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* {{Troll}}: Emma in a MASSIVE one to Justicar Amadeus:
** "Are you the [[spoiler: Emperor?]] I could swear that you are... well, perhaps a previous incarnation?"
*** "No. I am not the [[spoiler: Emperor.]]"
**** He sighed. So it wasn't true. Somehow, the Knight must have bee-
***** "Yet."
** "Are you the [[spoiler: Emperor?]] I could swear that you are... well, perhaps a previous incarnation?"
*** "No. I am not the [[spoiler: Emperor.]]"
**** He sighed. So it wasn't true. Somehow, the Knight must have bee-
***** "Yet."
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* {{Troll}}: {{Troll}}ing: Emma in likes to do this. In a MASSIVE one to Justicar Amadeus:
** "Are -->'''Amadeus''': Are you the [[spoiler: Emperor?]] I could swear that you are... well, perhaps a previous incarnation?"
*** "No.incarnation?\\
'''Emma''': No. I am not the [[spoiler: Emperor.]]"
****]]\\
He sighed. So it wasn't true. Somehow, the Knight must havebee-
***** "Yet."bee-\\
-->'''Emma''': Yet.
*** "No.
'''Emma''': No. I am not the [[spoiler: Emperor.
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He sighed. So it wasn't true. Somehow, the Knight must have
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-->'''Emma''': Yet.
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** Not to mention her [[spoiler: teasing/flirting with Michael. She might be the Immortal God-Emperor of Mankind, but in the current era she inhabits the body of an ''eleven'' year old girl. Cue jokes about being Michael's kid in the next life, his future wife etc...]]
*** Basically, Trolling is the primary way the Emperor has kept his Humanity over the past (and presumably future) Milennia.
*** Basically, Trolling is the primary way the Emperor has kept his Humanity over the past (and presumably future) Milennia.
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** Not to mention There's also her [[spoiler: teasing/flirting with Michael. She might be the Immortal God-Emperor of Mankind, but in the current era she inhabits the body of an ''eleven'' year old girl. Cue jokes about being Michael's kid in the next life, his future wife etc...]]
*** Basically, Trolling is the primary way the Emperor has kept his Humanity over the past (and presumably future) Milennia.]]
*** Basically, Trolling is the primary way the Emperor has kept his Humanity over the past (and presumably future) Milennia.
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*** Basically, Trolling is the primary way the Emperor has kept his Humanity over the past (and presumably future) Milennia.
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* FunSize: All the minis. Also, see FridgeBrilliance above.
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* FunetikAksent: The Orks, obviously.
* FunSize: All theminis. Also, see FridgeBrilliance above.minis [[spoiler:and the Emperor as well.]]
* FunSize: All the
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Batel]], sort of, [[spoiler:since she wasn't quite a heel in the first place.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Batel]], sort of, [[spoiler:since she wasn't quite a heel in the first place.]]place]].
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* KlatchianCoffee: Literally. Michael is given some Klatchian coffee after experiencing 'Space Marine' grade alcohol, and then causes some InterfaceScrew when he stopsusingspaceslikethistoshowhthesideeffectsofthecoffee.
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* KlatchianCoffee: Literally. Michael is given some Klatchian coffee after experiencing 'Space Marine' grade Marine'-grade alcohol, and then causes some InterfaceScrew when he stopsusingspaceslikethistoshowhthesideeffectsofthecoffee.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Zara finds out about [[spoiler: loli's after Michael complains about the Emperor's trolling him like a character from a Japanese porn game. Turns out even the ''Emperor's''only found out about that stuff recently.]]
** Also: ""I DO NOT WEAR PANTIES!""
** Also: ""I DO NOT WEAR PANTIES!""
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* FridgeBrilliance:
** [[spoiler:Even the Emperor of Mankind]] is made FunSize in this setting!
** [[spoiler: Why do the 40K characters occasionally spout pop culture shout outs (particularly egregious with Porthos the Grey Knight? ''Because they are assimilating modern (ancient) society''; quirks, references and all.]]
* FunetikAksent: The Orks, obviously.
** [[spoiler:Even the Emperor of Mankind]] is made FunSize in this setting!
** [[spoiler: Why do the 40K characters occasionally spout pop culture shout outs (particularly egregious with Porthos the Grey Knight? ''Because they are assimilating modern (ancient) society''; quirks, references and all.]]
* FunetikAksent: The Orks, obviously.
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See ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' for the tropes from that universe.
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!!See ''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' for the tropes from that universe.
!!This fanfic provides examples of:
!!This fanfic provides examples of:
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
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---> [[TheRollingStones "Jane. Allow me to introduce myself. I am a woman of far sight and grace."]]
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---> [[TheRollingStones [[Music/TheRollingStones "Jane. Allow me to introduce myself. I am a woman of far sight and grace."]]
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Zara finds out about [[spoiler: loli's after Michael complains about the Emperor's trolling him like a character from a Japanese porn game. Turns out even the ''Emperor's''only found out about that stuff recently.]]
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Zara finds out about [[spoiler: loli's after Michael complains about the Emperor's trolling him like a character from a Japanese porn game. Turns out even the ''Emperor's''only found out about that stuff recently.]] ]]
** Also: ""I DO NOT WEAR PANTIES!""
** Also: ""I DO NOT WEAR PANTIES!""
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Zara finds out about [[spoiler: loli's after Michael complains about the Emperor's trolling him like a character from a Japanese porn game. Turns out even the ''Emperor's''only found out about that stuff recently.]]
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* {{Troll}}: Emma in a MASSIVE one to a Grey Knight Justicar:
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* {{Troll}}: Emma in a MASSIVE one to a Grey Knight Justicar:Justicar Amadeus:
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** Not to mention her [[spoiler: teasing/flirting with Michael. She might be the Immortal God-Emperor of Mankind, but in the current era she inhabits the body of an ''eleven'' year old girl. Cue jokes about being Michael's kid in the next life, his future wife etc...]]
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**Beautifully lampshaded in the chapter's title-[[spoiler: Deus Ex ''Psyche'']]
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* [[Troll]]: {{Troll}}: Emma in a MASSIVE one to a Grey Knight Justicar:
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* [[Troperrific]]: There's an astonishingly large amount of ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging and LeaningOnTheFourthWall for a house that almost gets burnt down with every chapter (even in the omakes). **To quote Zara: As Michael would say- "OhCrap"...
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* [[Troperrific]]: {{Troperrific}}: There's an astonishingly large amount of ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging and LeaningOnTheFourthWall for a house that almost gets burnt down with every chapter (even in the omakes). **To quote Zara: As Michael would say- "OhCrap"...
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* Yandere:
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* Yandere:{{Yandere}}:
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* Troperrific: There's an astonishingly large amount of ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging and LeaningOnTheFourthWall for a house that almost gets burnt down with every chapter (even in the omakes). **To quote Zara: As Michael would say- "OhCrap"...
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* Troperrific: [[Troll]]: Emma in a MASSIVE one to a Grey Knight Justicar:
** "Are you the [[spoiler: Emperor?]] I could swear that you are... well, perhaps a previous incarnation?"
*** "No. I am not the [[spoiler: Emperor.]]"
**** He sighed. So it wasn't true. Somehow, the Knight must have bee-
***** "Yet."
* [[Troperrific]]: There's an astonishingly large amount of ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging and LeaningOnTheFourthWall for a house that almost gets burnt down with every chapter (even in the omakes). **To quote Zara: As Michael would say- "OhCrap"...
** "Are you the [[spoiler: Emperor?]] I could swear that you are... well, perhaps a previous incarnation?"
*** "No. I am not the [[spoiler: Emperor.]]"
**** He sighed. So it wasn't true. Somehow, the Knight must have bee-
***** "Yet."
* [[Troperrific]]: There's an astonishingly large amount of ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging and LeaningOnTheFourthWall for a house that almost gets burnt down with every chapter (even in the omakes). **To quote Zara: As Michael would say- "OhCrap"...
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** [[spoiler: Zara again. ''Vaporizes'' the Rose with a bolt of lightning whilst the cultist was mid-kiss with Michael. To be fair, the Rose ''is'' a Chaos-worshipper...]]except her immediate remark to Michael is "Ah, you survived."
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** [[spoiler: Zara again. ''Vaporizes'' the Rose with a bolt of lightning whilst the cultist was mid-kiss with Michael. To be fair, the Rose ''is'' a Chaos-worshipper...]]except her immediate remark to Michael is "Ah, you survived." "
** Aaaaaannnndd ''of course'' [[spoiler: The Rose is as well.]] Turns out she has something of a BerserkButton in that [[spoiler: she actually starts trying to kill Michael after seeing Zara and him]] ''hugging'', despite the fact that she reacts good-naturedly to each and every attempt of her victim to murder her beforehand. And when she finally gets her hands on him she [[spoiler: threatens him with a knife whilst masturbating the pommel of a goddamned sword]]
** Aaaaaannnndd ''of course'' [[spoiler: The Rose is as well.]] Turns out she has something of a BerserkButton in that [[spoiler: she actually starts trying to kill Michael after seeing Zara and him]] ''hugging'', despite the fact that she reacts good-naturedly to each and every attempt of her victim to murder her beforehand. And when she finally gets her hands on him she [[spoiler: threatens him with a knife whilst masturbating the pommel of a goddamned sword]]
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** [[spoiler: Zara again. ''Vaporizes'' the Rose with a bolt of lightning whilst the cultist was mid-kiss with Michael. To be fair, the Rose ''is'' a Chaos-worshipper...]]except her immediate remark to Michael is "Ah, you survived."
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** [[spoiler: Zara again. ''Vaporizes'' the Rose with a bolt of lightning whilst the cultist was mid-kiss with Michael. To be fair, the Rose ''is'' a Chaos-worshipper...]]except her immediate remark to Michael is "Ah, you survived.""
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** [[spoiler: Zara again. ''Vaporizes'' the Rose with a bolt of lightning whilst the cultist was mid-kiss with Michael. To be fair, the Rose ''is'' a Chaos-worshipper...]]except her immediate remark to Michael is "Ah, you survived."
** [[spoiler: Zara again. ''Vaporizes'' the Rose with a bolt of lightning whilst the cultist was mid-kiss with Michael. To be fair, the Rose ''is'' a Chaos-worshipper...]]except her immediate remark to Michael is "Ah, you survived."
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* TooKinkyToTorture: The Rose. Ohhhh...''yes''. She gets asked to fuck a chainsword. Her answer? "I'd ''love'' to."
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* TooKinkyToTorture: The Rose. Ohhhh...''yes''. She gets asked to fuck a chainsword. Her answer? "I'd ''love'' be ''delighted'' to." "
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* TooKinkyToTorture: The Rose. Ohhhh...''yes''. She gets asked to fuck a chainsword. Her answer? "I'd ''love'' to."
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: [[spoiler:Michael to Zara]]. Somewhere between 5'6"-6' compared to 0'2".
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: [[spoiler:Michael to Zara]]. Somewhere between 5'6"-6' compared to 0'2". [[spoiler: Inverted when Zara shows up at her true height inside Michael's head.]]
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* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: Hilariously done with the Chaos Sorcerer. He's not exactly ineffective at what he does, but you have to feel bad for him when he gets continuously interrupted in the middle of his hammy-as-hell "I'm totally going to kill you" speech by quips from Michael's forces-at one point by a friggin' AXE.
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* DoubleEntendre: Put to ''glorious'' use by the Rose. To note: "N-I was shooting AT you!" "Good thing you didn't fill me up then, otherwise we'd be in quite the trouble."
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* DoubleEntendre: Put to ''glorious'' use by the Rose. To note: "N-I was shooting AT you!" "Good thing "She tried to ''jump'' on me!" "You could've said you didn't fill me up then, otherwise we'd be in quite the trouble.liked being on top."
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** Michael quotes Jack Sparrow's "I might've deserved that" after being slapped by Zara.
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* TheReveal: Turns out, [[spoiler:[[CreepyChild Emma]] is a previous incarnation of ''the GodEmperor of Mankind'']].
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* TheReveal: Turns out, [[spoiler:[[CreepyChild Emma]] is a previous incarnation of ''the GodEmperor of Mankind'']].Remember that CreepyChild Michael met in the supermarket? She's [[spoiler: THE FREAKIN' GOD EMPEROR OF MANKIND.]]
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* AffablyEvil: The Rose of Slaanesh when attempting to [[recruit Michael]]. It goes down exactly the same way you think it does-what with the Rose being a follower of Slaanesh, TooKinkyToTorture and a FemmeFatale.
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* AffablyEvil: The Rose of Slaanesh when attempting to [[recruit Michael]]. It goes down exactly the same way you think it does-what with the Rose being a follower of Slaanesh, TooKinkyToTorture and AND a FemmeFatale.[[Vamp]].
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* AffablyEvil: The Rose of Slaanesh when attempting to [[recruit Michael]]. It goes down exactly the same way you think it does-what with the Rose being a follower of Slaanesh, TooKinkyToTorture and a FemmeFatale.
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* DistractedByTheSexy: ''Hilariously'' averted as [[spoiler:Michael is more than willing to bite [[FemmeFatale The Rose]]'s tongue while she's trying to kiss him.]]
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* DistractedByTheSexy: ''Hilariously'' averted as Zigzagged since [[spoiler:Michael is more than willing does get distracted-as in the fight with not-Zara-but manages to bite [[FemmeFatale The Rose]]'s shake himself free with outbursts of activity-voluntarily or otherwise, like sneezing from the Rose's perfume and biting tongue while she's trying to kiss him.]]]]
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** "The Rose". She wants to suck out your soul (amongst other things) and sacrifice you to the God of Pleasure (not a euphemism). She's also incredibly hot.
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**** "I find your lack of faith...disturbing"
**** "The Warp is strong with this one."
**** "I find your lack of faith...disturbing"
**** "The Warp is strong with this one."
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* SureLet'sGoWithThat: This line: "Yeah...a warning shot, right?"
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* SureLet'sGoWithThat: SureLetsGoWithThat: This line: "Yeah...a warning shot, right?"
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* OhNoNotAgain: Michael, [[spoiler:to blacking out]].
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* OhNoNotAgain: Michael, Urual [[spoiler:to blacking out]].
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* PowerPerversionPotential: Explored with ButtMonkey Warp Spider Urual. Not that he did it on purpose-but you have to imagine what a Slaaneshi would do for his jump pack.
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** "Yes, the girl there is an Expy of Cultist Chan. BreakTheCutie indeed..."
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* MrExposition: Vincent. Named as such in-universe.
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* Troperrific: There's an astonishingly large amount of ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging and LeaningOnTheFourthWall for a house that almost gets burnt down with every chapter (even in the omakes). To quote Zara: As Michael would say- "OhCrap"...
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* Troperrific: There's an astonishingly large amount of ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging and LeaningOnTheFourthWall for a house that almost gets burnt down with every chapter (even in the omakes). To **To quote Zara: As Michael would say- "OhCrap"..."OhCrap"...
**"Instead they're going to be Fate's ButtMonkey"
**"Instead they're going to be Fate's ButtMonkey"
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* Troperrific: There's an astonishingly large amount of ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging and LeaningOnTheFourthWall for a house that almost gets burnt down with every chapter (even in the ""omakes""). For example, speak like this, ""Yoza"" does. And that's without going into the direct trope references...
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* Troperrific: There's an astonishingly large amount of ShoutOuts, LampshadeHanging and LeaningOnTheFourthWall for a house that almost gets burnt down with every chapter (even in the ""omakes""). For example, speak like this, ""Yoza"" does. And that's without going into the direct trope references...omakes). To quote Zara: As Michael would say- "OhCrap"...
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