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''Devil With A Blue Dress'' acts as a {{prequel}} by Amp to ''VideoGame/TeamFortress2'', in which a number of the team members are recruited by a mysterious woman in blue. In the process, we get an in-depth look in the featured team members, including the recruitor. A fair warning: the fic has not been updated for about half a year, but about two-thirds of it is complete and each chapter does well as a stand-alone story. Edit: The Spy chapter is now up. And [=TF2Chan=] Rejoyced!
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''Devil With A Blue Dress'' by [=TF2Chan=] user Amp acts as a {{prequel}} by Amp to ''VideoGame/TeamFortress2'', in which a number of the team members are recruited by a mysterious woman in blue. In the process, we get an in-depth look in the featured team members, including the recruitor. A fair warning: While there is an overarching plot, the fic has not been updated for about half a year, but about two-thirds of it is complete and each chapter does well as a stand-alone story. Edit: The Spy chapter is now up. And [=TF2Chan=] Rejoyced!
chapters are basically standalone stories that can be read in any order.
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** Engineer: [[spoiler:Despite his brilliance, his passion for his work caused every relationship he had to fail.]]
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** Engineer: [[spoiler:Despite his brilliance, his [[MarriedToTheJob passion for his work work]] caused every relationship he had to fail.]]
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* IntelligenceEqualsIsolation: Dell Conagher is a brilliant thinker and technician, but has a string of failed relationships due to his passion for his work.
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* IntelligenceEqualsIsolation: Dell Conagher is a brilliant thinker and technician, but has a string of failed relationships due to his passion for his work.work inevitably alienating his lover.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Sniper's 'weapon' in the Arena is a pair of sunglasses. The others are given a kukri, a submachine gun, and a sniper rifle--his base weapons in the game.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Sniper's 'weapon' in the Arena is a pair of sunglasses. The others are given a kukri, a submachine gun, and a sniper rifle--his base weapons in the game.game, implying that Sniper subdued them all and stole their weapons.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: The Heavy, as a result of [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Order_No._227 Order 227]].
* StarCrossedLovers: [[spoiler:Jane Doe]] and his high school sweetheart Yurie, a Japanese American in a [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII rather sour time to be one]].
** Also [[spoiler:Scout's mom (the recruiter) and Spy.]]
* StarCrossedLovers: [[spoiler:Jane Doe]] and his high school sweetheart Yurie, a Japanese American in a [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII rather sour time to be one]].
** Also [[spoiler:Scout's mom (the recruiter) and Spy.]]
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* ShellShockedVeteran: The Heavy, as a result of being made to participate in [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Order_No._227 Order 227]].
* StarCrossedLovers: [[spoiler:Jane Doe]] and his high school sweetheart Yurie, aJapanese American Japanese-American in a [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII rather sour time to be one]].
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* StarCrossedLovers: [[spoiler:Jane Doe]] and his high school sweetheart Yurie, a
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** The case name for [[spoiler:the Pyro]] is 451. [[spoiler:[[StealthPun As in, Fahrenheit 451.]]]]
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** The case name for [[spoiler:the Pyro]] is 451. [[spoiler:[[StealthPun As in, in Fahrenheit 451.]]]]
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* EverythingsEvenWorseWithSharks: The recruitor first meets the future Medic in a gray nurse shark exhibit, setting a rather appropriate tone for their conversation.
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** Medic: [[spoiler: Was sent to a [[UsefulNotes/TheHolocaust concentration camp]] when he was young and came out so traumatized that he turned to drug abuse in an attempt to numb his pain.]]
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'''The fanfic contains the following tropes:'''
* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler:Pyro's father was molesting her, and when she tried to tell others, no one believed her, not even her mother. Developing a fascination with fire as a control mechanism, Pyro eventually burned the house down with her parents in it, jamming all the doors, windows, and other entrances to ensure they wouldn't be able to escape.]]
** Also, from the looks of things, [[spoiler:Soldier's dad, who gave him a hell of a shiner upon finding out he was dating a Japanese girl.]]
* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler:Pyro's father was molesting her, and when she tried to tell others, no one believed her, not even her mother. Developing a fascination with fire as a control mechanism, Pyro eventually burned the house down with her parents in it, jamming all the doors, windows, and other entrances to ensure they wouldn't be able to escape.]]
** Also, from the looks of things, [[spoiler:Soldier's dad, who gave him a hell of a shiner upon finding out he was dating a Japanese girl.]]
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** [[spoiler:Pyro's father was molesting her, and when she tried to tell others, no one believed her, not even her mother. Developing a fascination with fire as a control mechanism, Pyro eventually burned the house down with her parents in it, jamming all the doors, windows, and other entrances to ensure they wouldn't be able to escape.]]
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: Australia; every single resident is a rowdy [[BadassMustache mustached badass]] living in a rather comfortable and high-tech environment; but outside, there is the dangerous outback with loose government mutants, not to mention achieving citizenship can be summed up as a ''year-long'' [[Literature/TheHungerGames Hunger Game]].
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* CrapsaccharineWorld: Australia; every single resident is a rowdy [[BadassMustache mustached badass]] badass living in a rather comfortable and high-tech environment; but outside, there is the dangerous outback with loose government mutants, not to mention achieving citizenship can be summed up as a ''year-long'' [[Literature/TheHungerGames Hunger Game]].
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: [[spoiler:Surprisingly, averted. The recruiter finds Pyro in a mental health facility that appears to be fairly clean and well-maintained, and by all appearances looks like a pretty good place to be staying.]]
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: [[spoiler:Surprisingly, averted. The recruiter finds Pyro in a mental health facility that appears to be fairly clean and well-maintained, and by all appearances looks like a pretty good place to be staying. But even if it is, the recruiter has no intention of letting her remain there.]]
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: [[spoiler:Surprisingly, averted. The recruiter finds Pyro in a mental health facility that appears to be fairly clean and well-maintained, and by all appearances looks like a pretty good place to be staying.]]
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: [[spoiler:Pyro is described as looking vaguely Asian or Native American, with coppery skin.]]
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: [[spoiler:Pyro is described as looking vaguely Asian or Native American, with coppery skin. Her being called a "shifty, tricky little chink[[note]]a slur used against Chinese people[[/note]] girl" in her backstory and her house having a koi pond implies the former.]]
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** Pyro: [[spoiler:Molested by her father and called a liar by everyone, including her (yes, [[SamusIsAGirl her]]) mother. Developed a fascination with fire that resulted in her burning her house down with both parents inside. Her baby sister was inside too, but she considered it a MercyKill, saving her from the hell that their parents or a foster home would put her through.]]
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** Pyro: [[spoiler:Molested by her (yes, [[SamusIsAGirl her]]) father and called a liar by everyone, including her (yes, [[SamusIsAGirl her]]) mother. Developed a fascination with fire that resulted in her burning her house down with both parents inside. Her baby sister was inside too, but she considered it a MercyKill, saving her from the hell that their parents or a foster home would put her through.]]
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* WarIsHell: [[spoiler:As a member of the Soviet army, Heavy was forced to gun down his own comrades as part of Order 227.]]
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* CoveredWithScars: [[spoiler:Pyro's arms are covered in burn scars from the fire she set to kill her parents.]]
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** Heavy: [[spoiler:Part of the Soviet army during the rule of Stalin, and was forced to take part in [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Order_No._227 Order 227]] and gun down any of his own comrades who tried to flee.]]
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** Heavy: [[spoiler:Part of the Soviet army during the rule of Stalin, and he was forced to take part in [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Order_No._227 Order 227]] and gun down any of his own comrades who tried to flee.]]
** Sniper: [[spoiler:Wasn't considered a natural-born citizen of Australia due to his mother being British, and was put through hell because of it. Voluntarily put himself through the grueling citizenship trial at sixteen, surviving a year alone in the unforgiving outback. At some points, he killed or was forced to kill in self-defense the other three applicants, one of whom was going to be a father.]]
** Sniper: [[spoiler:Wasn't considered a natural-born citizen of Australia due to his mother being British, and was put through hell because of it. Voluntarily put himself through the grueling citizenship trial at sixteen, surviving a year alone in the unforgiving outback. At some points, he killed or was forced to kill in self-defense the other three applicants, one of whom was going to be a father.]]
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* BreatherEpisode: The Demoman's chapter is far more lighthearted than the previous four. His past isn't particularly traumatic nor does he consider it to be so; his problem is that he isn't making enough money to relocate his mother to a climate that will be better for her health. Something the recruiter is keen to solve...
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** Heavy: [[spoiler:Part of the Soviet army during the rule of Stalin, and was forced to take part in Order 227 and gun down any of his own comrades who tried to flee.]]
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** Heavy: [[spoiler:Part of the Soviet army during the rule of Stalin, and was forced to take part in [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Order_No._227 Order 227 227]] and gun down any of his own comrades who tried to flee.]]
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** Pyro: [[spoiler:Molested by her father and called a liar by everyone, including her (yes, [[SamusIsAGirl her]]) mother. Developed a fascination with fire that resulted in her burning her house down with both parents inside. Her baby sister was inside too, but she considered it a MercyKill, saving her from the hell that their parents or a foster home would put her through.]]
** Engineer: [[spoiler:Despite his brilliance, his passion for his work caused every relationship he had to fail.]]
** Soldier: [[spoiler:Rejected from the military and separated from his high school sweetheart when she and her family were sent to a Japanese internment camp. She eventually found her way back to Japan, married someone else and had two children.]]
** Heavy: [[spoiler:Part of the Soviet army during the rule of Stalin, and was forced to take part in Order 227 and gun down any of his own comrades who tried to flee.]]
** Engineer: [[spoiler:Despite his brilliance, his passion for his work caused every relationship he had to fail.]]
** Soldier: [[spoiler:Rejected from the military and separated from his high school sweetheart when she and her family were sent to a Japanese internment camp. She eventually found her way back to Japan, married someone else and had two children.]]
** Heavy: [[spoiler:Part of the Soviet army during the rule of Stalin, and was forced to take part in Order 227 and gun down any of his own comrades who tried to flee.]]
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* IWillWaitForYou: [[spoiler:Unfortunately, Soldier's high school sweetheart didn't, and now she's living in Japan with a husband and two children. Of course, the recruiter could be lying about that, but either way it's tragic.]]
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* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler:Pyro's father]].
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* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler:Pyro's father]].father was molesting her, and when she tried to tell others, no one believed her, not even her mother. Developing a fascination with fire as a control mechanism, Pyro eventually burned the house down with her parents in it, jamming all the doors, windows, and other entrances to ensure they wouldn't be able to escape.]]
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: [[spoiler:Pyro is described as looking vaguely Asian or Native American, with coppery skin.]]
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* MercyKill: [[spoiler:Pyro strongly believed she was doing this to her baby sister, to save her from the horrific childhood she herself experienced at the hands of their parents.]]
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* HelloNurse: The recruitor, [[spoiler:a given if you've seen the "Meet the Spy" video.]]
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* HelloNurse: HeadTurningBeauty: The recruitor, [[spoiler:a given if you've seen the "Meet the Spy" video.]]
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''Devil With A Blue Dress'' acts as a {{prequel}} by Amp to ''VideoGame/TeamFortress2'', in which a number of the team members are recruited by a mysterious woman in blue. In the process, we get an in-depth look in the featured team members, including the recruitor. A fair warning: the fic has not been updated for about half a year, but about two-thirds of it is complete and each chapter does well as a stand-alone story. Edit: The Spy chapter is now up. And TF2Chan Rejoyced!
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''Devil With A Blue Dress'' acts as a {{prequel}} by Amp to ''VideoGame/TeamFortress2'', in which a number of the team members are recruited by a mysterious woman in blue. In the process, we get an in-depth look in the featured team members, including the recruitor. A fair warning: the fic has not been updated for about half a year, but about two-thirds of it is complete and each chapter does well as a stand-alone story. Edit: The Spy chapter is now up. And TF2Chan [=TF2Chan=] Rejoyced!
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* CantGetAwayWithNothing: The Soldier couldn't get into the military because of his flat feet.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Sniper's 'weapon' in the Arena is a pair of sunglasses. The others are given a kukri, a submachine gun, and a sniper rifle--his base weapons in the game.
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''Devil With A Blue Dress'' acts as a {{prequel}} by Amp to ''VideoGame/TeamFortress2'', in which a number of the team members are recruited by a mysterious woman in blue. In the process, we get an in-depth look in the featured team members, including the recruitor [[spoiler:whom the astute reader will recognize as the [=BLU=] Scout's mom]]. A fair warning: the fic has not been updated for about half a year, but about two-thirds of it is complete and each chapter does well as a stand-alone story. Edit: The Spy chapter is now up. And TF2Chan Rejoyced!
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''Devil With A Blue Dress'' acts as a {{prequel}} by Amp to ''VideoGame/TeamFortress2'', in which a number of the team members are recruited by a mysterious woman in blue. In the process, we get an in-depth look in the featured team members, including the recruitor [[spoiler:whom the astute reader will recognize as the [=BLU=] Scout's mom]].recruitor. A fair warning: the fic has not been updated for about half a year, but about two-thirds of it is complete and each chapter does well as a stand-alone story. Edit: The Spy chapter is now up. And TF2Chan Rejoyced!
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* StarCrossedLovers: [[spoiler:Jane Doe]] and his high school sweetheart Yurie, a Japanese American in a [[WorldWarTwo rather sour time to be one]].
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* StarCrossedLovers: [[spoiler:Jane Doe]] and his high school sweetheart Yurie, a Japanese American in a [[WorldWarTwo [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII rather sour time to be one]].
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Lady In Red is when a woman\'s red clothing is used to indicate her sexuality. Zero Context Examples and misuse is being cut.
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* LadyInRed: Well, blue, but think how ironic it'd be if the case were true!
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* AllMythsAreTrue: In this ''[=TF2=]'' universe, [[CelticMythology kelpies]] seem to at least be real.
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* AllMythsAreTrue: In this ''[=TF2=]'' universe, [[CelticMythology [[Myth/CelticMythology kelpies]] seem to at least be real.
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* FridgeHorror: The recruiter wonders why the Company doesn't just kidnap and mind wipe Tavish if they want him so badly- insinuating they've done that sort of thing before. Feel free to shudder.
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* NaziGermany: Medic is [[spoiler:a Holocaust survivor who routinely abuses drugs to deal with the trauma and PTSD he suffers because of it.]]
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* NaziGermany: UsefulNotes/NaziGermany: Medic is [[spoiler:a Holocaust survivor who routinely abuses drugs to deal with the trauma and PTSD he suffers because of it.]]
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Hannibal Lecture is only for when a captive verbally turns the tables on their captor/interogator
* BreakingSpeech: The recruitor delivers a masterful one to recruit the Medic.
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* HannibalLecture: The recruitor delivers a masterful one to recruit the Medic.