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* SarcasticDevotee: You know how Gin in canon is very loyal to and almost reverential of Aizen? Yeah, not so much here.
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* SarcasticDevotee: You know how Gin in canon is very loyal to and almost reverential of Aizen? Aizen until the Deicide Arc? Yeah, not so much here.
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* DesignatedHero: [[spoiler: [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy Aizen,]] [[EvilPlot because he took]] [[TheHero Ichigo's]] PlotArmor [[NoFourthWall and is duping the universe]] [[HostileShowTakeover into believing that he is now, well,]] TheHero.]] [[MindScrew It's working quite well.]]
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* DesignatedHero: [[spoiler: [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy Aizen,]] [[EvilPlot because he took]] [[TheHero Ichigo's]] PlotArmor [[NoFourthWall and is duping the universe]] [[HostileShowTakeover into believing that he is now, well,]] TheHero.]] See DangerouslyGenreSavvy above. [[MindScrew It's working quite well.]]
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* DesignatedVillan: See above, and [[spoiler: for [[TheStarscream Gin]] it's really quite [[{{Irony}}ironic]].
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* DesignatedVillan: DesignatedVillain: See above, and [[spoiler: for [[TheStarscream Gin]] it's really quite [[{{Irony}}ironic]].[[{{Irony}} ironic]]]].
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* DesignatedHero: [[spoiler: [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy Aizen,]] [[EvilPlot because he took]] [[TheHero Ichigo's]] PlotArmor [[NoFourthWall and is duping the universe]] [[HostileShowTakeover into believing that he is now, well,]] TheHero.]] [[MindScrew It's working quite well.]]
* DesignatedVillan: See above, and [[spoiler: for [[TheStarscream Gin]] it's really quite [[{{Irony}}ironic]].
* DesignatedVillan: See above, and [[spoiler: for [[TheStarscream Gin]] it's really quite [[{{Irony}}ironic]].
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** Chapter 38. The level of WRONGNESS in the fight between [[spoiler: Aizen and Yamamoto]] isn't even softened by Yamamoto stating that it Makes. No. Sense. See PurpleProse for details.
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* PurpleProse: With chapter 38, in [[spoiler: Aizen's [[MindScrew glorious defeat of Yamamoto]]]], this abounds relentlessly.
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* TheWorfEffect: Invoked. [[spoiler: Hitsugaya realizes that with Aizen having stolen the hero's role, somebody declaring themself the new BigBad would make them able to stomp Aizen's side because the hero always jobs to the new villain at first.]]
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** touch Soi-Fons stuffed cat, i dare you
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** It works a second time in Chapter 38. Spectacularly and hilariously for [[spoiler: Aizen]].
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** touch Soi-Fons stuffed cat, i dare you
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* TheoryOfNarrativeCausality: [[spoiler:Aizen, in an unusual show of legitimate ingenuity and competence, steals Ichigo's "protagonism" in Chapter 37 and proceeds to beat the crap out of Soul Society with an onslought of [[InvokedTrope trope invocation]] and [[LampshadeHanging lampshade hanging]]]].
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** Yachiru gave Aizen the nickname 'Nerd'. One of the reasons he destroyed is glasses when he defected was so he would never have to hear the nickname again.
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-->'''Gin:'''Well, I'm not exactly a psychologist, but I believe that the technical explanation would be that our old friend [[spoiler: Toshiro]] has gone 'batshit insane'.insane'.
* MindScrew: Mr. Whiskerly, the evil cat hallucination that tries to break Toshiro's teeth so that he steal his sushi, calls Toshiro nuts ''after'' Toshiro knocked himself out...somehow.
* MindScrew: Mr. Whiskerly, the evil cat hallucination that tries to break Toshiro's teeth so that he steal his sushi, calls Toshiro nuts ''after'' Toshiro knocked himself out...somehow.
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* NightmareFuel: [[spoiler: The description of the PlotArmor device created by Aizen in chapter 37 is [[{{Understatement}} a little creepy]].]]
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* PlotArmor: Lampshaded [[spoiler: and ''weaponized'' by Aizen.]]
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Aizen... Just... Aizen...
** [[spoiler: Now I am the main character, and so long as I follow the narrative flow of the plot properly, there is nothing that can be done to stop me. Go ahead... fight me, kill me. [[IGotBetter I'll just come back to life three hours later]] and I'll have learned a new super-move from training in the afterlife or something. Rip my heart out, and I'll grow a new one and get a new Super Form, [[PowerMakesYourHairGrow probably with bigger hair]]. And that amazing ability to survive you all seem to have? Don't count on that anymore. The inexplicable power to live through any injury because you're needed to advance the universe's plans... you might call it a sort of barrier preventing death that would derail the proper events, a sort of [[PlotArmor 'plot armor']]... well, that's right over here now," Aizen said, gesturing at the Espada. "I mean... you must have noticed, right? What I have here is a quirky ensemble of characters with wildly varying personalities, all centered around me. All of us setting aside our differences to work together? We're the perfect central cast to fulfill the universe's plans. Let's face it, now that we have reality on our side, we're basically invincible.]]
** [[spoiler: Now I am the main character, and so long as I follow the narrative flow of the plot properly, there is nothing that can be done to stop me. Go ahead... fight me, kill me. [[IGotBetter I'll just come back to life three hours later]] and I'll have learned a new super-move from training in the afterlife or something. Rip my heart out, and I'll grow a new one and get a new Super Form, [[PowerMakesYourHairGrow probably with bigger hair]]. And that amazing ability to survive you all seem to have? Don't count on that anymore. The inexplicable power to live through any injury because you're needed to advance the universe's plans... you might call it a sort of barrier preventing death that would derail the proper events, a sort of [[PlotArmor 'plot armor']]... well, that's right over here now," Aizen said, gesturing at the Espada. "I mean... you must have noticed, right? What I have here is a quirky ensemble of characters with wildly varying personalities, all centered around me. All of us setting aside our differences to work together? We're the perfect central cast to fulfill the universe's plans. Let's face it, now that we have reality on our side, we're basically invincible.]]
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* InsaneTrollLogic: [[CloudCuckooLander Yachiru]], [[ConflictBall Old Man Genocide]], [[PowerBornOfMadness Psycho Toshiro]], [[GameBreaker Shunsui's]] [[{{Calvinball}} Shikai]], [[XanatosRoulette and just about anything]] [[ComplexityAddiction involving]] [[LargeHam Aizen]].
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** Toshiro has Squad 11 move into his barracks, turn it upside down, and then burn it to the ground while he tries (and fails) to find some way to get rid of them while [[{{Understatement}} more]] [[HilarityEnsues insanity ensues.]] [[spoiler: He then descends into madness to the point that he challenges all of Las Noches, gets chained up, nearly breaks all of his teeth [[ItMakesSenseInContext trying to gnaw his way out]], snaps out of it only to descend into sanity, almost win before Ichigo shows up, snap again, face ANOTHER rebellion, deal with the return of Aizen... and last we've seen him Tosen has smacked him into a wall.]]
** Ukitake somehow [[spoiler: gets blamed for a drunkie rebellion, is thrown in prison twice, is forced to wear women's clothes, is hung upside down and nearly killed by Soi Fon's rebellion, and eventually becomes a DeathSeeker.]]
** Aizen somehow finds himself [[spoiler: facing a batshit insane Toshiro, having said psycho nearly kill him and the Espada twice before they get him restrained, is driven halfway insane by Yachiru before getting run over by an airborne Bawa Bawa, falls through every floor of Las Noches, is chewed on by a Menos, gets knocked back down there by Gin, and then has his "I planned all of this speech" interrupted by everyone who doesn't buy it. Given how he's now riding PlotArmor, his defeat will hopefully be [[BeyondTheImpossible even worse]].]]
** Soi Fon and Gin also get these; the former when she faces Shunsui's [[GameBreaker Shikai]] [[{{Calvinball}} of Doom]], and the latter... whenever Aizen [[ComplexityAddiction opens his mouth]]. Given that Gin is at times Las Noches' DeadpanSnarker OnlySaneMan, [[spoiler: the [[HeelFaceTurn outcome]] [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder is]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} inevitable]].]]
** Toshiro has Squad 11 move into his barracks, turn it upside down, and then burn it to the ground while he tries (and fails) to find some way to get rid of them while [[{{Understatement}} more]] [[HilarityEnsues insanity ensues.]] [[spoiler: He then descends into madness to the point that he challenges all of Las Noches, gets chained up, nearly breaks all of his teeth [[ItMakesSenseInContext trying to gnaw his way out]], snaps out of it only to descend into sanity, almost win before Ichigo shows up, snap again, face ANOTHER rebellion, deal with the return of Aizen... and last we've seen him Tosen has smacked him into a wall.]]
** Ukitake somehow [[spoiler: gets blamed for a drunkie rebellion, is thrown in prison twice, is forced to wear women's clothes, is hung upside down and nearly killed by Soi Fon's rebellion, and eventually becomes a DeathSeeker.]]
** Aizen somehow finds himself [[spoiler: facing a batshit insane Toshiro, having said psycho nearly kill him and the Espada twice before they get him restrained, is driven halfway insane by Yachiru before getting run over by an airborne Bawa Bawa, falls through every floor of Las Noches, is chewed on by a Menos, gets knocked back down there by Gin, and then has his "I planned all of this speech" interrupted by everyone who doesn't buy it. Given how he's now riding PlotArmor, his defeat will hopefully be [[BeyondTheImpossible even worse]].]]
** Soi Fon and Gin also get these; the former when she faces Shunsui's [[GameBreaker Shikai]] [[{{Calvinball}} of Doom]], and the latter... whenever Aizen [[ComplexityAddiction opens his mouth]]. Given that Gin is at times Las Noches' DeadpanSnarker OnlySaneMan, [[spoiler: the [[HeelFaceTurn outcome]] [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder is]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} inevitable]].]]
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** More notably in chapter 37, when [[spoiler: [[TheStarscream Gin]] finally gets so sick of Aizen's BS that he re-defects to Soul Society. Complete with [[DidYouJustFlipOffCthulu "Screw you, Sosuke,"]] it is quite possibly [[BetterThanCanon the most epic version]] of Gin's [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder expected betrayal]].]]
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* HostileShowTakeover: [[spoiler: In chapter 37 Aizen forcibly steals Ichigo's ''main character status'', [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy thereby granting him the powers of plot.]]]]
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** How is Soi Fon finally defeat. The one thing that can beat ThePowerOfLove: [[spoiler: the power of MOM.]]
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** How is Soi Fon finally defeat. defeated? The one thing that can beat ThePowerOfLove: [[spoiler: the power of MOM.MOM. It's no wonder everyone is terrified of Unohana.]]
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** How is Soi Fon finally defeat. The one thing that can beat ThePowerOfLove: [[spoiler: the power of MOM.]]
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*ThePowerOfLove: This is what [[spoiler:Soi Fon]] said helped [[spoiler: her]] conquer the Seireitei for [[spoiler:Yoruichi]]
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**[[spoiler: And Ukitake in Chapter 34]]
-->'''[[spoiler: Ukitake:''' "Go on. Do it. You've been talking about it for hours, so man up and finish me off. Come on, I dare ya, bitch." Ukitake said. "I. Want. It. To. End."]]
-->'''[[spoiler: Ukitake:''' "Go on. Do it. You've been talking about it for hours, so man up and finish me off. Come on, I dare ya, bitch." Ukitake said. "I. Want. It. To. End."]]
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* ThisIsForEmphasisBitch: [[spoiler: Toshiro]] in Chapter 32. [[supersecretspoiler: On account of the aformentioned Hitsu-playa]]
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-->'''[[spoiler:Toshiro]]'''[[spoiler: "That's right. You are never, ever allowed to say it. And don't you ever forget that fact. Bitch." Hitsugaya said, tossing Ulquiorra aside like, ironically enough, trash.]]
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-->'''[[spoiler:Toshiro]]'''[[spoiler: "That's right. You are never, ever allowed to say it. And don't you ever forget that fact. Bitch." Hitsugaya said, tossing Ulquiorra aside like, ironically enough, trash.]]
-->'''[[spoiler:Toshiro]]'''[[spoiler: "That's right. You are never, ever allowed to say it. And don't you ever forget that fact. Bitch." Hitsugaya said, tossing Ulquiorra aside like, ironically enough, trash.]]
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**[[TwoWords Chapter 36]]. Parodied to hell on a horse like a bat, then back out with a pogo stick.
