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Cloning Blues has been renamed to Clone Angst and redefined to only be about people angsting about being a clone.
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* CloningBlues: Rose/Pink is distraught to discover she’s just a “copy” of the original Pink Diamond. However, it’s also pointed out that she has all of the memories and knowledge of said original, up to the point of her DeathByChildbirth, so any true difference is hard to determine, with the original dead.
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* CloningBlues: CloneAngst: Rose/Pink is distraught to discover she’s just a “copy” of the original Pink Diamond. However, it’s also pointed out that she has all of the memories and knowledge of said original, up to the point of her DeathByChildbirth, so any true difference is hard to determine, with the original dead.
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One day, thousands of years after the end of the rebellion against Homeworld, Rose Quartz gave up her gem to bring her child, a human-gem hybrid, into the world, dying in the process of bringing life to the boy who would go on to bring an end to Homeworld’s tyranny.
But against all odds, even after she was supposed to have died, she woke up. On a station far from Earth, next to a strange machine, she realized her old identity as Pink Diamond had finally caught up to her, and all her mistakes came with it.
The “Synthesis” series is written by Mistery Man, and can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/1490627 here]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn as well as [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/synthesis-a-steven-universe-au-fic.787915/ here]] on Spacebattles.
But against all odds, even after she was supposed to have died, she woke up. On a station far from Earth, next to a strange machine, she realized her old identity as Pink Diamond had finally caught up to her, and all her mistakes came with it.
The “Synthesis” series is written by Mistery Man, and can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/1490627 here]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn as well as [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/synthesis-a-steven-universe-au-fic.787915/ here]] on Spacebattles.
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->''But against all odds, even after she was supposed to have died, she woke up. On a station far from Earth, next to a strange machine, she realized her old identity as Pink Diamond had finally caught up to her, and all her mistakes came with
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The “Synthesis” series is a {{WesternAnimation/Steven Universe}} Fanfiction written by Mistery Man, and can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/1490627 here]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn as well as [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/synthesis-a-steven-universe-au-fic.787915/ here]] on Spacebattles.
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These examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: When he's taken to the Doctor by Greg and Pearl, much like in [[Recap/StevenUniverseFutureS1E14GrowingPains 'Growing Pains]], both Greg and Pearl are actually in the room with him when Priyanka shows him his x-rays, and both his father and chief maternal figure are horrified to find out that Steven was getting so horribly injured during missions.
** Despite being his 'cool big sis' figure who he turns to after getting sick of Pearl and Greg treating him differently after the doctors visit, Amythest is just as shocked and concerned about the news about his x-ray as Pearl and Greg were. Amythest might be a lot more laid back than the rest of the Gems, but she still loves and cares for Steven and the idea that he 'was' getting hurt every time he took a hit without even realizing it worries her.
** Despite being his 'cool big sis' figure who he turns to after getting sick of Pearl and Greg treating him differently after the doctors visit, Amythest is just as shocked and concerned about the news about his x-ray as Pearl and Greg were. Amythest might be a lot more laid back than the rest of the Gems, but she still loves and cares for Steven and the idea that he 'was' getting hurt every time he took a hit without even realizing it worries her.
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The “Synthesis” series is written by Mistery Man, and can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/1490627 here]] as well as [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/synthesis-a-steven-universe-au-fic.787915/ here]] on Spacebattles.
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The “Synthesis” series is written by Mistery Man, and can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/1490627 here]] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn as well as [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/synthesis-a-steven-universe-au-fic.787915/ here]] on Spacebattles.
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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* NotSoDifferent: Rose asks Priyanka about how she can take care of Steven in a long-distance parental relationship, considering that due to her work and the need to keep the other Diamonds in the dark on Steven's true identity/that she was Rose Quartz, WhenYouComingHomeDad will be a very real concern for her. It might be bordering on OddFriendship, if the two of them knew each other better.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Rose asks Priyanka about how she can take care of Steven in a long-distance parental relationship, considering that due to her work and the need to keep the other Diamonds in the dark on Steven's true identity/that she was Rose Quartz, WhenYouComingHomeDad will be a very real concern for her. It might be bordering on OddFriendship, if the two of them knew each other better.
