History Fanfic / APieceOfRebellion

10th Dec '15 4:41:09 PM BobSaget9
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*** And arguably, even earlier that ''that'':
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*** And arguably, even earlier that ''that'':''that'' (at least the first part):
10th Dec '15 4:40:32 PM BobSaget9
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-->[[spoiler:"There is no Man Upstairs," they said. "Just a severely depressed author putting too much of themself into a story. I'm sorry if you were expecting someone different."]]
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-->[[spoiler:"There --->[[spoiler:"There is no Man Upstairs," they said. "Just a severely depressed author putting too much of themself into a story. I'm sorry if you were expecting someone different."]] *** And arguably, even earlier that ''that'': ---->[[spoiler:Emmet smiled, a little sadly. "Sorry about that. They could probably have been taken off [[MediumAwareness off-screen]], if you will, but it just never happened. So, sorry."]]
11th May '15 8:59:38 PM DudeWheresMyPassword
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* BrokenPedestal: Emmet's ''devestated'' when he witnesses Lord Business [[spoiler:wiping away Bad Cop's face]].
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* BrokenPedestal: Emmet's ''devestated'' Emmet initially reveres President Business and is honored to meet and work for him. He's ''horrified'' when he witnesses Lord Business [[spoiler:wiping [[spoiler:Business wiping away Bad Cop's face]].
23rd Dec '14 11:04:32 PM EverybodyHatesBilly
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** TheReveal in Chapter 15: [[spoiler:Finn and the Man Upstairs do not exist in your universe]]. Which leads into the revelation of [[spoiler:The Author admitting how their own depression influenced the story]].
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** TheReveal in Chapter 15: [[spoiler:Finn [[spoiler:"Finn and the Man Upstairs do not exist in your universe]]. universe."]] Which leads into the revelation of [[spoiler:The Author admitting how their own depression influenced the story]].story]]. *** However, both are revealed a tad earlier in the chapter with: -->[[spoiler:"There is no Man Upstairs," they said. "Just a severely depressed author putting too much of themself into a story. I'm sorry if you were expecting someone different."]]
23rd Dec '14 10:59:53 PM EverybodyHatesBilly
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** The VillainousBreakdown of [[spoiler:the Micromanagers]] in Chapter 14, who sound like [[spoiler:the Man Upstairs]].[[spoiler".. [[RedHerring which turns out to be total BS when we learn that he doesn't exist here]].]]
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** The VillainousBreakdown of [[spoiler:the Micromanagers]] in Chapter 14, who sound like [[spoiler:the Man Upstairs]].[[spoiler"..[[spoiler:.. [[RedHerring which turns out to be total BS when we learn that he doesn't exist here]].]]
23rd Dec '14 10:59:43 PM EverybodyHatesBilly
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** The VillainousBreakdown of [[spoiler:the Micromanagers]] in Chapter 14, who sound like [[spoiler:the Man Upstairs]].
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** The VillainousBreakdown of [[spoiler:the Micromanagers]] in Chapter 14, who sound like [[spoiler:the Man Upstairs]].[[spoiler".. [[RedHerring which turns out to be total BS when we learn that he doesn't exist here]].]]
14th Aug '14 11:36:58 PM FoominBlue
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* ArtificialLimbs: [[spoiler:Good/Bad Cop]] gets a mechanical replacement for their missing arm.

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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Good Cop proves this when he [[spoiler:has his parents throw Business out the window ''after'' his HeelFaceTurn]].

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* BreakingTheFourthWall: This is how [[spoiler:the story ends -- with Good Cop asking the Author directly to 'let the story end here' so they can find their happiness on their own]].

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* TheCavalryArrivesLate: In Chapter 16, [[spoiler:Ma and Pa arrive after Good Cop's talked Business down, and Ma goes to town on the guy]].

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* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler:Vitruvius isn't dead, he's just been doing the 'ghost thing'. Wyldstyle even manages to get his sheet away from him during the ending]].

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* EasilyForgiven: ** {{Averted}} with [[spoiler:President Business]]'s situation. ** Also averted with how Wyldstyle struggles to forgive [[spoiler:Vitruvius for lying to her]]. The fact that [[spoiler:he keeps puttering around pretending to be dead]] sure doesn't help. ** Good Cop/Bad Cop also reacts poorly upon learning that [[spoiler:Vitruvius is their father]].

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** In the final confrontation, [[spoiler:Business is still talked down and recants, although he still gets punished]].

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* LukeIAmYourFather: During the Epilogue, it's revealed that [[spoiler:Vitruvius is GCBC's father, and their mothers have the same two faces-one body condition]]. The news is ''not'' taken well.

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* SuicidalCosmicTemperTantrum: [[spoiler:{{Downplayed}}, but Good Cop realizes that this was his boss's real plan: Kragle the world, ensuring it was absolutely perfect... and finish with himself.]]

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* TimeSkip: The final chapters take place three months after the conclusion of the movie's main plot, illustrating what happens to the characters as life moves on.

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** Good Cop's vital realization about Lord Business: "[[spoiler:You never planned to spare yourself.]]"
8th Jun '14 7:36:20 PM FoominBlue
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* AuthorAvatar: [[spoiler:Appears in Chapter 15, in order to confess their side of the story to Good Cop.]]

* DeusExMachina: {{Discussed}} when [[spoiler:The Author tells Good Cop that simply sending him back home would be one of these. Good Cop doesn't care]].

** The VillainousBreakdown of [[spoiler:the Micromanagers]] in Chapter 14, who sound like [[spoiler:the Man Upstairs]]. * AFormYouAreComfortableWith: [[spoiler:The Author]] tries to find one when speaking to [[spoiler:Good Cop]].

* MadnessMantra: Delivered by [[spoiler:a Micromanager]]: "Wrong. Wrong wrong wrong wrong--" * MajorInjuryUnderreaction: When [[spoiler:Good Cop]] finally registers what happened during their [[AnArmAndALeg literal disarming]], they express mild surprise and gratitude that their ''other'' arm is their dominant one.

* MookHorrorShow: {{Invoked}} through the eyes of Guardbot 189-2001, who's unnerved by witnessing the heroic rampage of Wyldstyle and her crew, [[spoiler:even though they aren't targeting ''him'']]. * MuseAbuse: {{Discussed}} in Chapter 15 when [[spoiler:Good Cop meets The Author, who apologizes for using their story as a method for grappling with their own depression]].

* QuitYourWhining: {{Downplayed}}; Wyldstyle's a bit annoyed with how Benny's unhappiness over [[spoiler:Batman stealing his spaceship]] effects how quickly he's able to [[spoiler:build another one]].

** Later on, he delivers an unscripted one to help rally [[spoiler:all the citizens against Lord Business]].

* StepfordSmiler: Unikitty, especially after [[spoiler:the destruction of Cloud Cuckoo Land]]. Made more explicit in Chapter 15 when [[spoiler:The Author speaks their thoughts aloud to Good Cop]].

* WasItAllALie: Wyldstyle wonders about this after learning [[spoiler:the prophecy was all made up]].
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* WasItAllALie: WasItAllALie: ** Wyldstyle wonders about this after learning [[spoiler:the prophecy was all made up]].up]]. ** Good Cop has to confirm with [[spoiler:The Author]] that the Piece can still stop the Kragle, since it feels like everything else was one big lie.

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* WasItAllALie: Wyldstyle wonders about WhamEpisode: Chapter 15, which reveals that [[spoiler:Finn and The Man Upstairs don't exist in this after learning [[spoiler:the prophecy was all made up]].universe. Instead, Good Cop meets an avatar of The Author, who admits writing the whole story and creating their universe as a coping mechanism for their depression]].

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* WasItAllALie: Wyldstyle wonders about this after learning [[spoiler:the prophecy was all made up]].** TheReveal in Chapter 15: [[spoiler:Finn and the Man Upstairs do not exist in your universe]]. Which leads into the revelation of [[spoiler:The Author admitting how their own depression influenced the story]].
5th Jun '14 8:00:41 PM nicktoonhero
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** Emmet still gets to [[spoiler:save the Master Builders from the Think Tank]]. Because [[spoilers:Lord Business gave him full access to everything in the Octan tower, Emmet simply needs to input an access code and voice authorization to deactivate it, instead of having to [[HeroicSacrifice force himself off the tower to disconnect the power source]].]]
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** Emmet still gets to [[spoiler:save the Master Builders from the Think Tank]]. Because [[spoilers:Lord [[spoiler:Lord Business gave him full access to everything in the Octan tower, Emmet simply needs to input an access code and voice authorization to deactivate it, instead of having to [[HeroicSacrifice force himself off the tower to disconnect the power source]].]]
5th Jun '14 8:00:20 PM nicktoonhero
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** Emmet still gets to [[spoiler:save the Master Builders from the Think Tank]]. Because [[spoilers:Lord Business gave him full access to everything in the Octan tower, Emmet simply needs to input an access code and voice authorization to deactivate it, instead of having to [[HeroicSacrifice force himself off the tower to disconnect the power source]].]]
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