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* ForWantOfANail: Chrysalis doesn't imprison Twilight in the caverns, instead leaving her in despair.
* PointOfDivergence: Chrysalis doesn't imprison Twilight in the caverns, instead leaving her in despair.
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* UnreliableNarrator: The author is quick to admit to this about the perspective from the various characters.
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* UnreliableNarrator: The author is quick to admit to this about the perspective from the various characters.characters.
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Words and actions can sometimes hurt more than we know, sowing betrayal and hatred where friendship and innocence lies. A single thoughtless action can be a tipping point, one fallen domino setting off hundreds. Look back, and answer me.
What have you done?
What have you done?
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Words and actions can sometimes hurt more than we know, sowing betrayal and hatred where friendship and innocence lies. A single thoughtless action can be a tipping point, one fallen domino setting off hundreds. Look back, and answer me.
me. What have you done?
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* SplitPersonality: Pinkie's mind is divided between her normal cheery self, and Pinkamena who is was created to carry her negative feelings. Unlike most portrayals of split personalities, Pinkamena is not evil, just pretty rough, and reminds Pinkie that her job is to bring joy, and helps her realize (not-to-nicely) how broken Twilight is.
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* SplitPersonality: Pinkie's mind is divided between her normal cheery self, and Pinkamena who is was created to carry her negative feelings. Unlike most portrayals of split personalities, Pinkamena is not evil, just pretty rough, and reminds Pinkie that her job is to bring joy, and helps her realize (not-to-nicely) (not-too-nicely) how broken Twilight is.
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-->'''Princess Celestia''': Twilight Velvet. Your daughter is fine. I assure you. I know my student just as well as you know your daughter and we both know that she’s-\\
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-->'''Princess Celestia''': Twilight Velvet. Your daughter is fine. I assure you. I know my student just as well as you know your daughter and we both know that she’s-\\she's-\\
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'''Twilight Velvet''': I do ever so apologize, Princess, but I must correct you on one little thing. Twilight may be your student, but she is my daughter. And she will always be my daughter. I know Twilight. I’ve known her for far longer than you have, and I know her far better than you ever can, because there are things she would never bare to you. I know her pain, I know her fears, things that you could never understand, because you are a goddess. A being above us. And I respect that. I honor you as my ruler, but I will never honor you as my sister, or as a fellow mother. Now, '''move aside''', so I can save the mare that you helped break.
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'''Twilight Velvet''': I do ever so apologize, Princess, but I must correct you on one little thing. Twilight may be your student, but she is my daughter. And she will always be my daughter. I know Twilight. I’ve I've known her for far longer than you have, and I know her far better than you ever can, because there are things she would never bare to you. I know her pain, I know her fears, things that you could never understand, because you are a goddess. A being above us. And I respect that. I honor you as my ruler, but I will never honor you as my sister, or as a fellow mother. Now, '''move aside''', so I can save the mare that you helped break.
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* DeadFic: Seeing as the last update was from 2014, and the author hasn't even been on their account since 2016, this fic sadly seems to be dead in the water.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/149998/what-have-you-done What Have You Done]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' Fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/cloudedguardian Clouded Guardian]]. It is an AlternateUniverseFic surrounding the events of A Canterlot Wedding, so beware spoilers for that episode. It imagines what would happen if Queen Chrysalis had not sent Twilight to the caves after Twilight was rebuked by her friends and family. It is presently completed.
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* HeroicBSOD: After her friends leave, Twilight is described as feeling hollow and empty.
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** After her friends leave, Twilight is described as feeling hollow and empty.
** After her friends leave, Twilight is described as feeling hollow and empty.
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* JerkassRealization: Pinkie gets this (with the help of [[SplitPersonality Pinkamena]]) when she realizes that Twilight's never been in a fight with her friends and family, and doesn't know ''how'' to deal with it. But by the time she rushes back to the throne rooms, Twilight already left.
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* JerkassRealization: Pinkie gets this (with the help of [[SplitPersonality Pinkamena]]) when she realizes that Twilight's never been in a fight with her friends and family, and doesn't know ''how'' to deal with it. But by the time she rushes back to the throne rooms, [[YouAreTooLate Twilight already left.]]
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---> '''Princess Celestia''': “Twilight Velvet. Your daughter is fine. I assure you. I know my student just as well as you know your daughter and we both know that she’s-“
---> '''Twilight Velvet''': “Most definitely '''not''' fine.”
---> '''Twilight Velvet''': “I do ever so apologize, Princess, but I must correct you on one little thing. Twilight may be your student, but she is my daughter. And she will always be my daughter. I know Twilight. I’ve known her for far longer than you have, and I know her far better than you ever can, because there are things she would never bare to you. I know her pain, I know her fears, things that you could never understand, because you are a goddess. A being above us. And I respect that. I honor you as my ruler, but I will never honor you as my sister, or as a fellow mother. Now, '''move aside''', so I can save the mare that you helped break.”
---> '''Twilight Velvet''': “Most definitely '''not''' fine.”
---> '''Twilight Velvet''': “I do ever so apologize, Princess, but I must correct you on one little thing. Twilight may be your student, but she is my daughter. And she will always be my daughter. I know Twilight. I’ve known her for far longer than you have, and I know her far better than you ever can, because there are things she would never bare to you. I know her pain, I know her fears, things that you could never understand, because you are a goddess. A being above us. And I respect that. I honor you as my ruler, but I will never honor you as my sister, or as a fellow mother. Now, '''move aside''', so I can save the mare that you helped break.”
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler:The Elements of Harmony call out their bearers as unworthy of them, though unfortunately(?) we only hear Loyalty's in full.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler:The The Mane 5 (sans Twilight) get this from [[spoiler:their own Elements of Harmony call out their bearers Harmony]], stating that [[WhatTheHellHero how they treated Twilight]] [[spoiler:means they are no longer worthy as unworthy of them, though unfortunately(?) we bearers]]. Unfortunately(?), only hear Loyalty's the part [[spoiler:from Loyalty to Rainbow Dash]] is given in full.]]
