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** Kagami changes her ringtone to the first ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' ED theme, [[RieFu "Life is Like a Boat"]].
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** Kagami changes her ringtone to the first ''Manga/{{Bleach}}'' ED theme, [[RieFu [[Music/RieFu "Life is Like a Boat"]].
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->'''Homura:''' ''"Now, one last time before we begin... give me your word that you won't offer to make contracts with them."''
->'''Kyubey:''' ''"Absolutely not. It's out of the question. If either of them became Puellae Magi... [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt it would mean the end of everything]]."''
->'''Kyubey:''' ''"Absolutely not. It's out of the question. If either of them became Puellae Magi... [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt it would mean the end of everything]]."''
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This story's versions of Kagami and Homura both have [[CharacterBlog character blogs]]: [[http://stars-above-kagami.tumblr.com Stars Above Kagami]] and [[http://stars-above-homura.tumblr.com Stars Above Homura]], '''both frequently {{NSFW}}'''.
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* GoOutWithASmile: [[spoiler: Tsukasa in the 2012 timeline, although in this case, it's because she died too quickly to realise she was dying.]]
** [[spoiler: Homura dies this way at the end.]]
** [[spoiler: Homura dies this way at the end.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The Nine are completely defeated and everyone is saved....but Homura dies of Soul Gem corruption as a result of the fight. Kagami does manage to heal her timeline's Homura, but doesn't dare use her as a ReplacementGoldfish.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The Nine are completely defeated and everyone is saved....but saved. However, Homura dies of Soul Gem corruption as a result of the fight. Kagami does manage to heal her timeline's Homura, but doesn't dare use her as a ReplacementGoldfish.ReplacementGoldfish, and hopes to join Homura and Madoka one day.]]
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* [IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Konata to Kagami once she realises Kagami is in love with Homura.
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** One in the final chapter: [[spoiler: "It's breaking...", referring to Homura's [[SoulJar Soul Gem]].]]
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* [IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Konata to Kagami once she realises Kagami is in love with Homura.
** [[spoiler: Homura stops Kyubey from [[DealWithTheDevil contracting]] with Kagami for this exact reason, knowing full well she'll die from her injuries without it.]]
** [[spoiler: Homura stops Kyubey from [[DealWithTheDevil contracting]] with Kagami for this exact reason, knowing full well she'll die from her injuries without it.]]
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* IsThatWhatHeToldYou]: Said by Kyubey in Chapter 5. Homura's explanation as to what happened to her timeline's Hiiragi twins wasn't entirely truthful...
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** [[spoiler:She threatens this against Kagami in their rematch. Kagami, understandably, [[ShutUpHannibal does not]] [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown take any of that]].]]
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* MortalWoundReveal: [[spoiler: Homura's Soul Gem is revealed to have been damaged in the final battle shortly afterwards. This changes the ending from a straight HappyEnding to a BittersweetEnding with Homura's death as a result.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7371211/1/Stars_Above Stars Above]]'' is a fanfic written by Tropers [[{{@/FringeBenefits}} BHS]] and {{@/Forzare}}. Based loosely on the events of a [[LongRunners long-running]] RP on the TVTropesForum, the story is a ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica''[=/=]''Manga/LuckyStar'' IntercontinuityCrossOver [[spoiler:which ignores the events of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]], as the story was written and planned out long before the movie's release.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7371211/1/Stars_Above Stars Above]]'' is a fanfic written by Tropers [[{{@/FringeBenefits}} BHS]] and {{@/Forzare}}. Based loosely on the events of a [[LongRunners long-running]] RP on the TVTropesForum, the story is a ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica''[=/=]''Manga/LuckyStar'' IntercontinuityCrossOver [[spoiler:which takes place after Madoka's ascension and ignores the events of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]], as the story was written and planned out long before the movie's release.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: And does die. [[spoiler: Every single Puella Magi on Earth dies in Homura's time, long with Tsukasa, and in Kagami's time, quite a few innocents die. Homura herself also dies at the end.]]
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* CorruptTheCutie: [[spoiler: Desideria disguised as]] Miyuki does this to Tsukasa throughout the story.
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** [[spoiler:Konata suffers one after the battle with the Seventh, witnessing for the first time just how screwed up the Demons are- she managed to escape this due to LaserGuidedAmnesia after her encounter with Jovanni.]]
* HeroicRROD: [[spoiler: Homura at the end of the final battle. This results in her death.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: The Yuki impersonator pulls one to save Kagami, Konata and the other bystanders from demon crows. She gets [[CruelAndUnusualDeath killed by being flayed alive]] for her troubles.]]
* HeroicRROD: [[spoiler: Homura at the end of the final battle. This results in her death.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: The Yuki impersonator pulls one to save Kagami, Konata and the other bystanders from demon crows. She gets [[CruelAndUnusualDeath killed by being flayed alive]] for her troubles.]]
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* [[ApocalypseMaiden Apocalypse Maidens]]: [[spoiler:Kagami contains the Demon that could destroy TheMultiverse... and by thge final chapters Tsukasa contains another, unnamed one, similarly powerful. This overlaps with BarrierMaiden, see below.]]
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* [[BarrierMaiden Barrier Maidens]]: [[spoiler:Both of the Hiiragi twins are this to TheMultiverse... their survival keeps everything from falling apart.]]
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* [[BarrierMaiden Barrier Maidens]]: BarrierMaiden: [[spoiler:Both of the Hiiragi twins are this to TheMultiverse... their survival keeps everything from falling apart.]]
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* [[spoiler:BigDamnKiss: In Chapter 17, after a night of terrible battles and even more terrible trauma.]]
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* [[spoiler:BittersweetEnding: The Nine are completely defeated and everyone is saved....but Homura dies of Soul Gem corruption as a result of the fight. Kagami does manage to heal her timeline's Homura, but doesn't dare use her as a ReplacementGoldfish.]]
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* [[spoiler:BigDamnKiss: In BigDamnKiss: [[spoiler:In Chapter 17, after a night of terrible battles and even more terrible trauma.]]
*[[spoiler:BittersweetEnding: The BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The Nine are completely defeated and everyone is saved....but Homura dies of Soul Gem corruption as a result of the fight. Kagami does manage to heal her timeline's Homura, but doesn't dare use her as a ReplacementGoldfish.]]
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* [[EmotionEater Emotion Eaters]]: [[spoiler:The Demons feed on a person's Heart, the core of their emotions.]]
* [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt The End of the Multiverse As We Know It]]: [[spoiler:This will occur if anything happens to Kagami and Tsukasa, the "multiversal focal points".]]
* [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt The End of the Multiverse As We Know It]]: [[spoiler:This will occur if anything happens to Kagami and Tsukasa, the "multiversal focal points".]]
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* [[EmotionEater Emotion Eaters]]: EmotionEater: [[spoiler:The Demons feed on a person's Heart, the core of their emotions.]]
*[[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt The End of the Multiverse As We Know It]]: TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: [[spoiler:This will occur if anything happens to Kagami and Tsukasa, the "multiversal focal points".]]
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* [[IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming Idiosyncratic Chapter Naming:]] Just as in Madoka, the title of each chapter comes from a line of dialogue within it.
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* [[IsThatWhatHeToldYou Is That What You Told Her?]]: Said by Kyubey in Chapter 5. Homura's explanation as to what happened to her timeline's Hiiragi twins wasn't entirely truthful...
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* [[ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight Screw Your Mission, I'm Doing What's Right]]: Said by Kagami to Kyubey in Chapter 4.
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* TheVirus: [[spoiler:Jiovanni's Rite of Coversion turns humans into his grotesque red-cloaked monks. [[TragicMonster Poor Konata]].]]
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* WhamLine: Two in rapid succession in Chapter 4: [[spoiler:[[EverybodysDeadDave "We're all that's left,"]] and "Neither of us killed that Demon... you did."]]
* [[WholeEpisodeFlashback Whole Chapter Flashback:]] Chapter 9.
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* [[WorldsStrongestMan World's Strongest Puella Magi]]: Homura is explicitly called this, and thus tasked with the protection of Kagami [[spoiler:in the 2012 timeline]].
* [[WholeEpisodeFlashback Whole Chapter Flashback:]] Chapter 9.
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* [[WorldsStrongestMan World's Strongest Puella Magi]]: Homura is explicitly called this, and thus tasked with the protection of Kagami [[spoiler:in the 2012 timeline]].
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* WhamLine: Two in rapid succession in Chapter 4: [[spoiler:[[EverybodysDeadDave "We're [[spoiler:"We're all that's left,"]] left," and "Neither of us killed that Demon... you did."]]
*[[WholeEpisodeFlashback Whole Chapter Flashback:]] WholeEpisodeFlashback: Chapter 9.
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* [[WorldsStrongestMan World's Strongest Puella Magi]]: Homura is explicitly called this, and thus tasked with the protection of Kagami [[spoiler:in the 2012 timeline]].%%* WoodenKatanasAreEvenBetter
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* [[WorldsStrongestMan World's Strongest Puella Magi]]: Homura is explicitly called this, and thus tasked with the protection of Kagami [[spoiler:in the 2012 timeline]].
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** Konata and [[OccidentalOtaku Patty]] put on a show featuring [[FutariWaPrettyCure the original Pretty Cure]] at the cosplay cafe in Akihabara.
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** Konata and [[OccidentalOtaku Patty]] put on a show featuring [[FutariWaPrettyCure [[Anime/FutariWaPrettyCure the original Pretty Cure]] at the cosplay cafe in Akihabara.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7371211/1/Stars_Above Stars Above]]'' is a fanfic written by Tropers [[{{@/FringeBenefits}} BHS]] and {{@/Forzare}}. Based loosely on the events of a [[LongRunners long-running]] RP on the TVTropesForum, the story is a ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica''[=/=]''Manga/LuckyStar'' IntercontinuityCrossOver.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7371211/1/Stars_Above Stars Above]]'' is a fanfic written by Tropers [[{{@/FringeBenefits}} BHS]] and {{@/Forzare}}. Based loosely on the events of a [[LongRunners long-running]] RP on the TVTropesForum, the story is a ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica''[=/=]''Manga/LuckyStar'' IntercontinuityCrossOver.
IntercontinuityCrossOver [[spoiler:which ignores the events of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]], as the story was written and planned out long before the movie's release.]]
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This story's versions of Kagami and Homura both have [[CharacterBlog character blogs]]: [[http://stars-above-kagami.tumblr.com Stars Above Kagami]] and [[http://stars-above-homura.tumblr.com Stars Above Homura]], ''both frequently NSFW''.
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This story's versions of Kagami and Homura both have [[CharacterBlog character blogs]]: [[http://stars-above-kagami.tumblr.com Stars Above Kagami]] and [[http://stars-above-homura.tumblr.com Stars Above Homura]], ''both '''both frequently NSFW''.
{{NSFW}}'''.
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A typical day at [[Manga/LuckyStar Ryouou High]] takes a turn for the strange when a [[NewTransferStudent mysterious transfer student]] enters Kagami's class: [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Homura Akemi]]. The new girl [[TheStoic doesn't show emotions]] and [[TheQuietOne doesn't speak a spare word to anyone]], but whenever Kagami looks her in the eyes she feels something she can't explain. On the train ride home from school, Kagami, Konata, and Tsukasa are attacked by a terrifying creature. Homura appears and kills the monster, then apologizes to Kagami, saying that the attack "wasn't supposed to happen" before wiping her memories of the incident.
The problem is, the memory wipe [[NoSell doesn't take.]] The next day at school, Kagami demands answers... and the truth is stranger and more terrible than she could imagine. [[spoiler:Coming back from two years after Madoka's ascension (thus ignoring the events of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]]), Homura and Kyubey have fled from their own world, which is on the verge of death due to Kagami's AlternateSelf transforming into a Demon and attacking the Earth. They have crossed over to this new timeline to prevent the apocalypse from happening again... but the Demons have crossed over at well, and are targeting Kagami and Tsukasa.]]
In the midst of the growing chaos, an impossible friendship starts to bloom into something more...
The problem is, the memory wipe [[NoSell doesn't take.]] The next day at school, Kagami demands answers... and the truth is stranger and more terrible than she could imagine. [[spoiler:Coming back from two years after Madoka's ascension (thus ignoring the events of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]]), Homura and Kyubey have fled from their own world, which is on the verge of death due to Kagami's AlternateSelf transforming into a Demon and attacking the Earth. They have crossed over to this new timeline to prevent the apocalypse from happening again... but the Demons have crossed over at well, and are targeting Kagami and Tsukasa.]]
In the midst of the growing chaos, an impossible friendship starts to bloom into something more...
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A typical day at [[Manga/LuckyStar Ryouou High]] takes a turn for the strange when a [[NewTransferStudent mysterious transfer student]] enters Kagami's class: arrives for her first day at a new school. [[EmotionlessGirl Cold and emotionless]], she treats everyone in her class with indifference... except for one [[OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent ordinary girl]], who is mystified by her attitude. Later on that same day, this girl and her friends are attacked by a hideous monster, only to be saved by a MagicalGirl...
[[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaHomura Akemi]]. Sounds familiar, right?]] Well, here come the twists:
The new school is [[Manga/LuckyStar Ryouou High]], the ordinary girl[[TheStoic doesn't show emotions]] and [[TheQuietOne doesn't speak a spare word to anyone]], but whenever is Kagami looks her in Hiiragi, not Madoka Kaname, the eyes she feels something she can't explain. On the train ride home from school, Kagami, Konata, and Tsukasa are attacked by monster is called a terrifying creature. Homura appears and kills the monster, then apologizes to Kagami, saying that the attack "wasn't supposed to happen" before wiping her memories of the incident.
The problem is, the memory wipe [[NoSell doesn't take.]] The next day at school, Kagami demands answers...Demon, and the truth is stranger and more terrible than she could imagine. [[spoiler:Coming back from two years after Madoka's ascension (thus ignoring the events of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]]), Homura and Kyubey have fled from their own world, which is on the verge of death due to Kagami's AlternateSelf transforming into a Demon and attacking the Earth. They have crossed over to this new timeline to prevent the apocalypse from happening again... but the Demons have crossed over at well, and are targeting Kagami and Tsukasa.]]
In the midst of the growing chaos, an impossible friendship starts to bloom into something more...
transfer student is wearing a red ribbon in her hair...
[[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica
The new school is [[Manga/LuckyStar Ryouou High]], the ordinary girl
The problem is, the memory wipe [[NoSell doesn't take.]] The next day at school, Kagami demands answers...
In the midst of the growing chaos, an impossible friendship starts to bloom into something more...
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This story's versions of Kagami and Homura both have [[CharacterBlog character blogs]]: [[http://stars-above-kagami.tumblr.com Stars Above Kagami]] and [[http://stars-above-homura.tumblr.com Stars Above Homura]].
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This story's versions of Kagami and Homura both have [[CharacterBlog character blogs]]: [[http://stars-above-kagami.tumblr.com Stars Above Kagami]] and [[http://stars-above-homura.tumblr.com Stars Above Homura]].
Homura]], ''both frequently NSFW''.
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** In Chapter 5, Nurse Amahara from the ''Lucky Star'' manga makes an appearance. MinoruShiraishi has a single line in Chapter 6, [[spoiler:when he informs Miss Kuroi that Miyuki has been gone for a long time.]]
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** In Chapter 5, Nurse Amahara from the ''Lucky Star'' manga makes an appearance. MinoruShiraishi Creator/MinoruShiraishi has a single line in Chapter 6, [[spoiler:when he informs Miss Kuroi that Miyuki has been gone for a long time.]]
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Also see ''[[FanFic/{{Respect}} Respect]]'', another CrossOver by the same author.
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Also see ''[[FanFic/{{Respect}} Respect]]'', another CrossOver Respect]]'' and ''FanFic/ShatteredSkies'', unrelated {{CrossOver}}s by the same author.
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* [[ApocalypseMaiden Apocalypse Maidens]]: [[spoiler:Kagami contains the Demon that could destroy TheMultiverse... and by thge final chapters Tsukasa contains another, unnamed one, similarly powerful. This verlaps with BarrierMaiden, see below.]]
* ArcWords: "The [[TitleDrop stars above]] will fall."
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* [[ApocalypseMaiden Apocalypse Maidens]]: [[spoiler:Kagami contains the Demon that could destroy TheMultiverse... and by thge final chapters Tsukasa contains another, unnamed one, similarly powerful. This verlaps overlaps with BarrierMaiden, see below.]]
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* CallingYourAttacks: Mami, of course, continues to do this as well as the [[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Kazumi girls]]. [[spoiler: Homura also takes to naming her ultimate attack, "Requiem Violetta", and credits Mami for it. By the end, all of the Stars Above have named attacks.]]
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* CallingYourAttacks: Mami, of course, continues to do this as well as the [[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Kazumi girls]].Pleiades Saints]]. [[spoiler: Homura also takes to naming her ultimate attack, "Requiem Violetta", and credits Mami for it. By the end, all of the Stars Above have named attacks.attacks: [[WaveMotionGun "Blue Moon]] [[Franchise/SailorMoon Sapphire Power Kiss"]] for Konata, [[FantasticNuke "Ult]][[Franchise/FinalFantasy ima"]] for Miyuki, [[FrickinLaserBeams "Demon Slayer"]] for Tsukasa, and [[SwordBeam "Starry Night"]] for Kagami.]]
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** [[spoiler:''[[UpToEleven Every]]'' ''MagicalGirl'' ''[[UpToEleven ever]]'' appears in Kagami's dream in Chapter 12.]]
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** [[spoiler:''[[UpToEleven Every]]'' ''MagicalGirl'' ''[[UpToEleven ever]]'' appears in Kagami's dream in Chapter 12. Specifically alluded to are Anime/TokyoMewMew, [[Manga/RevolutionaryGirlUtena Revolutionary Girls]], [[Manga/MagicKnightRayearth the Magic Knights]], [[Manga/CardCaptorSakura Cardcaptor Sakura]], [[Manga/WeddingPeach the Wedding Angels]], [[Frnachise/PrettyCure all of the Precure]], [[Franchise/MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha the TSAB agents and the Wolkenritter]], [[Anime/DevilHunterYohko all 108 Devil Hunters]], and every [[Franchise/SailorMoon Sailor Senshi]] and [[Franchise/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Puella Magi]] to ever exist.]]
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* {{Continuation}}: [[spoiler:Of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica the Madoka anime]], ignoring the events of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaRebellion Rebellion.]]]]
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* {{Continuation}}: [[spoiler:Of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica the Madoka anime]], ignoring anime]]. The story deliberately ignores the events of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaRebellion Rebellion.]]]][[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]], as it was written and planned well before the movie's release.]]
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** The dialogue at the twins' birthday party is similar to the same scene in Lucky Star Episode 4, only with a few significant changes to reflect that the timeline has been altered.
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* DiesWideOpen: [[spoiler:Tsukasa and Kazumi in the Madokaverse both die staring upward.]]
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* EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler: Vittoria fits the bill, and later Desideria mutates into a huge living rift, a paradox in time and space.]]
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* NewTransferStudent: Homura, just as in the Madoka canon, [[spoiler:but with a twist.]]
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* NewTransferStudent: Homura, just as in the Madoka canon, [[spoiler:but with a twist.twist...]]
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* SupportingLeader: [[Manga/PuellaMagiOrikoMagica Oriko Mikuni]] [[spoiler: in the 2012 timeline]]
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** Used several times as ArcWords towards the end: ''All will come to ruin. The stars above will fall.''
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** Used several times as ArcWords towards the end: ''All will come to ruin. The ''The stars above will fall.fall, and all will come to ruin.''
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* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler:Vittoria's attack on Earth in the Madoka-verse resulted in one of Scope Level 3 (Planetary). The Severity is Level 2 (Societal Collapse), verging on Levels 3 (Species Extinction) and 4 (Total Extinction) due to the damage to causality and the climate. Only one or two billion people are left, and every city and town is said to be in ruins. The Demons are now aiming for a [[ApocalypseHow/ClassZ Class Z Omniversal Physical Annihilation.]]
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* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler:Vittoria's attack on Earth in the Madoka-verse resulted in one of Scope Level 3 (Planetary). The Severity is Level 2 (Societal Collapse), verging on Levels 3 (Species Extinction) and 4 (Total Extinction) due to the damage to causality and the climate. Only one or two billion people are left, and every city and town is said to be in ruins. The Demons are now aiming for a [[ApocalypseHow/ClassZ Class Z Omniversal Physical Annihilation.]]]]]]
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* AloofDarkHairedGirl: Homura.
* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler:Vittoria's attack on Earth in the Madoka-verse resulted in one of Scope Level 3 (Planetary). The Severity is Level 2 (Societal Collapse), verging on Levels 3 (Species Extinction) and 4 (Total Extinction) due to the damage to causality and the climate. Only one or two billion people are left, and every city and town is said to be in ruins. The Demons are now aiming for an Omniversal Physical Annihilation.]]
* [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseMaiden Apocalypse Maidens]]: Kagami contains the Demon that could destroy TheMultiverse. Overlaps with BarrierMaiden, see below.]]
* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler:Vittoria's attack on Earth in the Madoka-verse resulted in one of Scope Level 3 (Planetary). The Severity is Level 2 (Societal Collapse), verging on Levels 3 (Species Extinction) and 4 (Total Extinction) due to the damage to causality and the climate. Only one or two billion people are left, and every city and town is said to be in ruins. The Demons are now aiming for an Omniversal Physical Annihilation.]]
* [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseMaiden Apocalypse Maidens]]: Kagami contains the Demon that could destroy TheMultiverse. Overlaps with BarrierMaiden, see below.]]
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* AloofDarkHairedGirl: Homura.
Homura, initially [[TheStoic stoic]] and [[IceQueen unfriendly]] as usual, [[spoiler:until she opens up to Kagami.]]
* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler:Vittoria's attack on Earth in the Madoka-verse resulted in one of Scope Level 3 (Planetary). The Severity is Level 2 (Societal Collapse), verging on Levels 3 (Species Extinction) and 4 (Total Extinction) due to the damage to causality and the climate. Only one or two billion people are left, and every city and town is said to be in ruins. The Demons are now aiming foran a [[ApocalypseHow/ClassZ Class Z Omniversal Physical Annihilation.]]
*[[spoiler:[[ApocalypseMaiden [[ApocalypseMaiden Apocalypse Maidens]]: Kagami [[spoiler:Kagami contains the Demon that could destroy TheMultiverse. Overlaps TheMultiverse... and by thge final chapters Tsukasa contains another, unnamed one, similarly powerful. This verlaps with BarrierMaiden, see below.]]
* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler:Vittoria's attack on Earth in the Madoka-verse resulted in one of Scope Level 3 (Planetary). The Severity is Level 2 (Societal Collapse), verging on Levels 3 (Species Extinction) and 4 (Total Extinction) due to the damage to causality and the climate. Only one or two billion people are left, and every city and town is said to be in ruins. The Demons are now aiming for
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* [[spoiler:[[BarrierMaiden Barrier Maidens]]: Both of the Hiiragi twins are this to TheMultiverse.]]
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* [[spoiler:[[BarrierMaiden [[BarrierMaiden Barrier Maidens]]: Both [[spoiler:Both of the Hiiragi twins are this to TheMultiverse.TheMultiverse... their survival keeps everything from falling apart.]]
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* [[spoiler:BigDamnKiss: In Chapter 17.]]
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* [[spoiler:BigDamnKiss: In Chapter 17.17, after a night of terrible battles and even more terrible trauma.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: ''Everyone.''
* BreakThemByTalking: [[spoiler:The Second is an expert at this.]]
* CallingYourAttacks: Mami, of course, continues to do this as well as the [[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Kazumi girls]]. [[spoiler: Homura also takes to naming her ultimate attack, and credits Mami for it.]]
* BreakThemByTalking: [[spoiler:The Second is an expert at this.]]
* CallingYourAttacks: Mami, of course, continues to do this as well as the [[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Kazumi girls]]. [[spoiler: Homura also takes to naming her ultimate attack, and credits Mami for it.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: ''Everyone.''
'' The casts of both series get put through the wringer.
* BreakThemByTalking: [[spoiler:The Second is an expert atthis.this, and takes perverse pleasure in it.]]
* CallingYourAttacks: Mami, of course, continues to do this as well as the [[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Kazumi girls]]. [[spoiler: Homura also takes to naming her ultimate attack, "Requiem Violetta", and credits Mami forit.it. By the end, all of the Stars Above have named attacks.]]
* BreakThemByTalking: [[spoiler:The Second is an expert at
* CallingYourAttacks: Mami, of course, continues to do this as well as the [[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Kazumi girls]]. [[spoiler: Homura also takes to naming her ultimate attack, "Requiem Violetta", and credits Mami for
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* [[spoiler:CloningGambit: Desideria pulled this with one of her Spawn. She let it feed until it transformed into a copy of herself, let it read her memories, and allowed the copy to take her place and be killed by Kagami.]]
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* [[spoiler:CloningGambit: Desideria CloningGambit: [[spoiler:Desideria pulled this with one of her Spawn. She let it feed until it transformed into a copy of herself, let it read her memories, and allowed the copy to take her place and be killed by Kagami.]]
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* {{Continuation}}
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* {{Continuation}}{{Continuation}}: [[spoiler:Of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica the Madoka anime]], ignoring the events of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaRebellion Rebellion.]]]]
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** The dialogue at the twins' birthday party is similar to the same scene in Lucky Star Episode 4, only with a few significant changes to reflect that the timeline has been changed.
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** The dialogue at the twins' birthday party is similar to the same scene in Lucky Star Episode 4, only with a few significant changes to reflect that the timeline has been changed.altered.
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* DarkMagicalGirl: Homura, obviously.
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* DarkMagicalGirl: Homura, obviously. [[spoiler:Though significantly more heroic than she initially appeared in the Madoka anime, her determination and ruthlessness have not changed.]]
** [[spoiler: Homura and all four Lucky Star girls cross it by the end... only to rebound in spectacular fashion.]]
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* DiesWideOpen: [[spoiler:Tsukasa and Kazumi in 2012.]]
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* DiesWideOpen: [[spoiler:Tsukasa and Kazumi in 2012.the Madokaverse both die staring upward.]]
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* EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler: Vittoria.]]
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* EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler: Vittoria.Vittoria fits the bill, and later Desideria mutates into a huge living rift, a paradox in time and space.]]
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* [[spoiler:EverybodysDeadDave: Every Puella Magi on Earth teamed up to battle Vittoria, Kagami's Demon form. Only four survived.]]
* [[spoiler:ExtremeMeleeRevenge: [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown Kagami turns the Second into a]] ''[[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown bloody smear]]'' [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown with her bokken]].]]
* [[spoiler:FantasticArousal: Played as dark as possible with Desideria's rape of Homura.]]
* [[spoiler:ExtremeMeleeRevenge: [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown Kagami turns the Second into a]] ''[[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown bloody smear]]'' [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown with her bokken]].]]
* [[spoiler:FantasticArousal: Played as dark as possible with Desideria's rape of Homura.]]
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*** [[spoiler: [[RedHerring Not exactly.]] At least some of that was Kagami's Star powers trying to emerge.]]
*[[spoiler:EverybodysDeadDave: Every EverybodysDeadDave: [[spoiler:Every Puella Magi on Earth teamed up to battle Vittoria, Kagami's Demon form. Only four survived.]]
*[[spoiler:ExtremeMeleeRevenge: [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown ExtremeMeleeRevenge: [[spoiler:[[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown Kagami turns the Second into a]] ''[[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown bloody smear]]'' [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown with her bokken]].]]
*[[spoiler:FantasticArousal: FantasticArousal: Played as dark as possible with Desideria's rape of Homura.]]
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* TheHeartless: [[spoiler:The Demons.]]
* HellHound: [[spoiler:Ciacco, the Third.]]
* HellHound: [[spoiler:Ciacco, the Third.]]
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* TheHeartless: [[spoiler:The Demons.Demons, feeding on emotions and possessing little to none of their own.]]
* HellHound: [[spoiler:Ciacco, theThird.Third, an enormous and emaciated rabid dog with a stomach full of maggot Spawn.]]
* HellHound: [[spoiler:Ciacco, the
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* TheJuggernaut: [[spoiler:Gaspare, the Fourth.]]
* [[spoiler:KilledMidSentence: Tsukasa, and one chapter later, [[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Kazumi]], as the first victim of Vittoria.]]
* [[spoiler:KilledMidSentence: Tsukasa, and one chapter later, [[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Kazumi]], as the first victim of Vittoria.]]
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* TheJuggernaut: [[spoiler:Gaspare, the Fourth.Fourth, a knight made of solid lead. Homura throws half her arsenal at it, and nothing works until she impales it with its own lance and spears it with her FinishingMove for good measure.]]
*[[spoiler:KilledMidSentence: Tsukasa, KilledMidSentence: [[spoiler:Tsukasa, and one chapter later, [[Manga/PuellaMagiKazumiMagica Kazumi]], as the first victim of Vittoria.]]
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* [[spoiler:PreClimaxClimax: Kagami and Homura spend the night together in Chapter 27, just before they go to face the Ninth.]]
* [[spoiler:RapeAsDrama: The Second was doing this when she played with Homura's Soul Gem. Combined with the ''psycholoigical'' torture Homura was put through, it's no wonder she was catatonic by the end of it.]]
* [[spoiler:RapeAsDrama: The Second was doing this when she played with Homura's Soul Gem. Combined with the ''psycholoigical'' torture Homura was put through, it's no wonder she was catatonic by the end of it.]]
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* [[spoiler:PreClimaxClimax: Kagami PreClimaxClimax: [[spoiler:Kagami and Homura spend the night together in Chapter 27, just before they go to face the Ninth.]]
*[[spoiler:RapeAsDrama: The RapeAsDrama: [[spoiler:The Second was doing this when she played with Homura's Soul Gem. Combined with the ''psycholoigical'' torture Homura was put through, it's no wonder she was catatonic by the end of it.]]
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** Konata gives Tsukasa a [[Anime/CardcaptorSakura Cardcaptor Sakura]] costume for her birthday. It's the infamous pink-and-black rubber catsuit.
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** Konata gives Tsukasa a [[Anime/CardcaptorSakura Cardcaptor Sakura]] costume for her birthday. It's the infamous pink-and-black pink and black rubber catsuit.
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** [[spoiler:Mami and Kyoko's relationship, hinted at in Chapter 9 and explored in ''My Sunshine'', is a shout-out to [[WordOfGod one of the authors' favorite fanfic writers, who specializes in writing about that couple.]]]]
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* ActorAllusion: In chapter 19, Tsukasa mentions that [[Creator/EmiriKatou Kagami and Kyubey]] sound the same. Later, Konata brings Kagami a [[Anime/DemashitaPowerpuffGirlsZ Hyper Blossom]] [[TransformationTrinket transformation compact]] as her birthday present, saying that "I thought it would really suit you".
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This story's version of Homura has a [[CharacterBlog Tumblr account]], [[http://stars-above-homura.tumblr.com Stars Above Homura]].
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This story's version versions of Kagami and Homura has a both have [[CharacterBlog Tumblr account]], character blogs]]: [[http://stars-above-kagami.tumblr.com Stars Above Kagami]] and [[http://stars-above-homura.tumblr.com Stars Above Homura]].
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** Upon finding out that Homura's a MagicalGirl, [[OtakuSurrogate Konata]] pesters her to do the [[SailorMoon original]] InTheNameOfTheMoon speech, complete with posing.
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** Upon finding out that Homura's a MagicalGirl, [[OtakuSurrogate Konata]] pesters her to do the [[SailorMoon [[Anime/SailorMoon original]] InTheNameOfTheMoon speech, complete with posing.
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* ActorAllusion: In chapter 19, Tsukasa mentions that [[EmiriKatou Kagami and Kyubey]] sound the same. Later, Konata brings Kagami a [[Anime/DemashitaPowerpuffGirlsZ Hyper Blossom]] [[TransformationTrinket transformation compact]] as her birthday present, saying that "I thought it would really suit you".
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* ActorAllusion: In chapter 19, Tsukasa mentions that [[EmiriKatou [[Creator/EmiriKatou Kagami and Kyubey]] sound the same. Later, Konata brings Kagami a [[Anime/DemashitaPowerpuffGirlsZ Hyper Blossom]] [[TransformationTrinket transformation compact]] as her birthday present, saying that "I thought it would really suit you".
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** And again in Chapter 28: ''All will come to ruin. The stars above will fall.''
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** And again in Chapter 28: Used several times as ArcWords towards the end: ''All will come to ruin. The stars above will fall.''''
** And, finally, Stars Above is [[spoiler:adopted as a name by the team of Magical Girls]].
** And, finally, Stars Above is [[spoiler:adopted as a name by the team of Magical Girls]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7371211/1/Stars_Above Stars Above]]'' is an ongoing fanfic written by Tropers [[{{@/FringeBenefits}} BHS]] and {{@/Forzare}}. Based loosely on the events of a [[LongRunners long-running]] RP on the TVTropesForum, the story is a ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica''[=/=]''Manga/LuckyStar'' IntercontinuityCrossOver.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7371211/1/Stars_Above Stars Above]]'' is an ongoing a fanfic written by Tropers [[{{@/FringeBenefits}} BHS]] and {{@/Forzare}}. Based loosely on the events of a [[LongRunners long-running]] RP on the TVTropesForum, the story is a ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica''[=/=]''Manga/LuckyStar'' IntercontinuityCrossOver.