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** Alice knocking down the pillar accidentally is an homage to the animated Disney film ''Disney/{{Hercules}}'', while the Warden yelling "Timber!" and a random inmate named Timber responding are extracted from another [adult swim] show, ''WesternAnimation/RobotChicken''.

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** Alice knocking down the pillar accidentally is an homage to the animated Disney film ''Disney/{{Hercules}}'', ''WesternAnimation/{{Hercules}}'', while the Warden yelling "Timber!" and a random inmate named Timber responding are extracted from another [adult swim] show, ''WesternAnimation/RobotChicken''.
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One Of Us is now Just For Fun per this TRS thread. Removed wick due to misuse.


''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8885128/1/An-Unexpected-Child An Unexpected Child]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/{{Superjail}}'' {{For Want of A Nail}} {{Fan Fic}} co-authored by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4103818/ Cooljoe64]] and [[OneofUs our very own]] [[{{Creator/Voltalia}} guardianemessiah]]. The plot revolves around the Mistress becoming pregnant with the Warden's child after the events of the season 1 episode "Ladies' Night". The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and, considering its wordcount to be over 15,000 words, could qualify as a {{Novelette}}.

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8885128/1/An-Unexpected-Child An Unexpected Child]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/{{Superjail}}'' {{For Want of A Nail}} {{Fan Fic}} co-authored by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4103818/ Cooljoe64]] and [[OneofUs our very own]] own [[{{Creator/Voltalia}} guardianemessiah]]. The plot revolves around the Mistress becoming pregnant with the Warden's child after the events of the season 1 episode "Ladies' Night". The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and, considering its wordcount to be over 15,000 words, could qualify as a {{Novelette}}.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8885128/1/An-Unexpected-Child An Unexpected Child]]'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' {{For Want of A Nail}} {{Fan Fic}} co-authored by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4103818/ Cooljoe64]] and [[OneofUs our very own]] [[{{Creator/Voltalia}} guardianemessiah]]. The plot revolves around the Mistress becoming pregnant with the Warden's child after the events of the season 1 episode "Ladies' Night". The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and, considering its wordcount to be over 15,000 words, could qualify as a {{Novelette}}.

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8885128/1/An-Unexpected-Child An Unexpected Child]]'' is a ''{{Superjail}}'' ''WesternAnimation/{{Superjail}}'' {{For Want of A Nail}} {{Fan Fic}} co-authored by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4103818/ Cooljoe64]] and [[OneofUs our very own]] [[{{Creator/Voltalia}} guardianemessiah]]. The plot revolves around the Mistress becoming pregnant with the Warden's child after the events of the season 1 episode "Ladies' Night". The fanfic is fifteen chapters long and, considering its wordcount to be over 15,000 words, could qualify as a {{Novelette}}.
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* ShoutOut: Alice's act as the "Goblin Queen" as well as her costume are meant to be a reference to ''Film/{{Labyrinth}}'''s Jareth AKA Goblin King, specifically cosplayed by JewWario in ''WebVideo/SuburbanKnights''.

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* ShoutOut: Alice's act as the "Goblin Queen" as well as her costume are meant to be a reference to ''Film/{{Labyrinth}}'''s Jareth AKA Goblin King, specifically cosplayed by JewWario Creator/JewWario in ''WebVideo/SuburbanKnights''.
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* ShoutOut: Alice's act as the "Goblin Queen" as well as her costume are meant to be a reference to ''Film/{{Labyrinth}}'''s Jareth AKA Goblin King, specifically cosplayed by JewWario in ''SuburbanKnights''.

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* ShoutOut: Alice's act as the "Goblin Queen" as well as her costume are meant to be a reference to ''Film/{{Labyrinth}}'''s Jareth AKA Goblin King, specifically cosplayed by JewWario in ''SuburbanKnights''.''WebVideo/SuburbanKnights''.
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** At one point, while Mistress is starting to tell Warden off, she calls him [[SailorMoon Tuxedo Mask]].

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** At one point, while Mistress is starting to tell Warden off, she calls him [[SailorMoon [[Franchise/SailorMoon Tuxedo Mask]].
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: Chapter 10 saw Alice debuting her "Goblin Queen" outfit. A year later, Creator/JewWario [[AuthorExistenceFailure committed suicide]].
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: Chapter 10 saw Alice debuting her "Goblin Queen" outfit. A year later, Creator/JewWario [[AuthorExistenceFailure committed suicide]].
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** Oh, and in Chapter 4, Warden cooks a bowl of soup [[ScrewballSerum where snakes burst out of an inmate after it's been consumed]]. And then Mistress makes a joke about the unfortunate inmate not being able to [[IncrediblyLamePun stomach]] the food.

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** Oh, and in Chapter 4, Warden cooks a bowl of soup [[ScrewballSerum where snakes burst out of an inmate after it's been consumed]]. And then Mistress makes a joke about the unfortunate inmate not being able to [[IncrediblyLamePun stomach]] stomach the food.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Warden still has the Hunter and Lord Stingray with him. (At least until later on.) See ContinuityNod.

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* InSpiteOfANail: Warden still has the Hunter and Lord Stingray with him. (At least until later on.Chapters 6 and 12.) See ContinuityNod.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite having impregnated the Mistress prior to the fanfic, Warden still has the Hunter and Lord Stingray with him. (At least until later on.) See ContinuityNod.

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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite having impregnated the Mistress prior to the fanfic, Warden still has the Hunter and Lord Stingray with him. (At least until later on.) See ContinuityNod.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite having impregnated the Mistress prior to the fanfic, Warden still has the Hunter and Lord Stingray with him. (At least until later on.) See ContinuityNod.
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{{Creator/Voltalia}} made a sequel to this fic called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is twenty-one chapters long. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics, as well as ''Fanfic/Passion of the Guardiane'', are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].

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{{Creator/Voltalia}} made a sequel to this fic called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is twenty-one chapters long. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics, as well as ''Fanfic/Passion of the Guardiane'', ''Fanfic/PassionOfTheGuardiane'', are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].
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{{Creator/Voltalia}} made a sequel to this fic called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is twenty-one chapters long. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics, as well as ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9496377/1/Passion-of-the-Guardiane Passion of the Guardiane]]'', are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].

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{{Creator/Voltalia}} made a sequel to this fic called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is twenty-one chapters long. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics, as well as ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9496377/1/Passion-of-the-Guardiane Passion ''Fanfic/Passion of the Guardiane]]'', Guardiane'', are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].
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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9496377/1/Passion-of-the-Guardiane Passion of the Guardiane]]'']]

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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9496377/1/Passion-of-the-Guardiane Passion of the Guardiane]]'']]
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{{Creator/Voltalia}} made a sequel to this fic called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is twenty-one chapters long. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics, as well as [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9496377/1/Passion-of-the-Guardiane Passion of the Guardiane]], are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].

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{{Creator/Voltalia}} made a sequel to this fic called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is twenty-one chapters long. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics, as well as [[http://www.''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9496377/1/Passion-of-the-Guardiane Passion of the Guardiane]], Guardiane]]'', are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].
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* ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9496377/1/Passion-of-the-Guardiane Passion of the Guardiane]]'']]



{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is now complete and twenty-one chapters long. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].

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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on made a sequel to this fic called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is now complete and twenty-one chapters long. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics fanfics, as well as [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9496377/1/Passion-of-the-Guardiane Passion of the Guardiane]], are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].
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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is on its seventeenth chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].

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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is on its seventeenth chapter.now complete and twenty-one chapters long. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].
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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is on its thirteenth chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].

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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is on its thirteenth seventeenth chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].
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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is on its twelfth chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].

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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is on its twelfth thirteenth chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].
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* ThankingTheViewer: Voltalia pulls this off in an AuthorsNote on the last chapter.

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* ThankingTheViewer: Voltalia pulls this off in an AuthorsNote Author's Note on the last chapter.
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* ThankingTheViewer: Voltalia pulls this off in an AuthorsNote on the last chapter.
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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is on its eleventh chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].

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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is on its eleventh twelfth chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].
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* ChuckCunninghamSyndrome: See AbortedArc.
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* PsychicDreamsForEveryone
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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is on its seventh chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].

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{{Creator/Voltalia}} is currently working on a sequel called ''Fanfic/AllInTheFamily'', which is on its seventh eleventh chapter. WordOfGod says both of these fanfics are going to be part of a trilogy that centers around [[SecretCharacter the Guardiane]].
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* OrphanedSeries: The fanfic became this when Cooljoe64 abandoned it after the first four chapters due to lacking interest in the original source material. Its proofreader {{Creator/Voltalia}}, who by contrast was a somewhat-dedicated fan of the original source, then took over and wrote the other eleven chapters.

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* OrphanedSeries: The fanfic almost became this when Cooljoe64 abandoned it after the first four chapters due to lacking losing interest in the original source material. story. Its proofreader {{Creator/Voltalia}}, who by contrast was a somewhat-dedicated fan of very interested in the original source, then fic, took over and wrote the other eleven chapters.
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* AbortedArc: There was a subplot concerning the inmates trying to survive in the Earth's Core maze early on in the fanfic. In fact, had Cooljoe64 not abandoned the fanfic after only completing the first four chapters, he probably would've expanded upon it and kept it going. Instead, Voltalia had the inmates go through the maze with little transition and exit, only to find there's nothing waiting for them. And then they're never mentioned again.

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* AbortedArc: There was a subplot concerning the inmates trying to survive in the Earth's Core maze early on in the fanfic. In fact, had Cooljoe64 not abandoned the fanfic after only completing the first four chapters, he probably would've expanded upon it and kept it going. Instead, Voltalia had the inmates go through the maze with little transition and exit, only to find there's nothing waiting for them. And then they're they were never mentioned again.

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