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* NormalFishInATinyPond: While a powerful Stand in it's own right, Killer Queen was no match for Star Platinum: The World in a direct confrontation (nor could it protect against getting tag-teamed by Crazy Diamond, The Hand, Echoes, and Heaven's Door). As the only Stand on Earth Bet, though, it was more than enough to elevate Kira to a PersonOfMassDestruction.
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* NormalFishInATinyPond: While a powerful Stand in it's its own right, Killer Queen was no match for Star Platinum: The World in a direct confrontation (nor could it protect against getting tag-teamed by Crazy Diamond, The Hand, Echoes, and Heaven's Door). As the only Stand on Earth Bet, though, it was more than enough to elevate Kira to a PersonOfMassDestruction.
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** Kira freaks out when his toothbrush is covered in chocolate and outside its holder- [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness he never consumes chocolate and]] [[SuperOCD always puts the toothbrush in its holder]], leading him to discover there was an intruder.
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** Kira freaks out when his toothbrush is covered in chocolate and outside its holder- [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness he never consumes chocolate and]] [[SuperOCD always puts the toothbrush in its holder]], holder, leading him to discover there was an intruder.
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** Kira's SuperOCD makes it easy for him to notice when an intruder was in his apartment- they brushed their teeth after consuming chocolate (which Kira doesn't eat) and didn't put the toothbrush back in its holder (which he always does).
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** Kira's SuperOCD obsessive compulsive tendencies makes it easy for him to notice when an intruder was in his apartment- they brushed their teeth after consuming chocolate (which Kira doesn't eat) and didn't put the toothbrush back in its holder (which he always does).
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* SuperOCD: Kira retains this trait from canon; it ends up leading him to discover [[spoiler: Aya D. Chapman stalking him and]] breaking into his apartment.
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** In a fight between Kira and some skinheads, someone says [[Film/{{Terminator}} "Fuck you, asshole"]].
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** In a fight between Kira and some skinheads, someone says [[Film/{{Terminator}} [[Film/{{TheTerminator}} "Fuck you, asshole"]].
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** In a fight between Kira and some skinheads, someone says [[film/Terminator "Fuck you, asshole"]].
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** In a fight between Kira and some skinheads, someone says [[film/Terminator [[Film/{{Terminator}} "Fuck you, asshole"]].
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** Words are emphasized in bold and in brackets, similar to in the [[manga/Jojo's Bizarre Adventures JoJo manga]].
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** Words are emphasized in bold and in brackets, similar to in the [[manga/Jojo's Bizarre Adventures [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure JoJo manga]].
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** Words are emphasized in bold and in brackets, similar to in the [[manga/JojosBizarreAdventures JoJo manga]].
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** Words are emphasized in bold and in brackets, similar to in the [[manga/JojosBizarreAdventures [[manga/Jojo's Bizarre Adventures JoJo manga]].
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** Words are emphasized in bold and in brackets, similar to in the JoJo manga.
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** Words are emphasized in bold and in brackets, similar to in the [[manga/JojosBizarreAdventures JoJo manga.manga]].
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* ChekovsGunman: During Kira's attack on a Merchant stash-house, he discovers a captive prostitute and tells her to go free. [[spoiler: 19 months later, she breaks into his apartment as a StalkerWithACrush and becomes his partner-in-crime the Cleaner]].
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* ChekovsGunman: ChekhovsGunman: During Kira's attack on a Merchant stash-house, he discovers a captive prostitute and tells her to go free. [[spoiler: 19 months later, she breaks into his apartment as a StalkerWithACrush and becomes his partner-in-crime the Cleaner]].
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* WouldHitAWoman: How else would Kira get his severed-hand "girlfriends"?
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* WouldHitAWoman: [[WouldHitAGirl Would Hit A Woman]]: How else would Kira get his severed-hand "girlfriends"?
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* RealityEnsues: Kira's liberal use of Killer Queen to solve his problems has resulted in [[spoiler: at least two Trigger Events]].
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-->"Need a ride, sir?"
-->I blink, 'English? Am I in America? That would explain the landscape. At least I studied English as my secondary language in school.' I clear my throat, "Ahem. Yes. If it's not too trouble, miss."
-->She ponders for a moment, "Hmmm. Well [[DramaticIrony you don't look like a killer]]. [[HiddenInPlainSight Too normal looking for that]]...so hop in."
-->I gladly open the door and sit in the passenger seat. As I expected, the seat is just as coarse feeling as the car is beaten down. "Thank you."
-->"No problem. You don't mind heading to Brockton Bay?"
-->"That would be no issue." I fasten my seatbelt and we're off to this [Brockton Bay]. 'From the sound of the name, I can infer that I've somehow ended up in America.' Yes. America. An entirely new country away from Japan. Away from Josuke.
-->My thoughts leave me once the woman begins small talk, "The names Annette Hebert. What's yours?"
-->I smile. "Yoshikage Kira." I fix the loose thread on my coat button and my mind fills with hope. 'Aaah. Much better. That really was bugging me the entire time, but I just had to know if I was alive before I could fix it.' Step one towards a new [Quiet Life].
--> -Kira's first conversation on Earth Bet.
-->I blink, 'English? Am I in America? That would explain the landscape. At least I studied English as my secondary language in school.' I clear my throat, "Ahem. Yes. If it's not too trouble, miss."
-->She ponders for a moment, "Hmmm. Well [[DramaticIrony you don't look like a killer]]. [[HiddenInPlainSight Too normal looking for that]]...so hop in."
-->I gladly open the door and sit in the passenger seat. As I expected, the seat is just as coarse feeling as the car is beaten down. "Thank you."
-->"No problem. You don't mind heading to Brockton Bay?"
-->"That would be no issue." I fasten my seatbelt and we're off to this [Brockton Bay]. 'From the sound of the name, I can infer that I've somehow ended up in America.' Yes. America. An entirely new country away from Japan. Away from Josuke.
-->My thoughts leave me once the woman begins small talk, "The names Annette Hebert. What's yours?"
-->I smile. "Yoshikage Kira." I fix the loose thread on my coat button and my mind fills with hope. 'Aaah. Much better. That really was bugging me the entire time, but I just had to know if I was alive before I could fix it.' Step one towards a new [Quiet Life].
--> -Kira's first conversation on Earth Bet.
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-->I
I blink, 'English? Am I in America? That would explain the landscape. At least I studied English as my secondary language in school.' I clear my throat, "Ahem. Yes. If it's not too trouble, miss.
-->She
She ponders for a moment, "Hmmm. Well [[DramaticIrony you don't look like a killer]]. [[HiddenInPlainSight Too normal looking for that]]...so hop in.
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I gladly open the door and sit in the passenger seat. As I expected, the seat is just as coarse feeling as the car is beaten down. "Thank you.
-->"No
"No problem. You don't mind heading to Brockton
-->"That
"That would be no issue." I fasten my seatbelt and we're off to this [Brockton Bay]. 'From the sound of the name, I can infer that I've somehow ended up in America.' Yes. America. An entirely new country away from Japan. Away from
-->My
My thoughts leave me once the woman begins small talk, "The names Annette Hebert. What's
-->I
I smile. "Yoshikage Kira." I fix the loose thread on my coat button and my mind fills with hope. 'Aaah. Much better. That really was bugging me the entire time, but I just had to know if I was alive before I could fix it.' Step one towards a new [Quiet Life].
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* WouldHurtAWoman: How else would Kira get his severed-hand "girlfriends"?
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* WouldHurtAWoman: WouldHitAWoman: How else would Kira get his severed-hand "girlfriends"?
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* ChekovsGun: On the way to the Library, Kira transfers Killer Queen to Danny Hebert to check if he still has Bites The Dust, then recalls his Stand after the successful test. [[spoiler: He uses it on Commander Kennedy in his takedown of Coil's base]].
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* ChekovsGun: ChekhovsGun: On the way to the Library, Kira transfers Killer Queen to Danny Hebert to check if he still has Bites The Dust, then recalls his Stand after the successful test. [[spoiler: He uses it on Commander Kennedy in his takedown of Coil's base]].
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment:
** Although Kira's personality was established in canon, it's re-introduced gradually:
*** His desire for a quiet life is introduced in his car-ride with Annette.
*** When he and Annette get car-jacked, he turns the wallet into a bomb with Killer Queen, hands the wallet over, and then blows up the mugger, showing his willingness to use lethal force when inconvenienced.
*** He settles into a regular apartment with a mundane job, demonstrating his obsession with mediocrity and aversion to drama.
*** When mugged a second time, he makes the severed hand of one of his assailants into his first 'girlfriend'.
*** When kidnapped by the ABB and dragged into a fight with the Merchants, he ''immediately'' decides to kill everyone with Killer Queen.
** [[spoiler: Aya's]] moment is when she realizes she was rescued by a murderer, Triggers, and then ''immediately'' [[spoiler: resolves to cover up her crush's killings]].
** Although Kira's personality was established in canon, it's re-introduced gradually:
*** His desire for a quiet life is introduced in his car-ride with Annette.
*** When he and Annette get car-jacked, he turns the wallet into a bomb with Killer Queen, hands the wallet over, and then blows up the mugger, showing his willingness to use lethal force when inconvenienced.
*** He settles into a regular apartment with a mundane job, demonstrating his obsession with mediocrity and aversion to drama.
*** When mugged a second time, he makes the severed hand of one of his assailants into his first 'girlfriend'.
*** When kidnapped by the ABB and dragged into a fight with the Merchants, he ''immediately'' decides to kill everyone with Killer Queen.
** [[spoiler: Aya's]] moment is when she realizes she was rescued by a murderer, Triggers, and then ''immediately'' [[spoiler: resolves to cover up her crush's killings]].
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** If not for [[spoiler: Aya]], Kira would've blown up Rachel [[HeKnowsTooMuch just because she witnessed him blowing people up]].
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** If not for [[spoiler: Aya]], Kira would've blown up used Bites The Dust on Rachel [[HeKnowsTooMuch just because she witnessed him blowing people up]].
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** Kira is so sensitive about his privacy that [[spoiler: Aya has to talk him out of blowing up Rachel, and covers for him by wiping her memories of the incident instead]].
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** Kira is so sensitive about his privacy that [[spoiler: Aya has to talk him out of blowing up using Bites The Dust on Rachel, and covers for him by wiping her memories of the incident instead]].
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** The Cleaner, [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman, was named after the man who killed Creator/JohnLennon, Mark David Chapman]].
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** The Cleaner, [[spoiler: Ida Aya D. Chapman, was named after the man who killed Creator/JohnLennon, Mark David Chapman]].Chapman]].
** In a fight between Kira and some skinheads, someone says [[film/Terminator "Fuck you, asshole"]].
** In a fight between Kira and some skinheads, someone says [[film/Terminator "Fuck you, asshole"]].
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* WouldHurtAChild: Kira nearly blows up Rachel Lindt and has to be talked out of it.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Kira nearly blows up makes Rachel Lindt the host of Bites The Dust and has to be talked out of it.
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Got the Cleaner's name wrong.
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* BerserkButton: Disrupting Kira's quiet life tends to end [[StuffBlowingUp badly]] for those who do it. [[spoiler: Victor, Coil, and several assorted henchmen]] get killed for it, and [[spoiler: Circus and Ida]] barely escape.
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* BerserkButton: Disrupting Kira's quiet life tends to end [[StuffBlowingUp badly]] for those who do it. [[spoiler: Victor, Coil, and several assorted henchmen]] get killed for it, and [[spoiler: Circus and Ida]] Aya]] barely escape.
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Ida's {{Yandere}} attitude towards Kira]] is heavily implied to be the result of her Trigger Event (via her Shard's Conflict Drive).
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Ida's Aya's {{Yandere}} attitude towards Kira]] is heavily implied to be the result of her Trigger Event (via her Shard's Conflict Drive).
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** Kira goes from aloof and uncaring about anyone- up to and including preparing to ''use Killer Queen on his own allies''- to a family friend of the Heberts and [[spoiler: Ida's affectionate boyfriend]].
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** Kira goes from aloof and uncaring about anyone- up to and including preparing to ''use Killer Queen on his own allies''- to a family friend of the Heberts and [[spoiler: Ida's Aya's affectionate boyfriend]].
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* ChekovsGun: On the way to the Library, Kira transfers Killer Queen to Danny Hebert to check if he still has Bites The Dust, then recalls his Stand after the successful test. [[spoiler: He uses it in his takedown of Coil's base]].
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* ChekovsGun: On the way to the Library, Kira transfers Killer Queen to Danny Hebert to check if he still has Bites The Dust, then recalls his Stand after the successful test. [[spoiler: He uses it on Commander Kennedy in his takedown of Coil's base]].
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* CombatMedic: One of the applications for [[spoiler: Ida's]] Cleaner power is to heal injuries.
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* CombatMedic: One of the applications for [[spoiler: Ida's]] Aya's]] Cleaner power is to heal injuries.
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** [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman is a Cape whose Stranger and Striker powers are a Hard Counter to Kira's Stand, and gives Kira his only defeat]].
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** [[spoiler: Ida Aya D. Chapman is a Cape whose Stranger and Striker powers are a Hard Counter to Kira's Stand, and gives Kira his only defeat]].
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** ''Narrowly averted'' for the Undersiders; [[spoiler: Ida]] memory-wipes Rachel and Lisa stops her Thinker power's train of thought to prevent them from getting blown up by Killer Queen.
* DefeatMeansFriendship: Kira falls in love with [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman]] after catching the latter spying on him and she manages to NoSell Killer Queen's first bomb.
* DefeatMeansFriendship: Kira falls in love with [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman]] after catching the latter spying on him and she manages to NoSell Killer Queen's first bomb.
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** ''Narrowly averted'' for the Undersiders; [[spoiler: Ida]] Aya]] memory-wipes Rachel and Lisa stops her Thinker power's train of thought to prevent them from getting blown up by Killer Queen.
* DefeatMeansFriendship: Kira falls in love with [[spoiler:Ida Aya D. Chapman]] after catching the latter spying on him and she manages to NoSell Killer Queen's first bomb.
* DefeatMeansFriendship: Kira falls in love with [[spoiler:
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** Even Kira's partner-in-crime [[spoiler: Ida]] is disturbed by Kira's willingness to blow up teenagers to cover his tracks.
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** Even Kira's partner-in-crime [[spoiler: Ida]] Aya]] is disturbed by Kira's willingness to blow up teenagers to cover his tracks.tracks.
** Coil is disturbed to realize that there is a superpowered serial killer on the loose in Brockton Bay.
** Coil is disturbed to realize that there is a superpowered serial killer on the loose in Brockton Bay.
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** [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman]] Triggers after realizing she was rescued from a Merchant stash house by a murderer.
** Tattletale realizes she better turn down her power to avoid [[spoiler: either getting memories erased by Ida or getting blown up by Bites The Dust]].
** Tattletale realizes she better turn down her power to avoid [[spoiler: either getting memories erased by Ida or getting blown up by Bites The Dust]].
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** [[spoiler: Ida Aya D. Chapman]] Triggers after realizing she was rescued from a Merchant stash house by a murderer.
** Tattletale realizes she better turn down her power to avoid [[spoiler: either getting memories erased byIda Aya or getting blown up by Bites The Dust]].
** Tattletale realizes she better turn down her power to avoid [[spoiler: either getting memories erased by
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* FrenchMaid: [[spoiler: Ida's]] Cape costume is a maid outfit, as befitting her "Cleaner" powers.
* GoMadFromTheRevelation: Realizing she was rescued by a murderer is enough to cause [[spoiler: Ida's]] Trigger Event.
* GoMadFromTheRevelation: Realizing she was rescued by a murderer is enough to cause [[spoiler: Ida's]] Trigger Event.
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* FrenchMaid: [[spoiler: Ida's]] Aya's]] Cape costume is a maid outfit, as befitting her "Cleaner" powers.
* GoMadFromTheRevelation: Realizing she was rescued by a murderer is enough to cause [[spoiler:Ida's]] Aya's]] Trigger Event.
* GoMadFromTheRevelation: Realizing she was rescued by a murderer is enough to cause [[spoiler:
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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: [[spoiler: Kira's eventual girlfriend Ida D. Chapman]], Cape name "The Cleaner", is a Striker able to 'clean' various things, including undoing damage to objects, healing injuries, treating physical and mental health conditions, removing memories, [[spoiler: removing Killer Queen's bombs, curing Noelle]]...
* HeKnowsTooMuch: Kira uses Killer Queen as his default response to this trope. [[spoiler: Ida]] and her Cleaning power give him a non-lethal witness removal option.
* HiddenInPlainSight: Nobody other than [[spoiler: Coil, whose poking around gets him blown up, and Ida, who is Kira's partner in crime]] know about Kira's SerialKiller tendencies.
* HeKnowsTooMuch: Kira uses Killer Queen as his default response to this trope. [[spoiler: Ida]] and her Cleaning power give him a non-lethal witness removal option.
* HiddenInPlainSight: Nobody other than [[spoiler: Coil, whose poking around gets him blown up, and Ida, who is Kira's partner in crime]] know about Kira's SerialKiller tendencies.
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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: [[spoiler: Kira's eventual girlfriend Ida Aya D. Chapman]], Cape name "The Cleaner", is a Striker able to 'clean' various things, including undoing damage to objects, healing injuries, treating physical and mental health conditions, removing memories, [[spoiler: removing Killer Queen's bombs, curing Noelle]]...
* HeKnowsTooMuch: Kira uses Killer Queen as his default response to this trope. [[spoiler:Ida]] Aya]] and her Cleaning power give him a non-lethal witness removal option.
* HiddenInPlainSight: Nobody other than [[spoiler: Coil, whose poking around gets him blown up, andIda, Aya, who is Kira's partner in crime]] know about Kira's SerialKiller tendencies.
* HeKnowsTooMuch: Kira uses Killer Queen as his default response to this trope. [[spoiler:
* HiddenInPlainSight: Nobody other than [[spoiler: Coil, whose poking around gets him blown up, and
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** Narrowly averted by Lisa, who reins in her Thinker power after meeting with [[spoiler: Ida]].
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** Narrowly averted by Lisa, who reins in her Thinker power after meeting with [[spoiler: Ida]].Aya]].
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** If not for [[spoiler: Ida]], Kira would've blown up Rachel [[HeKnowsTooMuch just because she witnessed him blowing people up]].
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** If not for [[spoiler: Ida]], Aya]], Kira would've blown up Rachel [[HeKnowsTooMuch just because she witnessed him blowing people up]].
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* LeaveNoWitnesses: Kira's MO regarding his uses of Killer Queen. [[spoiler: Ida's "cleaning" of memories is a non-lethal variant]].
** Kira is so sensitive about his privacy that [[spoiler: Ida has to talk him out of blowing up Rachel, and covers for him by wiping her memories of the incident instead]].
** Kira is so sensitive about his privacy that [[spoiler: Ida has to talk him out of blowing up Rachel, and covers for him by wiping her memories of the incident instead]].
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* LeaveNoWitnesses: Kira's MO regarding his uses of Killer Queen. [[spoiler: Ida's Aya's "cleaning" of memories is a non-lethal variant]].
** Kira is so sensitive about his privacy that [[spoiler:Ida Aya has to talk him out of blowing up Rachel, and covers for him by wiping her memories of the incident instead]].instead]].
* LiteralSplitPersonality: [[spoiler: Miles Kennedy]] Triggers with a Changer/Stranger power that allows him to shapeshift into whoever he thinks he is, [[spoiler: and he also has Dissociative Identity Disorder as a result of being the host of Bites The Dust]].
** Kira is so sensitive about his privacy that [[spoiler:
* LiteralSplitPersonality: [[spoiler: Miles Kennedy]] Triggers with a Changer/Stranger power that allows him to shapeshift into whoever he thinks he is, [[spoiler: and he also has Dissociative Identity Disorder as a result of being the host of Bites The Dust]].
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** Kira's apartment is broken into twice, once by [[spoiler: Ida]] and once by Circus. The former only survives due to her Hard Counter to Killer Queen's first bomb, and the latter broke into the apartment in a Coil timeline that gets collapsed.
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** Kira's apartment is broken into twice, once by [[spoiler: Ida]] Aya]] and once by Circus. The former only survives due to her Hard Counter to Killer Queen's first bomb, and the latter broke into the apartment in a Coil timeline that gets collapsed.
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** Kira isn't above blowing up teenagers to hide his lethal tendencies, [[spoiler: though Ida intervenes before he can follow through with it]].
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** Kira isn't above blowing up teenagers to hide his lethal tendencies, [[spoiler: though Ida Aya intervenes before he can follow through with it]].it]].
** [[spoiler: Miles Kennedy's]] condition is very similar to [[spoiler: Diavolo's]].
** [[spoiler: Miles Kennedy's]] condition is very similar to [[spoiler: Diavolo's]].
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* NoBodyLeftBehind: [[spoiler: Coil]] is so completely obliterated by Bites The Dust and [[spoiler: Ida's cleaning power]] that not even [[spoiler: Emma's Thinker Power]] can find him.
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* NoBodyLeftBehind: [[spoiler: Coil]] is so completely obliterated by Bites The Dust and [[spoiler: Ida's Aya's cleaning power]] that not even [[spoiler: Emma's Thinker Power]] can find him.
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** [[spoiler: Ida's Striker and Stranger power]] No-Sells Killer Queen, so Kira resorts to Sheer Heart Attack.
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** [[spoiler: Ida's Aya's Striker and Stranger power]] No-Sells Killer Queen, so Kira resorts to Sheer Heart Attack.
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** [[spoiler: Ida's "cleaning" of Coil's presence]] is so thorough that when [[spoiler: Emma]] tries to find Thomas Calvert with her Thinker power, she can't find anything.
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** [[spoiler: Ida's Aya's "cleaning" of Coil's presence]] is so thorough that when [[spoiler: Emma]] tries to find Thomas Calvert with her Thinker power, she can't find anything.
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** Coil has several of these as Kira and [[spoiler: Ida]] blast their way through his base, culminating in [[spoiler: Bites The Dust obstructing his powers]].
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** Coil has several of these as Kira and [[spoiler: Ida]] Aya]] blast their way through his base, culminating in [[spoiler: Bites The Dust obstructing his powers]].
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** Lisa has one when her powers discern [[spoiler: Ida]] is keeping a secret. Unlike Rohan in canon, she knows better than to read further.
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** Lisa has one when her powers discern [[spoiler: Ida]] Aya]] is keeping a secret. Unlike Rohan in canon, she knows better than to read further.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Kira is the only Stand user on Earth Bet. He is a serial killer who does not know of or care about the Unwritten Rules, blows up witnesses to protect his identity, and for anybody other than [[spoiler: his girlfriend, Ida D. Chapman]], he is extremely dangerous.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Kira is the only Stand user on Earth Bet. He is a serial killer who does not know of or care about the Unwritten Rules, blows up witnesses to protect his identity, and for anybody other than [[spoiler: his girlfriend, Ida Aya D. Chapman]], he is extremely dangerous.
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** [[spoiler: Ida]] becomes one of Rachel's caretakers.
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** [[spoiler: Ida]] Aya]] becomes one of Rachel's caretakers.
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* SecretKeeper: [[spoiler: Ida]] is this for Kira the way his father was in canon.
* SerialKiller: Yoshikage Kira.
* SerialKiller: Yoshikage Kira.
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* SecretKeeper: [[spoiler: Ida]] Aya]] is this for Kira the way his father was in canon.
* SerialKiller: YoshikageKira.Kira, a man with a body count in the dozens but just wants a quiet life.
* SerialKiller: Yoshikage
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* StalkingIsLove: [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman]] has this approach to pursuing Kira. Kira retaliates with Killer Queen and Sheer Heart Attack before [[spoiler: Ida]] confesses her love.
* StalkerWithACrush: From the moment she Triggers, [[spoiler: [[{{Yandere}} Ida D. Chapman]], Kira's eventual partner in crime,]] is this towards Kira.
* StalkerWithACrush: From the moment she Triggers, [[spoiler: [[{{Yandere}} Ida D. Chapman]], Kira's eventual partner in crime,]] is this towards Kira.
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* StalkingIsLove: [[spoiler: Ida Aya D. Chapman]] has this approach to pursuing Kira. Kira retaliates with Killer Queen and Sheer Heart Attack before [[spoiler: Ida]] Aya]] confesses her love.
* StalkerWithACrush: From the moment she Triggers, [[spoiler: [[{{Yandere}}Ida Aya D. Chapman]], Kira's eventual partner in crime,]] is this towards Kira.
* StalkerWithACrush: From the moment she Triggers, [[spoiler: [[{{Yandere}}
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* SuperOCD: Kira retains this trait from canon; it ends up leading him to discover [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman stalking him and]] breaking into his apartment.
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* SuperOCD: Kira retains this trait from canon; it ends up leading him to discover [[spoiler: Ida Aya D. Chapman stalking him and]] breaking into his apartment.
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* WhamEpisode: Interlude 1, where a woman rescued by Kira, [[spoiler: later revealed as Ida, has a Trigger Event]].
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* WhamEpisode: Interlude 1, where a woman rescued by Kira, [[spoiler: later revealed as Ida, Aya, has a Trigger Event]].
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* WheresTheKaboom: Kira has this reaction after [[spoiler: Ida removes a Killer Queen bomb]].
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* WheresTheKaboom: Kira has this reaction after [[spoiler: Ida Aya removes a Killer Queen bomb]].
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* {{Yandere}}: [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman]], [[StalkerWithACrush oh so very much]].
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* WrongContextMagic: Kira's Stand is dramatically different from Parahuman abilities (even Projections like the Siberian) and he uses it in a drastically different manner from the Unwritten Rules.
* {{Yandere}}: [[spoiler:Ida Aya D. Chapman]], [[StalkerWithACrush oh so very much]].
* {{Yandere}}: [[spoiler:
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* AssholeVictim: Kira blows up numerous people who deserve it- Skinheads, ABB goons, Merchants, [[spoiler: Victor, Circus (albeit in a timeline collapsed by Coil), Coil...]].
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* AssholeVictim: Kira blows up numerous people who deserve it- Skinheads, ABB goons, Merchants, [[spoiler: Victor, Circus (albeit in a timeline collapsed by Coil), Coil...Coil, Miles Kennedy (repeatedly thanks to Bites The Dust)...]].
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-->She ponders for a moment, "Hmmm. Well [[DramaticIrony you don't look like a killer]]. [[StraightEdgeEvil Too normal looking for that]]...so hop in."
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-->She ponders for a moment, "Hmmm. Well [[DramaticIrony you don't look like a killer]]. [[StraightEdgeEvil [[HiddenInPlainSight Too normal looking for that]]...so hop in."
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--> Kira's -Kira's first conversation on Earth Bet.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Kira arrives in just the right time and place on Earth Bet to prevent Annette from dying in a car crash.
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* HiddenInPlainSight: Nobody other than [[spoiler: Coil, whose poking around gets him blown up, and Ida, who is Kira's partner in crime]] know about Kira's SerialKiller tendencies.
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* OpposingCombatPhilosophies: Parahuman violence is normally loud and conspicuous. While Kira's Stand creates a lot of explosions, he prefers to use violence in a stealthy manner and can hide under the radar amongst all the noise.
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-->"Need a ride, sir?"
-->I blink, 'English? Am I in America? That would explain the landscape. At least I studied English as my secondary language in school.' I clear my throat, "Ahem. Yes. If it's not too trouble, miss."
-->She ponders for a moment, "Hmmm. Well [[DramaticIrony you don't look like a killer]]. [[StraightEdgeEvil Too normal looking for that]]...so hop in."
-->I gladly open the door and sit in the passenger seat. As I expected, the seat is just as coarse feeling as the car is beaten down. "Thank you."
-->"No problem. You don't mind heading to Brockton Bay?"
-->"That would be no issue." I fasten my seatbelt and we're off to this [Brockton Bay]. 'From the sound of the name, I can infer that I've somehow ended up in America.' Yes. America. An entirely new country away from Japan. Away from Josuke.
-->My thoughts leave me once the woman begins small talk, "The names Annette Hebert. What's yours?"
-->I smile. "Yoshikage Kira." I fix the loose thread on my coat button and my mind fills with hope. 'Aaah. Much better. That really was bugging me the entire time, but I just had to know if I was alive before I could fix it.' Step one towards a new [Quiet Life].
--> Kira's first conversation on Earth Bet.
-->I blink, 'English? Am I in America? That would explain the landscape. At least I studied English as my secondary language in school.' I clear my throat, "Ahem. Yes. If it's not too trouble, miss."
-->She ponders for a moment, "Hmmm. Well [[DramaticIrony you don't look like a killer]]. [[StraightEdgeEvil Too normal looking for that]]...so hop in."
-->I gladly open the door and sit in the passenger seat. As I expected, the seat is just as coarse feeling as the car is beaten down. "Thank you."
-->"No problem. You don't mind heading to Brockton Bay?"
-->"That would be no issue." I fasten my seatbelt and we're off to this [Brockton Bay]. 'From the sound of the name, I can infer that I've somehow ended up in America.' Yes. America. An entirely new country away from Japan. Away from Josuke.
-->My thoughts leave me once the woman begins small talk, "The names Annette Hebert. What's yours?"
-->I smile. "Yoshikage Kira." I fix the loose thread on my coat button and my mind fills with hope. 'Aaah. Much better. That really was bugging me the entire time, but I just had to know if I was alive before I could fix it.' Step one towards a new [Quiet Life].
--> Kira's first conversation on Earth Bet.
* BeneathNotice: Kira's MO, made easier by the loud, noisy, conspicuous gang violence of E88, the ABB, and the Merchants.
* DramaticIrony: Annette says Kira doesn't look like a killer. Kira was the main antagonist of ''Diamond is Unbreakable'' and has killed dozens of people.
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* WhamEpisode: Interlude 1, where a woman rescued by Kira, [[spoiler: later revealed as Ida, has a Trigger Event]].
-->I get up from my ratty mattress. Why didn't he take me or kill me? Is that a letter?
-->"You're free. Leave immediately."
-->Did that guy just save me? He even left me some money. Is...
-->Is he my savior?
-->What's his name? How did he save me? What does he look like? Who is he?
-->I have to know. I need to know. I need to know the only person left in the world who was willing to save me.
-->I immediately leave the warehouse only to find ash and burn marks on the ground.
-->Does this mean he uses bombs? Where are the Merchants? Did he...kill them?
-->...
-->Is my savior a killer?
-->...
-->[[spoiler: [Destination] ]]
-->[[spoiler: [Agreement] ]]
-->[[spoiler: [Trajectory] ]]
-->[[spoiler: [Agreement] ]]
-->[[spoiler: I can't let anyone know. No one must find out that such a beautiful man killed. I'll be the one to protect his killings. I'll clean up after his mess for him.]]
-->[[spoiler: No one will harm my future [Lover].]]
-->I get up from my ratty mattress. Why didn't he take me or kill me? Is that a letter?
-->"You're free. Leave immediately."
-->Did that guy just save me? He even left me some money. Is...
-->Is he my savior?
-->What's his name? How did he save me? What does he look like? Who is he?
-->I have to know. I need to know. I need to know the only person left in the world who was willing to save me.
-->I immediately leave the warehouse only to find ash and burn marks on the ground.
-->Does this mean he uses bombs? Where are the Merchants? Did he...kill them?
-->...
-->Is my savior a killer?
-->...
-->[[spoiler: [Destination] ]]
-->[[spoiler: [Agreement] ]]
-->[[spoiler: [Trajectory] ]]
-->[[spoiler: [Agreement] ]]
-->[[spoiler: I can't let anyone know. No one must find out that such a beautiful man killed. I'll be the one to protect his killings. I'll clean up after his mess for him.]]
-->[[spoiler: No one will harm my future [Lover].]]
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Ida's {{Yandere}} attitude towards Kira]] is heavily implied to be the result of her Trigger Event (via her Shard's Conflict Drive).
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard:
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard:HeKnowsTooMuch: Kira uses Killer Queen as his default response to this trope. [[spoiler: Ida]] and her Cleaning power give him a non-lethal witness removal option.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: A common occurrence with Kira's enemies.
** The ABB goons who drag Kira into their fight with the Merchants get blown up by Killer Queen.
** Coil sends men to poke around Kira's apartment. [[HeKnowsTooMuch Kira, naturally, reacts to being spied on]] [[StuffBlowingUp fairly poorly]].
** Narrowly averted by Lisa, who reins in her Thinker power after meeting with [[spoiler: Ida]].
* KickTheDog:
** Kira briefly turns Danny Hebert into the host of Bites The Dust just to see if his Third Bomb still works.
** Kira uses a stray cat as a Killer Queen bomb in his fight with the Merchants.
** If not for [[spoiler: Ida]], Kira would've blown up Rachel [[HeKnowsTooMuch just because she witnessed him blowing people up]].
** Averted with actual dogs due to Rachel's interference.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: A common occurrence with Kira's enemies.
** The ABB goons who drag Kira into their fight with the Merchants get blown up by Killer Queen.
** Coil sends men to poke around Kira's apartment. [[HeKnowsTooMuch Kira, naturally, reacts to being spied on]] [[StuffBlowingUp fairly poorly]].
** Narrowly averted by Lisa, who reins in her Thinker power after meeting with [[spoiler: Ida]].
* KickTheDog:
** Kira briefly turns Danny Hebert into the host of Bites The Dust just to see if his Third Bomb still works.
** Kira uses a stray cat as a Killer Queen bomb in his fight with the Merchants.
** If not for [[spoiler: Ida]], Kira would've blown up Rachel [[HeKnowsTooMuch just because she witnessed him blowing people up]].
** Averted with actual dogs due to Rachel's interference.
** Kira uses a stray cat as a weapon in one fight.
* PetTheDog:
** Kira becomes a friend of the Heberts, the Barneses, and Rachel.
** Brutus the dog is friendly with Kira.
** Emma tries to be friends with both Taylor and Sophia. [[spoiler: It doesn't work, and she Triggers during the Locker incident]].
** [[spoiler: Ida]] becomes one of Rachel's caretakers.
** [[spoiler: Noelle is cured during the assault on Coil's base]].
** Kira becomes a friend of the Heberts, the Barneses, and Rachel.
** Brutus the dog is friendly with Kira.
** Emma tries to be friends with both Taylor and Sophia. [[spoiler: It doesn't work, and she Triggers during the Locker incident]].
** [[spoiler: Ida]] becomes one of Rachel's caretakers.
** [[spoiler: Noelle is cured during the assault on Coil's base]].
* StalkerWithACrush: From the moment she Triggers, [[spoiler: [[{{Yandere}} Ida D. Chapman]], Kira's eventual partner in crime,]] is this towards Kira.
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* {{Yandere}}: [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman]], [[StalkerWithACrush oh so very much.much]].
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* ChekovsGunman: During Kira's attack on a Merchant stash-house, he discovers a captive prostitute and tells her to go free. [[spoiler: 19 months later, she breaks into his apartment as a StalkerWithACrush and becomes his partner-in-crime the Cleaner]].
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* NoSell: [[spoiler: Ida's Striker and Stranger power]] No-Sells Killer Queen, so Kira resorts to Sheer Heart Attack.
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* NoSell: NoBodyLeftBehind: [[spoiler: Coil]] is so completely obliterated by Bites The Dust and [[spoiler: Ida's cleaning power]] that not even [[spoiler: Emma's Thinker Power]] can find him.
* NoSell:
** [[spoiler: Ida's Striker and Stranger power]] No-Sells Killer Queen, so Kira resorts to Sheer HeartAttack.Attack.
** Bites The Dust no-sells [[spoiler: Coil's ability to branch and collapse timelines]].
** [[spoiler: Ida's "cleaning" of Coil's presence]] is so thorough that when [[spoiler: Emma]] tries to find Thomas Calvert with her Thinker power, she can't find anything.
* NoSell:
** [[spoiler: Ida's Striker and Stranger power]] No-Sells Killer Queen, so Kira resorts to Sheer Heart
** Bites The Dust no-sells [[spoiler: Coil's ability to branch and collapse timelines]].
** [[spoiler: Ida's "cleaning" of Coil's presence]] is so thorough that when [[spoiler: Emma]] tries to find Thomas Calvert with her Thinker power, she can't find anything.
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* ProperlyParanoid: Kira does ''not'' take nosy neighbors well, and uses Killer Queen at the slightest provocation. [[spoiler: Coil learns this the hard way]].
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* ProperlyParanoid: Kira does ''not'' take nosy neighbors well, and uses since he doesn't follow the Unwritten Rules he tends to use Killer Queen at the slightest provocation. [[spoiler: Coil learns this the hard way]].
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* SuperOCD: Kira retains this trait from canon; it ends up leading him to discover [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman stalking him and]] breaking into his apartment.
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* Asshole Victim: Kira blows up numerous people who deserve it- Skinheads, ABB goons, Merchants, [[spoiler: Victor, Circus (albeit in a timeline collapsed by Coil), Coil...]].
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* Asshole Victim: AssholeVictim: Kira blows up numerous people who deserve it- Skinheads, ABB goons, Merchants, [[spoiler: Victor, Circus (albeit in a timeline collapsed by Coil), Coil...]].
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** Almost every fight involving Killer Queen will be this in Kira's favor.
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** Almost every fight involving Killer Queen will be this in Kira's favor. Uber and Leet, skinheads, ABB goons, Merchants, [[spoiler: Victor, and Coil]] all get blown up with minimal resistance.
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** Uber and Leet are unceremoniously killed blown up after Kira gets his documentation.
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** Uber and Leet are unceremoniously killed blown up after Kira gets his documentation.
** ''Narrowly averted'' for the Undersiders; [[spoiler: Ida]] memory-wipes Rachel and Lisa stops her Thinker power's train of thought to prevent them from getting blown up by Killer Queen.
** Kira freaks out when his toothbrush is covered in chocolate and outside its holder- [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness he never consumes chocolate and]] [[SuperOCD always puts the toothbrush in its holder]], leading him to discover there was an intruder.
** Othalla breaks down after [[spoiler: Victor goes missing]].
** Othalla breaks down after [[spoiler: Victor goes missing]].
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* OutsideContextProblem: Kira is the only Stand user on Earth Bet. For anybody other than [[spoiler: his girlfriend, Ida D. Chapman]], he is extremely dangerous.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness:
** It's noted in canon that prior to Annette's death Taylor was a "happy-go-lucky chatterbox" (as one SB commenter put it); Taylor acting as quiet and subdued as her Winslow-era canon self shows she is creeped out by Kira.
** Kira's SuperOCD makes it easy for him to notice when an intruder was in his apartment- they brushed their teeth after consuming chocolate (which Kira doesn't eat) and didn't put the toothbrush back in its holder (which he always does).
* OutsideContextProblem: Kira is the only Stand user on Earth Bet.For He is a serial killer who does not know of or care about the Unwritten Rules, blows up witnesses to protect his identity, and for anybody other than [[spoiler: his girlfriend, Ida D. Chapman]], he is extremely dangerous.
** It's noted in canon that prior to Annette's death Taylor was a "happy-go-lucky chatterbox" (as one SB commenter put it); Taylor acting as quiet and subdued as her Winslow-era canon self shows she is creeped out by Kira.
** Kira's SuperOCD makes it easy for him to notice when an intruder was in his apartment- they brushed their teeth after consuming chocolate (which Kira doesn't eat) and didn't put the toothbrush back in its holder (which he always does).
* OutsideContextProblem: Kira is the only Stand user on Earth Bet.
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* SecretIdentity: Whereas a Cape would wear a face-concealing mask and rely on the Unwritten Rules, Kira's idea of secrecy is [[LeaveNoWitnesses a bit]] [[StuffBlowingUp more direct]].
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* BullyingADragon: Trying to discern Kira's lifestyle is a very bad idea. [[spoiler: Coil finds out [[StuffBlowingUp the hard way]].]]
* CassandraTruth: In one timeline, Coil tries to alert Rachel that Kira is a serial killer, but Rachel reacts so poorly he collapses the timeline.
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* GoMadFromTheRevalation: Realizing she was rescued by a murderer is enough to cause [[spoiler: Ida's]] Trigger Event.
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* GoMadFromTheRevalation: GoMadFromTheRevelation: Realizing she was rescued by a murderer is enough to cause [[spoiler: Ida's]] Trigger Event.
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* MuggingTheMonster: Kira keeps getting accosted, resulting in this trope.
** A car-jacker who mugs Kira and Annette is the first person on Earth Bet to get blown up by Killer Queen.
** Three skinheads accost Kira while he's shopping for nail clippers. Killer Queen blows them all up, and Kira gets his first severed hand Girlfriend.
** Kira's apartment is broken into twice, once by [[spoiler: Ida]] and once by Circus. The former only survives due to her Hard Counter to Killer Queen's first bomb, and the latter broke into the apartment in a Coil timeline that gets collapsed.
** A car-jacker who mugs Kira and Annette is the first person on Earth Bet to get blown up by Killer Queen.
** Three skinheads accost Kira while he's shopping for nail clippers. Killer Queen blows them all up, and Kira gets his first severed hand Girlfriend.
** Kira's apartment is broken into twice, once by [[spoiler: Ida]] and once by Circus. The former only survives due to her Hard Counter to Killer Queen's first bomb, and the latter broke into the apartment in a Coil timeline that gets collapsed.
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** Lisa having a similar power to Heaven's Door means she gets a similar warning as Rohan did; unlike Rohan, she doesn't inquire further.
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** Lisa has one when her powers discern [[spoiler: Ida]] is keeping a secret. Unlike Rohan in canon, she knows better than to read further.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Annette is prevented from crashing by Kira.
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* WheresTheKaboom: Kira has this reaction after [[spoiler: Ida removes a Killer Queen bomb]].
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* CombatMedic: One of the applications for [[spoiler: Ida's]] Cleaner power is to heal injuries.
* CombatPragmatist: Kira's default response to danger is to start blowing things up with Killer Queen. If that doesn't work, he sends in Sheer Heart Attack.
* CombatPragmatist: Kira's default response to danger is to start blowing things up with Killer Queen. If that doesn't work, he sends in Sheer Heart Attack.
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** Even [[spoiler: Ida]] is disturbed by Kira's willingness to blow up teenagers to cover his tracks.
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** Even [[spoiler: Ida]] is disturbed by Kira's willingness to blow up teenagers to cover his tracks.
* FrenchMaid: [[spoiler: Ida's]] Cape costume is a maid outfit, as befitting her "Cleaner" powers.
* GoMadFromTheRevalation: Realizing she was rescued by a murderer is enough to cause [[spoiler: Ida's]] Trigger Event.
* GoMadFromTheIsolation: [[spoiler: Miles Kennedy Triggers and gets Dissociative Identity Disorder]] after becoming the victim of Bites The Dust.
* GoMadFromTheRevalation: Realizing she was rescued by a murderer is enough to cause [[spoiler: Ida's]] Trigger Event.
* GoMadFromTheIsolation: [[spoiler: Miles Kennedy Triggers and gets Dissociative Identity Disorder]] after becoming the victim of Bites The Dust.
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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: [[spoiler: Kira's eventual girlfriend Ida D. Chapman]], Cape name "The Cleaner" is a Striker able to 'clean' various things, including undoing damage to objects, healing injuries, treating physical and mental health conditions, removing memories, [[spoiler: removing Killer Queen's bombs, curing Noelle]]...
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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: [[spoiler: Kira's eventual girlfriend Ida D. Chapman]], Cape name "The Cleaner" Cleaner", is a Striker able to 'clean' various things, including undoing damage to objects, healing injuries, treating physical and mental health conditions, removing memories, [[spoiler: removing Killer Queen's bombs, curing Noelle]]...
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* LogicalWeakness: Killer Queen can turn anything into a bomb and then remotely blow it up. [[A "cleaning" Striker power]] can remove the bomb.
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* LogicalWeakness: Killer Queen can turn anything into a bomb and then remotely blow it up. [[A [[spoiler: A "cleaning" Striker power]] can remove the bomb.
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* ProperlyParanoid: Kira does ''not'' take nosy neighbors well, and uses Killer Queen at the slightest provocation. [[spoiler: Coil learns this the hard way]].
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* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler: Coil]] has one in response to Kira's explosive retaliations. [[spoiler: Commander Kennedy melts down to the point of Triggering after Bites The Dust is used on him]].
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After being [[DeathByAmbulance crushed to death by an ambulance]] and subsequently being DraggedOffToHell, [[Manga/DiamondIsUnbreakable Yoshikage Kira]] wakes up on the outskirts of Brockton Bay and hitches a ride with a certain Annette Hebert. After saving her from her canon death by car accident, getting new IDs and documentation, and doing some research on his new world, Kira settles down into his normal routine.
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After being [[DeathByAmbulance crushed to death by an ambulance]] and subsequently being DraggedOffToHell, [[Manga/DiamondIsUnbreakable Yoshikage Kira]] wakes up on the outskirts of Brockton Bay and hitches a ride with a certain Annette Hebert. After saving her from her canon death by car accident, getting new IDs identity papers and documentation, and doing some research on his new world, Kira settles down into his normal routine.
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* BerzerkButton: Disrupting Kira's quiet life tends to end [[StuffBlowingUp badly]] for those who do it. [[spoiler: Victor, Coil, and several assorted henchmen]] get killed for it, and [[spoiler: Circus and Ida]] barely escape.
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* BerzerkButton: BerserkButton: Disrupting Kira's quiet life tends to end [[StuffBlowingUp badly]] for those who do it. [[spoiler: Victor, Coil, and several assorted henchmen]] get killed for it, and [[spoiler: Circus and Ida]] barely escape.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-quiet-life-worm-jjba.457792/ A Quiet Life]]'' is a crossover between ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' and ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure''.
After being [[DeathByAmbulance crushed to death by an ambulance]] and subsequently being DraggedOffToHell, [[Manga/DiamondIsUnbreakable Yoshikage Kira]] wakes up on the outskirts of Brockton Bay and hitches a ride with a certain Annette Hebert. After saving her from her canon death by car accident, getting new IDs and documentation, and doing some research on his new world, Kira settles down into his normal routine.
Brockton Bay being Brockton Bay, Kira gets dragged into the gang politics of the local supervillains, forcing him to use Killer Queen more frequently than otherwise. Along the way, he befriends the Heberts and Barneses, works with Carol Dallon, [[spoiler: and acquires a ''living'' {{Yandere}} Girlfriend]].
[[DeadFic Sadly, the last update was in 2017]].
!!A Quiet Life provides examples of:
*AccidentalKidnapping: At one point, Kira gets shoved into a van with a bunch of ABB goons going out to raid a Merchant stash house. Kira blows them all up and then blows up the Merchants.
*AdaptationalBadass: [[spoiler: Emma]] Triggers in reaction to the Locker incident with a Thinker power.
*AdaptationalHeroism:
** Kira manages to be this without changing his character, simply because of how Earth Bet is a CrapsackWorld with numerous AssholeVictim targets of opportunity.
** Thanks to Annette's continued survival, Emma Barnes remains Taylor's BFF, trying to diplomatically get [[ShrinkingViolet Taylor]] and [[JerkJock Sophia]] to become friends, and [[spoiler: Triggers in the aftermath of the locker incident]].
** Rachel Lindt is saved from joining the Undersiders by Kira's intervention.
** [[spoiler: Emma]] becomes an evil-detecting Thinker that can track down villains from across the city.
*AffablyEvil: Kira is a mild-mannered middle-class serial killer who blows up women to collect their hands. He's still on good terms with the Heberts, Emma Barnes, and Rachel Lindt.
*ALighterShadeOfBlack: [[SerialKiller Yoshikage]] [[StuffBlowingUp Kira]], [[StraightEdgeEvil whose main goal is a quiet life]], is this in a city with Neo-Nazis, Asian gangsters, drug dealers, and a wannabe Bond villain.
*AscendedExtra: Annette is a PosthumousCharacter in canon; here she gets her own POV interlude.
*Asshole Victim: Kira blows up numerous people who deserve it- Skinheads, ABB goons, Merchants, [[spoiler: Victor, Circus (albeit in a timeline collapsed by Coil), Coil...]].
*BerzerkButton: Disrupting Kira's quiet life tends to end [[StuffBlowingUp badly]] for those who do it. [[spoiler: Victor, Coil, and several assorted henchmen]] get killed for it, and [[spoiler: Circus and Ida]] barely escape.
*BewareTheNiceOnes: Yoshikage Kira is a mild-mannered middle-class worker who just wants a quiet life. His Stand, Killer Queen, can blow up interlopers in three different ways.
*CameBackStrong: Kira starts out with all three of his Stand's bombs- Killer Queen, Sheer Heart Attack, and Bites The Dust.
*CharacterDevelopment:
** Kira goes from aloof and uncaring about anyone- up to and including preparing to ''use Killer Queen on his own allies''- to a family friend of the Heberts and [[spoiler: Ida's affectionate boyfriend]].
** Rachel Lindt goes from a [[NoSocialSkills socially inept street urchin]] to one of Taylor's friends.
*ChekovsGun: On the way to the Library, Kira transfers Killer Queen to Danny Hebert to check if he still has Bites The Dust, then recalls his Stand after the successful test. [[spoiler: He uses it in his takedown of Coil's base]].
*CurbStompBattle:
**Almost every fight involving Killer Queen will be this in Kira's favor.
**[[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman is a Cape whose Stranger and Striker powers are a Hard Counter to Kira's Stand, and gives Kira his only defeat]].
*DeadFic: Not updated since February 22nd, 2017.
*DeadManWalking: [[spoiler: Coil's status after Kira activates Bites The Dust is "Fated To Die"]].
*DeathByAdaptation:
** Uber and Leet are unceremoniously killed blown up after Kira gets his documentation.
** [[spoiler: Victor]] is blown up by Killer Queen as part of Kira's LeaveNoWitnesses policy.
** Kira goes after [[spoiler: Coil when the latter starts spying on him, and brings Killer Queen, Sheer Heart Attack, ''and'' Bites The Dust to bear on Coil's base]].
*DefeatMeansFriendship: Kira falls in love with [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman]] after catching the latter spying on him and she manages to NoSell Killer Queen's first bomb.
*DetectEvil: White-Tail (AKA [[spoiler: Emma Barnes]]) has a Thinker ability that allows her to track down villains.
*EvenEvilHasStandards:
**Kira finds the gangs of Brockton Bay abhorrent.
**Even [[spoiler: Ida]] is disturbed by Kira's willingness to blow up teenagers to cover his tracks.
*EvilIsPetty: Kira sets up Josuke as the man who purportedly mugged him of all his valuables and documentation.
*ExplainExplainOhCrap:
** Kira's initial WikiWalk in the library leads to him panicking about the Endbringers.
** [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman]] Triggers after realizing she was rescued from a Merchant stash house by a murderer.
** Tattletale realizes she better turn down her power to avoid [[spoiler: either getting memories erased by Ida or getting blown up by Bites The Dust]].
*ForWantOfANail: Kira's arrival in Brockton Bay lets loose several butterflies:
** Annette is prevented from dying in a car crash, which keeps Taylor (relatively) happy.
** Annette's survival means Emma is still Taylor's friend, which results in [[spoiler: Emma Triggering during the Locker incident]].
** Uber and Leet are unceremoniously removed as petty nuisances.
** A Merchant stash-house is taken down and the Merchants inside get blown up, [[spoiler: resulting in a prostitute inside Triggering after being set free]].
** Rachel Lindt is given a loving household under the care of [[spoiler: the aforementioned former prostitute]].
** [[spoiler: Victor is killed when a raid on a dog-figthing ring has explosive support]].
** [[spoiler: Coil's inquiries into Kira get himself blown up and also results in Noelle being cured and the Undersiders being freed]].
*GroundhogDayLoop: Kira has Bites The Dust. [[spoiler: he uses it in his attack on Coil]].
*HeartIsAnAwesomePower: [[spoiler: Kira's eventual girlfriend Ida D. Chapman]], Cape name "The Cleaner" is a Striker able to 'clean' various things, including undoing damage to objects, healing injuries, treating physical and mental health conditions, removing memories, [[spoiler: removing Killer Queen's bombs, curing Noelle]]...
*HoistByHisOwnPetard:
*LeaveNoWitnesses: Kira's MO regarding his uses of Killer Queen. [[spoiler: Ida's "cleaning" of memories is a non-lethal variant]].
**Kira is so sensitive about his privacy that [[spoiler: Ida has to talk him out of blowing up Rachel, and covers for him by wiping her memories of the incident instead]].
*LogicalWeakness: Killer Queen can turn anything into a bomb and then remotely blow it up. [[A "cleaning" Striker power]] can remove the bomb.
*MrFanservice: A skinhead outright refers to Kira as "Japanese David Bowie".
*MythologyGag:
**Kira's routine is narrated in a similar manner to his monologue to Shigechi in canon.
**Rachel becomes one of Taylor's friends.
**Kira isn't above blowing up teenagers to hide his lethal tendencies, [[spoiler: though Ida intervenes before he can follow through with it]].
*NoSell: [[spoiler: Ida's Striker and Stranger power]] No-Sells Killer Queen, so Kira resorts to Sheer Heart Attack.
*NothingIsScarier: Coil becomes unnerved when his research into Kira results in random explosions and timelines spontaneously collapsing with no explanation.
*NormalFishInATinyPond: While a powerful Stand in it's own right, Killer Queen was no match for Star Platinum: The World in a direct confrontation (nor could it protect against getting tag-teamed by Crazy Diamond, The Hand, Echoes, and Heaven's Door). As the only Stand on Earth Bet, though, it was more than enough to elevate Kira to a PersonOfMassDestruction.
*OhCrap:
** Anyone who witnesses Killer Queen blow something up
** Kira has this reaction to waking up on Earth Bet.
** A skinhead named Mary has this reaction after watching her partner get blown up by Killer Queen. She becomes Kira's first "girlfriend" shortly afterward.
** The ABB goons have this reaction to finding they picked up Kira instead of the guy they were looking for.
** Coil has several of these as Kira and [[spoiler: Ida]] blast their way through his base, culminating in [[spoiler: Bites The Dust obstructing his powers]].
** Commander Miles Kennedy, one of Coil's lieutenants, has a mental breakdown when he becomes the host of Bites The Dust, [[spoiler: resulting in him Triggering as a Stranger and developing Dissociative Identity Disorder]].
** Sophia Hess has one when [[spoiler: she noticed Emma has become an "apex predator"]].
*OutsideContextProblem: Kira is the only Stand user on Earth Bet. For anybody other than [[spoiler: his girlfriend, Ida D. Chapman]], he is extremely dangerous.
*PersonOfMassDestruction: Kira's Stand, Killer Queen, is capable of blasting its way through almost every obstacle presented so far.
*RealityEnsues: Kira's liberal use of Killer Queen to solve his problems has resulted in [[spoiler: at least two Trigger Events]].
*SecretKeeper: [[spoiler: Ida]] is this for Kira the way his father was in canon.
*SerialKiller: Yoshikage Kira.
*ShoutOut:
**In keeping with Kira's Music/Queen theming, chapters are named after Queen tracks.
**The Cleaner, [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman, was named after the man who killed Creator/JohnLennon, Mark David Chapman]].
*StalkingIsLove: [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman]] has this approach to pursuing Kira. Kira retaliates with Killer Queen and Sheer Heart Attack before [[spoiler: Ida]] confesses her love.
*StraightEdgeEvil: Kira retains this trait from canon.
*StuffBlowingUp: Killer Queen's three abilities all revolve around this.
*SupremeChef: Taylor and Annette are impressed by Kira's cooking.
*VillainProtagonist: Yoshikage Kira embodies this even more than Taylor did in canon.
*WouldHurtAChild: Kira nearly blows up Rachel Lindt and has to be talked out of it.
*WouldHurtAWoman: How else would Kira get his severed-hand "girlfriends"?
*{{Yandere}}: [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman]], oh so very much.
After being [[DeathByAmbulance crushed to death by an ambulance]] and subsequently being DraggedOffToHell, [[Manga/DiamondIsUnbreakable Yoshikage Kira]] wakes up on the outskirts of Brockton Bay and hitches a ride with a certain Annette Hebert. After saving her from her canon death by car accident, getting new IDs and documentation, and doing some research on his new world, Kira settles down into his normal routine.
Brockton Bay being Brockton Bay, Kira gets dragged into the gang politics of the local supervillains, forcing him to use Killer Queen more frequently than otherwise. Along the way, he befriends the Heberts and Barneses, works with Carol Dallon, [[spoiler: and acquires a ''living'' {{Yandere}} Girlfriend]].
[[DeadFic Sadly, the last update was in 2017]].
!!A Quiet Life provides examples of:
*AccidentalKidnapping: At one point, Kira gets shoved into a van with a bunch of ABB goons going out to raid a Merchant stash house. Kira blows them all up and then blows up the Merchants.
*AdaptationalBadass: [[spoiler: Emma]] Triggers in reaction to the Locker incident with a Thinker power.
*AdaptationalHeroism:
** Kira manages to be this without changing his character, simply because of how Earth Bet is a CrapsackWorld with numerous AssholeVictim targets of opportunity.
** Thanks to Annette's continued survival, Emma Barnes remains Taylor's BFF, trying to diplomatically get [[ShrinkingViolet Taylor]] and [[JerkJock Sophia]] to become friends, and [[spoiler: Triggers in the aftermath of the locker incident]].
** Rachel Lindt is saved from joining the Undersiders by Kira's intervention.
** [[spoiler: Emma]] becomes an evil-detecting Thinker that can track down villains from across the city.
*AffablyEvil: Kira is a mild-mannered middle-class serial killer who blows up women to collect their hands. He's still on good terms with the Heberts, Emma Barnes, and Rachel Lindt.
*ALighterShadeOfBlack: [[SerialKiller Yoshikage]] [[StuffBlowingUp Kira]], [[StraightEdgeEvil whose main goal is a quiet life]], is this in a city with Neo-Nazis, Asian gangsters, drug dealers, and a wannabe Bond villain.
*AscendedExtra: Annette is a PosthumousCharacter in canon; here she gets her own POV interlude.
*Asshole Victim: Kira blows up numerous people who deserve it- Skinheads, ABB goons, Merchants, [[spoiler: Victor, Circus (albeit in a timeline collapsed by Coil), Coil...]].
*BerzerkButton: Disrupting Kira's quiet life tends to end [[StuffBlowingUp badly]] for those who do it. [[spoiler: Victor, Coil, and several assorted henchmen]] get killed for it, and [[spoiler: Circus and Ida]] barely escape.
*BewareTheNiceOnes: Yoshikage Kira is a mild-mannered middle-class worker who just wants a quiet life. His Stand, Killer Queen, can blow up interlopers in three different ways.
*CameBackStrong: Kira starts out with all three of his Stand's bombs- Killer Queen, Sheer Heart Attack, and Bites The Dust.
*CharacterDevelopment:
** Kira goes from aloof and uncaring about anyone- up to and including preparing to ''use Killer Queen on his own allies''- to a family friend of the Heberts and [[spoiler: Ida's affectionate boyfriend]].
** Rachel Lindt goes from a [[NoSocialSkills socially inept street urchin]] to one of Taylor's friends.
*ChekovsGun: On the way to the Library, Kira transfers Killer Queen to Danny Hebert to check if he still has Bites The Dust, then recalls his Stand after the successful test. [[spoiler: He uses it in his takedown of Coil's base]].
*CurbStompBattle:
**Almost every fight involving Killer Queen will be this in Kira's favor.
**[[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman is a Cape whose Stranger and Striker powers are a Hard Counter to Kira's Stand, and gives Kira his only defeat]].
*DeadFic: Not updated since February 22nd, 2017.
*DeadManWalking: [[spoiler: Coil's status after Kira activates Bites The Dust is "Fated To Die"]].
*DeathByAdaptation:
** Uber and Leet are unceremoniously killed blown up after Kira gets his documentation.
** [[spoiler: Victor]] is blown up by Killer Queen as part of Kira's LeaveNoWitnesses policy.
** Kira goes after [[spoiler: Coil when the latter starts spying on him, and brings Killer Queen, Sheer Heart Attack, ''and'' Bites The Dust to bear on Coil's base]].
*DefeatMeansFriendship: Kira falls in love with [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman]] after catching the latter spying on him and she manages to NoSell Killer Queen's first bomb.
*DetectEvil: White-Tail (AKA [[spoiler: Emma Barnes]]) has a Thinker ability that allows her to track down villains.
*EvenEvilHasStandards:
**Kira finds the gangs of Brockton Bay abhorrent.
**Even [[spoiler: Ida]] is disturbed by Kira's willingness to blow up teenagers to cover his tracks.
*EvilIsPetty: Kira sets up Josuke as the man who purportedly mugged him of all his valuables and documentation.
*ExplainExplainOhCrap:
** Kira's initial WikiWalk in the library leads to him panicking about the Endbringers.
** [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman]] Triggers after realizing she was rescued from a Merchant stash house by a murderer.
** Tattletale realizes she better turn down her power to avoid [[spoiler: either getting memories erased by Ida or getting blown up by Bites The Dust]].
*ForWantOfANail: Kira's arrival in Brockton Bay lets loose several butterflies:
** Annette is prevented from dying in a car crash, which keeps Taylor (relatively) happy.
** Annette's survival means Emma is still Taylor's friend, which results in [[spoiler: Emma Triggering during the Locker incident]].
** Uber and Leet are unceremoniously removed as petty nuisances.
** A Merchant stash-house is taken down and the Merchants inside get blown up, [[spoiler: resulting in a prostitute inside Triggering after being set free]].
** Rachel Lindt is given a loving household under the care of [[spoiler: the aforementioned former prostitute]].
** [[spoiler: Victor is killed when a raid on a dog-figthing ring has explosive support]].
** [[spoiler: Coil's inquiries into Kira get himself blown up and also results in Noelle being cured and the Undersiders being freed]].
*GroundhogDayLoop: Kira has Bites The Dust. [[spoiler: he uses it in his attack on Coil]].
*HeartIsAnAwesomePower: [[spoiler: Kira's eventual girlfriend Ida D. Chapman]], Cape name "The Cleaner" is a Striker able to 'clean' various things, including undoing damage to objects, healing injuries, treating physical and mental health conditions, removing memories, [[spoiler: removing Killer Queen's bombs, curing Noelle]]...
*HoistByHisOwnPetard:
*LeaveNoWitnesses: Kira's MO regarding his uses of Killer Queen. [[spoiler: Ida's "cleaning" of memories is a non-lethal variant]].
**Kira is so sensitive about his privacy that [[spoiler: Ida has to talk him out of blowing up Rachel, and covers for him by wiping her memories of the incident instead]].
*LogicalWeakness: Killer Queen can turn anything into a bomb and then remotely blow it up. [[A "cleaning" Striker power]] can remove the bomb.
*MrFanservice: A skinhead outright refers to Kira as "Japanese David Bowie".
*MythologyGag:
**Kira's routine is narrated in a similar manner to his monologue to Shigechi in canon.
**Rachel becomes one of Taylor's friends.
**Kira isn't above blowing up teenagers to hide his lethal tendencies, [[spoiler: though Ida intervenes before he can follow through with it]].
*NoSell: [[spoiler: Ida's Striker and Stranger power]] No-Sells Killer Queen, so Kira resorts to Sheer Heart Attack.
*NothingIsScarier: Coil becomes unnerved when his research into Kira results in random explosions and timelines spontaneously collapsing with no explanation.
*NormalFishInATinyPond: While a powerful Stand in it's own right, Killer Queen was no match for Star Platinum: The World in a direct confrontation (nor could it protect against getting tag-teamed by Crazy Diamond, The Hand, Echoes, and Heaven's Door). As the only Stand on Earth Bet, though, it was more than enough to elevate Kira to a PersonOfMassDestruction.
*OhCrap:
** Anyone who witnesses Killer Queen blow something up
** Kira has this reaction to waking up on Earth Bet.
** A skinhead named Mary has this reaction after watching her partner get blown up by Killer Queen. She becomes Kira's first "girlfriend" shortly afterward.
** The ABB goons have this reaction to finding they picked up Kira instead of the guy they were looking for.
** Coil has several of these as Kira and [[spoiler: Ida]] blast their way through his base, culminating in [[spoiler: Bites The Dust obstructing his powers]].
** Commander Miles Kennedy, one of Coil's lieutenants, has a mental breakdown when he becomes the host of Bites The Dust, [[spoiler: resulting in him Triggering as a Stranger and developing Dissociative Identity Disorder]].
** Sophia Hess has one when [[spoiler: she noticed Emma has become an "apex predator"]].
*OutsideContextProblem: Kira is the only Stand user on Earth Bet. For anybody other than [[spoiler: his girlfriend, Ida D. Chapman]], he is extremely dangerous.
*PersonOfMassDestruction: Kira's Stand, Killer Queen, is capable of blasting its way through almost every obstacle presented so far.
*RealityEnsues: Kira's liberal use of Killer Queen to solve his problems has resulted in [[spoiler: at least two Trigger Events]].
*SecretKeeper: [[spoiler: Ida]] is this for Kira the way his father was in canon.
*SerialKiller: Yoshikage Kira.
*ShoutOut:
**In keeping with Kira's Music/Queen theming, chapters are named after Queen tracks.
**The Cleaner, [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman, was named after the man who killed Creator/JohnLennon, Mark David Chapman]].
*StalkingIsLove: [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman]] has this approach to pursuing Kira. Kira retaliates with Killer Queen and Sheer Heart Attack before [[spoiler: Ida]] confesses her love.
*StraightEdgeEvil: Kira retains this trait from canon.
*StuffBlowingUp: Killer Queen's three abilities all revolve around this.
*SupremeChef: Taylor and Annette are impressed by Kira's cooking.
*VillainProtagonist: Yoshikage Kira embodies this even more than Taylor did in canon.
*WouldHurtAChild: Kira nearly blows up Rachel Lindt and has to be talked out of it.
*WouldHurtAWoman: How else would Kira get his severed-hand "girlfriends"?
*{{Yandere}}: [[spoiler: Ida D. Chapman]], oh so very much.
