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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7340028/1/Shadowchasers_Soulscape Shadowchasers: Soulscape]]'' is fanfic of the ''FanFic/ShadowchasersSeries'' written by Cyber Commander.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7340028/1/Shadowchasers_Soulscape Shadowchasers: Soulscape]]'' is fanfic of the ''FanFic/ShadowchasersSeries'' written by Cyber Commander.
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* [[LowerDeckEpisode Lower Deck Fic]]: Aside from this fic being a lot shorter than Cyber Commander's other fics, it only features a few characters than the other fics.
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* [[LowerDeckEpisode Lower Deck Fic]]: Aside from this fic being a lot shorter than Cyber Commander's Occam Razor's other fics, it only features a few characters than the other fics.
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Shadowchasers is now FanFic.Shadowchasers Series per query and post in ATT and the Franchise forums page.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7340028/1/Shadowchasers_Soulscape Shadowchasers: Soulscape]]'' is fanfic of the ''Franchise/{{Shadowchasers}}'' series written by Cyber Commander.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7340028/1/Shadowchasers_Soulscape Shadowchasers: Soulscape]]'' is fanfic of the ''Franchise/{{Shadowchasers}}'' series ''FanFic/ShadowchasersSeries'' written by Cyber Commander.
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* RuleOfSymbolism: [[spoiler: Hebi-Na opposing Evil Dragon Ananta (her former ace card) can be seen as her denouncing her past mistakes and moving forward.]]
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* [[RuleOfSymbolism Symbolic Characters]]: The characters of Hebi-Na's Soulscape each represent a certain factor of her soul; whether they be positive or negative.
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* VariableLengthChain: Vucarik of the Chains
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* VariableLengthChain: Vucarik WorldOfSymbolism: Tons. In Hebi-Na's mind, every inhabitant is an aspect of her personality, taking the Chainsform of someone she associates with that aspect. The locations change quickly, drawn from her memories and parts of her psyche.
** RuleOfSymbolism: [[spoiler: Hebi-Na opposing Evil Dragon Ananta (her former ace card) can be seen as her denouncing her past mistakes and moving forward.]]
** RuleOfSymbolism: [[spoiler: Hebi-Na opposing Evil Dragon Ananta (her former ace card) can be seen as her denouncing her past mistakes and moving forward.]]
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* [[BottleEpisode Bottle Chapter]]: Not counting Hebi-Na's Soulscape, the fic only takes place in Shadowchasers HQ.
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* [[spoiler: HeelFaceTurn: Hebi-Na. By the end of the fic, she becomes the ophidia negotiator for the Shadowchasers, promising to improve the relations between humans and ophidia.]]
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* [[spoiler: HeelFaceTurn: Hebi-Na. By the end of the fic, she becomes the ophidia negotiator for the Shadowchasers, promising to improve the relations between humans and ophidia.]]
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* OnlyOneName: It is mentioned that ophidia do not use surnames. This might be true for other Shadowkind races where last names are not mentioned.
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Hebi-Na being cured and her HeelFaceTurn, due to her appearance in ''Shadowchasers: Backwater".
* [[LowerDeckEpisode Lower Deck Fic]]: Aside from this fic being a lot shorter than Cyber Commander's other fics, it only features a few characters than the other fics.
* OnlyOneName: It is mentioned that ophidia do not use surnames. This might be true for other Shadowkind races where last names are notmentioned. mentioned.
* RuleOfSymbolism: [[spoiler: Hebi-Na opposing Evil Dragon Ananta (her former ace card) can be seen as her denouncing her past mistakes and moving forward.]]
* [[LowerDeckEpisode Lower Deck Fic]]: Aside from this fic being a lot shorter than Cyber Commander's other fics, it only features a few characters than the other fics.
* OnlyOneName: It is mentioned that ophidia do not use surnames. This might be true for other Shadowkind races where last names are not
* RuleOfSymbolism: [[spoiler: Hebi-Na opposing Evil Dragon Ananta (her former ace card) can be seen as her denouncing her past mistakes and moving forward.]]
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* IronicEcho: [[spoiler: Vucarik's deck is the same deck Hebi-na used way back in Chapter 4 of the original fic, with some improvements.]]
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* TailorMadePrison: Likely the ultimate example. Hebi-Na's soul is supposed to be the ruler of her soulscape, but the Bells of Baphomet have pretty much taken over and made her a prisoner, the bell tower even creating a cell that serves that purpose for the physical incarnation of the soul (with Maramanda as the jailer, someone who is fear itself to Hebi-Na, making resistance almost impossible). In a sense, Hebi-Na's soul is imprisoned ''in her own mind'', meaning she is truly helpless to escape without aid from a third party - which she gets, fortunately.
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* TailorMadePrison: Likely the ultimate example. Hebi-Na's soul is supposed to be the ruler of her soulscape, but the Bells of Baphomet have pretty much taken over and made her a prisoner, the bell tower even creating a cell that serves that purpose for the physical incarnation of the soul (with Maramanda as the jailer, someone who is fear itself to Hebi-Na, making resistance almost impossible). In a sense, Hebi-Na's soul is imprisoned ''in her own mind'', meaning she is truly helpless to escape without aid from a third party - which she gets, fortunately.fortunately.
* VariableLengthChain: Vucarik of the Chains
* VariableLengthChain: Vucarik of the Chains
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* OnlyOneName: It is mentioned that ophidia do not use surnames. This might be true for other Shadowkind races where last names are not mentioned.
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* ShipTease: [[spoiler: After Jalal rescues her from Maramanda and helps carry her, Hebi-Na makes a remark on Jalal's looks and mentions she finds him quite handsome.]]
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* [[spoiler: HeelFaceTurn: Hebi-Na. By the end of the fic, she becomes the ophidia negotiator for the Shadowchasers, promising to improve the relations between humans and ophidia.]]
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* [[RuleOfSymbolism Symbolic Characters]]: The characters of Hebi-Na's Soulscape each represent a certain factor of her soul; whether they be positive or negative.
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* [[RuleOfSymbolism Symbolic Characters]]: The characters of Hebi-Na's Soulscape each represent a certain factor of her soul; whether they be positive or negative.negative.
* TailorMadePrison: Likely the ultimate example. Hebi-Na's soul is supposed to be the ruler of her soulscape, but the Bells of Baphomet have pretty much taken over and made her a prisoner, the bell tower even creating a cell that serves that purpose for the physical incarnation of the soul (with Maramanda as the jailer, someone who is fear itself to Hebi-Na, making resistance almost impossible). In a sense, Hebi-Na's soul is imprisoned ''in her own mind'', meaning she is truly helpless to escape without aid from a third party - which she gets, fortunately.
* TailorMadePrison: Likely the ultimate example. Hebi-Na's soul is supposed to be the ruler of her soulscape, but the Bells of Baphomet have pretty much taken over and made her a prisoner, the bell tower even creating a cell that serves that purpose for the physical incarnation of the soul (with Maramanda as the jailer, someone who is fear itself to Hebi-Na, making resistance almost impossible). In a sense, Hebi-Na's soul is imprisoned ''in her own mind'', meaning she is truly helpless to escape without aid from a third party - which she gets, fortunately.
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Taking place sometime between ''[[FanFic/ShadowchaserTorment Shadowchaser: Torment]]'' and ''[[Fanfic/ShadowchaserAscension Shadowchasers: Ascension]]''. This fic (which is a shorter fic compared to the rest.) stars Jalal Stormbringer as he goes inside Hebi-Na's [[TitleDrop Soulscape]] in the hopes of curing the curse that had befallen her back in ''[[FanFic/ShadowchasersPowerPrimordial Shadowchasers: Power Primordial]]''
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Taking place sometime between ''[[FanFic/ShadowchaserTorment ''[[FanFic/ShadowchasersTorment Shadowchaser: Torment]]'' and ''[[Fanfic/ShadowchaserAscension ''[[FanFic/ShadowchasersAscension Shadowchasers: Ascension]]''. This fic (which is a shorter fic compared to the rest.) stars Jalal Stormbringer as he goes inside Hebi-Na's [[TitleDrop Soulscape]] in the hopes of curing the curse that had befallen her back in ''[[FanFic/ShadowchasersPowerPrimordial Shadowchasers: Power Primordial]]''
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Taking place sometime between FanFic/ShadowchaserTorment and Fanfic/Shadowchaser Ascension. This fic (which is a shorter fic compared to the rest.) stars Jalal Stormbringer as he goes inside Hebi-Na's [[TitleDrop Soulscape]] in the hopes of curing the curse that had befallen her back in FanFic/ShadowchasersPowerPrimordial
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Taking place sometime between FanFic/ShadowchaserTorment ''[[FanFic/ShadowchaserTorment Shadowchaser: Torment]]'' and Fanfic/Shadowchaser Ascension.''[[Fanfic/ShadowchaserAscension Shadowchasers: Ascension]]''. This fic (which is a shorter fic compared to the rest.) stars Jalal Stormbringer as he goes inside Hebi-Na's [[TitleDrop Soulscape]] in the hopes of curing the curse that had befallen her back in FanFic/ShadowchasersPowerPrimordial
''[[FanFic/ShadowchasersPowerPrimordial Shadowchasers: Power Primordial]]''
* TheCameo: Judy [=LaBaron=], Jalal's teenage ward makes a few minor appearances in the fic after initially being mentioned only in a Shadowchaser File in ''Power Primordial''.
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** The first is Alzoozel - Hebi-Na's conscience who looks exactly like Ember. According to her Alzoozel herself, the reason she looks like Ember is because Ember is the person who Hebi-Na wants to make amends with the most, as she feels that Ember was the one she had hurt the most.
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** The first is Alzoozel - Hebi-Na's conscience who looks exactly like Ember. According to her Alzoozel herself, the reason she looks like Ember is because Ember is the person who Hebi-Na wants to make amends with the most, as she feels that Ember was the one she had hurt who suffered the most.most through her actions.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: This fic is one for Jalal (and Hebi-Na to an extent).
* AscendedExtra: While Jalal has played a part in about every Shadowhchaser fic, it is often limited to supporting roles. Here he actually takes a central role.
* TheAtoner: Hebi-Na. Alzoozel's current form and strength is an indicator of that.
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* [[BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind Battle in the Center of the Soul]]: The main point of this fic.
* IdenticalStranger: This fic has two examples:
** The first is Alzoozel - Hebi-Na's conscience who looks exactly like Ember. According to her Alzoozel herself, the reason she looks like Ember is because Ember is the person who Hebi-Na wants to make amends with the most, as she feels that Ember was the one she had hurt the most.
** The second one is Maramanda, who mostly resembles Taramanda. Maramanda represents Hebi-Na's fears, as Taramanda was someone who Hebi-Na feared in the past. She also uses [[spoiler: Earthbound God Ccrayuhua. According to her, ophidia are split on their opinions of this being. Some regard it as an eccentric celebrity that one can't help but watch, while others think of it as a harbringer of the apocalypse. Clearly, Hebi-Na was of the second group.]]
* SequelHook: [[spoiler: to [[FanFic/ShadowchasersAscension Shadowchasers: Ascension]]''. At the end of the fic, Dr. Gelinas gets visited by someone (presumably Baron Dybbuk), who talks to him about the deal he made with someone (presumably Jalie Squarefoot). Gelinas remembers and hands over what they were looking for.]]
* [[RuleOfSymbolism Symbolic Characters]]: The characters of Hebi-Na's Soulscape each represent a certain factor of her soul; whether they be positive or negative.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: This fic is one for Jalal (and Hebi-Na to an extent).
* AscendedExtra: While Jalal has played a part in about every Shadowhchaser fic, it is often limited to supporting roles. Here he actually takes a central role.
* TheAtoner: Hebi-Na. Alzoozel's current form and strength is an indicator of that.
* [[spoiler: HeelFaceTurn: Hebi-Na. By the
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* [[BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind Battle in the Center of the Soul]]: The main point of this fic.
* IdenticalStranger: This fic has two examples:
** The first is Alzoozel - Hebi-Na's conscience who looks exactly like Ember. According to her Alzoozel herself, the reason she looks like Ember is because Ember is the person who Hebi-Na wants to make amends with the most, as she feels that Ember was the one she had hurt the most.
** The second one is Maramanda, who mostly resembles Taramanda. Maramanda represents Hebi-Na's fears, as Taramanda was someone who Hebi-Na feared in the past. She also uses [[spoiler: Earthbound God Ccrayuhua. According to her, ophidia are split on their opinions of this being. Some regard it as an eccentric celebrity that one can't help but watch, while others think of it as a harbringer of the apocalypse. Clearly, Hebi-Na was of the second group.]]
* SequelHook: [[spoiler: to [[FanFic/ShadowchasersAscension Shadowchasers: Ascension]]''. At the end of the fic, Dr. Gelinas gets visited by someone (presumably Baron Dybbuk), who talks to him about the deal he made with someone (presumably Jalie Squarefoot). Gelinas remembers and hands over what they were looking for.]]
* [[RuleOfSymbolism Symbolic Characters]]: The characters of Hebi-Na's Soulscape each represent a certain factor of her soul; whether they be positive or negative.
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Taking place sometime between Fanfic/ShadowchaserTorment and Fanfic/Shadowchaser Ascension. This fic (which is a shorter story compared to the rest.) stars Jalal Stormbringer as he goes inside Hebi-Na's [[TitleDrop Soulscape]] in the hopes of curing the curse that had befallen her back in FanFic/ShadowchasersPowerPrimordial
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Taking place sometime between Fanfic/ShadowchaserTorment FanFic/ShadowchaserTorment and Fanfic/Shadowchaser Ascension. This fic (which is a shorter story fic compared to the rest.) stars Jalal Stormbringer as he goes inside Hebi-Na's [[TitleDrop Soulscape]] in the hopes of curing the curse that had befallen her back in FanFic/ShadowchasersPowerPrimordial
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7340028/1/Shadowchasers_Soulscape Shadowchasers: Soulscape]] is fanfic of the Franchise/{{Shadowchasers}} series written by Cyber Commander.
Taking place sometime between Fanfic/ShadowchaserTorment and Fanfic/Shadowchaser Ascension. This fic (which is a shorter story compared to the rest.) stars Jalal Stormbringer as he goes inside Hebi-Na's [[TitleDrop Soulscape]] in the hopes of curing the curse that had befallen her back in FanFic/ShadowchasersPowerPrimordial
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Taking place sometime between Fanfic/ShadowchaserTorment and Fanfic/Shadowchaser Ascension. This fic (which is a shorter story compared to the rest.) stars Jalal Stormbringer as he goes inside Hebi-Na's [[TitleDrop Soulscape]] in the hopes of curing the curse that had befallen her back in FanFic/ShadowchasersPowerPrimordial
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