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* FemalesAreMoreInnocent: When Sylvia is kidnapped and brought to the laboratory, the lone female scientist is portrayed as being far more gentler with her than the other, male, scientists. The same woman primarily spends her time grooming, feeding, and playing with Sylvia, while her male colleagues focus on their experiments and view the Pokemon with a far more clinical sense.
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* ShoutOut: Many. The ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' anime and games, ''Anime/TheVisionOfEscaflowne'', ''Franchise/MyLittlePony'', ''Franchise/SailorMoon'', ''Literature/BlackBeauty'', just to name a few.
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* ArtisticLicense: In the story, Sylvia evolves via an item, but in the actual X and Y games, Eevee evolves into Sylveon via Pokemon-Amie and knowing a Fairy-type move. It's justified in that the story began in February of 2013, and Sylveon's actual means of evolution weren't revealed until October of that year. This mistake has been acknowledged in the author's epilogue notes.
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** In the story, Sylvia evolves via an item, but in the actual X and Y games, Eevee evolves into Sylveon via Pokemon-Amie and knowing a Fairy-type move. It's justified in that the story began in February of 2013, and Sylveon's actual means of evolution weren't revealed until October of that year. This mistake has been acknowledged in the author's epiloguenotes.notes.
** Psychic moves are used to control Claudia, the Tyranitar. Tyranitar is part-Dark, which means it's immune to Psychic-type attacks.
** In the story, Sylvia evolves via an item, but in the actual X and Y games, Eevee evolves into Sylveon via Pokemon-Amie and knowing a Fairy-type move. It's justified in that the story began in February of 2013, and Sylveon's actual means of evolution weren't revealed until October of that year. This mistake has been acknowledged in the author's epilogue
** Psychic moves are used to control Claudia, the Tyranitar. Tyranitar is part-Dark, which means it's immune to Psychic-type attacks.
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* BigEater: Alseides and Bolt.
* BigFriendlyDog: Nicodemus.
* BloodKnight: [[spoiler: Alseides, post-TimeSkip. It's unknown if he stays this way or not.]]
* BigFriendlyDog: Nicodemus.
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* BrutalHonesty: Dilandau, [[spoiler: Vapor,]] and Polly, all for differing reasons.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: All of Sylvia's reunions with her family.
* CowardlyLion: Konoha, Yuki when he's young.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Hikaru, Dilandau, and Nicodemus. And to a lesser extent, Sylvia's father.
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* TheDeterminator: Sylvia.
* DontYouDarePityMe: [[spoiler: Vapor, after he TookALevelInJerkass, completing his FaceHeelTurn.]]
* EarnYourHappyEnding: [[spoiler: Hikaru and Sylvia.]]
* DontYouDarePityMe: [[spoiler: Vapor, after he TookALevelInJerkass, completing his FaceHeelTurn.]]
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* FaceHeelTurn: Alseides, and later [[spoiler:Vapor. Alseides may have recovered later, but Vapor certainly didn't.]]
* ForWantOfANail: If Sylvia had saved Bolt, he probably wouldn't have [[spoiler:started a family]].
* GoodAllAlong: [[spoiler: Leonard (Bolt's trainer).]]
* HairTriggerTemper: Dilandau. Hikaru has minor shades of it.
* HatesBeingAlone: Take a guess.
* HeroicBSOD
* ForWantOfANail: If Sylvia had saved Bolt, he probably wouldn't have [[spoiler:started a family]].
* GoodAllAlong: [[spoiler: Leonard (Bolt's trainer).]]
* HairTriggerTemper: Dilandau. Hikaru has minor shades of it.
* HatesBeingAlone: Take a guess.
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* KillItWithFire: Dilandau.
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* {{Planimal}}: [[spoiler: Konoha.]]
* PluckyGirl: Sylvia.
* {{Pun}}: [[spoiler:Chapter 11: A Bolt of Thunder. Guess who is the focus of the first two-thirds of the chapter]].
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* PluckyGirl: Sylvia.
* {{Pun}}: [[spoiler:Chapter 11: A Bolt of Thunder. Guess who is the focus of the first two-thirds of the chapter]].
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* ShrinkingViolet: Bambi, Sylvia's friend. [[spoiler: Before he evolves.]]
* SickinglySweet: In-story, many not-so-nice characters Sylvia meets are disgusted by her cute appearance and have no problem telling her exactly this.
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* TookALevelInKindness: [[spoiler: Bolt and Moondancer.]]
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* UsedToBeASweetKid: [[spoiler: Dilandau, Vapor.]]
* VerbalTic: The Jol[[FunWithHomophones tik]].
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''When an Eevee is forcibly separated from her family, she goes on a long journey through Unova to return to the only home she knows. But the journey is rough, even tragic, as she is continually rejected wherever she goes. Why? She is the second Sylveon born in the whole entire world, and she doesn't know how she evolved into this strange new creature.''
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* OrwellianRetcon: Moondancer's nickname was originally Moonie, as a reference to the early 90s ''Manga/SailorMoon'' [[PeripheryDemographic fans]]. But after the UnfortunateImplications were pointed out, she changed it to Dancer.
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* OrwellianRetcon: Moondancer's nickname was originally Moonie, as a reference to the early 90s ''Manga/SailorMoon'' [[PeripheryDemographic fans]]. But after the UnfortunateImplications were pointed out, she However, this was changed it to Dancer.Dancer because the original nickname had negative audience reactions.
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* IllGirl: Desaline[[spoiler:, Sylvia's first "official" trainer.]]
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* ScissorsCutsRock: Dilandau is able to set fire to a cave. While the inhabitants of the cave [[ColdIron may be weak to Fire attacks]], the cave itself isn't.
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* WouldHitAGirl: Dilandau outright attacks Sylvia at various points in the story due to [[TastesLikeDiabetes her cute appearance]] and [[CrazyJealousGuy the belief that she's trying to take Nicodemus from him]], which isn't true.
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* WouldHitAGirl: Dilandau outright attacks Sylvia at various points in the story due to [[TastesLikeDiabetes her cute appearance]] appearance and [[CrazyJealousGuy the belief that she's trying to take Nicodemus from him]], which isn't true.
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* WouldHitAGirl: Dilandau outright attacks Sylvia at various points in the story due to [[TastesLikeDiabetes her cute appearance]] and [[CrazyJealousGuy the belief that she's trying to take Nicodemus from him]], which isn't true.
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* WouldHitAGirl: Dilandau outright attacks Sylvia at various points in the story due to [[TastesLikeDiabetes her cute appearance]] and [[CrazyJealousGuy the belief that she's trying to take Nicodemus from him]], which isn't true.true.
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''Sylvia the Sylveon'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' Fanfic by Tropers/{{SaoirseParisa}}.
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* [[BigFriendlyDog Big Friendly Stoutland]]: Nicodemus.
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* [[spoiler: ReplacementGoldfish: Sylvia is horrified when she discovers Dilandau latches onto her to replace Nicodemus after the latter dies, which essentially means being his punching bag.]]
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* [[spoiler: ReplacementGoldfish: Sylvia [[spoiler:Sylvia is horrified when she discovers Dilandau latches onto her to replace Nicodemus after the latter dies, which essentially means being his punching bag.]]
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* LeaveYourQuestTest: Nearly every trainer and/or Pokemon Sylvia meets offers one of these, for one reason or another. Sylvia doesn't leave her quest, though, as the entire point of returning home ''was to choose what exactly she wanted''.
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* LeaveYourQuestTest: Nearly every trainer and/or Pokemon Sylvia meets offers one of these, for one reason or another. Sylvia doesn't leave her quest, though, as the entire point of returning home ''was to choose what exactly she wanted''. She does, however, make some ''very'' long stopovers along the way (spending several months with the elderly couple, two ''years'' with Desaline, and "quite a few months" in Undella Town).
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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Sylvia has a bad habit of repeating herself, or repeating things she was just told (for example, "'I'm Claudia, a Tyranitar', said Claudia, the Tyranitar" - this is almost a direct quote).
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''Sylvia the Sylveon'' is the story of [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a young Eevee (and later a Sylveon) named Sylvia,]] who finds herself abducted from her family home one night. After a daring escape, she sets out across the Unova region on a journey of self discovery, hoping one day to return home to her family on Flocessy Ranch--but it certainly won't be easy...
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''Sylvia the Sylveon'' is the story of [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a young Eevee (and later a Sylveon) named Sylvia,]] who finds herself abducted from her family home one night. After a daring escape, she sets out across the Unova region on a journey of self discovery, self-discovery, hoping one day to return home to her family on Flocessy Ranch--but it certainly won't be easy...
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* ArtisticLicense: In the story, Sylvia evolves via an item, but in the actual X and Y games, Eevee evolve into Sylveon via Pokemon-Amie and knowing a Fairy-type move. It's justified in that the story began in February of 2013, and Sylveon's actual means of evolution weren't revealed until October of that year. This mistake has been acknowledged in the author's epilogue notes.
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* ArtisticLicense: In the story, Sylvia evolves via an item, but in the actual X and Y games, Eevee evolve evolves into Sylveon via Pokemon-Amie and knowing a Fairy-type move. It's justified in that the story began in February of 2013, and Sylveon's actual means of evolution weren't revealed until October of that year. This mistake has been acknowledged in the author's epilogue notes.
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* BigBrotherBully: Bolt starts off this way. [[spoiler: He grows out of it. Alseides not only doesn't grow out of this phase, he becomes ''much'' more volatile. Vapor, on the other hand, becomes one.]]
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* BigBrotherBully: Bolt starts off this way. [[spoiler: He grows out of it. Alseides not only doesn't grow out of this phase, but he also becomes ''much'' more volatile. Vapor, on the other hand, becomes one.]]
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* TheHomewardJourney: Sylvia's entire journey is all so she can return home. She does wind up getting side tracked a few times, some of which were no fault of her own, such as getting caught by a trainer.
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** When Bolt is captured, Alseides blames Sylvia for it since she saw it happen, and she later believes it really was her fault. [[spoiler: When Sylvia says this to Bolt, he thinks she is bluffing, and admits it was his own fault.]]
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** When Bolt is captured, Alseides blames Sylvia for it since she saw it happen, and she later believes it really was her fault. [[spoiler: When Sylvia says this to Bolt, he thinks she is bluffing, bluffing and admits it was his own fault.]]
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* OrwellianRetcon: Moondancer's nickname was originally Moonie, as a reference to early 90s ''Manga/SailorMoon'' [[PeripheryDemographic fans]]. But after the UnfortunateImplications were pointed out, she changed it to Dancer.
* PhraseCatcher: Many people of Flocessy Ranch will say that Sylveon was 'tailor-made' for Sylvia, as it not only matches her personality, but her name as well.
* PhraseCatcher: Many people of Flocessy Ranch will say that Sylveon was 'tailor-made' for Sylvia, as it not only matches her personality, but her name as well.
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* OrwellianRetcon: Moondancer's nickname was originally Moonie, as a reference to the early 90s ''Manga/SailorMoon'' [[PeripheryDemographic fans]]. But after the UnfortunateImplications were pointed out, she changed it to Dancer.
* PhraseCatcher: Many people of Flocessy Ranch will say that Sylveon was 'tailor-made' for Sylvia, as it not only matches herpersonality, personality but her name as well.
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* WideEyedIdealist: Sylvia understandably comes off as this for the most part since she starts the series very young. [[spoiler: Some not so nice characters call her out on this or mistake it as her trying to be a white knight.]]
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* WideEyedIdealist: Sylvia understandably comes off as like this for the most part since she starts the series very young. [[spoiler: Some not so nice characters call her out on this or mistake it as her trying to be a white knight.]]
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* {{Homage}}: To ''Manga/KotouraSan'', or to be precise its ending theme ''the Flower of Hope''. In chapter 5, entire (very long) lyrics to the song was reproduced which apparently touched Sylvia.
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* {{Homage}}: To ''Manga/KotouraSan'', or to be precise its ending theme ''the Flower of Hope''. In chapter 5, TheHomewardJourney: Sylvia's entire (very long) lyrics to the song was reproduced journey is all so she can return home. She does wind up getting side tracked a few times, some of which apparently touched Sylvia.were no fault of her own, such as getting caught by a trainer.
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A [[TheWikiRule Wiki]] about the fanfic is in progress [[http://sylvia-the-sylveon.wikia.com here]].
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* ContrivedCoincidence: All of Sylvia's reunions with her family.
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* ShoutOut: Many. The 'Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' anime and games, ''Anime/TheVisionOfEscaflowne'', ''Franchise/MyLittlePony'', ''Franchise/SailorMoon'', ''Literature/BlackBeauty'', just to name a few.
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* ShoutOut: Many. The 'Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' anime and games, ''Anime/TheVisionOfEscaflowne'', ''Franchise/MyLittlePony'', ''Franchise/SailorMoon'', ''Literature/BlackBeauty'', just to name a few.
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* ActionGirl: Hikaru. Put her friends in danger, and she'll zap you with some epic thunderbolts! Sylvia pretty much knows she (Sylvia) has to become one in order for the story to progress.
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* ActionGirl: Hikaru. Put her friends in danger, and she'll zap you with some epic thunderbolts! thunderbolts!
** Sylvia pretty much knows she(Sylvia) has to become one in order for the story to progress.
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''Sylvia the Sylveon'' is a well-written, and (somewhat) realistic tale of what may happen if a young girl is kidnapped as Sylvia was. She meets a colourful cast on a journey of self discovery, hoping one day to return home to her family on Flocessy Ranch.
If only she knew how much she would have suffered thanks to that...
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''Sylvia the Sylveon'' is a well-written, and (somewhat) realistic tale the story of what may happen if [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a young girl is kidnapped as Sylvia was. She meets Eevee (and later a colourful cast Sylveon) named Sylvia,]] who finds herself abducted from her family home one night. After a daring escape, she sets out across the Unova region on a journey of self discovery, hoping one day to return home to her family on Flocessy Ranch.
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Ranch--but it certainly won't be easy...
If only she knew how much she would have suffered thanks to that...
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* {{Badass}}: [[spoiler: Konoha.]] He defies his sadistic trainer, first by running off and evolving into the Pokémon he wants when his trainer had another evolution in mind, then, after a beating-up, ''destroying his Poké Ball'', therefore freeing himself.
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* WideEyedIdealist: Sylvia understandably comes off as this for the most part since she starts the series very young. [[spoiler: Some not so nice characters call her out on this or mistake it as her trying to be a WhiteKnight.]]
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* WideEyedIdealist: Sylvia understandably comes off as this for the most part since she starts the series very young. [[spoiler: Some not so nice characters call her out on this or mistake it as her trying to be a WhiteKnight.white knight.]]
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* ActionGirl: Hikaru. Put her friends in danger, and she'll zap you with some epic thunderbolts! Sylvia pretty much knows she has to become one in order for the story to progress.
* AffectionateNickname: Moondancer's siblings call him Dancer, but he hates it.
* ArtisticLicense: In the story, Sylvia evolves via an item, but in the actual X and Y games, Eevee evolve into Sylveon via Pokemon-Amie and knowing a fairy type move. It's justified in that the story began in February of 2013, and Sylveon's actual means of evolution weren't revealed until October of that year. This mistake has been acknowledged in the author's epilogue notes.
* AffectionateNickname: Moondancer's siblings call him Dancer, but he hates it.
* ArtisticLicense: In the story, Sylvia evolves via an item, but in the actual X and Y games, Eevee evolve into Sylveon via Pokemon-Amie and knowing a fairy type move. It's justified in that the story began in February of 2013, and Sylveon's actual means of evolution weren't revealed until October of that year. This mistake has been acknowledged in the author's epilogue notes.
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* ActionGirl: Hikaru. Put her friends in danger, and she'll zap you with some epic thunderbolts! Sylvia pretty much knows she (Sylvia) has to become one in order for the story to progress.
* AffectionateNickname: Moondancer's siblings call him Dancer, but he hatesit.
it. Sylvia herself is sometimes called Sylvie or Syl, Alseides Al or Alfie, and Lucretia Lulu.
* ArtisticLicense: In the story, Sylvia evolves via an item, but in the actual X and Y games, Eevee evolve into Sylveon via Pokemon-Amie and knowing afairy type Fairy-type move. It's justified in that the story began in February of 2013, and Sylveon's actual means of evolution weren't revealed until October of that year. This mistake has been acknowledged in the author's epilogue notes.
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