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* GamerGirl: Somewhat of a tomboy for this and other reasons, Aiko is transitioning toward a more standard girlish personality - painting her toenails, getting dressed up for a date, wearing makeup - but she still retains many of her boyish mannerisms and hobbies. [[spoiler: Their root runs deep, and is part of her strong connection to her deceased father, so they probably won't ever disappear completely.]]
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* GamerGirl: GamerChick: Somewhat of a tomboy for this and other reasons, Aiko is transitioning toward a more standard girlish personality - painting her toenails, getting dressed up for a date, wearing makeup - but she still retains many of her boyish mannerisms and hobbies. [[spoiler: Their root runs deep, and is part of her strong connection to her deceased father, so they probably won't ever disappear completely.]]
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* BadassBaritone: Hisao is depicted as possessing this quality of voice in intimate or reflective moments. It may only be perceived by Aiko.
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* MeaningfulAppearance: Aiko is deaf in her left ear, and, under the pretense of indicating that to casual observers, has bleached a strip of hair from the temple over that same ear.
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* SkunkStripe: Aiko is deaf in her left ear, and, under the pretense of indicating that to casual observers, has bleached a strip of hair from the temple over that same ear.
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* NotSoDifferent: When Aiko encounters Saki, whom she knows to suffer from [[spoiler:a similarly life-shortening condition]], she observes that the blond Fashionista exibits many of the sullen, bitchy traits she once possessed, but took them a different direction - using the condition to garner peer sympathy instead of hiding it like leprosy.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: When Aiko encounters Saki, whom she knows to suffer from [[spoiler:a similarly life-shortening condition]], she observes that the blond Fashionista exibits many of the sullen, bitchy traits she once possessed, but took them a different direction - using the condition to garner peer sympathy instead of hiding it like leprosy.
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* BadDreams: [[spoiler: Aiko suffered several traumatic moments in her youth, including a near-drowning, being a classroom punchline, and her father's awful disease and eventual death. These events, along with knowledge of future pains to come, fuel several recurring nightmares--all of which she keeps to herself.]]
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* PastExperienceNightmare: [[spoiler: Aiko suffered several traumatic moments in her youth, including a near-drowning, being a classroom punchline, and her father's awful disease and eventual death. These events, along with knowledge of future pains to come, fuel several recurring nightmares--all of which she keeps to herself.]]
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* LeaveTheTwoLovebirdsAlone: During the beach outing,[[spoiler: everyone decides to go out for a walk and leave Yoko and Kenta alone in the bungalow, expecting the two to hit it off. And they do.]]
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* LeaveTheTwoLovebirdsAlone: During the beach outing,[[spoiler: everyone outing, [[spoiler:everyone decides to go out for a walk and leave Yoko and Kenta alone in the bungalow, expecting the two to hit it off. And they do.]]
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* NotSoDifferent: When Aiko encounters Saki, whom she knows to suffer from [[spoiler: a similarly life-shortening condition]], she observes that the blond Fashionista exibits many of the sullen, bitchy traits she once possessed, but took them a different direction - using the condition to garner peer sympathy instead of hiding it like leprosy.
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* NotSoDifferent: When Aiko encounters Saki, whom she knows to suffer from [[spoiler: a [[spoiler:a similarly life-shortening condition]], she observes that the blond Fashionista exibits many of the sullen, bitchy traits she once possessed, but took them a different direction - using the condition to garner peer sympathy instead of hiding it like leprosy.
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* PresentAbsence: [[spoiler: Hisao leaves for summer break at the end of act 4, and his absence becomes a driving force behind Aiko's actions in act 5.]]
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* PresentAbsence: [[spoiler: Hisao [[spoiler:Hisao leaves for summer break at the end of act 4, 3, and his absence becomes a driving force behind Aiko's actions in act 5.4.]]
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* Troll: Kenta is renown for his fits of sarcasm, and he consistently makes comments that others would leave locked in their furtive minds, often resulting in physical harm coming his way in for form of kicks, slaps, and thrown pillows.
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* Troll: {{Troll}}: Kenta is renown renowned for his fits of sarcasm, and he consistently makes comments that others would leave locked in their furtive minds, often resulting in physical harm coming his way in for form of kicks, slaps, and thrown pillows.
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* BreakfastClub: The primary cast consists of varying degrees of social outcasts, up to and including the asocial foreign girl, the brooding writer, the gregarious manipulator, and the foot-in-mouth sardonic.
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* BreakfastClub: The primary cast consists of varying degrees of social outcasts, up to and including the asocial foreign girl, the brooding writer, the gregarious manipulator, and the foot-in-mouth sardonic.
* BungledSuicide: [[spoiler:although she avoids saying it outright, even in her InternalMonologue, Aiko believes that Yoko may have been attempting suicide on the morning of Tanabata.]]
* BungledSuicide: [[spoiler:although she avoids saying it outright, even in her InternalMonologue, Aiko believes that Yoko may have been attempting suicide on the morning of Tanabata.]]
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* NotSoDifferent: When Aiko encounters Saki, whom she knows to suffer from [[spoiler: a similarly life-shortening condition]], she observes that the blond Fashionista exibits many of the sullen, bitchy traits she once possessed, but took them a different direction - using the condition to garner peer sympathy instead of hiding it like leprosy.
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* RetailTherapy: Numerous occasions spring up where Aiko ends up out shopping with various friends for different reasons, and although she dislikes the activity outwardly, she ends up feeling better after the experiences, although her improved mood has little to do with buying things.
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* Troll: Kenta is renown for his fits of sarcasm, and he consistently makes comments that others would leave locked in their furtive minds, often resulting in physical harm coming his way in for form of kicks, slaps, and thrown pillows.
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* AscendedExtra: Aiko's place in Yamaku is spawned from a walk-on nameless character who breezes into room 3-3 to discuss something with Shizune during Act 1.
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* CovertPervert: Despite her image as a prude - Emi calls her as much - Aiko has quite the wandering mind, and is prone to strolling through the gutter on occasion, as do a number of her friends.
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* DivergenceFic: Though it starts prior to the actual point of divergence, the tale is purported to have a single deviation mark from the original Act 1, in which Hisao is volunteered by the Student Council to help Aiko with some pre-festival financial planning.
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* ForWantOfANail: Throughout the story, peripheral characters who perhaps had starring roles in the source material or other fanon derivations are shown to have walked down very different paths.
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* ExpandedUniverse: Despite being based on and containing appearances and or references to almost the entire original cast and locations, this fiction builds onto the Katawa Shoujo universe by adding detail to the class structure, building facilities, and even transplants material from other non-canonical fictions like The Beijing restaurant that appears in Scissorlips' Pseudo-Pseudo Suzu Route. It also introduces almost a complete classroom of students that populate Aiko's homeroom, some security personnel, and an overqualified lifeguard to the Yamaku experience.
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* ExpandedUniverse: Despite being based on and containing appearances and or references to almost the entire original cast and locations, this fiction builds onto the Katawa Shoujo universe by adding detail to the class structure, building facilities, and even transplants material from other non-canonical fictions like The Beijing restaurant that appears in [[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6192 Scissorlips' Pseudo-Pseudo Suzu Route.Route]]. It also introduces almost a complete classroom of students that populate Aiko's homeroom, some security personnel, and an overqualified lifeguard to the Yamaku experience.
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* [[spoiler: PresentAbsence: Hisao leaves for summer break at the end of act 4, and his absence becomes a driving force behind Aiko's actions in act 5.]]
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* [[spoiler: PresentAbsence: [[spoiler: Hisao leaves for summer break at the end of act 4, and his absence becomes a driving force behind Aiko's actions in act 5.]]
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* ExpandedUniverse: Despite being based on and containing appearances and or references to almost the entire original cast and locations, this fiction builds onto the Katawa Shoujo universe by adding detail to the class structure, building facilities, and even transplants material from other non-canonical fictions like The Beijing restaurant that appears in Scissorlips' Pseudo-Pseudo Suzu Route. It also introduces almost a complete classroom of students that populate Aiko's homeroom, some security personnel, and an overqualified lifeguard to the Yamaku experience.
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[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6687 Tomorrow's Doom]] is an ongoing VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo fanfic starring Aiko Kurai, the class representative of 3-1. She drags an initially unenthusiastic Hisao to the festival, and their relationship
eventually blossoms into romance. But can Aiko trust him with a grim secret about the
future she can never have?
eventually blossoms into romance. But can Aiko trust him with a grim secret about the
future she can never have?
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[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6687 Tomorrow's Doom]] is an ongoing VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo fanfic starring Aiko Kurai, the invented class representative of room 3-1. She drags an initially unenthusiastic Taking responsibility for helping the surly Hisao adjust to the festival, new school, she drags him to the Yamaku Festival, and their relationship
relationship eventually blossoms into romance. But However, can Aiko trust him with a grim secret about the
the future she can never have?
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* BilingualDialogue: Aiko speaks fluent Japanese, and learned JSL. This allows her to both interpret for others, and share clandestine conversations with certain characters.
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* BilingualDialogue: Aiko speaks fluent Japanese, and learned JSL.JSL in order to communicate better with her primarily deaf/partially deaf classmates. This allows her to both interpret for others, and share clandestine conversations with certain characters.
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** Early in the story, she talks with Shizune in front of Hisao using sign language.
** Later, after Hisao learns JSL, she communicates with Hisao in sign while on the phone with her mother.
** Later, after Hisao learns JSL, she communicates with Hisao in sign while on the phone with her mother.
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* BreakfastClub: The primary cast consists of varying degrees of social outcasts, up to and including the asocial foreign girl, the brooding writer, the gregarious manipulator, and the foot-in-mouth sardonic.
* BilingualDialogue: Aiko speaks fluent Japanese, and learned JSL. This allows her to both interpret for others, and share clandestine conversations with certain characters.
* BilingualDialogue: Aiko speaks fluent Japanese, and learned JSL. This allows her to both interpret for others, and share clandestine conversations with certain characters.
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[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6687 Tomorrow's Doom]] is an ongoing
VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo fanfic starring Aiko Kurai, the class representative of 3-1.
She drags an initially unenthusiastic Hisao to the festival, and their relationship
VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo fanfic starring Aiko Kurai, the class representative of 3-1.
She drags an initially unenthusiastic Hisao to the festival, and their relationship
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[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6687 Tomorrow's Doom]] is an ongoing
ongoing VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo fanfic starring Aiko Kurai, the class representative of 3-1.
3-1. She drags an initially unenthusiastic Hisao to the festival, and their relationship
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** Amaya with her thumbs holding her backpack.
** Hisao stroking his scar when he's nervous.
** Hisao stroking his scar when he's nervous.
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** Amaya walks with her thumbs holding her backpack.
backpack straps.
** Hisaostroking strokes his chest scar when he's nervous.
** Hisao
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** Chapter 42, when Hisao marries Iwanako... which turns out to be an anxiety-fueled
nightmare.
* BadassBaritone: Hisao is depicted as possessing this quality of voice in intimate or
reflective moments. It may only be perceived by Aiko.
nightmare.
* BadassBaritone: Hisao is depicted as possessing this quality of voice in intimate or
reflective moments. It may only be perceived by Aiko.
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** Chapter 42, when Hisao marries Iwanako... which turns out to be an anxiety-fueled
anxiety-fueled nightmare.
* BadassBaritone: Hisao is depicted as possessing this quality of voice in intimateor
or reflective moments. It may only be perceived by Aiko.
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* BetterAsFriends: Aiko and Kenta went on a date in their first year, which revealed
they were entirely too similar for a romantic relationship, but they're still good friends.
they were entirely too similar for a romantic relationship, but they're still good friends.
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* BetterAsFriends: Aiko and Kenta went on a date in their first year, which revealed
revealed they were entirely too similar for a romantic relationship, but they're still good friends.
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* FormerlyFat: Prior to puberty, Aiko was a chubby child, and that, among other things, cause friction with her schoolmates. It left her with some mild body issues that contributes to her tomboyish behavior.
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* FormerlyFat: Prior to puberty, FormerlyFat: Aiko was a chubby child, child prior to puberty, and that, among other things, cause caused friction with her schoolmates. It left her with some mild body issues that contributes to her tomboyish behavior.
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* BadDreams: [[spoiler: Aiko suffered several traumatic moments in her youth, including
a near-drowning, being a classroom punchline, and her father's awful disease and
eventual death. These events, along with knowledge of future pains to come, fuel
several recurring nightmares--all of which she keeps to herself.]]
a near-drowning, being a classroom punchline, and her father's awful disease and
eventual death. These events, along with knowledge of future pains to come, fuel
several recurring nightmares--all of which she keeps to herself.]]
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* BadDreams: [[spoiler: Aiko suffered several traumatic moments in her youth, including
including a near-drowning, being a classroom punchline, and her father's awful disease and
and eventual death. These events, along with knowledge of future pains to come, fuel
fuel several recurring nightmares--all of which she keeps to herself.]]
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they were entirely too similar for a romantic relationship, but they're still good
friends.
* CampStraight: [[spoiler:Satoru Miyoto, the owner of the secret dress shop,
"Soliloquy", omits his being heterosexual so his female clients are more comfortable
with his work.]]
friends.
* CampStraight: [[spoiler:Satoru Miyoto, the owner of the secret dress shop,
"Soliloquy", omits his being heterosexual so his female clients are more comfortable
with his work.]]
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they were entirely too similar for a romantic relationship, but they're still good
good friends.
* CampStraight: [[spoiler:Satoru Miyoto, the owner of the secret dressshop,
shop, "Soliloquy", omits his being heterosexual so his female clients are more comfortable
comfortable with his work.]]
* CampStraight: [[spoiler:Satoru Miyoto, the owner of the secret dress
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** Yoko possesses unusual poise, and a straight-backed gait. [[spoiler: (a result of
her ballet lessons)]]
her ballet lessons)]]
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** Yoko possesses unusual poise, and a straight-backed gait. [[spoiler: (a [[spoiler:(a result of
of her ballet lessons)]]
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* ClosetGeek: [[spoiler: Yoko appears as the typical girlie girl with an affinity for
fashion, but underneath the rigid grace lurks a fantasy aficionado, jazz nerd, and
gamer geek.]]
* DisappearedDad: Part of Aiko's backstory involves [[spoiler:her father suffering from
dementia due to having Huntington's Disease, and his eventual death in April 2006 - ~1
year before the story begins]].
* DontYouDarePityMe: Amaya can make quite a fuss about people treating her like a
porcelain doll because of her epilepsy.
* EmbarrassingNickname: Numerous terms of endearment crop up over the course of the
tale. Most notably:
** Due to her propensity for napping at all times of the day, Aiko's mom still calls
her "Kitten". Frequent use has dulled the insult over the years--it's said lovingly,
not maliciously--but she doesn't let anyone else call her that, not even Hisao or
Amaya.
** Following an incident during the Yamaku Festival, Hisao gets dubbed "The Swooner",
and it sticks.
** Yoko, due to her appearance, gets referenced as "Red" and "Jessica Rabbit",
[[spoiler: and her father calls her "Jellybean", of which she isn't terribly fond.]]
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: In chapter two, "In Your Dreams", Aiko flies into an
embarrassingly loud tirade about embracing the upcoming festival [[spoiler:that is
rooted in her knowledge that life is short.]]
* FleetingPassionateHobbies: Hisao's expanded back story indicates this kind of
behavior, and it becomes a worry point for Aiko, who wonders if he might get bored with
her.
* FormerlyFat: Prior to puberty, Aiko was a chubby child, and that, among other things,
cause friction with her schoolmates. It left her with some mild body issues that
contributes to her tomboyish behavior.
* FriendlyRivalry: Aiko and Shizune spend much of the second act trying to one-up each
other in pursuit of Hisao's affections.
* GamerGirl: Somewhat of a tomboy for this and other reasons, Aiko is transitioning
toward a more standard girlish personality - painting her toenails, getting dressed up
for a date, wearing makeup - but she still retains many of her boyish mannerisms and
hobbies. [[spoiler: Their root runs deep, and is part of her strong connection to her
deceased father, so they probably won't ever disappear completely.]]
* GenkiGirl: Despite being deaf/mute, Naoko's presence can go from completely unnoticed
to unbearably obvious - she is described as a silent Emi.
* ICallHimMisterHappy: Aiko calls her breasts "Masa" and "Mune", and refers to Hisao's
penis as "Little Swooner".
* LeaveTheTwoLovebirdsAlone: During the beach outing,[[spoiler: everyone decides to go
out for a walk and leave Yoko and Kenta alone in the bungalow, expecting the two to hit
it off. And they do.]]
* LethalChef: Despite her mother being a trained chef, Aiko has trouble getting water
to boil, and has caused two separate kitchen fires--one of which got her banned from
using the girls' dorm kitchen.
* NeatFreak: Perhaps the result of frequent hospitalization, or her overprotective
parents, Amaya keeps her room in absolute order.
* [[spoiler: NeverGotToSayGoodbye: Despite not having seen him for almost a year, and
loving him dearly - or perhaps because of that fact - Aiko couldn't bring herself to
visit her father as he lay in hospice, and didn't see him until the funeral.]]
* NiceToTheWaiter: Ina Kurai (Aiko's mom) is wealthy enough not to, but still makes a
point of getting to know people's names, and holds back from complaining about minor
inconveniences.
* NotAMorningPerson: Aiko is prone to this behavior, though if she wakes in a
particularly good situation, she can overlook the bright sun and smiles in favor of
enjoying the moment.
* OriginalCharacter: The canon characters are severely outnumbered in this fanfic. Only
Shizune and Misha feature heavily, but exist as tertiary characters most of the time.
* [[spoiler: PresentAbsence: Hisao leaves for summer break at the end of act 4, and his
absence becomes a driving force behind Aiko's actions in act 5.]]
* SkunkStripe: Aiko is deaf in her left ear, and, under the pretense of indicating that
to casual observers, has bleached a strip of hair from the temple over that same ear.
* TenMinutesInTheCloset: Amaya and Tadao have a fight during Tanabata, the aftermath of
which drags on for so long that Aiko and Hisao conspire to lock them up in a shed until
they make up.
* TheFashionista: Less obvious due to school uniforms and natural shyness, [[spoiler:
not to mention being a ClosetGeek,]] Yoko is highly adept with fashion and materials,
though she lacks the typically vapid personality disorder.
fashion, but underneath the rigid grace lurks a fantasy aficionado, jazz nerd, and
gamer geek.]]
* DisappearedDad: Part of Aiko's backstory involves [[spoiler:her father suffering from
dementia due to having Huntington's Disease, and his eventual death in April 2006 - ~1
year before the story begins]].
* DontYouDarePityMe: Amaya can make quite a fuss about people treating her like a
porcelain doll because of her epilepsy.
* EmbarrassingNickname: Numerous terms of endearment crop up over the course of the
tale. Most notably:
** Due to her propensity for napping at all times of the day, Aiko's mom still calls
her "Kitten". Frequent use has dulled the insult over the years--it's said lovingly,
not maliciously--but she doesn't let anyone else call her that, not even Hisao or
Amaya.
** Following an incident during the Yamaku Festival, Hisao gets dubbed "The Swooner",
and it sticks.
** Yoko, due to her appearance, gets referenced as "Red" and "Jessica Rabbit",
[[spoiler: and her father calls her "Jellybean", of which she isn't terribly fond.]]
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: In chapter two, "In Your Dreams", Aiko flies into an
embarrassingly loud tirade about embracing the upcoming festival [[spoiler:that is
rooted in her knowledge that life is short.]]
* FleetingPassionateHobbies: Hisao's expanded back story indicates this kind of
behavior, and it becomes a worry point for Aiko, who wonders if he might get bored with
her.
* FormerlyFat: Prior to puberty, Aiko was a chubby child, and that, among other things,
cause friction with her schoolmates. It left her with some mild body issues that
contributes to her tomboyish behavior.
* FriendlyRivalry: Aiko and Shizune spend much of the second act trying to one-up each
other in pursuit of Hisao's affections.
* GamerGirl: Somewhat of a tomboy for this and other reasons, Aiko is transitioning
toward a more standard girlish personality - painting her toenails, getting dressed up
for a date, wearing makeup - but she still retains many of her boyish mannerisms and
hobbies. [[spoiler: Their root runs deep, and is part of her strong connection to her
deceased father, so they probably won't ever disappear completely.]]
* GenkiGirl: Despite being deaf/mute, Naoko's presence can go from completely unnoticed
to unbearably obvious - she is described as a silent Emi.
* ICallHimMisterHappy: Aiko calls her breasts "Masa" and "Mune", and refers to Hisao's
penis as "Little Swooner".
* LeaveTheTwoLovebirdsAlone: During the beach outing,[[spoiler: everyone decides to go
out for a walk and leave Yoko and Kenta alone in the bungalow, expecting the two to hit
it off. And they do.]]
* LethalChef: Despite her mother being a trained chef, Aiko has trouble getting water
to boil, and has caused two separate kitchen fires--one of which got her banned from
using the girls' dorm kitchen.
* NeatFreak: Perhaps the result of frequent hospitalization, or her overprotective
parents, Amaya keeps her room in absolute order.
* [[spoiler: NeverGotToSayGoodbye: Despite not having seen him for almost a year, and
loving him dearly - or perhaps because of that fact - Aiko couldn't bring herself to
visit her father as he lay in hospice, and didn't see him until the funeral.]]
* NiceToTheWaiter: Ina Kurai (Aiko's mom) is wealthy enough not to, but still makes a
point of getting to know people's names, and holds back from complaining about minor
inconveniences.
* NotAMorningPerson: Aiko is prone to this behavior, though if she wakes in a
particularly good situation, she can overlook the bright sun and smiles in favor of
enjoying the moment.
* OriginalCharacter: The canon characters are severely outnumbered in this fanfic. Only
Shizune and Misha feature heavily, but exist as tertiary characters most of the time.
* [[spoiler: PresentAbsence: Hisao leaves for summer break at the end of act 4, and his
absence becomes a driving force behind Aiko's actions in act 5.]]
* SkunkStripe: Aiko is deaf in her left ear, and, under the pretense of indicating that
to casual observers, has bleached a strip of hair from the temple over that same ear.
* TenMinutesInTheCloset: Amaya and Tadao have a fight during Tanabata, the aftermath of
which drags on for so long that Aiko and Hisao conspire to lock them up in a shed until
they make up.
* TheFashionista: Less obvious due to school uniforms and natural shyness, [[spoiler:
not to mention being a ClosetGeek,]] Yoko is highly adept with fashion and materials,
though she lacks the typically vapid personality disorder.
to:
* ClosetGeek: [[spoiler: Yoko [[spoiler:Yoko appears as the typical girlie girl with an affinity for
for fashion, but underneath the rigid grace lurks a fantasy aficionado, jazz nerd, and
and gamer geek.]]
* DisappearedDad: Part of Aiko's backstory involves [[spoiler:her father sufferingfrom
from dementia due to having Huntington's Disease, and his eventual death in April 2006 - ~1
~1 year before the story begins]].
* DontYouDarePityMe: Amaya can make quite a fuss about people treating her likea
a porcelain doll because of her epilepsy.
* EmbarrassingNickname: Numerous terms of endearment crop up over the course ofthe
the tale. Most notably:
** Due to her propensity for napping at all times of the day, Aiko's mom stillcalls
calls her "Kitten". Frequent use has dulled the insult over the years--it's said lovingly,
lovingly, not maliciously--but she doesn't let anyone else call her that, not even Hisao or
or Amaya.
** Following an incident during the Yamaku Festival, Hisao gets dubbed "TheSwooner",
Swooner", and it sticks.
** Yoko, due to her appearance, gets referenced as "Red" and "JessicaRabbit",
Rabbit", [[spoiler: and her father calls her "Jellybean", of which she isn't terribly fond.]]
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: In chapter two, "In Your Dreams", Aiko flies intoan
an embarrassingly loud tirade about embracing the upcoming festival [[spoiler:that is
is rooted in her knowledge that life is short.]]
* FleetingPassionateHobbies: Hisao's expanded back story indicates this kindof
of behavior, and it becomes a worry point for Aiko, who wonders if he might get bored with
with her.
* FormerlyFat: Prior to puberty, Aiko was a chubby child, and that, among otherthings,
things, cause friction with her schoolmates. It left her with some mild body issues that
that contributes to her tomboyish behavior.
* FriendlyRivalry: Aiko and Shizune spend much of the second act trying to one-upeach
each other in pursuit of Hisao's affections.
* GamerGirl: Somewhat of a tomboy for this and other reasons, Aiko istransitioning
transitioning toward a more standard girlish personality - painting her toenails, getting dressed up
up for a date, wearing makeup - but she still retains many of her boyish mannerisms and
and hobbies. [[spoiler: Their root runs deep, and is part of her strong connection to her
her deceased father, so they probably won't ever disappear completely.]]
* GenkiGirl: Despite being deaf/mute, Naoko's presence can go from completelyunnoticed
unnoticed to unbearably obvious - she is described as a silent Emi.
* ICallHimMisterHappy: Aiko calls her breasts "Masa" and "Mune", and refers toHisao's
Hisao's penis as "Little Swooner".
* LeaveTheTwoLovebirdsAlone: During the beach outing,[[spoiler: everyone decides togo
go out for a walk and leave Yoko and Kenta alone in the bungalow, expecting the two to hit
hit it off. And they do.]]
* LethalChef: Despite her mother being a trained chef, Aiko has trouble gettingwater
water to boil, and has caused two separate kitchen fires--one of which got her banned from
from using the girls' dorm kitchen.
* NeatFreak: Perhaps the result of frequent hospitalization, or heroverprotective
overprotective parents, Amaya keeps her room in absolute order.
*[[spoiler: NeverGotToSayGoodbye: [[spoiler: Despite not having seen him for almost a year, and
and loving him dearly - or perhaps because of that fact - Aiko couldn't bring herself to
to visit her father as he lay in hospice, and didn't see him until the funeral.]]
* NiceToTheWaiter: Ina Kurai (Aiko's mom) is wealthy enough not to, but still makesa
a point of getting to know people's names, and holds back from complaining about minor
minor inconveniences.
* NotAMorningPerson: Aiko is prone to this behavior, though if she wakes ina
a particularly good situation, she can overlook the bright sun and smiles in favor of
of enjoying the moment.
* OriginalCharacter: The canon characters are severely outnumbered in this fanfic.Only
Only Shizune and Misha feature heavily, but exist as tertiary characters most of the time.
* [[spoiler: PresentAbsence: Hisao leaves for summer break at the end of act 4, andhis
his absence becomes a driving force behind Aiko's actions in act 5.]]
* SkunkStripe: Aiko is deaf in her left ear, and, under the pretense of indicatingthat
that to casual observers, has bleached a strip of hair from the temple over that same ear.
* TenMinutesInTheCloset: Amaya and Tadao have a fight during Tanabata, the aftermathof
of which drags on for so long that Aiko and Hisao conspire to lock them up in a shed until
until they make up.
* TheFashionista: Less obvious due to school uniforms and natural shyness,[[spoiler:
[[spoiler: not to mention being a ClosetGeek,]] Yoko is highly adept with fashion and materials,
materials, though she lacks the typically vapid personality disorder.
* DisappearedDad: Part of Aiko's backstory involves [[spoiler:her father suffering
* DontYouDarePityMe: Amaya can make quite a fuss about people treating her like
* EmbarrassingNickname: Numerous terms of endearment crop up over the course of
** Due to her propensity for napping at all times of the day, Aiko's mom still
** Following an incident during the Yamaku Festival, Hisao gets dubbed "The
** Yoko, due to her appearance, gets referenced as "Red" and "Jessica
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: In chapter two, "In Your Dreams", Aiko flies into
* FleetingPassionateHobbies: Hisao's expanded back story indicates this kind
* FormerlyFat: Prior to puberty, Aiko was a chubby child, and that, among other
* FriendlyRivalry: Aiko and Shizune spend much of the second act trying to one-up
* GamerGirl: Somewhat of a tomboy for this and other reasons, Aiko is
* GenkiGirl: Despite being deaf/mute, Naoko's presence can go from completely
* ICallHimMisterHappy: Aiko calls her breasts "Masa" and "Mune", and refers to
* LeaveTheTwoLovebirdsAlone: During the beach outing,[[spoiler: everyone decides to
* LethalChef: Despite her mother being a trained chef, Aiko has trouble getting
* NeatFreak: Perhaps the result of frequent hospitalization, or her
*
* NiceToTheWaiter: Ina Kurai (Aiko's mom) is wealthy enough not to, but still makes
* NotAMorningPerson: Aiko is prone to this behavior, though if she wakes in
* OriginalCharacter: The canon characters are severely outnumbered in this fanfic.
* [[spoiler: PresentAbsence: Hisao leaves for summer break at the end of act 4, and
* SkunkStripe: Aiko is deaf in her left ear, and, under the pretense of indicating
* TenMinutesInTheCloset: Amaya and Tadao have a fight during Tanabata, the aftermath
* TheFashionista: Less obvious due to school uniforms and natural shyness,
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* TwiceShy: Amaya and Tadao, until Aiko decides that enough is enough and nudges the
pair toward each other.
pair toward each other.
to:
* TwiceShy: Amaya and Tadao, until Aiko decides that enough is enough and nudges the
the pair toward each other.
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* [[spoiler:YourDaysAreNumbered]]: [[spoiler:Aiko's inherited case of Huntington's
Disease is a major source of anxiety for her, especially where her relationship with
Hisao is concerned.]]
Disease is a major source of anxiety for her, especially where her relationship with
Hisao is concerned.]]
to:
* [[spoiler:YourDaysAreNumbered]]: YourDaysAreNumbered: [[spoiler:Aiko's inherited case of Huntington's
Huntington's Disease is a major source of anxiety for her, especially where her relationship with
with Hisao is concerned.]]
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[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6687 Tomorrow's Doom]] is an ongoing VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo fanfic starring Aiko Kurai, the class representative of 3-1. She drags an initially unenthusiastic Hisao to the festival, and their relationship eventually blossoms into romance. But can Aiko trust him with a grim secret about the future she can never have?
to:
[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6687 Tomorrow's Doom]] is an ongoing ongoing
VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo fanfic starring Aiko Kurai, the class representative of3-1. 3-1.
She drags an initially unenthusiastic Hisao to the festival, and theirrelationship relationship
eventually blossoms into romance. But can Aiko trust him with a grim secret aboutthe the
future she can never have?
VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo fanfic starring Aiko Kurai, the class representative of
She drags an initially unenthusiastic Hisao to the festival, and their
eventually blossoms into romance. But can Aiko trust him with a grim secret about
future she can never have?
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** Chapter 42, when Hisao marries Iwanako... which turns out to be an anxiety-fueled nightmare.
* BetterAsFriends: Aiko and Kenta went on a date in their first year, which revealed they were entirely too similar for a romantic relationship, but they're still good friends.
* CampStraight: [[spoiler:Satoru Miyoto, the owner of the "secret dress shop".]]
* DisappearedDad: Part of Aiko's backstory involves [[spoiler:her father suffering from dementia due to having Huntington's Disease, and his eventual death in April 2006 - ~1 year before the story begins]].
* DontYouDarePityMe: Amaya can make quite a fuss about people treating her like a porcelain doll because of her epilepsy.
* ICallHimMisterHappy: Aiko calls her breasts "Masa" and "Mune", and refers to Hisao's penis as "Little Swooner".
* LeaveTheTwoLovebirdsAlone: During the beach outing, everyone decides to go out for a walk and leave Yoko and Kenta alone in the bungalow, expecting the two to hit it off. And they do.
* OriginalCharacter: The canon characters are severely outnumbered in this fanfic.
* SkunkStripe: Aiko is deaf in her left ear, and has a white stripe on the left side of her hair to match it.
* TenMinutesInTheCloset: Amaya and Tadao have a fight during Tanabata, the aftermath of which drags on for so long that Aiko and Hisao conspire to lock them up in a shed until they make up.
* TitleDrop: In chapter 18.
* TwiceShy: Amaya and Tadao, until Aiko decides that enough is enough and nudges the pair toward each other.
* UnusualEuphemism: "Happy valley" as a term for female genitalia.
* [[spoiler:YourDaysAreNumbered]]: [[spoiler:Aiko's inherited case of Huntington's Disease is a major source of anxiety for her, especially where her relationship with Hisao is concerned.]]
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: In chapter two, "In Your Dreams", Aiko flies into an embarrassingly loud tirade about embracing the upcoming festival [[spoiler:that is rooted in her knowledge that life is short.]]
* BadDreams: [[spoiler: Aiko suffered several traumatic moments in her youth, including a near-drowning, being a classroom punchline, and her father's awful disease and eventual death. These events, along with knowledge of future pains to come, fuel several recurring nightmares--all of which she keeps to herself.]]
* BadassBaritone: Hisao is depicted as possessing this quality of voice in intimate or reflective moments. It may only be perceived by Aiko.
* BetterAsFriends: Aiko and Kenta went on a date in their first year, which revealed they were entirely too similar for a romantic relationship, but they're still good friends.
* CampStraight: [[spoiler:Satoru Miyoto, the owner of the "secret dress shop".]]
* DisappearedDad: Part of Aiko's backstory involves [[spoiler:her father suffering from dementia due to having Huntington's Disease, and his eventual death in April 2006 - ~1 year before the story begins]].
* DontYouDarePityMe: Amaya can make quite a fuss about people treating her like a porcelain doll because of her epilepsy.
* ICallHimMisterHappy: Aiko calls her breasts "Masa" and "Mune", and refers to Hisao's penis as "Little Swooner".
* LeaveTheTwoLovebirdsAlone: During the beach outing, everyone decides to go out for a walk and leave Yoko and Kenta alone in the bungalow, expecting the two to hit it off. And they do.
* OriginalCharacter: The canon characters are severely outnumbered in this fanfic.
* SkunkStripe: Aiko is deaf in her left ear, and has a white stripe on the left side of her hair to match it.
* TenMinutesInTheCloset: Amaya and Tadao have a fight during Tanabata, the aftermath of which drags on for so long that Aiko and Hisao conspire to lock them up in a shed until they make up.
* TitleDrop: In chapter 18.
* TwiceShy: Amaya and Tadao, until Aiko decides that enough is enough and nudges the pair toward each other.
* UnusualEuphemism: "Happy valley" as a term for female genitalia.
* [[spoiler:YourDaysAreNumbered]]: [[spoiler:Aiko's inherited case of Huntington's Disease is a major source of anxiety for her, especially where her relationship with Hisao is concerned.]]
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: In chapter two, "In Your Dreams", Aiko flies into an embarrassingly loud tirade about embracing the upcoming festival [[spoiler:that is rooted in her knowledge that life is short.]]
* BadDreams: [[spoiler: Aiko suffered several traumatic moments in her youth, including a near-drowning, being a classroom punchline, and her father's awful disease and eventual death. These events, along with knowledge of future pains to come, fuel several recurring nightmares--all of which she keeps to herself.]]
* BadassBaritone: Hisao is depicted as possessing this quality of voice in intimate or reflective moments. It may only be perceived by Aiko.
to:
** Chapter 42, when Hisao marries Iwanako... which turns out to be an anxiety-fueled anxiety-fueled
nightmare.
*BetterAsFriends: BadassBaritone: Hisao is depicted as possessing this quality of voice in intimate or
reflective moments. It may only be perceived by Aiko.
* BadDreams: [[spoiler: Aiko suffered several traumatic moments in her youth, including
a near-drowning, being a classroom punchline, andKenta went on a date in their first year, her father's awful disease and
eventual death. These events, along with knowledge of future pains to come, fuel
several recurring nightmares--all of whichrevealed they were entirely too similar for a romantic relationship, but they're still good friends.
* CampStraight: [[spoiler:Satoru Miyoto, the owner of the "secret dress shop".she keeps to herself.]]
*DisappearedDad: Part of Aiko's backstory involves [[spoiler:her father suffering from dementia due to having Huntington's Disease, and his eventual death in April 2006 - ~1 year before the story begins]].
* DontYouDarePityMe: Amaya can make quite a fuss about people treating her like a porcelain doll because of her epilepsy.
* ICallHimMisterHappy:BetterAsFriends: Aiko calls her breasts "Masa" and "Mune", and refers to Hisao's penis as "Little Swooner".
* LeaveTheTwoLovebirdsAlone: During the beach outing, everyone decides to go out for a walk and leave Yokoand Kenta alone went on a date in the bungalow, expecting the two to hit it off. And they do.
* OriginalCharacter: The canon characters are severely outnumbered in this fanfic.
* SkunkStripe: Aiko is deaf in her left ear, and has a white stripe on the left side of her hair to match it.
* TenMinutesInTheCloset: Amaya and Tadao have a fight during Tanabata, the aftermath oftheir first year, which drags on for so long that Aiko and Hisao conspire to lock them up in a shed until revealed
theymake up.
were entirely too similar for a romantic relationship, but they're still good
friends.
*TitleDrop: In chapter 18.
* TwiceShy: Amaya and Tadao, until Aiko decides that enough is enough and nudgesCampStraight: [[spoiler:Satoru Miyoto, the pair toward each other.
* UnusualEuphemism: "Happy valley" as a term forowner of the secret dress shop,
"Soliloquy", omits his being heterosexual so his femalegenitalia.
* [[spoiler:YourDaysAreNumbered]]: [[spoiler:Aiko's inherited case of Huntington's Disease is a major source of anxiety for her, especially where her relationshipclients are more comfortable
withHisao is concerned.]]
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: In chapter two, "In Your Dreams", Aiko flies into an embarrassingly loud tirade about embracing the upcoming festival [[spoiler:that is rooted in her knowledge that life is short.]]
* BadDreams: [[spoiler: Aiko suffered several traumatic moments in her youth, including a near-drowning, being a classroom punchline, and her father's awful disease and eventual death. These events, along with knowledge of future pains to come, fuel several recurring nightmares--all of which she keeps to herself.]]
* BadassBaritone: Hisao is depicted as possessing this quality of voice in intimate or reflective moments. It may only be perceived by Aiko.his work.]]
nightmare.
*
reflective moments. It may only be perceived by Aiko.
* BadDreams: [[spoiler: Aiko suffered several traumatic moments in her youth, including
a near-drowning, being a classroom punchline, and
eventual death. These events, along with knowledge of future pains to come, fuel
several recurring nightmares--all of which
* CampStraight: [[spoiler:Satoru Miyoto, the owner of the "secret dress shop".
*
* DontYouDarePityMe: Amaya can make quite a fuss about people treating her like a porcelain doll because of her epilepsy.
* ICallHimMisterHappy:
* LeaveTheTwoLovebirdsAlone: During the beach outing, everyone decides to go out for a walk and leave Yoko
* OriginalCharacter: The canon characters are severely outnumbered in this fanfic.
* SkunkStripe: Aiko is deaf in her left ear, and has a white stripe on the left side of her hair to match it.
* TenMinutesInTheCloset: Amaya and Tadao have a fight during Tanabata, the aftermath of
they
friends.
*
* TwiceShy: Amaya and Tadao, until Aiko decides that enough is enough and nudges
* UnusualEuphemism: "Happy valley" as a term for
"Soliloquy", omits his being heterosexual so his female
* [[spoiler:YourDaysAreNumbered]]: [[spoiler:Aiko's inherited case of Huntington's Disease is a major source of anxiety for her, especially where her relationship
with
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: In chapter two, "In Your Dreams", Aiko flies into an embarrassingly loud tirade about embracing the upcoming festival [[spoiler:that is rooted in her knowledge that life is short.]]
* BadDreams: [[spoiler: Aiko suffered several traumatic moments in her youth, including a near-drowning, being a classroom punchline, and her father's awful disease and eventual death. These events, along with knowledge of future pains to come, fuel several recurring nightmares--all of which she keeps to herself.]]
* BadassBaritone: Hisao is depicted as possessing this quality of voice in intimate or reflective moments. It may only be perceived by Aiko.
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** Yoko possesses unusual poise, and a straight-backed gait. [[spoiler: (a result of her ballet lessons)]]
to:
** Yoko possesses unusual poise, and a straight-backed gait. [[spoiler: (a result of of
her ballet lessons)]]
her ballet lessons)]]
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* LethalChef: Despite her mother being a trained chef, Aiko has trouble getting water to boil, and has caused two separate kitchen fires--one of which got her banned from using the girls' dorm kitchen.
* ClosetGeek: [[spoiler: Yoko appears as the typical girlie girl with an affinity for fashion, but underneath the rigid grace lurks a fantasy aficionado, jazz nerd, and gamer geek.]]
* GenkiGirl: Despite being deaf/mute, Naoko's presence can go from completely unnoticed to unbearably obvious - she is described as a silent Emi.
* GamerGirl: Somewhat of a tomboy for this and other reasons, Aiko is transitioning toward a more standard girlish personality - painting her toenails, getting dressed up for a date, wearing makeup - but she still retains many of her boyish mannerisms and hobbies. [[spoiler: Their root runs deep, and is part of her strong connection to her deceased father, so they probably won't ever disappear completely.]]
* EmbarrassingNickname: Numerous terms of endearment crop up over the course of the tale. Most notably:
** Due to her propensity for napping at all times of the day, Aiko's mom still calls her "Kitten". Frequent use has dulled the insult over the years--it's said lovingly, not maliciously--but she doesn't let anyone else call her that, not even Hisao or Amaya.
** Following an incident during the Yamaku Festival, Hisao gets dubbed "The Swooner", and it sticks.
** Yoko, due to her appearance, gets referenced as "Red" and "Jessica Rabbit", [[spoiler: and her father calls her "Jellybean", which she isn't terribly fond of.]]
* TheFashionista: Less obvious due to school uniforms and natural shyness, [[spoiler: not to mention being a ClosetGeek,]] Yoko is highly adept with fashion and materials, though she lacks the typically vapid personality disorder.
* FleetingPassionateHobbies: Hisao's expanded back story indicates this kind of behavior, and it becomes a worry point for Aiko, who wonders if he might get bored with her.
* NeatFreak: Perhaps the result of frequent hospitalization, or her overprotective parents, Amaya keeps her room in absolute order.
* FormerlyFat: Prior to puberty, Aiko was a chubby child, and that, among other things, cause friction with her schoolmates. It left her with some mild body issues that contributes to her tomboyish behavior.
* FriendlyRivalry: Aiko and Shizune spend much of the second act trying to one-up each other in pursuit of Hisao's affections.
* [[spoiler: NeverGotToSayGoodbye: Despite not having seen him for almost a year, and loving him dearly - or perhaps because of that fact - Aiko couldn't bring herself to visit her father as he lay in hospice, and didn't see him until the funeral.]]
* NiceToTheWaiter: Ina Kurai (Aiko's mom) is wealthy enough not to, but still makes a point of getting to know people's names, and holds back from complaining about minor inconveniences.
* NotAMorningPerson: Aiko is prone to this behavior, though if she wakes in a particularly good situation, she can overlook the bright sun and smiles in favor of enjoying the moment.
* [[spoiler: PresentAbsence: Hisao leaves for summer break at the end of act 4, and his absence becomes a driving force behind Aiko's actions in act 5.]]
* ClosetGeek: [[spoiler: Yoko appears as the typical girlie girl with an affinity for fashion, but underneath the rigid grace lurks a fantasy aficionado, jazz nerd, and gamer geek.]]
* GenkiGirl: Despite being deaf/mute, Naoko's presence can go from completely unnoticed to unbearably obvious - she is described as a silent Emi.
* GamerGirl: Somewhat of a tomboy for this and other reasons, Aiko is transitioning toward a more standard girlish personality - painting her toenails, getting dressed up for a date, wearing makeup - but she still retains many of her boyish mannerisms and hobbies. [[spoiler: Their root runs deep, and is part of her strong connection to her deceased father, so they probably won't ever disappear completely.]]
* EmbarrassingNickname: Numerous terms of endearment crop up over the course of the tale. Most notably:
** Due to her propensity for napping at all times of the day, Aiko's mom still calls her "Kitten". Frequent use has dulled the insult over the years--it's said lovingly, not maliciously--but she doesn't let anyone else call her that, not even Hisao or Amaya.
** Following an incident during the Yamaku Festival, Hisao gets dubbed "The Swooner", and it sticks.
** Yoko, due to her appearance, gets referenced as "Red" and "Jessica Rabbit", [[spoiler: and her father calls her "Jellybean", which she isn't terribly fond of.]]
* TheFashionista: Less obvious due to school uniforms and natural shyness, [[spoiler: not to mention being a ClosetGeek,]] Yoko is highly adept with fashion and materials, though she lacks the typically vapid personality disorder.
* FleetingPassionateHobbies: Hisao's expanded back story indicates this kind of behavior, and it becomes a worry point for Aiko, who wonders if he might get bored with her.
* NeatFreak: Perhaps the result of frequent hospitalization, or her overprotective parents, Amaya keeps her room in absolute order.
* FormerlyFat: Prior to puberty, Aiko was a chubby child, and that, among other things, cause friction with her schoolmates. It left her with some mild body issues that contributes to her tomboyish behavior.
* FriendlyRivalry: Aiko and Shizune spend much of the second act trying to one-up each other in pursuit of Hisao's affections.
* [[spoiler: NeverGotToSayGoodbye: Despite not having seen him for almost a year, and loving him dearly - or perhaps because of that fact - Aiko couldn't bring herself to visit her father as he lay in hospice, and didn't see him until the funeral.]]
* NiceToTheWaiter: Ina Kurai (Aiko's mom) is wealthy enough not to, but still makes a point of getting to know people's names, and holds back from complaining about minor inconveniences.
* NotAMorningPerson: Aiko is prone to this behavior, though if she wakes in a particularly good situation, she can overlook the bright sun and smiles in favor of enjoying the moment.
* [[spoiler: PresentAbsence: Hisao leaves for summer break at the end of act 4, and his absence becomes a driving force behind Aiko's actions in act 5.]]
to:
fashion, but underneath the rigid grace lurks a fantasy aficionado, jazz nerd,
gamer geek.]]
*
dementia due to having Huntington's Disease, and his eventual death in April 2006 - ~1
year before the story begins]].
* DontYouDarePityMe: Amaya can
* GamerGirl: Somewhat of a tomboy for this and other reasons, Aiko is transitioning toward a more standard girlish personality - painting
porcelain doll because of her
* EmbarrassingNickname: Numerous terms of endearment crop up over the course of
tale. Most notably:
** Due to her propensity for napping at all times of the day, Aiko's mom still
her "Kitten". Frequent use has dulled the insult over the years--it's said
not maliciously--but she doesn't let anyone else call her that, not even Hisao
Amaya.
** Following an incident during the Yamaku Festival, Hisao gets dubbed "The
and it sticks.
** Yoko, due to her appearance, gets referenced as "Red" and "Jessica
[[spoiler: and her father calls her "Jellybean", of which she isn't terribly
*
* FleetingPassionateHobbies: Hisao's expanded back story indicates this kind of behavior, and it becomes a worry point for Aiko, who wonders if he might get bored with her.
* NeatFreak: Perhaps the result of frequent hospitalization, or her overprotective parents, Amaya keeps her room in absolute order.
* FormerlyFat: Prior to puberty,
embarrassingly loud tirade about embracing the upcoming festival [[spoiler:that is
rooted in her
* FriendlyRivalry: Aiko and Shizune spend much of the second act trying to one-up each other in pursuit of Hisao's affections.
* [[spoiler: NeverGotToSayGoodbye: Despite not having seen him for almost a year, and loving him dearly - or perhaps because of that fact - Aiko couldn't bring herself to visit her father as he lay in hospice, and didn't see him until the funeral.
* FleetingPassionateHobbies: Hisao's expanded back story indicates this kind of
behavior, and it becomes a worry point for Aiko, who wonders if he might get bored with
her.
* FormerlyFat: Prior to puberty, Aiko was a chubby child, and that, among other things,
cause friction with her schoolmates. It left her with some mild body issues that
contributes to her tomboyish behavior.
* FriendlyRivalry: Aiko and Shizune spend much of the second act trying to one-up each
other in pursuit of Hisao's affections.
* GamerGirl: Somewhat of a tomboy for this and other reasons, Aiko is transitioning
toward a more standard girlish personality - painting her toenails, getting dressed up
for a date, wearing makeup - but she still retains many of her boyish mannerisms and
hobbies. [[spoiler: Their root runs deep, and is part of her strong connection to her
deceased father, so they probably won't ever disappear completely.]]
* GenkiGirl: Despite being deaf/mute, Naoko's presence can go from completely unnoticed
to unbearably obvious - she is described as a silent Emi.
* ICallHimMisterHappy: Aiko calls her breasts "Masa" and "Mune", and refers to Hisao's
penis as "Little Swooner".
* LeaveTheTwoLovebirdsAlone: During the beach outing,[[spoiler: everyone decides to go
out for a walk and leave Yoko and Kenta alone in the bungalow, expecting the two to hit
it off. And they do.]]
* LethalChef: Despite her mother being a trained chef, Aiko has trouble getting water
to boil, and has caused two separate kitchen fires--one of which got her banned from
using the girls' dorm kitchen.
* NeatFreak: Perhaps the result of frequent hospitalization, or her overprotective
parents, Amaya keeps her room in absolute order.
* [[spoiler: NeverGotToSayGoodbye: Despite not having seen him for almost a year, and
loving him dearly - or perhaps because of that fact - Aiko couldn't bring herself to
visit her father as he lay in hospice, and didn't see him until the funeral.]]
* NiceToTheWaiter: Ina Kurai (Aiko's mom) is wealthy enough not to, but still makes
point of getting to know people's names, and holds back from complaining about
inconveniences.
* NotAMorningPerson: Aiko is prone to this behavior, though if she wakes in
particularly good situation, she can overlook the bright sun and smiles in favor
enjoying the moment.
* OriginalCharacter: The canon characters are severely outnumbered in this fanfic. Only
Shizune and Misha feature heavily, but exist as tertiary characters most of the time.
* [[spoiler: PresentAbsence: Hisao leaves for summer break at the end of act 4, and
absence becomes a driving force behind Aiko's actions in act 5.]]
* SkunkStripe: Aiko is deaf in her left ear, and, under the pretense of indicating that
to casual observers, has bleached a strip of hair from the temple over that same ear.
* TenMinutesInTheCloset: Amaya and Tadao have a fight during Tanabata, the aftermath of
which drags on for so long that Aiko and Hisao conspire to lock them up in a shed until
they make up.
* TheFashionista: Less obvious due to school uniforms and natural shyness, [[spoiler:
not to mention being a ClosetGeek,]] Yoko is highly adept with fashion and materials,
though she lacks the typically vapid personality disorder.
* TitleDrop: In chapter 18.
* TwiceShy: Amaya and Tadao, until Aiko decides that enough is enough and nudges the
pair toward each other.
* UnusualEuphemism: "Happy valley" as a term for female genitalia.
* [[spoiler:YourDaysAreNumbered]]: [[spoiler:Aiko's inherited case of Huntington's
Disease is a major source of anxiety for her, especially where her relationship with
Hisao is concerned.]]
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** Yoko, due to her appearance, gets referenced as "Red" and "Jessica Rabbit", [[spoiler: and her father calls her "Jellybean", which she
to:
** Yoko, due to her appearance, gets referenced as "Red" and "Jessica Rabbit", [[spoiler: and her father calls her "Jellybean", which she isn't terribly fond of.]]
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* BetterAsFriends: Aiko and Kenta went on a date in their first year, but then decided their relationship was strictly platonic.
to:
* BetterAsFriends: Aiko and Kenta went on a date in their first year, which revealed they were entirely too similar for a romantic relationship, but then decided their relationship was strictly platonic.they're still good friends.
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* DisappearedDad: Part of Aiko's backstory involves [[spoiler:her father suffering from dementia due to having Huntington's Disease, before he finally kicked the bucket]].
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* ICallHimMisterHappy: Aiko calls her breasts "Masa" and "Mune".
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* ICallHimMisterHappy: Aiko calls her breasts "Masa" and "Mune"."Mune", and refers to Hisao's penis as "Little Swooner".
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* CharacterTics: Amaya with her thumbs holding her backpack, Hisao stroking his scar when he's nervous, the strangely uncomfortable position Tadao sits in at his desk, Kenta's dramatic speaking style and sarcasm, Yoko's straight-backed gait [[spoiler: (a result of her ballet lessons)]], and Aiko consistently giving away her thoughts through facial expressions.
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* CharacterTics: Several characters possess mannerisms unique to their personalities.
** Aiko consistently gives away her thoughts through facial expressions.
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** Hisao stroking his scar when he'snervous, the nervous.
** Tadao sits in a strangely uncomfortable positionTadao sits in at his desk, Kenta's desk.
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** Aiko consistently gives away her thoughts through facial expressions.
** Amaya with her thumbs holding her
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* GamerGirl: Somewhat of a tomboy for this and other reasons, Aiko is transitioning toward a more standard girlish personality--painting her toenails, getting dressed up for a date, wearing makeup--but she still retains many of her boyish mannerisms and hobbies. [[spoiler: Their root runs deep, and is part of her strong connection to her deceased father, so they probably won't ever disappear completely.]]
* EmbarrassingNickname: Due to her propensity for napping at all times of the day, Aiko's mom still calls her "Kitten". Frequent use has dulled the insult over the years--it's said lovingly, not maliciously--but she doesn't let anyone else call her that, not even Hisao or Amaya.
* TheFashionista: Less obvious due to school uniforms and natural shyness, [[spoiler: not to mention being a ClosetGeek,]] Yoko is the embodiment of this trope.
* EmbarrassingNickname: Due to her propensity for napping at all times of the day, Aiko's mom still calls her "Kitten". Frequent use has dulled the insult over the years--it's said lovingly, not maliciously--but she doesn't let anyone else call her that, not even Hisao or Amaya.
* TheFashionista: Less obvious due to school uniforms and natural shyness, [[spoiler: not to mention being a ClosetGeek,]] Yoko is the embodiment of this trope.
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* GenkiGirl: Despite being deaf/mute, Naoko's presence can go from completely unnoticed to unbearably obvious - she is described as a silent Emi.
* GamerGirl: Somewhat of a tomboy for this and other reasons, Aiko is transitioning toward a more standard girlishpersonality--painting personality - painting her toenails, getting dressed up for a date, wearing makeup--but makeup - but she still retains many of her boyish mannerisms and hobbies. [[spoiler: Their root runs deep, and is part of her strong connection to her deceased father, so they probably won't ever disappear completely.]]
* EmbarrassingNickname: Numerous terms of endearment crop up over the course of the tale. Most notably:
** Due to her propensity for napping at all times of the day, Aiko's mom still calls her "Kitten". Frequent use has dulled the insult over the years--it's said lovingly, not maliciously--but she doesn't let anyone else call her that, not even Hisao or Amaya.
** Following an incident during the Yamaku Festival, Hisao gets dubbed "The Swooner", and it sticks.
** Yoko, due to her appearance, gets referenced as "Red" and "Jessica Rabbit", [[spoiler: and her father calls her "Jellybean", which she
* TheFashionista: Less obvious due to school uniforms and natural shyness, [[spoiler: not to mention being a ClosetGeek,]] Yoko is highly adept with fashion and materials, though she lacks theembodiment of this trope.typically vapid personality disorder.
* GamerGirl: Somewhat of a tomboy for this and other reasons, Aiko is transitioning toward a more standard girlish
* EmbarrassingNickname: Numerous terms of endearment crop up over the course of the tale. Most notably:
** Due to her propensity for napping at all times of the day, Aiko's mom still calls her "Kitten". Frequent use has dulled the insult over the years--it's said lovingly, not maliciously--but she doesn't let anyone else call her that, not even Hisao or Amaya.
** Following an incident during the Yamaku Festival, Hisao gets dubbed "The Swooner", and it sticks.
** Yoko, due to her appearance, gets referenced as "Red" and "Jessica Rabbit", [[spoiler: and her father calls her "Jellybean", which she
* TheFashionista: Less obvious due to school uniforms and natural shyness, [[spoiler: not to mention being a ClosetGeek,]] Yoko is highly adept with fashion and materials, though she lacks the
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* Tomboy: GamerGirl: Somewhat of a tomboy for this and other reasons, Aiko is transitioning toward a more standard girlish personality--painting her toenails, getting dressed up for a date, wearing makeup--but she still retains many of her boyish mannerisms and hobbies. [[spoiler: Their root runs deep, and is part of her strong connection to her deceased father, so they probably won't ever disappear completely.]]
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* BadDreams: [[spoiler: Aiko suffered several traumatic moments in her youth, including a near-drowning, being a classroom punchline, and her father's awful disease and eventual death. These events, along with knowledge of future pains to come, fuel several recurring nightmares--all of which she keeps to herself.]]
* BadassBaritone: Hisao is depicted as possessing this quality of voice in intimate or reflective moments. It may only be perceived by Aiko.
* CharacterTics: Amaya with her thumbs holding her backpack, Hisao stroking his scar when he's nervous, the strangely uncomfortable position Tadao sits in at his desk, Kenta's dramatic speaking style and sarcasm, Yoko's straight-backed gait [[spoiler: (a result of her ballet lessons)]], and Aiko consistently giving away her thoughts through facial expressions.
* LethalChef: Despite her mother being a trained chef, Aiko has trouble getting water to boil, and has caused two separate kitchen fires--one of which got her banned from using the girls' dorm kitchen.
* ClosetGeek: [[spoiler: Yoko appears as the typical girlie girl with an affinity for fashion, but underneath the rigid grace lurks a fantasy aficionado, jazz nerd, and gamer geek.]]
* Tomboy: Aiko is transitioning toward a more standard girlish personality--painting her toenails, getting dressed up for a date, wearing makeup--but she still retains many of her boyish mannerisms and hobbies. [[spoiler: Their root runs deep, and is part of her strong connection to her deceased father, so they probably won't ever disappear completely.]]
* EmbarrassingNickname: Due to her propensity for napping at all times of the day, Aiko's mom still calls her "Kitten". Frequent use has dulled the insult over the years--it's said lovingly, not maliciously--but she doesn't let anyone else call her that, not even Hisao or Amaya.
* TheFashionista: Less obvious due to school uniforms and natural shyness, [[spoiler: not to mention being a ClosetGeek,]] Yoko is the embodiment of this trope.
* FleetingPassionateHobbies: Hisao's expanded back story indicates this kind of behavior, and it becomes a worry point for Aiko, who wonders if he might get bored with her.
* NeatFreak: Perhaps the result of frequent hospitalization, or her overprotective parents, Amaya keeps her room in absolute order.
* FormerlyFat: Prior to puberty, Aiko was a chubby child, and that, among other things, cause friction with her schoolmates. It left her with some mild body issues that contributes to her tomboyish behavior.
* FriendlyRivalry: Aiko and Shizune spend much of the second act trying to one-up each other in pursuit of Hisao's affections.
* [[spoiler: NeverGotToSayGoodbye: Despite not having seen him for almost a year, and loving him dearly - or perhaps because of that fact - Aiko couldn't bring herself to visit her father as he lay in hospice, and didn't see him until the funeral.]]
* NiceToTheWaiter: Ina Kurai (Aiko's mom) is wealthy enough not to, but still makes a point of getting to know people's names, and holds back from complaining about minor inconveniences.
* NotAMorningPerson: Aiko is prone to this behavior, though if she wakes in a particularly good situation, she can overlook the bright sun and smiles in favor of enjoying the moment.
* [[spoiler: PresentAbsence: Hisao leaves for summer break at the end of act 4, and his absence becomes a driving force behind Aiko's actions in act 5.]]
* BadassBaritone: Hisao is depicted as possessing this quality of voice in intimate or reflective moments. It may only be perceived by Aiko.
* CharacterTics: Amaya with her thumbs holding her backpack, Hisao stroking his scar when he's nervous, the strangely uncomfortable position Tadao sits in at his desk, Kenta's dramatic speaking style and sarcasm, Yoko's straight-backed gait [[spoiler: (a result of her ballet lessons)]], and Aiko consistently giving away her thoughts through facial expressions.
* LethalChef: Despite her mother being a trained chef, Aiko has trouble getting water to boil, and has caused two separate kitchen fires--one of which got her banned from using the girls' dorm kitchen.
* ClosetGeek: [[spoiler: Yoko appears as the typical girlie girl with an affinity for fashion, but underneath the rigid grace lurks a fantasy aficionado, jazz nerd, and gamer geek.]]
* Tomboy: Aiko is transitioning toward a more standard girlish personality--painting her toenails, getting dressed up for a date, wearing makeup--but she still retains many of her boyish mannerisms and hobbies. [[spoiler: Their root runs deep, and is part of her strong connection to her deceased father, so they probably won't ever disappear completely.]]
* EmbarrassingNickname: Due to her propensity for napping at all times of the day, Aiko's mom still calls her "Kitten". Frequent use has dulled the insult over the years--it's said lovingly, not maliciously--but she doesn't let anyone else call her that, not even Hisao or Amaya.
* TheFashionista: Less obvious due to school uniforms and natural shyness, [[spoiler: not to mention being a ClosetGeek,]] Yoko is the embodiment of this trope.
* FleetingPassionateHobbies: Hisao's expanded back story indicates this kind of behavior, and it becomes a worry point for Aiko, who wonders if he might get bored with her.
* NeatFreak: Perhaps the result of frequent hospitalization, or her overprotective parents, Amaya keeps her room in absolute order.
* FormerlyFat: Prior to puberty, Aiko was a chubby child, and that, among other things, cause friction with her schoolmates. It left her with some mild body issues that contributes to her tomboyish behavior.
* FriendlyRivalry: Aiko and Shizune spend much of the second act trying to one-up each other in pursuit of Hisao's affections.
* [[spoiler: NeverGotToSayGoodbye: Despite not having seen him for almost a year, and loving him dearly - or perhaps because of that fact - Aiko couldn't bring herself to visit her father as he lay in hospice, and didn't see him until the funeral.]]
* NiceToTheWaiter: Ina Kurai (Aiko's mom) is wealthy enough not to, but still makes a point of getting to know people's names, and holds back from complaining about minor inconveniences.
* NotAMorningPerson: Aiko is prone to this behavior, though if she wakes in a particularly good situation, she can overlook the bright sun and smiles in favor of enjoying the moment.
* [[spoiler: PresentAbsence: Hisao leaves for summer break at the end of act 4, and his absence becomes a driving force behind Aiko's actions in act 5.]]
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: In chapter two, "In Your Dreams", Aiko flies into an embarrassingly loud tirade about embracing the upcoming festival [[spoiler:that is rooted in her knowledge that life is short.]]
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[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6687 Tomorrow's Doom]] is an ongoing VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo fanfic starring Aiko Kurai, the class representative of 3-1. She drags an initially unenthusiastic Hisao to the festival, and their relationship eventually blossoms into romance. But can Aiko trust him with a grim secret about the future she can never have?
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!! Tomorrow's Doom contains examples of:
* AllJustADream
** The April Fool's chapter.
** Chapter 42, when Hisao marries Iwanako... which turns out to be an anxiety-fueled nightmare.
* BetterAsFriends: Aiko and Kenta went on a date in their first year, but then decided their relationship was strictly platonic.
* CampStraight: Satoru Miyoto, the owner of the "secret dress shop".
* DisappearedDad: Part of Aiko's backstory involves [[spoiler:her father suffering from dementia due to having Huntington's Disease, before he finally kicked the bucket]].
* DontYouDarePityMe: Amaya can make quite a fuss about people treating her like a porcelain doll because of her epilepsy.
* ICallHimMisterHappy: Aiko calls her breasts "Masa" and "Mune".
* LeaveTheTwoLovebirdsAlone: During the beach outing, everyone decides to go out for a walk and leave Yoko and Kenta alone in the bungalow, expecting the two to hit it off. And they do.
* OriginalCharacter: The canon characters are severely outnumbered in this fanfic.
* SkunkStripe: Aiko is deaf in her left ear, and has a white stripe on the left side of her hair to match it.
* TenMinutesInTheCloset: Amaya and Tadao have a fight during Tanabata, the aftermath of which drags on for so long that Aiko and Hisao conspire to lock them up in a shed until they make up.
* TitleDrop
* TwiceShy: Amaya and Tadao, until Aiko decides that enough is enough and nudges the pair toward each other.
* UnusualEuphemism: "Happy valley" as a term for female genitalia.
* [[spoiler:YourDaysAreNumbered]]: [[spoiler:Aiko's inherited case of Huntington's Disease is a major source of anxiety for her, especially where her relationship with Hisao is concerned.]]
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!! Tomorrow's Doom contains examples of:
* AllJustADream
** The April Fool's chapter.
** Chapter 42, when Hisao marries Iwanako... which turns out to be an anxiety-fueled nightmare.
* BetterAsFriends: Aiko and Kenta went on a date in their first year, but then decided their relationship was strictly platonic.
* CampStraight: Satoru Miyoto, the owner of the "secret dress shop".
* DisappearedDad: Part of Aiko's backstory involves [[spoiler:her father suffering from dementia due to having Huntington's Disease, before he finally kicked the bucket]].
* DontYouDarePityMe: Amaya can make quite a fuss about people treating her like a porcelain doll because of her epilepsy.
* ICallHimMisterHappy: Aiko calls her breasts "Masa" and "Mune".
* LeaveTheTwoLovebirdsAlone: During the beach outing, everyone decides to go out for a walk and leave Yoko and Kenta alone in the bungalow, expecting the two to hit it off. And they do.
* OriginalCharacter: The canon characters are severely outnumbered in this fanfic.
* SkunkStripe: Aiko is deaf in her left ear, and has a white stripe on the left side of her hair to match it.
* TenMinutesInTheCloset: Amaya and Tadao have a fight during Tanabata, the aftermath of which drags on for so long that Aiko and Hisao conspire to lock them up in a shed until they make up.
* TitleDrop
* TwiceShy: Amaya and Tadao, until Aiko decides that enough is enough and nudges the pair toward each other.
* UnusualEuphemism: "Happy valley" as a term for female genitalia.
* [[spoiler:YourDaysAreNumbered]]: [[spoiler:Aiko's inherited case of Huntington's Disease is a major source of anxiety for her, especially where her relationship with Hisao is concerned.]]
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