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!!This MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFic provides examples of these tropes:
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!!This MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic FanFic provides examples of these tropes:
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** Firewall himself is a [[MeaningfullRename]], but we don't know his original name.
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** Firewall himself is a [[MeaningfullRename]], MeaningfulRename, but we don't know his original name.
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* MeaningfulName: True to source, but [[DiscussedTrope discussed]] between Firewall and Twilight. Names may hint at a pony's special talent, and provide a clue for what they can do; but the pony still has power to choose. Fire still doesn't get it.
** Firewall himself is a [[MeaningfullRename]], but we don't know his original name.
** Firewall himself is a [[MeaningfullRename]], but we don't know his original name.
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* OneSteveLimit: Part of the reason Firewall was happy enough to abandon his human name and adopt a pony one.
--> Ye be crushin' me need ta be a unique snowflake, Fate!
--> Ye be crushin' me need ta be a unique snowflake, Fate!
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* NotSoDifferent: Firewall is Compared to [[spoiler: David; but done by Winter Sky. David was silly, tried hide human culture from the ponies, and was only serious if ponies were in danger too.]] Firewall has yet to come up with a serious difference between the two, aside from himself being somewhat philosophical.
** An odd variation when Storm Wing uses it to compare humans to ponies, in order to cool down Firewall.
** An odd variation when Storm Wing uses it to compare humans to ponies, in order to cool down Firewall.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Type 2 between Firewall and Storm Wing, and arguably Firewall and Luna as well.
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"So now, armed with my cigarettes and some cool unicorn magic, I have to fight off The Nightmare, my own Fanbronyism, and try to find the time to let the ponies give me a name. I know, I suggested getting a pony name first, but they're pretty excited about that. Not sure why. All of the ponies in this town are crazy.
"You can find my story [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/08/story-through-eyes-of-another-pony.html here]]."
"You can find my story [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/08/story-through-eyes-of-another-pony.html here]]."
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: After Firewall tells Pinkie Pie (and the rest of the Mane 6 and Celestia) about their being viewed on TV, Pinkie Pie waves at the reader, and Firewall tells them to wave back. Judging by the comments, most did.
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I highly doubt we need to spoiler \"Firewall\" anymore. It\'s not even much of a spoiler, plus we\'re already outright saying it on the Funny, Heartwarming, etc. pages. Also added some other stuff.
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* AntiMagic: Twilight Sparkle discovers a substance at the human's crash site that is impossible to manipulate via magic, dubbing it "Inmanipulon." It is later revealed to be the power behind [[spoiler: the effects of Poison Joke, and prolonged exposure can cause immortality and immunity to magic.]]
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* AntiMagic: Twilight Sparkle discovers a substance at the human's Firewall's crash site that is impossible to manipulate via magic, dubbing it "Inmanipulon." It is later revealed to be the power behind [[spoiler: the effects of Poison Joke, and prolonged exposure can cause immortality and immunity to magic.]]
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* AuthorAvatar: The protagonist.
* BreatherEpisode: After escaping [[spoiler:Nightmare Sol]], not only does the main character get some good sleep for the first time in a while, but the action and drama also take a back seat and let comedy take the reins for a bit.
* BurningWithAnger: This happens to the protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] in chapter 10 [[spoiler: after he gets into an argument with Luna, and is physically threatened by [[TheLancer Storm Wing]] while he's emotionally stressed]].
* CameFromTheSky: The protagonist. Who else?
* BreatherEpisode: After escaping [[spoiler:Nightmare Sol]], not only does the main character get some good sleep for the first time in a while, but the action and drama also take a back seat and let comedy take the reins for a bit.
* BurningWithAnger: This happens to the protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] in chapter 10 [[spoiler: after he gets into an argument with Luna, and is physically threatened by [[TheLancer Storm Wing]] while he's emotionally stressed]].
* CameFromTheSky: The protagonist. Who else?
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* AuthorAvatar: The protagonist.
Firewall.
* BreatherEpisode: After escaping [[spoiler:Nightmare Sol]], not only doesthe main character Firewall get some good sleep for the first time in a while, but the action and drama also take a back seat and let comedy take the reins for a bit.
* BurningWithAnger: This happens tothe protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] Firewall in chapter 10 [[spoiler: after he gets into an argument with Luna, and is physically threatened by [[TheLancer Storm Wing]] while he's emotionally stressed]].
* ButtMonkey: Firewall. He even lampshades it by name in chapter 12.
* CameFromTheSky:The protagonist.Firewall. Who else?
* BreatherEpisode: After escaping [[spoiler:Nightmare Sol]], not only does
* BurningWithAnger: This happens to
* ButtMonkey: Firewall. He even lampshades it by name in chapter 12.
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* CoolDownHug: Luna gives one to the protagonist after [[spoiler: Celestia's transformation into Nightmare Sol and the events following that]] finally start getting to him.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: The protagonist, though not really a moron, does act rather [[CloudCuckooLander goofy]] at times, which usually annoys the ponies around him. However, don't mess with him or his friends. [[spoiler: Shadow Shot learns this the hard way.]]
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: The protagonist, though not really a moron, does act rather [[CloudCuckooLander goofy]] at times, which usually annoys the ponies around him. However, don't mess with him or his friends. [[spoiler: Shadow Shot learns this the hard way.]]
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* CoolDownHug: Luna gives one to the protagonist Firewall after [[spoiler: Celestia's transformation into Nightmare Sol and the events following that]] finally start getting to him.
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass:The protagonist, Firewall, though not really a moron, does act rather [[CloudCuckooLander goofy]] at times, which usually annoys the ponies around him. However, don't mess with him or his friends. [[spoiler: Shadow Shot learns this the hard way.]]
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass:
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* DeadpanSnarker: The protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], Luna, and Storm Wing (y'know, screw him for that) are all [[UpToEleven big on the snark department]]. [[HilarityEnsues Hilarity tends to ensue]] [[SnarkToSnarkCombat whenever there's dialogue between them]].
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* DeadpanSnarker: The protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], Firewall, Luna, and Storm Wing (y'know, screw him for that) are all [[UpToEleven big on the snark department]]. [[HilarityEnsues Hilarity tends to ensue]] [[SnarkToSnarkCombat whenever there's dialogue between them]].
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* DontYouDarePityMe: In chapter 10, Luna refuses [[spoiler: Firewall's]] empathy after [[spoiler: she learns of Celestia's DarkSecret]].
** The protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] is driven to this after [[spoiler: he gets into a big fight with Luna, which leaves him distraught.]]
* DoubleTake: Day one is chock full of 'em, as well as [[FacePalm Facehooves]]
* FisherKingdom: The protagonist, a human from Earth, wakes to find himself as a unicorn pony in Equestria.
** The protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] is driven to this after [[spoiler: he gets into a big fight with Luna, which leaves him distraught.]]
* DoubleTake: Day one is chock full of 'em, as well as [[FacePalm Facehooves]]
* FisherKingdom: The protagonist, a human from Earth, wakes to find himself as a unicorn pony in Equestria.
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* DontYouDarePityMe: In chapter 10, Luna refuses [[spoiler: Firewall's]] Firewall's empathy after [[spoiler: she learns of Celestia's DarkSecret]].
**The protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] Firewall is driven to this after [[spoiler: he gets into a big fight with Luna, which leaves him distraught.]]
* DoubleTake: Day one is chock full of 'em, as well as [[FacePalmFacehooves]]
Facehooves]].
* FisherKingdom:The protagonist, Firewall, a human from Earth, wakes to find himself as a unicorn pony in Equestria.
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* DoubleTake: Day one is chock full of 'em, as well as [[FacePalm
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* FourthWallBreaking: The protagonist will frequently make an AsideComment directly to the reader, acknowledging their existence; this usually occurs for the purpose of Lampshading.
* FireIceLightning: Our protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], the pyromancer, Ice Pony, and Storm Wing, lightning slinging [[DisabilitySuperpower blind]] Pegasus (screw him for that too).
* FireIceLightning: Our protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], the pyromancer, Ice Pony, and Storm Wing, lightning slinging [[DisabilitySuperpower blind]] Pegasus (screw him for that too).
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* FourthWallBreaking: The protagonist Firewall will frequently make an AsideComment directly to the reader, acknowledging their existence; this usually occurs for the purpose of Lampshading.
* FireIceLightning:Our protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], the pyromancer, Ice Pony, Firewall, [[spoiler: Winter Sky]], and Storm Wing, lightning slinging [[DisabilitySuperpower blind]] Pegasus Wing (screw him for that too).too) respectively.
* FireIceLightning:
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** TheChick -- The protagonist
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** TheChick -- The protagonist
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** TheSmartGuy -- The protagonist (to a certain extent at least)/ Luna / Twilight
Twilight (sometimes Firewall, to an extent)
** TheBigGuy -- Storm Wing (screw the little guy forthat)
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* HammerSpace: One of the first things the protagonist does is pull a cigarette from here. After a quick {{doubletake}} he quickly accepts it as a utility.
* HandicappedBadass: Storm Wing is a personification of this trope (screw him in his badassery).
* HandicappedBadass: Storm Wing is a personification of this trope (screw him in his badassery).
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* GenreSavvy: Firewall and Luna both.
* HammerSpace: One of the first thingsthe protagonist Firewall does is pull a cigarette from here. After a quick {{doubletake}} he quickly accepts it as a utility.
* HandicappedBadass: Storm Wing is a personification of this trope (screw him in hisbadassery).badassery), since he's blind.
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** The Protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] experiences this in at least one encounter with TheBigBad.
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* HisNameReallyIsBarkeep: Cookie, the head chef for the castle, whom the Protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] calls the attention of by shouting "Cookie" as the typical nickname that would go along with such a professsion, before asking what his name was...[[{{Namedar}} only for the chef to reply that that really *was* his name]].
* IngestingKnowledge: One of Luna's spells--[[spoiler: which she soon passes on to the protagonist/Firewall]]--allows her to burn books and other reading materials, instantly transferring the information on said book to her. [[spoiler: She eventually [[UpToEleven pushes this spell to a new level by burning Firewall's phone, which happens to be connected to the Internet]]. By doing this she gains near omniscience of Earth's history and knowledge ([[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking It also makes her quite]] [[GenreSavvy savvy]]).]]
* LampshadeHanging: The protagonist will frequently point out some inexplicable phenomena, such as being able to manipulate objects with surprising dexterity despite only having fingerless hooves, or being able to store things in a nonexistent pocket. Generally accompanied by the assumed explanation that "it's magic and/or it's a cartoon, just roll with it".
* LukeIAmYourFather: The main character learns that [[spoiler: Azure Flora, TheDragon to the Nightmare]], is Storm Wing's mother. She doesn't know he's her son yet, though.
* IngestingKnowledge: One of Luna's spells--[[spoiler: which she soon passes on to the protagonist/Firewall]]--allows her to burn books and other reading materials, instantly transferring the information on said book to her. [[spoiler: She eventually [[UpToEleven pushes this spell to a new level by burning Firewall's phone, which happens to be connected to the Internet]]. By doing this she gains near omniscience of Earth's history and knowledge ([[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking It also makes her quite]] [[GenreSavvy savvy]]).]]
* LampshadeHanging: The protagonist will frequently point out some inexplicable phenomena, such as being able to manipulate objects with surprising dexterity despite only having fingerless hooves, or being able to store things in a nonexistent pocket. Generally accompanied by the assumed explanation that "it's magic and/or it's a cartoon, just roll with it".
* LukeIAmYourFather: The main character learns that [[spoiler: Azure Flora, TheDragon to the Nightmare]], is Storm Wing's mother. She doesn't know he's her son yet, though.
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* HisNameReallyIsBarkeep: Cookie, the head chef for the castle, whom the Protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] Firewall calls the attention of by shouting "Cookie" as the typical nickname that would go along with such a professsion, before asking what his name was...[[{{Namedar}} only for the chef to reply that that really *was* his name]].
* IHaveNoSon: [[spoiler: Storm Wing]] says an inversion of this to [[spoiler: Winter Sky]] during an argument. Even ''Firewall'' cringes at this.
* IngestingKnowledge: One of Luna'sspells--[[spoiler: which spells--which she soon passes on to the protagonist/Firewall]]--allows Firewall--allows her to burn books and other reading materials, instantly transferring the information on said book to her. [[spoiler: She eventually [[UpToEleven pushes this spell to a new level by burning Firewall's phone, which happens to be connected to the Internet]]. By doing this she gains near omniscience of Earth's history and knowledge ([[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking It also makes her quite]] [[GenreSavvy savvy]]).]]
* LampshadeHanging:The protagonist Firewall will frequently point out some inexplicable phenomena, such as being able to manipulate objects with surprising dexterity despite only having fingerless hooves, or being able to store things in a nonexistent pocket. Generally accompanied by the assumed explanation that "it's magic and/or it's a cartoon, just roll with it".
* LukeIAmYourFather:The main character Firewall learns that [[spoiler: Azure Flora, TheDragon to the Nightmare]], is Storm Wing's mother. She doesn't know he's her son yet, though.
* IHaveNoSon: [[spoiler: Storm Wing]] says an inversion of this to [[spoiler: Winter Sky]] during an argument. Even ''Firewall'' cringes at this.
* IngestingKnowledge: One of Luna's
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* MundaneUtility: The protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] uses his fire powers to [[FingerSnapLighter light his]] [[SmokingIsCool cigarettes]].
* NotSoStoic: The Protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], who usually hides most of his more depressing thoughts through his eccentricity and general wackiness, breaks down after the Nightmare [[spoiler: takes control of Celestia]], only to be comforted by Luna.
* OriginalCharacter: The protagonist (of course), as well as at least half of the relevant characters in the story.
* NotSoStoic: The Protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], who usually hides most of his more depressing thoughts through his eccentricity and general wackiness, breaks down after the Nightmare [[spoiler: takes control of Celestia]], only to be comforted by Luna.
* OriginalCharacter: The protagonist (of course), as well as at least half of the relevant characters in the story.
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* MundaneUtility: The protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] Firewall uses his fire powers to [[FingerSnapLighter light his]] [[SmokingIsCool cigarettes]].
* NeverTrustATrailer: In chapter 12, Luna tells Firewall they need to have a chat, alone, and Firewall remarks how he's been asked that three times already. The preview for this chapter treated the event as more dramatic, mainly thanks to giving it out of context.
* NotSoStoic:The Protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], Firewall, who usually hides most of his more depressing thoughts through his eccentricity and general wackiness, breaks down after the Nightmare [[spoiler: takes control of Celestia]], only to be comforted by Luna.
* OriginalCharacter:The protagonist Firewall (of course), as well as at least half of the relevant characters in the story.
* NeverTrustATrailer: In chapter 12, Luna tells Firewall they need to have a chat, alone, and Firewall remarks how he's been asked that three times already. The preview for this chapter treated the event as more dramatic, mainly thanks to giving it out of context.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Like Stoic and Lafter battle for dominance within the main character's head, the main character's fiery exuberance is balanced by Storm Wing's calculating stoicism.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Played straight with both Celestia and Luna, [[UpToEleven especially in the case of the latter]], who becomes the [[PalsWithJesus best friend]] of the protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], and eventually [[spoiler: his pseudo-romantic interest]].
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Played straight with both Celestia and Luna, [[UpToEleven especially in the case of the latter]], who becomes the [[PalsWithJesus best friend]] of the protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], and eventually [[spoiler: his pseudo-romantic interest]].
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* RedOniBlueOni: Like Stoic and Lafter battle for dominance within the main character's Firewall's head, the main character's his fiery exuberance is balanced by Storm Wing's calculating stoicism.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Played straight with both Celestia and Luna, [[UpToEleven especially in the case of the latter]], who becomes the [[PalsWithJesus best friend]] ofthe protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], Firewall, and eventually [[spoiler: his pseudo-romantic interest]].
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Played straight with both Celestia and Luna, [[UpToEleven especially in the case of the latter]], who becomes the [[PalsWithJesus best friend]] of
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* RunningGag: About anytime Stormwing (screw him) is mentioned The protagonist likes to add on a 'screw him' after his name.
** The Protagonist[[spoiler:/Firewall]] is very jealous of pegasi simply because they can use their wings to shrug. He comments nearly every time.
* SelfInsertFic: While the protagonist indeed began as an AuthorAvatar, the author himself acknowledges that it has grown to the point of being an OriginalCharacter.
** The Protagonist[[spoiler:/Firewall]] is very jealous of pegasi simply because they can use their wings to shrug. He comments nearly every time.
* SelfInsertFic: While the protagonist indeed began as an AuthorAvatar, the author himself acknowledges that it has grown to the point of being an OriginalCharacter.
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* RunningGag: About anytime Stormwing Sometimes when Storm Wing (screw him) is mentioned The protagonist likes to add on a 'screw him' after his name.
mentioned, Firewall will say "screw him" in some form or another. Usually if he just did something that annoys or angers Firewall.
**The Protagonist[[spoiler:/Firewall]] Firewall is very jealous of pegasi simply because they can use their wings to shrug. He comments nearly every time.
* SelfInsertFic: Whilethe protagonist Firewall indeed began as an AuthorAvatar, the author himself acknowledges that it has grown to the point of being an OriginalCharacter.
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* ShutUpHannibal: The protagonist delivers these to the Nightmare on a regular basis.
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* ShutUpHannibal: The protagonist Firewall delivers these to the Nightmare on a regular basis.
* SpitTake: Of all ponies, [[spoiler: '''''Princess Celestia''''']] does this around a campfire, after learning [[spoiler: how most humans view her as a cruel tyrant]]. Twice, in fact, though the second time, [[ButtMonkey Firewall]] ends up covered in cider.
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* TheShadowKnows: When Celestia discovers that the protagonist Firewall is a human, she creates a light that causes him to cast a human shadow.shadow.
* {{Troll}}: Luna, especially to Firewall. Firewall will usually try to counter-troll her, though.
* {{Troll}}: Luna, especially to Firewall. Firewall will usually try to counter-troll her, though.
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[[caption-width-right:250:This is the kind of thing every brony wishes for...[[CerebusSyndrome minus the whole Nightmare thing]].]]
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: The protagonist, though not really a moron, does act rather [[CloudCuckooLander goofy]] at times, which usually annoys the ponies around him. However, don't mess with him or his friends. [[spoiler: Shadow Shot learns this the hard way.]]
** Even [[TheLancer Storm]] [[HandicappedBadass Wing]] seems somewhat afraid of him when he's mad.
** Even [[TheLancer Storm]] [[HandicappedBadass Wing]] seems somewhat afraid of him when he's mad.
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CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS GRAMMAR NAZIS, YAY!
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** The protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] is driven to this after [[spoiler: he gets into a big fight with Luna, which leaves him a distraught.]]
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** The protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] is driven to this after [[spoiler: he gets into a big fight with Luna, which leaves him a distraught.]]
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* HammerSpace: One of the first things the protagonist does is pull a cigarette from here, after here. After a quick {{doubletake}} he quickly accepts it as a utility.
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** The Protagonist[[spoiler:/Firewall]] is very jealous of pegusi simply because they can use their wings to shrug. He comments nearly every time.
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* TheShadowKnows: When Celestia discovers that the protagonist is a human human, she creates a light that causes him to cast a human shadow.
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* BreatherEpisode: Not only does the main character get some good sleep for the first time in a while, but the action and drama also take a back seat and let comedy take the reins for a bit.
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* BreatherEpisode: Not After escaping [[spoiler:Nightmare Sol]], not only does the main character get some good sleep for the first time in a while, but the action and drama also take a back seat and let comedy take the reins for a bit.
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** The Protagonist[[spoiler:/Firewall]] is very jealous of pegusi simply because they can use their wings to shrug. He comments nearly every time.
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Just reread the chapter, the shadow isn\'t human all the time. Whoops.
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* TheShadowKnows: The protagonist's shadow When Celestia discovers that the protagonist is still human.a human she creates a light that causes him to cast a human shadow.
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* DoubleTake: Day one is chock full of 'em, as well as [[FacePalm Facehooves]]
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* HammerSpace: One of the first things the protagonist does is pull a cigarette from here, after a quick {{doubletake}} he quickly accepts it as a utility.
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S Pa G fix.
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* TheShadowKnows the protagonists TheShadowKnows: The protagonist's shadow is still human.
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* {{Unobtanium}}: InmanipulonInmanipulon.
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** [[spoiler: Though there were humans before him who didn't change...]]
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* DeadpanSnarker: The protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], Luna, and Storm Wing are all [[UpToEleven big on the snark department]]. [[HilarityEnsues Hilarity tends to ensue]] [[SnarkToSnarkCombat whenever there's dialogue between them]].
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* DeadpanSnarker: The protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], Luna, and Storm Wing (y'know, screw him for that) are all [[UpToEleven big on the snark department]]. [[HilarityEnsues Hilarity tends to ensue]] [[SnarkToSnarkCombat whenever there's dialogue between them]].
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* FireIceLightning: Our protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], the pyromancer, Ice Pony, and Storm Wing, lightning slinging [[DisabilitySuperpower blind]] Pegasus.
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* FireIceLightning: Our protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], the pyromancer, Ice Pony, and Storm Wing, lightning slinging [[DisabilitySuperpower blind]] Pegasus.Pegasus (screw him for that too).
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** TheLancer -- Storm WingWing (screw 'Captain' Storm Wing)
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** TheBigGuy -- Storm WingWing (screw the little guy for that)
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"You can find my story [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/08/story-through-eyes-of-another-pony.html?m=1 here]]."
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"You can find my story [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/08/story-through-eyes-of-another-pony.html?m=1 html here]]."
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** The protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] is driven to this after [[spoiler: he gets into a big fight with Luna, which leaves him a [[PuttingItMildly little disraught]].]]
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** The protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] is driven to this after [[spoiler: he gets into a big fight with Luna, which leaves him a [[PuttingItMildly little disraught]].distraught.]]
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* HisNameReallyIsBarkeep: Cookie, the head royal chef, whom the Protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] calls the attention of by shouting his name...before asking what his name really was, only to find out that that *is* his name.
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* HisNameReallyIsBarkeep: Cookie, the head royal chef, chef for the castle, whom the Protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] calls the attention of by shouting his name..."Cookie" as the typical nickname that would go along with such a professsion, before asking what his name really was, was...[[{{Namedar}} only for the chef to find out reply that that *is* really *was* his name.name]].
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* AuthorAvatarAuthorAvatar: The protagonist.
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* CameFromTheSkyCameFromTheSky: The protagonist. Who else?
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* OriginalCharacterOriginalCharacter: The protagonist (of course), as well as at least half of the relevant characters in the story.
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* PlayedForLaughsPlayedForLaughs: Pretty much the story itself, in that it uses so many elements to great effect that should normally make this just another terrible fanfic.
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Played straight with both Celestia and Luna, [[UpToEleven especially in the case of the latter]], who becomes the [[PalsWithJesus best friend]] of the protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], and eventually [[spoiler: his love interest]].
** [[spoiler: Prince Blueblood]] is seen in the crowd of ponies who are [[spoiler: defending Applelossa from the incoming shadow army]].
* RuleOfFunny
** [[spoiler: Prince Blueblood]] is seen in the crowd of ponies who are [[spoiler: defending Applelossa from the incoming shadow army]].
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Played straight with both Celestia and Luna, [[UpToEleven especially in the case of the latter]], who becomes the [[PalsWithJesus best friend]] of the protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], and eventually [[spoiler: his love pseudo-romantic interest]].
** [[spoiler: PrinceBlueblood]] Blueblood, who would ordinarily be adverse to raising a hoof to do most things for himself, let alone anything at all for anypony else]] is seen in the crowd of ponies who are [[spoiler: defending Applelossa from the incoming shadow army]].
*RuleOfFunnyRuleOfFunny: The primary reason why so many elements usually characteristic of a bad fanfic are used.
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* WriteWhatYouKnowWriteWhatYouKnow: the OC protagonist as a self-insert AuthorAvatar
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** Later revealed that [[spoiler: it is not so much an anti-magic effect as it is an intensely focused form of magic that sucks magic from its surroundings – somewhat akin to a black hole of/for magic]].
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* PhlebotinumRebelPhlebotinumRebel: The Nightmare
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* HisNameReallyIsBarkeep: Cookie, the head royal chef, whom the Protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] calls the attention of by shouting his name...before asking what his name really was, only to find out that that *is* his name.
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* BurningWithAnger: This happens to the protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] in chapter 10 [[spoiler: after he gets into an argument with Luna, and is physically threatened by [[TheLancer Storm Wing]] while he's emotionally stressed]]. It was inevitable considering the fact that his magical abilities [[PlayingWithFire revolve around fire]].
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* BurningWithAnger: This happens to the protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] in chapter 10 [[spoiler: after he gets into an argument with Luna, and is physically threatened by [[TheLancer Storm Wing]] while he's emotionally stressed]]. It was inevitable considering the fact that his magical abilities [[PlayingWithFire revolve around fire]].
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Adding some more examples from chapter 10
* BurningWithAnger: This happens to the protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] in chapter 10 [[spoiler: after he gets into an argument with Luna, and is physically threatened by [[TheLancer Storm Wing]] while he's emotionally stressed]]. It was inevitable considering the fact that his magical abilities [[PlayingWithFire revolve around fire]].
* DontYouDarePityMe: In chapter 10, Luna refuses [[spoiler: Firewall's]] empathy after [[spoiler: she learns of Celestia's DarkSecret]].
** The protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] is driven to this after [[spoiler: he gets into a big fight with Luna, which leaves him a [[PuttingItMildly little disraught]].]]
** The protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]] is driven to this after [[spoiler: he gets into a big fight with Luna, which leaves him a [[PuttingItMildly little disraught]].]]
* HandicappedBadass: Storm Wing is a personification of this trope.
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* NotSoStoic: The Protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], who usually hides most of his more depressing thoughts through his eccentricity and general wackiness, breaks down after the Nightmare [[spoiler: takes control of Celestia]], only to be comforted by Luna.
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* NotSoStoic: The Protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], who usually hides most of his more depressing thoughts through his eccentricity and general wackiness, breaks down after the Nightmare [[spoiler: takes control of Celestia]], only to be comforted by Luna.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Like Stoic and Lafter battle for dominance within the main character's head, the main character's fiery exuberance is balanced by Storm Wing's calculating stoicism.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Like Stoic and Lafter battle for dominance within the main character's head, the main character's fiery exuberance is balanced by Storm Wing's calculating stoicism. stoicism.
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Played straight with both Celestia and Luna, [[UpToEleven especially in the case of the latter]], who becomes the [[PalsWithJesus best friend]] of the protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], and eventually [[spoiler: his love interest]].
** [[spoiler: Prince Blueblood]] is seen in the crowd of ponies who are [[spoiler: defending Applelossa from the incoming shadow army]].
* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Played straight with both Celestia and Luna, [[UpToEleven especially in the case of the latter]], who becomes the [[PalsWithJesus best friend]] of the protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], and eventually [[spoiler: his love interest]].
** [[spoiler: Prince Blueblood]] is seen in the crowd of ponies who are [[spoiler: defending Applelossa from the incoming shadow army]].
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* FireIceLightning: Our protagonist, the pyromancer, the ice-wielding pony in the most recent chapters (If he was named, I cannot recall it at the moment), and Storm Wing, lightning slinging [[DisabilitySuperpower blind]] Pegasus.
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* FireIceLightning: Our protagonist, protagonist/[[spoiler: Firewall]], the pyromancer, the ice-wielding pony in the most recent chapters (If he was named, I cannot recall it at the moment), Ice Pony, and Storm Wing, lightning slinging [[DisabilitySuperpower blind]] Pegasus.