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* AwesomeYetPractical: Airfield crews working the flightlines on the floating military facility use their bird Pokémon's whirlwind abilities to clear a driving rainstorm enough for safe landing conditions
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5242143/1/Stardust_The_Dark_Pokemon_Wars Stardust: The Dark Pokémon Wars]]'' is a {{Pokemon}} FanFic written by Chris Ganale. As this author is prone to do, ''Stardust'' takes the concept provided by ''FanFic/PokemonMaster'' and revisits it while remaining largely true to the original plot. Only, where ''Pokémon MASTERS'' focuses on Ash and [[LaResistance the Rebellion]] against [[TheEmpire the League]], ''Stardust'' attempts to tell the untold story of the titular Dark Pokémon Wars that were in the backstory of ''Pokémon MASTERS''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5242143/1/Stardust_The_Dark_Pokemon_Wars Stardust: The Dark Pokémon Wars]]'' is a {{Pokemon}} FanFic Franchise/{{Pokemon}} {{Fanfic}} written by Chris Ganale. As this author is prone to do, ''Stardust'' takes the concept provided by ''FanFic/PokemonMaster'' ''Fanfic/PokemonMaster'' and revisits it while remaining largely true to the original plot. Only, where ''Pokémon MASTERS'' focuses on Ash and [[LaResistance the Rebellion]] against [[TheEmpire the League]], ''Stardust'' attempts to tell the untold story of the titular Dark Pokémon Wars that were in the backstory of ''Pokémon MASTERS''.
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The Messiah has been disambiguated between Messianic Archetype and All Loving Hero. Bad examples and ZCE are being removed; if you disagree, please readd with sufficient context.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5242143/1/Stardust_The_Dark_Pokemon_Wars Stardust: The Dark Pokémon Wars]]'' is a {{Pokemon}} FanFic written by Chris Ganale. As this author is prone to do, ''Stardust'' takes the concept provided by ''FanFic/PokemonMaster'' and revisits it while remaining largely true to the original plot. Only, where ''Pokémon MASTERS'' focuses on [[TheMessiah Ash]] and [[LaResistance the Rebellion]] against [[TheEmpire the League]], ''Stardust'' attempts to tell the untold story of the titular Dark Pokémon Wars that were in the backstory of ''Pokémon MASTERS''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5242143/1/Stardust_The_Dark_Pokemon_Wars Stardust: The Dark Pokémon Wars]]'' is a {{Pokemon}} FanFic written by Chris Ganale. As this author is prone to do, ''Stardust'' takes the concept provided by ''FanFic/PokemonMaster'' and revisits it while remaining largely true to the original plot. Only, where ''Pokémon MASTERS'' focuses on [[TheMessiah Ash]] Ash and [[LaResistance the Rebellion]] against [[TheEmpire the League]], ''Stardust'' attempts to tell the untold story of the titular Dark Pokémon Wars that were in the backstory of ''Pokémon MASTERS''.
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Due to having joined a Pokémon RP forum and reinvented Seafoam and its history there, this has become a DeadFic, but a significant chunk of the plot and characters will be recycled in that plotline, which the author is contemplating novelizing.
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Due to having joined a Pokémon RP forum the [[{{Roleplay/PokeFiends}} PokéFiends RP]] and reinvented Seafoam and its history there, this has become a DeadFic, but a significant chunk of the plot and characters will be recycled in that plotline, which the author is contemplating novelizing.
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Due to having joined a Pokémon RP forum and reinvented Seafoam and its history there, this has become a DeadFic, but a significant chunk of the plot and characters will be recycled in that plotline, which the author is contemplating novelizing.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5242143/1/Stardust_The_Dark_Pokemon_Wars Stardust: The Dark Pokémon Wars]]'' is a {{Pokemon}} FanFic written by Chris Ganale. As this author is prone to do, ''Stardust'' takes the concept provided by ''FanFic/PokemonMaster'' and revisits it while remaining largely true to the original plot. Only, where ''Pokémon MASTERS'' focuses on [[TheMessiah Ash]] and [[LaResistance the Rebellion]] against [[TheEmpire the League]], ''Stardust'' attempts to tell the untold story of the titular Dark Pokémon Wars.
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* [[AmericaSavesTheDay Seafoam Saves the Day]]: The opinions of the squad when informed of their mission to infiltrate enemy-held territory and assist in the construction of a new air base, with no support from allied nations, and forced to follow heavily-restrictive rules of engagement. Given that the tale focuses on the military of Seafoam, time will tell how straight this is played
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: During the beginning of the briefing in the second chapter, the various factions were arranged by the following color scheme. Turquoise for Seafoam, red for Hoenn, beige for Sinnoh, gray for Galactic, indigo for Kanto, light blue for Johto, and black for Rocket
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* DoesNotLikeGuns: Erika, according to the half of the conversation between her and Ganale that is overheard by Mars
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* InvulnerableKnuckles: Subverted. The captain specifically puts on a glove brace before he sets in on the Hoenn soldiers to protect his hand.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Mars is ''quiet'', subdued, and seems to have completely lost her infatuation with Cyrus as portrayed in the games and anime. This is due to being betrayed by Jupiter in an effort to kill her off, witnessing her prized Purugly killed in battle right in front of her, and then being harassed continuously by fellow trainees and active Hoenn soldiers after defecting from Galactic to the allied forces
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Mars is ''quiet'', subdued, and seems to have completely lost her infatuation with Cyrus as portrayed in the games and anime. This is due to being betrayed by Jupiter in an effort to kill her off, witnessing her prized Purugly killed in battle right in front of her, and then being harassed continuously by fellow trainees and active Hoenn soldiers after defecting from Galactic to the allied forcesforces. And even she realizes she probably needs professional help
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Given that the only mention of Hoenn forces so far have all been in a negative light (two soldiers in the first chapter beating Mars for no appropriate reason, other trainees and military training instructors harassing her over her past affiliations in basic training), Hoenn's forces are coming across this way
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Mars is ''quiet'', subdued, and seems to have completely lost her infatuation with Cyrus as portrayed in the games and anime. In her defense, she ''is'' almost certainly suffering from PTSD, has been kicked violently out of her comfort zone, and is struggling to find her place in the middle of a world war
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Mars is ''quiet'', subdued, and seems to have completely lost her infatuation with Cyrus as portrayed in the games and anime. This is due to being betrayed by Jupiter in an effort to kill her off, witnessing her prized Purugly killed in battle right in front of her, and then being harassed continuously by fellow trainees and active Hoenn soldiers after defecting from Galactic to the allied forces
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* CoolPlane: It's less the actual planes themselves and more their custom paint schemes. Rebekah's Mirage-2000 sports an orange-and-white pattern, Alex's Rafale is pink-and-white. Played straight with Ganale's F-22A Raptor
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* CoolPlane: It's less the actual planes themselves and more their custom paint schemes. Rebekah's Mirage-2000 sports an orange-and-white orange-with-white-trim pattern, Alex's Rafale is pink-and-white.pink-with-white-trim. Played straight with Ganale's F-22A Raptor
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5242143/1/Stardust_The_Dark_Pokemon_Wars Stardust: The Dark Pokémon Wars]]'' is a {{Pokemon}} FanFic written by Chris Ganale. As this author is prone to do, ''Stardust'' takes the concept provided by ''[[{{ptitle7dn6z6wd}} Pokémon MASTERS]]'' ''FanFic/PokemonMaster'' and revisits it while remaining largely true to the original plot. Only, where ''Pokémon MASTERS'' focuses on [[TheMessiah Ash]] and [[LaResistance the Rebellion]] against [[TheEmpire the League]], ''Stardust'' attempts to tell the untold story of the titular Dark Pokémon Wars.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Jupiter took advantage of the war environment to enact this against Mars
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: Jupiter took advantage of the war environment to enact this against MarsMars
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