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* AlternateUniverseFic
* AntiHero: Roxas.
* TheBerserker: As of chapter 2, Roxas is showing signs of this. [[spoiler: Normally, people just use magic and their weapons - in the case of Roxas, the Keyblade. In this universe, however, he stomps and strangles his enemies, [[CrazyAwesome even using a Yellow Opera as a ''grenade'']].]]
* AntiHero: Roxas.
* TheBerserker: As of chapter 2, Roxas is showing signs of this. [[spoiler: Normally, people just use magic and their weapons - in the case of Roxas, the Keyblade. In this universe, however, he stomps and strangles his enemies, [[CrazyAwesome even using a Yellow Opera as a ''grenade'']].]]
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* TheBerserker: As of chapter 2, Roxas is showing signs of this. [[spoiler: Normally, people just use magic and their weapons - in the case of Roxas, the Keyblade. In this universe, however, he stomps and strangles his enemies,
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* DeadpanSnarker: Various members of Organization XIII, including Marluxia and Zexion.
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* PsychoForHire: Larxene was one in canon, and it starts getting referenced in chapter three.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6605670/1/Brutality Brutality]]'', by Gundam Kaizer, is a ''Franchise/KIngdomHearts'' fanfiction. It takes place in ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts358DaysOver2'', with the premise that because Axel [[ForWantOfANail was sent on a mission the day before Xemnas found Roxas]], Larxene [[AlternateUniverse was chosen as Roxas's mentor instead]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6605670/1/Brutality Brutality]]'', by Gundam Kaizer, is a ''Franchise/KIngdomHearts'' ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' fanfiction. It takes place in ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts358DaysOver2'', with the premise that because Axel [[ForWantOfANail was sent on a mission the day before Xemnas found Roxas]], Larxene [[AlternateUniverse was chosen as Roxas's mentor instead]].
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* {{Badass}}: Pretty much ''everyone'' in the Organization is Badass to one degree or another, [[DarkerAndEdgier but in this universe]], it seems to be played up a bit. The prose even uses the phrase "as though Roxas were already a shadow of the badass he [[FutureBadass would eventually become]]."
** In chapter 3, [[spoiler: Roxas apparently gets half his face melted off and shrugs it off like it's nothing]].
** In chapter 3, [[spoiler: Roxas apparently gets half his face melted off and shrugs it off like it's nothing]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6605670/1/Brutality Brutality]]'', by Gundam Kaizer.
This takes place in VideoGame/KingdomHearts358DaysOver2, with the premise that because Axel [[ForWantOfANail was sent on a mission the day before Xemnas found Roxas]], Larxene [[AlternateUniverse was chosen as Roxas's mentor instead]].
This takes place in VideoGame/KingdomHearts358DaysOver2, with the premise that because Axel [[ForWantOfANail was sent on a mission the day before Xemnas found Roxas]], Larxene [[AlternateUniverse was chosen as Roxas's mentor instead]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6605670/1/Brutality Brutality]]'', by Gundam Kaizer.
ThisKaizer, is a ''Franchise/KIngdomHearts'' fanfiction. It takes place in VideoGame/KingdomHearts358DaysOver2, ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts358DaysOver2'', with the premise that because Axel [[ForWantOfANail was sent on a mission the day before Xemnas found Roxas]], Larxene [[AlternateUniverse was chosen as Roxas's mentor instead]].
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Not enough to warrant more than a T rating (so far), but Roxas's debut fight against some Heartless {{Mooks}} in the second chapter is notably more savage than most fights in KingdomHearts canon, and the Guardian fight in chapter three is near-horrific.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Not enough to warrant more than a T rating (so far), but Roxas's debut fight against some Heartless {{Mooks}} in the second chapter is notably more savage than most fights in KingdomHearts ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' canon, and the Guardian fight in chapter three is near-horrific.
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This takes place in Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days, with the premise that because Axel [[ForWantOfANail was sent on a mission the day before Xemnas found Roxas]], Larxene [[AlternateUniverse was chosen as Roxas's mentor instead]].
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This takes place in Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days, VideoGame/KingdomHearts358DaysOver2, with the premise that because Axel [[ForWantOfANail was sent on a mission the day before Xemnas found Roxas]], Larxene [[AlternateUniverse was chosen as Roxas's mentor instead]].
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* HotBlooded: Despite being a Nobody, Roxas is notably much more emotional than he was in canon, especially with regards to frustration. See AxeCrazy and WhatTheHellHero for details. [[FridgeLogic Given that he's a Nobody]], and his "emotions" are hinted to be genuine rather than an act, Gundam Kaizer has some explaining to do.
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* HotBlooded: Despite being a Nobody, Roxas is notably much more emotional than he was in canon, especially with regards to frustration. See AxeCrazy and WhatTheHellHero for details. [[FridgeLogic Given that he's a Nobody]], and his "emotions" are hinted to be genuine rather than an act, Gundam Kaizer has some explaining to do.
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* AdaptationalBadass: The Guardian boss Heartless gets a) a WaveMotionGun, b) the ability to BeamSpam it from above Roxas's effective attack range, and c) it's presented as generally ''much'' harder to kill than its game counterpart was.
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** Confirmed as of chapter 3 - Zexion remarks about Roxas fighting "like a mini-Saix"
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** Confirmed as of chapter 3 - Zexion remarks about Roxas fighting "like a mini-Saix"mini-Saix", and Roxas's default battle plan seems to be AttackAttackAttack
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* MadeOfIron: Possibly Roxas, but ''definitely'' The Guardian.
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**Confirmed as of chapter 3 - Zexion remarks about Roxas fighting "like a mini-Saix"
** In chapter 3, [[spoiler: Roxas apparently gets half his face melted off and shrugs it off like it's nothing]].
* BloodKnight: Roxas is growing into one, ''possibly'' with shades of CombatSadomasochist with Larxene is concerned.
* BloodKnight: Roxas is growing into one, ''possibly'' with shades of CombatSadomasochist with Larxene is concerned.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Not enough to warrant more than a T rating (so far), but Roxas's debut fight against some Heartless {{Mooks}} in the second chapter is notably more savage than most fights in KingdomHearts canon.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Not enough to warrant more than a T rating (so far), but Roxas's debut fight against some Heartless {{Mooks}} in the second chapter is notably more savage than most fights in KingdomHearts canon.canon, and the Guardian fight in chapter three is near-horrific.
* MajorInjuryUnderreaction: [[spoiler: Roxas apparently gets half his face melted off, and shurgs it off like it's nothing]]. Larxene gives it a good LampshadeHanging.
* PsychoForHire: Larxene was one in canon, and it starts getting referenced in chapter three.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Larxene appears to be something of a ''tsuntsun'' type in the vein of [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Asuka]], although it's (so far) mostly just degrading Roxas.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Larxene appears to be something of a ''tsuntsun'' type in the vein of [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Asuka]], type, although it's (so far) mostly just degrading Roxas.Roxas. Becomes ''much'' more blatant starting in chapter three.
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* VillainProtagonist: It was sort-of implied to start with, being a ''Days'' fic, but chapter three makes it more obvious with Larxene mentioning her love of killing and causing misery... and Roxas is surprisingly okay with that.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Larxene appears to be something of a ''tsuntsun'' type in the vein of [[NeonGenesisEvangelion Asuka]], although it's (so far) mostly just degrading Roxas.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Larxene appears to be something of a ''tsuntsun'' type in the vein of [[NeonGenesisEvangelion [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Asuka]], although it's (so far) mostly just degrading Roxas.
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* AxeCrazy: As of chapter 2, Roxas is showing signs of either this or BloodKnight. [[spoiler: Normally, people just use magic and their weapons - in the case of Roxas, the Keyblade. In this universe, however, he stomps and strangles his enemies, [[CrazyAwesome even using a Yellow Opera as a ''grenade'']].]]
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* AxeCrazy: TheBerserker: As of chapter 2, Roxas is showing signs of either this or BloodKnight.this. [[spoiler: Normally, people just use magic and their weapons - in the case of Roxas, the Keyblade. In this universe, however, he stomps and strangles his enemies, [[CrazyAwesome even using a Yellow Opera as a ''grenade'']].]]
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* ComesGreatResponsibility: [[PlayingWithATrope Played with.]] Roxas, before an off-screen training session, remembers that Larxene once told him that "With great boredom, comes great [[VideoGameCrueltyPotential cruelty potential]].""
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* ComesGreatResponsibility: [[PlayingWithATrope Played with.]] Roxas, before an off-screen training session, remembers that Larxene once told him that "With great boredom, comes great [[VideoGameCrueltyPotential cruelty potential]]."""
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* {{Jerkass}}: Larxene, in spades.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Larxene, in spades.naturally.
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* AntiHero: Roxas.
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* BloodKnight: As of chapter 2, Roxas seems to becoming either this or AxeCrazy - see that entry above.
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* TrainingFromHell: Offscreen, but heavily implied to be the reason for [[TookALevelInBadass the above trope]].
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* HotBlooded: Despite being a Nobody, Roxas is notably much more emotional than he was in canon, especially with regards to frustration. See AxeCrazy and WhatTheHellHero for details.
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* ForWantOfANail: Axel was sent on a mission just before the Organization found Roxas, forcing Xemnas to find a replacement mentor.
* HotBlooded: Despite being a Nobody, Roxas is notably much more emotional than he was in canon, especially with regards to frustration. See AxeCrazy and WhatTheHellHero for details. [[FridgeLogic Given that he's a Nobody]], and his "emotions" are hinted to be genuine rather than an act, Gundam Kaizer has some explaining to do.
* HotBlooded: Despite being a Nobody, Roxas is notably much more emotional than he was in canon, especially with regards to frustration. See AxeCrazy and WhatTheHellHero for details. [[FridgeLogic Given that he's a Nobody]], and his "emotions" are hinted to be genuine rather than an act, Gundam Kaizer has some explaining to do.
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* AxeCrazy: As of chapter 2, Roxas is showing signs of either this or BloodKnight. [[spoiler: Normally, people just use magic and their weapons - in the case of Roxas, the Keyblade. In this universe, however, he stomps and strangles his enemies, even using a Yellow Opera as a ''grenade''.]]
* BigScrewedUpFamily: Gundam Kaizer seems to treat the entire Organization as this, or at least as two separate families.
* BigScrewedUpFamily: Gundam Kaizer seems to treat the entire Organization as this, or at least as two separate families.
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* AxeCrazy: As of chapter 2, Roxas is showing signs of either this or BloodKnight. [[spoiler: Normally, people just use magic and their weapons - in the case of Roxas, the Keyblade. In this universe, however, he stomps and strangles his enemies, [[CrazyAwesome even using a Yellow Opera as a ''grenade''.''grenade'']].]]
*BigScrewedUpFamily: Gundam Kaizer seems to treat {{Badass}}: Pretty much ''everyone'' in the entire Organization as this, is Badass to one degree or at least as two separate families.another, [[DarkerAndEdgier but in this universe]], it seems to be played up a bit. The prose even uses the phrase "as though Roxas were already a shadow of the badass he [[FutureBadass would eventually become]]."
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* CallingTheOldManOut / WhatTheHellHero: In the second chapter, after Xion's introduction, Xemnas asks Larxene for a report on Roxas's progress, and on whether or not he's ready for missions yet. They have a brief conversation about Roxas while completely ignoring/forgetting his presence. Roxas, getting frustrated, interjects, "I'm sitting right here, you know. Don't talk about me like I'm not present!"
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* DeadpanSnarker: Various members of Organization XIII, including Marluxia,
* ItGotWorse - For the wizards, the robbery of Gringots by pikachus gets a lot worse when ''the basilisk'' emerges from a pokeball.
* ItGotWorse - For the wizards, the robbery of Gringots by pikachus gets a lot worse when ''the basilisk'' emerges from a pokeball.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Not enough to warrant more than a T rating (so far), but Roxas's debut fight against some Heartless {{Mooks}} in the second chapter is notably more savage than most fights in KingdomHearts canon.
* DeadpanSnarker: Various members of Organization XIII, includingMarluxia,
Marluxia and Zexion.
*ItGotWorse - For HotBlooded: Despite being a Nobody, Roxas is notably much more emotional than he was in canon, especially with regards to frustration. See AxeCrazy and WhatTheHellHero for details.
* {{Irony}}: In thewizards, the robbery first chapter, Xemnas decides that, for a change of Gringots by pikachus pace, he'll let his peons vote on who gets a lot worse when ''the basilisk'' emerges saddled with training/rasing Roxas, and himself abstains from voting. It ends up a pokeball.tie between [[spoiler: Luxord and Larxene]], and Xemnas ends up having to be the tiebreaker anyway, and he decides that the entire thing was a waste of time.
* {{Jerkass}}: Larxene, in spades.
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* {{Irony}}: In the
* {{Jerkass}}: Larxene, in spades.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: In chapter 1, Gundam Kaizer seems to paint Xemnas, Xigbar, and especially Zexion as these.
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* PetTheDog: [[PlayingWithATrope In a roundabout way.]] [[{{Jerkass}} Larxene]], making a report to Xemnas in the second chapter, says that he "could probably fetch the laundry by himself..." Which, to be honest, IS a step-up from being totally worthless not long before.
* PrecociousCrush: [[ShipTease Roxas appears to have one for]] [[{{Jerkass}} Larxene]], despite her insulting and degrading him constantly.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: In chapter 1, Gundam Kaizer seems to paint Xemnas, Xigbar, andespecially ''especially'' Zexion as these.
* PrecociousCrush: [[ShipTease Roxas appears to have one for]] [[{{Jerkass}} Larxene]], despite her insulting and degrading him constantly.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: In chapter 1, Gundam Kaizer seems to paint Xemnas, Xigbar, and
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* TookALevelInBadass: Roxas, at least compared to canon at the same timeframe.
* VideoGameCrueltyPotential: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by Larxene, if you'll excuse that none of the characters are aware that they're actually IN a video game.
* VideoGameCrueltyPotential: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by Larxene, if you'll excuse that none of the characters are aware that they're actually IN a video game.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Roxas, at least compared to canon at the same timeframe.
timeframe. Apparently [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] in that while Axel didn't do anything with Roxas's first week in canon, Larxene's implied to have been forcing him to defend himself against her attacks.
-->(Larxene would) ... get him used to holding a weapon... one way, or another.
* {{Tsundere}}: Larxene appears to be something of a ''tsuntsun'' type in the vein of [[NeonGenesisEvangelion Asuka]], although it's (so far) mostly just degrading Roxas.
* VideoGameCrueltyPotential: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by Larxene, if you'll excuse that none of the characters [[MediumAwareness are aware thatthey're they're]] [[SubvertedTrope actually IN a video game.]]
-->(Larxene would) ... get him used to holding a weapon... one way, or another.
* {{Tsundere}}: Larxene appears to be something of a ''tsuntsun'' type in the vein of [[NeonGenesisEvangelion Asuka]], although it's (so far) mostly just degrading Roxas.
* VideoGameCrueltyPotential: [[InvokedTrope Invoked]] by Larxene, if you'll excuse that none of the characters [[MediumAwareness are aware that