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%%* TheChick: Rhejya
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%%* FiveManBand: The five main Darklanders introduced so far in the story:
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* WorldBuilding: The story is essentially set in a ConstructedWorld [[UpToEleven within a]] ConstructedWorld.
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* WorldBuilding: The story is essentially set in a ConstructedWorld [[UpToEleven within a]] a ConstructedWorld.
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* HypotheticalCasting: [[WordOfGod Bauglir100]] confirms that the following characters are meant to look and/or sound like the following celebrities:
** Gunglip is meant to sound like Creator/JeanReno.
** Melbrik, voice-wise, is based on Dimitri Diatchenko (specifically, his voice for Commissar Markhov from ''[[VideoGame/CallOfDuty Call of Duty: World at War]]'').
** Jykale resembles Music/PaulMcCartney.
** Grodyn is meant to sound like Creator/PaulDobson, but looks like Music/JohnLennon.
** Galkyn's physical description makes him seem an awful lot like Music/KeithRichards.
** Jhebdryk is based on Creator/TonyDanza.
** The Underlord is meant to sound like Creator/JackNicholson with a raspy [[UsefulNotes/AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
** Gunglip is meant to sound like Creator/JeanReno.
** Melbrik, voice-wise, is based on Dimitri Diatchenko (specifically, his voice for Commissar Markhov from ''[[VideoGame/CallOfDuty Call of Duty: World at War]]'').
** Jykale resembles Music/PaulMcCartney.
** Grodyn is meant to sound like Creator/PaulDobson, but looks like Music/JohnLennon.
** Galkyn's physical description makes him seem an awful lot like Music/KeithRichards.
** Jhebdryk is based on Creator/TonyDanza.
** The Underlord is meant to sound like Creator/JackNicholson with a raspy [[UsefulNotes/AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
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%%* TheChick: Rhejya
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** The Mórenorëan region of Gologoth contains Thimbalt, the largest Mountain in the South of Arda. Its massive summit was cloven and shaped by unknown forces into countless smaller peaks, ''each a mountain unto itself''.
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* FiveManBand: The five main Darklanders introduced so far in the story:
** TheHero: Jykale
** TheLancer: Grodyn
** TheSmartGuy: Galkyn
** TheBigGuy: Jhebdryk
** TheChick: Rhejya
** TheHero: Jykale
** TheLancer: Grodyn
** TheSmartGuy: Galkyn
** TheBigGuy: Jhebdryk
** TheChick: Rhejya
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** TheHero: Jykale
** TheLancer: Grodyn
** TheSmartGuy: Galkyn
** TheBigGuy: Jhebdryk
** TheChick: Rhejya
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* GroinAttack: Although technically Gunglip actually kicked Naikamil in her belly, this proved just as effective, since Dragons in the Tolkien legendarium have very soft, sensitive underbellies, and a kick from an Ogre wearing full body armor would ''probably'' be enough to make a cold-drake stagger and fall over in pain, even for a brief moment.
** Also played straight in an earlier chapter, when a Gong finds himself on the receiving end of a rather painful collision with an Elf's staff.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl/ OneHeadTaller: [[spoiler: Jhebdryk and Rhejya.]]
** Also played straight in an earlier chapter, when a Gong finds himself on the receiving end of a rather painful collision with an Elf's staff.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl/ OneHeadTaller: [[spoiler: Jhebdryk and Rhejya.]]
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* GroinAttack: GroinAttack:
** Although technically Gunglip actually kicked Naikamil in her belly, this proved just as effective, since Dragons in the Tolkien legendarium have very soft, sensitive underbellies, and a kick from an Ogre wearing full body armor would ''probably'' be enough to make a cold-drake stagger and fall over in pain, even for a brief moment.
**Also played Played straight in an earlier chapter, when a Gong finds himself on the receiving end of a rather painful collision with an Elf's staff.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl/ OneHeadTaller: %%* TheHero: Jykale
%%* HugeGuyTinyGirl: [[spoiler: Jhebdryk and Rhejya.]]
** Although technically Gunglip actually kicked Naikamil in her belly, this proved just as effective, since Dragons in the Tolkien legendarium have very soft, sensitive underbellies, and a kick from an Ogre wearing full body armor would ''probably'' be enough to make a cold-drake stagger and fall over in pain, even for a brief moment.
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%%* HugeGuyTinyGirl: [[spoiler: Jhebdryk and Rhejya.]]
%%* TheLancer: Grodyn
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* [[{{Mook}} Mooks]]: Ungoliant's minions, thralls, and other subjects include [[OurOrcsAreDifferent Gongs]], [[OurOgresAreHungrier Sarqindi]], [[OurGiantsAreBigger Giants]], Darklanders, [[WackyWaysideTribe Greblings]], [[EldritchAbomination Delvers of the Deep]], and ''[[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Pygmies]]''.
** MookCarryover/ RoguesGalleryTransplant: Many of these were Melkor's minions (most of which were created by Tolkien [[WhatCouldHaveBeen but were never actually featured in Tolkien's officially released canon]]) are depicted in this story as Ungoliant's [[{{Mook}} Mooks]].
** MookCarryover/ RoguesGalleryTransplant: Many of these were Melkor's minions (most of which were created by Tolkien [[WhatCouldHaveBeen but were never actually featured in Tolkien's officially released canon]]) are depicted in this story as Ungoliant's [[{{Mook}} Mooks]].
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* [[{{Mook}} Mooks]]: {{Mooks}}: Ungoliant's minions, thralls, and other subjects include [[OurOrcsAreDifferent Gongs]], [[OurOgresAreHungrier Sarqindi]], [[OurGiantsAreBigger Giants]], Darklanders, [[WackyWaysideTribe Greblings]], [[EldritchAbomination Delvers of the Deep]], and ''[[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Pygmies]]''.
** MookCarryover/ RoguesGalleryTransplant: * MookCarryover: Many of these were Melkor's minions original servants (most of which were created by Tolkien [[WhatCouldHaveBeen but were never actually featured in Tolkien's officially released canon]]) are depicted in this story as Ungoliant's [[{{Mook}} Mooks]].{{Mooks}}.
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* PatchworkFic: Features characters, locations, and other elements from ''The History of Middle-earth'', ''Middle-earth Role Playing'', and various Fanon based on ''The Silmarillion''.
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* PatchworkFic: Features characters, locations, and other elements from ''The History of Middle-earth'', ''Middle-earth Role Playing'', ''Literature/TheHistoryOfMiddleEarth'', ''TabletopGame/MiddleEarthRolePlaying'', and various Fanon fanon based on ''The Silmarillion''.''Literature/TheSilmarillion''.
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* BigBad: Ungoliant.
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* CoDragons: Ungoliant has the Underlord/[[spoiler:Fankil]], Naikamil (literally a dragon), and to a lesser extent, Lungotto/[[spoiler:Langon]].
** The Underlord has his various sons.
* DarkFantasy
** The Underlord has his various sons.
* DarkFantasy
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* CoDragons: Ungoliant has the Underlord/[[spoiler:Fankil]], Naikamil (literally a dragon), and to a lesser extent, Lungotto/[[spoiler:Langon]].
**Lungotto/[[spoiler:Langon]]. The Underlord Underlord, in turn, has his various sons.
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* MysteriousAntarctica: The Southern Wastes.
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** Jhebdryk is based on Creator/TonyDanza. Seriously.
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** Jhebdryk is based on Creator/TonyDanza. Seriously.
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** Jhebdryk is based on [[Series/WhosTheBoss Tony Danza]]. Seriously.
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** Jhebdryk is based on [[Series/WhosTheBoss Tony Danza]].Creator/TonyDanza. Seriously.
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''The Servants of Ungoliant'' is set in the [[WhatCouldHaveBeen unused]] continent known as Mórenorë, the Dark Land. It focuses on Ungoliant, a villain from ''TheSilmarillion'', who becomes the ruler of an entire continent in the Southern regions of Arda. It also focuses on the people and other creatures that serve, worship, or live under her dominion in this obscure, previously under-written region of Tolkien's world.
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''The Servants of Ungoliant'' is set in the [[WhatCouldHaveBeen unused]] continent known as Mórenorë, the Dark Land. It focuses on Ungoliant, a villain from ''TheSilmarillion'', ''Literature/TheSilmarillion'', who becomes the ruler of an entire continent in the Southern regions of Arda. It also focuses on the people and other creatures that serve, worship, or live under her dominion in this obscure, previously under-written region of Tolkien's world.
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* CanonForeigner: Several of the main characters, and a few supporting characters, originated from non-canon material, or were unused/renamed/replaced in later editions of ''TheSilmarillion''.
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* CanonForeigner: Several of the main characters, and a few supporting characters, originated from non-canon material, or were unused/renamed/replaced in later editions of ''TheSilmarillion''.''Literature/TheSilmarillion''.
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** The Underlord is meant to sound like Creator/JackNicholson with a raspy [[AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
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** The Underlord is meant to sound like Creator/JackNicholson with a raspy [[AmericanAccents [[UsefulNotes/AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
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** Gunglip is meant to sound like JeanReno.
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** Gunglip is meant to sound like JeanReno.Creator/JeanReno.
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** The Underlord is meant to sound like JackNicholson with a raspy [[AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
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** The Underlord is meant to sound like JackNicholson Creator/JackNicholson with a raspy [[AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
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** Jykale resembles [[Music/TheBeatles Paul McCartney]].
** Grodyn is meant to sound like PaulDobson, but looks like [[Music/TheBeatles John Lennon]].
** Grodyn is meant to sound like PaulDobson, but looks like [[Music/TheBeatles John Lennon]].
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** Jykale resembles [[Music/TheBeatles Paul McCartney]].
Music/PaulMcCartney.
** Grodyn is meant to sound likePaulDobson, Creator/PaulDobson, but looks like [[Music/TheBeatles John Lennon]].Music/JohnLennon.
** Grodyn is meant to sound like
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The first part of the story can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6497129/1/The_Servants_of_Ungoliant here]].
The second part, ''The Swerting-Darklander War'', can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6642763/1/TSOU-Part-II-The-Swerting-Darklander-War here]].
The third part, ''Mother of Pain'', can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7821111/1/TSOU-Part-III-Mother-of-Pain here]].
The second part, ''The Swerting-Darklander War'', can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6642763/1/TSOU-Part-II-The-Swerting-Darklander-War here]].
The third part, ''Mother of Pain'', can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7821111/1/TSOU-Part-III-Mother-of-Pain here]].
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The first part second edition of the story can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6497129/1/The_Servants_of_Ungoliant here]].
The second part, ''The Swerting-Darklander War'', can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6642763/1/TSOU-Part-II-The-Swerting-Darklander-War here]].
The third part, ''Mother of Pain'', can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7821111/1/TSOU-Part-III-Mother-of-Painfound [[http://lotrfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=13964 here]].
The second part, ''The Swerting-Darklander War'', can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6642763/1/TSOU-Part-II-The-Swerting-Darklander-War here]].
The third part, ''Mother of Pain'', can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7821111/1/TSOU-Part-III-Mother-of-Pain
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'''''The Servants of Ungoliant''''' is a fanfiction series written by Bauglir100, and is based on ''Literature/TheSilmarillion'' by Creator/JRRTolkien.
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'''''The Servants of Ungoliant''''' is a fanfiction series written by Bauglir100, [[WebVideo/TheAnnotatedSeries Bauglir100]], and is based on ''Literature/TheSilmarillion'' by Creator/JRRTolkien.
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* ComicBookFantasyCasting/ NoCelebritiesWereHarmed/ TextualCelebrityResemblance: [[WordOfGod Bauglir100]] confirms that the following characters are meant to look and/or sound like the following celebrities:
** Gunglip is meant to sound like JeanReno.
** Melbrik, voice-wise, is based on Dimitri Diatchenko (specifically, his voice for Commissar Markhov from ''[[VideoGame/CallOfDuty Call of Duty: World at War]]'').
** Jykale resembles [[Music/TheBeatles Paul McCartney]].
** Grodyn is meant to sound like PaulDobson, but looks like [[Music/TheBeatles John Lennon]].
** Galkyn's physical description makes him seem an awful lot like Music/KeithRichards.
** Jhebdryk is based on [[Series/WhosTheBoss Tony Danza]]. Seriously.
** The Underlord is meant to sound like JackNicholson with a raspy [[AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
** Gunglip is meant to sound like JeanReno.
** Melbrik, voice-wise, is based on Dimitri Diatchenko (specifically, his voice for Commissar Markhov from ''[[VideoGame/CallOfDuty Call of Duty: World at War]]'').
** Jykale resembles [[Music/TheBeatles Paul McCartney]].
** Grodyn is meant to sound like PaulDobson, but looks like [[Music/TheBeatles John Lennon]].
** Galkyn's physical description makes him seem an awful lot like Music/KeithRichards.
** Jhebdryk is based on [[Series/WhosTheBoss Tony Danza]]. Seriously.
** The Underlord is meant to sound like JackNicholson with a raspy [[AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
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* HypotheticalCasting: [[WordOfGod Bauglir100]] confirms that the following characters are meant to look and/or sound like the following celebrities:
** Gunglip is meant to sound like JeanReno.
** Melbrik, voice-wise, is based on Dimitri Diatchenko (specifically, his voice for Commissar Markhov from ''[[VideoGame/CallOfDuty Call of Duty: World at War]]'').
** Jykale resembles [[Music/TheBeatles Paul McCartney]].
** Grodyn is meant to sound like PaulDobson, but looks like [[Music/TheBeatles John Lennon]].
** Galkyn's physical description makes him seem an awful lot like Music/KeithRichards.
** Jhebdryk is based on [[Series/WhosTheBoss Tony Danza]]. Seriously.
** The Underlord is meant to sound like JackNicholson with a raspy [[AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
** Gunglip is meant to sound like JeanReno.
** Melbrik, voice-wise, is based on Dimitri Diatchenko (specifically, his voice for Commissar Markhov from ''[[VideoGame/CallOfDuty Call of Duty: World at War]]'').
** Jykale resembles [[Music/TheBeatles Paul McCartney]].
** Grodyn is meant to sound like PaulDobson, but looks like [[Music/TheBeatles John Lennon]].
** Galkyn's physical description makes him seem an awful lot like Music/KeithRichards.
** Jhebdryk is based on [[Series/WhosTheBoss Tony Danza]]. Seriously.
** The Underlord is meant to sound like JackNicholson with a raspy [[AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
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* ComicBookFantasyCasting/ NoCelebritiesWereHarmed/ TextualCelebrityResemblance: [[WordOfGod Bauglir100]] confirms that the following characters are meant to look and/or sound like the following celebrities:
** Gunglip is meant to sound like JeanReno.
** Melbrik, voice-wise, is based on Dimitri Diatchenko (specifically, his voice for Commissar Markhov from ''[[VideoGame/CallOfDuty Call of Duty: World at War]]'').
** Jykale resembles [[Music/TheBeatles Paul McCartney]].
** Grodyn is meant to sound like PaulDobson, but looks like [[Music/TheBeatles John Lennon]].
** Galkyn's physical description makes him seem an awful lot like Music/KeithRichards.
** Jhebdryk is based on [[Series/WhosTheBoss Tony Danza]]. Seriously.
** The Underlord is meant to sound like JackNicholson with a raspy [[AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
** Gunglip is meant to sound like JeanReno.
** Melbrik, voice-wise, is based on Dimitri Diatchenko (specifically, his voice for Commissar Markhov from ''[[VideoGame/CallOfDuty Call of Duty: World at War]]'').
** Jykale resembles [[Music/TheBeatles Paul McCartney]].
** Grodyn is meant to sound like PaulDobson, but looks like [[Music/TheBeatles John Lennon]].
** Galkyn's physical description makes him seem an awful lot like Music/KeithRichards.
** Jhebdryk is based on [[Series/WhosTheBoss Tony Danza]]. Seriously.
** The Underlord is meant to sound like JackNicholson with a raspy [[AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
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* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed/ TextualCelebrityResemblance: [[WordOfGod Bauglir100]] confirms that the following characters are meant to look and/or sound like the following celebrities:
** Gunglip is meant to sound like JeanReno.
** Melbrik, voice-wise, is based on Dimitri Diatchenko (specifically, his voice for Commissar Markhov from ''[[VideoGame/CallOfDuty Call of Duty: World at War]]'').
** Jykale resembles [[Music/TheBeatles Paul McCartney]].
** Grodyn is meant to sound like PaulDobson, but looks like [[Music/TheBeatles John Lennon]].
** Galkyn's physical description makes him seem an awful lot like Music/KeithRichards.
** Jhebdryk is based on [[Series/WhosTheBoss Tony Danza]]. Seriously.
** The Underlord is meant to sound like JackNicholson with a raspy [[AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
** Gunglip is meant to sound like JeanReno.
** Melbrik, voice-wise, is based on Dimitri Diatchenko (specifically, his voice for Commissar Markhov from ''[[VideoGame/CallOfDuty Call of Duty: World at War]]'').
** Jykale resembles [[Music/TheBeatles Paul McCartney]].
** Grodyn is meant to sound like PaulDobson, but looks like [[Music/TheBeatles John Lennon]].
** Galkyn's physical description makes him seem an awful lot like Music/KeithRichards.
** Jhebdryk is based on [[Series/WhosTheBoss Tony Danza]]. Seriously.
** The Underlord is meant to sound like JackNicholson with a raspy [[AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
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* MysteriousAntarctica: The Southern Wastes.
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* MysteriousAntarctica: The Southern Wastes.
* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed/ TextualCelebrityResemblance: [[WordOfGod Bauglir100]] confirms that the following characters are meant to look and/or sound like the following celebrities:
** Gunglip is meant to sound like JeanReno.
** Melbrik, voice-wise, is based on Dimitri Diatchenko (specifically, his voice for Commissar Markhov from ''[[VideoGame/CallOfDuty Call of Duty: World at War]]'').
** Jykale resembles [[Music/TheBeatles Paul McCartney]].
** Grodyn is meant to sound like PaulDobson, but looks like [[Music/TheBeatles John Lennon]].
** Galkyn's physical description makes him seem an awful lot like Music/KeithRichards.
** Jhebdryk is based on [[Series/WhosTheBoss Tony Danza]]. Seriously.
** The Underlord is meant to sound like JackNicholson with a raspy [[AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
* NoCelebritiesWereHarmed/ TextualCelebrityResemblance: [[WordOfGod Bauglir100]] confirms that the following characters are meant to look and/or sound like the following celebrities:
** Gunglip is meant to sound like JeanReno.
** Melbrik, voice-wise, is based on Dimitri Diatchenko (specifically, his voice for Commissar Markhov from ''[[VideoGame/CallOfDuty Call of Duty: World at War]]'').
** Jykale resembles [[Music/TheBeatles Paul McCartney]].
** Grodyn is meant to sound like PaulDobson, but looks like [[Music/TheBeatles John Lennon]].
** Galkyn's physical description makes him seem an awful lot like Music/KeithRichards.
** Jhebdryk is based on [[Series/WhosTheBoss Tony Danza]]. Seriously.
** The Underlord is meant to sound like JackNicholson with a raspy [[AmericanAccents Southern drawl]].
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* ShoutOut: Much of the layout of Gologoth is inspired by the 1966 Gene Deitch film adaptation of ''Literature/TheHobbit''.
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* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: When Jykale converses with Naikamil in a hot spring near the Black Mountains. In other words, a 19-year-old young man spends a HotSpringsEpisode with a fully-grown female dragon.
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* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: When Jykale converses with Naikamil in a hot spring near the Black Mountains. Mountains, before examining the latter's anatomy. In other words, a 19-year-old young man spends a borderline HotSpringsEpisode with a fully-grown female dragon.
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* TranslationConvention: Ungoliant's minions speak three languages: Renorin (the CommonTongue of the inhabitants of Mórenorë), Gongon (the language of the Gongs), and a third (currently unidentified) language when communicating with each other. The latter is the one that is translated to English for the audience's sake, since it is the language that is the most univerally used.
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* TranslationConvention: Ungoliant's minions speak three languages: Renorin (the CommonTongue of the inhabitants of Mórenorë), Gongon (the language of the Gongs), and a third (currently unidentified) language generally known as Melkoric (a language primarily spoken by the creatures of Melkor, hence the name), when communicating with each other. The latter is the one that is translated to English for the audience's sake, since it is the language that is the most univerally used.