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* BlueIsHeroic: Erebos refers to Delphine as "the lady in blue" because of her preferred choice of wardrobe color.
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* AppealToFlattery: Donny persuades Beetlejuice that he needs to stay with Lydia instead of going along on Dr. Void's planned excursion by pointing out that her "big scary poltergeist" is the one protector no one will dare to cross. Once Beetlejuice is out of earshot, he admits to having learned the trick from Lydia herself.
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* RecursiveCanon: Dr. Void can't remember how to go inside someone's brain. Prince Vince decides that the best way to refresh his memory is for all of them to watch the episode of the cartoon in which he does exactly that.
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* AfterlifeAngst: Lydia suffers from some of this in when a magic ritual causes her to end up dead and in the Neitherworld. This isn't so bad by itself - she's with friends and she's safe, relatively speaking - but she's worried about her parents and also about Beetlejuice, who is stuck in the Outerworld as a mortal human. Fortunately, he finds the loophole they need.
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* FunetikAccent: Jacques, as in the show, speaks GratuitousFrench with a heavy French accent, and his lines of dialogue are written to reflect this. When Dr. Zigmund Void shows up later in the series, his German-ish dialogue is given the same treatment.
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** DominoRevelation: As the prophecy is revealed, it shows that details and incidents from the earlier stories ''and also from the cartoon'' have built up to the Fairy Godfather's conclusion that Lydia and Beetlejuice are [[spoiler:meant to be the Avatars of Life and Death]].
* MediumAwareness: As noted elsewhere, Prince Vince is very aware that they're in a series of stories on the internet; however, from his point of view, these are not fiction, but rather take the form of an AfterActionReport which allow him to keep tabs on what his friends are doing. And as in the show, they're all more or less conscious of the fact that Mr. Monitor has a tendency to put them on television without notice.
* MediumAwareness: As noted elsewhere, Prince Vince is very aware that they're in a series of stories on the internet; however, from his point of view, these are not fiction, but rather take the form of an AfterActionReport which allow him to keep tabs on what his friends are doing. And as in the show, they're all more or less conscious of the fact that Mr. Monitor has a tendency to put them on television without notice.
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** DominoRevelation: As the prophecy {{the prophecy}} is revealed, it shows that details and incidents from the earlier stories ''and also from the cartoon'' have built up to the Fairy Godfather's conclusion that Lydia and Beetlejuice are [[spoiler:meant to be the Avatars of Life and Death]].
* MediumAwareness: As noted elsewhere, Prince Vince is very aware that they're in a series of stories on the internet; however, from his point of view, these are not fiction, but rather take the form of an AfterActionReport which allow him to keep tabs on what his friends are doing. And as in the show, they're all more or less conscious of the fact that Mr. Monitor has a tendency to put them on television withoutnotice.notice; they blatantly make use of this fact on a few occasions.
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* AfterlifeAngst: Lydia suffers from some of this in when a magic ritual causes her to end up dead and in the Neitherworld. This isn't so bad by itself - she's with friends and she's safe, relatively speaking - but she's worried about her parents and also about Beetlejuice, who is stuck in the Outerworld as a mortal human. (ItMakesSenseInContext.) Fortunately, he finds the loophole they need.
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* AfterlifeAngst: Lydia suffers from some of this in when a magic ritual causes her to end up dead and in the Neitherworld. This isn't so bad by itself - she's with friends and she's safe, relatively speaking - but she's worried about her parents and also about Beetlejuice, who is stuck in the Outerworld as a mortal human. (ItMakesSenseInContext.) Fortunately, he finds the loophole they need.
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* AfterlifeAngst: [[spoiler:Lydia]] suffers from quite a bit of this following Hugo's ritual. [[spoiler:She doesn't mind being dead in and of itself, apart from knowing how much it will grieve her parents; she's just suffering because she's been forcibly divided from her husband.]] It's realizing the extent of her pain that prompts Prince Vince to bestow a royal title on her.
* NewhartPhoneCall: Prince Vince phones Mr. Monitor, but the conversation is only seen from Monitor's side. He's very obviously uncomfortable.
* TheBusCameBack: Dr. Zigmund Void[[note]]from the cartoon episodes "Forget-Me-Nuts" and "Not-So-Peaceful Pines"[[/note]] is summoned out of retirement to aid the heroes.
* DopeSlap: Lady Delphine gives Hugo a mild one in Prince Vince's castle, though the way she hides a smile indicates that she thinks what he said is ActuallyPrettyFunny.
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* NewhartPhoneCall: When BJ phones Lady Delphine for help, Hugo (who is the POV character for the chapter) only hears her side of the conversation.
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* NewhartPhoneCall: When BJ phones Lady Delphine for help, Hugo (who is the POV character for the chapter) only hears her side of the conversation. Later, when Prince Vince calls Mr. Monitor again, the conversation is only heard from the royal side of things.
* NoFourthWall: Worse than usual. Midway through chapter seven, Prince Vince interrupts the conversation to politely inquire, "From whose point of view is this chapter being told?" After a {{beat}}, Lady Delphine volunteers, on the grounds that she hasn't had a POV chapter yet.
* NoFourthWall: Worse than usual. Midway through chapter seven, Prince Vince interrupts the conversation to politely inquire, "From whose point of view is this chapter being told?" After a {{beat}}, Lady Delphine volunteers, on the grounds that she hasn't had a POV chapter yet.
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* {{Flashback}}: Has one that serves as the OriginStory of the cartoon, demonstrating how Lydia and Beetlejuice met.
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* {{Flashback}}: Has one that serves as the OriginStory of the cartoon, demonstrating how Lydia and Beetlejuice met. (It's heavily based on the origin story presented in the spinoff comic books.)
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* FriendshipAsCourtship: Technically speaking, there is never a point in the leads' relationship where they are dating, although it looks that way to observers in the Outerworld. [[spoiler:Due to the nature of the contract at the end of ''Cinderjuice'', they go directly from being best friends to being married.]]
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* FriendshipAsCourtship: Technically speaking, there is never a point in the leads' relationship where they are dating, although it looks that way to observers in the Outerworld. [[spoiler:Due to the nature of the contract at the end of ''Cinderjuice'', they go directly from being best friends to being married.]]
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: {{Invoked}}. When the allies are collected in Prince Vince's throne room to discuss a plan, Donny explains Beetlejuice's LiteralGenie weakness to their living guests. Apropos of nothing, the television turns itself on and starts playing an advertisement for Worm Your Way Cologne.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: {{Invoked}}. When the allies are collected in Prince Vince's throne room to discuss a plan, Donny explains Beetlejuice's LiteralGenie weakness to their living guests. Apropos of nothing, the television turns itself on and starts playing an advertisement for Worm Your Way Cologne.[[note]]Sound familiar? It appeared in the cartoon, in the episode "Out of My Mind."[[/note]]
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* ForcedSleep: Courtesy of the poisoned apple.
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* EmergencyImpersonation: BJ fakes Lydia's voice on the phone with her parents so that they (well, Charles) won't panic about her suddenly having gone to "Florida."
* FindTheCure: The heroes have to figure out how to bring Lydia out of her enchanted sleep, and as fast as possible before BJ gets ''too'' far out of control.
* ForcedSleep: Courtesy of thepoisoned magic apple.
* FindTheCure: The heroes have to figure out how to bring Lydia out of her enchanted sleep, and as fast as possible before BJ gets ''too'' far out of control.
* ForcedSleep: Courtesy of the
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** ''Seven Months'' finally clarifies the matter. The speed at which time passes is determined by where ''Lydia'' is at a given moment; if she's in the Neitherworld, time slows down in the Outerworld to compensate for her absence. [[spoiler:It's implied to be tied to her role as the Avatar of Life, somehow.]]
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: {{Invoked}}. When the allies are collected in Prince Vince's throne room to discuss a plan, Donny explains Beetlejuice's LiteralGenie weakness to their living guests. Apropos of nothing, the television turns itself on and starts playing an advertisement for Worm Your Way Cologne.
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* LoyalAnimalCompanion: Feathers, the Neitherworld bird who aided Lydia in the previous story, has been living in Prince Vince's castle ever since. He returns in this installment to try to help her once again.
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* DiscussedTrope: It's heavily implied that Prince Vince has discovered ThisVeryWiki, and a few tropes actually come up in the course of this story.
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* AllUpToYou: Only BJ has the ability to [[spoiler:pull Lydia back to the Outerworld]], although Delphine doesn't clarify why this is. Possibly she herself doesn't know. However, the reader can (and, judging by the reviews, several did) figure out that it's because [[spoiler:he's the only one who knows ''how''. Anyone could do it if they had the idea to say her name three times, but he's the only one who knows the significance of doing so.]]
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* ItsUpToYou: Only BJ has the ability to [[spoiler:pull Lydia back to the Outerworld]], although Delphine doesn't clarify why this is. Possibly she herself doesn't know. However, the reader can (and, judging by the reviews, several did) figure out that it's because [[spoiler:he's the only one who knows ''how''. Anyone could do it if they had the idea to say her name three times, but he's the only one who knows the significance of doing so.]]
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* FanVerse: In the process of becoming one.
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* MediumAwareness: As noted below, Prince Vince is very aware that they're in a series of stories on the internet. And as in the show, they're all more or less conscious of the fact that Mr. Monitor has a tendency to put them on television without notice.
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* MediumAwareness: As noted below, elsewhere, Prince Vince is very aware that they're in a series of stories on the internet.internet; however, from his point of view, these are not fiction, but rather take the form of an AfterActionReport which allow him to keep tabs on what his friends are doing. And as in the show, they're all more or less conscious of the fact that Mr. Monitor has a tendency to put them on television without notice.
* UglyCute: {{Invoked}} with "Beetle-bear." To keep Lydia from getting into trouble for having an unregistered male visitor in her college dorm, BJ sometimes shapeshifts into a talking teddy bear. It's more or less indicated to be adorably hideous.
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* DiscussedTrope: Prince Vince and Donny have a conversation about {{Love Triangle}}s and TriangRelations, as noted below.
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* DiscussedTrope: It's heavily implied that Prince Vince has discovered ThisVeryWiki, and a few tropes actually come up in the course of this story.
** Prince Vince and Donny have a conversation about {{Love Triangle}}s and TriangRelations, as noted below.
** Prince Vince and Donny have a conversation about {{Love Triangle}}s and TriangRelations, as noted below.
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* MagicMisfire: Lady Delphine realizes that the spell on the apple was intended to ''kill'' Lydia. The only reason she survived is because her unborn baby's powers activated to protect her, sending her into the coma instead. This is also the reason why [[CurseEscapeClause BJ's kiss fails to revive her]]; since the spell was altered by the baby, the usual resolution doesn't work.
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* MagicMisfire: Lady Delphine realizes that the spell on the apple was intended to ''kill'' Lydia. its target. The only reason she Lydia survived is because her [[spoiler:her unborn baby's powers activated to protect her, her]], sending her into the coma instead. This is also the reason why [[CurseEscapeClause BJ's kiss fails to revive her]]; since the spell was altered by the baby, altered, the usual resolution doesn't work.
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* ProtectedByAChild: Lydia's unborn baby will not allow her to be killed by the deadly enchantment.
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* ProtectedByAChild: Lydia's [[spoiler:Lydia's unborn baby baby]] will not allow her to be killed by the deadly enchantment.
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* UnwittingPawn: Donny is the innocent bearer of the enchanted fruit which sends Lydia into her coma.
* WackyCravings: Played with. BJ is convinced that sooner or later Lydia is going to want to eat some bugs, so he keeps offering. As it turns out, what she's actually craving is ''apples''.
* WackyCravings: Played with. BJ is convinced that sooner or later Lydia is going to want to eat some bugs, so he keeps offering. As it turns out, what she's actually craving is ''apples''.
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* UnwittingPawn: Donny is the innocent bearer of the enchanted fruit which sends Lydia into her coma.
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* WackyCravings: Played with.BJ [[spoiler:BJ is convinced that sooner or later Lydia is going to want to eat some bugs, so he keeps offering. offering.]] As it turns out, what she's actually craving is ''apples''.
* WackyCravings: Played with.
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* The fifth and (presumably) final story in the series will be related to ''WesternAnimation/{{Tangled}}''.
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* CallBack: The stories each contain ''several'' references to specific episodes of the show, regarding both characters and past adventures. The sequel stories also contain references to the previous installments. There are also a couple of lines from the film, but they're mostly just there as fandom in-jokes.
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* CallBack: The stories each contain ''several'' references to specific episodes of the show, regarding both characters and past adventures. The sequel stories also contain references to the previous installments. There are also a couple of lines from the film, but they're mostly just there as fandom in-jokes.{{Mythology Gag}}s.
* TryNotToDie: Lady Delphine tells Hugo exactly this before he leaves.
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* AdultFear: The old woman in Romania explains that the ''strigoi mort'' will drink whatever human blood he can find, but prefers that belonging to children and young women.
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* AdultFear: The old woman in Romania explains that the ''strigoi mort'' will drink whatever human blood he can find, but prefers that belonging to children [[WouldHarmAChild children]] and young women.
* FeatheredFiend: Vasile's owl form, which at one point attacks Lydia's LoyalAnimalCompanion.
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** Turns out that [[spoiler:Lydia's FakePregnancy was the precursor to a real one.]]
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* InsaneTrollLogic: Arguably, what the Fairy Godfather has been using to determine that Beetlejuice and Lydia are the individuals described in the prophecy.
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* InsaneTrollLogic: Arguably, what the Fairy Godfather has been using to determine that Beetlejuice and Lydia are the individuals described in the prophecy. It seems to strike them this way, at least.
* LoyalAnimalCompanion[=/=]NonHumanSidekick: Lydia befriends a small bird during her time in the castle, who does its best to help her. It eventually receives the name Feathers.
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* ForgotAboutHisPowers: Briefly, but BJ actually forgets to check if he still has his powers until Lady Delphine asks about it; he's too distracted by what's happened to Lydia. Once she reminds him, he confirms that he's still got it.
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* ForgotAboutHisPowers: Briefly, but BJ actually forgets to check if he still has his powers until Lady Delphine asks about it; he's too distracted by what's happened to Lydia. Once she reminds him, he confirms that he's still got it.them.
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* GrandFinale: Well, it's ''supposed'' to be, but with this author you never know.
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* GrandFinale: Well, it's ''supposed'' to be, but with this author you never know.
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* The [[{{sequel}} second story]], ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11781446/1/ The Bug Princess]]'' ([[http://archiveofourown.org/chapters/13719711?show_comments=true&view_full_work=false#comment_52125526 alternate link]]), is loosely based on ''WesternAnimation/ThePrincessAndTheFrog.'' It takes place about [[TimeSkip four years later]] when Lydia is a senior in college. She and BJ take a trip to New Orleans for spring break, where they encounter a whole new kind of magically induced chaos. Thanks to a well-meaning medium, something foul is unleashed on the city, and BJ's worst nightmare comes true.
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* The [[{{sequel}} second story]], ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11781446/1/ The Bug Princess]]'' ([[http://archiveofourown.org/chapters/13719711?show_comments=true&view_full_work=false#comment_52125526 org/chapters/13719711 alternate link]]), is loosely based on ''WesternAnimation/ThePrincessAndTheFrog.'' It takes place about [[TimeSkip four years later]] when Lydia is a senior in college. She and BJ take a trip to New Orleans for spring break, where they encounter a whole new kind of magically induced chaos. Thanks to a well-meaning medium, something foul is unleashed on the city, and BJ's worst nightmare comes true.
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* BadDreams: Turns out that [[spoiler:Beetlejuice]] has RecurringDreams of the events of the climax of ''Cinderjuice,'' when [[spoiler:Lydia was about to be killed and BJ was StormingTheCastle to save her]].
* PastExperienceNightmare: Turns out that [[spoiler:Beetlejuice]] has RecurringDreams of the events of the climax of ''Cinderjuice,'' when [[spoiler:Lydia was about to be killed and BJ was StormingTheCastle to save her]].
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* YouDoNotWantToKnow: In the {{Flashback}} chapter, Beetlejuice acknowledges that he enjoys spending time as a human again, and he has his reasons... which he has no intention of revealing. Donny asks Prince Vince if he knows what his brother means, and the prince says that no, he doesn't - and he's pretty sure they don't want to know anyway. A later chapter partly reveals (to the reader) what he [[BadDreams meant]].
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* YouDoNotWantToKnow: In the {{Flashback}} chapter, Beetlejuice acknowledges that he enjoys spending time as a human again, and he has his reasons... which he has no intention of revealing. Donny asks Prince Vince if he knows what his brother means, and the prince says that no, he doesn't - and he's pretty sure they don't want to know anyway. A later chapter partly reveals (to the reader) what he [[BadDreams [[PastExperienceNightmare meant]].
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* MST3KMantra: It's recommended that this be kept in mind anytime something doesn't make sense.
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* VirtualSoundtrack: The series has one, as mentioned a few times in the author's notes. It includes a lot of Music/{{Nickelback}} songs.
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* VillainTeamUp: The actual bad guys are [[spoiler: Mr. Big, from S.N.O.T.R.a.G., and Mr. Monitor, the television executive.]] Scuzzo and Lipscum help, but they're mostly just annoying.
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* VillainTeamUp: The actual bad guys are [[spoiler: Mr. Big, from S.N.O.T.R.a.G., and Mr. Monitor, the television executive.]] Scuzzo and Lipscum help, but they're mostly just annoying.
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* BreakThemByTalking: One of Erebos' main strategies, digging up vulnerable thoughts and doubts to exploit them.
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* BreakThemByTalking: One of Erebos' Erebos's main strategies, digging up vulnerable thoughts and doubts to exploit them.
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* ItsUpToYou: Only BJ has the ability to [[spoiler:pull Lydia back to the Outerworld]], although Delphine doesn't clarify why this is. Possibly she herself doesn't know.
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* ItsUpToYou: Only BJ has the ability to [[spoiler:pull Lydia back to the Outerworld]], although Delphine doesn't clarify why this is. Possibly she herself doesn't know. However, the reader can (and, judging by the reviews, several did) figure out that it's because [[spoiler:he's the only one who knows ''how''. Anyone could do it if they had the idea to say her name three times, but he's the only one who knows the significance of doing so.]]
* MyBelovedSmother: Delia turns into this as she basically runs roughshod over the wedding plans. BJ figures out how to get around her.
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* NoodleIncident: When Beetlejuice put a Gila monster in the mayor's shorts... the ''first'' time.
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* NoodleIncident: Several are referenced, none of which get un-noodled.
** When Beetlejuice put a Gila monster in the mayor's shorts... the ''first'' time.
** When Beetlejuice put a Gila monster in the mayor's shorts... the ''first'' time.
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** Prince Vince confirms his status as a NiceGuy by [[spoiler:making Lydia his protectorate while she's separated from Beetlejuice]].
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** Prince Vince confirms his status as a NiceGuy by [[spoiler:making Lydia his ''his'' protectorate while she's separated from Beetlejuice]].
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** [[spoiler: Because Lydia ends up with BJ's "juice," saying her name three times summons her back.]]
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** [[spoiler: Because Lydia ends up with BJ's "juice," saying her name three times summons her back.]]]] It takes a while for BJ to figure this out, however, because he's too distraught (and sleep-deprived) to put it together.
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* TakeThatUs: When frustrated with events, BJ asks, "Who in the world wrote [[BreakingTheFourthWall this episode]]?"
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* TakeThatUs: When frustrated with events, BJ asks, "Who in the world wrote [[BreakingTheFourthWall [[WhoWritesThisCrap this episode]]?"
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: In a more blatant example than usual, Hugo spends a few minutes contemplating his role as a supporting cast member in someone else's story. He decides that it's not really a bad place to be, since it means the plot isn't as interested in him.
** PaintingTheFourthWall: He concludes this thought process by noting that "he'd put enough of a mural on the fourth wall for the time being".
** PaintingTheFourthWall: He concludes this thought process by noting that "he'd put enough of a mural on the fourth wall for the time being".
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: In a more blatant example than usual, Hugo spends a few minutes contemplating his role as a supporting cast member in someone else's story. He decides that it's not really a bad place to be, since it means the plot isn't as interested in him.
** PaintingTheFourthWall: Hehim, and concludes this thought process by noting that "he'd put enough of a mural on the fourth wall for the time being".
** PaintingTheFourthWall: He
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* AffectionateNickname: As in the show, Beetlejuice calls Lydia "Lyds" and "Babes," and her father Charles calls her "Pumpkin."
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* AffectionateNickname: As in the show, Beetlejuice calls Lydia "Lyds" and "Babes," and her father Charles calls her "Pumpkin."" Others start to appear regularly as the series progresses.
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* AscendedExtra: In the actual cartoon, Prince Vince and BJ's brother Donny each appear in exactly two episodes. They're given considerably larger roles here, Prince Vince especially.
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* AscendedExtra: In the actual cartoon, Prince Vince and BJ's brother Donny each appear in exactly two episodes. only a couple of episodes, and are never onscreen together. They're given considerably larger roles here, Prince Vince especially.especially, and develop their own friendship independent of the leads.
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* CallBack: The stories each contain ''several'' references to specific episodes of the show, regarding both characters and past adventures. The sequel stories also contain references to the previous installments.
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* CallBack: The stories each contain ''several'' references to specific episodes of the show, regarding both characters and past adventures. The sequel stories also contain references to the previous installments. There are also a couple of lines from the film, but they're mostly just there as fandom in-jokes.
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* CreatorInJoke: Since the prince remarks that he's aware of the changes to the situation every time the story updates, the implication is that he's one of Lady Norbert's followers.
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* CreatorInJoke: Since the prince remarks that he's aware of the changes to the situation every time the story updates, and that he gets his information from Website/{{Tumblr}}, the implication is that he's one of Lady Norbert's followers.followers. This led to some RecursiveCanon as noted below.
* IncrediblyLamePun: Much like the source material, there are a plethora of bad puns and terrible jokes all throughout the stories.
* MST3KMantra: It's recommended that this be kept in mind anytime something doesn't make sense.
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* RecursiveCanon: As of close to the conclusion of ''The Bug Princess'', there actually ''was'' a Prince Vince Tumblr account (which has since been deleted) following that of the author, which would sometimes comment on the new chapters as they were posted.
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* RecursiveCanon: As of close to the conclusion of ''The Bug Princess'', For quite some time, there actually ''was'' a Prince Vince Tumblr account (which has since been deleted) following that of the author, which would sometimes comment on the new chapters as they were posted.
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** TabletopGame/{{Monopoly}}. Beetlejuice uses "Do not pass Go, do not collect $200" as part of his explanation to Lydia for how [[spoiler:the second MagicallyBindingContract]] works. Later stories contain references to various characters playing the game; Prince Vince warns one character that he will not be receiving a second GetOutOfJailFreeCard.
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** TabletopGame/{{Monopoly}}. Beetlejuice uses "Do not pass Go, do not collect $200" as part of his explanation to Lydia for how [[spoiler:the second MagicallyBindingContract]] works. Later stories contain references to various characters playing the game; Prince Vince warns one character that he will not be receiving a second GetOutOfJailFreeCard. Lady Delphine and the Fairy Godfather apparently play Monopoly together on a regular basis, but no one knows why.
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* SwitchingPOV: Most chapters are shown to be either from Lydia or Beetlejuice's points of view, but a few chapters bring in the viewpoints of other characters too.
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* SwitchingPOV: Most chapters are shown to be either from Lydia or Beetlejuice's points of view, but a few chapters bring in the viewpoints of other characters too.characters, such as [[BumblingDad Charles]], [[BigGood Prince Vince]], [[OriginalCharacter Hugo]], or even [[VillainEpisode Vasile]].
* TheUnreveal: It never does get explained how the Fairy Godfather and Lady Delphine met or why they play Monopoly. The author says that [[IJustWriteTheThing they won't tell her]].
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* WhoWritesThisCrap: Beetlejuice in particular has a tendency to complain about plot twists he doesn't like, making remarks about the talentless hacks employed by Mr. Monitor to write the current episode.
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* WhoWritesThisCrap: Beetlejuice in particular has a tendency to complain about plot twists he doesn't like, making remarks about the talentless hacks employed by Mr. Monitor to write the current episode. At least once he's invoked the trope by name.
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* ForgotAboutHisPowers: Briefly, but BJ actually forgets to check if he still has his powers until Lady Delphine asks about it; he's too distracted by what's happened to Lydia. Once she reminds him, he confirms that he's still got it.
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* NewhartPhoneCall: When BJ phones Lady Delphine for help, Hugo (who is the POV character for the chapter) only hears her side of the conversation.
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* TrueLovesKiss: Averted; for the first time in the series, this fails to resolve the problem.
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* TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou: Lady Delphine outright states this.
-->'''Lady Delphine:''' And if there’s one other thing I know, it’s that the fourth wall does not protect you, me, or anyone else. BJ himself is pretty certain that the plot is up to something, and he doesn’t trust the [[SelfDeprecation hack writer]] as far as he can throw them.
-->'''Lady Delphine:''' And if there’s one other thing I know, it’s that the fourth wall does not protect you, me, or anyone else. BJ himself is pretty certain that the plot is up to something, and he doesn’t trust the [[SelfDeprecation hack writer]] as far as he can throw them.
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** PaintingTheFourthWall: He concludes this thought process by noting that "he'd put enough of a mural on the fourth wall for the time being".
* MagicMisfire: Lady Delphine realizes that the spell on the apple was intended to ''kill'' Lydia. The only reason she survived is because her unborn baby's powers activated to protect her, sending her into the coma instead. This is also the reason why [[CurseEscapeClause BJ's kiss fails to revive her]]; since the spell was altered by the baby, the usual resolution doesn't work.
* ProtectedByAChild: Lydia's unborn baby will not allow her to be killed by the deadly enchantment.
* MagicMisfire: Lady Delphine realizes that the spell on the apple was intended to ''kill'' Lydia. The only reason she survived is because her unborn baby's powers activated to protect her, sending her into the coma instead. This is also the reason why [[CurseEscapeClause BJ's kiss fails to revive her]]; since the spell was altered by the baby, the usual resolution doesn't work.
* ProtectedByAChild: Lydia's unborn baby will not allow her to be killed by the deadly enchantment.
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* DependingOnTheWriter: [[Invoked]] Lady Delphine uses the exact phrase when noting that the plot isn't always more powerful than literary tradition.
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* DependingOnTheWriter: [[Invoked]] {{Invoked}}; Lady Delphine uses the exact phrase when noting that the plot isn't always more powerful than literary tradition.
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* ForcedSleep: Courtesy of an enchanted spinning wheel spindle, just like Disney/SleepingBeauty encountered.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: BJ suggests [[spoiler:going home and telling the magazine that the castle burned down and there was nothing to photograph.]] This ends up being exactly what happens.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: BJ suggests [[spoiler:going home and telling the magazine that the castle burned down and there was nothing to photograph.]] This ends up being exactly what happens.
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* ForcedSleep: Courtesy of an enchanted spinning wheel spindle, just like Disney/SleepingBeauty WesternAnimation/SleepingBeauty encountered.
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** BJ suggests [[spoiler:going home and telling the magazine that the castle burned down and there was nothing to photograph.]] This ends up being exactly what happens.
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** BJ suggests [[spoiler:going home and telling the magazine that the castle burned down and there was nothing to photograph.]] This ends up being exactly what happens.
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* PowersThatBe: This is who appears to be responsible for TheProphecy, and possibly the plot too. Alternately, the plot itself is a sentient being responsible for all of it; see RunningGag.
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* PowersThatBe: This is who appears to be responsible for TheProphecy, and possibly the plot too. Alternately, the plot itself is a sentient being responsible for all of it; see RunningGag.TheProphecy.
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* RecursiveCanon: As of close to the conclusion of ''The Bug Princess'', there actually ''is'' [[http://princevinceoftheneitherworld.tumblr.com a Prince Vince Tumblr]] following her, which sometimes comments on the new chapters as they're posted.
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* RecursiveCanon: As of close to the conclusion of ''The Bug Princess'', there actually ''is'' [[http://princevinceoftheneitherworld.tumblr.com ''was'' a Prince Vince Tumblr]] Tumblr account (which has since been deleted) following her, that of the author, which would sometimes comments comment on the new chapters as they're they were posted.
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* RunningGag: TabletopGame/{{Monopoly}}. Beetlejuice uses "Do not pass Go, do not collect $200" as part of his explanation to Lydia for how [[spoiler:the second MagicallyBindingContract]] works. Later stories contain references to various characters playing the game; Prince Vince warns one character that he will not be receiving a second GetOutOfJailFreeCard.
** Website/{{Tumblr}}, as noted below.
** A gradual one emerges as the series goes on, in which Beetlejuice and Lydia are more or less resigned to the notion that "the plot" is an almost sentient being, and it will cause them to end up where it wants them regardless of their own ideas.
** Website/{{Tumblr}}, as noted below.
** A gradual one emerges as the series goes on, in which Beetlejuice and Lydia are more or less resigned to the notion that "the plot" is an almost sentient being, and it will cause them to end up where it wants them regardless of their own ideas.
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* RunningGag: RunningGag:
** TabletopGame/{{Monopoly}}. Beetlejuice uses "Do not pass Go, do not collect $200" as part of his explanation to Lydia for how [[spoiler:the second MagicallyBindingContract]] works. Later stories contain references to various characters playing the game; Prince Vince warns one character that he will not be receiving a second GetOutOfJailFreeCard.
** Website/{{Tumblr}}, as notedbelow.
in various places.
** A gradual one emerges as the series goes on, in which Beetlejuice and Lydiaare become more or less resigned to the notion that "the plot" is an almost sentient being, in control, and it will cause them to end up where it wants them regardless of their own ideas.ideas. Eventually, the entire main cast more or less agrees that the plot is a SentientCosmicForce and they're all subject to its whims; it's even included on the Characters sheet.
** TabletopGame/{{Monopoly}}. Beetlejuice uses "Do not pass Go, do not collect $200" as part of his explanation to Lydia for how [[spoiler:the second MagicallyBindingContract]] works. Later stories contain references to various characters playing the game; Prince Vince warns one character that he will not be receiving a second GetOutOfJailFreeCard.
** Website/{{Tumblr}}, as noted
** A gradual one emerges as the series goes on, in which Beetlejuice and Lydia
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* ThemeNaming: The entire Juice family is named after insects: Beetlejuice, Bee Juice, Gnat Juice, and Dobsonfly (Donny) Juice. It's taken to the logical extreme when [[spoiler:Lydia gets pregnant; the child's nickname is Bug]].
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* ThemeNaming: ThemeNaming:
** The entire Juice family is named after insects: Beetlejuice, Bee Juice, Gnat Juice, and Dobsonfly (Donny) Juice. It's taken to the logical extreme when [[spoiler:Lydia gets pregnant; the child's nickname is Bug]].
** The entire Juice family is named after insects: Beetlejuice, Bee Juice, Gnat Juice, and Dobsonfly (Donny) Juice. It's taken to the logical extreme when [[spoiler:Lydia gets pregnant; the child's nickname is Bug]].
* DependingOnTheWriter: [[Invoked]] Lady Delphine uses the exact phrase when noting that the plot isn't always more powerful than literary tradition.
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* HalfIdenticalTwins: Beetlejuice describes Milo and Anahita this way, noting that he almost can't tell them apart.
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* HalfIdenticalTwins: Beetlejuice describes Vince's cousins Milo and Anahita this way, noting that he almost can't tell them apart.apart.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: In a more blatant example than usual, Hugo spends a few minutes contemplating his role as a supporting cast member in someone else's story. He decides that it's not really a bad place to be, since it means the plot isn't as interested in him.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: In a more blatant example than usual, Hugo spends a few minutes contemplating his role as a supporting cast member in someone else's story. He decides that it's not really a bad place to be, since it means the plot isn't as interested in him.
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* AnachronismStew: Kinda. Things like ''Film/CorpseBride'' and Website/{{Tumblr}} didn't exist in the time period when the show was in syndication, nor in the years immediately following, which is when these stories would theoretically be set. The 'timeless' nature of the series, however, allows for a massive TimeSkip to bring it into the 21st century.
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* AnachronismStew: Kinda. Things like ''Film/CorpseBride'' ''WesternAnimation/CorpseBride'' and Website/{{Tumblr}} didn't exist in the time period when the show was in syndication, nor in the years immediately following, which is when these stories would theoretically be set. The 'timeless' nature of the series, however, allows for a massive TimeSkip to bring it into the 21st century.
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* DirectLineToTheAuthor[=/=]RecursiveCanon: These two somewhat overlap repeatedly throughout the series, as Prince Vince makes use of his Website/{{Tumblr}} account to not only follow the author and keep tabs on the heroes through chapter updates, but also to occasionally badger her about the story. This is explicitly stated to be the reason that ''Meteor Shower'' exists at all.
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* DirectLineToTheAuthor[=/=]RecursiveCanon: These two somewhat overlap repeatedly throughout the series, as Prince Vince makes use of his Website/{{Tumblr}} account to not only follow the author and keep tabs on the heroes through chapter updates, but also to occasionally [[TheFourthWallWillNotProtectYou badger her about the story.story]]. This is explicitly stated to be the reason that ''Meteor Shower'' exists at all.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Averted; BJ calls Lydia that in one scene, even though she's technically not.
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Averted; Inverted; BJ calls Lydia that in one scene, even though she's technically not.
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: In bits, usually courtesy of Beetlejuice, starting in the second story.
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The first installment, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11739058/1/ Cinderjuice]]'' ([[http://archiveofourown.org/works/5751283/chapters/13251904 alternate link]]), was intended as a stand-alone story.[[note]]Hence why the page is named for it and not the series.[[/note]] Lydia's about to graduate from high school and wants to attend her senior prom, so Beetlejuice asks the Neitherworld's [[Film/TheGodfather Fairy Godfather]] to let him be [[MortalityEnsues human again]] for one night. Shockingly, things don't go according to plan, and the pair find themselves in serious hot water. What initially starts out as a pretty clear ''Disney/{{Cinderella}}'' parody (with a little ''Film/TheGodfather'' thrown in) quickly jumps the tracks to become something a bit more crazy, which is only natural when Beetlejuice is involved.
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The first installment, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11739058/1/ Cinderjuice]]'' ([[http://archiveofourown.org/works/5751283/chapters/13251904 alternate link]]), was intended as a stand-alone story.[[note]]Hence why the page is named for it and not the series.[[/note]] Lydia's about to graduate from high school and wants to attend her senior prom, so Beetlejuice asks the Neitherworld's [[Film/TheGodfather Fairy Godfather]] to let him be [[MortalityEnsues human again]] for one night. Shockingly, things don't go according to plan, and the pair find themselves in serious hot water. What initially starts out as a pretty clear ''Disney/{{Cinderella}}'' ''WesternAnimation/{{Cinderella}}'' parody (with a little ''Film/TheGodfather'' thrown in) quickly jumps the tracks to become something a bit more crazy, which is only natural when Beetlejuice is involved.
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* The [[{{sequel}} second story]], ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11781446/1/ The Bug Princess]]'' ([[http://archiveofourown.org/chapters/13719711?show_comments=true&view_full_work=false#comment_52125526 alternate link]]), is loosely based on ''Disney/ThePrincessAndTheFrog.'' It takes place about [[TimeSkip four years later]] when Lydia is a senior in college. She and BJ take a trip to New Orleans for spring break, where they encounter a whole new kind of magically induced chaos. Thanks to a well-meaning medium, something foul is unleashed on the city, and BJ's worst nightmare comes true.
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* The [[{{sequel}} second story]], ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11781446/1/ The Bug Princess]]'' ([[http://archiveofourown.org/chapters/13719711?show_comments=true&view_full_work=false#comment_52125526 alternate link]]), is loosely based on ''Disney/ThePrincessAndTheFrog.''WesternAnimation/ThePrincessAndTheFrog.'' It takes place about [[TimeSkip four years later]] when Lydia is a senior in college. She and BJ take a trip to New Orleans for spring break, where they encounter a whole new kind of magically induced chaos. Thanks to a well-meaning medium, something foul is unleashed on the city, and BJ's worst nightmare comes true.
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* The third full-length story, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11880198/1/Sleeping-Beetle Sleeping Beetle]]'' ([[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6464482/chapters/14795740 alternate link]]), takes its cues from ''Disney/SleepingBeauty''. Lydia's career gets a major break when a magazine hires her to do an on-location photo essay of a haunted castle in Romania. But when the resident horror tries to take the Ghost With the Most out of the picture, it'll take all her mortal wits to save them both. And the Fairy Godfather knows something important that he's not been sharing so far.
* The fourth story, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12109557/1/Bug-Princess-and-the-Seven-Months Bug Princess and the Seven Months]]'' ([[http://archiveofourown.org/works/7813744 alternate link]]), is partially inspired by ''Disney/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''. After the revelation at the end of the previous story, Lydia settles down to wait. But when she succumbs to the power of an apple (no, really), it's up to the supporting cast to find out what's happened and put things right... because without his mortal morality chain to hold him back, BJ is more dangerous than they realized.
* The fifth and (presumably) final story in the series will be related to ''Disney/{{Tangled}}''.
* The fourth story, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12109557/1/Bug-Princess-and-the-Seven-Months Bug Princess and the Seven Months]]'' ([[http://archiveofourown.org/works/7813744 alternate link]]), is partially inspired by ''Disney/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''. After the revelation at the end of the previous story, Lydia settles down to wait. But when she succumbs to the power of an apple (no, really), it's up to the supporting cast to find out what's happened and put things right... because without his mortal morality chain to hold him back, BJ is more dangerous than they realized.
* The fifth and (presumably) final story in the series will be related to ''Disney/{{Tangled}}''.
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* The third full-length story, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11880198/1/Sleeping-Beetle Sleeping Beetle]]'' ([[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6464482/chapters/14795740 alternate link]]), takes its cues from ''Disney/SleepingBeauty''.''WesternAnimation/SleepingBeauty''. Lydia's career gets a major break when a magazine hires her to do an on-location photo essay of a haunted castle in Romania. But when the resident horror tries to take the Ghost With the Most out of the picture, it'll take all her mortal wits to save them both. And the Fairy Godfather knows something important that he's not been sharing so far.
* The fourth story, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12109557/1/Bug-Princess-and-the-Seven-Months Bug Princess and the Seven Months]]'' ([[http://archiveofourown.org/works/7813744 alternate link]]), is partially inspired by''Disney/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''.''WesternAnimation/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''. After the revelation at the end of the previous story, Lydia settles down to wait. But when she succumbs to the power of an apple (no, really), it's up to the supporting cast to find out what's happened and put things right... because without his mortal morality chain to hold him back, BJ is more dangerous than they realized.
* The fifth and (presumably) final story in the series will be related to''Disney/{{Tangled}}''.''WesternAnimation/{{Tangled}}''.
* The fourth story, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12109557/1/Bug-Princess-and-the-Seven-Months Bug Princess and the Seven Months]]'' ([[http://archiveofourown.org/works/7813744 alternate link]]), is partially inspired by
* The fifth and (presumably) final story in the series will be related to
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* EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses: As implied by the title; she's called the Princess of Beetles.
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* EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses: The Princess of Beetles, once again.