Alicent in 108AC from greyscale]].
* DragonRider: Obvious with the setting. Of the siblings, Daemon, Rhaenys, Elaerys, Aegon, Maegon and Valerion started the story as dragon riders. [[spoiler: Laenara quickly joins them, while Elaerys lose his due to an injury his mount sustained during a battle.]]
* DragonRider: Obvious with the setting. Of the siblings, Daemon, Rhaenys, Elaerys, Aegon, Maegon and Valerion started the story as dragon riders. [[spoiler: Laenara quickly joins them, while Elaerys lose his due to an injury his mount sustained during a battle.]]
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Instead of dying in 133AC from the Winter Fever, [[spoiler:Queen Alicent died in 108AC from greyscale]].
** Instead of surviving past 131AC, [[spoiler:Silverwing died in the Stepstones in 108AC from wounds received in the Battle of Dark Den]].
* DragonRider: Obvious with the setting. Of the siblings, Daemon, Rhaenys, Elaerys, Aegon, Maegon and Valerion started the story as dragon riders. [[spoiler: Laenara quickly joins them, while Elaeryslose loses his due to an injury his mount sustained during a battle.]]
** Instead of surviving past 131AC, [[spoiler:Silverwing died in the Stepstones in 108AC from wounds received in the Battle of Dark Den]].
* DragonRider: Obvious with the setting. Of the siblings, Daemon, Rhaenys, Elaerys, Aegon, Maegon and Valerion started the story as dragon riders. [[spoiler: Laenara quickly joins them, while Elaerys
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Instead of dying in 133AC from the Winter Fever, [[spoiler:Queen Alicent in 108AC earlier from greyscale]].
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Instead of dying in 133AC from the Winter Fever, [[spoiler:Queen Alicent in 108AC earlier from greyscale]].
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Instead of dying in 133AC from the Winter Fever, [[spoiler:Queen Alicent died much earlier from greyscale]].
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Instead of dying in 133AC from the Winter Fever, [[spoiler:Queen Alicent died much in 108AC earlier from greyscale]].
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* TheAlliance: When Braavos tries to end slavery in Pentos, Volantis, the Stepstones and the Three Daughters come to the later's help. It [[WeAREStrugglingTogether doesn't last]].
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* TheAlliance: When Braavos tries to end slavery in Pentos, Volantis, the Stepstones and the Three Daughters come to the later's latter's help. It [[WeAREStrugglingTogether doesn't last]].
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* DragonRider: Obvious with the setting. Of the siblings, Daemon, Rhaenys, Elaerys, Aegon, Maegon and Valerion started the story as dragon riders. [[spoiler: Laenara quickly joins them, while Elaerys lose his due to an injury his mount substained during a battle.]]
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Instead of dying in 133AC from the Winter Fever, [[spoiler:Queen Alicent died much earlier from greyscale]].
* DragonRider: Obvious with the setting. Of the siblings, Daemon, Rhaenys, Elaerys, Aegon, Maegon and Valerion started the story as dragon riders. [[spoiler: Laenara quickly joins them, while Elaerys lose his due to an injury his mountsubstained sustained during a battle.]]
* DragonRider: Obvious with the setting. Of the siblings, Daemon, Rhaenys, Elaerys, Aegon, Maegon and Valerion started the story as dragon riders. [[spoiler: Laenara quickly joins them, while Elaerys lose his due to an injury his mount
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: For all his faults, Maegon seems to geniunely love his family.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: For all his faults, Maegon seems to geniunely genuinely love his family.
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* OptOut: When the story begins, both Daemon and Vaeron have leaved King's Landing to fulfil their ambitions elsewhere.
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* TeacherStudentRomance: Aegon taught Valena during most of her youth. Since then, the two have developped feelings for each other, although they have yet to act on it. [[spoiler:By mid-107, the two finally consumated their feelings and have began an affair.]]
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* TeacherStudentRomance: Aegon taught Valena during most of her youth. Since then, the two have developped developed feelings for each other, although they have yet to act on it. [[spoiler:By mid-107, the two finally consumated consummated their feelings and have began an affair.]]
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''Dragon Kin'' is an [[AfterActionReport After Action Report]] by [=Zamarak500=] on the Paradox Interectative Forum. It was popular due to its original concept of allowing the readers to create the main cast, giving them a set number of traits to create their own character (although [=Zamarak500=] remains in control of the characters after their creation). The character creation part of the AAR ended on October 25th, 2018. The story can be found on the Creator/ParadoxInteractive forums [[https://forum.paradoxplaza.com/forum/index.php?threads/dragon-kin-a-targaryen-aar.1124426// here]].
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''Dragon Kin'' is an [[AfterActionReport After Action Report]] by [=Zamarak500=] on the Paradox Interectative Interactive Forum. It was popular due to its original concept of allowing the readers to create the main cast, giving them a set number of traits to create their own character (although [=Zamarak500=] remains in control of the characters after their creation). The character creation part of the AAR ended on October 25th, 2018. The story can be found on the Creator/ParadoxInteractive forums [[https://forum.paradoxplaza.com/forum/index.php?threads/dragon-kin-a-targaryen-aar.1124426// here]].
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* NeverMyFault: Laegor uses this to explain any problem he encounter. Maegon also falls into this mentality after [[spoiler: his marriage with Laenara begins to fall appart, chosing to put all the blame on her instead of his own destructive attitude.]]
* OptOut: When the story begins, both Daemon and Vaeron have leaved King's Landing to fulfill their ambitions elsewhere.
* OptOut: When the story begins, both Daemon and Vaeron have leaved King's Landing to fulfill their ambitions elsewhere.
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* NeverMyFault: Laegor uses this to explain any problem he encounter. Maegon also falls into this mentality after [[spoiler: his marriage with Laenara begins to fall appart, chosing apart, choosing to put all the blame on her instead of his own destructive attitude.]]
* OptOut: When the story begins, both Daemon and Vaeron have leaved King's Landing tofulfill fulfil their ambitions elsewhere.
* OptOut: When the story begins, both Daemon and Vaeron have leaved King's Landing to
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Aegon survived his first year, unlike his canon counterpart.
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* GodSaveUsfromtheQueen: [[spoiler:In 109, Rhaenys finally accomplished her dream and married Viserys, becoming the queen.]]
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* GodSaveUsfromtheQueen: GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: [[spoiler:In 109, Rhaenys finally accomplished her dream and married Viserys, becoming the queen.]]
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* TooDumbtoLive: TooDumbToLive: Everyone trying to pull off a [[spoiler:Gyle Groster]] Plot, which consist in stealing King's Landing and it's surrounding lands from the King while somehow believing that you'll be allow to remain a bannerman without consequence. [[spoiler: Surprisingly, more this had been attempted on multiple occasions.]]
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* MentorShip: Aegon taught Valena during most of her youth. Since then, the two have developped feelings for each other, although they have yet to act on it. [[spoiler:By mid-107, the two finally consumated their feelings and have began an affair.]]
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* ConflictingLoyalty: Vaelyx struggles with his loyalty to his family, his fellow knights of the Kingsguard and his oath to the Iron Throne. [[spoiler:the fact that Rhaenys became queen didn't help.]]
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* GodSaveUsfromtheQueen: [[spoiler:In 109, Rhaenys finally accomplished her dream and married Viserys, becoming the queen.]]
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* ThoseTwoGuys: Jaelyx and Lucamore, his bodyguard, to the point where it is rare to see one featured in a chapter without the other following Lucamore's introduction.
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* DragonRider: Obivous with the setting. Daemon, Rhaenys, Elaerys, Aegon, Maegon and Valerion started the story as dragon riders. [[spoiler: Laenara quickly joins them, while Elaerys lose his due to an injury his mount substained during a battle.]]
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* DragonRider: Obivous Obvious with the setting. Of the siblings, Daemon, Rhaenys, Elaerys, Aegon, Maegon and Valerion started the story as dragon riders. [[spoiler: Laenara quickly joins them, while Elaerys lose his due to an injury his mount substained during a battle.]]
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* DragonRider: Obivous with the setting. Daemon, Rhaenys, Elaerys, Aegon, Maegon and Valerion started the story as dragon riders. [[spoiler: Laenara quickly joins them, while Elaerys lose his due to an injury his mount substained during a battle.]]
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* LeftforDead: Laegor. It annoys him that everyone is shocked that he survived the Narrow Sea.
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* AttemptedRape: [[spoiler:Maegon on his sister-in-law Laena Velaryon, as she kicked him between the legs before he could get further than a kiss.]] He makes her life a living hell because of it, to the point she chose to leave and abandon her husband behind than staying with him around.
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* AttemptedRape: [[spoiler:Maegon on his sister-in-law Laena Velaryon, Velaryon,]] as she kicked him between the legs before he could get further than a kiss.]] kiss. He makes her life a living hell because of it, to the point she chose to leave and abandon her husband behind than staying with him around.
