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->''"why is everything bigger and eight?"''
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* ArtEvolution: For a few short paragraphs, the fic suddenly improves in quality...just long enough to kill Spike before getting even worse than before.
* ArtisticLicenseArachnids: Twilight's spider eggs are described as being in a large pile, growing larger over time, and being translucent. Most house spiders contain their eggs in opaque sacs where observing changes is impossible until the spiderlings hatch.
* ArtisticLicenseArachnids: Twilight's spider eggs are described as being in a large pile, growing larger over time, and being translucent. Most house spiders contain their eggs in opaque sacs where observing changes is impossible until the spiderlings hatch.
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* AuthorAvatar / SelfInsert: Argembarger suddenly appears as an alicorn for absolutely no reason, just so Twilight can try and have "pony sex" with him. He blows her off and leaves in the same paragraph he's introduced.
* AWizardDidIt: Literally so when Big Mac and Twilight were turned back to ponies by [[IncrediblyLamePun Merriam Webster]].
* AWizardDidIt: Literally so when Big Mac and Twilight were turned back to ponies by [[IncrediblyLamePun Merriam Webster]].
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* AuthorAvatar / SelfInsert: AuthorAvatar: Argembarger suddenly appears as an alicorn for absolutely no reason, just so the sole purpose of Twilight can try and trying to have "pony sex" with him. He blows her off and leaves in the same paragraph he's introduced.
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* AWizardDidIt: Literally so when Big Mac and Twilight were turned back to ponies by [[IncrediblyLamePun Merriam Webster]].
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* ForcedTransformation: Twilight Sparkle and Big Macintosh are turned into spiders as a result of a spell cast by Twilight Sparkle.
* ForcedTransformation: Twilight Sparkle and Big Macintosh are turned into spiders as a result of a spell cast by Twilight Sparkle.
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** Twilight is said to know a magic spell is magical and casts it because her cutie mark is magic-related.
** The narration states that the spell "made everything bigger and eight" ''immediately'' before Twilight asks why everything's bigger and eight.
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-->''they started to have spider sex and it felt rely wieird for twilight but twilight nevr even had normal regualr pony sex so spider sex was the weirdest most strage thing ever. it was like a crunchy potato chip bag full of chips got throwed into an chainlink fence and [[LampshadeHanging i dont know wer this metaphor goesing. amynore.]]''
-->''they started to have spider sex and it felt rely wieird for twilight but twilight nevr even had normal regualr pony sex so spider sex was the weirdest most strage thing ever. it was like a crunchy potato chip bag full of chips got throwed into an chainlink fence and [[LampshadeHanging i dont know wer this metaphor goesing. amynore.]]''
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-->''they started to have spider{{Metaphorgotten}}: Spider sex and it felt rely wieird for twilight but twilight nevr even had normal regualr pony sex so spider sex was the weirdest most strage thing ever. it was like is compared to a crunchy bag of potato chip bag full of chips got throwed tossed into an chainlink a chain-link fence and before the author [[LampshadeHanging i dont admits they don't know wer this where the metaphor goesing. amynore.]]''is going anymore]].
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* {{Pluralses}}: The title.
* PurpleProse: The below-mentioned [[ArtEvolution Writing Evolution]].
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* AWizardDidIt: Literally so when Big Mac and Twilight were turned back to ponies by [[IncrediblyLamePun Merriam Webster]].
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* [[ArtEvolution Writing Evolution]]: For a few short paragraphs, the fic suddenly improves in quality...just long enough to kill Spike before getting even worse than before.
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* CoitusEnsues: Big Macintosh's reaction to possibly being stuck in spider form? LET'S HAVE SEX!
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One day, Twilight Sparkle tries to cast a new spell. [[BalefulPolymorph It turns her and, for some reason, Big Macintosh into spiders.]] They then have lots and lots of ''spider sex.'' Twilight gets pregnant with spider babies, who then hatch and kill Spike. There is a [[SarcasmMode very exciting]] chase, and the two run into another spider named Miriam Webster and one of Pinkie Pie's sisters. The baby spiders bring Spike back to life by spitting all his juices back, Twilight and Big Mac are turned back into ponies by Miriam, the author has a SelfInsert cameo as an alicorn, and Twilight returns home.
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One day, Twilight Sparkle tries to cast a new spell. [[BalefulPolymorph [[ForcedTransformation It turns her and, for some reason, Big Macintosh into spiders.]] They then have lots and lots of ''spider sex.'' Twilight gets pregnant with spider babies, who then hatch and kill Spike. There is a [[SarcasmMode very exciting]] chase, and the two run into another spider named Miriam Webster and one of Pinkie Pie's sisters. The baby spiders bring Spike back to life by spitting all his juices back, Twilight and Big Mac are turned back into ponies by Miriam, the author has a SelfInsert cameo as an alicorn, and Twilight returns home.
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One day, Twilight Sparkle tries to cast a new spell. [[BalefulPolymorph It turns her and, for some reason, Big Macintosh into spiders.]] They then have lots and lots of ''spider sex.'' Twilight gets pregnant with spider babies, who then hatch and kill Spike. There is a [[SarcasmMode very exciting]] chase, and the two run into another spider named Miriam Webster and one of Pinkie Pie’s Pie's sisters. The baby spiders bring Spike back to life by spitting all his juices back, Twilight and Big Mac are turned back into ponies by Miriam, the author has a SelfInsert cameo as an alicorn, and Twilight returns home.
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''The Spiderses'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' TrollFic by Argembarger.
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Now stretch that one paragraph across a few pages, misspell almost every word, use no grammar whatsoever, and voila! You have ''The Spiderses,'' the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[TrollFic answer to]] ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' and ''Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences.''
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Now stretch that one paragraph across a few pages, misspell almost every word, use no grammar whatsoever, and voila! You have ''The Spiderses,'' the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[TrollFic answer to]] to ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' and ''Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences.''
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* FriendlyNeighborhoodSpider: Merriam Webster, who turns Twilight and Bic Mac back into ponies.
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* FriendlyNeighborhoodSpider: Merriam Miriam Webster, who turns Twilight and Bic Mac back into ponies.
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* SpiderSwarm: Twilight and Big Mac's spider babies after they hatch. They drink all of Spike's bodily fluids.
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* FriendlyNeighborhoodSpider: Merriam Webster, who turns Twilight and Bic Mac back into ponies.
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The fic can be read [[http://pastebin.com/FpAEscPG here]]. There are also a few dramatic readings on Website/{{Youtube}}, if you are so inclined, with the equivalent of the Gmod version as part of [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46OVd8nBDRk Rainbow Dash Presents]].
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The fic can be read on Pastebin [[http://pastebin.com/FpAEscPG here]], or on Fimfiction [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/940/the-spiderses here]]. There are also a few dramatic readings on Website/{{Youtube}}, if you are so inclined, with the equivalent of the Gmod version as part of [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46OVd8nBDRk Rainbow Dash Presents]].
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* TransformationFiction: The story revolves around Twilight Sparkle and Big Macintosh being transformed into spiders.
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* FriendsWithBenefits: Twilight simply refers to Big Mac as a "good friend" at the end of the fic despite having spider sex and babies with him, implying their relationship is this.
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The fic can be read [[http://argembarger.deviantart.com/#/d45xim7 here]]. There are also a few dramatic readings on Website/{{Youtube}}, if you are so inclined, with the equivalent of the Gmod version as part of [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46OVd8nBDRk Rainbow Dash Presents]].
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The fic can be read [[http://argembarger.deviantart.com/#/d45xim7 [[http://pastebin.com/FpAEscPG here]]. There are also a few dramatic readings on Website/{{Youtube}}, if you are so inclined, with the equivalent of the Gmod version as part of [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46OVd8nBDRk Rainbow Dash Presents]].
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Now stretch that one paragraph across a few pages, misspell almost every word, use no grammar whatsoever, and voila! You have ''The Spiderses,'' the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[TrollFic answer to]] ''MyImmortal'' and ''HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences.''
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Now stretch that one paragraph across a few pages, misspell almost every word, use no grammar whatsoever, and voila! You have ''The Spiderses,'' the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' [[TrollFic answer to]] ''MyImmortal'' ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'' and ''HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences.''Fanfic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences.''
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* SpoofAesop: "Dear Princess Celestia, today I learned that spiders are creepy, but being a spider is better than being dead. "
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