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* GuiltTripping: In order to get the 1-A boys to go through with a karaoke performance, the 1-A girls dramatically moan about their injuries in an attempt to emotionally blackmail them. It works and the boys resign themselves into giving the live performance the girls wanted.
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Beach Trip is a fanfic of Manga/MyHeroAcademia written by Ember Sunblaze that can be found at Fanfiction.net.
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* NonActionBigBad: Aside from kidnapping and controlling boys, [[spoiler: Siren]] doesn't do partake in any fighting, letting Kai do all the heavy lifting.
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* NonActionBigBad: Aside from kidnapping and controlling boys, [[spoiler: Siren]] [[spoiler:Siren]] doesn't do partake in any fighting, letting Kai do all the heavy lifting.
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** [[spoiler: With Siren now behind bars, Kai becomes this after he escapes police custody.]]
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* MomentKiller: [[spoiler: Just when Kaminari and Jiro were sharing a tender moment, a tentacle from the sea sprang out and grabbed Jiro's ankle and dragged her into the water.]]
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* WhatIsThisFeeling: Kyoka starts to wonder why she is becoming flustered whenever she's alone with Kaminari.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Kaminari may be into girls but he can see why the girls are into Ripper as he finds him to be attractive as well.
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* BeachEpisode: The entire premise of this fic.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Kaminari may be a bit of a pervert, but he was disgusted with Mineta's idea of trying to get topless pictures of the girls. He's also furious when he finds out Mineta's "prank" angered the girls enough to try and stomp him into the ground.
* HollywoodToneDeaf: Todoroki turns out to be one. [[DisabilityImmunity This ends up saving him from falling under Siren's control.]]
* HollywoodToneDeaf: Todoroki turns out to be one. [[DisabilityImmunity This ends up saving him from falling under Siren's control.]]
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* ArmourPiercingQuestion: When Kyoka accused Kai of becoming what everyone accused him of, Kai simply asked what's more worse. The monster or the people who create said monster.
* BigBad: [[spoiler: Siren]] is the main villain of the story. Using her Quirk to brainwash teenage boys to do her bidding.
* BigDamnHeroes: Just when Kai was about to kill Kyoka by drowning her; Tsuyu shows up just in time by blinding the villain with her music.
* BigDamnKiss: [[spoiler: In a desperate attempt to break Izuku out of Siren's control, Ochaco ran towards the boy and kissed him on his lips. It worked.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Any boy under [[spoiler: Siren]]'s control will have red eyes and behave aggressively like a feral animal.
* BigBad: [[spoiler: Siren]] is the main villain of the story. Using her Quirk to brainwash teenage boys to do her bidding.
* BigDamnHeroes: Just when Kai was about to kill Kyoka by drowning her; Tsuyu shows up just in time by blinding the villain with her music.
* BigDamnKiss: [[spoiler: In a desperate attempt to break Izuku out of Siren's control, Ochaco ran towards the boy and kissed him on his lips. It worked.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Any boy under [[spoiler: Siren]]'s control will have red eyes and behave aggressively like a feral animal.
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* ArmourPiercingQuestion: When Kyoka accused Kai of becoming what everyone accused him of, Kai simply asked what's more worse. The worse - the monster or the people who create said monster.
* BigBad:[[spoiler: Siren]] [[spoiler:Siren]] is the main villain of the story. Using story, using her Quirk to brainwash teenage boys to do her bidding.
* BigDamnHeroes: Just when Kai was about to kill Kyoka by drowningher; her, Tsuyu shows up just in time by blinding the villain with her music.mucus.
* BigDamnKiss:[[spoiler: In [[spoiler:In a desperate attempt to break Izuku out of Siren's control, Ochaco ran towards the boy and kissed him on his lips. It worked.]]
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Any boy under[[spoiler: Siren]]'s [[spoiler:Siren]]'s control will have red eyes and behave aggressively like a feral animal.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: [[spoiler: Kai's life has never been easy for him due to his tentacle Quirk. Due to their appearance, he was often ridiculed for it. They also have a tendency to act on their own if he ever wasn't paying attention. This, unfortunately, caused [[FromBadToWorse things to take a turn for the worst]] when one of them touched a girl inappropriately which caused the girls to bully him even more and spread rumours about him. These rumours followed Kai all the way to High-School so none of the students would ever associate with him. Kai even tried to kill himself to end his misery, but even that was also something his Quirk wouldn't allow.]]
* EasilyForgiven: [[spoiler: Averted with Ojiro. When the boys who were brainwashed asked about the girls condition, Ojiro asked in a cold tone shouldn't they know about it.]]
* EasilyForgiven: [[spoiler: Averted with Ojiro. When the boys who were brainwashed asked about the girls condition, Ojiro asked in a cold tone shouldn't they know about it.]]
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: [[spoiler: Kai's [[spoiler:Kai's life has never been easy for him due to his tentacle Quirk. Due to their appearance, he was often ridiculed for it. They also have a tendency to act on their own if he ever wasn't paying attention. This, unfortunately, caused [[FromBadToWorse things to take a turn for the worst]] when one of them touched a girl inappropriately which caused the girls to bully him even more and spread rumours about him. These rumours followed Kai all the way to High-School so none of the students would ever associate with him. Kai even tried to kill himself to end his misery, but even that was also something his Quirk wouldn't allow.]]
* EasilyForgiven:[[spoiler: Averted [[spoiler:Averted with Ojiro. When the boys who were brainwashed asked about the girls condition, Ojiro asked in a cold tone if they shouldn't they know about it.]]
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* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: [[spoiler: While Ochaco fights Deku, the heroine repeatedly tries to talk some since into him rather than hurt him.]]
* MoreThanMindControl: Momo deduces that [[spoiler: Siren]]'s Quirk isn't your typical mind control Quirk. She basically can manipulate the amount of Tetestorones secreted into a boy's brain with her voice. This process causes them to fall under her control and act feral while also having symptoms such as headaches.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: All the boys who fell under Siren's control deeply regret how they hurt the girls.]]
* MoreThanMindControl: Momo deduces that [[spoiler: Siren]]'s Quirk isn't your typical mind control Quirk. She basically can manipulate the amount of Tetestorones secreted into a boy's brain with her voice. This process causes them to fall under her control and act feral while also having symptoms such as headaches.
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* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: [[spoiler: While [[spoiler:While Ochaco fights Deku, the heroine repeatedly tries to talk some since sense into him rather than hurt him.]]
* MoreThanMindControl: Momo deduces that[[spoiler: Siren]]'s [[spoiler:Siren]]'s Quirk isn't your typical mind control Quirk. She basically can manipulate the amount of Tetestorones testosterone secreted into a boy's brain with her voice. This process causes them to fall under her control and act feral while also having symptoms such as headaches.
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* ShipTease: The fic is full of this; including IzuOcha, KamiJiro, TodoMomo, and KiriMina.
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* ShipTease: The fic is full of this; including IzuOcha, KamiJiro, TodoMomo, [=IzuOcha=], [=KamiJiro=], [=TodoMomo=], and KiriMina.[=KiriMina=].
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* BigDamnKiss: [[spoiler: In a desperate attempt to break Izuku out of Siren's control, Ochaco ran towards the boy and kissed him on his lips. It worked.]]
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* TranquilFury: Mina threw some acid on the side of [[spoiler: Siren]]'s face which caused the villain to shriek in agony. Mina's response to the painful screams was simply a cold tone of contained anger saying that it will only leave a scar.
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* MoreThanMindControl: Momo deduces that [[spoiler: Siren]]'s Quirk isn't your typical mind control Quirk. She basically can manipulate the amount of Tetestorones secreted into a boy's brain with her voice. This process causes them to fall under her control and act feral while also having symptons such as headaches.
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* MoreThanMindControl: Momo deduces that [[spoiler: Siren]]'s Quirk isn't your typical mind control Quirk. She basically can manipulate the amount of Tetestorones secreted into a boy's brain with her voice. This process causes them to fall under her control and act feral while also having symptons symptoms such as headaches.
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* EasilyForgiven: [[spoiler: Averted with Ojiro. When the boys who were brainwashed asked about the girls condition, Ojiro asked in a cold tone shouldn't they know about it.]]
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* TheEmpath: Detective Loid's Quirk allows him to sense the emotions of others. Loid uses this Quirk during police interrogations.
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* ACupAngst: Kyoka's insecurities of having a flat chest are brought up again when Denki calls them tiny. This leaves her sulking for quite a while.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Both Mina and Toru are usually the most cheerful and bubbly girls in Class A. But when they are mad, you know shit's about to get real.
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* ShoutOut: According to WordOfGod, Detective Loid is based on Loid Forger from Anime/SpyXFamily.
* TimeSkip: This fic takes place during Class 1-A's second year.
* TimeSkip: This fic takes place during Class 1-A's second year.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: All the boys who fell under Siren's control deeply regret how they hurt the girls.]]
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* TranquilFury: Mina threw some acid on the side of [[Spoiler: Siren]]'s face which caused the villain to shriek in agony. Mina's response to the painful screams was simply a cold tone of contained anger saying that it will only leave a scar.
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Synopsis: During a school trip to Okinawa, the students of Class 1-A are given a mission to uncover the mystery of the disappearance of a group of high-school boys. But when the boys get abducted themselves, its up to the girls of Class A to save the day and find the villain responsible!
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Synopsis: During a school trip to Okinawa, the students of Class 1-A are given a mission to uncover the mystery of the disappearance of a group of high-school boys. But when the boys of Class A get abducted themselves, its up to the girls of Class A to save the day and find the villain responsible!
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* BigBad: [[spoiler: Siren]] is the main villain of the story. Using her Quirk to brainwash teenage boys to do her bidding.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Any boy under [[spoiler: Siren]]'s control will have red eyes and behave aggressively like a feral animal.
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** When trying to figure what kind of Quirk the villain possesses to control the victims, Izuku assumes it to be a mind control Quirk, which reminded of his match with Shinso back at the Sports Festival.
** Ochaco remembers the time Izuku saved her from the Zero-Pointer back at the U.A. entrance exam.
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* BigBad: [[spoiler: Siren]] is the main villain of the story. Using her Quirk to brainwash teenage boys to do her bidding.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Any boy under [[spoiler: Siren]]'s control will have red eyes and behave aggressively like a feral animal.
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** When trying to figure what kind of Quirk the villain possesses to control the victims, Izuku assumes it to be a mind control Quirk, which reminded of his match with Shinso back at the Sports Festival.
** Ochaco remembers the time Izuku saved her from the Zero-Pointer back at the U.A. entrance exam.
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Beach Trip is a fanfic of Manga/MyHeroAcademia written by Ember Sunblaze that can be found at Fanfiction.net.
Synopsis: During a school trip to Okinawa, the students of Class 1-A are given a mission to uncover the mystery of the disappearance of a group of high-school boys. But when the boys get abducted themselves, its up to the girls of Class A to save the day and find the villain responsible!
It can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13979095/1/Beach-Trip here]].
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Synopsis: During a school trip to Okinawa, the students of Class 1-A are given a mission to uncover the mystery of the disappearance of a group of high-school boys. But when the boys get abducted themselves, its up to the girls of Class A to save the day and find the villain responsible!
It can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13979095/1/Beach-Trip here]].
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