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''This Pendant Heart'' is a ''Anime/PrincessTutu'' fanfiction written by [=LunaSphere=] and illustrated byMangaka-chan. It is a sequel to the anime, with all the characters trying to navigate what a happy ending means.
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''This Pendant Pendent Heart'' is a ''Anime/PrincessTutu'' fanfiction written by [=LunaSphere=] and illustrated byMangaka-chan.by Mangaka-chan. It is a sequel to the anime, with all the characters trying to navigate what a happy ending means.
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''This Pendant Heart'' is a fanfiction by [=LunaSphere=] and Mangaka-chan that is a sequel to ''Anime/PrincessTutu'' with all the characters trying to navigate what a happy ending means.
Can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3455875/1/ here]] on fanfiction.net, and [[https://sites.google.com/site/thispendentheart/intro here]] with illustrations.
Can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3455875/1/ here]] on fanfiction.net, and [[https://sites.google.com/site/thispendentheart/intro here]] with illustrations.
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''This Pendant Heart'' is a fanfiction by [=LunaSphere=] and Mangaka-chan that is a sequel to ''Anime/PrincessTutu'' fanfiction written by [=LunaSphere=] and illustrated byMangaka-chan. It is a sequel to the anime, with all the characters trying to navigate what a happy ending means.
Can It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3455875/1/ here]] on fanfiction.net, and [[https://sites.google.com/site/thispendentheart/intro here]] with illustrations.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Having the raven's blood flowing through their veins doesn't make Rue or Mytho evil, nor do Rue's "darker" emotions, such as pettiness and jealousy make ''her'' evil, and in the end, when she dances as the Raven Princess once more, she does not call for the evilness of the CreepyCrows from Drosselmeyer's story, instead she dances for the wildness of the raven, and accepts that it will always be a part of her.
** She also has command of ravens in general, including the baby ones Mytho kept bringing back to their room. Those aren't evil either.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: ''Yes''.
** She also has command of ravens in general, including the baby ones Mytho kept bringing back to their room. Those aren't evil either.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: ''Yes''.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Having the raven's blood flowing through their veins doesn't make Rue or Mytho evil, nor do Rue's "darker" emotions, such as pettiness and jealousy make ''her'' evil, and in evil. In the end, when she dances as the Raven Princess once more, she does not call for the evilness of the CreepyCrows from Drosselmeyer's story, instead she dances for the wildness of the raven, and accepts that it will always be a part of her.
**her. She also has command of ravens in general, including the baby ones Mytho kept bringing back to their room. Those aren't evil either.
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* GildedCage: The fairytale kingdom palace is this for Rue in the beginning, as this bit from chapter 7 demonstrates:
-->But really, [Rue] felt herself trapped in a cage as completely as she ever had when she thought the Monster Raven her father. [...] Now the cage was much more beautiful—not just gilded, but pure gold bars as fine as spidersilk, but bars nonetheless, festooned with chains of precious gems, a perch lined with seed pearls, a cage nonetheless. She loved Mythos. But human girls cannot live entirely in fairytales even if they have found their fairytale princes.
* HopeSpot: Over and over. Yay, Duck's back, but Fakir's missing! Yay, Fakir's back, but something's wrong! Mytho and Rue are here to help, but [[spoiler: Fakir is driving others to despair!]] Yay, we fixed him, but [[spoiler: despair is turning all the townsfolk into stone!]] Yay, [[spoiler: Duck can fix it, but she's really hurt and might die!]] After that it starts picking up for real.
-->But really, [Rue] felt herself trapped in a cage as completely as she ever had when she thought the Monster Raven her father. [...] Now the cage was much more beautiful—not just gilded, but pure gold bars as fine as spidersilk, but bars nonetheless, festooned with chains of precious gems, a perch lined with seed pearls, a cage nonetheless. She loved Mythos. But human girls cannot live entirely in fairytales even if they have found their fairytale princes.
* HopeSpot: Over and over. Yay, Duck's back, but Fakir's missing! Yay, Fakir's back, but something's wrong! Mytho and Rue are here to help, but [[spoiler: Fakir is driving others to despair!]] Yay, we fixed him, but [[spoiler: despair is turning all the townsfolk into stone!]] Yay, [[spoiler: Duck can fix it, but she's really hurt and might die!]] After that it starts picking up for real.
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* GildedCage: The fairytale fairy tale kingdom palace is this for Rue in the beginning, as this bit from chapter 7 demonstrates:
beginning.
-->But really, [Rue] felt herself trapped in a cage as completely as she ever had when she thought the Monster Raven her father. [...] Now the cage was much more beautiful—not just gilded, but pure gold bars as fine as spidersilk, but bars nonetheless, festooned with chains of precious gems, a perch lined with seed pearls, a cage nonetheless. She lovedMythos.Mytho. But human girls cannot live entirely in fairytales even if they have found their fairytale princes.
* HopeSpot:Over and over. Yay, Duck's back, but Fakir's missing! Yay, Fakir's back, but something's wrong! Mytho and Rue are here to help, but [[spoiler: Fakir is driving others to despair!]] Yay, we fixed him, but [[spoiler: despair is turning all Like in the townsfolk into stone!]] Yay, [[spoiler: Duck can fix it, but she's really hurt and might die!]] After that it starts picking up for real.anime, this is a recurring problem.
-->But really, [Rue] felt herself trapped in a cage as completely as she ever had when she thought the Monster Raven her father. [...] Now the cage was much more beautiful—not just gilded, but pure gold bars as fine as spidersilk, but bars nonetheless, festooned with chains of precious gems, a perch lined with seed pearls, a cage nonetheless. She loved
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* LoveMakesYouCrazy[=/=]LoveMakesYouEvil: Fakir. When he realizes that Duck is forgetting her life as a girl (and him), he decides to give her a shard of his own heart to let her be human again. The part he gives her? His humanity.
** Then it gets worse as he starts giving up the rest of himself until Duck shows up to give it back.
** Then it gets worse as he starts giving up the rest of himself until Duck shows up to give it back.
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* LoveMakesYouCrazy[=/=]LoveMakesYouEvil: LoveMakesYouCrazy: Fakir. When he realizes that Duck is forgetting her life as a girl (and him), he decides to give her a shard of his own heart to let her be human again. The part he gives her? His humanity. \n** Then it gets worse as he starts giving up the rest of himself until Duck shows up to give it back.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: While the Bookkeepers are really only heroes in their own minds, they really mess things up by trying to destroy the story Fakir had started. Then we find out [[spoiler: Autor messed with the story before they did]] out of jealousy [[spoiler: for Fakir's powers]], also possibly messing things up.
** Also, Mytho, showing up one second early to the climactic fight, thus necessitating a climactic fight since Duck didn't say what she wanted to yet.
** Also, Mytho, showing up one second early to the climactic fight, thus necessitating a climactic fight since Duck didn't say what she wanted to yet.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: While the NiceJobBreakingItHero:
** The Bookkeepersare really only heroes in their own minds, they really mess things up by trying to destroy the story Fakir had started. Then we find out [[spoiler: Autor messed with the story before they did]] out of jealousy [[spoiler: for Fakir's powers]], also possibly messing things up.
** Also,Mytho, showing Mytho shows up one second early to the climactic fight, thus necessitating a climactic fight since Duck didn't say what she wanted to yet.
** The Bookkeepers
** Also,
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* RetGone: Twice over. There's the {{ret gone}} at the end of ''Princess Tutu'' that makes everyone forget about Duck, and then there's another one when Fakir gives his humanity to Duck, and no one remembers he ever existed. Not even Duck. At first...
* TheWisePrince: Mytho, still.
** Though he still has a few of his "didn't think that through enough" selfless moments.
* TheWisePrince: Mytho, still.
** Though he still has a few of his "didn't think that through enough" selfless moments.
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* RetGone: Twice over. There's the {{ret gone}} at the end of ''Princess Tutu'' that makes everyone forget about Duck, and then there's another one when Fakir gives his humanity to Duck, and no one remembers he ever existed. Not even Duck. At first...
Duck, at first.
* TheWisePrince:Mytho, still.
** ThoughMytho though he still has a few of his "didn't think that through enough" selfless moments.
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''This Pendant Heart'' is a fanfiction by [=LunaSphere=] and Mangaka-chan that is a sequel to the series, and an absolutely brilliant one at that, ''Anime/PrincessTutu'' with all the characters trying to navigate what a happy ending means.
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-->'''Fakir''': You...little...fool!fool!
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Summary: When the story ends, almost everyone in Gold Crown Town forgets that their lives had once been turned upside down by a story, that there had ever been a girl named Duck at all. But when Duck herself begins to forget, Fakir finds himself forced to write a story that costs him dearly.
A fantastic could be canon fic by [=LunaSphere=] that's a sequel to the series, and an absolutely brilliant one at that, with all the characters trying to navigate what a happy ending means.
A fantastic could be canon fic by [=LunaSphere=] that's a sequel to the series, and an absolutely brilliant one at that, with all the characters trying to navigate what a happy ending means.
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''This Pendant Heart'' is a fanfiction by [=LunaSphere=]
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* InsultOfEndearment: Fakir, towards Duck.
-->“Moron,” Fakir said, which was somehow supposed to mean ''You could never be a burden to me''. “Idiot,” he had added for good measure, not sure if he was insulting her or himself anymore. Both probably.
-->“Moron,” Fakir said, which was somehow supposed to mean ''You could never be a burden to me''. “Idiot,” he had added for good measure, not sure if he was insulting her or himself anymore. Both probably.
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler: Autor]] after screwing up big time.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Having the raven's blood flowing through their veins doesn't make Rue or Mytho evil, nor do Rue's "darker" emotions, such as pettiness and jealousy make ''her'' evil, and in the end, when she dances as the Raven Princess once more, she does not call for the evilness of the RavensAndCrows from Drosselmeyer's story, instead she dances for the wildness of the raven, and accepts that it will always be a part of her.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Having the raven's blood flowing through their veins doesn't make Rue or Mytho evil, nor do Rue's "darker" emotions, such as pettiness and jealousy make ''her'' evil, and in the end, when she dances as the Raven Princess once more, she does not call for the evilness of the RavensAndCrows from Drosselmeyer's story, instead she dances for the wildness of the raven, and accepts that it will always be a part of her.
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler: Autor]] after screwing up big time.
time.
* CreepyCrows: Well, given [[Anime/PrincessTutu the source material]]... But their more "trickster" aspects are pointed out, and it's also given that they were not the bad guys in some of the older stories, that was [[BigBad Drosselmeyer's]] doing in "The Prince and the Raven".
* DarkIsNotEvil: Having the raven's blood flowing through their veins doesn't make Rue or Mytho evil, nor do Rue's "darker" emotions, such as pettiness and jealousy make ''her'' evil, and in the end, when she dances as the Raven Princess once more, she does not call for the evilness of theRavensAndCrows CreepyCrows from Drosselmeyer's story, instead she dances for the wildness of the raven, and accepts that it will always be a part of her.
* CreepyCrows: Well, given [[Anime/PrincessTutu the source material]]... But their more "trickster" aspects are pointed out, and it's also given that they were not the bad guys in some of the older stories, that was [[BigBad Drosselmeyer's]] doing in "The Prince and the Raven".
* DarkIsNotEvil: Having the raven's blood flowing through their veins doesn't make Rue or Mytho evil, nor do Rue's "darker" emotions, such as pettiness and jealousy make ''her'' evil, and in the end, when she dances as the Raven Princess once more, she does not call for the evilness of the
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* HopeSpot: Over and over. Yay, Duck's back, but Fakir's missing! Yay, Fakir's back, but something's wrong! Mytho and Rue are here to help, but [[spoiler: Fakir is driving others to despair!]] Yay, we fixed him, but [[spoiler: despair is turning all the townsfolk into stone!]] Yay, [[spoiler: Duck can fix it, but she's really hurt and might die!]] After that it stars picking up for real.
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* HopeSpot: Over and over. Yay, Duck's back, but Fakir's missing! Yay, Fakir's back, but something's wrong! Mytho and Rue are here to help, but [[spoiler: Fakir is driving others to despair!]] Yay, we fixed him, but [[spoiler: despair is turning all the townsfolk into stone!]] Yay, [[spoiler: Duck can fix it, but she's really hurt and might die!]] After that it stars starts picking up for real.
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* YouFool: Fakir calls Ahiru this [[spoiler:when she tries to restore his heart]]:
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* YouFool: Fakir calls Ahiru Duck this [[spoiler:when she tries to restore his heart]]:
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Summary: When the story ends, almost everyone in Goldcrown Town forgets that their lives had once been turned upside down by a story, that there had ever been a girl named Duck at all. But when Duck herself begins to forget, Fakir finds himself forced to write a story that costs him dearly.
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Summary: When the story ends, almost everyone in Goldcrown Gold Crown Town forgets that their lives had once been turned upside down by a story, that there had ever been a girl named Duck at all. But when Duck herself begins to forget, Fakir finds himself forced to write a story that costs him dearly.
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** She also has command of ravens in general. Including the baby ones Mytho kept bringing back to their room. Those aren't evil either.
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* FanSequel: Written as a third season to ''Anime/PrincessTutu''.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Having the raven's blood flowing through their veins doesn't make Rue or Mytho evil, nor do Rue's "darker" emotions, such as pettiness and jealousy make ''her'' evil, and in the end, when she dances as the Raven Princess once more, she does not call for the evilness of the {{ravens and crows}} from Drosselmeyer's story, instead she dances for the wildness of the raven, and accepts that it will always be a part of her.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Having the raven's blood flowing through their veins doesn't make Rue or Mytho evil, nor do Rue's "darker" emotions, such as pettiness and jealousy make ''her'' evil, and in the end, when she dances as the Raven Princess once more, she does not call for the evilness of the {{ravens and crows}} RavensAndCrows from Drosselmeyer's story, instead she dances for the wildness of the raven, and accepts that it will always be a part of her.
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* EmotionEater: Much like evil-Mytho wanted hearts, evil-Fakir wants to feel others' despair.
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* EmotionEater: Much like evil-Mytho wanted hearts, evil-Fakir wants to feel others' despair, though for him it's to numb his own despair.
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* {{Utopia}}: Mytho's homeland- or so it seems. In reality, it's a stagnant place where everything is perfect, but no one creates or moves forward thanks to there being no ravens there. In the end, the ravens return, and the land begins to move forward again, with art and sorrow and moving forward.
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* {{Utopia}}: Mytho's homeland- or so it seems. In reality, it's a stagnant place where everything is perfect, but no one creates or moves forward thanks to there being no ravens there. In the end, the ravens return, and the land begins to move forward again, with art and sorrow and moving forward.forward.
* YouFool: Fakir calls Ahiru this [[spoiler:when she tries to restore his heart]]:
-->'''Fakir''': You...little...fool!
* YouFool: Fakir calls Ahiru this [[spoiler:when she tries to restore his heart]]:
-->'''Fakir''': You...little...fool!
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* GildedCage: The fairytale kingdom palace is this for Rue, as this bit from chapter 7 demonstrates:
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* GildedCage: The fairytale kingdom palace is this for Rue, Rue in the beginning, as this bit from chapter 7 demonstrates:
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* GildedCage: The fairytale kingdom palace is this for Rue, as this bit from chapter 7 demonstrates:
-->But really, [Rue] felt herself trapped in a cage as completely as she ever had when she thought the Monster Raven her father. [...] Now the cage was much more beautiful—not just gilded, but pure gold bars as fine as spidersilk, but bars nonetheless, festooned with chains of precious gems, a perch lined with seed pearls, a cage nonetheless. She loved Mythos. But human girls cannot live entirely in fairytales even if they have found their fairytale princes.
-->But really, [Rue] felt herself trapped in a cage as completely as she ever had when she thought the Monster Raven her father. [...] Now the cage was much more beautiful—not just gilded, but pure gold bars as fine as spidersilk, but bars nonetheless, festooned with chains of precious gems, a perch lined with seed pearls, a cage nonetheless. She loved Mythos. But human girls cannot live entirely in fairytales even if they have found their fairytale princes.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: ''Yes.''
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: ''Yes.'' ''Yes''.
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* EquivalentExchange: Explored a bit in Chapter 3
* HopeSpot: Over and over. Yay, Duck's back, but Fakir's missing! Yay, Fakir's back, but something's wrong! Mytho and Rue are here to hlep, but [[spoiler: Fakir is driving others to despair!]] Yay, we fixed him, but [[spoiler: despair is turning all the townsfolk into stone!]] Yay, [[spoiler: Duck can fix it, but she's really hurt and might die!]] After that it stars picking up for real.
* HopeSpot: Over and over. Yay, Duck's back, but Fakir's missing! Yay, Fakir's back, but something's wrong! Mytho and Rue are here to hlep, but [[spoiler: Fakir is driving others to despair!]] Yay, we fixed him, but [[spoiler: despair is turning all the townsfolk into stone!]] Yay, [[spoiler: Duck can fix it, but she's really hurt and might die!]] After that it stars picking up for real.
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* EquivalentExchange: Explored a bit in Chapter 3
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* HopeSpot: Over and over. Yay, Duck's back, but Fakir's missing! Yay, Fakir's back, but something's wrong! Mytho and Rue are here tohlep, help, but [[spoiler: Fakir is driving others to despair!]] Yay, we fixed him, but [[spoiler: despair is turning all the townsfolk into stone!]] Yay, [[spoiler: Duck can fix it, but she's really hurt and might die!]] After that it stars picking up for real.
* HopeSpot: Over and over. Yay, Duck's back, but Fakir's missing! Yay, Fakir's back, but something's wrong! Mytho and Rue are here to
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* OfficialCouple: Mytho/Rue, as in canon. And in the end, Fakir/Duck, as well.
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Warning! Unmarked spoilers below for the end of PrincessTutu and for the fic!
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Warning! Unmarked spoilers below for the end of PrincessTutu ''Anime/PrincessTutu'' and for the fic!
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* RavensAndCrows: Well, given [[PrincessTutu the source material]]... But their more "trickster" aspects are pointed out, and it's also given that they were not the bad guys in some of the older stories, that was [[BigBad Drosselmeyer's]] doing in "The Prince and the Raven".
* RetGone: Twice over. There's the {{ret gone}} at the end of PrincessTutu that makes everyone forget about Duck, and then there's another one when Fakir gives his humanity to Duck, and no one remembers he ever existed. Not even Duck. At first...
* RetGone: Twice over. There's the {{ret gone}} at the end of PrincessTutu that makes everyone forget about Duck, and then there's another one when Fakir gives his humanity to Duck, and no one remembers he ever existed. Not even Duck. At first...
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* RavensAndCrows: Well, given [[PrincessTutu [[Anime/PrincessTutu the source material]]... But their more "trickster" aspects are pointed out, and it's also given that they were not the bad guys in some of the older stories, that was [[BigBad Drosselmeyer's]] doing in "The Prince and the Raven".
* RetGone: Twice over. There's the {{ret gone}} at the end ofPrincessTutu ''Princess Tutu'' that makes everyone forget about Duck, and then there's another one when Fakir gives his humanity to Duck, and no one remembers he ever existed. Not even Duck. At first...
* RetGone: Twice over. There's the {{ret gone}} at the end of
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* {{Utopia}}: Mytho's homeland- or so it seems. In reality, it's a stagnant place where everything is perfect, but no one creates or moves forward thanks to there being no ravens there. In the end, the ravens return, and the land begins to move forward again, with art and sorrow and moving forward.
* [[WhatTheHellHero What the Hell Fakir?]] I mean, we know you love Duck and all, but did you have to go all "evil scary knight" about it?
** And then we find out some of it may have been the bookkeepers and [[spoiler: Autor]] messing with the story, as well.
* [[WhatTheHellHero What the Hell Fakir?]] I mean, we know you love Duck and all, but did you have to go all "evil scary knight" about it?
** And then we find out some of it may have been the bookkeepers and [[spoiler: Autor]] messing with the story, as well.
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* {{Utopia}}: Mytho's homeland- or so it seems. In reality, it's a stagnant place where everything is perfect, but no one creates or moves forward thanks to there being no ravens there. In the end, the ravens return, and the land begins to move forward again, with art and sorrow and moving forward. \n* [[WhatTheHellHero What the Hell Fakir?]] I mean, we know you love Duck and all, but did you have to go all "evil scary knight" about it?\n** And then we find out some of it may have been the bookkeepers and [[spoiler: Autor]] messing with the story, as well.
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For that matter, this wick is wrong as well.
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** Then it gets worse as he starts giving up the rest of himself until Duck shows up to give it back...and then ItGotWorse again!
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** Then it gets worse as he starts giving up the rest of himself until Duck shows up to give it back...and then ItGotWorse again!back.
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* HopeSpot/ItGotWorse: Over and over. Yay, Duck's back, but Fakir's missing! Yay, Fakir's back, but something's wrong! Mytho and Rue are here to hlep, but [[spoiler: Fakir is driving others to despair!]] Yay, we fixed him, but [[spoiler: despair is turning all the townsfolk into stone!]] Yay, [[spoiler: Duck can fix it, but she's really hurt and might die!]] After that it stars picking up for real.
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* HopeSpot/ItGotWorse: HopeSpot: Over and over. Yay, Duck's back, but Fakir's missing! Yay, Fakir's back, but something's wrong! Mytho and Rue are here to hlep, but [[spoiler: Fakir is driving others to despair!]] Yay, we fixed him, but [[spoiler: despair is turning all the townsfolk into stone!]] Yay, [[spoiler: Duck can fix it, but she's really hurt and might die!]] After that it stars picking up for real.
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler: Autor]] after screwing up big time.
** She also has command of ravens in general. Including the baby ones Mytho kept bringing back to their room. Those aren't evil either.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: ''Yes.''
* EmotionEater: Much like evil-Mytho wanted hearts, evil-Fakir wants to feel others' despair.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: ''Yes.''
* EmotionEater: Much like evil-Mytho wanted hearts, evil-Fakir wants to feel others' despair.
* HopeSpot/ItGotWorse: Over and over. Yay, Duck's back, but Fakir's missing! Yay, Fakir's back, but something's wrong! Mytho and Rue are here to hlep, but [[spoiler: Fakir is driving others to despair!]] Yay, we fixed him, but [[spoiler: despair is turning all the townsfolk into stone!]] Yay, [[spoiler: Duck can fix it, but she's really hurt and might die!]] After that it stars picking up for real.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Fakir, after he accidentally stabs Duck.
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** Then it gets worse as he starts giving up the rest of himself until Duck shows up to give it back...and then ItGotWorse again!
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Fakir, after he accidentally stabs Duck. It snaps him back to normal, at least.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: While the Bookkeepers are really only heroes in their own minds, they really mess things up by trying to destroy the story Fakir had started. Then we find out [[spoiler: Autor messed with the story before they did]] out of jealousy [[spoiler: for Fakir's powers]], also possibly messing things up.
** Also, Mytho, showing up one second early to the climactic fight, thus necessitating a climactic fight since Duck didn't say what she wanted to yet.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Fakir, after he accidentally stabs Duck. It snaps him back to normal, at least.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: While the Bookkeepers are really only heroes in their own minds, they really mess things up by trying to destroy the story Fakir had started. Then we find out [[spoiler: Autor messed with the story before they did]] out of jealousy [[spoiler: for Fakir's powers]], also possibly messing things up.
** Also, Mytho, showing up one second early to the climactic fight, thus necessitating a climactic fight since Duck didn't say what she wanted to yet.
** Though he still has a few of his "didn't think that through enough" selfless moments.
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* [[WhatTheHellHero What the Hell Fakir?]] I mean, we know you love Duck and all, but did you have to go all "evil scary knight" about it?it?
** And then we find out some of it may have been the bookkeepers and [[spoiler: Autor]] messing with the story, as well.
** And then we find out some of it may have been the bookkeepers and [[spoiler: Autor]] messing with the story, as well.
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* LoveMakesYouCrazy[=/=]LoveMakesYouEvil: Fakir. When he realizes that Duck is forgetting her life as a girl (and him), he decides to give her a shard of his own heart to let her be human again. The part he gives her? His humanity. {{It gets worse}}.
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* LoveMakesYouCrazy[=/=]LoveMakesYouEvil: Fakir. When he realizes that Duck is forgetting her life as a girl (and him), he decides to give her a shard of his own heart to let her be human again. The part he gives her? His humanity. {{It gets worse}}.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Having the raven's blood flowing through their veins doesn't make Rue or Mytho evil, nor do Rue's "darker" emotions, such as pettiness and jealousy make ''her'' evil, and in the end, when she dances as the Raven Princess once more, she does not call for the evilness of the {{ravens and crows}} from Drosselmeyer's story, instead she dances for the wildness of the raven, and accepts that it will always be apart of her.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Having the raven's blood flowing through their veins doesn't make Rue or Mytho evil, nor do Rue's "darker" emotions, such as pettiness and jealousy make ''her'' evil, and in the end, when she dances as the Raven Princess once more, she does not call for the evilness of the {{ravens and crows}} from Drosselmeyer's story, instead she dances for the wildness of the raven, and accepts that it will always be apart a part of her.
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* EquivalentExchange: Explored a bit in Chapter 3
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* [[WhatTheHellHero What the Hell Fakir]]? Fakir?]] I mean, we know you love Duck and all, but did you have to go all "evil scary knight" about it?
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Having the raven's blood flowing through their veins doesn't make Rue or Mytho evil. Rue's "darker" emotions, such as pettiness and jealousy don't make her evil. And in the end, when she dances as the Raven Princess once more, she does not call for the evilness of the {{ravens and crows}} from Drosselmeyer's story, instead she dances for the wildness of the raven, and accepts that it will always be aprt of her.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Having the raven's blood flowing through their veins doesn't make Rue or Mytho evil. evil, nor do Rue's "darker" emotions, such as pettiness and jealousy don't make her evil. And ''her'' evil, and in the end, when she dances as the Raven Princess once more, she does not call for the evilness of the {{ravens and crows}} from Drosselmeyer's story, instead she dances for the wildness of the raven, and accepts that it will always be aprt apart of her.
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This is my first time writing a page for a fanfic, and I\'m very sorry if it\'s not correct!
Warning! Unmarked spoilers below for the end of PrincessTutu and for the fic!
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Having the raven's blood flowing through their veins doesn't make Rue or Mytho evil. Rue's "darker" emotions, such as pettiness and jealousy don't make her evil. And in the end, when she dances as the Raven Princess once more, she does not call for the evilness of the {{ravens and crows}} from Drosselmeyer's story, instead she dances for the wildness of the raven, and accepts that it will always be aprt of her.
* LoveMakesYouCrazy[=/=]LoveMakesYouEvil: Fakir. When he realizes that Duck is forgetting her life as a girl (and him), he decides to give her a shard of his own heart to let her be human again. The part he gives her? His humanity. {{It gets worse}}.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Fakir, after he accidentally stabs Duck.
* RavensAndCrows: Well, given [[PrincessTutu the source material]]... But their more "trickster" aspects are pointed out, and it's also given that they were not the bad guys in some of the older stories, that was [[BigBad Drosselmeyer's]] doing in "The Prince and the Raven".
* RetGone: Twice over. There's the {{ret gone}} at the end of PrincessTutu that makes everyone forget about Duck, and then there's another one when Fakir gives his humanity to Duck, and no one remembers he ever existed. Not even Duck. At first...
* TheWisePrince: Mytho, still.
* {{Utopia}}: Mytho's homeland- or so it seems. In reality, it's a stagnant place where everything is perfect, but no one creates or moves forward thanks to there being no ravens there. In the end, the ravens return, and the land begins to move forward again, with art and sorrow and moving forward.
* [[WhatTheHellHero What the Hell Fakir]]? I mean, we know you love Duck and all, but did you have to go all "evil scary knight" about it?
* DarkIsNotEvil: Having the raven's blood flowing through their veins doesn't make Rue or Mytho evil. Rue's "darker" emotions, such as pettiness and jealousy don't make her evil. And in the end, when she dances as the Raven Princess once more, she does not call for the evilness of the {{ravens and crows}} from Drosselmeyer's story, instead she dances for the wildness of the raven, and accepts that it will always be aprt of her.
* LoveMakesYouCrazy[=/=]LoveMakesYouEvil: Fakir. When he realizes that Duck is forgetting her life as a girl (and him), he decides to give her a shard of his own heart to let her be human again. The part he gives her? His humanity. {{It gets worse}}.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Fakir, after he accidentally stabs Duck.
* RavensAndCrows: Well, given [[PrincessTutu the source material]]... But their more "trickster" aspects are pointed out, and it's also given that they were not the bad guys in some of the older stories, that was [[BigBad Drosselmeyer's]] doing in "The Prince and the Raven".
* RetGone: Twice over. There's the {{ret gone}} at the end of PrincessTutu that makes everyone forget about Duck, and then there's another one when Fakir gives his humanity to Duck, and no one remembers he ever existed. Not even Duck. At first...
* TheWisePrince: Mytho, still.
* {{Utopia}}: Mytho's homeland- or so it seems. In reality, it's a stagnant place where everything is perfect, but no one creates or moves forward thanks to there being no ravens there. In the end, the ravens return, and the land begins to move forward again, with art and sorrow and moving forward.
* [[WhatTheHellHero What the Hell Fakir]]? I mean, we know you love Duck and all, but did you have to go all "evil scary knight" about it?
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The story is over, and all there is left is a duck and her writer. But the writer wants to make the duck happy again, and allow her to be human.
Only nothing goes as it should.
Only nothing goes as it should.
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Only nothing goes as it should.
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A fantastic CouldBeCanon fic by [=LunaSphere=] that's a sequel to the series, and an absolutely brilliant one at that, with all the characters trying to navigate what a happy ending means.
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A fantastic CouldBeCanon could be canon fic by [=LunaSphere=] that's a sequel to the series, and an absolutely brilliant one at that, with all the characters trying to navigate what a happy ending means.
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The story is over, and all there is left is a duck and her writer. But the writer wants to make the duck happy again, and allow her to be human.
Only nothing goes as it should.
A fantastic CouldBeCanon fic by [=LunaSphere=] that's a sequel to the series, and an absolutely brilliant one at that, with all the characters trying to navigate what a happy ending means.
Can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3455875/1/ here]] on fanfiction.net, and [[https://sites.google.com/site/thispendentheart/intro here]] with illustrations.
NeedsMoreLove and NeedsABetterDescription.
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Only nothing goes as it should.
A fantastic CouldBeCanon fic by [=LunaSphere=] that's a sequel to the series, and an absolutely brilliant one at that, with all the characters trying to navigate what a happy ending means.
Can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3455875/1/ here]] on fanfiction.net, and [[https://sites.google.com/site/thispendentheart/intro here]] with illustrations.
NeedsMoreLove and NeedsABetterDescription.
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