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* NotMeThisTime: When Monica reports that [[spoiler:soldiers in crimson armor (who Bernadetta previously identified as being servants of the Flame Emperor) put Ashe's village to the torch]], the narration describes [[spoiler:Edelgard]]'s surprised reaction as genuine and [[spoiler:Hubert]] subtly responds that they have no clue what she's talking about.
** [[spoiler: Monica/Kronya's reaction to the event implies it wasn't Those Who Slither In the Dark either.]]

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* NotMeThisTime: When Monica reports that [[spoiler:soldiers in crimson armor (who Bernadetta previously identified as being servants of the Flame Emperor) put Ashe's village to the torch]], the narration describes [[spoiler:Edelgard]]'s surprised reaction as genuine and [[spoiler:Hubert]] subtly responds that they have no clue what she's talking about.
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about. Monica/[[spoiler:Kronya]]'s reaction to the event implies it wasn't Those Who Slither In [[spoiler:"those who slither in the Dark dark"]] either.]]

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* BerserkButton: The Death Knight is enraged and charges Bernadetta when she tosses Byleth the Sword of the Creator, disgusted that she would discard such a powerful weapon so carelessly.
** Monica and Dimitri go berzerk and tear apart the unknown soldiers committing the [[spoiler: massacre of Agarthan civilians in chapter 11.]]

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* BerserkButton: BerserkButton:
** Monica and Dimitri go berserk and tear apart the unknown soldiers committing the [[spoiler: massacre of Agarthan civilians in chapter 11.]]
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The Death Knight is enraged and charges Bernadetta when she tosses Byleth the Sword of the Creator, disgusted that she would discard such a powerful weapon so carelessly.
** Monica and Dimitri go berzerk and tear apart the unknown soldiers committing the [[spoiler: massacre of Agarthan civilians in chapter 11.]]
carelessly.



* FantasticRacism: Rhea does not like [[spoiler:Agarthans, to the point of lumping in any of them simply living peaceful lives away from Ouroboros with them as threats to be annihilated.]]

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* FantasticRacism: FantasticRacism:
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Rhea does not like [[spoiler:Agarthans, to the point of lumping in any of them simply living peaceful lives away from Ouroboros with them as threats to be annihilated.]]



** There are a good amount of references to the ''VideoGame/KisekiSeries'' present, namely the changing of "those who slither in the dark"'s name to Ouroboros/The Society. Monica also claims to hail from the [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel Erebonian Empire]] [[spoiler: as part of her cover story.]] The chapter title Pulsation to Tomorrow also comes from the Kiseki titles, as it is the name of the opening to the first Cold Steel game.

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** There are a good amount of references to the ''VideoGame/KisekiSeries'' present, namely the changing of "those who slither in the dark"'s name to Ouroboros/The Society. Monica also claims to hail from the [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel Erebonian Empire]] [[spoiler: as part of her cover story.]] The chapter title Pulsation to Tomorrow also comes from the Kiseki ''Kiseki'' titles, as it is the name of the opening to the first Cold Steel ''Cold Steel'' game.



* WhamEpisode: Chapters 9-11 send the situation that Bernadetta is familiar with clean off the rails as [[spoiler:Lonato becomes the first Demonic Beast fought by the students via usage of a copy of a Hero's Relic, the discovery of Agarthans living lives away from Ouroboros, Monica seeming to show genuine compassion for Agarthan civilians and Bernadetta, and Rhea's public outing of the Society to the students.]]

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* WhamEpisode: Chapters 9-11 send the situation that Bernadetta is familiar with clean off the rails as [[spoiler:Lonato becomes the first Demonic Beast fought by the students via usage of a copy of a Hero's Relic, the discovery of Agarthans living lives away from Ouroboros, Ouroboros are discovered, Monica seeming seems to show genuine compassion for Agarthan civilians and Bernadetta, and Rhea's public outing of Rhea publicly outs the Society to the students.]]
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** There are a good amount of references to the ''VideoGame/KisekiSeries'' present, namely the changing of "those who slither in the dark"'s name to Ouroboros/The Society. Monica also claims to hail from the Erebonian Empire [[spoiler: as part of her cover story.]]

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** There are a good amount of references to the ''VideoGame/KisekiSeries'' present, namely the changing of "those who slither in the dark"'s name to Ouroboros/The Society. Monica also claims to hail from the [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel Erebonian Empire Empire]] [[spoiler: as part of her cover story.]]]] The chapter title Pulsation to Tomorrow also comes from the Kiseki titles, as it is the name of the opening to the first Cold Steel game.

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** Monica/[[spoiler:Kronya]] was not even slightly impressive in canon. Here she's keeping up with Bernadetta and her extra seven years of experience and Byleth the Ashen Demon while not [[spoiler: showing off any Agarthan capabilities.]]



* AdaptationalBadass: Monica/[[spoiler:Kronya]] was not even slightly impressive in canon. Here she's keeping up with Bernadetta and her extra seven years of experience and Byleth the Ashen Demon while not [[spoiler: showing off any Agarthan capabilities.]]



* TokenEvilTeammate: Monica, as both an occasional helper in the Golden Deer's missions and to the Black Eagles. [[spoiler: Even if she hasn't revealed herself as Kronya yet (assuming she actually is Kronya, she still is a very underhanded fighter and has an extremely morbid sense of humor.]]

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* TokenEvilTeammate: Monica, as both an occasional helper in the Golden Deer's missions and to the Black Eagles. [[spoiler: Even if she hasn't revealed herself as Kronya yet (assuming she actually is Kronya, Kronya), she still is a very underhanded fighter and has an extremely morbid sense of humor.]]

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* AdaptationalBadass: Monica/[[spoiler:Kronya]] was not even slightly impressive in canon. Here she's keeping up with Bernadetta and her extra seven years of experience and Byleth the Ashen Demon while not [[spoiler: showing off any Agarthan capabilities.]]



** In Chapter 13, Byleth sacrifices himself to save Bernadetta from a fatal blow from the Death Knight in the exact same way he died saving her in the first timeline. This causes her to curl up into a ball and go into shock.

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** In Chapter 13, Byleth sacrifices himself to save Bernadetta from a fatal blow from the Death Knight in the exact same way he died saving her in the first timeline. timeline, before rolling back time to save her without dying. This causes her to curl up into a ball and go into shock.shock - because she saw him fail to save her without dying over and over in the original timeline.

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** Monica and Dimitri go berzerk and tear apart the unknown soldiers committing the [[spoiler: massacre of Agarthan civilians in chapter 11.]]



** [[spoiler: Monica's sudden genuine concern for Bernadetta starting in chapter 11 may be a result of Monica mistaking her for another disguised Agarthan.]]



** [[spoiler: Monica/Kronya's reaction to the event implies it wasn't Those Who Slither In the Dark either.]]



* TokenEvilTeammate: Monica, as both an occasional helper in the Golden Deer's missions and to the Black Eagles. [[spoiler: Even if she hasn't revealed herself as Kronya yet, she still is a very underhanded fighter and has an extremely morbid sense of humor.]]

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* TokenEvilTeammate: Monica, as both an occasional helper in the Golden Deer's missions and to the Black Eagles. [[spoiler: Even if she hasn't revealed herself as Kronya yet, yet (assuming she actually is Kronya, she still is a very underhanded fighter and has an extremely morbid sense of humor.]]



* WhamEpisode: Chapters 9-11 send the situation that Bernadetta is familiar with clean off the rails as [[spoiler:Lonato becomes the first Demonic Beast fought by the students via usage of a copy of a Hero's Relic, the discovery of Agarthans living lives away from Ouroboros, and Rhea's public outing of the Society to the students.]]

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* WhamEpisode: Chapters 9-11 send the situation that Bernadetta is familiar with clean off the rails as [[spoiler:Lonato becomes the first Demonic Beast fought by the students via usage of a copy of a Hero's Relic, the discovery of Agarthans living lives away from Ouroboros, Monica seeming to show genuine compassion for Agarthan civilians and Bernadetta, and Rhea's public outing of the Society to the students.]]

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* NotMeThisTime: When Monica reports that [[spoiler:soldiers in crimson armor (who Bernadetta previously identified as being servants of the Flame Emperor) put Ashe's village to the torch]], the narration describes [[spoiler:Edelgard]]'s surprised reaction as genuine and [[spoiler:Hubert]] subtly responds that they have no clue what she's talking about.



* YouAreNotAlone: The rest of the Black Eagles, with the notable exceptions of [[spoiler: Edelgard, Hubert, and Monica]], follow Bernadetta down to the Holy Mausoleum after she tries to cut off contact with them. When she tells them that they shouldn't have followed her, and that they can't understand whats going on, they respond by telling her that she's still their friend no matter what.

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* YouAreNotAlone: The rest of the Black Eagles, with the notable exceptions of [[spoiler: Edelgard, Hubert, and Monica]], follow Bernadetta down to the Holy Mausoleum after she tries to cut off contact with them. When she tells them that they shouldn't have followed her, and that they can't understand whats what's going on, they respond by telling her that she's still their friend no matter what.
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-->'''Dimitri:''' Why is Lord Lonato [[spoiler:wielding the Lance of Ruin]] of all things?

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-->'''Dimitri:''' Why is Lord Lonato [[spoiler:wielding the Lance of Ruin]] of all things?things?
* YouAreNotAlone: The rest of the Black Eagles, with the notable exceptions of [[spoiler: Edelgard, Hubert, and Monica]], follow Bernadetta down to the Holy Mausoleum after she tries to cut off contact with them. When she tells them that they shouldn't have followed her, and that they can't understand whats going on, they respond by telling her that she's still their friend no matter what.

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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Monica shows up much earlier then in canon, as a result of Bernadetta changing to the Golden Deer early in the school year. In addition, the excuse for her disappearance is changed from being kidnapped to having been away dealing with family business.

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** The Death Knight's raid on the Holy Mausoleum happens slightly earlier then in-game. [[spoiler: Instead of happening one month after Lonato's rebellion, they instead show up roughly a week or so afterwards.]]
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** It's mentioned that the last time Bernadetta saw the Death Knight he was disintegrated by Lysithea, referencing how effective she is against him in-game.

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** It's mentioned that the last time Bernadetta saw the Death Knight he was disintegrated by Lysithea, referencing how effective she is against him in-game. [[spoiler: Sure enough, when he actually shows up for the first time Byleth has Lysithea promptly obliterate him, forcing a retreat.]]
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* BerserkButton: The Death Knight is enraged and charges Bernadetta when she tosses Byleth the Sword of the Creator, disgusted that she would discard such a powerful weapon so carelessly.

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** Bernadetta has access to Divine Pulse in this timeline, and Chapter 5 reveals that [[spoiler:she bears the Crest of Flames]], most likely due to Sothis' merge with her.

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** Bernadetta has access to Divine Pulse in this timeline, and Chapter 5 reveals that [[spoiler:she bears the Crest of Flames]], most likely due to Sothis' merge with her.her, and Chapter 13 reveals that [[spoiler:she can wield the Sword of the Creator]].



* AffectionateNickname: Bernadetta had a tendency to call Byleth "By". She quickly finds that she has to stop herself from doing so after being sent back due to the fact that he doesn't know her yet.

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* AffectionateNickname: Bernadetta had a tendency to call Byleth "By". "By" in the first timeline. She quickly finds that she has to stop herself from doing so after being sent back due to the fact that he doesn't know her yet. yet.
* AgonyOfTheFeet: In Chapter 13, Bernadetta deliberately drops a dresser on her foot so she can sneak off to scope out the Holy Mausoleum. Fortunately, she had slipped a metal plate in her shoe beforehand so she wouldn't really be hurt. Then double subverted when she gets a thrown dagger to said foot. Bernie rewinds time to undo it, only to get stabbed ''again''.



* TheCavalry: In Chapter 13, as Bernadetta and the Black Eagles are about to be overrun by the soldiers invading the Holy Mausoleum, Byleth and the rest of the Golden Deer show up to turn the tide and clean house.



* ThrowingYourSwordAlwaysWorks: Byleth throws his sword into the Death Knight's shoulder to save Bernadetta from him.



* TraumaButton: Bernadetta does ''not'' take being checked on by [[spoiler: [[BigBad Edelgard]]]] immediately after she wakes up from her MentalTimeTravel well. Getting away from [[spoiler: her]] ends up being one of the main reasons she tries to transfer to the Golden Deer as soon as possible.

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Bernadetta does ''not'' take being checked on by [[spoiler: [[BigBad Edelgard]]]] immediately after she wakes up from her MentalTimeTravel well. Getting away from [[spoiler: her]] ends up being one of the main reasons she tries to transfer to the Golden Deer as soon as possible.possible.
** In Chapter 13, Byleth sacrifices himself to save Bernadetta from a fatal blow from the Death Knight in the exact same way he died saving her in the first timeline. This causes her to curl up into a ball and go into shock.

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* BreakHisHeartToSaveHim: Platonic example. Bernadetta quickly distances herself from her former classmates from the Black Eagle house, to the point of claiming that she was never really friends with any of them to begin with. [[spoiler: It's actually because she saw all of them die in the original timeline. Her trying to distance herself is so she can keep them from being involved.]]



* BreakHisHeartToSaveHim: Platonic example. Bernadetta quickly distances herself from her former classmates from the Black Eagle house, to the point of claiming that she was never really friends with any of them to begin with. [[spoiler: It's actually because saw all of them die in the original timeline. Her trying to distance herself is so she can keep them from being involved.]]
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* BreakHisHeartToSaveHim: Platonic example. Bernadetta quickly distances herself from her former classmates from the Black Eagle house, to the point of claiming that she was never really friends with any of them to begin with. [[spoiler: It's actually because saw all of them die in the original timeline. Her trying to distance herself is so she can keep them from being involved.]]
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: In the original timeline, the FinalBoss [[spoiler:Nemesis]] impales Byleth with his sword, who promptly returns the favor.


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* OffWithHisHead: In the original timeline, Claude finishes off the FinalBoss [[spoiler:Nemesis]] by decapitating him.
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* AccompliceByInaction: In Chapter 11, when the Black Eagles recount how [[spoiler:their mission to arrest the leaders of the Western Church degenerated into a total massacre of both them and the civilians they were protecting]], Monica (who was with the Blue Lions and Golden Deer on another mission) accuses them all of being accomplices since they did nothing to stop it.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13355102/1/A-Chance-For-a-New-Dawn A Chance For a New Dawn]] is a ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/11047498/LostCipher999 LostCipher999]]

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[[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13355102/1/A-Chance-For-a-New-Dawn A Chance For a New Dawn]] Dawn]]'' is a ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/11047498/LostCipher999 LostCipher999]]



!!A Chance For a New Dawn contains examples of:
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Monica shows up much earlier then in canon, as a result of Bernadetta changing to the Golden Deer early in the school year. In addition, the reason for her disappearance is changed from being kidnapped to having been away dealing with family business.

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!!A !!''A Chance For a New Dawn Dawn'' contains examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass:
** Bernadetta has access to Divine Pulse in this timeline, and Chapter 5 reveals that [[spoiler:she bears the Crest of Flames]], most likely due to Sothis' merge with her.
** Lonato is armed [[spoiler:with the Dark Lance of Ruin, and is turned into the first Demonic Beast]].
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Monica shows up much earlier then in canon, as a result of Bernadetta changing to the Golden Deer early in the school year. In addition, the reason excuse for her disappearance is changed from being kidnapped to having been away dealing with family business.business.
* AdaptationalHeroism: Monica/[[spoiler:Kronya]] shows a much more empathetic side when [[spoiler:Agarthan civilians]] come into play.
* AdaptationNameChange: [[spoiler:"Those who slither in the dark"/the Agarthans are given the name Ouroboros by Rhea.]]



--> '''Bernadetta''': Who ''hasn't'' heard of the legendary Ashen Demon? You're only the greatest mercenary to roam the land and the son of the esteemed Captain Jeralt!
--> '''Leonie''': Wow, Bernadetta. I had no idea you were such an avid fan of our new professor. I've never heard of him myself until just recently.
--> '''Byleth''': ''(Rubbing the back of his head)'' Well now. I'm... rather flattered to hear that.
--> '''Bernadetta''': ''(Mentally)'' ''Ack! Sothis, bring me back a few minutes!''
--> '''Sothis''': ''I am NOT turning back the clock every time you fumble over your own dialogue!''

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--> '''Bernadetta''': -->'''Bernadetta''': Who ''hasn't'' heard of the legendary Ashen Demon? You're only the greatest mercenary to roam the land and the son of the esteemed Captain Jeralt!
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Jeralt!\\
'''Leonie''': Wow, Bernadetta. I had no idea you were such an avid fan of our new professor. I've never heard of him myself until just recently.
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recently.\\
'''Byleth''': ''(Rubbing ''[rubbing the back of his head)'' head]'' Well now. I'm... rather flattered to hear that.
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that.\\
'''Bernadetta''': ''(Mentally)'' ''[mentally]'' ''Ack! Sothis, bring me back a few minutes!''
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minutes!''\\
'''Sothis''': ''I am NOT turning back the clock every time you fumble over your own dialogue!''



* FantasticRacism: Rhea does not like [[spoiler:Agarthans, to the point of lumping in any of them simply living peaceful lives away from Oroboros with them as threats to be annihilated.]]

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* FantasticRacism: Rhea does not like [[spoiler:Agarthans, to the point of lumping in any of them simply living peaceful lives away from Oroboros Ouroboros with them as threats to be annihilated.]]]]
* GroinAttack: When Sylvain reads some of Bernadetta's erotic literature, she gives him a critical hit to the gonads.



* ImpliedDeathThreat: When Hubert catches Bernadetta stalking Jeritza, he warns her not to stick her nose where it doesn't belong lest her newly empowered spirit be prematurely snuffed out.
* InSpiteOfANail: Despite Bernadetta's changes to the timeline, Dimitri still makes a bloodthirsty threat to sever the limbs and crush the wicked skulls of those who slaughtered an innocent village as he does in the canon Blue Lions route. This time, the victims are a group of ordinary [[spoiler:Agarthan]] civilians living on Gaspard territory.



* MentalTimeTravel: Bernadetta ends up in her younger self's body when she gets sent back. This causes problems, as detailed under RealityEnsues below.

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* MentalTimeTravel: Bernadetta ends up in her younger self's body when she gets sent back. This causes problems, as detailed under RealityEnsues below.her physical body isn't acclimated to her future self's level of skill.



--> '''Sothis''': ''What did I tell you about abusing my power for petty reasons?!''

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--> '''Sothis''': -->'''Sothis''': ''What did I tell you about abusing my power for petty reasons?!''



** Sylvain finds some of Bernadetta's writings, referencing their support conversations.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Those Who Slither In The Dark are named Ouroboros by Rhea.]]

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** Sylvain finds some of Bernadetta's writings, referencing their support conversations.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Those Who Slither
conversations. In The Dark are named Ouroboros by Rhea.]]this same conversation, when Bernadetta kicks him in the jimmies, he wheezes, "C-critical hit to the [[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheSacredStones sacred stones]]...!"



* PeggySue: Bernadetta.

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* PeggySue: Bernadetta. Sothis latches onto her after Byleth's HeroicSacrifice in the original timeline and accidentally sends them both back to the beginning of the game.
* PullTheThread: When Bernadetta tries to claim that her mother, "Erica von Eisner", wrote her erotic story, Hubert promptly points out that her mother's name is Theresa von Varley and there are no Eisners other than Jeralt and Byleth.



* ShoutOut: There are a good amount of references to the VideoGame/KisekiSeries present, namely the changing of TWSITD's name to Ouroboros/The Society. Monaca also claims to hail from the Erebonian Empire [[spoiler: as part of her cover story.]]

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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
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There are a good amount of references to the VideoGame/KisekiSeries ''VideoGame/KisekiSeries'' present, namely the changing of TWSITD's "those who slither in the dark"'s name to Ouroboros/The Society. Monaca Monica also claims to hail from the Erebonian Empire [[spoiler: as part of her cover story.]]]]
** In Chapter 9, Bernadetta reads one of Ashe's novels, and the story is a direct reference to ''VideoGame/TalesOfTheAbyss''.
* SixthRanger: Bernadetta wastes no time transferring to the Golden Deer when she arrives in the past. This leads Edelgard to bring in Monica early to make up for the loss in firepower.
* SmiteMeOMightySmiter: When Hubert [[PullTheThread pulls the thread]] on Bernadetta's excuses for her self-written Bernie/Byleth smut, Bernadetta begs the goddess strike her down this instant.
-->'''Sothis:''' I'm afraid I must decline. This embarrassment is yours to suffer alone.



* WhamEpisode: Chapters 9-11 send the situation that Bernadetta is familiar with clean off the rails as [[spoiler:Lonato becomes the first Demonic Beast fought by the students via usage of a copy of a Hero's Relic, the discovery of Agarthans living lives away from Ouroboros, and Rhea's public outing of The Society to the students.]]

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* WhamEpisode: Chapters 9-11 send the situation that Bernadetta is familiar with clean off the rails as [[spoiler:Lonato becomes the first Demonic Beast fought by the students via usage of a copy of a Hero's Relic, the discovery of Agarthans living lives away from Ouroboros, and Rhea's public outing of The the Society to the students.]]]]
* WhamLine: In Chapter 9, when the heroes confront Lord Lonato.
-->'''Dimitri:''' Why is Lord Lonato [[spoiler:wielding the Lance of Ruin]] of all things?

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* ShoutOut: There are a good amount of references to the VideoGame/KisekiSeries present, namely the changing of TWSITD's name to Ouroboros/The Society.

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* ShoutOut: There are a good amount of references to the VideoGame/KisekiSeries present, namely the changing of TWSITD's name to Ouroboros/The Society. Monaca also claims to hail from the Erebonian Empire [[spoiler: as part of her cover story.]]



* {{Troll}}: Monica, mostly to Bernadetta.

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* {{Troll}}: Monica, mostly to Bernadetta.Bernadetta.
* WhamEpisode: Chapters 9-11 send the situation that Bernadetta is familiar with clean off the rails as [[spoiler:Lonato becomes the first Demonic Beast fought by the students via usage of a copy of a Hero's Relic, the discovery of Agarthans living lives away from Ouroboros, and Rhea's public outing of The Society to the students.]]
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* RealityEnsues: While Bernadetta ''was'' a fearsome sniper in the original timeline, she's back to square one when shes sent back due to the fact that, while her mind is the same, her body is not nearly as strong as it was after 7 years of training, thanks to MentalTimeTravel.

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* RealityEnsues: While Bernadetta ''was'' a fearsome sniper in the original timeline, she's back to square one when shes she's sent back due to the fact that, while her mind is the same, her body is not nearly as strong as it was after 7 years of training, thanks to MentalTimeTravel.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Those Who Slither In The Dark are named Ouroboros by Rhea.]]
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** Sylvain finds some of Bernadetta's writings, referencing their support conversations.

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* ScrewDestiny: [[spoiler: Sothis reveals in Chapter 12 that Byleth burned through all of his Divine Pulses in order to save Bernadetta in the final battle, only to find that, [[CallBack much like Jeralt]], she died no matter what he did. This makes his HeroicSacrifice to save her at the cost of his own life into this.]]



* ShoutOut: There are a good amount of references to the KisekiSeries present, namely the changing of TWSITD's name to Ouroboros/The Society.

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* ShoutOut: There are a good amount of references to the KisekiSeries VideoGame/KisekiSeries present, namely the changing of TWSITD's name to Ouroboros/The Society.Society.
* SurvivorsGuilt: Bernadetta feels awful about the fact that Byleth had to sacrifice themselves for her, to the point where she has nightmares blaming herself for ruining their happy ending.
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* FantasticRacism: Rhea [[Understatementdoes not like]] [[spoiler:Agarthans, to the point of lumping in any of them simply living peaceful lives away from Oroboros with them as threats to be annihilated.]]

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* FantasticRacism: Rhea [[Understatementdoes does not like]] like [[spoiler:Agarthans, to the point of lumping in any of them simply living peaceful lives away from Oroboros with them as threats to be annihilated.]]
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* FantasticRacism: Rhea [[Understatement does not like]] [[spoiler:Agarthans, to the point of lumping in any of them simply living peaceful lives away from Oroboros with them as threats to be annihilated.]]

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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler: In the original timeline, Lord Lonato was killed in combat with Byleth's house. Here, he becomes the first Black Beast despite seemingly surrendering and is ult

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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler: In the original timeline, Lord Lonato was killed in combat with Byleth's house. Here, he becomes the first Black Beast despite seemingly surrendering and is ultultimately put down.]]
* DisappointedInYou: Sothis is very disappointed by her church now that she is more aware of her identity, not that she can show it due to being InvisibleToNormals. [[spoiler: She's especially angry at her daughter Rhea's extremism.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: Byleth sacrificing himself to save Bernadetta during the final battle with [[spoiler: Nemesis]] is what triggers the plot.
* MagicAIsMagicA: Byleth and Bernadetta are both affected by each other's time rewinds. Experiencing one of these after his first time talking with her is what makes him suspicious, while Bernadetta ends up realizing the link when Byleth uses his Divine Pulse during a battle.
* MentalTimeTravel: Bernadetta ends up in her younger self's body when she gets sent back. This causes problems, as detailed under RealityEnsues below.
* MundaneUtility: Bernadetta uses the TimeMaster power of Divine Pulse to redo embarrassing conversations. Sothis calls her out on it.
--> '''Sothis''': ''What did I tell you about abusing my power for petty reasons?!''
* MythologyGag:
** It's mentioned that the last time Bernadetta saw the Death Knight he was disintegrated by Lysithea, referencing how effective she is against him in-game.
* OfficialCouple: Bernadetta and Byleth in the original timeline.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Almost ''everyone'' who knows Bernadetta are very alarmed due to her sudden shift in behavior, not knowing she's gone through around 7 years of CharacterDevelopment and knowing what will come to pass.
* PeggySue: Bernadetta.
* RealityEnsues: While Bernadetta ''was'' a fearsome sniper in the original timeline, she's back to square one when shes sent back due to the fact that, while her mind is the same, her body is not nearly as strong as it was after 7 years of training, thanks to MentalTimeTravel.
* SecurityCling: The first thing Bernadetta does when she sees Byleth in the past is give him a long hug, having recently watched him [[TakingTheBullet take the bullet]] for her in the original timeline. Sothis allows her to finish doing so before resetting the day, as to not draw suspicion.
* TokenEvilTeammate: Monica, as both an occasional helper in the Golden Deer's missions and to the Black Eagles. [[spoiler: Even if she hasn't revealed herself as Kronya yet, she still is a very underhanded fighter and has an extremely morbid sense of humor.]]
* TraumaButton: Bernadetta does ''not'' take being checked on by [[spoiler: [[BigBad Edelgard]]]] immediately after she wakes up from her MentalTimeTravel well. Getting away from [[spoiler: her]] ends up being one of the main reasons she tries to transfer to the Golden Deer as soon as possible.
* {{Troll}}: Monica, mostly to Bernadetta.

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During the final battle, Byleth is stuck down protecting Bernadetta. Somehow, the power of Sothis passes down to her, and she quickly finds herself back when Byleth first game to the academy. Armed with knowledge of the future and advised by a reawakened Sothis, Bernadetta tries to change fate.

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During the final battle, Byleth is stuck down protecting Bernadetta. Somehow, the power of Sothis passes down to her, and she quickly finds herself back when Byleth first game came to the academy. Armed with knowledge of the future and advised by a reawakened Sothis, Bernadetta tries to change fate.



* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler: In the original timeline, Lord Lonato was killed in combat with Byleth's house. Here, he becomes the first Black Beast despite seemingly surrendering and is ultimately put down.]]
* DisappointedInYou: Sothis is very disappointed by her church now that she is more aware of her identity, not that she can show it due to being InvisibleToNormals. [[spoiler: She's especially angry at her daughter Rhea's extremism.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: Byleth sacrificing himself to save Bernadetta during the final battle with [[spoiler: Nemesis]] is what triggers the plot.
* MagicAIsMagicA: Byleth and Bernadetta are both affected by each other's time rewinds. Experiencing one of these after his first time talking with her is what makes him suspicious, while Bernadetta ends up realizing the link when Byleth uses his Divine Pulse during a battle.
* MentalTimeTravel: Bernadetta ends up in her younger self's body when she gets sent back. This causes problems, as detailed under RealityEnsues below.
* MundaneUtility: Bernadetta uses the TimeMaster power of Divine Pulse to redo embarrassing conversations. Sothis calls her out on it.
--> '''Sothis''': ''What did I tell you about abusing my power for petty reasons?!''
* MythologyGag:
** It's mentioned that the last time Bernadetta saw the Death Knight he was disintegrated by Lysithea, referencing how effective she is against him in-game.
* OfficialCouple: Bernadetta and Byleth in the original timeline.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Almost ''everyone'' who knows Bernadetta are very alarmed due to her sudden shift in behavior, not knowing she's gone through around 7 years of CharacterDevelopment and knowing what will come to pass.
* PeggySue: Bernadetta.
* RealityEnsues: While Bernadetta ''was'' a fearsome sniper in the original timeline, she's back to square one when shes sent back due to the fact that, while her mind is the same, her body is not nearly as strong as it was after 7 years of training, thanks to MentalTimeTravel.
* SecurityCling: The first thing Bernadetta does when she sees Byleth in the past is give him a long hug, having recently watched him [[TakingTheBullet take the bullet]] for her in the original timeline. Sothis allows her to finish doing so before resetting the day, as to not draw suspicion.
* TokenEvilTeammate: Monica, as both an occasional helper in the Golden Deer's missions and to the Black Eagles. [[spoiler: Even if she hasn't revealed herself as Kronya yet, she still is a very underhanded fighter and has an extremely morbid sense of humor.]]
* TraumaButton: Bernadetta does ''not'' take being checked on by [[spoiler: [[BigBad Edelgard]]]] immediately after she wakes up from her MentalTimeTravel well. Getting away from [[spoiler: her]] ends up being one of the main reasons she tries to transfer to the Golden Deer as soon as possible.
* {{Troll}}: Monica, mostly to Bernadetta.

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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler: In the original timeline, Lord Lonato was killed in combat with Byleth's house. Here, he becomes the first Black Beast despite seemingly surrendering and is ultimately put down.]]
* DisappointedInYou: Sothis is very disappointed by her church now that she is more aware of her identity, not that she can show it due to being InvisibleToNormals. [[spoiler: She's especially angry at her daughter Rhea's extremism.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: Byleth sacrificing himself to save Bernadetta during the final battle with [[spoiler: Nemesis]] is what triggers the plot.
* MagicAIsMagicA: Byleth and Bernadetta are both affected by each other's time rewinds. Experiencing one of these after his first time talking with her is what makes him suspicious, while Bernadetta ends up realizing the link when Byleth uses his Divine Pulse during a battle.
* MentalTimeTravel: Bernadetta ends up in her younger self's body when she gets sent back. This causes problems, as detailed under RealityEnsues below.
* MundaneUtility: Bernadetta uses the TimeMaster power of Divine Pulse to redo embarrassing conversations. Sothis calls her out on it.
--> '''Sothis''': ''What did I tell you about abusing my power for petty reasons?!''
* MythologyGag:
** It's mentioned that the last time Bernadetta saw the Death Knight he was disintegrated by Lysithea, referencing how effective she is against him in-game.
* OfficialCouple: Bernadetta and Byleth in the original timeline.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Almost ''everyone'' who knows Bernadetta are very alarmed due to her sudden shift in behavior, not knowing she's gone through around 7 years of CharacterDevelopment and knowing what will come to pass.
* PeggySue: Bernadetta.
* RealityEnsues: While Bernadetta ''was'' a fearsome sniper in the original timeline, she's back to square one when shes sent back due to the fact that, while her mind is the same, her body is not nearly as strong as it was after 7 years of training, thanks to MentalTimeTravel.
* SecurityCling: The first thing Bernadetta does when she sees Byleth in the past is give him a long hug, having recently watched him [[TakingTheBullet take the bullet]] for her in the original timeline. Sothis allows her to finish doing so before resetting the day, as to not draw suspicion.
* TokenEvilTeammate: Monica, as both an occasional helper in the Golden Deer's missions and to the Black Eagles. [[spoiler: Even if she hasn't revealed herself as Kronya yet, she still is a very underhanded fighter and has an extremely morbid sense of humor.]]
* TraumaButton: Bernadetta does ''not'' take being checked on by [[spoiler: [[BigBad Edelgard]]]] immediately after she wakes up from her MentalTimeTravel well. Getting away from [[spoiler: her]] ends up being one of the main reasons she tries to transfer to the Golden Deer as soon as possible.
* {{Troll}}: Monica, mostly to Bernadetta.
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* MagicAIsMagicA: Byleth and Bernadetta are both affected by each other's time rewinds. Experiencing one of these after his first time talking with her is what makes him suspicious, while Bernadetta ends up realizing the link when Byleth uses his Divine Pulse during a battle.



* SecurityCling: The first thing Bernadetta does she sees Byleth in the past is give him a long hug, having recently watched him [[TakingTheBullet take the bullet]] for her in the original timeline. Sothis allows her to finish doing so before resetting the day, as to not draw suspicion.

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* SecurityCling: The first thing Bernadetta does when she sees Byleth in the past is give him a long hug, having recently watched him [[TakingTheBullet take the bullet]] for her in the original timeline. Sothis allows her to finish doing so before resetting the day, as to not draw suspicion.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13355102/1/A-Chance-For-a-New-Dawn A Chance For a New Dawn]] is a ''VideoGame/FireEmblemThreeHouses'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/11047498/LostCipher999 LostCipher999]]

During the final battle, Byleth is stuck down protecting Bernadetta. Somehow, the power of Sothis passes down to her, and she quickly finds herself back when Byleth first game to the academy. Armed with knowledge of the future and advised by a reawakened Sothis, Bernadetta tries to change fate.

'''WARNING''': This fic contains heavy spoilers for the Golden Deer/Verdant Wind route.

!!A Chance For a New Dawn contains examples of:
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Monica shows up much earlier then in canon, as a result of Bernadetta changing to the Golden Deer early in the school year. In addition, the reason for her disappearance is changed from being kidnapped to having been away dealing with family business.
* AffablyEvil: Morbid sense of humor aside, Monica is generally pretty cheerful.
* AffectionateNickname: Bernadetta had a tendency to call Byleth "By". She quickly finds that she has to stop herself from doing so after being sent back due to the fact that he doesn't know her yet.
* AscendedFangirl: Bernadetta claims to be a big fan of Byleth's time as the "Ashen Demon" in order to justify her knowledge of his abilities and her unexpected change of house. Not that she doesn't try to use Divine Pulse to undo saying so first.
--> '''Bernadetta''': Who ''hasn't'' heard of the legendary Ashen Demon? You're only the greatest mercenary to roam the land and the son of the esteemed Captain Jeralt!
--> '''Leonie''': Wow, Bernadetta. I had no idea you were such an avid fan of our new professor. I've never heard of him myself until just recently.
--> '''Byleth''': ''(Rubbing the back of his head)'' Well now. I'm... rather flattered to hear that.
--> '''Bernadetta''': ''(Mentally)'' ''Ack! Sothis, bring me back a few minutes!''
--> '''Sothis''': ''I am NOT turning back the clock every time you fumble over your own dialogue!''
* ButterflyOfDoom: The simple act of Bernadetta changing to the Golden Deer house early results in [[AdaptationalEarlyAppearance Monica]] coming back to the Black Eagles much earlier, [[spoiler: several of the Golden Deer's early missions having their objectives changed, and Lord Lonato being turned into the first Black Beast instead of Miklan.]]
* CuttingOffTheBranches: Byleth took the Golden Deer route, but recruited Bernadetta around the time of Miklan's theft of the Lance of Ruin.
* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler: In the original timeline, Lord Lonato was killed in combat with Byleth's house. Here, he becomes the first Black Beast despite seemingly surrendering and is ultimately put down.]]
* DisappointedInYou: Sothis is very disappointed by her church now that she is more aware of her identity, not that she can show it due to being InvisibleToNormals. [[spoiler: She's especially angry at her daughter Rhea's extremism.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: Byleth sacrificing himself to save Bernadetta during the final battle with [[spoiler: Nemesis]] is what triggers the plot.
* MentalTimeTravel: Bernadetta ends up in her younger self's body when she gets sent back. This causes problems, as detailed under RealityEnsues below.
* MundaneUtility: Bernadetta uses the TimeMaster power of Divine Pulse to redo embarrassing conversations. Sothis calls her out on it.
--> '''Sothis''': ''What did I tell you about abusing my power for petty reasons?!''
* MythologyGag:
** It's mentioned that the last time Bernadetta saw the Death Knight he was disintegrated by Lysithea, referencing how effective she is against him in-game.
* OfficialCouple: Bernadetta and Byleth in the original timeline.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Almost ''everyone'' who knows Bernadetta are very alarmed due to her sudden shift in behavior, not knowing she's gone through around 7 years of CharacterDevelopment and knowing what will come to pass.
* PeggySue: Bernadetta.
* RealityEnsues: While Bernadetta ''was'' a fearsome sniper in the original timeline, she's back to square one when shes sent back due to the fact that, while her mind is the same, her body is not nearly as strong as it was after 7 years of training, thanks to MentalTimeTravel.
* SecurityCling: The first thing Bernadetta does she sees Byleth in the past is give him a long hug, having recently watched him [[TakingTheBullet take the bullet]] for her in the original timeline. Sothis allows her to finish doing so before resetting the day, as to not draw suspicion.
* TokenEvilTeammate: Monica, as both an occasional helper in the Golden Deer's missions and to the Black Eagles. [[spoiler: Even if she hasn't revealed herself as Kronya yet, she still is a very underhanded fighter and has an extremely morbid sense of humor.]]
* TraumaButton: Bernadetta does ''not'' take being checked on by [[spoiler: [[BigBad Edelgard]]]] immediately after she wakes up from her MentalTimeTravel well. Getting away from [[spoiler: her]] ends up being one of the main reasons she tries to transfer to the Golden Deer as soon as possible.
* {{Troll}}: Monica, mostly to Bernadetta.

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