History FanFic / WhiteDevilOfTheMoon

7th Dec '17 6:18:28 PM SithkingZero
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** The concept of reincarnated lovers is taken to task as well. Since Princess Serenity and Nanoha are completely different people, Nanoha and Mamouru have practically no chemistry, [[spoiler: and Nanoha gets together with Fate anyway]].

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** The concept of reincarnated lovers is taken to task as well. Since Princess Serenity and Nanoha are completely different people, Nanoha and Mamouru have practically no chemistry, [[spoiler: and Nanoha gets together with Fate anyway]]. Worse, Nanoha actually feels horrified at the thought that her past life is influencing her in ways she cannot control.



** Luna and the Senshi (excluding [[TheLeader Venus]] and [[TheSmartGirl Mercury]]) make a number of bad decisions for the sake of the early conflict. These include attacking first and refusing to explain themselves later. Artemis {{Lampshades}} this when he comments that Luna seems to be unable to recognize that her old authority no longer exists. Also, they have no idea that the TSAB exists so they have a different perspective.

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** Luna and the Senshi (excluding [[TheLeader Venus]] and [[TheSmartGirl Mercury]]) make a number of bad decisions for the sake of the early conflict. These include attacking first and refusing to explain themselves later. Artemis {{Lampshades}} this when he comments This is justified by ''both'' sides completely misinterpreting the initial communications, with Fate thinking that Luna seems to be unable to recognize is a broken familiar and Luna thinking that her old authority no longer exists. Also, they have no idea that the TSAB exists so they have Fate is a different perspective.Dark Magical Girl.


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* InnocentlyInsensitive: During the visit to the Moon Kingdom, Yuuno gushes about how amazing it is that all the bodies are so well preserved... until Makoto points out that the only reason he thinks that is because he doesn't recognize anyone, which the Senshi all do.
20th Nov '17 1:24:31 AM Cryoclaste
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-->"I'm sorry," Sailor Jupiter said, "[[SuperMarioBrothers But the princess is in another castle.]]"

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-->"I'm sorry," Sailor Jupiter said, "[[SuperMarioBrothers "[[Franchise/SuperMarioBrothers But the princess is in another castle.]]"
14th Nov '17 3:26:28 PM Jgamer
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** This, along with PoorCommunicationKills, drives the first part of the story. Luna attempts to get into contact with Nanoha through Fate, but doesn't bother to explain anything aside from the fact that she wants to talk with Nanoha, since she's used to having the authority to request such things with no questions asked. Thus, Fate just assumes that it's just unwanted trouble for the recovering Nanoha that can be passed to the [=TSAB=] and that Luna is a nutcase when she gets more persistent and still doesn't give her a coherent explanation.
1st Nov '17 8:07:43 AM infernape612
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* RealityEnsues: Discussed. Nanoha points out that several things could have gone horribly wrong during Princess Serenity's constant gallivanting to Earth to visit Endymion. She could have been assassinated by her enemies, or Endymion could have taken advantage of her to turn her into a puppet queen, and the fact that reality did not ensue is no excuse.
21st Oct '17 5:50:41 PM naal2
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* StrawCharacter: ''Luna.'' She has not only been hit hard with the {{Flanderization}} stick, (see {{Flanderization}} and DiscoDan) for more information) but her main role in this story seems to help make the main cast of ''Sailor Moon'' look bad while the main cast of ''Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha'' look good.
26th Aug '17 11:15:45 PM infernape612
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** The fact that Mars could sense the Jewel Seeds when they were activated during MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha. [[spoiler: After [[BigBad Queen]] [[Anime/SailorMoon Beryl]] stole them from [[PersonOfMassDestruction Hayate]], this ability was used to track down the location of her SupervillainLair.]]

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** The fact that Mars could sense the Jewel Seeds when they were activated during MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha.''Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha''. [[spoiler: After [[BigBad Queen]] [[Anime/SailorMoon Beryl]] stole them from [[PersonOfMassDestruction Hayate]], this ability was used to track down the location of her SupervillainLair.]]



** [[spoiler:[[SuperMode Lunar Excellion]] Nanoha vs [[BiggerBad Metallia]]. [[{{HSQ}} One Attack]]: [[CombinedEnergyAttack Moonlight]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Breaker]].]]

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** [[spoiler:[[SuperMode Lunar Excellion]] Nanoha vs [[BiggerBad [[GreaterScopeVillain Metallia]]. [[{{HSQ}} One Attack]]: [[CombinedEnergyAttack Moonlight]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Breaker]].]]



* {{Foil}}:Princess Serenity and Nanoha are two sides of the same coin. The former neglected her royal duties for romance and because of this is unprepared to deal with a crisis or the day-to-day business of ruling. The later took her responsibilities so seriously she almost killed herself with exhaustion and neglected her relationships so much she had no idea her brother was getting married.

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* {{Foil}}:Princess {{Foil}}: Princess Serenity and Nanoha are two sides of the same coin. The former neglected her royal duties for romance and because of this is unprepared to deal with a crisis or the day-to-day business of ruling. The later took her responsibilities so seriously she almost killed herself with exhaustion and neglected her relationships so much she had no idea her brother was getting married.



* {{Flanderization}}: Luna's character has been stripped down to her loyalty to the Moon Kingdom. See the entry for DiscoDan; that's more or less ''her entire purpose'' in the story.



* {{Flanderization}}: Luna's character has been stripped down to her loyalty to the Moon Kingdom. See the entry for DiscoDan; that's more or less ''her entire purpose'' in the story.



* KilledMidSentence: [[spoiler:Kunzite, by Venus]]

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* KilledMidSentence: [[spoiler:Kunzite, by Venus]]Venus.]]



* PetTheDog: [[spoiler:After Precia successfully revives Alicia, she settles down on Earth and spends her time just trying to be a good mother to her. She only returns to her villainous ways after Alicia begins to relapse.]]



-->'''Fate''': "Leave. Nanoha. Alone."
-->'''Nanoha''': "Don't call me that! [[IHatePastMe That selfish, irresponsible, cowardly child is not me]]! I'm Nanoha, not Serenity! Na. No. Ha!"
-->'''Nanoha''': "And they will. Not. Hurt. Anyone. Else."

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-->'''Fate''': "Leave.Leave. Nanoha. Alone."
-->'''Nanoha''': "Don't
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'''Nanoha''': Don't
call me that! [[IHatePastMe That selfish, irresponsible, cowardly child is not me]]! I'm Nanoha, not Serenity! Na. No. Ha!"
-->'''Nanoha''': "And
Ha!\\
'''Nanoha''': And
they will. Not. Hurt. Anyone. Else."



--> In Sailor Moon, it is implied that because the Earth Prince and Moon Princess were lovers in their previous lives, they are destined to be lovers again in their current ones. I don't find that plausible. I find the interpretation presented in the Deverry novels by Katherine Kerr to be more likely. In those stories, two people with a strong connection to each other (positive or negative) in one life will be inclined to similar feelings if they meet in another life, but they aren't bound to it. Reincarnated lovers will be inclined to like each other when they meet, making it easier for them to become lovers again, and reincarnated enemies will be inclined to dislike each other, making it easier for them to find a new reason to fight in the current life, but these are not set in stone. Reincarnated enemies can resolve their differences. Reincarnated lovers can end up parting ways. One's previous lives might influence the person they become, but it doesn't define them absolutely. Nanoha is not Princess Serenity. Mamoru is not Prince Endymion.

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--> ---> In Sailor Moon, it is implied that because the Earth Prince and Moon Princess were lovers in their previous lives, they are destined to be lovers again in their current ones. I don't find that plausible. I find the interpretation presented in the Deverry novels by Katherine Kerr to be more likely. In those stories, two people with a strong connection to each other (positive or negative) in one life will be inclined to similar feelings if they meet in another life, but they aren't bound to it. Reincarnated lovers will be inclined to like each other when they meet, making it easier for them to become lovers again, and reincarnated enemies will be inclined to dislike each other, making it easier for them to find a new reason to fight in the current life, but these are not set in stone. Reincarnated enemies can resolve their differences. Reincarnated lovers can end up parting ways. One's previous lives might influence the person they become, but it doesn't define them absolutely. Nanoha is not Princess Serenity. Mamoru is not Prince Endymion.



** If Beryl wasn't so determined to kill Nanoha, it's ''highly'' likely that Nanoha and Fate would still be suspicious of the Sailor Senshi. To make this more damning of her, she already had an overwhelming advantage at that point: (She would have simply won by attrition and lack of morale from the senshi, Nanoha would have left the planet after that wedding, and the TSAB would have never known about this war until she already won and that is '''if''' they discovered the Dark Kingdom [[RememberedTooLate at a point where it is too late to stop her]]) [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Way to go, Beryl...]] [[spoiler:She [[VillainousBSOD regretted this bitterly]] when Miyuki pointed both this and the fact that she had no interest in Endymion at all out to her.]]

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** If Beryl wasn't so determined to kill Nanoha, it's ''highly'' likely that Nanoha and Fate would still be suspicious of the Sailor Senshi. To make this more damning of her, damning, she already had an overwhelming advantage at that point: (She she would have simply won by attrition and lack of morale from the senshi, Nanoha would have left the planet after that wedding, and the TSAB would have never known about this war until she already won won, and that is '''if''' they discovered the Dark Kingdom [[RememberedTooLate at a point where long after it is was too late to stop her]]) her]]! [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Way to go, Beryl...]] [[spoiler:She [[VillainousBSOD regretted regrets this bitterly]] when Miyuki pointed points both this and the fact that she had no interest in Endymion at all out to her.]]



* {{Wild Card}}s: [[spoiler:[[EvilMatriarch Precia]] and [[MadScientistsBeautifulDaughter Alicia Testarossa]]. There is a MeleeATrois between Sailor Mars, [[EvilVersusEvil Precia Testarossa, and Zoicite]].]]

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* {{Wild Card}}s: WildCard: [[spoiler:[[EvilMatriarch Precia]] and [[MadScientistsBeautifulDaughter Alicia Testarossa]]. There is a MeleeATrois between Sailor Mars, [[EvilVersusEvil Precia Testarossa, and Zoicite]].]]



** Luna takes one look at Fate's barrier jacket -- black color scheme, metal gauntlets, ominous-looking cape, etc etc -- and immediately decides that Fate is evil. This would be [[JustifiedTrope True]] in ''Anime/SailorMoon'' but it's [[DarkIsNotEvil False]] in LyricalNanoha.

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** Luna takes one look at Fate's barrier jacket -- black color scheme, metal gauntlets, ominous-looking cape, etc etc -- and immediately decides that Fate is evil. This would be [[JustifiedTrope True]] in ''Anime/SailorMoon'' but it's [[DarkIsNotEvil False]] in LyricalNanoha.''Franchise/LyricalNanoha''.



* YourPrincessIsInAnotherCastle: The heroes [[spoiler:pull this on Nephrite. Jupiter even uses those exact words. Unfortunately, he still managed to take Miyuki hostage.]]

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* YourPrincessIsInAnotherCastle: The heroes [[spoiler:pull this on Nephrite. Jupiter even uses those exact words. Unfortunately, he still managed manages to take Miyuki hostage.]]
15th Jun '17 12:57:05 PM ChaoticNovelist
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* UndyingLoyalty: Lots of Nanoha's friends have this for here but special mention goes to Vita. Fate theorizes two possible outcomes for when the TSAB hears about the situation on Earth: 1.) Hayate is granted premission to take her knights to Earth and 2.) Hayate is not granted premission and Vita takes time off for a vacation on Earth.

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* UndyingLoyalty: Lots of Nanoha's friends have this for here her but special mention goes to Vita. Fate theorizes two possible outcomes for when the TSAB hears about the situation on Earth: 1.) Hayate is granted premission to take her knights to Earth and 2.) Hayate is not granted premission and Vita takes time off for a vacation on Earth.



** If Beryl wasn't so determined to kill Nanoha, it's ''highly'' likely that Nanoha and Fate would still be suspicious of the Sailor Senshi. To make this more damning of her, she already had an overwhelming advantage at that point: (She would have simply won by attrition and lack of moral from the senshi, Nanoha would have left the planet after that wedding, and the TSAB would have never known about this war until she already won and that is '''if''' they discovered the Dark Kingdom [[RememberedTooLate at a point where it is too late to stop her]]) [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Way to go, Beryl...]] [[spoiler:She [[VillainousBSOD regretted this bitterly]] when Miyuki pointed both this and the fact that she had no interest in Endymion at all out to her.]]

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** If Beryl wasn't so determined to kill Nanoha, it's ''highly'' likely that Nanoha and Fate would still be suspicious of the Sailor Senshi. To make this more damning of her, she already had an overwhelming advantage at that point: (She would have simply won by attrition and lack of moral morale from the senshi, Nanoha would have left the planet after that wedding, and the TSAB would have never known about this war until she already won and that is '''if''' they discovered the Dark Kingdom [[RememberedTooLate at a point where it is too late to stop her]]) [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Way to go, Beryl...]] [[spoiler:She [[VillainousBSOD regretted this bitterly]] when Miyuki pointed both this and the fact that she had no interest in Endymion at all out to her.]]
6th Apr '17 1:23:18 PM BcUltra1990
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** If Beryl wasn't so determined to kill Nanoha, it's ''highly'' likely that Nanoha and Fate would still be suspicious of the Sailor Senshi. [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Way to go, Beryl...]] [[spoiler:She [[VillainousBSOD regretted this bitterly]] when Miyuki pointed both this and the fact that she had no interest in Endymion at all out to her.]]

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** If Beryl wasn't so determined to kill Nanoha, it's ''highly'' likely that Nanoha and Fate would still be suspicious of the Sailor Senshi. To make this more damning of her, she already had an overwhelming advantage at that point: (She would have simply won by attrition and lack of moral from the senshi, Nanoha would have left the planet after that wedding, and the TSAB would have never known about this war until she already won and that is '''if''' they discovered the Dark Kingdom [[RememberedTooLate at a point where it is too late to stop her]]) [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Way to go, Beryl...]] [[spoiler:She [[VillainousBSOD regretted this bitterly]] when Miyuki pointed both this and the fact that she had no interest in Endymion at all out to her.]]
7th Feb '17 4:43:33 PM Bissek
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-->Ice wasn't a very visually impressive weapon. It didn't have the obviously destructive power of [[KillItWithFire]] or [[ShockAndAwe lightning]]. But that didn't make it harmless. Regular patterns of freezing and thawing could eventually tear apart even the finest construction. A broken piece of ice could cut like a knife. And the destruction caused by a hailstorm could be just as devastating as a wildfire in its own way, damaging buildings and vehicles, ruining crops in some cases even knocking down trees. If the stones were large enough or coming down heavily enough, they could even kill.

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-->Ice wasn't a very visually impressive weapon. It didn't have the obviously destructive power of [[KillItWithFire]] [[KillItWithFire fire]] or [[ShockAndAwe lightning]]. But that didn't make it harmless. Regular patterns of freezing and thawing could eventually tear apart even the finest construction. A broken piece of ice could cut like a knife. And the destruction caused by a hailstorm could be just as devastating as a wildfire in its own way, damaging buildings and vehicles, ruining crops in some cases even knocking down trees. If the stones were large enough or coming down heavily enough, they could even kill.
19th Dec '16 10:51:49 PM Gamermaster
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* KillItWithIce: Mercury does this very thoroughly when she faces [[spoiler:Zoicite. First she locks him inside a large razor-edged fractal ice sculpture, then while he's trying to get out, she drops a car-sized hailstone on his head.]]

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* KillItWithIce: Mercury does this very thoroughly when she faces [[spoiler:Zoicite. First she locks him inside a large razor-edged fractal ice sculpture, then while he's trying to get out, she drops a car-sized hailstone on his head.]]]] The narration devotes an entire paragraph describing ''exactly'' how deadly ice can be.
-->Ice wasn't a very visually impressive weapon. It didn't have the obviously destructive power of [[KillItWithFire]] or [[ShockAndAwe lightning]]. But that didn't make it harmless. Regular patterns of freezing and thawing could eventually tear apart even the finest construction. A broken piece of ice could cut like a knife. And the destruction caused by a hailstorm could be just as devastating as a wildfire in its own way, damaging buildings and vehicles, ruining crops in some cases even knocking down trees. If the stones were large enough or coming down heavily enough, they could even kill.



** Goes to OhCrap levels when Shamal gets a scan of Hotaru's Linker Core. [[ApocalypseMaiden Given who she is]], this is not surprising.

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** Goes to OhCrap levels when Shamal gets a scan of Hotaru's Linker Core.Core and realizes that she's ''SSS-Rank''. [[ApocalypseMaiden Given who she is]], this is not surprising.
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