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* HelloNurse: Rainbow Dash [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial totally doesn't want to be this to Brownie when he's sick.]]
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: In chapter 5 while taking care of Brownie, Rainbow Dash ask to look in his Portfolio. He says yes but it's totally not filled with [[RuleThirtyFour mature stuff]] [[spoiler: it really isn't]]. Rainbow even mentions the trope word for word word.
** Also this little gem from Rainbow Dash:
-->I’m the only one who can take care of him, like his [[HelloNurse personal nurse]]… No, take that back, take that back! I’m not a nurse! And that didn’t sound totally fantasy-related.
** Also this little gem from Rainbow Dash:
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* WhatTheHellHero: Rainbow Dash delivers this to [[spoiler: Brownie after he reveals that he has asthma and almost died of exhaustion because he kept is as a secret, afraid that she would dump him as a friend given how much she loves to race.]] Doubles as TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.
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* {{Fainting}}: Brownie has one due to exhaustion in chapter 4.
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Rainbow Dash catches Brownie in the act [[spoiler: during a dream sequence.]]
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* BreadEggsBreadedEggs: During chapter 4 Brownie thinks the only way he won't come in dead last is if "one of the participants was a turtle. Or a snail. Or a creature fusing a turtle and a snail."
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** A few books from the library that appear in chapter 8 are from HarryPotter.
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* SharedUniverse: [[WordOfGod Sayer]] and [[WordOfDante Kalash93]] said that it is possible that {{Fanfic/Rainbow in the Dark}} exists in the same universe, although perhaps not in the same continuity as {{Fanfic/Racer and the Geek}}. Small nods, links, and references are present. [[ShrugOfGod This is still completely nebulous.]]
* ShowWithinAShow: In chapter eight, Brownie reads the last Daring Do book and we are treated to a small portion of the book's chapter.
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* RuleThirtyFour: [[WordOfGod Sayer]] and [[WordOfDante Kalash93]] worked together on a clopfic that can be found here: [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/115400/through-the-prism Through the prism]]. '''Warning! This story is NSFW, so read under your own judgment.'''
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Delivered by Mecha to Rainbow Dash.
--> "If you don't have feelings for him, then why are you getting so defensive? And why are you acting jealous at the idea of him being with me? You wouldn't be doing this if you didn't have feelings for him. Admit it, you like him."
--> "If you don't have feelings for him, then why are you getting so defensive? And why are you acting jealous at the idea of him being with me? You wouldn't be doing this if you didn't have feelings for him. Admit it, you like him."
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* ClingyJealousGirl: Rainbow Dash becomes this [[spoiler: when she believes that Mecha is Brownie's girlfriend in chapter 6.]]
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* FirstKiss: Brownie never kissed a mare in his entire life, until the last chapter where Rainbow Dash gives him a combination of a ShutUpKiss and BigDamnKiss.
* FriendlessBackground: Brownie suffers from this, altough he had friends back in Hollow Shades. The only problem is that they're very few.
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* PuttingTheBandBackTogether: Brownie brings back [[spoiler: what's left of the Mane Six after Twilight's absence since she became a princess makes them too focused on their work to meet each other, thus damaging their friendship.]]
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* GreyRainOfDepression: Happens in chapter 7.
* IHaveThisFriend: Upon meeting with Derpy Hooves, Brownie mentions to himself that one of his friends back in Hollow Shades named [[IronicName Bright Eyes]] is blind.
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* SliceOfLife: The fanfic centers around Brownie's life, starting with his arrival to Ponyville and ending with his first kiss.
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* AManIsNotAVirgin: Oh so heavily averted...
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** There's also Derpy explaining how she was moved to earth deliveries [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E15FeelingPinkieKeen after an incident where she accidentally dropped her cargo over somepony.]]
** Apple Bloom claims that the Cutie Mark Crusaders are expanding through Equestria. Applejack reminds her that [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E4OneBadApple the only member outside Ponyville is her cousin Babs Seed.]]
** And later in the same chapter, Twilight explains to Brownie how [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E18TheShowStoppers the Cutie Mark Crusaders won a comedy award with their musical number in school.]]
** They mention too that [[spoiler: [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E13MagicalMysteryCure Twilight turned into an alicorn]] and is now learning her duties as a princess in Canterlot.]]
** Apple Bloom claims that the Cutie Mark Crusaders are expanding through Equestria. Applejack reminds her that [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E4OneBadApple the only member outside Ponyville is her cousin Babs Seed.]]
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** They mention too that [[spoiler: [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E13MagicalMysteryCure Twilight turned into an alicorn]] and is now learning her duties as a princess in Canterlot.]]
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Brownie does his best to win Rainbow Dash's heart. [[HappyEnding It finally pays off.]]
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* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple: Brownie and Rainbow Dash show some hints of this during the story, but it's fully played in the last chapter.
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* NoodleIncident:
--> '''Brownie''': And I thought that I was a force of destruction after that incident with the skateboard and the fire extinguisher.
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Derpy crashing against Brownie's lawn.
--> '''Brownie''': The first time this had happened, I didn’t know how I should react, but after the tenth time it became routine.
--> '''Brownie''': The first time this had happened, I didn’t know how I should react, but after the tenth time it became routine.
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* AffectionateNickname: Brownie calls Rainbow Dash "Dashie" in a few occassions. She doesn't like to be called that.
** In the DaringDo [[ShowWithinAShow book]] from chapter eight, Bones (a new character) calls Daring Do "magpie".
** In the DaringDo [[ShowWithinAShow book]] from chapter eight, Bones (a new character) calls Daring Do "magpie".
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* {{Expy}}: The character Bones from the DaringDo [[ShowWithinAShow book]] has been confirmed as a {{expy}} for Brownie and [[{{Uncharted}} Nathan Drake]] as much as DaringDo is a Expy for IndianaJones and Rainbow Dash.
* ImColdSoCold: Invoked by Brownie as he sings [[BreakingBenjamin a song]] in chapter seven.
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** The reference to the Afghneighnka in chapter 6 is related to a similar story by the author's editor called FanFic/RacerAndTheGeek, where that is a common military uniform.
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* AllJustADream: [[spoiler: Chapter seven starts this way, making the reader think that Rainbow Dash never discovered the truth. Then Brownie wakes up and realizes it really happened.]]
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* ShutUpKiss: Rainbow invokes this in the final chapter.
--> Rainbow Dash: Shut up and kiss me.
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* TheReveal: The reason why [[spoiler: Brownie was so exhausted as to pass out at the end of the Running of the Leaves and his race against Rainbow Dash is that he suffers from asthma. As he explains, his parents never allowed him to run and play like a normal foal, and this in turn caused him to have low endurance, stamina and speed.]]
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* YouWakeUpInARoom: The story starts with Brownie waking up a train he took to Ponyville.
* WhatDidIDoLastNight: Brownie has trouble remembering what happened yesterday after falling ill. [[spoiler: He quickly remembers everything as soon as he finds his inhaler lying on his night stand.]]
* WhatDidIDoLastNight: Brownie has trouble remembering what happened yesterday after falling ill. [[spoiler: He quickly remembers everything as soon as he finds his inhaler lying on his night stand.]]
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* CharacterDevelopment: Brownie starts as a stallion with almost no social skills nor friends, and ends up with a collection of good friends and wrapped in a romantic relationship with Rainbow Dash.
* EroticDream: Happens to Brownie [[spoiler: until it suddenly turns into a nightmare]] and Rainbow Dash [[spoiler: when she takes care of Brownie after he falls ill.]]
* LoveConfession: Brownie finally confesses his feelings to Rainbow Dash. She delivers her own to Brownie in the last chapter.
* LoveHurts: [[spoiler: Brownie falls into a great depression after Rainbow gets mad at him shortly after confessing the truth about having asthma.]]
* LoveHurts: [[spoiler: Brownie falls into a great depression after Rainbow gets mad at him shortly after confessing the truth about having asthma.]]
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Delivered by Rainbow Dash to [[spoiler: Brownie.]]
-->[[spoiler:I’m not angry at you because of your asthma. What I really hate is that you lied to me instead of telling me the truth. You could have killed yourself because you were willing to risk your life rather than confessing that you shouldn’t go too far. I’ve never lied to you. Why couldn’t you do the same for me?]]
-->[[spoiler:I’m not angry at you because of your asthma. What I really hate is that you lied to me instead of telling me the truth. You could have killed yourself because you were willing to risk your life rather than confessing that you shouldn’t go too far. I’ve never lied to you. Why couldn’t you do the same for me?]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: Rainbow Dash delivers this to [[spoiler: Brownie after he reveals that he has asthma and almost died of exhaustion because he kept is as a secret, afraid that she would dump him as a friend given how much she loves to race.]] Doubles as TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.
* WhatTheHellHero: Rainbow Dash delivers this to [[spoiler: Brownie after he reveals that he has asthma and almost died of exhaustion because he kept is as a secret, afraid that she would dump him as a friend given how much she loves to race.]] Doubles as TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.
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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: Brownie tries to fix the mess he caused, but his plan doesn't work. [[spoiler: Fortunately, Twilight comes back with a plan that makes Rainbow Dash forgive him.]]
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