History Fanfic / AAngleIsWithUs

28th Jun '15 5:28:24 AM SetsunasaNiWa
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** "There is a bed over there!"

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** --> "There is a bed over there!"there!"
* TheChosenOne: Though what she's chosen for, we never know.



* TheChosenOne: Though what she's chosen for, we never know.
20th May '13 2:41:22 PM DynamicDragon
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* RougeAnglesofSatin: Literally, in the title of the story, and the atrocious spelling doesn't get better.

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* RougeAnglesofSatin: RougeAnglesOfSatin: Literally, in the title of the story, and the atrocious spelling doesn't get better.
20th May '13 2:40:09 PM DynamicDragon
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7th May '13 6:22:54 PM MikuruFan
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* BadassDecay: An entire cast of [[OneManArmy super-human fighters]] get their asses handed to them ''repeatedly'' by mooks, or forget to fight altogether.



* UnintentionallySympathetic: In the original game, EvilGenius Hojo is reviled because he's profoundly, insanely evil and creepy. In the fanfic, the author fails to show the evil or creepiness, but keeps the hatred, making Hojo a DesignatedMonkey or IneffectualSympatheticVillain.

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* UnintentionallySympathetic: In the original game, EvilGenius Hojo is reviled because he's profoundly, insanely evil and creepy. In the fanfic, the author fails to show the evil or creepiness, but keeps the hatred, making Hojo a DesignatedMonkey or IneffectualSympatheticVillain.UnfortunateNames: Anal.
27th Jan '13 2:50:56 PM nombretomado
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The story is most notorious for the moment when, not content with her OC's personal tragedy quotient, the author blatantly plagiarized one of the more famous and tragic scenes from Crisis Core, [[spoiler: Zack's HeroicSacrifice death on the cliffs outside Midgar]], making it about Anal and her brother [[StarWars Anakin]], instead.

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The story is most notorious for the moment when, not content with her OC's personal tragedy quotient, the author blatantly plagiarized one of the more famous and tragic scenes from Crisis Core, [[spoiler: Zack's HeroicSacrifice death on the cliffs outside Midgar]], making it about Anal and her brother [[StarWars [[Franchise/StarWars Anakin]], instead.
22nd Oct '12 1:20:05 AM Telcontar
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''A Angle Is With Us'' is a VideoGame/FinalFantasyVII Fanfic that exemplifies {{MarySue}}ness at its zenith, with a half-hearted plot and frail-yet-lovely protagonist that reads like a checklist of quintessential Suefic traits.

The plucky [[ImprobableAge 16-year-old elite military operative]], with the [[CommonMarySueTraits angelic beauty and singing voice]], is assigned to help the main characters from CrisisCore attack a site of [[FacelessGoons Dark Soldiers]] outside of town, but once there, she is confronted by a Dark Soldier who seems to know more about her backstory than we, the audience, ever will. As they begin to fight, she casts a spell and ''another'' beautifully-dressed angelic form [[StarfishCharacter appears to help her]], but the original teenage girl collapses and the entire mission stops as the Crisis Core cast tenderly bears her back to their Headquarters. Once there, the resident [[EvilGenius mad scientist]] Professor Hojo takes an interest in her supernatural abilities, and the whole cast of the game rallies to defend her from his poorly-defined-but-definitely-evil schemes.

Oh, and her name is [[UnfortunateNames Anal]]. Anal the Angel, in full.

Anal the Angel spends most of her own story [[IllGirl unconscious or incapacitated in some way]], and her presence is guaranteed to stop the plot dead in its tracks as the rest of the cast [[SympatheticSue flocks attentively]] around her weeping [[BeautyIsNeverTarnished (but still lovely!)]] form -- even in the middle of a fight scene. The story's main plot is amusingly hard to follow, being fraught with forgotten subplots, character confusion, massive timeskips (hours to weeks) whenever the OC couldn't take the spotlight, and interludes of Anal and her friends going shopping or gossiping about the Bishonen heroes they like. Early allusions to a possible backstory and antagonist gradually peter out, in favour of scene after scene wherein the game's original BadassCrew cast stands around admiring Anal's wonderfulness, helping her to develop her [[NewPowersAsThePlotDemands angelic powers]], and constantly smiling.

The story is most notorious for the moment when, not content with her OC's personal tragedy quotient, the author blatantly plagiarized one of the more famous and tragic scenes from Crisis Core, [[spoiler: Zack's HeroicSacrifice death on the cliffs outside Midgar]], making it about Anal and her brother [[StarWars Anakin]], instead.

The story can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4567976/1/A_bAngle_b_is_with_us here.]]

This work contains examples of:
* BadassDecay: An entire cast of [[OneManArmy super-human fighters]] get their asses handed to them ''repeatedly'' by mooks, or forget to fight altogether.
* CaptainObvious: Most of the characters get promoted to this rank at some point:
** "There is a bed over there!"
* ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve: At one point, Anal's telepathic alter-ego informs Angeal that Anal will come out of her coma if Angeal believes in her.
* CopycatSue: Two of the minor OC's are female versions of Sephiroth and Genesis, right down to their [[CommonMarySueTraits identical swords]], and while the MarySue doesn't physically resemble Angeal, her name (eventually) does (see Spell My Name With An S, below).
* CostumePorn: Even the canonical characters' standard uniforms get this treatment.
* FauxActionGirl: The protagonist is introduced as a 2nd-class Soldier (an incredibly powerful fighter and trained operative), but is never depicted holding a weapon, and does nothing in any battle situation but collapse and have to be carried off by the real fighters.
* ForgottenPhlebotinum: Surprisingly averted, exactly once -- during one of the ''many'' "Anal is somehow injured and dying" scenes, Zack performs a high-level Cure spell on an injured comrade. The rest of the time, the whole cast completely forgets about using materia, or even their ''swords.''
* HowDoIUsedTense: "'How Long till Hollander came!' Genesis Shout out of boring.
* ImprobableAge: Anal is regressed from 23 to 16, as a result of her supernatural alter-ego being injured.
* RougeAnglesofSatin: Literally, in the title of the story, and the atrocious spelling doesn't get better.
** "Her tempter is hot. I think she don't have a fever."
** "Hojo look at him with angry in his black and coldness eyes."
** "Few mints later." (used every time the author skips past an action sequence to the bloody aftermath)
* SpellMyNameWithAnS: In the first two chapters, the main character's name is given as "Anal," but apparently someone told the author what this meant, and the name mutated through "Anile" and "Angly" before settling on "Anglia."
* TheChosenOne: Though what she's chosen for, we never know.
* UnintentionallySympathetic: In the original game, EvilGenius Hojo is reviled because he's profoundly, insanely evil and creepy. In the fanfic, the author fails to show the evil or creepiness, but keeps the hatred, making Hojo a DesignatedMonkey or IneffectualSympatheticVillain.
* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse? Anal's two CopycatSue sidekicks, numerous supporting OCs, and even the villain just kind of disappear by the TastesLikeDiabetes ending.
** Anal's alter-ago is also never explained or heard from again. Was she a StarfishCharacter? A DoubleConsciousness? SplitPersonality? Was Anal just hearing voices? The world may never know.
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