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* BerserkButton: Spirit, while normally stuck-up and serene, will kick your ass if you slander the legendaries or being "chosen" when she's around.
* BewareTheHonestOnes: Robin's firm honesty is threatening to tear the team apart over [[spoiler:whether or not May should tell the police about Tyranitar]].
* BiggerIsBetter: With the exception of Mewtwo^2, Taylor's clones are all much bulkier than their normal counterparts.
* BewareTheHonestOnes: Robin's firm honesty is threatening to tear the team apart over [[spoiler:whether or not May should tell the police about Tyranitar]].
* BiggerIsBetter: With the exception of Mewtwo^2, Taylor's clones are all much bulkier than their normal counterparts.
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* BerserkButton: Spirit, while normally stuck-up and serene, will kick your ass if you slander the legendaries or being "chosen" when she's around.
* BewareTheHonestOnes: Robin's firm honesty is threatening to tear the team apart over [[spoiler:whether or not May should tell the police about Tyranitar]].
* BiggerIsBetter: With the exception of Mewtwo^2, Taylor's clones are all much bulkier than their normal counterparts.
* BewareTheHonestOnes: Robin's firm honesty is threatening to tear the team apart over [[spoiler:whether or not May should tell the police about Tyranitar]].
* BiggerIsBetter: With the exception of Mewtwo^2, Taylor's clones are all much bulkier than their normal counterparts.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: May, Marge, and Sparky have blue, and Mitch has silver. Sparky's is justified, as it's dyed.
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* PowerTrio: The main human characters usually find themselves traveling in threes.
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* InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons: The fic introduces us to the Color Dragons, who need less than half a chapter to curb-stomp the heroes and force them to retreat and devise strategies built for taking on multiple targets at once. [[spoiler:The Dragons of Ouen easily provide the same level of excitement.]]
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: The fic introduces us to the Color Dragons, who need less than half a chapter to curb-stomp the heroes and force them to retreat and devise strategies built for taking on multiple targets at once. [[spoiler:The Dragons of Ouen easily provide the same level of excitement.]]
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[[http://www.dragonflycave.com/tqftl/ The Quest for the Legends]] is a Franchise/{{Pokemon}} fanfic. It has been rewritten many times over its [[LongRunner ten-year]] lifespan (11 revisions and counting!), but as the best-known, currently ongoing and [[WordOfGod to be finished]] version is version 3.2 (the ILCOE), all tropes on this page will be assumed to apply to that version until otherwise stated.
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[[http://www.dragonflycave.com/tqftl/ The Quest for the Legends]] is a Franchise/{{Pokemon}} fanfic. It has been rewritten many times over its [[LongRunner ten-year]] sixteen-year]] lifespan (11 revisions and counting!), but as the best-known, currently ongoing best-known and [[WordOfGod to be finished]] now finished version is version 3.2 (the ILCOE), all tropes on this page will be assumed to apply to that version until otherwise stated.
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* TheBadGuyWins: Not the main conflict (yet), but [[spoiler: the universally reviled (in-story) Taylor becomes League Champion]].
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* TheBadGuyWins: Not the main conflict (yet), conflict, but [[spoiler: the universally reviled (in-story) Taylor becomes League Champion]].
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* GondorCallsForAid: Chapters 67 and 68 follow the legendary hunters as they call on old friends and acquaintances in preparation for battling the Waraider herd.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: The dilemma of tracking down a herd of eight unicorn legendaries gets solved when Ryan uses math and computer programming to find a pattern.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: The dilemma of tracking down a herd of eight unicorn legendaries gets solved when Ryan uses math and computer programming to find a migration pattern.
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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: The dilemma of tracking down a herd of eight unicorn legendaries gets solved when Ryan uses math and computer programming to find a pattern.
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* BewareTheHonestOnes: Robin's firm honesty is threatening to tear the team apart over [[spoiler:whether or not May should tell the police about Tyranitar]].
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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Chaletwo says that the Waraider herd operates on some "strange moon logic" and immediately rules out the possibility of reasonable negotiation with them. While there's no dialogue or illuminating behavior from them in the fic yet, Ryan quickly discovers that they move around Ouen in a polygon-based pattern that he puts to good use in predicting their whereabouts.
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* {{Invisibility}}: The Waraider herd has close to perfect invisibility, but it isn't enough to stand up to Xatu's Miracle Eye.
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* TechnoWizard: Downplayed with Ryan, whose admittedly spot-on computer prediction of the Waraider herd's location is offset by the months it took him to analyze the data and construct a program to find patterns in their sightings.
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* WingedUnicorn: The Waraider herd, and they're quicker to use flight than most other examples.
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* BreakingSpeech: It wasn't Carl's intention, but [[spoiler:his honest and thoroughly airtight appraisal of his last encounter with the kids utterly eviscerates their already-shaky resolve. Chaletwo, Mark, Alan, and finally May come face-to-face with their worst flaws, and by the end of the scene, NiceGuy Mark is the only one still willing to recruit Carl. Good thing Sparky was the next person they visited!]]
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Carl, in both definitions of the word "reasonable" – on the one hand, he's a man whose logic borders on the mechanical, and on the other, he's a Leader who lends his Fire-type team to a legendary battle without a second thought when he realizes his town is at stake.
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* UnstoppableRage: According to Chaletwo, this is what the legendary hunters will be facing from any remaining OlympusMons.
-->''“You have no idea what a legendary at double its full power is capable of.”''
-->''“You have no idea what a legendary at double its full power is capable of.”''
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Mark Greenlet is a normal eleven-year-old boy with a passionate interest in legendary Pokémon living in the region of Ouen, except that he hasn't been allowed to go out on a Pokémon journey like all his friends. After finding a Charmander and persuading his parents to let him out, he's ecstatic to finally be a Pokémon trainer, but things quickly go downhill as he discovers a Gym leader's secret cloning lab, accidentally frees [[OlympusMons Mew]] from said Gym leader, is subsequently nearly murdered by a madman obsessed with Mew, and eventually gets entangled in a couple of desperate legendaries' nigh-impossible attempt to stop TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt.
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Mark Greenlet is a normal eleven-year-old boy with a passionate interest in legendary Pokémon living in the region of Ouen, except that he hasn't been allowed to go out on a Pokémon journey like all his friends. After finding a Charmander and persuading his parents to let him out, he's ecstatic to finally be a Pokémon trainer, but things quickly go downhill as he discovers a Gym leader's secret cloning lab, accidentally frees [[OlympusMons Mew]] from said Gym leader, is subsequently nearly murdered by a madman obsessed with Mew, and eventually gets entangled in a couple of desperate legendaries' nigh-impossible attempt to stop TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt.
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* AlphabeticalThemeNaming: All of Victor's Pokémon's names end in "ious".
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* AlphabeticalThemeNaming: All of Victor's Pokémon's names end in "ious".
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* BerserkButton: Spirit, while normally stuck-up and serene, will kick your ass if you slander the legendaries or being "chosen" when she's around. [[spoiler:Right, Floatzel and Sneasel?]]
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* BerserkButton: Spirit, while normally stuck-up and serene, will kick your ass if you slander the legendaries or being "chosen" when she's around. [[spoiler:Right, Floatzel and Sneasel?]]
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-->'''Sparky''': Oh dear. I guess Pokémon are rather sensitive to alcohol. One more lesson in running restaurants, isn’t it?
* ChekhovsGunman: Megan Hayfield (at the Cleanwater Pokémon Center), Aaron White (at Ash's starter Pokémon giveaway), and Michael Willows (the Scizor's trainer at the Pokémon Frenzy Tournament) are all Trainers that Mark meets within the first 25 chapters, and also happen to be the first three Trainers Mark battles at the Ouen League twenty chapters later. It's never explicitly stated where Mark remembered Aaron from, only that he looked "irritatingly familiar".
* ChekhovsGunman: Megan Hayfield (at the Cleanwater Pokémon Center), Aaron White (at Ash's starter Pokémon giveaway), and Michael Willows (the Scizor's trainer at the Pokémon Frenzy Tournament) are all Trainers that Mark meets within the first 25 chapters, and also happen to be the first three Trainers Mark battles at the Ouen League twenty chapters later. It's never explicitly stated where Mark remembered Aaron from, only that he looked "irritatingly familiar".
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-->'''Sparky''': Oh dear. I guess Pokémon are rather sensitive to alcohol. One more lesson in running restaurants, isn’t it?
* ChekhovsGunman: Megan Hayfield (at the Cleanwater Pokémon Center), Aaron White (at Ash's starter Pokémon giveaway), and Michael Willows (the Scizor's trainer at the Pokémon Frenzy Tournament) are all Trainers that Mark meets within the first 25 chapters, and also happen to be the first three Trainers Mark battles at the Ouen League twenty chapters later. It's never explicitly stated where Mark remembered Aaron from, only that he looked "irritatingly familiar".
* ChekhovsGunman: Megan Hayfield (at the Cleanwater Pokémon Center), Aaron White (at Ash's starter Pokémon giveaway), and Michael Willows (the Scizor's trainer at the Pokémon Frenzy Tournament) are all Trainers that Mark meets within the first 25 chapters, and also happen to be the first three Trainers Mark battles at the Ouen League twenty chapters later. It's never explicitly stated where Mark remembered Aaron from, only that he looked "irritatingly familiar".
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Mark starts off the series as a quiet, wimpy type, but quickly shows a reckless side. Additionally, while he isn't a good battler on paper, a combination of trust in his team and sheer dumb luck have proven that he and his team are plenty dangerous.
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* ElementalPowers: Standard issue when it comes to Pokémon.
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* ElementalPowers: Standard issue when it comes to Pokémon.
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** Mark and May are foils to each other in the areas of battling skill and forming healthy bonds with their Pokémon. Mark is forgetful and unfamiliar with Pokémon battles, but instinctively and easily treats his team as equals. May, however, barely even thinks about getting to know her party, yet is by far the most knowledgable of the main human characters when it comes to competitive battling and strategy.
** Tyranitar is a foil to Jolteon, both being Pokémon that began traveling with a trainer during their infancy and eventually grew to show the differences between how their trainers treated them.
** Tyranitar is a foil to Jolteon, both being Pokémon that began traveling with a trainer during their infancy and eventually grew to show the differences between how their trainers treated them.
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** Mark and May are foils to each other in the areas of battling skill and forming healthy bonds with their Pokémon. Mark is forgetful and unfamiliar with Pokémon battles, but instinctively and easily treats his team as equals. May, however, barely even thinks about getting to know her party, yet is by far the most knowledgable of the main human characters when it comes to competitive battling and strategy.
** Tyranitar is a foil to Jolteon, both being Pokémon that began traveling with a trainer during their infancy and eventually grew to show the differences between how their trainers treated them.
** Tyranitar is a foil to Jolteon, both being Pokémon that began traveling with a trainer during their infancy and eventually grew to show the differences between how their trainers treated them.
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* GoodIsNotNice: May, whose determination to win Pokémon battles makes her a sore loser and borderline-abusive to her team [[spoiler:until Tyranitar kills Taylor to "make her happy", and she gets set straight by Mark, Alan, and Stantler]]. Lampshaded by Mark in Chapter 52.
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* GoodIsNotNice: May, whose determination to win Pokémon battles makes her a sore loser and borderline-abusive to her team [[spoiler:until Tyranitar kills Taylor to "make her happy", and she gets set straight by Mark, Alan, and Stantler]]. Lampshaded by Mark in Chapter 52.
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* HalfwayPlotSwitch: In the first part, the plot is Mark's Pokémon journey and the various adventures on the way; then in chapter 25, Chaletwo comes along and explains the main plot, and while the Pokémon journey then continues, it is eventually completed and leaves the main plot alone.
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* HalfwayPlotSwitch: In the first part, the plot is Mark's Pokémon journey and the various adventures on the way; then in chapter 25, Chaletwo comes along and explains the main plot, and while the Pokémon journey then continues, it is eventually completed and leaves the main plot alone.
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* {{Immortality}}: Legendaries are normally TheAgeless (though like all Pokémon, they recover unusually quickly from injuries), but Mew, Chaletwo, and (probably) the Destroyer have CompleteImmortality through ridiculously fast regeneration.
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* {{Immortality}}: Legendaries are normally TheAgeless (though like all Pokémon, they recover unusually quickly from injuries), but Mew, Chaletwo, and (probably) the Destroyer have CompleteImmortality through ridiculously fast regeneration.
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** May uses Tyranitar to teach Letal the move Metal Burst in chapter 40. [[spoiler:Come chapter 50, when Letaligon is squaring off against Tyranitar, Mark instinctively orders the move against May's Pokémon, and internally remarks on how useful the move is.]]
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** May uses Tyranitar to teach Letal the move Metal Burst in chapter 40. [[spoiler:Come chapter 50, when Letaligon is squaring off against Tyranitar, Mark instinctively orders the move against May's Pokémon, and internally remarks on how useful the move is.]]
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* LaughingMad: May's last Poké Ball is thrown amid "crazed-sounding" laughter in the League Finals.
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* LaughingMad: May's last Poké Ball is thrown amid "crazed-sounding" laughter in the League Finals.Finals.
* LadyLooksLikeADude: Robin Riverstone is initially mistaken for a boy by both May and Mark, which she enjoys for reasons May can't quite figure out.
* LadyLooksLikeADude: Robin Riverstone is initially mistaken for a boy by both May and Mark, which she enjoys for reasons May can't quite figure out.
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** Rob's sharp and pointy Gym may not be official, but he still qualifies for this when he robs Mark of his Pokémon.
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** Rob's sharp and pointy Gym may not be official, but he still qualifies for this when he robs Mark of his Pokémon.
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** Flora specializes in Grass-type Pokémon, and her name is a catch-all term for plant life in a given area, as well as the name of a Roman goddess associated with nature, flowers, and spring. She immediately rage-lampshades this when introducing herself to Mark.
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** Sparky, the Gym Leader of Stormy Town, lives up to his name by both specializing in Electric-type Pokémon and having a warm spark of a personality that cheers and livens whoever he meets.
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** Sparky, the Gym Leader of Stormy Town, lives up to his name by both specializing in Electric-type Pokémon and having a warm spark of a personality that cheers and livens whoever he meets.
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** Diana, the last Gym Leader, trains Dark-type Pokémon; the "die" in her name matches well to the rough and savage nature of many Dark-type Pokémon. Additionally, Diana's namesake, a Roman goddess, was commonly associated with the moon, a symbol of nighttime and darkness (although the Pokémon world's moon now lends its power to fairies).
* MissionControl: Chaletwo uses his psychic abilities to give updates on the upcoming War of the Legends, and general matters pertaining to the legendary Pokémon, to the human characters. Since he's linked to Mark [[spoiler: and May for a brief time]], he can also provide commentary and directions based on whatever they're looking at.
* MissionControl: Chaletwo uses his psychic abilities to give updates on the upcoming War of the Legends, and general matters pertaining to the legendary Pokémon, to the human characters. Since he's linked to Mark [[spoiler: and May for a brief time]], he can also provide commentary and directions based on whatever they're looking at.
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** Diana, the last Gym Leader, trains Dark-type Pokémon; the "die" in her name matches well to the rough and savage nature of many Dark-type Pokémon. Additionally, Diana's namesake, a Roman goddess, was commonly associated with the moon, a symbol of nighttime and darkness (although the Pokémon world's moon now lends its power to fairies).
* MissionControl: Chaletwo uses his psychic abilities to give updates on the upcoming War of the Legends, and general matters pertaining to the legendary Pokémon, to the human characters. Since he's linked to Mark [[spoiler: and May for a brief time]], he can also provide commentary and directions based on whatever they're looking at.
* MissionControl: Chaletwo uses his psychic abilities to give updates on the upcoming War of the Legends, and general matters pertaining to the legendary Pokémon, to the human characters. Since he's linked to Mark [[spoiler: and May for a brief time]], he can also provide commentary and directions based on whatever they're looking at.
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* OddFriendship: Alan is the poster-boy for political correctness and interacting with Pokémon as equals, while May could write a book on harsh training that pushes one's party past their limits whether they like it or not. Despite this, they get along very well [[spoiler:until Alan finds out just how messed-up Tyranitar had become as a result of being a part of May's team since infancy]].
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* OddFriendship: Alan is the poster-boy for political correctness and interacting with Pokémon as equals, while May could write a book on harsh training that pushes one's party past their limits whether they like it or not. Despite this, they get along very well [[spoiler:until Alan finds out just how messed-up Tyranitar had become as a result of being a part of May's team since infancy]].
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* OlympusMons: As usual, the legendary Pokémon. When Mark scans Thunderyu with his Pokédex, the dragon's stats are described as "crazy".
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* OlympusMons: As usual, the legendary Pokémon. When Mark scans Thunderyu with his Pokédex, the dragon's stats are described as "crazy".
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* PantheraAwesome: You'd better believe a cat Pokémon that powers up at the taste of its own blood qualifies as this.
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* PantheraAwesome: You'd better believe a cat Pokémon that powers up at the taste of its own blood qualifies as this.
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** May doesn't allow for improvisation on her Pokémon's part, preferring to give all of the orders. Her strategic, demanding fighting style is akin to something you'd find on Website/{{Smogon}}.
** Mark is the opposite of May, and allows his Pokémon to improvise freely, forcing the foe to keep up with both his own decisions and those of whoever he has out at the moment.
** Mark is the opposite of May, and allows his Pokémon to improvise freely, forcing the foe to keep up with both his own decisions and those of whoever he has out at the moment.
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** May doesn't allow for improvisation on her Pokémon's part, preferring to give all of the orders. Her strategic, demanding fighting style is akin to something you'd find on Website/{{Smogon}}.
** Mark is the opposite of May, and allows his Pokémon to improvise freely, forcing the foe to keep up with both his own decisions and those of whoever he has out at the moment.
** Mark is the opposite of May, and allows his Pokémon to improvise freely, forcing the foe to keep up with both his own decisions and those of whoever he has out at the moment.
* StressVomit: Happens to poor Mark in [[WhamEpisode chapter 53]] when the events of the chapter hit him all at once.
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* TranslationConvention: Employed for Pokémon speech.
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* TranslationConvention: Employed for Pokémon speech.speech.
* TraumaCongaLine: [[spoiler:Tyranitar's murder of Taylor]] marked the point where May ''finally'' began to grow as a character, though this was done far from gently.
* TraumaCongaLine: [[spoiler:Tyranitar's murder of Taylor]] marked the point where May ''finally'' began to grow as a character, though this was done far from gently.
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** The Mutark species, according to the forum's Ask the Characters thread; most of their moves have low strength in the Pokémon games, several being Night Slash, Sucker Punch, and the elemental fangs.
** Taylor's entire team, both in terms of how they battle and with which moves. The nature of Clone Balls means that none of them are capable of improvisation, and their trainer is far from good at battling. Both classic UnskilledButStrong Pokémon moves, Hyper Beam and Giga Impact, see use among them as well. However, the clones' sheer power allows him to battle on par with ''[[TheAce May]]'', even when he's restricted to four Pokémon instead of six.
** Taylor's entire team, both in terms of how they battle and with which moves. The nature of Clone Balls means that none of them are capable of improvisation, and their trainer is far from good at battling. Both classic UnskilledButStrong Pokémon moves, Hyper Beam and Giga Impact, see use among them as well. However, the clones' sheer power allows him to battle on par with ''[[TheAce May]]'', even when he's restricted to four Pokémon instead of six.
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** The Mutark species, according to the forum's Ask the Characters thread; most of their moves have low strength in the Pokémon games, several being Night Slash, Sucker Punch, and the elemental fangs.
** Taylor's entire team, both in terms of how they battle and with which moves. The nature of Clone Balls means that none of them are capable of improvisation, and their trainer is far from good at battling. Both classic UnskilledButStrong Pokémon moves, Hyper Beam and Giga Impact, see use among them as well. However, the clones' sheer power allows him to battle on par with ''[[TheAce May]]'', even when he's restricted to four Pokémon instead of six.
** Taylor's entire team, both in terms of how they battle and with which moves. The nature of Clone Balls means that none of them are capable of improvisation, and their trainer is far from good at battling. Both classic UnskilledButStrong Pokémon moves, Hyper Beam and Giga Impact, see use among them as well. However, the clones' sheer power allows him to battle on par with ''[[TheAce May]]'', even when he's restricted to four Pokémon instead of six.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Mark's daring streak eventually gives him enough of a push to call May out on what her training methods do to her Pokémon.
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* RetCon: The story's written so that content from new video game releases can be added seamlessly, rather than treating them as sudden new discoveries. A casual nod to the new generation, such as a wild Beartic, Floatzel's debut, and a mention of Fairy-type moves, serve to inform the reader that new mechanics and elements are in play in the fic.
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* RetCon: The story's written so that content from new video game releases can be added seamlessly, rather than treating them as sudden new discoveries. A casual nod to the new generation, such as a wild Beartic, Floatzel's debut, the fourth-generation moves that kick off the battle in chapter 36, and a mention of Fairy-type moves, serve to inform the reader that new mechanics and elements are in play in the fic.
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* {{Patricide}}: From the moment she's caught, Mark can see that Leta wants to prove herself to her father. The exact nature of ''how'' become apparent later on.
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* {{Patricide}}: From the moment she's caught, Mark can see that Leta wants to prove herself to her father. The exact nature of ''how'' become becomes apparent later on.
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* InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons: The fic introduces us to the Color Dragons, who need less than half a chapter to curb-stomp the heroes and force them to regroup and devise strategies built for taking on multiple targets at once. [[spoiler:The Dragons of Ouen easily provide the same level of excitement.]]
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* InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons: The fic introduces us to the Color Dragons, who need less than half a chapter to curb-stomp the heroes and force them to regroup retreat and devise strategies built for taking on multiple targets at once. [[spoiler:The Dragons of Ouen easily provide the same level of excitement.]]
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* InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons: The fic introduces us to the Color Dragons, who need less than half a chapter to curb-stomp the heroes and force them to regroup and devise strategies built for taking on multiple targets at once. [[spoiler:The Dragons of Ouen easily provide the same level of excitement.]]
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** [[spoiler: Polaryu's crystals]] were shattered with fire and electricity. [[spoiler:Guess what elements his two murderous siblings have control over?]]
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** [[spoiler: Polaryu's crystals]] [[spoiler:Polaryu's crystals were shattered with fire and electricity. [[spoiler:Guess what electricity, the same elements his two murderous siblings have control over?]]over.]]
* ItHasBeenAnHonor: Scyther's the first one to say goodbye to Letaligon.
-->'''Scyther:''' Good luck. It’s been an honor fighting alongside you. Your father won’t know what hit him.
-->'''Scyther:''' Good luck. It’s been an honor fighting alongside you. Your father won’t know what hit him.
* LaughingMad: May's last Poké Ball is thrown amid "crazed-sounding" laughter in the League Finals.
* PantheraAwesome: You'd better believe a cat Pokémon that powers up at the taste of its own blood qualifies as this.
* {{Patricide}}: From the moment she's caught, Mark can see that Leta wants to prove herself to her father. The exact nature of ''how'' become apparent later on.
* {{Patricide}}: From the moment she's caught, Mark can see that Leta wants to prove herself to her father. The exact nature of ''how'' become apparent later on.
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* ThisCannotBe: A variation: May screams "''You can't do that!''" at Taylor when [[spoiler:Mewtwo^2's Psychic works on Tyranitar]].
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* ThisCannotBe: A variation: May screams "''You ''"You can't do that!''" that!"'' at Taylor when [[spoiler:Mewtwo^2's Psychic works on Tyranitar]].
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* UnskilledButStrong: Mutark, according to the forum's Ask the Characters thread; most of her moves have low strength in the Pokémon games, several being Night Slash, Sucker Punch, and the elemental fangs. May believes that Mutark can compensate for her poor moveset through sheer power.
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* UnskilledButStrong: Mutark, UnskilledButStrong:
** The Mutark species, according to the forum's Ask the Characters thread; most ofher their moves have low strength in the Pokémon games, several being Night Slash, Sucker Punch, and the elemental fangs. May believes fangs.
** Taylor's entire team, both in terms of how they battle and with which moves. The nature of Clone Balls means thatMutark can compensate for her poor moveset through none of them are capable of improvisation, and their trainer is far from good at battling. Both classic UnskilledButStrong Pokémon moves, Hyper Beam and Giga Impact, see use among them as well. However, the clones' sheer power.power allows him to battle on par with ''[[TheAce May]]'', even when he's restricted to four Pokémon instead of six.
** The Mutark species, according to the forum's Ask the Characters thread; most of
** Taylor's entire team, both in terms of how they battle and with which moves. The nature of Clone Balls means that
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** Mark gets his ass handed to him by Carl in a Triple Battle, only succeeding in taking down Carl's Magcargo by exploiting its double weakness. The difference in ability is further emphasized by the fact that the Gym Leader won a Triple Battle against Alan ''at the same time''.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Early lore says that Chaletwo's at least part Dark-type. He's also firmly one of the good guys.
* DeathGlare: Literally, in Chaletwo's case.
* DeathGlare: Literally, in Chaletwo's case.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: After meeting Victor and Precious, Mark is mildly horrified at the thought of facing May with a Mutark of her own, predicting that with his luck, he'd probably be left with Scyther. [[spoiler: He's right about the situation – it happens in the League arc – but Scyther wins the battle.]]
* GodIsFlawed: The legendaries are as close as you can get to a god in this setting, and they are every bit as imperfect as the human characters.
* GodIsFlawed: The legendaries are as close as you can get to a god in this setting, and they are every bit as imperfect as the human characters.
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** Mark and May are foils to each other in the areas of battling skill and forming healthy bonds with their Pokémon. Mark is forgetful and unfamiliar with Pokémon battles, but instinctively and easily treats his team as equals. May, however, barely even thinks about getting to know her party, yet is by far the most knowledgable of the main human characters when it comes to competitive battling and strategy.
** Tyranitar is a foil to Jolteon, both being Pokémon that began traveling with a trainer during their infancy and eventually grew to show the differences between how their trainers treated them.
** Dratini and Larvitar are caught in the same area, at the same level, during the same chapter, and as a result of the same breeding program, easily suggesting to the reader that they are meant to be examined for similarities and differences. In-universe, they're viewed as counterparts, and they face off several times throughout the fic.
* {{Foreshadowing}}:
** After meeting Victor and Precious, Mark is mildly horrified at the thought of facing May with a Mutark of her own, predicting that with his luck, he'd probably be left with Scyther. [[spoiler: He's right about the situation – it happens in the League arc – but Scyther wins the battle.]]
** A bit of training in chapter 40 leads to Letal and Tyranitar squaring off for move-tutoring purposes, despite Mark's complaints that "there's no way" she could defeat the Rock-type. [[spoiler: Ten chapters and an evolution on Letal's part later, the matchup is revisited, and Mark is proven wrong.]]
* GodIsFlawed: The legendaries are as close as you can get toa god gods in this setting, and they are every bit as imperfect as the human characters.
** Mark and May are foils to each other in the areas of battling skill and forming healthy bonds with their Pokémon. Mark is forgetful and unfamiliar with Pokémon battles, but instinctively and easily treats his team as equals. May, however, barely even thinks about getting to know her party, yet is by far the most knowledgable of the main human characters when it comes to competitive battling and strategy.
** Tyranitar is a foil to Jolteon, both being Pokémon that began traveling with a trainer during their infancy and eventually grew to show the differences between how their trainers treated them.
** Dratini and Larvitar are caught in the same area, at the same level, during the same chapter, and as a result of the same breeding program, easily suggesting to the reader that they are meant to be examined for similarities and differences. In-universe, they're viewed as counterparts, and they face off several times throughout the fic.
* {{Foreshadowing}}:
** After meeting Victor and Precious, Mark is mildly horrified at the thought of facing May with a Mutark of her own, predicting that with his luck, he'd probably be left with Scyther. [[spoiler: He's right about the situation – it happens in the League arc – but Scyther wins the battle.]]
** A bit of training in chapter 40 leads to Letal and Tyranitar squaring off for move-tutoring purposes, despite Mark's complaints that "there's no way" she could defeat the Rock-type. [[spoiler: Ten chapters and an evolution on Letal's part later, the matchup is revisited, and Mark is proven wrong.]]
* GodIsFlawed: The legendaries are as close as you can get to
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* {{Irony}}: [[spoiler: Polaryu's crystals]] were shattered with fire and electricity. [[spoiler:Guess what elements his two murderous siblings have control over?]]
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* {{Irony}}: {{Irony}}:
** [[spoiler: Polaryu's crystals]] were shattered with fire and electricity. [[spoiler:Guess what elements his two murderous siblings have controlover?]]over?]]
** May uses Tyranitar to teach Letal the move Metal Burst in chapter 40. [[spoiler:Come chapter 50, when Letaligon is squaring off against Tyranitar, Mark instinctively orders the move against May's Pokémon, and internally remarks on how useful the move is.]]
** [[spoiler: Polaryu's crystals]] were shattered with fire and electricity. [[spoiler:Guess what elements his two murderous siblings have control
** May uses Tyranitar to teach Letal the move Metal Burst in chapter 40. [[spoiler:Come chapter 50, when Letaligon is squaring off against Tyranitar, Mark instinctively orders the move against May's Pokémon, and internally remarks on how useful the move is.]]
* OneOfTheKids: The close-to-a-thousand-years-old Chaletwo has emotional maturity roughly on par with the teens and tweens he recruits.
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* ScissorsCutsRock: Mewtwo^2's ability lets it totally ignore the foe's type immunities, allowing it to throw around even Dark-types with Psychic moves given a small bit of extra effort.
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* ScissorsCutsRock: ScissorsCutsRock:
** For the "brute force" version of this trope, Mewtwo^2's ability lets it totally ignore the foe's type immunities, allowing it to throw around even Dark-types with Psychic moves given a small bit of extraeffort.effort.
** Mark comes very close to qualifying for the "trickery and strategy" version of this trope [[spoiler:when he and Jolteon ''almost'' succeed in beating May and Flygon in the League quarter-finals, despite a tremendous type disadvantage]].
** For the "brute force" version of this trope, Mewtwo^2's ability lets it totally ignore the foe's type immunities, allowing it to throw around even Dark-types with Psychic moves given a small bit of extra
** Mark comes very close to qualifying for the "trickery and strategy" version of this trope [[spoiler:when he and Jolteon ''almost'' succeed in beating May and Flygon in the League quarter-finals, despite a tremendous type disadvantage]].
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* MeaningfulName[=/=]PunnyName: Except for Mitch, the Ouen Gym Leaders are par for the course.
** Richard Lancaster, the Cleanwater Gym Leader, fights with legendary clones that only the rich and powerful could create.
** Rob's sharp and pointy Gym may not be official, but he still qualifies for this when he robs Mark of his Pokémon.
** Christopher operates a Steel-type Gym in Alumine with the gimmick of blinding light. His name's Greek origins happen to mean "bearing Christ", and as one of the religious figure's epithets are "the light", Christopher's name could be retranslated as "bearing light".
** Marge is the region's Water-type Gym Leader, and the word or prefix "mar" is associated with many aquatic words across a few languages.
** Flora specializes in Grass-type Pokémon, and her name is a catch-all term for plant life in a given area, as well as the name of a Roman goddess associated with nature, flowers, and spring. She immediately rage-lampshades this when introducing herself to Mark.
-->'''Flora:''' My name is my parents’ fault, not mine! It’s not MY fault if my parents happened to give me a name that sounds like a pun! I hate it! I hate it all!
** Sparky, the Gym Leader of Stormy Town, lives up to his name by both specializing in Electric-type Pokémon and having a warm spark of a personality that cheers and livens whoever he meets.
** Carl is the Fire-type specialist of Crater Town, and his name is audibly similar to coal, a widely-known combustible energy source.
** Diana, the last Gym Leader, trains Dark-type Pokémon; the "die" in her name matches well to the rough and savage nature of many Dark-type Pokémon. Additionally, Diana's namesake, a Roman goddess, was commonly associated with the moon, a symbol of nighttime and darkness (although the Pokémon world's moon now lends its power to fairies).
** Richard Lancaster, the Cleanwater Gym Leader, fights with legendary clones that only the rich and powerful could create.
** Rob's sharp and pointy Gym may not be official, but he still qualifies for this when he robs Mark of his Pokémon.
** Christopher operates a Steel-type Gym in Alumine with the gimmick of blinding light. His name's Greek origins happen to mean "bearing Christ", and as one of the religious figure's epithets are "the light", Christopher's name could be retranslated as "bearing light".
** Marge is the region's Water-type Gym Leader, and the word or prefix "mar" is associated with many aquatic words across a few languages.
** Flora specializes in Grass-type Pokémon, and her name is a catch-all term for plant life in a given area, as well as the name of a Roman goddess associated with nature, flowers, and spring. She immediately rage-lampshades this when introducing herself to Mark.
-->'''Flora:''' My name is my parents’ fault, not mine! It’s not MY fault if my parents happened to give me a name that sounds like a pun! I hate it! I hate it all!
** Sparky, the Gym Leader of Stormy Town, lives up to his name by both specializing in Electric-type Pokémon and having a warm spark of a personality that cheers and livens whoever he meets.
** Carl is the Fire-type specialist of Crater Town, and his name is audibly similar to coal, a widely-known combustible energy source.
** Diana, the last Gym Leader, trains Dark-type Pokémon; the "die" in her name matches well to the rough and savage nature of many Dark-type Pokémon. Additionally, Diana's namesake, a Roman goddess, was commonly associated with the moon, a symbol of nighttime and darkness (although the Pokémon world's moon now lends its power to fairies).
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* NoAntagonist: [[http://antialiasis.tumblr.com/post/130163318035/you-talk-a-lot-about-the-sillykind-of-bad Confirmed by the author.]] Chances are that if someone is causing trouble in the fic, it's because of their own flaws and insecurities, not evil intent.
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* NoAntagonist: [[http://antialiasis.tumblr.com/post/130163318035/you-talk-a-lot-about-the-sillykind-of-bad Confirmed by the author.]] Chances are that if someone is causing trouble in the fic, it's because of their own flaws and insecurities, not evil intent.
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* NotCompletelyUseless: Chapter 48's battle comes down to Letal battling a Letaligon. Mark assumes that the battle will be slow and long until Letal reminds him that he'd taught her Rock Smash, which ends up being surprisingly effective on the Normal/Steel Letaligon that only uses moves of its own types. (In the games, a doubly super-effective Rock Smash hits with higher Base Power than a resisted Iron Tail or Tri Attack, even factoring in STAB– that's not counting the one-in-two Defense drop per hit, which may or may not exist in the fic.)
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* NotCompletelyUseless: Chapter 48's battle comes down to Letal battling a Letaligon. Mark assumes that the battle will be slow and long until Letal reminds him that he'd taught her Rock Smash, which ends up being surprisingly effective on the Normal/Steel Letaligon that only uses moves of its own types. (In the games, a doubly super-effective Rock Smash hits with higher Base Power than a resisted Iron Tail or Tri Attack, even factoring in STAB– STAB – that's not counting the one-in-two Defense drop per hit, which may or may not exist in the fic.) )
* OddFriendship: Alan is the poster-boy for political correctness and interacting with Pokémon as equals, while May could write a book on harsh training that pushes one's party past their limits whether they like it or not. Despite this, they get along very well [[spoiler:until Alan finds out just how messed-up Tyranitar had become as a result of being a part of May's team since infancy]].
* OddFriendship: Alan is the poster-boy for political correctness and interacting with Pokémon as equals, while May could write a book on harsh training that pushes one's party past their limits whether they like it or not. Despite this, they get along very well [[spoiler:until Alan finds out just how messed-up Tyranitar had become as a result of being a part of May's team since infancy]].
* PowerTrio: The main human characters usually find themselves traveling in threes.
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* PunnyName: [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Flora.
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* ScissorsCutsRock: WordOfGod says Mewtwo^2's ability lets it totally ignore the foe's type immunities, allowing it to throw around Dark-types with Psychic moves given a small bit of extra effort.
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* ScissorsCutsRock: WordOfGod says Mewtwo^2's ability lets it totally ignore the foe's type immunities, allowing it to throw around even Dark-types with Psychic moves given a small bit of extra effort.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Following the talk during chapter 61, Mewtwo resolves to knowingly go into the past, and, by extension, to his death, should Chalenor come for him, to avoid breaking the time loop.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Following the talk during chapter 61, Mewtwo resolves to knowingly go into the past, past – and, by extension, to his death, death – should Chalenor come for him, to avoid breaking the time loop.]]
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* BloodLust[=/=]BloodUpgrade: Mutark grows in strength, size, and ferocity at the taste of its own blood, and actively seeks out ways to injure itself to invoke this trope.
* CainAndAbel: The Color Dragons consist of three pairs of a brother and sister each whose hatred for the other carries with it some legitimately scary insanity and paranoia. [[spoiler:And if you count the Dragons of Ouen as siblings, they take it even further.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: After meeting Victor and Precious, Mark is mildly horrified at the thought of facing May with a Mutark of her own, predicting that with his luck, he'd probably be left with Scyther. [[spoiler: He's right about the situation– it happens in the League arc– but Scyther wins the battle.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: After meeting Victor and Precious, Mark is mildly horrified at the thought of facing May with a Mutark of her own, predicting that with his luck, he'd probably be left with Scyther. [[spoiler: He's right about the situation– situation – it happens in the League arc– arc – but Scyther wins the battle.]]
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* SwitchingPOV: Of the 'third-person limited' kind, though the primary POV is Mark's. Throughout the fic there are occasionally brief scenes from other POVs (Eevee in chapter 3, an omniscient narrator in chapter 13, Taylor in chapter 14, Victor in chapter 16, Michael Willows in chapter 49, and May in chapter 57); however, chapter 60 is entirely from Scyther's POV, and chapter 64 and the second half of 63 are from May's POV.
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* SwitchingPOV: Of the 'third-person limited' kind, though the primary POV is Mark's. Throughout the fic there are occasionally brief scenes from other POVs points of view (Eevee in chapter 3, an omniscient narrator in chapter 13, Taylor in chapter 14, Victor in chapter 16, Michael Willows in chapter 49, and May in chapter 57); however, chapter 60 is entirely from Scyther's POV, and chapter 64 and the second half of 63 are from May's POV.
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* SwitchingPOV: Of the 'third-person limited' kind, starting in chapter 63.
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* SwitchingPOV: Of the 'third-person limited' kind, starting though the primary POV is Mark's. Throughout the fic there are occasionally brief scenes from other POVs (Eevee in chapter 63. 3, an omniscient narrator in chapter 13, Taylor in chapter 14, Victor in chapter 16, Michael Willows in chapter 49, and May in chapter 57); however, chapter 60 is entirely from Scyther's POV, and chapter 64 and the second half of 63 are from May's POV.
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* {{Pun}}: Blink and you'll miss it, but a scene in Chapter 65 involves Venoir shooting a "poisonous glare" at Mark.
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* {{Pun}}: Blink and you'll miss it, but a scene in {{Pun}}:
** Chapter 65 involves Venoir shooting a "poisonous glare" atMark.Mark.
** From chapter 62:
-->“Liar,” Puragon said, icy disdain in her voice.
** Chapter 65 involves Venoir shooting a "poisonous glare" at
** From chapter 62:
-->“Liar,” Puragon said, icy disdain in her voice.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Following the talk during chapter 61, Mewtwo resolves to knowingly go into the past, and, by extension, to his death, should Chalenor come for him, to avoid breaking the time loop.]]
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* ManChild: [[spoiler:Tyranitar is revealed to be one]].
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* PsychopathicManchild: [[spoiler:Tyranitar is revealed to be the 'dumb muscle' type.]]