Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Changed line(s) 29 (click to see context) from:
* AndThatsTerrible: Rei's father's engagement to Lucy.
to:
%% * AndThatsTerrible: Rei's father's engagement to Lucy.
Changed line(s) 33 (click to see context) from:
* AnimeThemeSong: The first intro is Lilium from ''Manga/ElfenLied''. (With incorrect lyrics...)
to:
* AnimeThemeSong: The first intro is Lilium from ''Manga/ElfenLied''. (With With incorrect lyrics...)lyrics.
Changed line(s) 37,38 (click to see context) from:
** A lot of the GratuitousJapanese - particularly the use of UsefulNotes/JapaneseHonorifics - is incorrect.
** There is also the fact that the author claims "Tenshikuzu" means "Angel Dust" in Japanese. It means ''Angel Garbage''.[[note]]To clarify, "kuzu" (クズ) means "dust" in the sense that it's referring to filth and/or garbage.[[/note]]
** There is also the fact that the author claims "Tenshikuzu" means "Angel Dust" in Japanese. It means ''Angel Garbage''.[[note]]To clarify, "kuzu" (クズ) means "dust" in the sense that it's referring to filth and/or garbage.[[/note]]
to:
** A lot of the GratuitousJapanese - GratuitousJapanese, particularly the use of UsefulNotes/JapaneseHonorifics - UsefulNotes/JapaneseHonorifics, is incorrect.
** There is also the fact that the author claims "Tenshikuzu" means "Angel Dust" inJapanese. It means ''Angel Garbage''.[[note]]To clarify, "kuzu" (クズ) means "dust" Japanese, most likely in reference to the sense that it's referring to filth and/or garbage.[[/note]]world "Hoshikuzu", meaning "Stardust". However, "Tenshikuzu" is completely made up.
** There is also the fact that the author claims "Tenshikuzu" means "Angel Dust" in
Changed line(s) 42,45 (click to see context) from:
* BlatantLies: The creator insists she speaks Japanese.
* BodyHorror:
** The fanime has some very off model moments.
** [[spoiler:Reicheru's eyes get gouged out and her limbs get pulled off in a rack in Chapter 23.]]
* BodyHorror:
** The fanime has some very off model moments.
** [[spoiler:Reicheru's eyes get gouged out and her limbs get pulled off in a rack in Chapter 23.]]
to:
%% * BlatantLies: The creator insists she speaks Japanese.
*BodyHorror:
** The fanime has some very off model moments.
**BodyHorror: [[spoiler:Reicheru's eyes get gouged out and her limbs get pulled off in a rack in Chapter 23.]]
*
** The fanime has some very off model moments.
**
Changed line(s) 54 (click to see context) from:
* DeathByDisfigurement: [[spoiler: Kagome]] is badly disfigured after being tortured by Sesshomaru. After she escapes and finds Reicheru, Rei tries to kill her upon realizing that she might be angry at Reicheru for letting it happen. Instead, [[spoiler: Alucard]] kills her in a simultaneous BigDamnHeroes / HeelFaceTurn moment.
to:
* DeathByDisfigurement: [[spoiler: Kagome]] is badly disfigured after being tortured by Sesshomaru. After she escapes and finds Reicheru, Rei tries to kill her upon realizing that she might be angry at Reicheru for letting it happen. Instead, [[spoiler: Alucard]] kills her in a simultaneous BigDamnHeroes / HeelFaceTurn moment.
Changed line(s) 65,66 (click to see context) from:
* GodivaHair: In some of the fanime openings, Reicheru's hair is ''just'' long enough to censor her nipples. Due to the amateurish art style, it isn't really as sexy as it sounds.
* {{Gonk}}: Alucard is this in the fanime.
* {{Gonk}}: Alucard is this in the fanime.
to:
* GodivaHair: In some of the fanime openings, Reicheru's hair is ''just'' long enough to censor her nipples. Due to the amateurish art style, it isn't really as sexy as it sounds.\n
%% * {{Gonk}}: Alucard is this in the fanime.
%% * {{Gonk}}: Alucard is this in the fanime.
Changed line(s) 73,75 (click to see context) from:
* {{Hypocrite}}: Reicheru has shades of this.
** For instance, she [[SlutShaming slut-shames]] Lucy for having casual sex with Germany and Bolin [[InformedFlaw (which is never actually seen or mentioned again)]], but Reicheru cheated on her boyfriend Denmark with Inuyasha.
** In an earlier chapter, Reicheru tries to stop Princess Mononoke/Mary Laceheart from killing Alucard... even though she herself wanted to kill him in the very same chapter.
** For instance, she [[SlutShaming slut-shames]] Lucy for having casual sex with Germany and Bolin [[InformedFlaw (which is never actually seen or mentioned again)]], but Reicheru cheated on her boyfriend Denmark with Inuyasha.
** In an earlier chapter, Reicheru tries to stop Princess Mononoke/Mary Laceheart from killing Alucard... even though she herself wanted to kill him in the very same chapter.
to:
* {{Hypocrite}}: Reicheru has shades of this. \n** For instance, she [[SlutShaming slut-shames]] Lucy for having casual sex with Germany and Bolin [[InformedFlaw (which is never actually seen or mentioned again)]], but Reicheru cheated on her boyfriend Denmark with Inuyasha.
** InInuyasha. And, in an earlier chapter, Reicheru tries to stop Princess Mononoke/Mary Laceheart from killing Alucard... even though she herself wanted to kill him in the very same chapter.
** In
Changed line(s) 77,79 (click to see context) from:
* IncestSubtext:
** One might argue that Reicheru's father had molested her at some point, since he seems to watch her while she has sex with Denmark. Allegedly he is also the cause for Reicheru's sex dreams.
** When Reicheru is making out [[ScrewYourself with herself]] in order to prove to herself that she loves herself ([[ItMakesSenseInContext it makes some sense in context]]) she states how she reminds herself of her mother...
** One might argue that Reicheru's father had molested her at some point, since he seems to watch her while she has sex with Denmark. Allegedly he is also the cause for Reicheru's sex dreams.
** When Reicheru is making out [[ScrewYourself with herself]] in order to prove to herself that she loves herself ([[ItMakesSenseInContext it makes some sense in context]]) she states how she reminds herself of her mother...
to:
* IncestSubtext:
** One might argue that Reicheru's father had molested her at some point, since he seems to watch her while she has sex with Denmark. Allegedly he is also the cause for Reicheru's sex dreams.
**IncestSubtext: When Reicheru is making out [[ScrewYourself with herself]] in order to prove to herself that she loves herself ([[ItMakesSenseInContext it makes some sense in context]]) she states how she reminds herself of her mother...mother...
%% ** One might argue that Reicheru's father had molested her at some point, since he seems to watch her while she has sex with Denmark. Allegedly he is also the cause for Reicheru's sex dreams.
** One might argue that Reicheru's father had molested her at some point, since he seems to watch her while she has sex with Denmark. Allegedly he is also the cause for Reicheru's sex dreams.
**
%% ** One might argue that Reicheru's father had molested her at some point, since he seems to watch her while she has sex with Denmark. Allegedly he is also the cause for Reicheru's sex dreams.
Changed line(s) 90,92 (click to see context) from:
* {{Malaproper}}: Everywhere.
---> ''Inuyasha'': "No, Reicheru, you cant' go! You're gregnant!"
* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: And ''how,'' this fic is giving ''Fanfic/FaceTheStrange'' a run for its money! So far we have ''Manga/InuYasha'', ''Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers'', ''Manga/BlackButler'', ''Anime/{{Hellsing}}'', ''WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra'', ''Manga/ElfenLied'', ''Anime/PrincessMononoke'', ''Anime/FullmetalAlchemist2003'', Music/{{Vocaloid}} and ''Anime/DragonBallZ''.
---> ''Inuyasha'': "No, Reicheru, you cant' go! You're gregnant!"
* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: And ''how,'' this fic is giving ''Fanfic/FaceTheStrange'' a run for its money! So far we have ''Manga/InuYasha'', ''Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers'', ''Manga/BlackButler'', ''Anime/{{Hellsing}}'', ''WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra'', ''Manga/ElfenLied'', ''Anime/PrincessMononoke'', ''Anime/FullmetalAlchemist2003'', Music/{{Vocaloid}} and ''Anime/DragonBallZ''.
to:
%% * {{Malaproper}}: Everywhere.
%% ---> ''Inuyasha'': "No, Reicheru, you cant' go! You're gregnant!"
* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover:And ''how,'' this fic is giving ''Fanfic/FaceTheStrange'' a run for its money! So far we have ''Manga/InuYasha'', ''Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers'', ''Manga/BlackButler'', ''Anime/{{Hellsing}}'', ''WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra'', ''Manga/ElfenLied'', ''Anime/PrincessMononoke'', ''Anime/FullmetalAlchemist2003'', Music/{{Vocaloid}} and ''Anime/DragonBallZ''.
%% ---> ''Inuyasha'': "No, Reicheru, you cant' go! You're gregnant!"
* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover:
Changed line(s) 102 (click to see context) from:
* NonIndicativeName: Most of the chapters have named involving rain. There is no rain in the story itself. In fact, the first chapter - titled "The First Rainy Night" - is set on a nice, sunny morning.
to:
* NonIndicativeName: Most of the chapters have named involving rain. There is no rain in the story itself. In fact, the first chapter - chapter, titled "The First Rainy Night" - Night", is set on a nice, sunny morning.
Changed line(s) 104,106 (click to see context) from:
* ObligatorySwearing:
** "WHAT THE FUCK DO MEAN YOU CAN'T CONTROL YOURSELF?"
** "RUN IT THE FUCK OVER!"
** "WHAT THE FUCK DO MEAN YOU CAN'T CONTROL YOURSELF?"
** "RUN IT THE FUCK OVER!"
to:
%% * ObligatorySwearing:
%% ** "WHAT THE FUCK DO MEAN YOU CAN'T CONTROL YOURSELF?"
%% ** "RUN IT THE FUCK OVER!"
%% ** "WHAT THE FUCK DO MEAN YOU CAN'T CONTROL YOURSELF?"
%% ** "RUN IT THE FUCK OVER!"
Changed line(s) 118 (click to see context) from:
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: The author often misspells "back" as "black" and - more commonly - "angel" as "angle," among other examples.
to:
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: The author often misspells "back" as "black" and - and, more commonly - commonly, "angel" as "angle," among other examples.
Changed line(s) 121,122 (click to see context) from:
* SoBeautifulItsACurse: Many characters remind Reicheru of this.
* SpeechImpediment: Minna-chan has a stutter, though oddly, she didn't have it before she lost her memory and it seems to get worse around Hanayubi, [[{{Squick}} which kind of implies he molested her as a helpless amnesiac]].
* SpeechImpediment: Minna-chan has a stutter, though oddly, she didn't have it before she lost her memory and it seems to get worse around Hanayubi, [[{{Squick}} which kind of implies he molested her as a helpless amnesiac]].
to:
%% * SoBeautifulItsACurse: Many characters remind Reicheru of this.
* SpeechImpediment:Minna-chan Minna has a stutter, though oddly, she didn't have it before she lost her memory and it seems to get worse around Hanayubi, [[{{Squick}} which kind of implies he molested her as a helpless amnesiac]].amnesiac.
* SpeechImpediment:
Changed line(s) 125,127 (click to see context) from:
* ThisIsForEmphasisBitch:
** In the first chapter, Reicheru's father says "I'm undefeatable, bitch."
** "Headshot, bitch."
** In the first chapter, Reicheru's father says "I'm undefeatable, bitch."
** "Headshot, bitch."
to:
* ThisIsForEmphasisBitch:
**ThisIsForEmphasisBitch: In the first chapter, Reicheru's father says "I'm undefeatable, bitch."
%% ** "Headshot, bitch."
**
%% ** "Headshot, bitch."
Changed line(s) 129 (click to see context) from:
* UnfortunateName: Reicheru says Tenshikuzu supposedly translates to "Angel Dust". However, Angel Dust is another name for Phencyclidine, a hallucinatory drug. Also, "Tenshikuzu" actually translates to "Angel Garbage".
to:
* UnfortunateName: Reicheru says Tenshikuzu supposedly translates to "Angel Dust". However, Angel Dust is another name for Phencyclidine, a hallucinatory drug. Also, "Tenshikuzu" actually translates is a made-up word that sounds like it's meant to "Angel Garbage".be based on "Hoshikuzu" ("Stardust"), but "Kuzu" in this context means "Waste".
Changed line(s) 132 (click to see context) from:
* WhatTheHellHero: Most of the villains' motivations revolve around their anger at Rei for all the terrible things she's done.
to:
* WhatTheHellHero: Most of the villains' motivations revolve around their anger at Rei Reicheru for all the terrible things she's done.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Removed misuse. Breast Expansion is for intentional examples of someone's chest getting larger; this is just Off Model.
Deleted line(s) 51 (click to see context) :
* BreastExpansion: In the fanime, Reicheru's breasts never stay the same size for more than one shot.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Catchphrase has been disambiguated. Removing ZCE.
Deleted line(s) 52,54 (click to see context) :
* CatchPhrase:
** Reicheru has "Nya-on~" as her catchphrase.
** Elaine/Tenshikuzu also says "Nyu" a lot, which gets confusing when Nyu from Elfen Lied is introduced into the story, only she's referred to as 'Mew' in the chapters Elaine is in.
** Reicheru has "Nya-on~" as her catchphrase.
** Elaine/Tenshikuzu also says "Nyu" a lot, which gets confusing when Nyu from Elfen Lied is introduced into the story, only she's referred to as 'Mew' in the chapters Elaine is in.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
No it's not. "Kun" can be used for girls.
Changed line(s) 37 (click to see context) from:
** A lot of the GratuitousJapanese - particularly the use of UsefulNotes/JapaneseHonorifics - is incorrect. Most notably, the "-kun" suffix (a term of endearment used for men) is regularly applied to female characters. Inuyasha's confession of love for Rei is heralded by his calling her "Rei-kun".
to:
** A lot of the GratuitousJapanese - particularly the use of UsefulNotes/JapaneseHonorifics - is incorrect. Most notably, the "-kun" suffix (a term of endearment used for men) is regularly applied to female characters. Inuyasha's confession of love for Rei is heralded by his calling her "Rei-kun".
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 96 (click to see context) from:
* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: And ''how,'' this fic is giving Fanfic/FaceTheStrange a run for its money! So far we have Manga/InuYasha, Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers, Manga/BlackButler, Anime/{{Hellsing}}, WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra, Manga/ElfenLied, Anime/PrincessMononoke, Anime/FullmetalAlchemist2003, Music/{{Vocaloid}} and Anime/DragonBallZ.
to:
* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: And ''how,'' this fic is giving Fanfic/FaceTheStrange ''Fanfic/FaceTheStrange'' a run for its money! So far we have Manga/InuYasha, Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers, Manga/BlackButler, Anime/{{Hellsing}}, WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra, Manga/ElfenLied, Anime/PrincessMononoke, Anime/FullmetalAlchemist2003, ''Manga/InuYasha'', ''Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers'', ''Manga/BlackButler'', ''Anime/{{Hellsing}}'', ''WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra'', ''Manga/ElfenLied'', ''Anime/PrincessMononoke'', ''Anime/FullmetalAlchemist2003'', Music/{{Vocaloid}} and Anime/DragonBallZ.''Anime/DragonBallZ''.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Fullmetal Alchemist disambiguation
Changed line(s) 96 (click to see context) from:
* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: And ''how,'' this fic is giving Fanfic/FaceTheStrange a run for its money! So far we have Manga/InuYasha, Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers, Manga/BlackButler, Anime/{{Hellsing}}, WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra, Manga/ElfenLied, Anime/PrincessMononoke, Anime/FullmetalAlchemist, Music/{{Vocaloid}} and Anime/DragonBallZ.
to:
* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: And ''how,'' this fic is giving Fanfic/FaceTheStrange a run for its money! So far we have Manga/InuYasha, Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers, Manga/BlackButler, Anime/{{Hellsing}}, WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra, Manga/ElfenLied, Anime/PrincessMononoke, Anime/FullmetalAlchemist, Anime/FullmetalAlchemist2003, Music/{{Vocaloid}} and Anime/DragonBallZ.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 7,10 (click to see context) from:
''Blood Raining Night'' is a crossover/self-insert fanfiction with Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers, Manga/InuYasha, Manga/ElfenLied, WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra, Anime/DragonBallZ, Manga/FullmetalAlchemist, Manga/HellSing, Manga/BlackButler and much more! The story revolves around [[OverlyLongName Reicheru Ketsuekineko-oni]], a vampire cat demon who killed her mother when she was a baby, was abandoned by her father, and works for the Yakuza. She also is dating Denmark, has Inuyasha as her trainer, a half sister who is half angel named Yuki, and is SoBeautifulItsACurse. It all goes downhill from there...
On July 20, 2012, Reicheru released the {{Fanime}} for Blood Raining Night on to Website/YouTube with most viewers thinking it to be a {{Troll}} Fanime. There is still debate if Blood Raining Night is a {{Troll Fic}} or not. Over time, the [[ArtEvolution art for the fanime has improved]], the writer's spelling has gotten better, and she has been listening to people's recommendations of what not to do.
On July 20, 2012, Reicheru released the {{Fanime}} for Blood Raining Night on to Website/YouTube with most viewers thinking it to be a {{Troll}} Fanime. There is still debate if Blood Raining Night is a {{Troll Fic}} or not. Over time, the [[ArtEvolution art for the fanime has improved]], the writer's spelling has gotten better, and she has been listening to people's recommendations of what not to do.
to:
''Blood Raining Night'' is a crossover/self-insert fanfiction with Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers, Manga/InuYasha, Manga/ElfenLied, WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra, Anime/DragonBallZ, Manga/FullmetalAlchemist, Manga/HellSing, Manga/BlackButler ''Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers'', ''Manga/InuYasha'', ''Manga/ElfenLied'', ''WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra'', ''Anime/DragonBallZ'', ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist'', ''Manga/HellSing'', ''Manga/BlackButler'' and much more! The story revolves around [[OverlyLongName Reicheru Ketsuekineko-oni]], a vampire cat demon who killed her mother when she was a baby, was abandoned by her father, and works for the Yakuza. She also is dating Denmark, has Inuyasha as her trainer, a half sister who is half angel named Yuki, and is SoBeautifulItsACurse. It all goes downhill from there...
On July 20, 2012, Reicheru released the {{Fanime}} forBlood ''Blood Raining Night Night'' on to Website/YouTube with most viewers thinking it to be a {{Troll}} Fanime. There is still debate if Blood ''Blood Raining Night Night'' is a {{Troll Fic}} or not. Over time, the [[ArtEvolution art for the fanime has improved]], the writer's spelling has gotten better, and she has been listening to people's recommendations of what not to do.
On July 20, 2012, Reicheru released the {{Fanime}} for
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 115 (click to see context) from:
%% * OutOfCharacter: ''Everyone.''
to:
Changed line(s) 128 (click to see context) from:
%%* TeenPregnancy: Reicheru.
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 34 (click to see context) from:
%% * ArtisticLicenceAnatomy: In the first chapter, Reicheru's breasts are described as "delecately [sic] bouncing in the wind".
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Gainaxing is definition only now.
%% * ArtisticLicenceAnatomy: In the first chapter, Reicheru's breasts are described as "delecately [sic] bouncing in the wind".
Deleted line(s) 67 (click to see context) :
* {{Gainaxing}}: In the first chapter, Reicheru's breasts are described as "delecately [sic] bouncing in the wind".
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Up To Eleven is being dewicked.
Changed line(s) 74 (click to see context) from:
** [[UpToEleven "Konnichiwa! Watashinonamaeha Reicheru Ketsueki, sore wa anata ni aete ureshidesu!"]]
to:
** [[UpToEleven "Konnichiwa! Watashinonamaeha Reicheru Ketsueki, sore wa anata ni aete ureshidesu!"]]ureshidesu!"
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* EyeScream: [[spoiler:Part of the punishment Reicheru has to go through to atone for her sins and get her daughter back involves getting stabbed in the eyes with nails. She stays blind from here on out.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Incest Is Relative is an index, not a trope
Deleted line(s) 80,82 (click to see context) :
* IncestIsRelative: There is... quite a bit of this going on in the story...
** At some point in the backstory, Reicheru and Alucard had sex, despite being cousins.
** Reicheru and Alucard also apparently share the same mother too. Alucard also had sex with Yuki, Reicheru's sister. {{Squick}}.
** At some point in the backstory, Reicheru and Alucard had sex, despite being cousins.
** Reicheru and Alucard also apparently share the same mother too. Alucard also had sex with Yuki, Reicheru's sister. {{Squick}}.
Added DiffLines:
* KissingCousins: At some point in the backstory, Reicheru and Alucard had sex, despite being cousins.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 11,12 (click to see context) from:
You can watch the entire series on [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLZzUIMsIYmgw_hwZLbZxeMkkDi4SLdsC4 this playlist]]. Episode 7 has been deleted from Website/YouTube [[FetishRetardant because of a very disturbing sex scene.]] The author has a Website/DeviantArt [[http://reicheru-ketsueki.deviantart.com/ here.]]
to:
You can watch the entire series on [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLZzUIMsIYmgw_hwZLbZxeMkkDi4SLdsC4 this playlist]]. Episode 7 has been deleted from Website/YouTube [[FetishRetardant because of a very disturbing sex scene.]] The author has a Website/DeviantArt [[http://reicheru-ketsueki.deviantart.com/ here.]]
here]] and a website of her own [[https://reicheruskittypowers.webs.com/ here]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 37 (click to see context) from:
** There is also the fact that the author claims "Tenshikuzu" means "Angel Dust" in Japanese. It means ''Angel Garbage''.
to:
** There is also the fact that the author claims "Tenshikuzu" means "Angel Dust" in Japanese. It means ''Angel Garbage''. [[note]]To clarify, "kuzu" (クズ) means "dust" in the sense that it's referring to filth and/or garbage.[[/note]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* IdiotBall: A lot, one strange example being that Alucard is apparently deathly allergic to peanuts, yet doesn't bother to check the health warnings when ordering food on a date with Minna and mocks her for doing so beforehand.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Moving cut Critical Research Failure entries. They belong somewhere.
Added DiffLines:
* ArtisticLicenseBiology: Sakura trees are shown to be blooming in the summer, even though real sakura trees bloom in the spring.
Added DiffLines:
* InNameOnly:
** Sesshomaru's first appearance has him bring up that he wants to kill Inuyasha and Reicheru to avenge the death of his and Inuyasha's mother. Any ''Anime/InuYasha'' fan can tell you that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru have the same ''father'', not the same mother.
** Every single canon character who appears is at least somewhat OutOfCharacter.
** Sesshomaru's first appearance has him bring up that he wants to kill Inuyasha and Reicheru to avenge the death of his and Inuyasha's mother. Any ''Anime/InuYasha'' fan can tell you that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru have the same ''father'', not the same mother.
** Every single canon character who appears is at least somewhat OutOfCharacter.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 66 (click to see context) from:
* GenderBender: Shippo, who was a boy in [[Anime/InuYasha his home series]], is referred to as Rin's girlfriend here.
to:
* GenderBender: GenderFlip: Shippo, who was a boy in [[Anime/InuYasha his home series]], is referred to as Rin's girlfriend here.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 125 (click to see context) from:
* ThisIsForEmphasisBitch: "Headshot, bitch."
to:
* ThisIsForEmphasisBitch: ThisIsForEmphasisBitch:
** In the first chapter, Reicheru's father says "I'm undefeatable, bitch."
** "Headshot, bitch."
** In the first chapter, Reicheru's father says "I'm undefeatable, bitch."
** "Headshot, bitch."
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* {{Gainaxing}}: In the first chapter, Reicheru's breasts are described as "delecately [sic] bouncing in the wind".
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 18,20 (click to see context) :
* AdaptationalWimp:
** Lucy is capable of destroying entire armies in [[Manga/ElfenLied her canon series.]] Here, she runs off crying after being [[SlutShaming slut-shamed]] by Reicheru.
** Also, Princess Mononoke has been renamed "Mary Laceheart" and shows up in one scene, tries to kill Alucard and then sort of leaves again.
** Lucy is capable of destroying entire armies in [[Manga/ElfenLied her canon series.]] Here, she runs off crying after being [[SlutShaming slut-shamed]] by Reicheru.
** Also, Princess Mononoke has been renamed "Mary Laceheart" and shows up in one scene, tries to kill Alucard and then sort of leaves again.
Added DiffLines:
* AdaptationalWimp:
** Lucy is capable of destroying entire armies in [[Manga/ElfenLied her canon series.]] Here, she runs off crying after being [[SlutShaming slut-shamed]] by Reicheru.
** Also, Princess Mononoke has been renamed "Mary Laceheart" and shows up in one scene, tries to kill Alucard and then sort of leaves again.
** Lucy is capable of destroying entire armies in [[Manga/ElfenLied her canon series.]] Here, she runs off crying after being [[SlutShaming slut-shamed]] by Reicheru.
** Also, Princess Mononoke has been renamed "Mary Laceheart" and shows up in one scene, tries to kill Alucard and then sort of leaves again.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ContentWarnings: The chapters with more NSFW material have a "hentai warning" placed before them. More important things the fic ''actually'' doesn't warn about are depictions of rape and torture.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* FanDisservice: In Chapter 9, the author claims [[GirlOnGirlIsHot the men in the audience will find the second sex scene hot.]] [[spoiler:The "sex scene" involves Korra raping a crying Kagome in a torture room, with a disgusting description of genital mutilation.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 113,116 (click to see context) from:
* RaceLift: Either that, or just bad spelling.
** When Reicheru's father returns from his absence at the beginning of the story, Rei is horrified that he is now black.
** Later on, Korra casually leaves one scene with an assurance that "I'll be black."
*** Speaking of Korra, her FantasyCounterpartCulture is supposed to be an analogue to Inuit. Here, she is now Mexican.
** When Reicheru's father returns from his absence at the beginning of the story, Rei is horrified that he is now black.
** Later on, Korra casually leaves one scene with an assurance that "I'll be black."
*** Speaking of Korra, her FantasyCounterpartCulture is supposed to be an analogue to Inuit. Here, she is now Mexican.
to:
* RaceLift: Either that, or just bad spelling.
** When Reicheru's father returns from his absence at the beginning of the story, Rei is horrified that he is now black.
** Later on, Korra casually leaves one scene with an assurance that "I'll be black."
*** Speaking of Korra, herKorra's FantasyCounterpartCulture is supposed to be an analogue to the Inuit. Here, she is now Mexican.
** When Reicheru's father returns from his absence at the beginning of the story, Rei is horrified that he is now black.
** Later on, Korra casually leaves one scene with an assurance that "I'll be black."
*** Speaking of Korra, her
Changed line(s) 118 (click to see context) from:
* RougeAnglesofSatin: The author often misspells "back" as "black" and - more commonly - "angel" as "angle," among other examples.
to:
* RougeAnglesofSatin: RougeAnglesOfSatin: The author often misspells "back" as "black" and - more commonly - "angel" as "angle," among other examples.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 46 (click to see context) from:
* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:Reicheru's eyes get gouged out and her limbs get pulled off in a rack after her father throws her baby off a cliff in Chapter 22.]]
to:
* BreakTheCutie: BreakTheCutie:
** [[spoiler:Reicheru's eyes get gouged out and her limbs get pulled off in a rack after her father throws her baby off a cliff in Chapter 22.]]
** [[spoiler:Reicheru's eyes get gouged out and her limbs get pulled off in a rack after her father throws her baby off a cliff in Chapter 22.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 41 (click to see context) from:
* BodyHorror: The fanime has some very off model moments.
to:
* BodyHorror: BodyHorror:
** The fanime has some very off model moments.
** The fanime has some very off model moments.
Changed line(s) 74,75 (click to see context) from:
** KissingCousins: At some point in the backstory, Reicheru and Alucard had sex, despite being cousins.
** BrotherSisterIncest: Reicheru and Alucard also apparently share the same mother too. Alucard also had sex with Yuki, Reicheru's sister. {{Squick}}.
** BrotherSisterIncest: Reicheru and Alucard also apparently share the same mother too. Alucard also had sex with Yuki, Reicheru's sister. {{Squick}}.
to:
** KissingCousins: At some point in the backstory, Reicheru and Alucard had sex, despite being cousins.
**BrotherSisterIncest: Reicheru and Alucard also apparently share the same mother too. Alucard also had sex with Yuki, Reicheru's sister. {{Squick}}.
**
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
Changed line(s) 98 (click to see context) from:
* NotSoDifferent: Lucy points out that both she and Rei have had tragic pasts. Rei counters this by insisting that hers was ''more'' tragic (even though she wasn't really the victim).
to:
* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Lucy points out that both she and Rei have had tragic pasts. Rei counters this by insisting that hers was ''more'' tragic (even though she wasn't really the victim).
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 125,127 (click to see context) from:
* UnfortunateName:
** Reicheru says Tenshikuzu supposedly translates to "Angel Dust". However, Angel Dust is another name for Phencyclidine, a hallucinatory drug. Also, "Tenshikuzu" actually translates to ''Angel Garbage''. No, really.
** A character called Shartara appears, who also goes by "Shart-san." Yes, really.
** Reicheru says Tenshikuzu supposedly translates to "Angel Dust". However, Angel Dust is another name for Phencyclidine, a hallucinatory drug. Also, "Tenshikuzu" actually translates to ''Angel Garbage''. No, really.
** A character called Shartara appears, who also goes by "Shart-san." Yes, really.
to:
* UnfortunateName:
**UnfortunateName: Reicheru says Tenshikuzu supposedly translates to "Angel Dust". However, Angel Dust is another name for Phencyclidine, a hallucinatory drug. Also, "Tenshikuzu" actually translates to ''Angel Garbage''. No, really.
**"Angel Garbage".
%%** A character called Shartara appears, who also goes by "Shart-san." Yes, really.
**
**
%%** A character called Shartara appears, who also goes by "Shart-san." Yes, really.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 90 (click to see context) :
*** Actually, the story ''claims'' it translates to Angel Dust. In reality, it translates to [[UnfortunateNames Angel Garbage.]]
Deleted line(s) 94,95 (click to see context) :
* {{MST}} / WebVideo/{{Retsupurae}} -- Done by FollowTheLeader WebVideo/{{Retsupurae}}rs WebVideo/BoringTrousers [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dc9RCk3Uot4 here]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6kvYQ2q6Ivg here]].
** The line, "Is Reicheru okay?" has [[MemeticMutation become]] something of a RunningGag with Boring Trousers if you know [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hognhTFpdqc where]] to [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RzjVGHXoP44 look]].
** The line, "Is Reicheru okay?" has [[MemeticMutation become]] something of a RunningGag with Boring Trousers if you know [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hognhTFpdqc where]] to [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RzjVGHXoP44 look]].
Changed line(s) 125 (click to see context) from:
* TeenPregnancy: Reicheru.
to: