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** [[spoiler: Monica assumes Flayn is a monster because she's a Nabatean.]]

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** [[spoiler: Monica assumes Flayn is a monster because she's a Nabatean.Child of the Goddess.]]



* OhCrap: Bernadetta's reaction once she realizes she has sent surviving [[spoiler:Agarthan]] villagers to the Church. She gets increasingly worried that the [[spoiler:Nabateans in the Church]] are unaware of their identities.

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* OhCrap: Bernadetta's reaction once she realizes she has sent surviving [[spoiler:Agarthan]] villagers to the Church. She gets increasingly worried that the [[spoiler:Nabateans [[spoiler:Children of the Goddess in the Church]] are unaware of their identities.

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* PyrrhicVictory: Overlapping with DownerBeginning, what kicks off the plot opens with this in the original timeline. Byleth dying protecting Bernadetta right as the final battle ends has the mood of the scene the complete opposite of Verdant Wind's original ending cutscene, with everyone devastated at Byleth's death.



* SurvivorsGuilt: Bernadetta feels awful about the fact that Byleth had to sacrifice themselves for her, to the point where she has nightmares blaming herself for ruining their happy ending.

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* SurvivorsGuilt: Bernadetta feels awful about the fact that Byleth had to sacrifice themselves himself for her, to the point where she has nightmares blaming herself for ruining their happy ending.



** Rhea as well, given that the Agarthans [[spoiler:almost totally exterminated her people, and that the current generation of Agarthans is plottin Fodlan's downfall.]] They're not AlwaysChaoticEvil, but she has very few good reasons to see that and very many not to.

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** Rhea as well, given that the Agarthans [[spoiler:almost totally exterminated her people, and that the current generation of Agarthans is plottin plotting Fodlan's downfall.]] They're not AlwaysChaoticEvil, but she has very few good reasons to see that and very many not to.

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** Chapter 22 reveals that the Varley estate has [[VideoGame/FireEmblemFates a servant named Felicia]].

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** Chapter 22 reveals that the The Varley estate has [[VideoGame/FireEmblemFates a servant servants named Felicia]].Felicia and Flora]]. The latter is seen fighting with ice magic and daggers in Chapter 22.



** Monica in the game had an overly cheerful personality which most characters believed was a coping mechanism from being kidnapped for so long. Here, she's overly cheerful ''and'' shamelessly AxCrazy, yet everyone takes this as normal behavior. Both the characters and the narration tend to express shock whenever she shows concern for others. Chapter 16 goes farther when Bernadetta sees Monica in a panicked state next to [[spoiler:Arundel and assumes he is also part of Ouroboros.]]

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** Monica in the game had an overly cheerful personality which most characters believed was a coping mechanism from being kidnapped for so long. Here, she's overly cheerful ''and'' shamelessly AxCrazy, yet everyone takes this as normal behavior. Both the characters and the narration tend to express shock whenever she shows concern for others.any other emotion. Chapter 16 goes farther when Bernadetta sees Monica in a panicked state next to [[spoiler:Arundel and assumes he is also part of Ouroboros.]]



* PaletteSwap: The soldiers who attacked in Gaspard and Varley wear colors reminiscent of Adrestia and Almyra, respectively. These soldiers are not from their respective locations [[spoiler:nor from Ouroboros]].



** Rowan is able to appear in such a way that not even Sothis notices his sudden presence.



** The end of Chapter 22 has Monica go in a sheer state of panic upon seeing the Varley manor in flames. Her first act after gaining composure is to dive and crash into one of the windows.



* UndergroundCity: [[spoiler:Underneath the Varley manor's massive underground laboratory is an equally large, abandoned city resembling Shambala in ruins.]]



** For readers picking up on the ''VideoGame/Trails'' references, Monica's description of her hometown in Chapter 18 is this.

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** For readers picking up on the ''VideoGame/Trails'' ''VideoGame/TrailsSeries'' references, Monica's description of her hometown in Chapter 18 is this.
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** Third, a nightmare where she commits suicide some time after Byleth's sacrifice against [[spoiler:Nemesis]].

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** Third, a nightmare where she [[DrivenToSuicide commits suicide suicide]] some time after Byleth's sacrifice against [[spoiler:Nemesis]].
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* MixedAncestry: [[spoiler:Both Bernadetta and Monica/Kronya are half-Agarthan. Bernadetta is more human while Kronya is more Agarthan.]]

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* MentalTimeTravel: Bernadetta ends up in her younger self's body when she gets sent back. This causes problems, as her physical body isn't acclimated to her future self's level of skill.

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* MentalTimeTravel: While Bernadetta ''was'' a fearsome sniper in the original timeline, she's back to square one when she ends up in her younger self's body when she gets sent back. body. This causes problems, as problems due to the fact that while her mind is the same, her physical body isn't acclimated to her future self's level of skill.skill after 7 years of training.



* RealityEnsues: While Bernadetta ''was'' a fearsome sniper in the original timeline, she's back to square one when she's sent back due to the fact that, while her mind is the same, her body is not nearly as strong as it was after 7 years of training, thanks to MentalTimeTravel.
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** Rhea does not like [[spoiler:Agarthans, to the point of lumping in any of them simply living peaceful lives away from the Ouroboros as threats to be annihilated. She does trust Byleth's judgement enough to have them captured alive if possible, but she considers them too much of a threat to leave any of them alone for now.

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** Rhea does not like [[spoiler:Agarthans, to the point of lumping in any of them simply living peaceful lives away from the Ouroboros as threats to be annihilated. She does trust Byleth's judgement enough to have them captured alive if possible, but she considers them too much of a threat to leave any of them alone for now.]]
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** Rhea does not like [[spoiler:Agarthans, to the point of lumping in any of them simply living peaceful lives away from the Ouroboros as threats to be annihilated.]]

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** Rhea does not like [[spoiler:Agarthans, to the point of lumping in any of them simply living peaceful lives away from the Ouroboros as threats to be annihilated.]] She does trust Byleth's judgement enough to have them captured alive if possible, but she considers them too much of a threat to leave any of them alone for now.



** Rhea as well, given that the Agarthans [[spoiler:almost totally exterminated her people.]]

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** Rhea as well, given that the Agarthans [[spoiler:almost totally exterminated her people.]]people, and that the current generation of Agarthans is plottin Fodlan's downfall.]] They're not AlwaysChaoticEvil, but she has very few good reasons to see that and very many not to.

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* TragicBigot: Edelgard is extremely prejudiced against the Agarthans, which makes sense considering [[spoiler:every single one she's ever met has been plotting the downfall of the surface world and their experiments resulted in the deaths of all of her siblings and her own lifespan being cut short]].

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Edelgard is extremely prejudiced against the Agarthans, which makes sense considering [[spoiler:every single one she's ever met has been plotting the downfall of the surface world and their experiments resulted in the deaths of all of her siblings and her own lifespan being cut short]].short]].
** Rhea as well, given that the Agarthans [[spoiler:almost totally exterminated her people.]]
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* {{Crossover}}: The story implements elements from the ''VideoGame/KisekiSeries'', most notably the Ouroboros and the Erebonian Empire, although the author has stated the story will take place entirely in Fodlan and no named characters from the ''Kiseki'' games will make any direct appearances.

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* {{Crossover}}: The story implements elements from the ''VideoGame/KisekiSeries'', ''VideoGame/TrailsSeries'', most notably the Ouroboros and the Erebonian Empire, although the author has stated the story will take place entirely in Fodlan and no named characters from the ''Kiseki'' ''Trails'' games will make any direct appearances.



** There are a good amount of references to the ''VideoGame/KisekiSeries'' present, namely the changing of "those who slither in the dark"'s name to Ouroboros/The Society. Monica also claims to hail from the [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel Erebonian Empire]] [[spoiler: as part of her cover story.]] The chapter title Pulsation to Tomorrow also comes from the ''Kiseki'' titles, as it is the name of the opening to the first ''Cold Steel'' game. The author's note at the end of chapter 15 heavily implies it's an outright crossover but this has not yet been confirmed.

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** There are a good amount of references to the ''VideoGame/KisekiSeries'' ''VideoGame/TrailsSeries'' present, namely the changing of "those who slither in the dark"'s name to Ouroboros/The Society. Monica also claims to hail from the [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel Erebonian Empire]] [[spoiler: as part of her cover story.]] The chapter title Pulsation to Tomorrow also comes from the ''Kiseki'' titles, as it is the name of the opening to the first ''Cold Steel'' game. The author's note at the end of chapter 15 heavily implies it's an outright crossover but this has not yet been confirmed.



** For readers picking up on the ''[[VideoGame/KisekiSeries Kiseki]]'' references, Monica's description of her hometown in Chapter 18 is this.

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** For readers picking up on the ''[[VideoGame/KisekiSeries Kiseki]]'' ''VideoGame/Trails'' references, Monica's description of her hometown in Chapter 18 is this.
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* BungledSuicide: [[spoiler: Around a year before attending Garreg Mach, it's noted that Bernadetta threw herself off the highest floor of her manor as a result of the immense strain on her body and mind from the secret implantation of the Crest of Indech within her. Though how she survived was left a mystery, Bernadetta claims she's actively repressed the traumatic event from her memory ever since.]]


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* OrganTheft: [[spoiler:Upon stumbling into a secluded underground labyrinth located deep beneath her old manor, Bernadetta discovers that the deaths and disappearances caused by the Varley plague were an elaborate front to harvest and preserve the bones and vital organs of the plague's numerous victims. Lilith even goes on to imply that her father has had a complicit hand in the operation for untold years.]]

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* LuckBasedSearchTechnique: Bernadetta accidentally opens up a wall of the manor's exterior that leads to a [[spoiler:massive, deeply underground, labyrinthic laboratory.]]



* OutOfFocus: Edelgard disappears starting Chapter 12. In Chapter 16, Monica mentions that she hasn't seen Edelgard at all that day which Seteth finds troubling. Edelgard returns in Chapter 19 with both Bernadetta and Monica asking what she was doing in her many weeks of absence.



* SelfDeprecation: The beginning of Chapter 21 has Monica feeling they've been in Varley territory for nearly a whole year even though it's been about three days, referencing the time frame Chapters 17-21 were uploaded. Edelgard advises she'd keep a proper schedule with Monica replying she had some personal things to take care of.



* TomatoInTheMirror: Chapter 19 reveals [[spoiler:Bernadetta is half-Agarthan]].

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* TomatoInTheMirror: Chapter 19 reveals [[spoiler:Bernadetta is half-Agarthan]]. Chapter 21 also uncovers that [[spoiler:Bernadetta was born without a crest and was artificially given one a few years ago]].


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* WrittenInAbsence: Edelgard disappears starting Chapter 12. In Chapter 16, Monica mentions that she hasn't seen Edelgard at all that day which Seteth finds troubling. Edelgard returns in Chapter 19 with both Bernadetta and Monica asking what she was doing in her many weeks of absence.
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* FascinatingEyebrow: Rowan is described as raising his eyebrow in a comical manner when Claude wonders if he's heard of him before.

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* BigDamnHeroes: Bernadetta comes this close to being devoured by wolves, only to be rescued by Rowan and Claude.



** Chapter 22 reveals that the von Varley estate has [[VideoGame/FireEmblemFates a servant named Felicia]].

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** Chapter 22 reveals that the von Varley estate has [[VideoGame/FireEmblemFates a servant named Felicia]].


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* OutOfTheFryingPan: Bernadetta escapes from [[spoiler:a whole bunch of brain monsters in a secret laboratory]], only to be accosted by a trio of wolves.


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* PipePain: When trapped in [[spoiler:a secret laboratory beneath the Varley estate with a bunch of brain monsters with legs]], Bernadetta uses a pipe as a makeshift weapon. Unfortunately, it breaks after three hits.
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** Bernadetta's literary adoration of the exploits of other RPG heroes continues in Chapter 20, where she's revealed to be a major fan of the stories of [[VideoGame/{{Ys}} Adol Christin]], even going as far as to develop a crush on the [[HeroicMime famous]] [[ChickMagnet adventurer]] in her childhood. In addition, the fic's cover image bears a striking resemblance to the cover art of [[VideoGame/YsVIIILacrimosaOfDana Ys VIII.]]

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** Bernadetta's literary adoration of the exploits of other RPG heroes continues in Chapter 20, where she's revealed to be a major fan of the stories of [[VideoGame/{{Ys}} Adol Christin]], even going as far as to develop a crush on the [[HeroicMime famous]] [[ChickMagnet adventurer]] in her childhood. In addition, the fic's cover image bears a striking resemblance to the cover art of [[VideoGame/YsVIIILacrimosaOfDana ''[[VideoGame/YsVIIILacrimosaOfDana Ys VIII.]] VIII]]''.
** In Chapter 22, Bernadetta and Sothis get into the old [[Franchise/AceAttorney ladder/stepladder argument]].


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* TragicBigot: Edelgard is extremely prejudiced against the Agarthans, which makes sense considering [[spoiler:every single one she's ever met has been plotting the downfall of the surface world and their experiments resulted in the deaths of all of her siblings and her own lifespan being cut short]].
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** Bernadetta's literary adoration of the exploits of other RPG heroes continues in Chapter 20, where she's revealed to be a major fan of the stories of [[VideoGame/{{Ys}} Adol Christin]], even going as far as to develop a crush on the [[HeroicMime famous]] [[ChickMagnet adventurer]] in her childhood.

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** Bernadetta's literary adoration of the exploits of other RPG heroes continues in Chapter 20, where she's revealed to be a major fan of the stories of [[VideoGame/{{Ys}} Adol Christin]], even going as far as to develop a crush on the [[HeroicMime famous]] [[ChickMagnet adventurer]] in her childhood. In addition, the fic's cover image bears a striking resemblance to the cover art of [[VideoGame/YsVIIILacrimosaOfDana Ys VIII.]]



* SmallSecludedWorld: Fodlan and its surrounding locations are surrounded by a magical veil. Anyone can visit Fodlan but cannot leave it without taking an unreliable route. The Veil also seems to hide Fodlan from outsiders as [[spoiler:Theresa]] was unaware of the land prior arriving by accident.

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* SmallSecludedWorld: Fodlan and its surrounding locations are surrounded by a magical veil. Anyone can visit Fodlan but cannot leave it without taking an unreliable route. The Veil also seems to hide Fodlan from outsiders as [[spoiler:Theresa]] was unaware of the land prior to arriving by accident.

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** The Death Knight's raid on the Holy Mausoleum happens slightly earlier then in-game. [[spoiler: Instead of happening one month after Lonato's rebellion, they instead show up roughly a week or so afterwards.]]

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** The Death Knight's raid on the Holy Mausoleum happens slightly earlier then than in-game. [[spoiler: Instead of happening one month after Lonato's rebellion, they instead show up roughly a week or so afterwards.]]



** [[spoiler: [[HalfBreedDiscrimination Half-Agarthan breeds are also discriminated]], as Monica tells Bernadetta that half-breeds need to stick together.]]



* MixedAncestry: [[spoiler:Both Bernadetta and Monica/Kronya are half-Agarthan. Bernadetta is more human while Kronya is more Agarthan.]]



* RevealingInjury: The skirmish at the mock battle has Monica cut part of Bernadetta's skin and [[spoiler:draw Agarthan blood out of her which lead to Monica/Kronya [[CommonalityConnection turning friendly]] towards Bernadetta. Bernie doesn't realize this until Chapter 20.]]



* SecretKeeper: Upon seeing the dead [[spoiler:Agarthan civilians]] in Gaspard, [[spoiler:Monica]] quietly tells Bernadetta to not let it be known to anyone.



** Upon seeing the dead [[spoiler:Agarthan civilians]] in Gaspard, [[spoiler:Monica]] quietly tells Bernadetta to not let it be known to anyone.



** Chapter 20 has Bernadetta suspect that [[spoiler:Claude knows about her mixed ancestry but is keeping his mouth shut. Likewise, Monica knew about Bernadetta's Agarthan blood since the mock battle but never told her about it until Theresa revealed it to Bernadetta the night before.]]



* TokenEvilTeammate: Monica, as both an occasional helper in the Golden Deer's missions and to the Black Eagles. [[spoiler: Even if she hasn't revealed herself as Kronya yet (assuming she actually is Kronya), she still is a very underhanded fighter and has an extremely morbid sense of humor.]]

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* TokenEvilTeammate: Monica, as both an occasional helper in the Golden Deer's missions and to the Black Eagles. [[spoiler: Even if before she hasn't revealed herself as Kronya yet (assuming she actually is Kronya), Kronya, she still is a very underhanded fighter and has an extremely morbid sense of humor.]]
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* Bernadetta's literary adoration of the exploits of other RPG heroes continues in Chapter 20, where she's revealed to be a major fan of the stories of [[VideoGame/{{Ys}} Adol Christin]], even going as far as to develop a crush on the [[HeroicMime famous]] [[ChickMagnet adventurer]] in her childhood.

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* ** Bernadetta's literary adoration of the exploits of other RPG heroes continues in Chapter 20, where she's revealed to be a major fan of the stories of [[VideoGame/{{Ys}} Adol Christin]], even going as far as to develop a crush on the [[HeroicMime famous]] [[ChickMagnet adventurer]] in her childhood.
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*PsychicDreamsForEveryone: Not long after discovering her [[spoiler: half Agarthan heritage, Bernadetta learns that she inherited the clairvoyant abilities of their patron god Sahrius, allowing her to dream of the events of the past from her own experiences or through the eyes of another. This power does come with the double-edged drawback of [[{{Synchronization}} forcing her to share the sensations of whoever's perspective she's witnessing]] at the time, though.]]


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* Bernadetta's literary adoration of the exploits of other RPG heroes continues in Chapter 20, where she's revealed to be a major fan of the stories of [[VideoGame/{{Ys}} Adol Christin]], even going as far as to develop a crush on the [[HeroicMime famous]] [[ChickMagnet adventurer]] in her childhood.

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