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Note that no prior familiarity with either universe is required to read and enjoy the story.
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** In Chapter 2, while discussing what aliens could possibly look like, Spike and Rainbow Dash describe [[{{Film/Alien}} a Xenomorph]] and [[StarWars a Wookie]], respectively.

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** In Chapter 2, while discussing what aliens could possibly look like, Spike and Rainbow Dash describe [[{{Film/Alien}} [[{{Franchise/Alien}} a Xenomorph]] and [[StarWars a Wookie]], respectively.
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* MedievalStasis: Equestria ''had'' this, but it ended rather abruptly five hundred years in the past. Twilight's discovery of this kickstarts the Mane Six's end of the story.

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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/122/The-Thessalonica-Legacy FIMFiction.net]]



* [[http://maximillianveers.deviantart.com/art/Thessalonica-Legacy-eReader-243632897 PDF format]]
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/122/The-Thessalonica-Legacy FIMfiction link]]

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* [[http://maximillianveers.[[http://jlryan.deviantart.com/art/Thessalonica-Legacy-eReader-243632897 com/art/Thessalonica-Legacy-eReader-298976758 PDF format]]
* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/122/The-Thessalonica-Legacy FIMfiction link]]
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/122/The-Thessalonica-Legacy FIMfiction link]]

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* DarkerAndEdgier: When compared to ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''.
** LighterAndSofter: When compared to ''TabletopGame/BattleTech''.



* MythologyGag: For TabletopGame/BattleTech fans, the very inclusion of the ''Valkyrie'', which is, according to [[TheWikiRule Sarna.net]], one of the Unseen.

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* MythologyGag: For TabletopGame/BattleTech ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fans, the very inclusion of the ''Valkyrie'', which is, according to [[TheWikiRule Sarna.net]], one of the Unseen.
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* MythologyGag: For TabletopGame/BattleTech fans, the very inclusion of the ''Valkyrie'', which is, according to [[TheWikiRule Sarna.net]], one of the Unseen.

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* ETGaveUsWiFi: [[spoiler:The ''Thessalonica'', a Terran Hegemony merchant ship reached Equestria by misjump. The ponies adopted some of the technology the crew brought with them, such as architecture, leading to a sudden jump from little huts to fairly modern houses among other advances. And the human protagonists end up accidentally leaving a jeep behind, leading to the introduction of internal combustion engines and radios to Equestria, as seen in the epilogue.]]
** [[spoiler: So, really, it's a case of [[InvertedTrope We Gave WiFi to ET?]]]]

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* ETGaveUsWiFi: [[spoiler:The [[spoiler:{{Inverted}}. The ''Thessalonica'', a Terran Hegemony merchant ship reached Equestria by misjump. The ponies adopted some of the technology the crew brought with them, such as architecture, leading to a sudden jump from little huts to fairly modern houses among other advances. And the human protagonists end up accidentally leaving a jeep behind, leading to the introduction of internal combustion engines and radios to Equestria, as seen in the epilogue.]]
** [[spoiler: So, really, it's a case of [[InvertedTrope We Gave WiFi to ET?]]]]
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* BerserkButton: Twilight almost had one of hers pushed with Ramirez's initial skepticism of magic's existence, as magic is very SeriousBusiness to her. [[spoiler: Another was [[UnstoppableRage smashed down]] to the point that she almost ''kills [[TheMole Ackermann]]'' for kidnapping Fluttershy!]]
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* GotMeDoingIt: A few cases, to wit;
** [[spoiler: Twilight utters "Damnit" and "Bastard" in two different instances.]]
** [[spoiler: Spike is heard singing the Militia's song in the chapter before the epilogue, which includes curse words of course. Twilight scolds him for the language.]]
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Equestria\'s a country, not the entire planet.


* AnotherDimension: [[spoiler:Equestria is a parallel universe version of Earth.]]

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* AnotherDimension: [[spoiler:Equestria is rests on a parallel universe version of Earth.]]
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Compare and contrast ''[[Fanfic/RokassFallingStars Falling Stars]]''.
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* CoversAlwaysLie: No Vulture [=OmniMechs=] appear in the story, and even the Clans in general are only mentioned once in passing.

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* CoversAlwaysLie: No Vulture Vulture/Mad Dog [=OmniMechs=] appear in the story, and even the Clans in general are only mentioned once in passing.

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A ''WesternAnimation/{{My Little Pony|FriendshipIsMagic}}''[=/=]''BattleTech'' complete (18 chapters long plus notes) crossover fanfic by Dashukta; can be found [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/07/story-thessalonica-legacy.html here]]. For those unable to view the site for whatever reason, such as old and out of date machines and the like, it can also be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7226163/1/The_Thessalonica_Legacy here at Fanfiction.net]]

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A ''WesternAnimation/{{My Little Pony|FriendshipIsMagic}}''[=/=]''BattleTech'' complete (18 chapters long plus notes) crossover fanfic by Dashukta; can Dashukta (complete; 18 chapters long plus notes). Can be found at the following links:
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[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/07/story-thessalonica-legacy.html here]]. For those unable Equestria Daily]] (links to view the site for whatever reason, such as old and out of date machines and the like, it can also be found Google Docs)
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7226163/1/The_Thessalonica_Legacy here at Fanfiction.net]]
* [[http://maximillianveers.deviantart.com/art/Thessalonica-Legacy-eReader-243632897 PDF format]]



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* NormalFishInATinyPond: Ramirez's ''Valkyrie'' is a Light 'Mech, bottom of the totem pole, and not even the best of that bottom-dweller pack. Without any other 'Mechs to compete with, though, much less heavier ones, it appears a lot more capable.
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On second thought, this trope probably fits better.


* HumansAreFlawed: This is essentially Celestia's view of humanity as a whole, based on [[spoiler: the previous visitors and her inishgt into human history through them.]] However, she does acknowledge that ''individual'' humans can run the full spectrum of good and evil. The flipside of this trope is also mentioned: the ponies may be peaceful, but that very peace also led to [[CreativeSterility technological stagnation]].

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* HumansAreFlawed: This is essentially Celestia's view of humanity as a whole, based on [[spoiler: the previous visitors and her inishgt insight into human history through them.]] However, she does acknowledge that ''individual'' humans can run the full spectrum of good and evil. The flipside of this trope is also mentioned: the ponies may be peaceful, but that very peace also led to [[CreativeSterility [[MedievalStasis technological stagnation]].
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* HumansAreFlawed: This is essentially Celestia's view of humanity as a whole, based on [[spoiler: the previous visitors and her inishgt into human history through them.]] However, she does acknowledge that ''individual'' humans can run the full spectrum of good and evil. The flipside of this trope is also mentioned: the ponies may be peaceful, but that very peace also led to [[CreativeSterility technological stagnation]].
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* MamaBear: Celestia towards all ponies. She was not amused when [[spoiler:the previous human visitors tried to abduct some of them]], and makes it very clear to the human protagonists that violence and exploitation are not welcome in Equestria.

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* MamaBear: Celestia towards all ponies. She was not amused when [[spoiler:the previous human visitors tried to abduct some of them]], and makes it very clear to the human protagonists that violence and exploitation are not welcome in Equestria. She also makes it ''very'' clear that she wants them out of Equestria as soon as possible.
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* CoversAlwaysLie: No Vulture [=OmniMechs=] appear in the story, and even the Clans in general are only mentioned once in passing.

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I just \'\'had\'\' to add this! *still laughing*


* PornStash: Pinkie Pie finds one under a mattress within ''minutes'' of being brought aboard the DropShip. Fluttershy notes with much embarrassment that the reproductive biology is similar...

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* PornStash: Pinkie Pie finds one under a mattress within ''minutes'' of being brought aboard the DropShip. [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Fluttershy notes notes]], [[LuminescentBlush with much embarrassment embarrassment]], that the reproductive biology is similar...similar.
--> '''Fluttershy''': Oh! Oh dear. Um… I'd say ''that'' still works the same way.
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A bit more detail about Twilight\'s badassery


* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler:An enraged Twilight telekinetically tears down a building to get at Ackermann, who's holding Fluttershy hostage. She then comes very close to ''slitting his throat with a combat knife.'']]

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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler:An enraged Twilight telekinetically tears down the front off a building to get at Ackermann, who's holding Fluttershy hostage. hostage, and effortlessly swaps the cable binding her over to wrap him up instead. She then comes very close to ''slitting his throat with a his own combat knife.'']]
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[[spoiler:** So, really, it's a case of [[InvertedTrope We Gave WiFi to ET?]]]]

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[[spoiler:** ** [[spoiler: So, really, it's a case of [[InvertedTrope We Gave WiFi to ET?]]]]
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** So, really, it's a case of [[InvertedTrope We Gave WiFi to ET?]]

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** [[spoiler:** So, really, it's a case of [[InvertedTrope We Gave WiFi to ET?]]ET?]]]]
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** So, really, it's a case of [[InvertedTrope We Gave WiFi to ET?]]
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Wiks cleaning


* StrawAtheist: [[spoiler:Subverted. Ackermann seems to be a strawman evil, angry atheist at first, getting pissed off at the mention of spirituality. Turns out, he's actually a fanatical [[AveMachina Blakist]] agent, and mostly well-adjusted Ramirez is actually the atheist.]]

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* StrawAtheist: [[spoiler:Subverted. Ackermann seems to be a strawman evil, angry atheist at first, getting pissed off at the mention of spirituality. Turns out, he's actually a fanatical [[AveMachina [[MachineWorship Blakist]] agent, and mostly well-adjusted Ramirez is actually the atheist.]]
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* ETGaveUsWiFi: [[spoiler:The ''Thessalonica'', a Terran Hegemony merchant ship reached Equestria by misjump. The ponies adopted some of the technology the crew brought with them, such as architecture, leading to a sudden jump from little huts to fairly modern houses among other advances.]] The human protagonists end up accidentally leaving a jeep behind, leading to the introduction of internal combustion engines and radios to Equestria, as seen in the epilogue.

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* ETGaveUsWiFi: [[spoiler:The ''Thessalonica'', a Terran Hegemony merchant ship reached Equestria by misjump. The ponies adopted some of the technology the crew brought with them, such as architecture, leading to a sudden jump from little huts to fairly modern houses among other advances.]] The And the human protagonists end up accidentally leaving a jeep behind, leading to the introduction of internal combustion engines and radios to Equestria, as seen in the epilogue.]]
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A ''WesternAnimation/{{My Little Pony|FriendshipIsMagic}}''[=/=]''BattleTech'' complete (18 chapters long plus notes) crossover fanfic by Dashukta; can be found [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/07/story-thessalonica-legacy.html here]].

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A ''WesternAnimation/{{My Little Pony|FriendshipIsMagic}}''[=/=]''BattleTech'' complete (18 chapters long plus notes) crossover fanfic by Dashukta; can be found [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/07/story-thessalonica-legacy.html here]].
here]]. For those unable to view the site for whatever reason, such as old and out of date machines and the like, it can also be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7226163/1/The_Thessalonica_Legacy here at Fanfiction.net]]
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* ETGaveUsWiFi: [[spoiler:The ''Thessalonica'', a Terran Hegemony merchant ship reached Equestria by misjump. The ponies adopted some of the technology the crew brought with them, such as architecture, leading to a sudden jump from little huts to fairly modern houses among other advances.]] [[color:white:And the human protagonists end up accidentally leaving a jeep behind, leading to the introduction of internal combustion engines and radios to Equestria, as seen in the epilogue.]]

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* ETGaveUsWiFi: [[spoiler:The ''Thessalonica'', a Terran Hegemony merchant ship reached Equestria by misjump. The ponies adopted some of the technology the crew brought with them, such as architecture, leading to a sudden jump from little huts to fairly modern houses among other advances.]] [[color:white:And the The human protagonists end up accidentally leaving a jeep behind, leading to the introduction of internal combustion engines and radios to Equestria, as seen in the epilogue.]]
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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler:An enraged Twilight telekinetically tears down a building to get at Ackermann, who's holding Fluttershy hostage.]]

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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler:An enraged Twilight telekinetically tears down a building to get at Ackermann, who's holding Fluttershy hostage.]] She then comes very close to ''slitting his throat with a combat knife.'']]
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* CruelMercy: [[spoiler:When [[TheMole Ackermann]] is captured, the crew spare his life at Twilight's urging. Then dump him in the possibly very hostile wilderness without any equipment whatsoever. Tartaglia actually notes that shooting him on the spot could be considering a MercyKill.]]

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* CruelMercy: [[spoiler:When [[TheMole Ackermann]] is captured, the crew spare his life at Twilight's urging. Then dump him in the possibly very hostile wilderness without any equipment whatsoever. Tartaglia actually notes that shooting him on the spot could be considering considered a MercyKill.]]

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