History FanFic / ScorchedEarth

2nd Aug '12 5:02:22 AM Sheora
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!!Examples of Tropes in this work include:

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* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: Averted, rather brutally, in the first chapter.

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* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: Averted, rather brutally, Averted in the first chapter.
9th May '12 6:32:24 PM WillingDreamer
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* TheAlcoholic [[spoiler: Reki. It nearly kills her at one point.]]
* BadassBookworm Siensao is a qualified martial artist, but still the most cultured member of the group.
* BadassNormal Although Reki claims she isn't considered a master of her style yet, one must wonder what a master would be capable of, since she becomes one of these from her first fight scene onwards. To a lesser degree, Siensao also is an example.
* BetaCouple [[spoiler: Although they only had a few chapters together and their relationship is currently in doubt, Kyuzo and Jura fit this trope quite well.]]

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* TheAlcoholic TheAlcoholic: [[spoiler: Reki. It nearly kills her at one point.]]
* BadassBookworm BadassBookworm: Siensao is a qualified martial artist, but still the most cultured member of the group.
* BadassNormal BadassNormal: Although Reki claims she isn't considered a master of her style yet, one must wonder what a master would be capable of, since she becomes one of these from her first fight scene onwards. To a lesser degree, Siensao also is an example.
* BetaCouple BetaCouple: [[spoiler: Although they only had a few chapters together and their relationship is currently in doubt, Kyuzo and Jura fit this trope quite well.]]



* BreakTheHaughty [[spoiler: After the destruction of Shan Ling Fortress, Siensao realizes what her attitude is costing her and what she is becoming. She doesn't take it very well.]]
* CharacterDevelopment [[spoiler: Subtle, but present. Jomei goes from a headstrong and stupidly stubborn man that lets his temper control him to someone that tries to think before they act and acknowledges that he doesn't know everything-sometimes. At the beginning of the story, Reki was a despairing, apathetic person that only combat got a rise out of. Now she appears to be not so despairing as realistically worried and fearful and searching for a purpose in life. Siensao was introduced as a critical, secret-keeping woman that didn't quite accept she couldn't always be right. Recently, she's resolved to try and learn better. Kyuzo has changed the least, but more recent chapters have him realizing the gravity of his situation a little more.]]
* CulturedWarrior Siensao again. Her love of philosophy is a dead giveaway.
* DarkAndTroubledPast Reki, and it shows up frequently enough to make her life difficult.
* DeadpanSnarker Reki, very much so. She does not enjoy the company of stupid people.
* {{Determinator}} There are many characters that could qualify as this, but the most obvious are Jomei and Siensao.
* DistinguishingMark Jomei has the biggest such mark, a line of writing that has been branded onto his back, but it is usually hidden. Reki, with her missing fingers, notched ear, and burn scar, is much more visibly marked, though given her nature, she likely has other scars we haven't seen.
* HesitationEqualsDishonesty Played straight with [[spoiler: Jomei, when facing Jura. Although Jomei probably would have taken just about any reaction as dishonesty at that point.]]
* IHaveNoSon [[spoiler: Or in this case, Jomei has no sister.]]
* KillItWithFire Kyuzo and just about every other firebender, of course, who react to pretty much any threat this way.
* KilledOffForReal [[spoiler: Many, many minor characters and redshirts. Although having a name does increase your chances, it is by no means a sure ward against death.]]
* LickingTheBlade [[spoiler: Reki, in her persona as the Blood Drinker, which, naturally, was how she came by the name in the first place.]]
* LimitedWardrobe Played somewhat straight. New outfits are purchased, but as Siensao is a merchant, that at least explains where the money comes from.
* MadeOfIron Whenever earthbending is involved, Jomei and other earthbenders usually showcase this ability. Otherwise it is largely averted, Jomei is grazed by an arrow and it pains him for a while afterwards, Reki is hit by a large rock and needs days for the bruising to go away, and so on.
* MysteriousPast Pretty much everyone except Jomei.
* TheNapoleon [[spoiler: General Xing, who has been nicknamed the Iron Hand and though not as senstivive about his height than some examples of this, he is very aggressive.]]
* NiceHat Jomei's pointy straw hat. [[spoiler: And it's furry Mongolian-like replacement. He was quite distressed when the original one was burned up.]]
* OldMaster Quite a few.
* PluckyComicRelief Kyuzo, who has no competition in this regard, stands out as this a mile away.
* ProudWarriorRaceGirl Reki is a semi-reformed example.
* ScarsAreForever And how.
* SecretKeeper Siensao lives for the idea that knowledge is power.
* SlasherSmile [[spoiler: Reki as the Blood Drinker. She hardly ever smiles normally, which only makes it more creepy.]]

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* BreakTheHaughty BreakTheHaughty: [[spoiler: After the destruction of Shan Ling Fortress, Siensao realizes what her attitude is costing her and what she is becoming. She doesn't take it very well.]]
* CharacterDevelopment CharacterDevelopment: [[spoiler: Subtle, but present. Jomei goes from a headstrong and stupidly stubborn man that lets his temper control him to someone that tries to think before they act and acknowledges that he doesn't know everything-sometimes. At the beginning of the story, Reki was a despairing, apathetic person that only combat got a rise out of. Now she appears to be not so despairing as realistically worried and fearful and searching for a purpose in life. Siensao was introduced as a critical, secret-keeping woman that didn't quite accept she couldn't always be right. Recently, she's resolved to try and learn better. Kyuzo has changed the least, but more recent chapters have him realizing the gravity of his situation a little more.]]
* CulturedWarrior CulturedWarrior: Siensao again. Her love of philosophy is a dead giveaway.
* DarkAndTroubledPast DarkAndTroubledPast: Reki, and it shows up frequently enough to make her life difficult.
* DeadpanSnarker DeadpanSnarker: Reki, very much so. She does not enjoy the company of stupid people.
* {{Determinator}} {{Determinator}}: There are many characters that could qualify as this, but the most obvious are Jomei and Siensao.
* DistinguishingMark DistinguishingMark: Jomei has the biggest such mark, a line of writing that has been branded onto his back, but it is usually hidden. Reki, with her missing fingers, notched ear, and burn scar, is much more visibly marked, though given her nature, she likely has other scars we haven't seen.
* HesitationEqualsDishonesty HesitationEqualsDishonesty: Played straight with [[spoiler: Jomei, when facing Jura. Although Jomei probably would have taken just about any reaction as dishonesty at that point.]]
* IHaveNoSon IHaveNoSon: [[spoiler: Or in this case, Jomei has no sister.]]
* KillItWithFire KillItWithFire: Kyuzo and just about every other firebender, of course, who react to pretty much any threat this way.
* KilledOffForReal KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Many, many minor characters and redshirts. Although having a name does increase your chances, it is by no means a sure ward against death.]]
* LickingTheBlade LickingTheBlade: [[spoiler: Reki, in her persona as the Blood Drinker, which, naturally, was how she came by the name in the first place.]]
* LimitedWardrobe LimitedWardrobe: Played somewhat straight. New outfits are purchased, but as Siensao is a merchant, that at least explains where the money comes from.
* MadeOfIron MadeOfIron: Whenever earthbending is involved, Jomei and other earthbenders usually showcase this ability. Otherwise it is largely averted, Jomei is grazed by an arrow and it pains him for a while afterwards, Reki is hit by a large rock and needs days for the bruising to go away, and so on.
* MysteriousPast MysteriousPast: Pretty much everyone except Jomei.
* TheNapoleon TheNapoleon: [[spoiler: General Xing, who has been nicknamed the Iron Hand and though not as senstivive about his height than some examples of this, he is very aggressive.]]
* NiceHat NiceHat: Jomei's pointy straw hat. [[spoiler: And it's furry Mongolian-like replacement. He was quite distressed when the original one was burned up.]]
* OldMaster OldMaster: Quite a few.
* PluckyComicRelief PluckyComicRelief: Kyuzo, who has no competition in this regard, stands out as this a mile away.
* ProudWarriorRaceGirl ProudWarriorRaceGirl: Reki is a semi-reformed example.
* ScarsAreForever ScarsAreForever: And how.
* SecretKeeper SecretKeeper: Siensao lives for the idea that knowledge is power.
* SlasherSmile SlasherSmile: [[spoiler: Reki as the Blood Drinker. She hardly ever smiles normally, which only makes it more creepy.]]



* WeaponofChoice: Jomei favors a warhammer, Siensao stick with her staff and later, [[spoiler: a possibly cursed katana]], Reki seems to like sabers, while Kyuzo likes the fire knives. Just about everybody has some kind of weapon they prefer above all others.

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* WeaponofChoice: WeaponOfChoice: Jomei favors a warhammer, Siensao stick with her staff and later, [[spoiler: a possibly cursed katana]], Reki seems to like sabers, while Kyuzo likes the fire knives. Just about everybody has some kind of weapon they prefer above all others.



* DrillSergeantNasty Kanetsu's rank actually is Master Sergeant and he manages to combine this trope with SergeantRock by being the former to the prisoners and the latter to his own men.
* HeroicBSOD Jomei went through one prior to the beginning of the story but claims to have recovered. Reki remains dubious. He does at least manage to throw off a second one.
* TheVoiceless Zoukani had his tongue cut out, so voicelessness is enforced upon him and has limited his character development.

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* DrillSergeantNasty DrillSergeantNasty: Kanetsu's rank actually is Master Sergeant and he manages to combine this trope with SergeantRock by being the former to the prisoners and the latter to his own men.
* HeroicBSOD HeroicBSOD: Jomei went through one prior to the beginning of the story but claims to have recovered. Reki remains dubious. He does at least manage to throw off a second one.
* TheVoiceless TheVoiceless: Zoukani had his tongue cut out, so voicelessness is enforced upon him and has limited his character development.
9th May '12 5:47:19 PM WillingDreamer
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* DarkandTroubledPast Reki, and it shows up frequently enough to make her life difficult.

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* DarkandTroubledPast DarkAndTroubledPast Reki, and it shows up frequently enough to make her life difficult.
12th Apr '12 2:04:17 AM Goldstone
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* PaleSkinnedBrunette Siensao
11th Dec '11 7:21:56 AM movie007
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* SimpleStaff Siensao favors this weapon, though we have yet to see her SpinToDeflectStuff.
* TalkingInYourDreams Reki has been known to mumble in her sleep, but as nobody can understand the language she mumbles in, it is not a plot point.
* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou Averted, rather brutally, in the first chapter.
* TooCleverByHalf Although Kyuzo is quite creative, he doesn't always think his ideas through.
* WeaponofChoice Jomei favors a warhammer, Siensao stick with her staff and later, [[spoiler: a possibly cursed katana]], Reki seems to like sabers, while Kyuzo likes the fire knives. Just about everybody has some kind of weapon they prefer above all others.
* {{Whip It Good}} Only with fire.

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* SimpleStaff SimpleStaff: Siensao favors this weapon, though we have yet to see her SpinToDeflectStuff.
* TalkingInYourDreams TalkingInYourDreams: Reki has been known to mumble in her sleep, but as nobody can understand the language she mumbles in, it is not a plot point.
* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: Averted, rather brutally, in the first chapter.
* TooCleverByHalf TooCleverByHalf: Although Kyuzo is quite creative, he doesn't always think his ideas through.
* WeaponofChoice WeaponofChoice: Jomei favors a warhammer, Siensao stick with her staff and later, [[spoiler: a possibly cursed katana]], Reki seems to like sabers, while Kyuzo likes the fire knives. Just about everybody has some kind of weapon they prefer above all others.
* {{Whip It Good}} WhipItGood: Only with fire.




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* The oiceless Zoukani had his tongue cut out, so voicelessness is enforced upon him and has limited his character development.

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* The oiceless TheVoiceless Zoukani had his tongue cut out, so voicelessness is enforced upon him and has limited his character development.
12th Oct '10 7:48:33 PM 131.191.89.236
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* Drill Sergeant Nasty Kanetsu's rank actually is Master Sergeant and he manages to combine this trope with SergeantRock by being the former to the prisoners and the latter to his own men.
* Heroic BSOD Jomei went through one prior to the beginning of the story but claims to have recovered. Reki remains dubious. He does at least manage to throw off a second one.
* The Voiceless Zoukani had his tongue cut out, so voicelessness is enforced upon him and has limited his character development.

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* Drill Sergeant Nasty DrillSergeantNasty Kanetsu's rank actually is Master Sergeant and he manages to combine this trope with SergeantRock by being the former to the prisoners and the latter to his own men.
* Heroic BSOD HeroicBSOD Jomei went through one prior to the beginning of the story but claims to have recovered. Reki remains dubious. He does at least manage to throw off a second one.
* The Voiceless oiceless Zoukani had his tongue cut out, so voicelessness is enforced upon him and has limited his character development.
12th Oct '10 7:48:00 PM 131.191.89.236
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4394574/1/Scorched_Earth Scorched Earth]] is an Avatar: The Last Airbender fanfiction by currently being posted on fanfiction.net, by J.Idanian. The story is centered around four original characters as they travel the war-torn Earth Kingdom. Has passed the 200,000 word mark and shows no signs of slowing down.

'''Jomei:''' An earthbender and iron miner from a small mountain village in the southern Earth Kingdom. His village was conquered by the Fire Nation and now, above all else, he seeks to free it.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4394574/1/Scorched_Earth Scorched Earth]] is an Avatar: The Last Airbender fanfiction by currently being posted on fanfiction.net, by J.Idanian. The story is centered around four original characters as they travel the war-torn Earth Kingdom. Has passed The author has put the 200,000 word mark story on hold for over a year while he rewrites it, having acquired a new editor and shows no signs of slowing down.

apparently decided that whatever they said, the story needed serious reworking. So far, only the first three chapters have been rewritten, though the pace is much faster than normal. The four main characters are listed below.

'''Jomei:''' An The most important character, if anyone can be said to be that, Jomei is an earthbender and iron miner from a small mountain village in the southern Earth Kingdom. His village was conquered by the Fire Nation and now, above all else, he seeks to free it.



'''Siensao:''' A merchant and martial artist from Ba Sing Se, Siensao uses her formidable wits against the Fire Nation, and takes an interest in Jomei as part of her plans.

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'''Siensao:''' A merchant and martial artist from Ba Sing Se, Siensao uses her formidable wits against the Fire Nation, and takes an interest in Jomei as part of her mysterious plans.


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The rewrite has added a new character, Siensao's bodyguard, the mute former soldier Zoukani.


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!!Examples of Tropes in the rewrite include, so far:

*Drill Sergeant Nasty Kanetsu's rank actually is Master Sergeant and he manages to combine this trope with SergeantRock by being the former to the prisoners and the latter to his own men.
*Heroic BSOD Jomei went through one prior to the beginning of the story but claims to have recovered. Reki remains dubious. He does at least manage to throw off a second one.
*The Voiceless Zoukani had his tongue cut out, so voicelessness is enforced upon him and has limited his character development.
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