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* BigBrotherBully: Cooler was apparently rather mean to Frieza when they were children. They later began getting along more in their adolescence, before pulling a total 180 and hating each other again. [[spoiler: the story sees them rekindle their brotherly bond after Frieza frees Cooler from Raichi's metal shell]].
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* BigBrotherBully: Cooler was apparently rather mean to Frieza when they were children. They later began getting along more in their adolescence, before pulling a total 180 and hating each other again. [[spoiler: the The story sees them rekindle their brotherly bond after Frieza frees Cooler from Raichi's metal shell]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522508/1/The-Fall-of-Lord-Frieza The Fall of Lord Frieza]] is a ''Anime/DragonBallZ'' FanFic by Mr. Arkham. The main story breaks off from canon when Frieza decides not to throw Goku's borrowed energy back at him at the end of their battle on Namek. After flying off (with his [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe missing half]] in tow), and being found King Cold, he decides to return to his home planet, Arcos, and train to take revenge on the Z-Fighters.
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Trunks' sword, as ever.
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** Trunks' sword, as ever.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Goku and Gohan are nice guys, but they're also Saiyans and can RUIN you if you piss them off.
* BigBrotherBully: Cooler was apparently rather mean to Frieza when they were children. They later began getting along more in their adolescence, before pulling a total 180 and hating each other again.
* BigBrotherBully: Cooler was apparently rather mean to Frieza when they were children. They later began getting along more in their adolescence, before pulling a total 180 and hating each other again.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Goku and Gohan are nice guys, but they're also Saiyans and can RUIN '''ruin''' you if you piss them off.
* BigBrotherBully: Cooler was apparently rather mean to Frieza when they were children. They later began getting along more in their adolescence, before pulling a total 180 and hating each other again. [[spoiler: the story sees them rekindle their brotherly bond after Frieza frees Cooler from Raichi's metal shell]].
* BigBrotherBully: Cooler was apparently rather mean to Frieza when they were children. They later began getting along more in their adolescence, before pulling a total 180 and hating each other again. [[spoiler: the story sees them rekindle their brotherly bond after Frieza frees Cooler from Raichi's metal shell]].
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* CallingYourAttacks: Lampshaded when Raichi performs an attack he hadn't shown before and makes up a name for it on the spot, which Frieza dryly snarks at, before [[HypocriticalHumor doing the exact same thing]]
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* CallingYourAttacks: Lampshaded when Raichi performs an attack he hadn't shown before and makes up a name for it on the spot, which Frieza dryly snarks at, before [[HypocriticalHumor doing the exact same thing]]thing]].
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* RageBreakingPoint: Losing to Goku (and getting sliced in half from his carelessness to boot), then losing his brother and father [[spoiler: (although Cooler turned out alive but CameBackWrong later on before being restored to his organic form)]] in short order, it's little surprise Frieza is under a lot of stress during the Kanchapp arc. When General Kanchapp [[spoiler: destroys Arcosia]], Frieza ''snaps''.
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* ArmorPiercingResponse: Slak gives one to Vegeta [[spoiler: when he objects loudly to Goku's suggestion of enlisting the help of Frieza and his friends against Cell.]]
-->'''Slak''': You are not of a mind to judge Frieza, Prince of Saiyans. You have carried out his genocides, laughing as you destroyed the cities of those who begged for mercy. What kind of penance of you done for your past?
-->'''Slak''': You are not of a mind to judge Frieza, Prince of Saiyans. You have carried out his genocides, laughing as you destroyed the cities of those who begged for mercy. What kind of penance of you done for your past?
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* EarthShatteringKaboom: [[spoiler: General Kanchapp blows up Arcos during the rebellion, [[MoralEventHorizon just to give his forces a tactical advantage.]] ]]
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* EarthShatteringKaboom: [[spoiler: General Kanchapp blows up Arcos during the rebellion, [[MoralEventHorizon just to give his forces a tactical advantage.]] ]] [[spoiler: Not surprisingly, this triggers Frieza's RageBreakingPoint.]]
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* OhCrap: King Cold's reaction when [[spoiler: he and Frieza meet again in Hell, and Frieza tells him he knew what Cold did to Frieza's mother]]. It's even lampshaded in the narration.
-->If there were two words that perfectly summed up King Cold's expression in this instance, they would be 'oh shit.'
-->If there were two words that perfectly summed up King Cold's expression in this instance, they would be 'oh shit.'
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* EvilVsEvil: Frieza vs Kanchapp.
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* EvilVsEvil: Frieza vs Kanchapp. While the rest of the rebellion genuinely believes in their cause, Kanchapp is just a power-hungry tyrant who longs to usurp Frieza's place while Frieza still hasn't had his HeelFaceTurn yet.
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* TheLadette: Inyon. Considering she's a female Saiyan, it's not really all that surprising.
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* TheApprentice: [[spoiler: Saike becomes this to Goku after Janemba is sealed away.]]
* FateWorseThanDeath: Frieza tells [[spoiler:Dr. Raichi that while he doesn't want to kill the possessed Goku, he knows the Saiyan would rather die than suffer what he's going through]].
* PintSizedPowerhouse: Frieza is stated to be quite small for a male Arcosian, but, well... [[PersonOfMassDestruction he's Frieza]].
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* PintSizedPowerhouse: Frieza is stated to be quite small for a male Arcosian, but, well... [[PersonOfMassDestruction he's Frieza]].
* SealedEvilInACan: [[spoiler: Janemba is sealed away inside Saike.]]
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* SealedEvilInACan: [[spoiler: Janemba is sealed away inside Saike.]]
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* TheApprentice: [[spoiler: Saike becomes this to Goku after Janemba is sealed away.]]
* WhyAmITicking: See YouAreAlreadyDead.
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* WhyAmITicking: See YouAreAlreadyDead.
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* HighHeelFaceTurn: Of all the members of Bojack's crew, only Zangya turns good.
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* [[spoiler:EldritchAbomination: The flaming monster Frieza fights in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber. It is implied that it reads your mind and morphs into the form of what you fear most.]]
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* [[spoiler:EldritchAbomination: The EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler:The flaming monster Frieza fights in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber. It is implied that it reads your mind and morphs into the form of what you fear most.]]
* TheEmpire: The Planet Trade Organization, much like in canon. [[spoiler:It is implied to have crumbled and broken apart once Arcos and the rebellion destroy each other.]]
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* TheEmpire: The Planet Trade Organization. [[spoiler:It is implied to have crumbled and broken apart once Arcos and the rebellion destroy each other.]]
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* EvilEmpire: The Planet Trade Organization. [[spoiler:It is implied to have crumbled and broken apart once Arcos and the rebellion destroy each other.]]
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Inyon, to Yamcha.
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* AGlassOfChianti: Frieza loves his wine. Subverted in that Frieza [[spoiler:isn't a BigBad anymore.]]
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* AGlassOfChianti: Frieza loves his wine. Subverted in that Frieza [[spoiler:isn't a BigBad anymore.]]
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* AmazonianBeauty: Inyon. Yamcha certainly thinks so, at least.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Frieza(obviously), Cooler, Android 16, Goku(whom Frieza convinced to come back after his HeroicSacrifice during the Cell games), and Zangya.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Frieza(obviously), Cooler, Android 16, Goku(whom Goku (whom Frieza convinced to come back after his HeroicSacrifice during the Cell games), and Zangya.
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* BreakTheHaughty: [[{{Irnoy}} Losing his planet and his entire race]] make [[spoiler:Frieza]] ponder a lot about his past actions.
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* BreakTheHaughty: [[{{Irnoy}} Losing his planet and his entire race]] make [[spoiler:Frieza]] ponder a lot about his past actions.
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* GoodFeelsGood: During his journey to Earth, Frieza (in disguise) will sometimes indirectly help people while achieving purely selfish objectives. For instance, he destroys a group of bandits because he wants their fuel. Nevertheless, he'll be praised as a hero by the unsuspecting populations. Each time, Frieza will note that it feels good to be seen as such and not just feared, even though he's not trying to make amends yet. This is one of the early clues of his eventual HeelFaceTurn.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Frieza genuinely cares about his family, [[SiblingRivalry even Cooler]], and actually cries when King Cold is killed.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Frieza genuinely cares about his family, [[SiblingRivalry even Cooler]], and actually cries when King Cold is killed. He also cares enough about his race to [[spoiler:want to wish Arcos back after its destruction]]. The same can be said about Cooler, before he's [[spoiler:assimilated by the Big Gete Star]].
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** In addition, Dr. Raichi notices that Hatchiyack can't beat a Super Saiyan 2, and [[GenreSavvy delays his invasion to upgrade him]].
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** In addition, Dr. Raichi notices that Hatchiyack can't beat a Super Saiyan 2, and [[GenreSavvy delays his invasion to upgrade him]].him.
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* RedHeadedHeroine: Inyon
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* UnstoppableRage: Frieza completely loses his shit while fighting Kanchapp, and as a result transforms into his fifth form.
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* UnstoppableRage: Frieza completely loses his shit while fighting Kanchapp, and as a result transforms into his fifth form.
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** [[spoiler: When Janemba's power resurrects the denizens of Hell, and Frieza finally sees his father again, who he has grown to hate... it's ''[[ExtremeMeleeRevenge not]]'' [[UnstoppableRage pretty.]]
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** [[spoiler: When Janemba's power resurrects the denizens of Hell, and Frieza finally sees his father again, who he has grown to hate... it's ''[[ExtremeMeleeRevenge not]]'' [[UnstoppableRage [[TranquilFury pretty.]]]]]]
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** [[spoiler: When Janemba's power resurrects the denizens of Hell, and Frieza finally sees his father again, who he has grown to hate... it's ''not'' pretty.]]
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** [[spoiler: When Janemba's power resurrects the denizens of Hell, and Frieza finally sees his father again, who he has grown to hate... it's ''not'' ''[[ExtremeMeleeRevenge not]]'' [[UnstoppableRage pretty.]]
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* LittleMissBadass: Glace. Only to be expected when [[spoiler:your father is Frieza]]
* MachiavelliWasWrong: A major theme.
* MadScientist: Raichi and Gero.
* MightyGlacier: King Cold, at least if one uses Frieza and Cooler as a baseline.
* MachiavelliWasWrong: A major theme.
* MadScientist: Raichi and Gero.
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* HeroesWantRedheads: Yamcha falls for Inyon, [[spoiler: and Frieza for Zangya.]] Both women are redheads.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522508/1/The-Fall-of-Lord-Frieza The Fall of Lord Frieza]] is a DragonBallZ FanFic by Mr. Arkham. The main story breaks off from canon when Frieza decides not to throw Goku's borrowed energy back at him at the end of their battle on Namek. After flying off (with his [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe missing half]] in tow), and being found King Cold, he decides to return to his home planet, Arcos, and train to take revenge on the Z-Fighters.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8522508/1/The-Fall-of-Lord-Frieza The Fall of Lord Frieza]] is a DragonBallZ ''Anime/DragonBallZ'' FanFic by Mr. Arkham. The main story breaks off from canon when Frieza decides not to throw Goku's borrowed energy back at him at the end of their battle on Namek. After flying off (with his [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe missing half]] in tow), and being found King Cold, he decides to return to his home planet, Arcos, and train to take revenge on the Z-Fighters.
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* BeamOWar: All the damn time. Then again, this is DragonBall we're talking about.
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* BeamOWar: All the damn time. Then again, this is DragonBall ''Franchise/DragonBall'' we're talking about.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Frieza. Apparently the DragonBallAbridged incarnation of the character held some influence over Frieza in this fic.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Frieza. Apparently the DragonBallAbridged ''WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged'' incarnation of the character held some influence over Frieza in this fic.
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* SuperMode: It's a DragonBall fic, of course. In addition to the standard Super Saiyan forms, there's also the Arcosian fifth form.
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* SuperMode: It's a DragonBall ''Franchise/DragonBall'' fic, of course. In addition to the standard Super Saiyan forms, there's also the Arcosian fifth form.
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Hot Mom has been disambiguated. Examples not clearly fitting into one of the tropes other than Fetish Fuel mentioned on Hot Mom are being removed. If you think it fits one of these tropes, feel free to readd with proper context. Same with Hot Dad.
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* HotMom: Bulma, Chi Chi, Android 18, and now [[spoiler: Zangya and Launch.]]
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* CrackPairing: Frieza and Zangya.
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* FanonDiscontinuity: A meta version. The Buu saga never takes place ([[spoiler:Hatchiyack destroys Babibi's ship and Buu's shell is now drifting somewhere in deep space]]), because the author really dislikes it.
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* FlyingBrick: everyone important, and many who aren't.
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* FlyingBrick: everyone Everyone important, and many who aren't.
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* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: Cooler's resentment toward Frieza, and their SiblingRivalry, is all due to the fact that Frieza was stronger, [[AsskickingEqualsAuthority and was therefore chosen as King Cold's heir]]. [[spoiler:It is this same resentment which leads him to eventually discovering his fifth form]]
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* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: Cooler's resentment toward Frieza, and their SiblingRivalry, is all due to the fact that Frieza was stronger, stronger, [[AsskickingEqualsAuthority and was therefore chosen as King Cold's heir]]. [[spoiler:It is this same resentment which leads him to eventually discovering his fifth form]]
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* CallingYourAttacks: Lampshaded when Raichii performs an attack he hadn't shown before and makes up a name for it on the spot, which Frieza dryly snarks at, before [[HypocriticalHumor doing the exact same thing]]
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* CallingYourAttacks: Lampshaded when Raichii Raichi performs an attack he hadn't shown before and makes up a name for it on the spot, which Frieza dryly snarks at, before [[HypocriticalHumor doing the exact same thing]]
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* CorruptChurch: [[spoiler: Before the events of fic, Dr. Raichii founds a fake cult, and uses his machines to leech ki from the various worshipers to power Hatchiyack.]]
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* CorruptChurch: [[spoiler: Before the events of fic, Dr. Raichii Raichi founds a fake cult, and uses his machines to leech ki from the various worshipers to power Hatchiyack.]]
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* InterspeciesRomance: In addition to the canon ones, [[spoiler:Yamcha/Inyon and Frieza/Zangya]]
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* InterspeciesRomance: In addition to the canon ones, [[spoiler:Yamcha/Inyon andFrieza/Zangya]]Frieza/Zangya.]]
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* NeckSnap: How Yamcha kills Salza,[[spoiler:and how Dr. Raichi kills Yamcha.]]
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* RunTheGauntlet: [[spoiler: Part of the reason Frieza was able to beat Raichi was because he had was tired from fighting Inyon, Yamcha, Gohan, and Piccolo in quick succession, with no time to rest.]]
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* RunTheGauntlet: [[spoiler: Part of the reason Frieza was able to beat Raichi was because he had was tired from fighting Inyon, Yamcha, Gohan, and Piccolo in quick succession, with no time to rest.]]
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* WeaksauceWeakness: Janemba, just like canon is hurt by insults of all things. This time, it's actually exploited.
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* ThisIsForEmphasisBitch: Vegeta to Cell during the Janemba Arc. "Super Saiyan 2, bitch!"