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Misuse. The game's only major change from the original is that the stakes are much higher, so the reader wouldn't necessarily expect major changes in who is eliminated early, who competes in which challenge, etc.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite the darker nature of the fic, some things haven't changed, some like:
** Noah, Eva, Tyler, Sadie, Cody, Ezekiel and Katie are still eliminated way before the merge.
** Noah is voted off after the dodgeball challenge.
** Trent and Heather still participate in the talent show contest challenge.
** Eva is the second member of her team to be voted off.
** Duncan, Geoff, Courtney and Bridgette still become friends.
** Duncan, Geoff, Bridgette, Heather, Leshawna and Trent make it to the merge.
** Duncan and Leshawna make it to the final five.
** Noah, Eva, Tyler, Sadie, Cody, Ezekiel and Katie are still eliminated way before the merge.
** Noah is voted off after the dodgeball challenge.
** Trent and Heather still participate in the talent show contest challenge.
** Eva is the second member of her team to be voted off.
** Duncan, Geoff, Courtney and Bridgette still become friends.
** Duncan, Geoff, Bridgette, Heather, Leshawna and Trent make it to the merge.
** Duncan and Leshawna make it to the final five.
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With the Word Of God clarification on a related point, these are not spoilers.
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* AmbiguousSituation: It's left intentionally unclear if [[spoiler:Heather]] was [[spoiler:faking her amnesia]].
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* AmbiguousSituation: It's left intentionally unclear if [[spoiler:Heather]] Heather was [[spoiler:faking faking her amnesia]].amnesia.
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The subject of her death was cleared up by Word Of God- she died in her sleep.
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* AmbiguousSituation: It's left intentionally unclear if [[spoiler:Heather]] actually committed suicide or was murdered and suicide was just used as a cover. Additionally, it's left equally unclear if she was [[spoiler:faking her amnesia]].
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* AmbiguousSituation: It's left intentionally unclear if [[spoiler:Heather]] actually committed suicide or was murdered and suicide was just used as a cover. Additionally, it's left equally unclear if she was [[spoiler:faking her amnesia]].
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The story has 30 chapters.
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The story has 30 chapters.chapters and is complete.
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** Noah, Eva, Tyler, Sadie, Cody and Sadie are still eliminated way before the merge.
** Eva is the second member of her team to be voted off.
** Eva is the second member of her team to be voted off.
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** Noah, Eva, Tyler, Sadie, Cody Cody, Ezekiel and Sadie Katie are still eliminated way before the merge.
** Eva is the second member of her team to be voted off.merge.
** Eva is the second member of her team to be voted off.
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** Trent and Heather still participate in the talent show contest challenge.
** Eva is the second member of her team to be voted off.
** Eva is the second member of her team to be voted off.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite the darker nature of the fic, some things haven't changed, some like:
** Noah, Eva, Tyler, Sadie, Cody and Sadie are still eliminated way before the merge.
** Eva is the second member of her team to be voted off.
** Noah is voted off after the dodgeball challenge.
** Duncan, Geoff, Courtney and Bridgette still become friends.
** Duncan, Geoff, Bridgette, Heather, Leshawna and Trent make it to the merge.
** Duncan and Leshawna make it to the final five.
** Noah, Eva, Tyler, Sadie, Cody and Sadie are still eliminated way before the merge.
** Eva is the second member of her team to be voted off.
** Noah is voted off after the dodgeball challenge.
** Duncan, Geoff, Courtney and Bridgette still become friends.
** Duncan, Geoff, Bridgette, Heather, Leshawna and Trent make it to the merge.
** Duncan and Leshawna make it to the final five.
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* FireForgedFriends: Played with regarding the surviving contestants; [[spoiler:Bridgette, Geoff and Duncan are still close and Noah attended the former two's wedding, but Bridgette still doesn't forgive Justin for his actions in the finale and Noah apparently doesn't plan to see the others again anytime soon]].
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* NonGameplayElimination: Several contestants die under circumstances other than being formally eliminated and executed. These circumstances include challenge hazards ([[spoiler:Trent]], who fell face-first on a mine, and [[spoiler:Alejandro]], killed by the Psycho Killer with the Hook and Chainsaw during the challenge after accidentally setting him off), suicide ([[spoiler:Heather]], who drowned herself- [[AmbiguousSituation supposedly]]), and being killed whilst attempting to escape ([[spoiler:Harold, who is shot by Chris in an escape attempt]]).
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* NonGameplayElimination: Several contestants die under circumstances other than being formally eliminated and executed. These circumstances include challenge hazards ([[spoiler:Trent]], who fell face-first on a mine, and [[spoiler:Alejandro]], killed by the Psycho Killer with the Hook and Chainsaw during the challenge after accidentally setting him off), suicide ([[spoiler:Heather]], who drowned herself- [[AmbiguousSituation supposedly]]), mauled by a bear ([[spoiler:Duncan, but he fakes his death using an unfortunate cameraman]]), and being killed whilst attempting to escape ([[spoiler:Harold, who is shot by Chris in an escape attempt]]).
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Not a spoiler
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* BreatherEpisode: By this fic's standards, anyways. This time, in lieu of a gruesome execution, the Brunch of Disgustingness challenge instead puts a 3 day cruise and [[spoiler:a 5 minute call with the winning side's parents]] on the line. The subsequent episodes taking place on the day of the cruise focuses on the respective contestants on and off the cruise. This happens just after the merge and before Alejandro and Sierra join the competition.
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* BreatherEpisode: By this fic's standards, anyways. This time, in lieu of a gruesome execution, the Brunch of Disgustingness challenge instead puts a 3 day cruise and [[spoiler:a a 5 minute call with the winning side's parents]] parents on the line. The subsequent episodes taking place on the day of the cruise focuses on the respective contestants on and off the cruise. This happens just after the merge and before Alejandro and Sierra join the competition.
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* EatThat: [[TheStationsOfTheCanon The Brunch of Disgustingness is also in this fic,]] but this time, contestants are dared to eat [[spoiler: boiled bull testicles, live snails topped with vinegar, toe jam on mouldy bread, blended cockroaches, a smoothie consisting of coconut milk, kitchen grease, and mouldy vegetables, uncooked pizza dough with 'a suspicious green sauce', jellyfish, live anchovies and grasshoppers, used tampons in toilet water, spoiled brussel sprouts and spider egg salad, and [[ImAHumanitarian human flesh hot dogs]]]].
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* EatThat: [[TheStationsOfTheCanon The Brunch of Disgustingness is also in this fic,]] but this time, contestants are dared to eat [[spoiler: boiled bull testicles, live snails topped with vinegar, toe jam on mouldy bread, blended cockroaches, a smoothie consisting of coconut milk, kitchen grease, and mouldy vegetables, uncooked pizza dough with 'a suspicious green sauce', jellyfish, live anchovies and grasshoppers, used tampons in toilet water, spoiled brussel sprouts and spider egg salad, and [[ImAHumanitarian human flesh hot dogs]]]].dogs]].
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* AnyoneCanDie: And not just from the executions, too. The challenges also pose heavy dangers to the campers, and a handful of them also die during them as well.
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* EveryEpisodeEnding: Outside of the [[BreatherEpisode cruise ship arc]] and the chapters where a contestant dies during a challenge, each episode ends with at least one camper being sent to their deaths, unless they have a Life Idol.
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* BreatherEpisode: By this fic's standards, anyways. This time, in lieu of a gruesome execution, the Brunch of Disgustingness challenge instead puts a 3 day cruise and [[spoiler:a 5 minute call with the winning side's parents]] on the line. The subsequent episodes taking place on the day of the cruise focuses on the respective contestants on and off the cruise. This happens just after the merge and before Alejandro and Sierra join the competition.
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* CharactersDroppingLikeFlies: By the time this fic comes to a close, most of the campers have suffered a cruel and demeaning execution.
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: The story ends with a short summary of what happened to the survivng contestants.
